Hi~
Coming for help~
00:03:420 (2) - can increase the angle
00:04:479 (3) - suggest a 1/12 kick slider here or make a multi-bent slider
00:09:067 (2) - less curve
00:11:891 (2) - u can make a blanket here
00:16:832 (3,4) -

00:21:773 (1,2,3,4) - the curvature of these sliders are not same, for a prettier ones u can fix it
00:28:479 (6) - less curve
00:30:596 (3) - can blanket better
00:38:361 (1,2,3) - make a part-overlap on 00:37:302 (1,2,3) - will looks better
00:40:126 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - u don't have to stick all these streams together. separate some of them will be better like:

01:04:126 (1,1,1) - to much use of this hitsound causes auditory fatigue, remove some of these
01:23:185 (2) - increase hitsound volume here because u can't here if u make a combo or not
01:25:655 (2) - unnecessary circle
01:29:185 (8) -

01:53:538 (1) - due to the track i suggest stream here
01:56:008 (5,6,1) - looks a lit weird-

or just

02:19:920 add a circle here can fit the track
02:27:067 (4) - humm, why not just use some short streams with single taps?
03:27:420 (2) - increase volume or maybe try another hitsound
03:33:420 (6) - like 01:29:185 (8) -
03:42:685 (6,7) - by the way some double streams like this part confuse me but they are ok. just i think they don't fit the track perfectly
03:55:832 (2,4) - suggest parallel
04:20:538 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - here it is 1/12 if i'm right. try kick sliders
04:26:361 (3) - less curve
04:30:596 (3) - ^
04:41:538 (1,1) - 1/8
05:28:126 (1) - remove a clap or a whistle.
really nice mapping
Good luck~
Coming for help~
00:03:420 (2) - can increase the angle
00:04:479 (3) - suggest a 1/12 kick slider here or make a multi-bent slider
00:09:067 (2) - less curve
00:11:891 (2) - u can make a blanket here
00:16:832 (3,4) -
00:21:773 (1,2,3,4) - the curvature of these sliders are not same, for a prettier ones u can fix it
00:28:479 (6) - less curve
00:30:596 (3) - can blanket better
00:38:361 (1,2,3) - make a part-overlap on 00:37:302 (1,2,3) - will looks better
00:40:126 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - u don't have to stick all these streams together. separate some of them will be better like:
01:04:126 (1,1,1) - to much use of this hitsound causes auditory fatigue, remove some of these
01:23:185 (2) - increase hitsound volume here because u can't here if u make a combo or not
01:25:655 (2) - unnecessary circle
01:29:185 (8) -
01:53:538 (1) - due to the track i suggest stream here
01:56:008 (5,6,1) - looks a lit weird-
or just
02:19:920 add a circle here can fit the track
02:27:067 (4) - humm, why not just use some short streams with single taps?
03:27:420 (2) - increase volume or maybe try another hitsound
03:33:420 (6) - like 01:29:185 (8) -
03:42:685 (6,7) - by the way some double streams like this part confuse me but they are ok. just i think they don't fit the track perfectly
03:55:832 (2,4) - suggest parallel
04:20:538 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - here it is 1/12 if i'm right. try kick sliders
04:26:361 (3) - less curve
04:30:596 (3) - ^
04:41:538 (1,1) - 1/8
05:28:126 (1) - remove a clap or a whistle.
really nice mapping
