yokai-BANGKE- wrote:
3 diff 4k icon I? gg
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yokai-BANGKE- wrote:
3 diff 4k icon I? gg
mark
thanks for the mod AbraxosAbraxos wrote:
r00dGeneral
- BPM and Offset : ( ✓ )
- Aimod : ( × ) can you like check it
- Kiai : ( × ) its unsnapped
- Metadata : ( ✓ )
- Hitsound : ( ✓ ) ure doing it r u
- Video : ( ✓ )
ur audio is 320 kbps, osu doesnt allow that format
re-dl 192 kbps audio here, right click on bar and save asnamesi like how you have a difficulty indicator for 4 diffs but for the rest you somehow forgot to put anything
also Battle Begins, mind your SVA
wew 4 minutes
to all diffs: 03:19:601 (199601|3) - seems like this is a 1/12 not a 1/16 when i take a look once again its just missplaced the note i guess, but it is 1/12 alright
please confirm, im not too surereyzra's one
i like this map; reyzra absolutely knows what hes doing
00:14:058 (14058|3,14131|2,14204|3,14277|2) - i wont really recommend this shizo- said the same things too so gonna applied this
00:14:643 - to 00:22:838 - i dont understand how you decide layer doubles/triples here, please review this section. ok, i added 1 note for this 1st note, you cant figure it out? i use double for making difference with guitar and the other sound, i use double for guitar, triple for tom sound that looks like high sound
00:34:838 (34838|2) - i dont get why this has a note, assuming youre layering to the background shhh synth sound i hope you counting for vocal too there
00:37:912 - 00:40:838 - 00:41:716 - note here, becuz of above mentioned synth applied at 00:37:912 , but not the other two, this is intentionally to making gap between 4 notes, so it doesnt need to be hard to press
00:59:277 - theres a faint bass beat here; not sure if you wish to follow it here there is already note here.. what are you trying to say here?
01:10:107 (70107|2,70107|0,70180|1,70180|3,70253|0,70253|2,70326|1,70326|3,70399|0,70399|2,70473|3,70473|1,70546|0,70546|2) - i thought you were better than this nah, i dont think this is good pattern for synth stream, your pattern that you suggest is more like fit drum roll stream ([12][34])
01:22:253 (82253|0,82253|3,82253|2) - some LNs have doubles cuz of the snare but some others 01:20:497 (80497|2,80497|3) - dont. why doe? is it cuz of the LN before for the one i listed out? because it end of the tempo just like this 00:41:863 , and also the pitch si kinda high there so i added it for three
01:27:229 (87229|0,87229|2,87229|3,87375|3,87375|0,87375|1,87521|0,87521|2,87521|3,87668|3,87668|0,87668|1) - your SVs make these more mindblocky than ever; please vary them not for now, at least not yet..., just want adding this for as a challenge, this is intentionally as you can see lol
01:28:399 (88399|0,88546|0,88692|0,88838|0,88985|0,89131|0,89277|0,89424|0,89570|0) - im sure you can make better streams than this hmm good but i applied at other point instead but not this part
01:29:716 - 01:32:058 - 01:34:399 - 01:36:741 - theres the electric guitar sound here this is intentionally, to make player can take a breathe for taking massive jack afterward 01:39:668
00:51:375 (51375|1,51521|2,51668|3) - you followed vocals here so why not 01:38:643 - here nope, this is different, i added it only before chorus , so it can set mood before go into chorus
01:47:716 (107716|3,107716|1,107790|0,107790|2,107863|1,107863|3,107936|2,107936|0,108009|3,108009|1) - leading into LNs? ew why? huh? i think there is nothing wrong with that, your suggestion is makes [12][34] again, im sure this wrong to medo this pleasenothing wrong with having 01:48:229 (108229|1) - be a single to fit with your patterning really not okay with this, inconsistent
02:11:131 (131131|1,131424|1) - 02:20:497 (140497|2,140790|2) - why arent these doubles doubles in red line which means snare, im sure you heard of it very clearly that
btw i love the variation between choruses, makes playing this 4 minute tv size much more bearable thats just how m mapping style work is~
02:25:034 (145034|3,145034|1,145107|2,145107|0,145180|1,145180|3,145253|2,145253|0,145326|1,145326|3) - no really i want to know where you got these shit thrill ideas from, if its blastix remind me to kill myself lol okay i follow this for 2nd part chorus for variation since the old one is inverted ver from 1st chorus
02:29:863 - 02:30:302 - theres that synth sound here intentionally, i make a gap so there is space for keeping the balance of your hands
02:33:960 (153960|1,153960|0,154034|2,154034|3,154107|0,154107|1,154180|3,154180|2) - yes thats the way
