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Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World [OsuMania]

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Critical_Star
Beatmap Nominator
1,210 posts
Joined December 2013
Critical_Star
Hi cyclone :)
i think your mapset offset is wrong, it should be at 5191
that why i feel kind of odd while i am modding your map, all note were delayed a lot.
u should fix this first then i will mod it again ;)
Reyzra
739 posts
Joined May 2013
Reyzra

Critical_Star wrote:

Hi cyclone :)
i think your mapset offset is wrong, it should be at 5191
that why i feel kind of odd while i am modding your map, all note were delayed a lot.
u should fix this first then i will mod it again ;)

Protastic101 wrote:

- Seriously, fix the offset T.T
lol it seems froze still hasnt update the beatmap yet, especially the offset since the mp3 is changed, i just told him to update it quickly before someone start modding it tho, maybe he's still busy
Virtue-
Beatmap Nominator
1,112 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Virtue-

Critical_Star wrote:

Hi cyclone :)
i think your mapset offset is wrong, it should be at 5191
that why i feel kind of odd while i am modding your map, all note were delayed a lot.
u should fix this first then i will mod it again ;)
done with the offset
Adot
742 posts
Joined August 2015
Adot
WHERE ARE THE MODS FOR ME!!
AtHeoN
412 posts
Joined July 2012
AtHeoN
woo a full version mania set :O

+1
Virtue-
Beatmap Nominator
1,112 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Virtue-

AtHeoN wrote:

woo a full version mania set :O

+1
yup that's right :D
can u mod this?
Aste-
2,387 posts
Joined September 2014
Aste-
Mod Here

ok. for Easier diff. i'll focus on the pattern flow

my format column 1/2/3/4

[general]

tags : Asterisk War academy battle city Opening OP 1st

source: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shiena_Nishizawa https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Asterisk_War http://asterisk.wikia.com/wiki/Brand-new_World

Check AI MOD, there some Un-Snapped Kiai

[EZ]

00:06:493 (6493|0,6786|2) - if you want a smooth LR Flow, you can swap this note.

00:08:396 (8396|3,8542|2) - you are breaking the Flow here, try to swap it, and Move this 00:09:127 (9127|1,9274|3) - to 4 and 3 or 2 for nice flow and pattern feel

00:11:908 (11908|1,12054|3) - this too, you know what to do

00:19:079 (19079|3) - better move it to 3 to make a nice flow with the music, and 00:22:005 (22005|2) - this note to 2 to make a difference between this part and 00:22:298 (22298|3,22883|2) - this vocal part

00:23:761 (23761|0,24054|3,24347|1) - Flip it horizontaly. it lack of Hard beat feel over here 00:23:761 (23761|0,24054|3) - and swaping the column will do, plus, can tell the player that the flow's gonna be change after this

00:27:127 (27127|2,27274|3) - try to move it to 4-3 or 4-2, because the flow in the previous part are from left to right. and change this flow from right to left to ballance it

00:27:566 (27566|1,27859|0,28005|3,28298|1,28444|0) - Try this? http://puu.sh/oFMld/8e32513525.jpg , if you do. then move 00:28:737 (28737|3) - to 1 to avoid un-necesary jack. plus fixing the Flow

00:33:420 (33420|2,33566|3) - Swap it. the pattern here are in the different part now, to make a difference. you can swap it

[NM]

00:22:005 (22005|0) - how about move it to 2? the flow form the current placement are breaking

01:00:347 (60347|3) - move it to 3 to ballance this Jack 00:59:469 (59469|0,59761|0) -

[HD]

00:15:566 (15566|3) - i still can hear the back Syth, add one more

00:17:908 (17908|2) - ^

00:20:249 (20249|2) - ^

[Punya nya Adot]

00:07:810 - not adding any note to represent the hi hat? i see you've folowing that while adding another drum part like Kick and Snare

00:09:859 - This too

00:06:347 - this too *idk if you following the main synth or hi hat. because the snap are almost similar lol

for snap similar like that. add it. or be consistence with the snapping, because i feel a bit confuse in here 00:06:054 (6054|3,6054|2,6200|3,6200|1,6200|0) - that following the hi hat, and here 00:07:664 (7664|0,7664|3,7957|2,7957|0,7957|1,8103|3) - that folowing the Synth

00:14:688 (14688|1) - from here, why not trying to map those sound? those small sound are pretty audible thou

00:32:103 - missing note for hi hat, and here too 00:32:396 -

00:34:737 -- missing note for snare

other problem are similar with this one

[Asterisk War]

Whoaa 50% volume? too high man. try to reduce it to 40% or 30%

00:24:932 (24932|2,24932|0,24932|3) - Wrong HS here. should be Snare

00:32:688 (32688|1,32688|2,32835|1,32835|0,32981|2,32981|3,33127|0,33127|1,33274|2,33274|3,33420|3,33420|1,33420|2,33420|0) - the sound are fading here, why dont you try to add kick or snare here?

00:54:347 (54347|1,54347|3) - from what i see. you use 3plets for crash and snare. add 1 more maybe??

01:03:713 (63713|1,63713|0,63713|2,63713|3) - and this one 4plets.. hmm how about you check the other part similar with this and make it 3plets or 4plets, i suggest you use 4plets here, so.. add 1 more for Crash here and another part that similar with this one

Done~
AtHeoN
412 posts
Joined July 2012
AtHeoN

frozencyclone wrote:

AtHeoN wrote:

woo a full version mania set :O

+1
yup that's right :D
can u mod this?
sry i can't mod mania >_<
Adinata28
551 posts
Joined March 2014
Adinata28

doykyoto wrote:

WHERE ARE THE MODS FOR ME!!
LOL. Poor doykyoto..
Virtue-
Beatmap Nominator
1,112 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Virtue-
@AtHeon : try it, it's good if you can do all of the diff
Draftnell
1,074 posts
Joined October 2013
Draftnell
Req from PM ~

Mod Request
|1|2|3|4|


General
Before apply my mod, please check your Aimod(Ctrl+Shift+A)

MOD
[EZ]
no problem is here

[NM]
01:06:200 - add for finish sound or cymbal ( before you add it )
01:08:542 - ^
01:17:908 - add 1 for cymbal
02:21:127 - add note in col 4
02:32:835 (152835|3,153127|2) - same action change pattern with >> 01:17:908 -
03:50:103 - add 1 for cymbal

