I changed minor stuff that doesnt affect the playability since the style is a bit outdated and Aki changed my part when I was inactive back then. Ill point out the parts I changed and highlight the major change.
03:26:417 (1,2,3,4) - since the jump pattern here is quite awkward, I changed it to more comfortable one but the jump spacing is still the same
03:35:175 (5) - instead of straight slider, I made this into sharp curve and stacked it 03:35:175 (5) - to put more spacing to the next note since the vocal pitch is getting high
03:35:985 (2,3,4,5) - some little bit of adjustment here since I changed the slider shape here 03:35:499 (1) -
03:44:580 (1,2) - made the sliders here straight instead
03:45:228 (3,4,5) - changed pattern here so it doesnt feel awkward before streaming
03:47:499 (2) - I moved this on the lower side so I can make a good pattern with 03:47:985 (3,4) - and better flow
04:04:364 (2,3,1,2) - made a better jump here
04:11:336 (5) - adjusted its slider shape from straight vertical to diagonal
04:13:445 (2) - I move this a bit up since its quite near on its next note which is not fitting imo
04:16:526 (8) - moved this below the slider instead of above