02:35:277 (155277|3,155424|1,155570|3,155716|1,155863|3,156009|1) - these dont play well, the distinction provided in the music with the snares are ignored here, and the repetitive nature of these patterns make these really mindblocky, esp when they wear on only two fingers.imghaving them be in sets of 4 at least makes these much more bearable in a sense of reading. i deleted all the side notes, you probably can fill them in where theres snares. try not to have notes for every alternate LN, it makes things really dense really dense? i dont think so, if you want suggest something like this suggest that on lower diff, i mean this is insane diff, you want me to make a such plain LN like that? sry no thanks mate~
02:36:887 (156887|2,156887|0,157180|1,157180|3) - little justification for these to be doubles, also makes this section awkward due to the missing LN at 02:37:034 - lol this is intentional because of the pitch there is high so i add it doubles
02:37:326 (157326|2) - if you listen carefully the synth resets at 02:37:473 - ok
02:37:619 (157619|0,157765|2,157912|0,158058|2) - same thing about coming in sets of 4 ^
02:40:253 (160253|3,160399|1,160546|3,160692|2,160838|3) - are a little better, but column 4 is still too over the top. im sure you can think up with some variation ^
02:41:570 (161570|0,161570|2,161863|1,161863|3) - same thing as above ^
02:44:351 (164351|0) - the LN amplifies this awkwardness, try playing this section and youll see. tbh i really dont recommend you have the pattern continue on here, you have to remember we are playing with 4 columns, not 7. becuz of this limitation you can see here 02:46:253 (166253|1,166546|3) - that you seemingly ignored the synths at 02:46:399 - 02:46:692 - because you literally dont have enough space to spare. id suggest turning this section into a simple 1/2 stream, following the snares/crashes in the music.
02:49:034(169034|3,169180|2,169326|3,169473|1,169619|3,169765|1,169912|3,170058|1,170204|3,170351|1,170497|3,170643|1,170790|3) this is really really awkward, like even more awkward than anything. you have to hold down one finger, then have the other one keep pressing and holding down at regular intervals. not really, i asked player to tesplay it which rank around 700 and also 1k rank, it seems they have no prob with that and said makes sense
02:54:009 (174009|0,174155|1,174302|0,174448|1,174594|0,174741|1,174887|0,175034|1,175180|0,175326|1,175473|0,175619|1) - do i have to explain to you why this is awkward? do i need to explain what is pitch to you?
03:01:180 (181180|3,181180|2,181326|3,181326|2,181473|1,181473|0,181619|1,181619|0,181765|3,181765|2,181912|3,181912|2) - why not meld these together like hmm good idea! i take this~
03:03:155 (183155|2) - ha starts at 03:03:229 - i bet you missheard for echo sound there
03:03:155 (183155|2) - LN should really end at 03:04:398 - because thats when the singer takes in another breath sry im not following the vocal but the synth
03:15:814 (195814|3,197277|0) - why not end a 1/4 tick earlier, leads into this 03:19:582 (199582|2,199619|1) - better ok
pretty smart move to use SVs as another way to differentiate the chorus sets from each other; although i feel as if this shouldnt be the end chorus since theyre pretty easy to hit. i wouldve made the SV chorus the second one and the second chorus the third one because of density, but yeah up to you
03:42:302 (222302|1,222302|3,222375|2,222375|0,222448|1,222448|3,222521|2,222521|0) - hahaha please dont do this im sure you can fix this by now ok i inverted it from 2nd chorus
04:00:594 (240594|3,240668|2,240741|3,240887|3,240887|2,241034|3,241107|2,241180|3,241253|2,241326|3,241473|3,241473|2,241619|3) - same
suggestion as above, just do whatever i did above but invert it nopeto reyzra24/30, 80% urs is the best amongst the ones i scrutinized, really appreciate the effort in making the map interesting throughout, even though i didnt agree on the usage of the differences. one word though: please dont abuse the [13][24] splitthrill pattern, those patterns are the hardest to hit out of the possible sets of jumpthrills, and they usually are pretty easy to mindblock on.
this diff is supposed to be hard so you have to be expecting chart like spillthrill pattern like you said, otherwise there is no reason this diff gotta be hard lol, so i can say this for you, please "Just Deal With it"
hope my mod helped, better keep an eye on the diff gap between reyzra's and meggumi's diff @frozen
good luck with rank vv
Critical_Star wrote:
Hi cyclone
i think your mapset offset is wrong, it should be at 5191
that why i feel kind of odd while i am modding your map, all note were delayed a lot.
