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MillhioreF
have all my stars
hyouri
holy fkuc that storyboard

oh btw I think you should enable "Display epilepsy warning" or people might die obviously
Gero
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ReFaller
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jabronski
best sb ive seen since kung fu empire tbh
ReFaller
Skystar, one mistake.

Exile is written twice in tags :)
Mindwaves
only 45 files for storyboard.
What? wat? wAAAAE-A-A-I-A-U- JO-oooooooooooo AAE-O-A-A-U-U-A- E-eee-ee-eee AAAAE-A-E-I-E-A- JO-ooo-oo-oo-oo EEEEO-A-AAA-AAAA

Wow. 03:40 Till end il literally the best thing i have ever seen.
unreal.
Also trying to watch the SB in the design section in editor is a bad idea, don't do it : :o
Bunnrei
u shud realy remoev long version in title its tiggering me harrd lo xddd
byfar
00:41:705 - 00:45:940 -

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storyboard = yes
Warpyc
Awesome storyboard! Dont forget to turn off countdown and turn on epilepsy warning (a motion sickness warning would be more appropriate though lmao)
MAH BASS CANNON
I don't know how to mod (but this needs to be checked)
Song lyrics are not "Kill machine", they are "Killer machine", this needs to be fixed in the storyboard. Check Fab Acapella voice samples on track 88 here: https://pro.beatport.com/release/techno ... fx/1564167

good luck with rank!







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Kyouren
It's imposibble awesome SB!

Great job, Exile- =w=)b
Akiyama Mizuki
This SB doesn't only provide a extremely good show but it also fits the song.

69/10. Absolutely amazing, human, at least I can't express how amazing this is in words.
Underforest
I got 2 BSOD with new SB ;_;
Topic Starter
Skystar
Year 3116 om ar kamal stil lackin a dkic -_
Yumeno Himiko
It really takes time to check the sb loads in editor XD

BNs can also notice this so that you don't need to make some wrong advices :)
SB Loads that are over 5.00x, same effect won't be mentioned twice, red parts are the problems that we can solve now:

00:10:646 - 00:11:146 : This part is caused by the overload of the shining light, I tried a few ways to cut down the sb load but worked out badly. If someone can come up with a good solution, we can discuss ;)

00:44:911 - 00:46:374 : The sb load here can be cut down by judging whether a "dot"/"line" is out of the screen, when a "dot"/"line" is out of screen now, use Fade code to hide the object and sb load will be cut down sharply here. After all, temporary sb load over 8.0 is still not good to see XD

01:45:999 - 01:47:878 : Honestly the large sb load is caused by the smokes, and after my trials, I guess this problem can't be resolved unless the amount of the smokes is cut down.

03:41:059 - 03:41:724 : The overload caused by flare.png and many border.png , border.png can be made up by 4 straight lines, and in that way the sb load will be cut down sharply.

04:00:828 - 04:01:146 : same as ^

05:57:475 - 05:58:314 : I don't think the sb load can be cut down here.


It spends me already 50min only to check the sb load problems, it crashes my pc.
Detailed mods will come tonight :)

Edit: well it comes to 2 days later lol I'm getting lazy.

The following are only suggestions, you can choose whether to add the effects by yourself:
1. 00:47:352 - 01:33:881 : You can choose to add a C property to make the tracing highlights follow the notes' colors
2. 01:09:940 - 01:20:881 : What about more colors? As you see the shooting star has color blue and white, so you can also add blue colors on the words and the spectrum, I guess more colors are also good to see?
3. 02:19:865 - 03:06:378 : As far as I know about your storyboarding, the background should move slowly XD
4. 02:42:453 - 02:53:747 : This img feels a bit low quality, I made a better one for you, after the change, you can delete the line on scaling the image.
5. 03:41:059 - 03:41:753 : Looks like it can trace the slider?
6. 04:11:580 - 04:12:967 : The spinning centre x = 124?
7. 04:55:973 - 04:57:360 : The spinning centre x = 272?

that's all
rrtyui
This is Noice :O
VINXIS
Noice

EDIT: fuk u skystr..
Nyukai

handsome wrote:

me pc die
Spaghetti
year 2316
Vivyanne
how one storyboard can get my fps from 1500 to 60

gg Exile-
Exile-
Whats going on here?


examination wrote:

It really takes time to check the sb loads in editor XD

Let me just...

