00:11:823 (5) - here you don't NC but 00:22:201 (1) - is NC
f01:36:147 (1,2,3,4) - Consider changing this structure, currently they are part of a set, so they should have equal significance, but (1) has no vocal. (Vocal seems distinct here in my opinion)
I used that pattern as I look with combo color, instruments are still consistent 1/2 so whynott01:41:985 (5) - Here a slider is used, but after this stacks are used, see 03:45:229 (3,4) - and 04:44:905 (3,4). Consider making consistent
c O L L a B dud we don't need to make same on all partsss, at least we're used same 1/2 rhythm lO01:50:417 (1,1,1) - Is NC absolutely necessary? I understand SV change but it's not such a drastic change as to warrant NC, if you change then just be aware its repeated quite often throughout map
ye it's not only about sv, but in the pitch as well to make it more worth with 1 NC per slider.03:20:418 (2,3,4) - Reconsider this flow, quite unusual from before.
idk that wasn't hard on playing, might change it later03:27:067 (5,6,7) - I believe rotating 03:27:066 (5,6) - something like -90 degree's to incorporate a circle flow might feel more comfortable here
rotated but not -90degree as u expecting w03:30:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Sharp angle here for a reason? Previously there was some curved streams but this one is significantly different from before. What exactly does the ds change reflect here? Perhaps if you wanted to change ds it would fall upon one of the four distinct vocals heard on 03:30:310 (1,7,5,3) -
we used same pattern here, 01:27:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - but I changed a bit for asagi03:58:040 (4,5,6,7,8) - as well as 04:15:878 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 05:33:716 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is unusual, the rhythm choice is different from similar cases such as 01:54:796 (4,5,6,7,8) - and 02:12:958 (4,5,6,7,8) - and 04:57:715 (4,5,6,7,8) - If there was a pattern for diversity perhaps it could be such that the pattern is ABAB but I could not tell if such a pattern was being used
02:12:958 (4,5,6,7,8) - 01:54:796 (4,5,6,7,8) - is mine then others were Asagi. I made it more consistent on Asagi's part as I got permission lol04:05:337 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps cleaner if you blanket around slider-head of 04:05:013 (3) -
ye04:13:445 (2,3,4,5,6) - consider this flow, quite sharp from 04:13:121 (1,2) -
changed in my own way xd1920x1080 BG
change it when necessary xdThats all