u should fix this first then i will mod it again
lol it seems froze still hasnt update the beatmap yet, especially the offset since the mp3 is changed, i just told him to update it quickly before someone start modding it tho, maybe he's still busyProtastic101 wrote:
- Seriously, fix the offset T.T
done with the offsetCritical_Star wrote:
Hi cyclone
i think your mapset offset is wrong, it should be at 5191
that why i feel kind of odd while i am modding your map, all note were delayed a lot.
u should fix this first then i will mod it again
yup that's rightAtHeoN wrote:
woo a full version mania set :O
+1
sry i can't mod mania >_<frozencyclone wrote:
yup that's rightAtHeoN wrote:
woo a full version mania set :O
+1
can u mod this?
LOL. Poor doykyoto..doykyoto wrote:
WHERE ARE THE MODS FOR ME!!
anjeng akwowkowkAdinata28 wrote:
LOL. Poor doykyoto..doykyoto wrote:
WHERE ARE THE MODS FOR ME!!
Draftnell wrote:
[Doy's HD]
eaaa xD
00:01:810 (1810|3) - move col 3 ( gak cocok dibikin jack doy -_-)
00:03:127 (3127|2) - move col 4 ( same above reason)
00:10:298 - add note lagi ? nih note sama ma yg kek gini 00:10:883 - pitch ny
00:24:786 - add note in col 2
00:27:566 (27566|2) - move 4 deh...dibikin jack kek gitu terasa gk cocok
00:31:957 (31957|0) - move to col 2
00:51:859 (51859|1) - bila didenger suara ny agak rada kecil bngt....mending delete aja ini
00:53:908 (53908|3) - move to col 2
00:56:837 (56837|0) - move to col 2
00:59:178 - cymbal doy :v not add lgi ? lu di bagian cymbal lu jadiin triple note :v
01:31:373 - until 01:31:959 - gak yakin pattern ny x,x tapi saran mending bikin kek gini >>> http://puu.sh/oHSVp/54b0d1e6ab.jpg
01:33:715 (93715|0,93715|3,93861|3,93861|0,93861|2,94007|3,94007|0,94154|3,94154|0,94154|1,94300|2,94300|0) - lel sama :v bikin kek yg di atas tdi aja terus di ctrl + H in
01:36:056 - sampe atas.....sama uy :v inti nya 01:36:349 (96349|0,96349|3) - yg disini jadiin 1 note aja.....klo kek gitu gak cocok amat pattern untuk HD+ lel
02:13:814 - >>> http://puu.sh/oHTKh/9c0a1d48eb.jpg 02:14:105 - disini ny add for cymbal
02:25:812 - cymbal uy :v add 1 lagi di col 3
02:28:446 (148446|1) - delete...karena gak ada cymbal :v
02:31:666 - nah ini baru add :v
02:58:593 - add ( you know that )
03:28:739 (208739|0,208739|3) - nih cukup 1 note aja
03:31:373 - cymbal ( add )
pitch ini 03:47:763 - 03:48:056 - 03:48:349 - sampe keatas.....di bagian reff sebelum ny or kiai ente cmn menggunakan 2 note doy x.x
03:52:885 (232885|2) - move 2
03:54:056 (234056|1) - move 3
xD
dosa apa w ...-BANGKE- wrote:
IRC with dodotkyoto10:26 -BANGKE-: dot, gelem irc ra?
10:26 *doykyoto is away: noob
10:26 -BANGKE-: noob
10:26 doykyoto: serah
10:26 doykyoto: pokkoke jok sampe jumatan
10:26 doykyoto: oh jangkrek
10:26 -BANGKE-: aku ae tangi turu
10:26 doykyoto: map opo?
10:26 *-BANGKE- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World]
10:26 doykyoto: n00b
10:26 -BANGKE-: aku duwe urang
10:26 -BANGKE-: utang
10:26 -BANGKE-: anjeng
10:27 doykyoto: btw
10:27 doykyoto: aku GD ne
10:27 doykyoto: xD
10:27 -BANGKE-: iyo ancen
10:27 -BANGKE-: wes ayo irc
10:27 doykyoto: yowis..
10:27 -BANGKE-: tak nazi mod ban apik map e
10:27 doykyoto: serah awakmu ae wes...