Now I can check this design tab

BNs can also notice this so that you don't need to make some wrong advices :)
SB Loads that are over 5.00x, same effect won't be mentioned twice, red parts are the problems that we can solve now:


00:10:646 - 00:11:146 : This part is caused by the overload of the shining light, I tried a few ways to cut down the sb load but worked out badly. If someone can come up with a good solution, we can discuss ;)
Its fine, imo

00:44:911 - 00:46:374 : The sb load here can be cut down by judging whether a "dot"/"line" is out of the screen, when a "dot"/"line" is out of screen now, use Fade code to hide the object and sb load will be cut down sharply here. After all, temporary sb load over 8.0 is still not good to see XD
Sounds reasonable, harder to do... But I managed to do something here :3
SB load now goes slightly over 5x for a sec. Cant reduce it more since lines would be fading while still on the screen


01:45:999 - 01:47:878 : Honestly the large sb load is caused by the smokes, and after my trials, I guess this problem can't be resolved unless the amount of the smokes is cut down.
That's why I love using black background. SB load is still less than 5x most of the time

03:41:059 - 03:41:724 : The overload caused by flare.png and many border.png , border.png can be made up by 4 straight lines, and in that way the sb load will be cut down sharply.
I've done it but this happens:



04:00:828 - 04:01:146 : same as ^ Same

05:57:475 - 05:58:314 : I don't think the sb load can be cut down here.
Lets leave it

It spends me already 50min only to check the sb load problems, it crashes my pc.
Detailed mods will come tonight :)
Thank you!

Take my energy! http://puu.sh/oIvKN/2411958e29.osz
smallboat
[Overdrive]
  1. Artist : ノマ , from official twitter check : https://twitter.com/noma113 and here : http://nomamidi.konjiki.jp/profile.htm
  2. 01:13:470 (1,2) - At this time point I see the round-trip line in the storyboard, maybe can consider change a new horizontal pattern for these sliders?
  3. 01:37:011 (3) - NC? Because I see 03:09:499 (1) - already add NC here, suggest add it? (05:12:967 (3) - Add NC and 05:13:487 (1) - remove NC make the same part?)
  4. 02:53:394 (5) - Seems the 1/8 place at 02:53:041 (4) - more better (I think the 1/8 start here)? And add 2 notes 02:53:394 and 02:53:570 do this jump? You try it ?
  5. 03:12:880 (3) - Remove note? Seems the 1st and 3rd kiai time part has no added there.
  6. 03:23:979 (3) - The same as above
  7. 03:34:470 (3) - Add a nc to read this big jump?
  8. 03:45:308 (2) - Open 25% to listen it, this 1/3 snap

一堆西方人在圍觀 用中文感覺會被幹
Exile-

smallboat wrote:

[Overdrive]
01:13:470 (1,2) - At this time point I see the round-trip line in the storyboard, maybe can consider change a new horizontal pattern for these sliders?
B-but... these sliders are vertical...
Anyways, it wasn't supposed to follow the notes at all and if I rotate it by 90 degrees it would overlap with the spectrum thing.
Sotarks
exile is god
Exile-
Here are some useful files:

Storyboard without kiai: http://puu.sh/oJFlr/461e340aaa.osz

only kiai: http://puu.sh/oJFrR/832123a26d.osz

Extra: First two kiais with 50 lines (PC may crash): http://puu.sh/oJFQx/5aecbd3502.osz

Have fun!
Ashasaki
I got goosebumps on the SB. Good job Exile
P A N
H O L Y M O T H E R B E S T M A P 2 0 1 6 I S H E R E
Linada

rrtyui wrote:

This is Noice :O
^ best storyboard 2k16
MrCraft1124
Holly molly, this beautiful SB...
cyprianz5
fooking masterpiece
Aldryn666
o_O
-Zeraora
:O

Exile- pls
Chewin
very nice map <3
But where are your amazing hitsounds :'(
Exile-
http://puu.sh/oQSxi/2a40846844.txt

