NM from my queue
General
the volume of your soft-hitclap2.wav seems a bit low imo, better raise it up!
there are some unused inherited points in the lower diffs like 00:28:602 - and you should better remove them
BEGINNER
00:26:352 (3) - maybe have normal clap at end? seems to fit with the music well
00:27:352 (4) - whistle at end like 00:19:352 (4) - ? there's the same sound in the music as I suppose
00:42:296 (1,1) - I'm not sure if this stack is really appropriate, maybe keep 1.0x ds instead?
01:50:943 (5) - better to have a clap as well to keep the consistency, or a whistle is ok, since the sound in the music is kinda different
Oxy's ANOTHER
I don' think this diff deserves such high AR, AR9 will be fairly enough. and it can do good to the spread as well imo
00:06:852 (1,1) - I think these NCs are unnecessary, as you didn't change sv or make anything special here, better just remove the NC from them
00:08:227 (4,1) - this jump is really sudden and unfitting as there's no really strong beats there in the music, and sudden small spacing 00:08:352 (1,2) - makes it even more confusing. better use a smaller spacing in between 00:08:227 (4,1) -
00:17:227 (4,1) - I didn't get meaning of this big jump as well, why having such sudden jumps when there's not even a drum beat?
00:24:352 (1,2) - the spacing here is too small imo, it's even smaller than many 1/4 jumps elsewhere and this can be really confusing. please consider make them further away from each other
00:38:344 (2) - it will make more sense if you move it to 00:38:244 - . I don't think there's anything map-worthy at 00:38:344 - . maybe try starting a 1/2 slider from 00:38:244 -
00:54:545 (4) - I think moving it to 00:54:631 - and stack it with 00:54:717 (1) - will make the rhythm better
00:54:717 (1) - this NC is really redundant, please just remove it
01:00:888 (2,3) - why so small spacing? it's way smaller than 01:01:745 (8,1,2) - and I don't know why you have to make them so inconsistent. comparing to 01:03:631 (2,3) - , the music is the same but the spacing is so different
01:30:240 (3) - recommend to have a NC here for the sv change
01:40:818 (4,1) - same as 00:17:227 (4,1) -
Kotori's EXTREME
00:13:852 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is……well, so hard. it's much more difficult than all the other patterns in your whole map, so I think you should better make it easier
00:51:717 (4,5) - the spacing is a bit small here, maybe use around 1.2x~1.3x spacing instead like 00:51:203 (2,1) - 00:54:717 (5,6) -
00:59:688 (1,2) - personally I think moving the NC to 2 will make the rhythm easier to read
generally a pretty nice diff
EXTREME
00:27:852 (1) - whistle on head like 00:19:852 (1) - ?
00:40:823 (4,5,1) - maybe use equal spacing in between?
01:01:060 (3) - you can form a blanket here with 01:00:203 (7,8,9,10,1) -
01:08:431 (3,4,5,6) - I noticed that they are being inconsistent with 01:02:945 (1,2,1,2) - , but it's not a big problem, just see if you want to use similar pattern
01:32:943 (1) - I think it would flow better if you CTRL+G? (also that will be a more natural way to draw a "D" imo)
that's all for me
good luck~