[General]
You didn't use the whole space you had.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5440684 . Your map is too much in the middle, excluding some options. Try to make everything wider, map across the whole given space. It will be more fun, and less monothone. Don't be afraind to go out of bounds with dem circlez.
I understand this but I don't see it as a very major issue01:01:528 - to - 01:07:113 - i would map that part, you did a spinner but it has more potential than a spinner
I will consider this. Before the remap this section was mapped actually , and I found it particularly hard to play and map.[Placing]
You know what i thought i first time played your map? Dem, this spacing could be more equal. And the first space you made, is unequal. I mean this 00:01:369 (2) . Come on, it would look a lot better and sctructured with equalized spacing. I mean the whole map.
Maybe do sth like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5440725 to make a lil nice curve
I wrote only example, spacing is unequal over the whole map. OFC not all unequal spaces are bad, but those unreasoned, random, without a plot, are.
The way I map Insanes is that I turn OFF distance snap . I'm not sure if this is even the correct was but no major problems so far.00:08:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is random. Remake this, or make it more structured, elminate overlapses or make them reasoned
Fixed00:09:826 - u suggest adding a circle here, right before spinner. It will make a better impact.
I want the spinner to start at the same time the instrument at 00:09:826 starts ( not sure what it is )00:17:326 (6,2) - move things around and make a blanket?
Fixed00:34:720 (3) - example of unequal spacing, use DS. (There were unequal spaces before i didnt mention, and there are later on. Too many to point them all out)
Like I said I didn't think these were a big problem...fixed anyway01:00:411 (3,4,5,6,7) - that star is twisted, would suggest making it better, not a major thing tho. Looks kinda good how it is right now.
Fixed the star 01:07:592 (2) - i don't hear sound there, i don't think that circle should be there.
I think removing it would leave a gap there01:26:741 (2,1,2) - overlapse
Fixed01:57:698 (1) - spinner too soon, map those seconds before that long note at 01:58:496 comes in
Got rid of the spinner and just mapped that part04:02:326 (1) - rly? u r gonna just make those perfectly mappable notes, mapped with a spinner? that's a bit lazy. Overally the diff' feels a bit lazy, not enough special patterns, creativity. But overally it's playable.
I would prefer to end it with a spinner