Improved the perspective movement due to the RLC's sugestions
Pachiru
skystar is ugly
i dont want to split my kudo... oh wait
Faithium
O-oooooooooo AAAAE-A-A-I-A-U- JO-oooooooooooo AAE-O-A-A-U-U-A- E-eee-ee-eee AAAAE-A-E-I-E-A- JO-ooo-oo-oo-oo EEEEO-A-AAA-AAAA
3rd eyes
沒考慮做一首上RK的Brain power嗎?wwww
RLC

Exile- wrote:

http://puu.sh/oQSxi/2a40846844.txt

Improved the perspective movement due to the RLC's sugestions
new movement looks great :D
Topic Starter
Skystar
rumi

Rumia- wrote:

heY i come from 100 fav in a day
[why am i evn modding]
00:32:087 (2,3) - just want to say this overlap look out of place since u use stacks xd , nearest example 00:33:499 (2,3) - oko
01:49:409 (2,3) - better use overlaps to keep consistent with others like 01:41:693 (6,7) - and such
02:07:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - adjust some angle so it look nicer i think
03:16:088 (1) - o xd oko
03:47:649 (1,1) - ww unperfect stack maybe dun need to care
04:53:545 (1,2,1,2) - the stacking is not uniformed i think its fine???
04:55:973 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - pretty confusing since the last one was 1 direction Dx oko
05:56:319 (1) - 05:56:493 - there is a significant instrument here demanding to be press imo , suggestion wel i think its fine 1!!

n1ce
haqi

Harrharrqi wrote:

cool

00:12:587 (3) - i would nc b/c wub there sounds like a new phrase, so it shouldn't part of the old combo
00:35:175 (1) - nc and make 00:35:352 (1) - with that nc for reasons above up 2 rlc
05:57:100 - start spinner here oko

sorry i dont have much to offer feel free to ignore
clsw

CLSW wrote:

00:22:293 (4,2) - Maybe NC here for the finish sounds in background music?
00:44:881 (4,2) - Same as above up 2 rlc
00:28:293 (1) - How about this to make the actual big picture? nope nvm 03:16:088 (1) - How about to move the 3rd slider point to x 281 y 214? Looks like a bit unbalanced form of the first half way of the slider doesn't really fit with the next half. oko
03:55:973 (1) - How about to add vibrating(?) shape here? Would be better than just straight one.
04:49:730 (1) - It just feels like a conflict of the concept for the pattern usage, current one and 04:50:077 (1) - this one has different atmosphere but anyways it's using pretty much similar movement and shapes. Well I don't know how would be an alternative since I haven't any idea on std so, maybe change with the vertical one? wel the sv is increased for 04:50:077 (1,2) - to have some variation so i guess its k

How to mod std, and the Skystar's map at that ]

Feel free to ignore them all
smallboat

smallboat wrote:

[Overdrive]
  1. Artist : ノマ , from official twitter check : https://twitter.com/noma113 and here : http://nomamidi.konjiki.jp/profile.htm oko
  2. 01:13:470 (1,2) - At this time point I see the round-trip line in the storyboard, maybe can consider change a new horizontal pattern for these sliders? see exile's post D
  3. 01:37:011 (3) - NC? Because I see 03:09:499 (1) - already add NC here, suggest add it? (05:12:967 (3) - Add NC and 05:13:487 (1) - remove NC make the same part?)
  4. 02:53:394 (5) - Seems the 1/8 place at 02:53:041 (4) - more better (I think the 1/8 start here)? And add 2 notes 02:53:394 and 02:53:570 do this jump? You try it ?
  5. 03:12:880 (3) - Remove note? Seems the 1st and 3rd kiai time part has no added there. oko
  6. 03:23:979 (3) - The same as above oko
  7. 03:34:470 (3) - Add a nc to read this big jump? but it isnt big o. o
  8. 03:45:308 (2) - Open 25% to listen it, this 1/3 snap

一堆西方人在圍觀 用中文感覺會被幹
@rlc: points coloured in green mean that I didn't apply yet because of consistency but would like to if you also agree on them (like NCs on the same places), if you do then you can apply them for me since you did the colorhaxing.
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