[HD]
skipp mod this cause your HS and general of audio not you option

dat SV to -_-
WARNING: its will be over, if your SV not suitable

[Doy's HD]
eaaa xD

00:01:810 (1810|3) - move col 3 ( gak cocok dibikin jack doy -_-)
00:03:127 (3127|2) - move col 4 ( same above reason)
00:10:298 - add note lagi ? nih note sama ma yg kek gini 00:10:883 - pitch ny
00:24:786 - add note in col 2
00:27:566 (27566|2) - move 4 deh...dibikin jack kek gitu terasa gk cocok
00:31:957 (31957|0) - move to col 2
00:51:859 (51859|1) - bila didenger suara ny agak rada kecil bngt....mending delete aja ini
00:53:908 (53908|3) - move to col 2
00:56:837 (56837|0) - move to col 2
00:59:178 - cymbal doy :v not add lgi ? lu di bagian cymbal lu jadiin triple note :v
01:31:373 - until 01:31:959 - gak yakin pattern ny x,x tapi saran mending bikin kek gini >>> http://puu.sh/oHSVp/54b0d1e6ab.jpg
01:33:715 (93715|0,93715|3,93861|3,93861|0,93861|2,94007|3,94007|0,94154|3,94154|0,94154|1,94300|2,94300|0) - lel sama :v bikin kek yg di atas tdi aja terus di ctrl + H in
01:36:056 - sampe atas.....sama uy :v inti nya 01:36:349 (96349|0,96349|3) - yg disini jadiin 1 note aja.....klo kek gitu gak cocok amat pattern untuk HD+ lel
02:13:814 - >>> http://puu.sh/oHTKh/9c0a1d48eb.jpg 02:14:105 - disini ny add for cymbal
02:25:812 - cymbal uy :v add 1 lagi di col 3
02:28:446 (148446|1) - delete...karena gak ada cymbal :v
02:31:666 - nah ini baru add :v
02:58:593 - add ( you know that )
03:28:739 (208739|0,208739|3) - nih cukup 1 note aja
03:31:373 - cymbal ( add )
pitch ini 03:47:763 - 03:48:056 - 03:48:349 - sampe keatas.....di bagian reff sebelum ny or kiai ente cmn menggunakan 2 note doy x.x
03:52:885 (232885|2) - move 2
03:54:056 (234056|1) - move 3