10:27 doykyoto: bah nazi bah jjepang mod raurus
10:28 -BANGKE-: ojo kesinggung tp ya :VVV
10:28 -BANGKE-: aku lek ngemod
10:28 -BANGKE-: kasar
10:28 doykyoto: gpp
10:28 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World [doy's Battlefield [HD]]]
10:28 doykyoto: wes tau onok sing kasar pisan mbek aku (
10:28 *doykyoto is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World [doy's Battlefield [HD]]]
10:28 doykyoto: btw aku nggarap e iiku ng sekolah tbh
10:28 doykyoto: pasti akeh salahe
10:28 -BANGKE-: 00:01:518 (1518|2,1664|3) - ctrl j
10:28 -BANGKE-: ban ga ngejack karo 00:01:664 (1664|3,1810|3) -
10:29 -BANGKE-: 00:03:274 (3274|2) - pindahen ndek 4
10:29 -BANGKE-: 1|2|3|4
10:29 doykyoto: monggoo
10:29 doykyoto: lanjut
10:29 -BANGKE-: 00:04:152 (4152|3) - ki mending delete'en, soale perubahan pitch'e ndek kene 00:04:298 (4298|1) -
10:30 doykyoto: oh ok.. i see
10:30 -BANGKE-: 00:04:152 - 00:04:444 - trs add note ndek kono
10:31 -BANGKE-: 00:05:176 (5176|0) - 00:06:493 (6493|2) - 00:07:664 (7664|3) - kok nanggung melok synth'e?
10:31 -BANGKE-: delete en ae
10:31 -BANGKE-: ban ga dadi major issue
10:31 -BANGKE-: 00:09:274 (9274|2,9420|0) - ctrl j
10:31 -BANGKE-: ban ga ngejack 00:09:127 (9127|2,9127|3,9274|2,9274|3) -
10:32 doykyoto: ngene apik ra? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5087687
10:32 -BANGKE-: ojo, mending seng tak saran o maeng, soale kan jek onok suara kick snare
10:32 -BANGKE-: ojo di skip
10:32 -BANGKE-: sayang
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:12:347 (12347|2) - pindahen ndek 4
10:33 doykyoto: iyo2 beb
10:33 doykyoto: jack e ilangno kabeh maren
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:14:103 (14103|0,14176|1) - ki kok single, lah iki kok double 00:14:249 (14249|2,14249|3) -
10:33 -BANGKE-: padahal pitch'e podo
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:14:688 - tekan kene kok kosong
10:33 doykyoto: okok
10:34 doykyoto: gpp
10:34 -BANGKE-: padahal onok suara gitar 1/4
10:34 -BANGKE-: eh 1/2
10:34 -BANGKE-: layering laaa :VVV
10:34 -BANGKE-: major issue loh
10:34 doykyoto: moso masalah se -- gak prasaan ;v
10:34 -BANGKE-: ojo sampe bolong
10:34 doykyoto: wtf
10:34 doykyoto: yowesla
10:35 -BANGKE-: ndek mania gak oleh sampe onok bolong" selagi jek iso di layering
10:35 doykyoto: okaylah
10:35 -BANGKE-: 00:31:079 - ga di add 1 maneh ta, cymbal
10:36 doykyoto: ngejack lo
10:36 -BANGKE-: 00:34:591 (34591|0,34591|1) - heh :V snare'e ndek kene
10:37 -BANGKE-: gaween kyk ngene ngkok http://puu.sh/oHTu2/aeacb775dc.jpg
10:37 -BANGKE-: seng00:31:079 -
10:37 -BANGKE-: 00:36:932 (36932|0) - ghost
10:37 -BANGKE-: delete
10:37 -BANGKE-: 00:36:786 (36786|0) - pindah ndek 2
10:38 -BANGKE-: 00:37:518 (37518|2,37664|2,37810|2) - ojo di jack
10:38 doykyoto: onok kok bang...
10:38 -BANGKE-: jack'e ilangono kabeh
10:38 -BANGKE-: coba gawe 25% nek gk percoyo
10:38 doykyoto: wes mas...
