pkk wrote:

m4m, I love girls

Your hitsounds are very quiet, and if they can't be heard while using a custom skin where all the hitsounds are clicks/slaps/whatever sounds people use these days that are more distinguishable than the default osu! hitsounds, then you won't be able to hear them when using the default skin at all.
I'll throw my suggestions below

In addition, concerning drum-hitclap.wav, since this isn't frequently used during the music but rather as a highlight of sorts, I recommend renaming this to drum-hitfinish and renaming drum-finish (your actual 'clap' hitsound) to drum-hitclap. This way people who have your hitsounds disabled will still hear 'claps' where you put your clap sounds instead of a whistle hitsound from their skin. i.e. because you put your kick sounds on a whistle, people with your skin disabled will hear whatever their whistle hitsound is set to in their skin, which in most cases does not sound like a kick/clap. Only if you have time/feel like it though LOL

atmosphere

1. 00:24:596 - you should use at least ~70% hitsound volume here since the drum-hitnormal is barely audible. Same for 01:21:067 - all the way up to the first kiai or for all non-kiai parts (in general I advise using 60-70% unless it's the kiai or quiet parts like 00:58:479 - , 03:02:714 - etc). You can choose to use ~70% for the kiai as well or something louder.
   
   If you find that the claps/any other hitsounds are too loud while the hitnormals are just audible, you can lower the volume of your other hitsounds by editing the wav
   
2. 00:46:479 - consider halving your current repeat slider so you can add another 1/8 repeat slider here to map the sound that's increasing in pitch starting. It will also give a sense of movement/acceleration. Same suggestion for 04:42:949 (1) -
   
3. 01:55:214 (2) - did you accidentally move this from 01:55:302 -? Should be a tick later on the white tick
   
4. 02:07:655 (4) - should probably NC around here to be consistent with your NC patterning every bar. Same for 03:42:243 (5) -
   
5. 02:09:508 (2,3,4,5) - x 122 y 105 to fix your blanket
   
6. 02:10:832 (3,4,5,6,7) - consider moving to x374 y219 to form a triangle which might look nicer
   
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7. 02:17:185 (1) - consider changing this to a 1/2 slider then adding a circle right after on the red tick (you can stack it on the next slider). Since there's a strong sound on the red tick, I find that it feels nicer to have a circle to click there. You might want to increase the SV on the slider though if you do this since 1.00x is a bit low (you can even just use 2.00x or whatever since you're changing it to a 1/2)
   
8. 02:28:832 (1,2,1,2) - this can be pretty confusing since it just happens out of nowhere. I would advise against doing this since you don't really have any other hanzer streams in the map and I don't feel that this rhythm in the music is special enough or anything in particular to warrant this. However, if you want to keep it, you can make the stream easier to read/anticipate without changing the actual pattern. Consider changing the stream at 02:27:773 - around so that it appears in groups of 2 to mimic the hanzer stream that follows. Here's an (shitty) idea of what you can do:
   
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   idk
   
9. 02:35:891 (1) - you can avoid the overlap with the previous slider 7 if you move this to the left more (x155 y51). The tail of the previous slider (8) + the heads of slider 1 and 2 will also form a more equilateral triangle $$$
   
10. 02:37:655 (2,4) - you can NC these to be cool if you want
    
11. 03:37:655 (4,1) - might look nicer if you have more space between the two objects (tail of 2 and body of 4). You can try moving 03:38:008 (1,2) - to x444 y172 so that the space between all three objects looks roughly the same, or just move it up in general to space it from 4. Don't forget to rearrange any objects after the sliders
    
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    Same goes for 03:40:479 (4) - , you can try spacing it out more by moving it to the left (xd) and/or down a bit
    
12. 03:58:832 (1) - cool effect, but it might feel cooler if you do the opposite and speed it up instead. Also 03:58:479 (1) - is just sitting there at 2.00x for some reason
    
    Consider deleting the green line at 03:58:479 - to make the slider there 1.5x sv like the one before, then make it 1/4 like the previous and add two circles after it. Then change the green line at 03:58:832 - to 2.00x to speed it up to match the high pitched sound
    
    Here's a diagram to illustrate

    
    
    Anyways it's just a suggestion/example but I hope you get what I'm trying to say
    
13. 04:10:126 (5,1) - I feel that people may confuse this gap as 1/4 since it does feel a bit weird to play since there's a beat on the red tick. I recommend you try making 04:10:126 (5) - into 1/4 then adding a circle on the red tick possibly stacked with the next slider and see how that plays out. There's a moderately strong synth sound on the red tick and it might feel nicer to play with a circle instead of a slider end, idk give it a go
    
    Here's a way you can arrange the new 1/4 slider (downwards)

    
14. 04:12:949 (3,1) - this feels a bit underwhelming/awkward to play depending on how you play slider 3. If you follow it all the way then you're basically going up out of the screen and exiting this earth's atmosphere, but then you remembered that you left your oven on so you loop back down and then to the right in order to hit the curve of slider 1, which feels awkward to play.
    
    If you only play 3/4 of the slider and use slider leniency to exit the slider's atmosphere early in order to reposition for slider 1, it feels underwhelming because slider 1 is so close and in the same direction as the dropoff from slider 3
    
    What you can do is ctrl+h+j 04:13:302 (1) - and rearrange the circle/sliders after it. Since the slider will now curve clockwise, you can also have 04:13:566 (2,3) - go the other way towards the slider and it might flow better, or just leave it as it is
    
    
    here's a picture in case my words exited your brains atmosphere, both r ok

    
    
15. 04:17:185 (1) - r u fried
    this is like when people confuse me for pkhg
    but then realize that pkhg doesnt talk like a retard xddd
    so ya pls giv some way to distinguish this from a regular 1/2 slider like the one before in some way !
    