xD

that's it x.x
sorry i cant mod diff IN cause no much time more x,x and to this song lenght 3 minute lol :v
ok, hope my mod helpfully ^^
and GL everyone ><
-BANGKE-
958 posts
Joined July 2015
-BANGKE-
IRC with dodotkyoto
10:26 -BANGKE-: dot, gelem irc ra?
10:26 *doykyoto is away: noob
10:26 -BANGKE-: noob
10:26 doykyoto: serah
10:26 doykyoto: pokkoke jok sampe jumatan
10:26 doykyoto: oh jangkrek
10:26 -BANGKE-: aku ae tangi turu
10:26 doykyoto: map opo?
10:26 *-BANGKE- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World]
10:26 doykyoto: n00b
10:26 -BANGKE-: aku duwe urang
10:26 -BANGKE-: utang
10:26 -BANGKE-: anjeng
10:27 doykyoto: btw
10:27 doykyoto: aku GD ne
10:27 doykyoto: xD
10:27 -BANGKE-: iyo ancen
10:27 -BANGKE-: wes ayo irc
10:27 doykyoto: yowis..
10:27 -BANGKE-: tak nazi mod ban apik map e
10:27 doykyoto: serah awakmu ae wes...
10:27 doykyoto: bah nazi bah jjepang mod raurus
10:28 -BANGKE-: ojo kesinggung tp ya :VVV
10:28 -BANGKE-: aku lek ngemod
10:28 -BANGKE-: kasar
10:28 doykyoto: gpp
10:28 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World [doy's Battlefield [HD]]]
10:28 doykyoto: wes tau onok sing kasar pisan mbek aku :((
10:28 *doykyoto is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World [doy's Battlefield [HD]]]
10:28 doykyoto: btw aku nggarap e iiku ng sekolah tbh
10:28 doykyoto: pasti akeh salahe
10:28 -BANGKE-: 00:01:518 (1518|2,1664|3) - ctrl j
10:28 -BANGKE-: ban ga ngejack karo 00:01:664 (1664|3,1810|3) -
10:29 -BANGKE-: 00:03:274 (3274|2) - pindahen ndek 4
10:29 -BANGKE-: 1|2|3|4
10:29 doykyoto: monggoo
10:29 doykyoto: lanjut
10:29 -BANGKE-: 00:04:152 (4152|3) - ki mending delete'en, soale perubahan pitch'e ndek kene 00:04:298 (4298|1) -
10:30 doykyoto: oh ok.. i see
10:30 -BANGKE-: 00:04:152 - 00:04:444 - trs add note ndek kono
10:31 -BANGKE-: 00:05:176 (5176|0) - 00:06:493 (6493|2) - 00:07:664 (7664|3) - kok nanggung melok synth'e?
10:31 -BANGKE-: delete en ae
10:31 -BANGKE-: ban ga dadi major issue
10:31 -BANGKE-: 00:09:274 (9274|2,9420|0) - ctrl j
10:31 -BANGKE-: ban ga ngejack 00:09:127 (9127|2,9127|3,9274|2,9274|3) -
10:32 doykyoto: ngene apik ra? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5087687
10:32 -BANGKE-: ojo, mending seng tak saran o maeng, soale kan jek onok suara kick snare
10:32 -BANGKE-: ojo di skip
10:32 -BANGKE-: sayang
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:12:347 (12347|2) - pindahen ndek 4
10:33 doykyoto: iyo2 beb
10:33 doykyoto: jack e ilangno kabeh maren
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:14:103 (14103|0,14176|1) - ki kok single, lah iki kok double 00:14:249 (14249|2,14249|3) -
10:33 -BANGKE-: padahal pitch'e podo
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:14:688 - tekan kene kok kosong
10:33 doykyoto: okok
10:34 doykyoto: gpp
10:34 -BANGKE-: padahal onok suara gitar 1/4
10:34 -BANGKE-: eh 1/2
10:34 -BANGKE-: layering laaa :VVV
10:34 -BANGKE-: major issue loh
10:34 doykyoto: moso masalah se -- gak prasaan ;v
10:34 -BANGKE-: ojo sampe bolong
10:34 doykyoto: wtf
10:34 doykyoto: yowesla
10:35 -BANGKE-: ndek mania gak oleh sampe onok bolong" selagi jek iso di layering
10:35 doykyoto: okaylah
10:35 -BANGKE-: 00:31:079 - ga di add 1 maneh ta, cymbal
10:36 doykyoto: ngejack lo
10:36 -BANGKE-: 00:34:591 (34591|0,34591|1) - heh :V snare'e ndek kene
10:37 -BANGKE-: gaween kyk ngene ngkok http://puu.sh/oHTu2/aeacb775dc.jpg
10:37 -BANGKE-: seng00:31:079 -
10:37 -BANGKE-: 00:36:932 (36932|0) - ghost
10:37 -BANGKE-: delete
10:37 -BANGKE-: 00:36:786 (36786|0) - pindah ndek 2
10:38 -BANGKE-: 00:37:518 (37518|2,37664|2,37810|2) - ojo di jack
10:38 doykyoto: onok kok bang...
10:38 -BANGKE-: jack'e ilangono kabeh
10:38 -BANGKE-: coba gawe 25% nek gk percoyo
10:38 doykyoto: wes mas...
10:38 -BANGKE-: soale ndek part iki awakmu melok'i kick snare
10:38 -BANGKE-: konsistensi
10:38 -BANGKE-: 00:40:883 (40883|2) - iki yo ghost
10:39 -BANGKE-: 00:40:737 - kene add 1, soale snare'e mok layering double
10:39 doykyoto: wes tak fix sing iki 00:40:737 -
10:39 -BANGKE-: oke
10:39 doykyoto: dadi ngene https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5087710
10:39 doykyoto: terus
10:39 doykyoto: lanjut
10:40 -BANGKE-: 00:53:615 (53615|2,53761|0) - ctrl j, awakmu kakean ndek kanan iki
10:40 -BANGKE-: 00:53:908 (53908|3) - pindah ndek 3
10:40 -BANGKE-: eh 2
10:40 doykyoto: okok
10:41 -BANGKE-: 00:56:688 (56688|3,56688|0) - iki lapo kok double? kan mek hithat
10:41 -BANGKE-: 1 ae
10:41 -BANGKE-: trs delehen ndek 2 ban ga ngejack
10:41 -BANGKE-: 00:57:859 (57859|0,58005|1) - ctrl j, variasi ban ga monoton
10:42 -BANGKE-: 01:02:249 (62249|3) - pindahen 3
10:42 -BANGKE-: ndek 3*
10:42 -BANGKE-: 01:03:713 (63713|3) - iki cymbal kok LN 1? iki cymbal sisan tapi 3 01:01:371 (61371|3,61371|2,61371|0) -
10:43 -BANGKE-: 01:09:859 (69859|1,70005|1,70152|1) - stack 3 stream iki angel di hit, 01:09:859 (69859|1) - pindahen ndek 1
10:43 -BANGKE-: 01:13:079 - add double, cymbal ki
10:44 doykyoto: jembat
10:44 doykyoto: akehe se
10:44 doykyoto: duso opo aku
10:44 -BANGKE-: 01:15:713 - 01:16:005 - 01:16:298 - 01:16:591 - 01:16:883 - 01:17:176 - 01:17:469 - 01:17:761 - missing :VVVV
10:44 doykyoto: lanjutno ae del
10:44 doykyoto: aku ngeroki ibuku diluk
10:45 doykyoto: ngkok ben tak apply
10:45 -BANGKE-: 01:17:908 - tekan sampe 01:19:079 - iki 1/2 ojo di layering 1/4
10:45 -BANGKE-: okeoke
10:45 -BANGKE-: 01:20:103 (80103|0) - LN e deleten
10:45 -BANGKE-: podo kyk seng awalan mau
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:19:957 (79957|2,79957|3) - deleten, aku gk ngerungokno opo" ndek 25% PR
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:20:103 - trs kene tambah 1 note maneh, cymbal
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:20:835 (80835|3) - pindah 3
10:47 -BANGKE-: 01:21:566 (81566|2,81713|3) - ctrl j, terus 01:21:859 (81859|2) - pindah 4
10:48 -BANGKE-: 01:31:371 (91371|1,91371|0,91518|2,91518|0,91518|3,91664|0,91664|3,91810|0,91810|3,91810|1,91957|2,91957|1) - gaween kyk ngene ae http://puu.sh/oHU1i/df69e5bbcf.jpg lebih gampang di hit
10:49 -BANGKE-: 01:33:713 (93713|3,93713|0,93859|3,93859|0,93859|2,94005|0,94005|3,94152|1,94152|0,94152|3,94298|0,94298|2) - > http://puu.sh/oHU4d/f343dfd73e.jpg
10:49 -BANGKE-: 01:36:054 (96054|0,96054|3,96200|1,96200|3,96200|0,96347|3,96347|0,96493|3,96493|0,96493|2,96639|3,96639|0) - gaween podo kyk ^
10:50 -BANGKE-: 01:37:371 (97371|0) - pindah 3, ojo jack 3 ngene 01:37:371 (97371|0,97518|0,97664|0) -
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:10:152 (130152|3) - pindah ndek 3
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:16:444 (136444|0) - delete, ghost
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:26:835 - jek onok suarane, add
10:52 -BANGKE-: 02:29:176 (149176|3,149322|3,149469|3) - http://puu.sh/oHUcQ/d10145f688.jpg flow ne lebih enak
10:53 -BANGKE-: 02:32:835 (152835|3,152835|0,152908|1,152981|2,153054|3,153127|2,153127|0,153200|1,153274|2,153347|3) - iki 1/2 dot,
10:53 -BANGKE-: 02:34:883 (154883|2,154883|0) - gk onok suarane
10:54 -BANGKE-: wes yo samono ae :V lagune kedowoen aras"en aku

diff lainya ntar pas abis jumatan ye, goodluck
Adot
742 posts
Joined August 2015
Adot

Adinata28 wrote:

doykyoto wrote:

WHERE ARE THE MODS FOR ME!!
LOL. Poor doykyoto..
anjeng akwowkowk
Adot
742 posts
Joined August 2015
Adot

Draftnell wrote:

[Doy's HD]
eaaa xD

00:01:810 (1810|3) - move col 3 ( gak cocok dibikin jack doy -_-)
00:03:127 (3127|2) - move col 4 ( same above reason)
00:10:298 - add note lagi ? nih note sama ma yg kek gini 00:10:883 - pitch ny
00:24:786 - add note in col 2
00:27:566 (27566|2) - move 4 deh...dibikin jack kek gitu terasa gk cocok
00:31:957 (31957|0) - move to col 2
00:51:859 (51859|1) - bila didenger suara ny agak rada kecil bngt....mending delete aja ini
00:53:908 (53908|3) - move to col 2
00:56:837 (56837|0) - move to col 2
00:59:178 - cymbal doy :v not add lgi ? lu di bagian cymbal lu jadiin triple note :v
01:31:373 - until 01:31:959 - gak yakin pattern ny x,x tapi saran mending bikin kek gini >>> http://puu.sh/oHSVp/54b0d1e6ab.jpg
01:33:715 (93715|0,93715|3,93861|3,93861|0,93861|2,94007|3,94007|0,94154|3,94154|0,94154|1,94300|2,94300|0) - lel sama :v bikin kek yg di atas tdi aja terus di ctrl + H in
01:36:056 - sampe atas.....sama uy :v inti nya 01:36:349 (96349|0,96349|3) - yg disini jadiin 1 note aja.....klo kek gitu gak cocok amat pattern untuk HD+ lel
02:13:814 - >>> http://puu.sh/oHTKh/9c0a1d48eb.jpg 02:14:105 - disini ny add for cymbal
02:25:812 - cymbal uy :v add 1 lagi di col 3
02:28:446 (148446|1) - delete...karena gak ada cymbal :v
02:31:666 - nah ini baru add :v
02:58:593 - add ( you know that )
03:28:739 (208739|0,208739|3) - nih cukup 1 note aja
03:31:373 - cymbal ( add )
pitch ini 03:47:763 - 03:48:056 - 03:48:349 - sampe keatas.....di bagian reff sebelum ny or kiai ente cmn menggunakan 2 note doy x.x
03:52:885 (232885|2) - move 2
03:54:056 (234056|1) - move 3

xD

-BANGKE- wrote:

IRC with dodotkyoto
10:26 -BANGKE-: dot, gelem irc ra?
10:26 *doykyoto is away: noob
10:26 -BANGKE-: noob
10:26 doykyoto: serah
10:26 doykyoto: pokkoke jok sampe jumatan
10:26 doykyoto: oh jangkrek
10:26 -BANGKE-: aku ae tangi turu
10:26 doykyoto: map opo?
10:26 *-BANGKE- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World]
10:26 doykyoto: n00b
10:26 -BANGKE-: aku duwe urang
10:26 -BANGKE-: utang
10:26 -BANGKE-: anjeng
10:27 doykyoto: btw
10:27 doykyoto: aku GD ne
10:27 doykyoto: xD
10:27 -BANGKE-: iyo ancen
10:27 -BANGKE-: wes ayo irc
10:27 doykyoto: yowis..
10:27 -BANGKE-: tak nazi mod ban apik map e
10:27 doykyoto: serah awakmu ae wes...
10:27 doykyoto: bah nazi bah jjepang mod raurus
10:28 -BANGKE-: ojo kesinggung tp ya :VVV
10:28 -BANGKE-: aku lek ngemod
10:28 -BANGKE-: kasar
10:28 doykyoto: gpp
10:28 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World [doy's Battlefield [HD]]]
10:28 doykyoto: wes tau onok sing kasar pisan mbek aku :((
10:28 *doykyoto is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World [doy's Battlefield [HD]]]
10:28 doykyoto: btw aku nggarap e iiku ng sekolah tbh
10:28 doykyoto: pasti akeh salahe
10:28 -BANGKE-: 00:01:518 (1518|2,1664|3) - ctrl j
10:28 -BANGKE-: ban ga ngejack karo 00:01:664 (1664|3,1810|3) -
10:29 -BANGKE-: 00:03:274 (3274|2) - pindahen ndek 4
10:29 -BANGKE-: 1|2|3|4
10:29 doykyoto: monggoo
10:29 doykyoto: lanjut
10:29 -BANGKE-: 00:04:152 (4152|3) - ki mending delete'en, soale perubahan pitch'e ndek kene 00:04:298 (4298|1) -
10:30 doykyoto: oh ok.. i see
10:30 -BANGKE-: 00:04:152 - 00:04:444 - trs add note ndek kono
10:31 -BANGKE-: 00:05:176 (5176|0) - 00:06:493 (6493|2) - 00:07:664 (7664|3) - kok nanggung melok synth'e?
10:31 -BANGKE-: delete en ae
10:31 -BANGKE-: ban ga dadi major issue
10:31 -BANGKE-: 00:09:274 (9274|2,9420|0) - ctrl j
10:31 -BANGKE-: ban ga ngejack 00:09:127 (9127|2,9127|3,9274|2,9274|3) -
10:32 doykyoto: ngene apik ra? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5087687
10:32 -BANGKE-: ojo, mending seng tak saran o maeng, soale kan jek onok suara kick snare
10:32 -BANGKE-: ojo di skip
10:32 -BANGKE-: sayang
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:12:347 (12347|2) - pindahen ndek 4
10:33 doykyoto: iyo2 beb
10:33 doykyoto: jack e ilangno kabeh maren
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:14:103 (14103|0,14176|1) - ki kok single, lah iki kok double 00:14:249 (14249|2,14249|3) -
10:33 -BANGKE-: padahal pitch'e podo
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:14:688 - tekan kene kok kosong
10:33 doykyoto: okok
10:34 doykyoto: gpp
10:34 -BANGKE-: padahal onok suara gitar 1/4
10:34 -BANGKE-: eh 1/2
10:34 -BANGKE-: layering laaa :VVV
10:34 -BANGKE-: major issue loh
10:34 doykyoto: moso masalah se -- gak prasaan ;v
10:34 -BANGKE-: ojo sampe bolong
10:34 doykyoto: wtf
10:34 doykyoto: yowesla
10:35 -BANGKE-: ndek mania gak oleh sampe onok bolong" selagi jek iso di layering
10:35 doykyoto: okaylah
10:35 -BANGKE-: 00:31:079 - ga di add 1 maneh ta, cymbal
10:36 doykyoto: ngejack lo
10:36 -BANGKE-: 00:34:591 (34591|0,34591|1) - heh :V snare'e ndek kene
10:37 -BANGKE-: gaween kyk ngene ngkok http://puu.sh/oHTu2/aeacb775dc.jpg
10:37 -BANGKE-: seng00:31:079 -
10:37 -BANGKE-: 00:36:932 (36932|0) - ghost
10:37 -BANGKE-: delete
10:37 -BANGKE-: 00:36:786 (36786|0) - pindah ndek 2
10:38 -BANGKE-: 00:37:518 (37518|2,37664|2,37810|2) - ojo di jack
10:38 doykyoto: onok kok bang...
10:38 -BANGKE-: jack'e ilangono kabeh
10:38 -BANGKE-: coba gawe 25% nek gk percoyo
10:38 doykyoto: wes mas...
10:38 -BANGKE-: soale ndek part iki awakmu melok'i kick snare
10:38 -BANGKE-: konsistensi
10:38 -BANGKE-: 00:40:883 (40883|2) - iki yo ghost
10:39 -BANGKE-: 00:40:737 - kene add 1, soale snare'e mok layering double
10:39 doykyoto: wes tak fix sing iki 00:40:737 -
10:39 -BANGKE-: oke
10:39 doykyoto: dadi ngene https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5087710
10:39 doykyoto: terus
10:39 doykyoto: lanjut
10:40 -BANGKE-: 00:53:615 (53615|2,53761|0) - ctrl j, awakmu kakean ndek kanan iki
10:40 -BANGKE-: 00:53:908 (53908|3) - pindah ndek 3
10:40 -BANGKE-: eh 2
10:40 doykyoto: okok
10:41 -BANGKE-: 00:56:688 (56688|3,56688|0) - iki lapo kok double? kan mek hithat
10:41 -BANGKE-: 1 ae
10:41 -BANGKE-: trs delehen ndek 2 ban ga ngejack
10:41 -BANGKE-: 00:57:859 (57859|0,58005|1) - ctrl j, variasi ban ga monoton
10:42 -BANGKE-: 01:02:249 (62249|3) - pindahen 3
10:42 -BANGKE-: ndek 3*
10:42 -BANGKE-: 01:03:713 (63713|3) - iki cymbal kok LN 1? iki cymbal sisan tapi 3 01:01:371 (61371|3,61371|2,61371|0) -
10:43 -BANGKE-: 01:09:859 (69859|1,70005|1,70152|1) - stack 3 stream iki angel di hit, 01:09:859 (69859|1) - pindahen ndek 1
10:43 -BANGKE-: 01:13:079 - add double, cymbal ki
10:44 doykyoto: jembat
10:44 doykyoto: akehe se
10:44 doykyoto: duso opo aku
10:44 -BANGKE-: 01:15:713 - 01:16:005 - 01:16:298 - 01:16:591 - 01:16:883 - 01:17:176 - 01:17:469 - 01:17:761 - missing :VVVV
10:44 doykyoto: lanjutno ae del
10:44 doykyoto: aku ngeroki ibuku diluk
10:45 doykyoto: ngkok ben tak apply
10:45 -BANGKE-: 01:17:908 - tekan sampe 01:19:079 - iki 1/2 ojo di layering 1/4
10:45 -BANGKE-: okeoke
10:45 -BANGKE-: 01:20:103 (80103|0) - LN e deleten
10:45 -BANGKE-: podo kyk seng awalan mau
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:19:957 (79957|2,79957|3) - deleten, aku gk ngerungokno opo" ndek 25% PR
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:20:103 - trs kene tambah 1 note maneh, cymbal
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:20:835 (80835|3) - pindah 3
10:47 -BANGKE-: 01:21:566 (81566|2,81713|3) - ctrl j, terus 01:21:859 (81859|2) - pindah 4
10:48 -BANGKE-: 01:31:371 (91371|1,91371|0,91518|2,91518|0,91518|3,91664|0,91664|3,91810|0,91810|3,91810|1,91957|2,91957|1) - gaween kyk ngene ae http://puu.sh/oHU1i/df69e5bbcf.jpg lebih gampang di hit
10:49 -BANGKE-: 01:33:713 (93713|3,93713|0,93859|3,93859|0,93859|2,94005|0,94005|3,94152|1,94152|0,94152|3,94298|0,94298|2) - > http://puu.sh/oHU4d/f343dfd73e.jpg
10:49 -BANGKE-: 01:36:054 (96054|0,96054|3,96200|1,96200|3,96200|0,96347|3,96347|0,96493|3,96493|0,96493|2,96639|3,96639|0) - gaween podo kyk ^
10:50 -BANGKE-: 01:37:371 (97371|0) - pindah 3, ojo jack 3 ngene 01:37:371 (97371|0,97518|0,97664|0) -
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:10:152 (130152|3) - pindah ndek 3
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:16:444 (136444|0) - delete, ghost
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:26:835 - jek onok suarane, add
10:52 -BANGKE-: 02:29:176 (149176|3,149322|3,149469|3) - http://puu.sh/oHUcQ/d10145f688.jpg flow ne lebih enak
10:53 -BANGKE-: 02:32:835 (152835|3,152835|0,152908|1,152981|2,153054|3,153127|2,153127|0,153200|1,153274|2,153347|3) - iki 1/2 dot,
10:53 -BANGKE-: 02:34:883 (154883|2,154883|0) - gk onok suarane
10:54 -BANGKE-: wes yo samono ae :V lagune kedowoen aras"en aku
dosa apa w ...
semuanya ngomen cymbal
pakya
kutukan terlalu lama nggantung. blame frozencyclone
nih apply gih http://puu.sh/oHWdV/e8411a58d1.osu
-[ AmiShici ]-
-[ AmiShici ]-
yo

mod rede

4k=|1|2|3|4|
Click Me!
[Megummin IN]
  1. 00:06:200 (6200|2,6200|0,6200|1,6200|3) - why you use 4 note while this you use 3 note. i think better dont make LN and normal note is different. so 1 LN + 2 note = 3 note normal = 3 note LN etc. since this is 4k. there have limit colomb for add note. so yeah :v
  2. 00:33:713 (33713|1,34005|1,34591|1,34883|3) - etc. what are you following for this note? maybe better delete it. since i think therehave no sound for note o.o
  3. 00:52:152 (52152|1,52591|2,53322|0,53761|1) - ^
  4. 00:56:835 (56835|1,56835|3,56835|2) - double is enough thought?
  5. 00:59:176 (59176|0,59176|3,59176|1) - ^
  6. 01:01:225 (61225|1,61225|3,61225|0,61371|1,61371|2) - ctrl+G
  7. 01:10:664 (70664|2) - LN should be start from 01:10:591 -

    [doy HD]
  8. 00:34:737 - missing note?
  9. 00:36:054 (36054|3,36932|0) - delete? ga ada sound
  10. 00:37:518 (37518|2,37664|2,37810|2) - jacknya cuman di 00:37:518 (37518|2,37664|2) - jadi lebih baik ini 00:37:810 (37810|2) - di pindah ke 2 atau 4
  11. 00:38:396 (38396|1,39274|1) - ^
  12. 00:40:591 (40591|2) - ke 1 atau 4
  13. 00:40:737 - double
gl :v
[-Star_Lenz-]
583 posts
Joined September 2014
[-Star_Lenz-]
Hi Frozen ^^