10:38 -BANGKE-: soale ndek part iki awakmu melok'i kick snare
10:38 -BANGKE-: konsistensi
10:38 -BANGKE-: 00:40:883 (40883|2) - iki yo ghost
10:39 -BANGKE-: 00:40:737 - kene add 1, soale snare'e mok layering double
10:39 doykyoto: wes tak fix sing iki 00:40:737 -
10:39 -BANGKE-: oke
10:39 doykyoto: dadi ngene https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5087710
10:39 doykyoto: terus
10:39 doykyoto: lanjut
10:40 -BANGKE-: 00:53:615 (53615|2,53761|0) - ctrl j, awakmu kakean ndek kanan iki
10:40 -BANGKE-: 00:53:908 (53908|3) - pindah ndek 3
10:40 -BANGKE-: eh 2
10:40 doykyoto: okok
10:41 -BANGKE-: 00:56:688 (56688|3,56688|0) - iki lapo kok double? kan mek hithat
10:41 -BANGKE-: 1 ae
10:41 -BANGKE-: trs delehen ndek 2 ban ga ngejack
10:41 -BANGKE-: 00:57:859 (57859|0,58005|1) - ctrl j, variasi ban ga monoton
10:42 -BANGKE-: 01:02:249 (62249|3) - pindahen 3
10:42 -BANGKE-: ndek 3*
10:42 -BANGKE-: 01:03:713 (63713|3) - iki cymbal kok LN 1? iki cymbal sisan tapi 3 01:01:371 (61371|3,61371|2,61371|0) -
10:43 -BANGKE-: 01:09:859 (69859|1,70005|1,70152|1) - stack 3 stream iki angel di hit, 01:09:859 (69859|1) - pindahen ndek 1
10:43 -BANGKE-: 01:13:079 - add double, cymbal ki
10:44 doykyoto: jembat
10:44 doykyoto: akehe se
10:44 doykyoto: duso opo aku
10:44 -BANGKE-: 01:15:713 - 01:16:005 - 01:16:298 - 01:16:591 - 01:16:883 - 01:17:176 - 01:17:469 - 01:17:761 - missing :VVVV
10:44 doykyoto: lanjutno ae del
10:44 doykyoto: aku ngeroki ibuku diluk
10:45 doykyoto: ngkok ben tak apply
10:45 -BANGKE-: 01:17:908 - tekan sampe 01:19:079 - iki 1/2 ojo di layering 1/4
10:45 -BANGKE-: okeoke
10:45 -BANGKE-: 01:20:103 (80103|0) - LN e deleten
10:45 -BANGKE-: podo kyk seng awalan mau
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:19:957 (79957|2,79957|3) - deleten, aku gk ngerungokno opo" ndek 25% PR
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:20:103 - trs kene tambah 1 note maneh, cymbal
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:20:835 (80835|3) - pindah 3
10:47 -BANGKE-: 01:21:566 (81566|2,81713|3) - ctrl j, terus 01:21:859 (81859|2) - pindah 4
10:48 -BANGKE-: 01:31:371 (91371|1,91371|0,91518|2,91518|0,91518|3,91664|0,91664|3,91810|0,91810|3,91810|1,91957|2,91957|1) - gaween kyk ngene ae http://puu.sh/oHU1i/df69e5bbcf.jpg lebih gampang di hit
10:49 -BANGKE-: 01:33:713 (93713|3,93713|0,93859|3,93859|0,93859|2,94005|0,94005|3,94152|1,94152|0,94152|3,94298|0,94298|2) - > http://puu.sh/oHU4d/f343dfd73e.jpg
10:49 -BANGKE-: 01:36:054 (96054|0,96054|3,96200|1,96200|3,96200|0,96347|3,96347|0,96493|3,96493|0,96493|2,96639|3,96639|0) - gaween podo kyk ^
10:50 -BANGKE-: 01:37:371 (97371|0) - pindah 3, ojo jack 3 ngene 01:37:371 (97371|0,97518|0,97664|0) -
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:10:152 (130152|3) - pindah ndek 3
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:16:444 (136444|0) - delete, ghost
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:26:835 - jek onok suarane, add
10:52 -BANGKE-: 02:29:176 (149176|3,149322|3,149469|3) - http://puu.sh/oHUcQ/d10145f688.jpg flow ne lebih enak
10:53 -BANGKE-: 02:32:835 (152835|3,152835|0,152908|1,152981|2,153054|3,153127|2,153127|0,153200|1,153274|2,153347|3) - iki 1/2 dot,
10:53 -BANGKE-: 02:34:883 (154883|2,154883|0) - gk onok suarane
10:54 -BANGKE-: wes yo samono ae :V lagune kedowoen aras"en aku
Ajg.. kemaren ngeluh ga ada yg Mod...doykyoto wrote:
AMPUN MAS. BANYAK BANGET MOD BUAT W
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thanks for the modCometicRush wrote:
Sorry for late mods ;(
I was pretty busy handling other tasks. Really sorry
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Feel free to reject my mods, but please explain me why.