16. 04:18:596 (6) - might look nicer if you move the tail node right a bit and move the slider left a little so the slider points towards the end of 04:18:243 (5) - . Also don't forget to move the middle node of your V slider right a little since it's not exactly centered xd
    
    I put another slider on top of it and extended it to show the slider path and how it doesn't line up with the center of the V slider xd

    
17. 04:22:832 (1,1) - how come these two are the only slow sliders in this kiai? The second one should technically be on 04:28:479 (5) - since the first one is on the first measure/iteration of the melody and so is 04:28:479 (5) - since a 'new' section starts at 04:27:420 - and 04:28:479 (5) - lies in that new section.
    
18. 04:44:714 - all the 3/4 slider into 1/2 slider patterns with the SV change feel a bit unsatisfying to play tbh; the 1/2 sliders are 2x the SV of the preceding 3/4 sliders and after you play them there's a 1/2 gap before the next 3/4 slider. It just kind of leaves you there at the end of the 1/2 slider at a super high speed and then you just sit there and do nothing because the next slider is relatively close by. That's just my opinion though, you should ask some people about the patterns and see if there's any way you can improve them.
    
19. 05:09:420 (1) - kind of unexpected since it looks almost identical to the preceding 1/2 sliders because of the SV reduction. Players might play this like a 1/2 then sliderbreak when they reach downwards for the next slider. What you can do is move 05:09:773 (1,2) - to the right (xd) so it picks up where the previous slow slider ends so that even if they do play it like a 1/2 slider, they won't break because the next object will be in the same direction as the previous slider (as opposed to directly below the slider). Basically it's like making it like 01:46:126 (1,1) - where the slider directly leads into another
    
    Something like this, don't forget to re-arrange the other objects after it if you decide to move it

    

nice like iced tea. I liked your long sliders after the first break + how you captured the atmosphere of the song, but there's always room for improvement x d

let me know if you have any questions, have fun mapping

Fii wrote:

um excuse me why is there a whistle here? 00:16:479 (2) - psl answer

xlni wrote:

PLEASE fix the volume
02:12:596 (3,4,5,6,7) - why is the rhythm here different from everything else I
05:20:714 (4) - make these like 00:04:479 (3,4) - ? fits the whole "reversing beginning of map" feel you have LOVE
00:58:479 - not sure why you chose to use sliders in this section, but it works i suppose B
05:09:420 (1) - 05:15:067 (1) - these are 3/4 but 00:15:773 (4) - 00:21:420 (2) - are 1/2; is this an intentional difference O
02:28:126 (1,2,3) - this should be snapped to 3/4 lo A
02:37:214 (1) - this would feel a lot better if you moved it 1/4 tick later to the white tick and put a circle on the head or something T
02:50:273 (2,4) - did you "resnap objects" or something with 1/4 snap? these should definitely be on 1/3 S

now fist me after you beat me in mcpvp sure xd

edit: thanks for the kudosu kind stranger! no rpbolem@!

edit 2: upvoted!

pkk wrote:

give this man reddit gold!

Kibbleru wrote:

01:27:949 (5) - nazi, curve this more for blanket fixed
01:32:008 (9) - could use a NC here maybe added
01:32:714 (2,2,2,2) - how come these have whistles on them but 01:35:538 (2,2,2,2) - ahh, that was my mistake. Fixed now
01:38:361 - 01:39:067 - u kinda lost me here with ur hitsounding now i can see ur trying to do some kind of pattern, but keep it consistent throughout the section Fixed
01:54:244 (1,2) - perhaps it may play better if u reverse the order these sliders play by, 01:54:596 (3) - just to nerf these a bit Changes applied
02:05:802 - add note? Added :d
02:06:596 (2,3,4,5,1) - i find it hard understanding the purpose of these spacing changes.. especially since u don't do them anywhere else I do use them in other parts of the map though. I think it plays fine, but I'll change it if i absolutely have to.
02:06:244 - i understand the purpose of these SV changes, but ur not being very consistent with them, like places like 02:09:067 - 02:17:538 - etc I think the 1.5x SV change was a mistake on my part. Changed 02:06:244 to 2.0x and removed the sv change on 02:09:067.
02:25:655 (4) - nc? seems it would fit the pattern a lot Added
02:32:538 (2,3,4) - i feel like u definitely shouldn't be throwing spaced streams around randomly.. I was trying to map according to the intensity of the music, but I'll unspace it anyways :d
02:44:891 (6,7) - ^pls Fixedd
02:37:655 (1) - lol.. despite what i think this may not play that bad actually.
02:50:714 (5) - nc? nc'ed
03:53:538 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - pls do anything but stacking them :X just feels boring to me. Remapped
03:55:655 (1,2,3,4) - tbh looks rather bad to me as a pattern. ^
04:05:185 (3,4) - yo dont overlap :X oops sorry fixed :X
again, 04:01:655 (1) - be consistent. 04:03:067 - 04:08:714 - 04:04:479 - 04:15:773 - etc Remapped and fixed :d
04:18:596 (6) - should probably nc nc'ed
04:44:361 - colorhaxing would be so perfect in this section @_@ I'm not experienced with colorhaxing :C

sorry in my eyes this map needs some improvement consistency wise and some polishing could be done

VINXIS wrote:

01:21:067 (1,2,3) - stak these u fukr

Battle wrote:

Battle wrote:

Girl wrote:

LOL

Kalamitous wrote:

DED

Spaghetti wrote:

gorlni

Sliceofpie wrote:

02:27:067 (3) - new combo?