Req mod from message

Col :1|2|3|4|

Well kirain map berapa menit -,- ternyata durasinya ampun ~~~ T.T
doy's Battlefield [HD]
00:06:347 - add note , suara persis kek ini 00:07:518 (7518|1) -
00:08:835 (8835|1,8981|0) - ctrl+g & 00:09:127 (9127|1) - move col 1
jika yang di atas di acc 00:09:274 (9274|3) - move col 2
00:09:566 - add note same here 00:09:274 (9274|2,9274|1) - 00:10:737 (10737|3,10737|2) -
00:14:322 - 00:14:396 - add note lah itu masih ada suara dudududuu :v
00:24:786 - add note same here 00:25:225 (25225|2,25225|3) -
00:32:835 (32835|0,32835|3,32981|2,32981|1) - ctrl+g well soalnya itu same pattern suaranya
00:33:420 - add note ngebass
00:33:566 - ^
00:34:591 (34591|0,34591|1) - LN nya ngikut kemana ini ? :/
00:37:518 (37518|2,37664|2,37810|2) - jack ? :v 00:37:810 (37810|2) - move col 4
00:45:127 - add note
00:47:469 - ^
00:49:810 - ^
00:58:298 (58298|1) - move col 3 biar kerasa flow xD
01:01:810 (61810|2,62103|3) - ctrl+g
01:15:859 (75859|0,75859|2,75859|3,76152|3,76152|1,76152|0,76444|3,76444|0,76444|2) - why triple ? T.T
01:27:274 (87274|3,87274|1,87420|1,87420|3,87566|3,87566|1,87713|1,87713|3,87859|0,87859|2,88005|2,88005|0,88152|0,88152|2) - ini jangan kaya gini di HD
01:36:054 (96054|0,96054|3,96200|3,96347|0,96347|3,96493|0,96493|3,96639|0,96639|3) - ngejack terus :3
01:36:347 (96347|0,96347|3) - pindahin ke 2&3
01:55:371 (115371|2) - move cool 1 keep balanced
02:29:469 (149469|3) - move col 3 hindari jack
02:36:200 (156200|1) - del
03:01:664 (181664|1,181664|2) - geser ke kanan 1 col
03:01:810 (181810|2,181810|3) - geser ke kiri 2 col
03:03:200 - 03:03:274 - add note
03:28:737 (208737|0,208737|3) - jadikan note 2&3

Meggumi's New World [IN]
00:30:054 (30054|1) - move col 3
00:34:883 (34883|3) - missing note ._.
00:54:347 (54347|1,54493|0) - ctrl+g
01:29:908 (89908|2,90054|1) - ^
02:04:152 (124152|1,124298|2) - LN ini ngikut apa ? :/ single ajah
02:21:127 (141127|2,141127|3,141274|2) - LN col 3 single col 4
Adot
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Adot
AMPUN MAS. BANYAK BANGET MOD BUAT W
~~~
Adinata28
551 posts
Joined March 2014
Adinata28

doykyoto wrote:

AMPUN MAS. BANYAK BANGET MOD BUAT W
~~~
Ajg.. kemaren ngeluh ga ada yg Mod...
Rekt...
Virtue-
Beatmap Nominator
1,112 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Virtue-
Sumbang star dong :((
Comet_M
89 posts
Joined May 2014
Comet_M
Sorry for late mods ;(
I was pretty busy handling other tasks. Really sorry :(

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Feel free to reject my mods, but please explain me why.

Columns : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

General Checklists


i) BPM & Offsets : √ (Maybe Offset 645?)

ii) Unsnapped things : Notes : √ // Timing points : X - Kiai Unsnapped (All Difficulties), X - Unsnapped SV points (All Difficulties with SV Points, except Reyzra's difficulty)

iii) Song Setups : √

iv) Misc. : △ - Tags exist only in 'Asterisk War [IN]'

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Preperation [EZ]


- All Kiai times: Eh, did you copy every notes from this first kiai time..? 00:52:005 (52005|1,52005|0) ~ 01:20:103 (80103|0) Well, variations in EZ can be pretty irritating, but just copy & pasting every notes may make players bored, and degrade the quality of that difficulty. I suggest to move some notes in other Kiai times.
- Parts after Kiai times : ^^ (Like 01:20:103 (80103|0) ~ 01:28:444 (88444|0) - 03:52:298 (232298|0) ~ 04:00:639 (240639|0))
- 02:44:396 (164396|0) ~ 02:58:591 (178591|0) : Even if it's EZ difficulty, I think this part is too empty. Maybe add some notes, less frequent than NM.

Last Preperation [NM]

- All Kiai times & Parts after Kiai times : Same suggestion as EZ.
- 01:28:444 : Add note to 2
- 01:31:371 (91371|3,91518|2) - Move to 3, 4
- 01:33:713 (93713|1) ~ 01:34:298 (94298|3) - I suggest this pattern : http://puu.sh/oIfKj/074b326e43.png
- 01:48:347 (108347|0) ~ 01:56:249 (116249|0) - Change these notes to LNs like this : http://puu.sh/oIfP4/eeae933578.png - sounds that you're following lasts a bit long.
- 02:33:859 : Add note to 3 - Drumkick in music.

Battle Begins [HD]


- Hitsound volume become 100% (??)
- 00:58:005 (58005|0) - 00:59:176 (59176|3) : Repetition of same pattern. I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgrB/e54f8e546b.png (Don't mind about blue thing). Also can be applied to your similar parts.
- 01:09:713 (69713|0) ~ 01:10:883 (70883|3) - Too empty despite its difficulty. Maybe add some notes every white lines like 4-3-2? (1/4)
- 01:28:444 - Did you intentionally skip this drumkick?
- 02:31:664 (151664|0) - Same as 00:58:005 (58005|0) - 00:59:176 (59176|3) : I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgzZ/78bcdc29ff.png

doy's Battlefield [HD]


- 00:04:444 - Small, but sound exist that you were following. I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgOx/0990fafc1c.png
- 00:14:322 - Drumkicks here, actually. Add note to 1, 2
- 01:13:079 - 'Crash sound' in BGM. Add note to 1, 2
- 01:17:908 (77908|0) - Monotonous stair processing. I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgYT/6c7bf5a922.png
- 02:25:591 ~ 02:25:737 - Some sounds in BGM. Maybe connect them with continuous stairs (like 3-4-3?)
- 03:03:200 - Drumkick here. Add note to 4
- 03:45:274 - Same as 01:13:079, Add note to 3

Asterisk War [IN]


- 00:05:030 (5030|3) - Maybe apply a drumkick. (whistle)
- 00:05:176 (5176|2) - ^^
- 00:10:005 (10005|1) - ^^
- 04:01:810 (241810|2) - Delete : Music ends in blue line. (1/4)

Reyzra's Alternate World [IN]


- 02:57:420 - Add notes & drumkick (Drumkick exist in BGM)

Meggumi's New World [IN]


- 00:56:688 : Add note - Need similar volume of HS compared with below.
- 01:06:054 : ^^
- 01:10:664 (70664|2) - Move to 01:10:591



I, personally suggest that you delete unnecessary or too easy difficulties like EZ or something, or modify some just-copy-and-pasted patterns.