Columns : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4General Checklists
i) BPM & Offsets : √ (Maybe Offset 645?)
ii) Unsnapped things : Notes : √ // Timing points : X - Kiai Unsnapped (All Difficulties), X - Unsnapped SV points (All Difficulties with SV Points, except Reyzra's difficulty)
iii) Song Setups : √
iv) Misc. : △ - Tags exist only in 'Asterisk War [IN]'------------------------------------- Reyzra's Alternate World [IN]
- 02:57:420 - Add notes & drumkick Applied (Drumkick exist in BGM)
I, personally suggest that you delete unnecessary or too easy difficulties like EZ or something, or modify some just-copy-and-pasted patterns.
Like I've mentioned above, mere duplication of patterns may decrease the quality of that difficulty.
Please consider about this, and I hope those mod become helpful to you.
Good luck with your beatmap!
SEDAP COEGGG :VReyzra wrote:
thanks for the mod
nih froze diff ane upgrade jd 5* lol
http://puu.sh/oIt44/77bd51a39c.rar
Udh dot --doykyoto wrote:
apdet diff w COEG. jaad beud lu
AHAHAHAAdinata28 wrote:
Ajg.. kemaren ngeluh ga ada yg Mod...doykyoto wrote:
AMPUN MAS. BANYAK BANGET MOD BUAT W
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Rekt...
CometicRush wrote:
doy's Battlefield [HD]
- 00:04:444 - Small, but sound exist that you were following. I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgOx/0990fafc1c.png
- 00:14:322 - Drumkicks here, actually. Add note to 1, 2
- 01:13:079 - 'Crash sound' in BGM. Add note to 1, 2
- 01:17:908 (77908|0) - Monotonous stair processing. I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgYT/6c7bf5a922.png
- 02:25:591 ~ 02:25:737 - Some sounds in BGM. Maybe connect them with continuous stairs (like 3-4-3?)
- 03:03:200 - Drumkick here. Add note to 4
- 03:45:274 - Same as 01:13:079, Add note to 3
THANK YOUUU >.<Lenfried- wrote:
really busy for the week, i wont be able to mod soooo have some stars :c
thanks for the mod -BANGKE--BANGKE- wrote:
mod lanjutan
1|2|3|4Reyzra SHD
- 00:02:987 (2987|3,2987|0,2987|1) - nih napa kok 3 hitsound? 1 aja cukup, biar ga terlalu nggghhh gimana geto :^) konsiten dari sininya mas
- 00:02:402 (2402|3,2402|0) - ^ ini juga, 1 aja pitch relatif tinggi drpd yg 1 note
- 00:14:694 (14694|0,14694|3,14694|2) - ^ ^
- 00:15:280 (15280|3,15280|0,15280|1) - ^ dll. ^
- 00:32:987 (32987|1) - pindah ke 1, avoid jack 00:32:694 (32694|1,32841|1,32987|1) - aplied
- 00:36:499 (36499|1,36499|0,36499|2,36499|3) - wadooo 4? ini 3 lho sama" snarenya padahal 00:36:206 (36206|2,36206|1,36206|3) - lupa delete lol
- 00:42:792 (42792|2,42792|3,42792|1,42792|0) - suaranya ga terlalu keras kek 00:41:914 (41914|3,41914|0,41914|2,41914|1) - , jadi pake 2 atau 3 saja cukup, but prefer ke 2 sih menurut gw ok drop ke 3
- 00:51:719 (51719|3) - vocal kan ya, kalo ya harusnya berenti di sini suara vocal nya 00:51:865 - , coba denger pake 25% PR ssh klo lepas LN nya mnding samakan aja
- 00:56:841 (56841|3,56841|0,56841|2) - cymbal kok 3? konsistensi la sama ini 00:54:353 (54353|1,54353|0,54353|2,54353|3) - applied
- 01:06:206 (66206|0,66206|1,66206|3) - same reason ^ aplied
- 01:08:841 (68841|1,68841|2,68841|0,68841|3) - snare 4 note?