Espeon wrote:

checked mostly for blankets as you asked

mod

00:09:067 (2,3,4) - fix blanket
00:30:596 (3,4) - fix blanket
01:27:949 (5,6) - fix blanket
02:21:244 (6,7) - little off if you ctrl+g and look
02:45:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/p3Dg5.jpg
03:02:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - WOW
03:45:067 (1,2,3) - fix blanket
03:57:773 (1,2,3,4) - fix blanket
04:05:714 (6,1) - fix blanket if you were intending to
04:09:861 (4,5) - little off you can see if you ctrl+g
04:09:861 (4,2,1) - fix
04:14:008 (6,1) - i think this is off
04:22:832 (1,1) - fix
04:34:126 (5,1) - might be a pixel or 2 off
04:51:420 (1,1) - ^
04:56:008 (1,1) - little off, ctrl+g second note to see
04:59:185 (1,1) - fix

this map is so beautiful

- Yoshimaro - wrote:

no kds since not really a mod,

you have 2 soft-hitnormal58 and soft-hitnormal59

kickass map go for ranked

Sliceofpie wrote:

04:15:773 (1) - new combo seems weird here

Sliceofpie wrote:

noob mod
01:45:773 (1,1) - the SV changes are hard to read here. the 1:45 note has a new combo and no sv change, while the 1:46 note is the same but with a sv change. maybe remove the new combo on 01:45:773 (1) to just keep it consistent with 01:51:420 (3,4) -
01:51:773 (1) - maybe make the spacing between this note and the next note similar to 01:46:126 (1).
02:39:773 (6) - new combo?

Ascendance wrote:

lul

Girl wrote:

can bns just come to me instead xd

2016-06-26 19:24 Ascendance: link me ur map
2016-06-26 19:25 Girl: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/917176 Camellia - Exit This Earth's Atomosphere]
2016-06-26 19:25 Ascendance: where's the storyboard names for collab parts
2016-06-26 19:26 Girl: is it a must?
2016-06-26 19:26 Ascendance: it's not a must, but it would be helpful
2016-06-26 19:26 Ascendance: ok u got a lot of unrankable stuff lol...
2016-06-26 19:27 Ascendance: SB\dreamBG.png (1366x1536) is more than the allowed maximum dimensions
2016-06-26 19:27 Ascendance: (640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)
2016-06-26 19:27 Girl: :O
2016-06-26 19:28 Ascendance: lol
2016-06-26 19:28 Ascendance: >Camellia - Exit This Earths Atomosphere Girl.osb.osb
2016-06-26 19:28 Ascendance: delete this file
2016-06-26 19:29 Girl: done
2016-06-26 19:29 Ascendance: you have
2016-06-26 19:29 Ascendance: 8 unused hitsounds
2016-06-26 19:29 Ascendance: lul
2016-06-26 19:29 Girl: O
2016-06-26 19:30 Girl: what are they?
2016-06-26 19:30 Ascendance: drum-hitclap2
2016-06-26 19:30 Ascendance: err here http://puu.sh/pHbaY/e84d25e4d5.png
2016-06-26 19:30 Girl: thanks
2016-06-26 19:33 Ascendance: tell me when to move on
2016-06-26 19:33 Girl: i fixed everything except for the dreamBG resolution
2016-06-26 19:34 Girl: i tried to downscale it but it messes up the SB
2016-06-26 19:34 Girl: i'll have to ask the SB guy later :d
2016-06-26 19:34 Ascendance: yeah
2016-06-26 19:34 Ascendance: SB\xd.jpg is unused
2016-06-26 19:34 Girl: ahh
2016-06-26 19:35 Girl: thanks
2016-06-26 19:35 Ascendance: and last but not least
2016-06-26 19:35 Ascendance: 02:06:244 - has a red and green line with two different samplesets
2016-06-26 19:36 Girl: ehh?
2016-06-26 19:36 Girl: i dont quite understand what that means
2016-06-26 19:36 Ascendance: the red uninherited point has D:C1
2016-06-26 19:36 Ascendance: the inherited one
2016-06-26 19:36 Ascendance: has S:C1
2016-06-26 19:36 Ascendance: they need to be consistent or else it screws with osu
2016-06-26 19:37 Girl: ohh i see it
2016-06-26 19:37 Girl: fixed
2016-06-26 19:38 Ascendance: k now we're done with the unrankable stuff \o\
2016-06-26 19:38 Ascendance: which part is who's for the bookmarks?
2016-06-26 19:41 Girl: RLC mapped from 2:06:244 to 2:51:420
2016-06-26 19:41 Girl: everything else is by me
2016-06-26 19:43 Ascendance: kk
2016-06-26 19:44 Ascendance: 00:25:214 - you seem to be really missing a beat here, especially for a song like this, some type of constant beatflow is normal
2016-06-26 19:44 Ascendance: you could stack it on top of 00:25:302 (4) - here
2016-06-26 19:45 Girl: easy fix
2016-06-26 19:46 Girl: wait
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: 00:26:449 - I'd put a circle here and then turn 00:26:538 (4) - into a 1/4 slider since it seems to be a "held" note
2016-06-26 19:46 Girl: i dont really hear a beat on that tho
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: o
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: nvm then
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: unless you wanna do it anyways
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: no1 will complain xd
2016-06-26 19:46 Girl: nah i wont xd
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: kk
2016-06-26 19:47 Ascendance: the second one is actually there tho
2016-06-26 19:48 Girl: yeah
2016-06-26 19:48 Ascendance: 00:27:332 - same with here, you could stack on 00:27:420 (1) - 
2016-06-26 19:48 Ascendance: o that pattern repeats a lot
2016-06-26 19:49 Ascendance: just try to make them all consistent i guess later
2016-06-26 19:49 Ascendance: 00:42:067 (4,1) - awkward inwards flow here into 1, i'd make it face 2 instead
2016-06-26 19:50 Girl: fixed :o
2016-06-26 19:51 Ascendance: 00:45:773 (1,1) - are you sure about keeping the 1/4 gap between these? it sounds a bit choppy imo
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: vinxis suggested it
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: hmmm
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: maybe there shouldn't be a gap
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: since I dont really hear it in the song itself
2016-06-26 19:52 Ascendance: just sounds weird to me but objectively its fine
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: i removed the gap
2016-06-26 19:52 Ascendance: nice
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: should I do the same for the repeat slider after it?
2016-06-26 19:53 Girl: i mean theres a spinner after that but idk if it matters or not
2016-06-26 19:53 Ascendance: should be fine with the spinner there
2016-06-26 19:53 Girl: ok
2016-06-26 19:54 Ascendance: 01:23:185 (2,3) - feels odd to stack these since the beat there is constantly "moving", I'd do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481793
2016-06-26 19:54 Girl: true
2016-06-26 19:54 Girl: fixed that
2016-06-26 19:56 Ascendance: 01:26:714 (3) - should be NC'd i think?
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: i think someone said to not NC it
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: i remember it being NC'ed originally
2016-06-26 19:57 Ascendance: do you remember them saying why?
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: dont think so
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: I guess I'll just NC it again
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: since it seems right
2016-06-26 19:58 Ascendance: yeah 
2016-06-26 20:01 Ascendance: 02:02:891 (2,1) - the jump seems far but the movement seems too shallow imo 
2016-06-26 20:01 Ascendance: I'd change to something more vertical like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481831
2016-06-26 20:01 Ascendance: for 02:03:067 (1) - 
2016-06-26 20:02 Ascendance: also i moved 02:03:244 (2) - a bit away from 02:03:420 (1) - so as to not overaim the small jump
2016-06-26 20:04 Girl: fixed
2016-06-26 20:04 Girl: i move all of 02:03:420 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -  away from 02:03:244 (2) -
2016-06-26 20:04 Ascendance: 02:08:008 (4,5) - this overlap confused me a bit on my first playthrough, since you have 1/4 spacing on other places at distances like 02:06:596 (2,3) - 
2016-06-26 20:05 Girl: thats RLC's decision, but I could fix that :o
2016-06-26 20:06 Ascendance: just point it out to him and let me know what he says
2016-06-26 20:06 Girl: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481857
2016-06-26 20:06 Girl: o
2016-06-26 20:07 Ascendance: 03:15:067 (5,6) - any reason why these are stacked?
2016-06-26 20:07 Girl: dont think so
2016-06-26 20:08 Ascendance: lul
2016-06-26 20:08 Girl: alright i made that entire pattern a pentagon
2016-06-26 20:08 Girl: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481872
2016-06-26 20:08 Ascendance: same with 03:21:773 (3,4,5,6) - you could curve this really well into 03:22:479 (1) - 
2016-06-26 20:10 Girl: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481890
2016-06-26 20:10 Girl: hows this?
2016-06-26 20:10 Ascendance: yeah, looks nice 
2016-06-26 20:10 Girl: thx!
2016-06-26 20:10 Ascendance: I'd give 4,5 a little more "curve" but 
2016-06-26 20:11 Ascendance: thats stylistic
2016-06-26 20:11 Girl: hmm
2016-06-26 20:11 Ascendance: 03:38:714 (3,4,5,6) - and 03:41:538 (3,4) - are inconsistent
2016-06-26 20:12 Ascendance: same sounds but emphasized differently
2016-06-26 20:12 Girl: i'll change 03:41:538 (3,4) -  into 4 circles then
2016-06-26 20:18 Ascendance: maybe the same as before with the gap 04:42:949 (1,1) - 
2016-06-26 20:19 Girl: alrighty
2016-06-26 20:19 Girl: the gaps still stay for the repeat sliders before those two right?
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: yeah, those are fine
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: after that
2016-06-26 20:19 Girl: cool
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: have the sb guy fix that image
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: and ask rlc about that thing
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: and then call me
2016-06-26 20:19 Girl: oki
2016-06-26 20:20 Girl: thanks for the mod !
2016-06-26 20:20 Ascendance: np:D
2016-06-26 20:20 Ascendance: glad i could be of help
2016-06-26 20:20 Girl: yeye
2016-06-26 20:20 Girl: mutual pls                                                                         xd
2016-06-26 20:21 Ascendance: done xd
2016-06-26 20:21 Girl: thx x
2016-06-26 20:21 Girl: d
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Ascendance wrote:

Girl wrote:

can bns just come to me instead xd

gimme a picture of u if thats what you want i gues

my angel cirlsu

2016-06-26 19:24 Ascendance: link me ur map
2016-06-26 19:25 Girl: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/917176 Camellia - Exit This Earth's Atomosphere]
2016-06-26 19:25 Ascendance: where's the storyboard names for collab parts
2016-06-26 19:26 Girl: is it a must?
2016-06-26 19:26 Ascendance: it's not a must, but it would be helpful
2016-06-26 19:26 Ascendance: ok u got a lot of unrankable stuff lol...
2016-06-26 19:27 Ascendance: SB\dreamBG.png (1366x1536) is more than the allowed maximum dimensions
2016-06-26 19:27 Ascendance: (640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)
2016-06-26 19:27 Girl: :O
2016-06-26 19:28 Ascendance: lol
2016-06-26 19:28 Ascendance: >Camellia - Exit This Earths Atomosphere Girl.osb.osb
2016-06-26 19:28 Ascendance: delete this file
2016-06-26 19:29 Girl: done
2016-06-26 19:29 Ascendance: you have
2016-06-26 19:29 Ascendance: 8 unused hitsounds
2016-06-26 19:29 Ascendance: lul
2016-06-26 19:29 Girl: O
2016-06-26 19:30 Girl: what are they?
2016-06-26 19:30 Ascendance: drum-hitclap2
2016-06-26 19:30 Ascendance: err here http://puu.sh/pHbaY/e84d25e4d5.png
2016-06-26 19:30 Girl: thanks
2016-06-26 19:33 Ascendance: tell me when to move on
2016-06-26 19:33 Girl: i fixed everything except for the dreamBG resolution
2016-06-26 19:34 Girl: i tried to downscale it but it messes up the SB
2016-06-26 19:34 Girl: i'll have to ask the SB guy later :d
2016-06-26 19:34 Ascendance: yeah
2016-06-26 19:34 Ascendance: SB\xd.jpg is unused
2016-06-26 19:34 Girl: ahh
2016-06-26 19:35 Girl: thanks
2016-06-26 19:35 Ascendance: and last but not least
2016-06-26 19:35 Ascendance: 02:06:244 - has a red and green line with two different samplesets
2016-06-26 19:36 Girl: ehh?
2016-06-26 19:36 Girl: i dont quite understand what that means
2016-06-26 19:36 Ascendance: the red uninherited point has D:C1
2016-06-26 19:36 Ascendance: the inherited one
2016-06-26 19:36 Ascendance: has S:C1
2016-06-26 19:36 Ascendance: they need to be consistent or else it screws with osu
2016-06-26 19:37 Girl: ohh i see it
2016-06-26 19:37 Girl: fixed
2016-06-26 19:38 Ascendance: k now we're done with the unrankable stuff \o\
2016-06-26 19:38 Ascendance: which part is who's for the bookmarks?
2016-06-26 19:41 Girl: RLC mapped from 2:06:244 to 2:51:420
2016-06-26 19:41 Girl: everything else is by me
2016-06-26 19:43 Ascendance: kk
2016-06-26 19:44 Ascendance: 00:25:214 - you seem to be really missing a beat here, especially for a song like this, some type of constant beatflow is normal
2016-06-26 19:44 Ascendance: you could stack it on top of 00:25:302 (4) - here
2016-06-26 19:45 Girl: easy fix
2016-06-26 19:46 Girl: wait
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: 00:26:449 - I'd put a circle here and then turn 00:26:538 (4) - into a 1/4 slider since it seems to be a "held" note
2016-06-26 19:46 Girl: i dont really hear a beat on that tho
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: o
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: nvm then
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: unless you wanna do it anyways
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: no1 will complain xd
2016-06-26 19:46 Girl: nah i wont xd
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: kk
2016-06-26 19:47 Ascendance: the second one is actually there tho
2016-06-26 19:48 Girl: yeah
2016-06-26 19:48 Ascendance: 00:27:332 - same with here, you could stack on 00:27:420 (1) - 
2016-06-26 19:48 Ascendance: o that pattern repeats a lot
2016-06-26 19:49 Ascendance: just try to make them all consistent i guess later
2016-06-26 19:49 Ascendance: 00:42:067 (4,1) - awkward inwards flow here into 1, i'd make it face 2 instead
2016-06-26 19:50 Girl: fixed :o
2016-06-26 19:51 Ascendance: 00:45:773 (1,1) - are you sure about keeping the 1/4 gap between these? it sounds a bit choppy imo
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: vinxis suggested it
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: hmmm
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: maybe there shouldn't be a gap
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: since I dont really hear it in the song itself
