hi hi from forum pm, sorry this is kind of late- aaaaa i love DragonForce guitar solos
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- 00:31:670 (4,1) – kind of a weird flow here because of the shape of (1); the (1) feels awkward to play because the movement from (4) to (1) is like a diagonal movement and then the (1) has more horizontal movement and that ruins the diagonal movement and makes it feels weird. Maybe rotate by 60 degrees counter-clockwise from selection centre?SPOILERyou might have to move 00:32:720 (3) – to stack with the slider end though
- 00:47:120 (5) – did you forget a NC here?
- 01:10:070 (4,5) – same as the first point about weird flow; you can figure this one out
- 01:20:720 (1) – mmm this NC feels unnecessary to me because this part is very similar to 01:15:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) – and you didn’t have NC there
- 01:24:620 (2,3) – blanket could be better; curve the (3) a little more by moving the middle anchor point to the bottom right a bit
- 01:36:320 (3,4) – blanket here could also be a bit nicer
- 01:43:820 (5,1) - ^same; I’ll stop pointing these out but you might want to recheck some of your blankets just to make sure they’re all nice and proper, e.g. 03:31:370 (3,4) – what is this blanket
- 02:28:220 (8) – forgot clap on slider head?
- 04:10:520 (6) -, 04:11:720 (6) -, and 04:12:920 (6) – I think it’d make sense to start a NC on these notes because the start of the guitar riff has a slight emphasis to it because downbeat
- 04:18:920 (1,3) – just aesthetics talking here, but I think making them either both with a soft curve or sharp bend would look nicer; do one, not both
- 05:01:220 (1) – NC seems unnecessary here
- 05:08:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – this rhythm feels a bit weird to play imo; why not try a pattern like this?SPOILERjust an idea here; you don’t need to go with this exact pattern, but try to keep the rhythms something like this because the long sliders on blue ticks feel really awkward to play imo
- 05:24:920 (4,1) – tbh I think NCs should be swapped here because downbeat is the start of a new phrase in the guitar solo
- 05:26:570 (3) – no NC here like 05:24:170 (1) - ?
- for the last chorus, why not try something like stopping kiai time at 06:11:645 – and then starting kiai time again at 06:11:720 - ? there’s a change in key signature (vocalist raises his voice and switches keys here) so I think it’d be neat
- 06:23:653 (6) -, 06:23:653 (6) – tbh these feel a little weird to me as ending on the purple (1/6) ticks; I think it’d be more appropriate to end these on the blue (1/4) ticks instead
- 06:30:486 (1,2,1,1,2) – NC structure here is a little weird I think because the NCs aren’t really highlighting anything with emphasis; tbh I don’t really think the NCs here are necessary
- 06:33:986 (6,7) – 1/6 here also feels really weird; I think it’d be more fitting to just combine these into a 1/2 slider instead of separating it like this