- 01:09:426 (69426|3,69572|3,69719|3,69865|3) - wado stack 4, coba" di arrange" lagi aja biar ga stack 4 gini ok
- 01:38:987 (98987|3,98987|1,98987|0,98987|2,99280|0,99280|1,99280|2,99280|3,99572|3,99572|1,99572|0,99572|2) - gw ga ngerti :/ kok 4 smua? di note" sebelumnya snare make 3 note lho, 4 di cymbal ok aplied
- 01:41:328 (101328|3,101328|1,101328|2,101328|0,101621|1,101621|2,101621|0,101621|3,101914|1,101914|2,101914|0,101914|3) - ^ ^
- 01:43:670 (103670|2,103670|0,103670|1,103670|3,103963|0,103963|1,103963|3,103963|2,104255|2,104255|1,104255|3,104255|0) - ^ ^
- 01:46:011 (106011|3,106011|2,106011|1,106011|0,106304|1,106304|3,106304|0,106304|2,106597|0,106597|3,106597|1,106597|2) - ^ ^
- 02:06:645 (126645|2) - nih sama yg tadi, vocal nya end di sini 02:06:792 - nay ada sv
- 02:13:816 (133816|2,133816|3,133816|0,133816|1) - snare 4 note? deleted
- 02:23:182 (143182|1,143182|2,143182|0,143182|3) - ^ ^
- 03:03:206 (183206|2) - nih LN harusnya end di sini 03:04:450 - msh ada suara menurut ane tp kecil
- 03:06:499 (186499|3,186499|2,186499|0) - 03:11:182 (191182|3,191182|0,191182|1) - 03:15:865 (195865|0,195865|1,195865|3) - yakin 3 note? suaranya ga keras, lagian ini kan rest part, part" sebelumnya udah killer, jadi layer 2 note saja cukup ok
- 03:23:914 (203914|1) - sama kyk yg vocal tadi
- 03:29:036 - 03:32:841 - wow sv part, idnt get it, lebih baik di remove atau nanti kena gamplang bn di sv part for vatiation antar reff, sama jd boring ntar
- 03:38:694 - ^ ^
- 03:38:694 (218694|0,218694|1,218694|2,218694|3,219280|2,219280|3,219280|0,219280|1) - snare 4 note? di sini 3 lho 03:29:328 (209328|2,209328|3,209328|0,209914|3,209914|2,209914|0) - deleted
goodluck guys!
Critical_Star wrote:
wew, sorry for the late delay
i will just the mod hardest diff i guess
[box=Reyzra's Alternate World [SHD:1337]]00:04:597 (4597|1) - the LN should stop at 00:04:743 - the long sound stopped at there
00:14:694 (14694|0,14694|2,14694|3) - there isn't need to have triple here, the sound isn't that strong enough to have triple
00:15:280 (15280|0,15280|1,15280|3) - not sure why this is triple..is kinda random here
00:15:719 (15719|0,15719|3,16011|2,16011|0,16304|0,16304|2,16450|1,16450|3) - reason for double? i think they all have the same sound like all these single note here. 00:17:036 (17036|3,17036|0) - here i can see why is double.
00:19:085 (19085|0,19085|2,19085|3) - and so on for all these triple, i think is too much here, better reduce it
00:23:182 (23182|0,23328|1,23475|2) - these guitar sound should end at 00:23:475 -
00:34:889 (34889|1) - remove? since u only focus on loud drum and kick and 00:36:353 - u empty this space too
00:40:743 (40743|3,40743|1,40743|0,40743|2,41036|1,41036|2,41036|3,41036|0,41621|2,41621|0,41621|1,41621|3,41914|1,41914|0,41914|3,41914|2) - quad note doesn't seems good here, unless they have clap + crash sound, make triple should be enough
01:05:475 (65475|1) - delete this better to make a flow here like u did at 01:01:963 -
01:24:060 - double note?