2016-06-26 19:52 Ascendance: just sounds weird to me but objectively its fine
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: i removed the gap
2016-06-26 19:52 Ascendance: nice
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: should I do the same for the repeat slider after it?
2016-06-26 19:53 Girl: i mean theres a spinner after that but idk if it matters or not
2016-06-26 19:53 Ascendance: should be fine with the spinner there
2016-06-26 19:53 Girl: ok
2016-06-26 19:54 Ascendance: 01:23:185 (2,3) - feels odd to stack these since the beat there is constantly "moving", I'd do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481793
2016-06-26 19:54 Girl: true
2016-06-26 19:54 Girl: fixed that
2016-06-26 19:56 Ascendance: 01:26:714 (3) - should be NC'd i think?
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: i think someone said to not NC it
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: i remember it being NC'ed originally
2016-06-26 19:57 Ascendance: do you remember them saying why?
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: dont think so
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: I guess I'll just NC it again
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: since it seems right
2016-06-26 19:58 Ascendance: yeah 
2016-06-26 20:01 Ascendance: 02:02:891 (2,1) - the jump seems far but the movement seems too shallow imo 
2016-06-26 20:01 Ascendance: I'd change to something more vertical like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481831
2016-06-26 20:01 Ascendance: for 02:03:067 (1) - 
2016-06-26 20:02 Ascendance: also i moved 02:03:244 (2) - a bit away from 02:03:420 (1) - so as to not overaim the small jump
2016-06-26 20:04 Girl: fixed
2016-06-26 20:04 Girl: i move all of 02:03:420 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -  away from 02:03:244 (2) -
2016-06-26 20:04 Ascendance: 02:08:008 (4,5) - this overlap confused me a bit on my first playthrough, since you have 1/4 spacing on other places at distances like 02:06:596 (2,3) - 
2016-06-26 20:05 Girl: thats RLC's decision, but I could fix that :o
2016-06-26 20:06 Ascendance: just point it out to him and let me know what he says
2016-06-26 20:06 Girl: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481857
2016-06-26 20:06 Girl: o
2016-06-26 20:07 Ascendance: 03:15:067 (5,6) - any reason why these are stacked?
2016-06-26 20:07 Girl: dont think so
2016-06-26 20:08 Ascendance: lul
2016-06-26 20:08 Girl: alright i made that entire pattern a pentagon
2016-06-26 20:08 Girl: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481872
2016-06-26 20:08 Ascendance: same with 03:21:773 (3,4,5,6) - you could curve this really well into 03:22:479 (1) - 
2016-06-26 20:10 Girl: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481890
2016-06-26 20:10 Girl: hows this?
2016-06-26 20:10 Ascendance: yeah, looks nice 
2016-06-26 20:10 Girl: thx!
2016-06-26 20:10 Ascendance: I'd give 4,5 a little more "curve" but 
2016-06-26 20:11 Ascendance: thats stylistic
2016-06-26 20:11 Girl: hmm
2016-06-26 20:11 Ascendance: 03:38:714 (3,4,5,6) - and 03:41:538 (3,4) - are inconsistent
2016-06-26 20:12 Ascendance: same sounds but emphasized differently
2016-06-26 20:12 Girl: i'll change 03:41:538 (3,4) -  into 4 circles then
2016-06-26 20:18 Ascendance: maybe the same as before with the gap 04:42:949 (1,1) - 
2016-06-26 20:19 Girl: alrighty
2016-06-26 20:19 Girl: the gaps still stay for the repeat sliders before those two right?
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: yeah, those are fine
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: after that
2016-06-26 20:19 Girl: cool
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: have the sb guy fix that image
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: and ask rlc about that thing
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: and then call me
2016-06-26 20:19 Girl: oki
2016-06-26 20:20 Girl: thanks for the mod !
2016-06-26 20:20 Ascendance: np:D
2016-06-26 20:20 Ascendance: glad i could be of help
2016-06-26 20:20 Girl: yeye
2016-06-26 20:20 Girl: mutual pls                                                                         xd
2016-06-26 20:21 Ascendance: done xd
2016-06-26 20:21 Girl: thx x
2016-06-26 20:21 Girl: d
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mithew wrote:

03:05:185 (5) - use S:C63 here (which i even MADE for you [since i couldn't find it in akasha -_--] )
03:11:008 (6) - S:C52 uploaded just 4 u
03:11:714 (3) - S:C66
03:13:126 (4) - S:C61 link
03:13:302 (5) - S:C60 link
03:13:479 (6) - S:C61
03:13:655 (7) - S:C63
03:16:479 (2) - S:C63
03:22:126 (5) - S:C56
03:22:302 (6) - S:C52
03:22:832 (2) - S:C66 (on the slider tail)
03:23:185 (1) - S:C59
03:23:185 (1) - S:C57 on slider tail
03:24:243 (2) - S:C61

gonna fix this for u brb ok helo

mithew wrote:

i fuckED up use this instead

Ascendance wrote:

fixed a red/green line inconsistency with kiai times

bubble #1

Riari wrote:

Ascendance wrote:

fixed a red/green line inconsistency with kiai times

bubble #1

Man this CtB map sure does look cool

Arusamour wrote:

o is that bubled i se?? ha gl maybe u can rank it with.outT dq !!! glglgl <>33

Spaghetti wrote:

....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

fixed some thingies

bub #2

log

2016-06-28 11:54 Girl: r u a bn.
2016-06-28 11:54 Spaghetti: ya
2016-06-28 11:54 Spaghetti: y
2016-06-28 11:54 Girl: omg
2016-06-28 11:54 Girl: could you be the 2nd bubble to atomosphere ?
2016-06-28 11:54 Girl: ;d
2016-06-28 11:54 Girl: i dont have bn friends LOL
2016-06-28 11:58 Spaghetti: sur
2016-06-28 11:59 Girl: omg!
2016-06-28 11:59 Girl: thx!
2016-06-28 11:59 Spaghetti: who was bub 1
2016-06-28 12:00 Girl: ascendance
2016-06-28 12:00 Spaghetti: ok so i actually have to check
2016-06-28 12:00 Spaghetti: suk
2016-06-28 12:00 Spaghetti: sik
2016-06-28 12:00 Girl: wow
2016-06-28 12:00 Girl: flamER
2016-06-28 12:01 Spaghetti: 00:29:538 (5,6,7,8,9) - 
2016-06-28 12:01 Spaghetti: mayb rotate this so it fits with the curve of 00:29:185 (3,4) - better
2016-06-28 12:02 Spaghetti: o and space this out more cuz it looks like 1/4 00:27:773 (3,4) - 
2016-06-28 12:02 Spaghetti: 00:30:949 (4,5) - same
2016-06-28 12:02 er 00:30:596 (3,4) -  *
2016-06-28 12:03 Girl: hows this for the rotation? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5494885
2016-06-28 12:03 Spaghetti: g
2016-06-28 12:05 Girl: oki fixed those
2016-06-28 12:05 Spaghetti: 01:59:891 (5,6) - ctrl > ?
2016-06-28 12:05 Spaghetti: i feel like itd play better with the upward motion
2016-06-28 12:06 Girl: i think its fine the way it is
2016-06-28 12:06 Spaghetti: mk
2016-06-28 12:06 Girl: :L
2016-06-28 12:06 Girl: and if I do ctrl > then i'll have to move the following stream somewhere else
2016-06-28 12:07 Spaghetti: u have 2 .osb files btw
2016-06-28 12:07 Girl: redownload it
2016-06-28 12:07 Girl: i fixed that earlier
2016-06-28 12:07 Spaghetti: o
2016-06-28 12:08 Girl: :o
2016-06-28 12:09 Girl: wait
2016-06-28 12:09 Girl: if i update my map i lose the first bubble right?
2016-06-28 12:09 Spaghetti: ya but it doesnt matter
2016-06-28 12:09 Girl: o
2016-06-28 12:09 Spaghetti: i give u bub 2 and it still counts as 2 bubs
2016-06-28 12:09 Girl: ahh
2016-06-28 12:09 Girl: coolios
2016-06-28 12:13 Spaghetti: 01:15:420 (1) - '
2016-06-28 12:13 Spaghetti: shouldnt the end of this be the chime nouse
2016-06-28 12:13 Spaghetti: noise*
2016-06-28 12:14 Spaghetti: like on 01:04:126 (1) - 
2016-06-28 12:14 Girl: no
2016-06-28 12:14 Girl: i made it intentionally like that
2016-06-28 12:14 Girl: idk how to explain it
2016-06-28 12:14 Girl: but its kind of link
2016-06-28 12:14 Girl: like*
2016-06-28 12:14 Girl: introducing the new part of the music afterwards?
2016-06-28 12:14 Girl: something like that
2016-06-28 12:15 Spaghetti: 01:59:891 (5) - 
2016-06-28 12:15 Spaghetti: nc?
2016-06-28 12:15 Girl: done
2016-06-28 12:15 Spaghetti: 02:19:126 (1) - 
2016-06-28 12:15 Spaghetti: remove nc?
2016-06-28 12:16 Spaghetti: er
2016-06-28 12:16 Spaghetti: shit
2016-06-28 12:16 Spaghetti: 02:19:655 (1) - 
2016-06-28 12:16 Spaghetti: remove it here
2016-06-28 12:16 Girl: removed
2016-06-28 12:18 Spaghetti: 03:10:126 (1) - 
2016-06-28 12:18 Spaghetti: remove nc
2016-06-28 12:18 Spaghetti: 03:16:126 (1) - ^
2016-06-28 12:18 Spaghetti: 03:18:949 (1) - ^
2016-06-28 12:19 Spaghetti: 03:23:185 (1) - ^
2016-06-28 12:19 Girl: done
2016-06-28 12:20 Spaghetti: 03:59:891 (1) - remove nc?
2016-06-28 12:20 Spaghetti: 04:01:302 (5) - he didnt nc here thats y
2016-06-28 12:20 Spaghetti: 04:02:802 (1) - i dont see the point of this nc either
2016-06-28 12:21 Spaghetti: 04:04:038 (1) - same here
2016-06-28 12:21 Spaghetti: 04:08:361 (1) - ya
2016-06-28 12:21 Spaghetti: 04:12:596 (1) - me
2016-06-28 12:21 Girl: hOLy
2016-06-28 12:21 Spaghetti: 04:22:479 (1) - irl
2016-06-28 12:22 Spaghetti: 04:27:949 (1) - why are these nc's so inconsist e  n t
2016-06-28 12:22 Spaghetti: 04:36:596 (1) -  WHY
2016-06-28 12:22 Girl: im a boosted animal
2016-06-28 12:23 Spaghetti: 05:10:479 (1) - WHY
2016-06-28 12:23 Spaghetti: 05:14:714 (1) - STOp
2016-06-28 12:23 Spaghetti: 05:16:126 (1) - PLS
2016-06-28 12:23 Girl: cHILLLLL
2016-06-28 12:23 Spaghetti: ok thats all of them
2016-06-28 12:23 Spaghetti: LOL
2016-06-28 12:23 Girl: OK
2016-06-28 12:23 Girl: I FIXED AL OF THEM
2016-06-28 12:24 Girl: I THINK
2016-06-28 12:24 Girl: OK I DID
2016-06-28 12:24 Spaghetti: update
2016-06-28 12:26 Girl: why does it always get stuck at 11%
2016-06-28 12:28 Girl: WTF
2016-06-28 12:28 Girl: ITS NOT UPDATING
2016-06-28 12:28 Spaghetti: wot
2016-06-28 12:28 Spaghetti: y
2016-06-28 12:29 Girl: http://puu.sh/pJkdG/b626352379.jpg
2016-06-28 12:29 Girl: it just gets stuck at 11%
2016-06-28 12:29 Girl: lol
2016-06-28 12:29 Spaghetti: 11% glitch
2016-06-28 12:29 Girl: it happens pretty often
2016-06-28 12:29 Spaghetti: close osu
2016-06-28 12:29 Spaghetti: try again
2016-06-28 12:29 Girl: alright
2016-06-28 12:30 Girl: alright updated
2016-06-28 12:33 Spaghetti: ok
2016-06-28 12:33 Spaghetti: evrythign looks good
2016-06-28 12:33 Spaghetti: u ready
2016-06-28 12:33 Girl: ye
2016-06-28 12:33 Girl: YE
2016-06-28 12:35 Spaghetti: mk gimme a sec
2016-06-28 12:35 Girl: oki

Ascendance wrote:

that bubble post is about as misshapen as spaghetti's face lo

Stoof wrote:

plz qualify b4 i wanna exit this earths atomosphre

2016-06-28 11:59 Spaghetti: who was bub 1
2016-06-28 12:00 Girl: ascendance
2016-06-28 12:00 Spaghetti: ok so i actually have to check
2016-06-28 12:00 Spaghetti: suk
2016-06-28 12:00 Spaghetti: sik
2016-06-28 12:00 Girl: wow
2016-06-28 12:00 Girl: flamER

Ascendance wrote:

2016-06-28 11:59 Spaghetti: who was bub 1
2016-06-28 12:00 Girl: ascendance
2016-06-28 12:00 Spaghetti: ok so i actually have to check
2016-06-28 12:00 Spaghetti: suk
2016-06-28 12:00 Spaghetti: sik
2016-06-28 12:00 Girl: wow
2016-06-28 12:00 Girl: flamER

explains why im a bn and not spagt

Fyre wrote:

insert winman saying THANK YOUUU here

Girl wrote:

Fyre wrote:

insert winman saying THANK YOUUU here

http://puu.sh/pJCC5/a5f429cfb2.wav

Spaghetti wrote:

remap

Deltmin wrote:

Spaghetti wrote:

remap

Girl wrote:

wher is millhi.

MillhioreF wrote:

atomodsphere

[General]
"storyboard by" are unnecessary tags, just putting Kalamitous in the tags is enough to locate his contribution. ok done

[GiRLC's Intangible]
00:40:126 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - What's up with this? The spacing gets smaller even though the song's intensity gets higher, and the jumps every 4th note change spacing randomly (1.29x, 1.20x, 1.11x, 1.35x). I'd put the straight streams after the curved ones and shrink the curved stream jumpspacing to something more reasonable (1.0x-1.1x). Remapped this part and made the straight streams less spaced and curved streams more spaced.
00:45:420 (1,2,3,4,1) - Raise up a few pixels to make the sharp angle change more noticeable like the previous pattern? ok dun
01:15:420 (1) - Giga nazi mod but the start of the slider blanketing on this curve is a bit small (very noticable at higher CS). It'd look better if you pulled out the top a bit, but honestly you probably don't need to fix it, it just irks me. damn ez players -_ - (fixed)
01:39:244 (5) - All the slider blankety stuff in this section is 1/4 spacing but this one is 1/2 for NO REASON argh. Put it outside the blanket like you do later on at 03:43:479 (5). okey
01:43:567 (8) - Make the slider repeat one more time to cover this beat maybe? Iunno, it feels strange not being mapped. okey
02:10:920 (4,1) - I don't really like the flow on this considering the preceding pattern is already a bit of a mini difficulty spike. It's definitely playable and all but it feels a lot better to me when 02:11:185 (1,2) - is flipped horizontally and moved out to the left. I think its fine the way it is :O
02:14:979 (4,5) - This gap feels unnecessarily large. Moving (5) closer while still not having it touch (4) would improve playability while giving the same effect. ok fixd
02:39:773 (1) - Sliderend is slightly unstacked from the next note's sliderend. The map is literally unplayable, please fix ur a trol
02:48:949 (3,4) - I had some trouble reading this general area and interpreting it as 1/3 since it follows the same spacing patterns for the most part. It's not easy to fix in this kind of map, but I think it'd help if you combined these two notes into a slider with a single repeat, to be more lenient on the player and give them a bit longer and an extra perfectly timed slider hitsound to realize "oh we're 1/3 now".
03:53:185 (7,1) - This tricked me into thinking there's a 1/4 gap between the slider and the start of the stream, but nope. I dunno how to make this any better so uuuh it's probably fine??? the sliders before were 1/4 and half the size of the next slider so its fINE
04:04:479 (7,1) - There's a 1/2 gap here when pretty much every other gap of this spacing in the section is 1/4. Mostly this is a problem because 04:04:832 (1) blankets the next note the same as it blankets the previous one, except the first is 1/2 and the second is 1/4, and that's just nonsense. fixed
04:40:390 (4,1) - Why is this jump 1.64x when all the jumps after it are 1.30x. aaaa cuz it blankets the previous stream :d, its okay i made the jumps all 1.64x now
04:58:832 (1,1) - Again, not a fan of the spacing here since it imitates 1/4 stuff. fixd

Pretty cool map honestly. The storyboard brings my beefy new computer down to 140fps though, god damn it Kalamitous

Girl wrote:

wher is millhi.

have a bit more patience you weener noggin

Girl wrote:

waiting for kalamitous to fix hiS SB

Kalamitous wrote:

Girl wrote:

waiting for kalamitous to fix hiS SB

don

Battle wrote:

don't we all

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

Perfect map.

Qualified <3

Girl wrote:

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

Perfect map.

Qualified <3

how do you get denied kudosus if i never even gave you any WTF