01:25:524 (85524|1,85524|3) - remove a note here since there isn't any loud kick here
01:27:280 (87280|2,87280|0,87280|3,87280|1,87426|0,87426|3,87426|2,87426|1,87572|3,87572|0,87572|1,87572|2,87719|0,87719|3,87719|1,87719|2,87865|3,87865|0,87865|1,87865|2,88011|2,88011|0,88011|3,88011|1,88158|2,88158|1,88158|0,88158|3,88304|0,88304|3,88304|2,88304|1) - i think is just kind of too plain for this pattern, is just feel like spamming it, making them triple note would be nice to variate the pattern here
01:29:036 (89036|2,89036|3,89036|0) - there is no need triple here, is just a normal sound
01:39:280 (99280|0,99280|3,99280|2,99572|2,99572|1,99572|0) - make them double here for consistency at 01:41:328 (101328|3,101328|2,101621|3,101621|1,101914|3,101914|0) -
03:01:085 (181085|2,181085|0,181085|3,181231|3,181231|1,181231|0,181377|3,181377|2,181377|0,181524|0,181524|3,181524|1,181670|0,181670|2,181670|3,181816|0,181816|3,181816|1,181963|0,181963|2,181963|3) - double for kick here is fine
03:32:987 (212987|2) - would prefer to remove this note for better pattern flow
03:37:816 - should be double note here
03:59:475 (239475|0,239475|1,239475|3,239475|2,239621|2,239621|0,239621|3,239621|1,239767|1,239767|3,239767|0,239767|2,239914|0,239914|2,239914|3,239914|1,240060|1,240060|3,240060|0,240060|2,240206|1,240206|0,240206|2,240206|3,240353|2,240353|0,240353|3,240353|1,240499|2,240499|0,240499|1,240499|3) - like before, just my suggestion
frozencyclone wrote:
Critical_Star wrote:
wew, sorry for the late delay
i will just the mod hardest diff i guess
[box=Reyzra's Alternate World [SHD:1337]]00:04:597 (4597|1) - the LN should stop at 00:04:743 - the long sound stopped at there
00:14:694 (14694|0,14694|2,14694|3) - there isn't need to have triple here, the sound isn't that strong enough to have triple
00:15:280 (15280|0,15280|1,15280|3) - not sure why this is triple..is kinda random here
00:15:719 (15719|0,15719|3,16011|2,16011|0,16304|0,16304|2,16450|1,16450|3) - reason for double? i think they all have the same sound like all these single note here. 00:17:036 (17036|3,17036|0) - here i can see why is double.
00:19:085 (19085|0,19085|2,19085|3) - and so on for all these triple, i think is too much here, better reduce it
00:23:182 (23182|0,23328|1,23475|2) - these guitar sound should end at 00:23:475 -
00:34:889 (34889|1) - remove? since u only focus on loud drum and kick and 00:36:353 - u empty this space too
00:40:743 (40743|3,40743|1,40743|0,40743|2,41036|1,41036|2,41036|3,41036|0,41621|2,41621|0,41621|1,41621|3,41914|1,41914|0,41914|3,41914|2) - quad note doesn't seems good here, unless they have clap + crash sound, make triple should be enough
01:05:475 (65475|1) - delete this better to make a flow here like u did at 01:01:963 -
01:24:060 - double note?
01:25:524 (85524|1,85524|3) - remove a note here since there isn't any loud kick here
01:27:280 (87280|2,87280|0,87280|3,87280|1,87426|0,87426|3,87426|2,87426|1,87572|3,87572|0,87572|1,87572|2,87719|0,87719|3,87719|1,87719|2,87865|3,87865|0,87865|1,87865|2,88011|2,88011|0,88011|3,88011|1,88158|2,88158|1,88158|0,88158|3,88304|0,88304|3,88304|2,88304|1) - i think is just kind of too plain for this pattern, is just feel like spamming it, making them triple note would be nice to variate the pattern here
01:29:036 (89036|2,89036|3,89036|0) - there is no need triple here, is just a normal sound
01:39:280 (99280|0,99280|3,99280|2,99572|2,99572|1,99572|0) - make them double here for consistency at 01:41:328 (101328|3,101328|2,101621|3,101621|1,101914|3,101914|0) -
03:01:085 (181085|2,181085|0,181085|3,181231|3,181231|1,181231|0,181377|3,181377|2,181377|0,181524|0,181524|3,181524|1,181670|0,181670|2,181670|3,181816|0,181816|3,181816|1,181963|0,181963|2,181963|3) - double for kick here is fine
03:32:987 (212987|2) - would prefer to remove this note for better pattern flow
03:37:816 - should be double note here
03:59:475 (239475|0,239475|1,239475|3,239475|2,239621|2,239621|0,239621|3,239621|1,239767|1,239767|3,239767|0,239767|2,239914|0,239914|2,239914|3,239914|1,240060|1,240060|3,240060|0,240060|2,240206|1,240206|0,240206|2,240206|3,240353|2,240353|0,240353|3,240353|1,240499|2,240499|0,240499|1,240499|3) - like before, just my suggestion
protes aja njink.. mod aja siniAdinata28 wrote:
7 Diff * 4 Minute is kinda long... orz
mod coeg, jgn comment mulu :vAdinata28 wrote:
7 Diff * 4 Minute is kinda long... orz
Omg, this is completely a 'kerja rodi'.frozencyclone wrote:
why don't u mod all of the diff? ._.
Iktf *hugs my star-nya.Critical_Star wrote:
;w;w sorry my time ran out, maybe i will try to mod other diff some other time ...
Agree with this tbh.Adinata28 wrote:
7 Diff * 4 Minute is kinda long... orz