Like I've mentioned above, mere duplication of patterns may decrease the quality of that difficulty.

Please consider about this, and I hope those mod become helpful to you.

Good luck with your beatmap!
Reyzra
739 posts
Joined May 2013
Reyzra

CometicRush wrote:

Sorry for late mods ;(
I was pretty busy handling other tasks. Really sorry :(

----------------------------------------------------------------------------

Feel free to reject my mods, but please explain me why.

Columns : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

General Checklists


i) BPM & Offsets : √ (Maybe Offset 645?)

ii) Unsnapped things : Notes : √ // Timing points : X - Kiai Unsnapped (All Difficulties), X - Unsnapped SV points (All Difficulties with SV Points, except Reyzra's difficulty)

iii) Song Setups : √

iv) Misc. : △ - Tags exist only in 'Asterisk War [IN]'

-------------------------------------



Reyzra's Alternate World [IN]


- 02:57:420 - Add notes & drumkick Applied (Drumkick exist in BGM)


I, personally suggest that you delete unnecessary or too easy difficulties like EZ or something, or modify some just-copy-and-pasted patterns.

Like I've mentioned above, mere duplication of patterns may decrease the quality of that difficulty.

Please consider about this, and I hope those mod become helpful to you.

Good luck with your beatmap!
thanks for the mod ;)

nih froze diff ane upgrade jd 5* lol

http://puu.sh/oIt44/77bd51a39c.rar
Virtue-
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Topic Starter
Virtue-

Reyzra wrote:

thanks for the mod ;)

nih froze diff ane upgrade jd 5* lol

http://puu.sh/oIt44/77bd51a39c.rar
SEDAP COEGGG :V
Adot
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Adot
apdet diff w COEG. jaad beud lu
Virtue-
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Topic Starter
Virtue-

doykyoto wrote:

apdet diff w COEG. jaad beud lu
Udh dot --
-BANGKE-
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-BANGKE-
mod lanjutan

1|2|3|4

Reyzra SHD
  1. 00:02:987 (2987|3,2987|0,2987|1) - nih napa kok 3 hitsound? 1 aja cukup, biar ga terlalu nggghhh gimana geto :^)
  2. 00:02:402 (2402|3,2402|0) - ^ ini juga, 1 aja
  3. 00:14:694 (14694|0,14694|3,14694|2) - ^
  4. 00:15:280 (15280|3,15280|0,15280|1) - ^ dll.
  5. 00:32:987 (32987|1) - pindah ke 1, avoid jack 00:32:694 (32694|1,32841|1,32987|1) -
  6. 00:36:499 (36499|1,36499|0,36499|2,36499|3) - wadooo 4? ini 3 lho sama" snarenya padahal 00:36:206 (36206|2,36206|1,36206|3) -
  7. 00:42:792 (42792|2,42792|3,42792|1,42792|0) - suaranya ga terlalu keras kek 00:41:914 (41914|3,41914|0,41914|2,41914|1) - , jadi pake 2 atau 3 saja cukup, but prefer ke 2 sih menurut gw
  8. 00:51:719 (51719|3) - vocal kan ya, kalo ya harusnya berenti di sini suara vocal nya 00:51:865 - , coba denger pake 25% PR
  9. 00:56:841 (56841|3,56841|0,56841|2) - cymbal kok 3? konsistensi la sama ini 00:54:353 (54353|1,54353|0,54353|2,54353|3) -
  10. 01:06:206 (66206|0,66206|1,66206|3) - same reason ^
  11. 01:08:841 (68841|1,68841|2,68841|0,68841|3) - snare 4 note?
  12. 01:09:426 (69426|3,69572|3,69719|3,69865|3) - wado stack 4, coba" di arrange" lagi aja biar ga stack 4 gini
  13. 01:38:987 (98987|3,98987|1,98987|0,98987|2,99280|0,99280|1,99280|2,99280|3,99572|3,99572|1,99572|0,99572|2) - gw ga ngerti :/ kok 4 smua? di note" sebelumnya snare make 3 note lho, 4 di cymbal
  14. 01:41:328 (101328|3,101328|1,101328|2,101328|0,101621|1,101621|2,101621|0,101621|3,101914|1,101914|2,101914|0,101914|3) - ^
  15. 01:43:670 (103670|2,103670|0,103670|1,103670|3,103963|0,103963|1,103963|3,103963|2,104255|2,104255|1,104255|3,104255|0) - ^
  16. 01:46:011 (106011|3,106011|2,106011|1,106011|0,106304|1,106304|3,106304|0,106304|2,106597|0,106597|3,106597|1,106597|2) - ^
  17. 02:06:645 (126645|2) - nih sama yg tadi, vocal nya end di sini 02:06:792 -
  18. 02:13:816 (133816|2,133816|3,133816|0,133816|1) - snare 4 note?
  19. 02:23:182 (143182|1,143182|2,143182|0,143182|3) - ^
  20. 03:03:206 (183206|2) - nih LN harusnya end di sini 03:04:450 -
  21. 03:06:499 (186499|3,186499|2,186499|0) - 03:11:182 (191182|3,191182|0,191182|1) - 03:15:865 (195865|0,195865|1,195865|3) - yakin 3 note? suaranya ga keras, lagian ini kan rest part, part" sebelumnya udah killer, jadi layer 2 note saja cukup
  22. 03:23:914 (203914|1) - sama kyk yg vocal tadi
  23. 03:29:036 - 03:32:841 - wow sv part, idnt get it, lebih baik di remove atau nanti kena gamplang bn di sv part
  24. 03:38:694 - ^
  25. 03:38:694 (218694|0,218694|1,218694|2,218694|3,219280|2,219280|3,219280|0,219280|1) - snare 4 note? di sini 3 lho 03:29:328 (209328|2,209328|3,209328|0,209914|3,209914|2,209914|0) -

goodluck guys!
Adot
742 posts
Joined August 2015
Adot

Adinata28 wrote:

doykyoto wrote:

AMPUN MAS. BANYAK BANGET MOD BUAT W
~~~
Ajg.. kemaren ngeluh ga ada yg Mod...
Rekt...
AHAHAHA

CometicRush wrote:

doy's Battlefield [HD]


- 00:04:444 - Small, but sound exist that you were following. I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgOx/0990fafc1c.png
- 00:14:322 - Drumkicks here, actually. Add note to 1, 2
- 01:13:079 - 'Crash sound' in BGM. Add note to 1, 2
- 01:17:908 (77908|0) - Monotonous stair processing. I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgYT/6c7bf5a922.png
- 02:25:591 ~ 02:25:737 - Some sounds in BGM. Maybe connect them with continuous stairs (like 3-4-3?)
- 03:03:200 - Drumkick here. Add note to 4
- 03:45:274 - Same as 01:13:079, Add note to 3

thank you
btw.. sori.. emang yg kukasih bukan updateanya diff w AKWOKWOWKOWKW
ini yg baru... gl http://puu.sh/oIW9Y/54574e56a6.osu
ke upgrade dikit
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no one mod my diff?
okay then :v
lenpai
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really busy for the week, i wont be able to mod soooo have some stars :c
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Lenfried- wrote:

really busy for the week, i wont be able to mod soooo have some stars :c
THANK YOUUU >.<
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-BANGKE- wrote:

mod lanjutan

1|2|3|4

Reyzra SHD
  1. 00:02:987 (2987|3,2987|0,2987|1) - nih napa kok 3 hitsound? 1 aja cukup, biar ga terlalu nggghhh gimana geto :^) konsiten dari sininya mas
  2. 00:02:402 (2402|3,2402|0) - ^ ini juga, 1 aja pitch relatif tinggi drpd yg 1 note
  3. 00:14:694 (14694|0,14694|3,14694|2) - ^ ^
  4. 00:15:280 (15280|3,15280|0,15280|1) - ^ dll. ^
  5. 00:32:987 (32987|1) - pindah ke 1, avoid jack 00:32:694 (32694|1,32841|1,32987|1) - aplied
  6. 00:36:499 (36499|1,36499|0,36499|2,36499|3) - wadooo 4? ini 3 lho sama" snarenya padahal 00:36:206 (36206|2,36206|1,36206|3) - lupa delete lol
  7. 00:42:792 (42792|2,42792|3,42792|1,42792|0) - suaranya ga terlalu keras kek 00:41:914 (41914|3,41914|0,41914|2,41914|1) - , jadi pake 2 atau 3 saja cukup, but prefer ke 2 sih menurut gw ok drop ke 3
  8. 00:51:719 (51719|3) - vocal kan ya, kalo ya harusnya berenti di sini suara vocal nya 00:51:865 - , coba denger pake 25% PR ssh klo lepas LN nya mnding samakan aja
  9. 00:56:841 (56841|3,56841|0,56841|2) - cymbal kok 3? konsistensi la sama ini 00:54:353 (54353|1,54353|0,54353|2,54353|3) - applied
  10. 01:06:206 (66206|0,66206|1,66206|3) - same reason ^ aplied
  11. 01:08:841 (68841|1,68841|2,68841|0,68841|3) - snare 4 note?
  12. 01:09:426 (69426|3,69572|3,69719|3,69865|3) - wado stack 4, coba" di arrange" lagi aja biar ga stack 4 gini ok
  13. 01:38:987 (98987|3,98987|1,98987|0,98987|2,99280|0,99280|1,99280|2,99280|3,99572|3,99572|1,99572|0,99572|2) - gw ga ngerti :/ kok 4 smua? di note" sebelumnya snare make 3 note lho, 4 di cymbal ok aplied
  14. 01:41:328 (101328|3,101328|1,101328|2,101328|0,101621|1,101621|2,101621|0,101621|3,101914|1,101914|2,101914|0,101914|3) - ^ ^
  15. 01:43:670 (103670|2,103670|0,103670|1,103670|3,103963|0,103963|1,103963|3,103963|2,104255|2,104255|1,104255|3,104255|0) - ^ ^
  16. 01:46:011 (106011|3,106011|2,106011|1,106011|0,106304|1,106304|3,106304|0,106304|2,106597|0,106597|3,106597|1,106597|2) - ^ ^
  17. 02:06:645 (126645|2) - nih sama yg tadi, vocal nya end di sini 02:06:792 - nay ada sv
  18. 02:13:816 (133816|2,133816|3,133816|0,133816|1) - snare 4 note? deleted
  19. 02:23:182 (143182|1,143182|2,143182|0,143182|3) - ^ ^
  20. 03:03:206 (183206|2) - nih LN harusnya end di sini 03:04:450 - msh ada suara menurut ane tp kecil
  21. 03:06:499 (186499|3,186499|2,186499|0) - 03:11:182 (191182|3,191182|0,191182|1) - 03:15:865 (195865|0,195865|1,195865|3) - yakin 3 note? suaranya ga keras, lagian ini kan rest part, part" sebelumnya udah killer, jadi layer 2 note saja cukup ok
  22. 03:23:914 (203914|1) - sama kyk yg vocal tadi
  23. 03:29:036 - 03:32:841 - wow sv part, idnt get it, lebih baik di remove atau nanti kena gamplang bn di sv part for vatiation antar reff, sama jd boring ntar
  24. 03:38:694 - ^ ^
  25. 03:38:694 (218694|0,218694|1,218694|2,218694|3,219280|2,219280|3,219280|0,219280|1) - snare 4 note? di sini 3 lho 03:29:328 (209328|2,209328|3,209328|0,209914|3,209914|2,209914|0) - deleted

goodluck guys!
thanks for the mod -BANGKE- ;)

Update
http://puu.sh/oJaHz/e30809e3f1.rar
Critical_Star
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wew, sorry for the late delay :o
i will just the mod hardest diff i guess
[box=Reyzra's Alternate World [SHD:1337]]00:04:597 (4597|1) - the LN should stop at 00:04:743 - the long sound stopped at there
00:14:694 (14694|0,14694|2,14694|3) - there isn't need to have triple here, the sound isn't that strong enough to have triple
00:15:280 (15280|0,15280|1,15280|3) - not sure why this is triple..is kinda random here
00:15:719 (15719|0,15719|3,16011|2,16011|0,16304|0,16304|2,16450|1,16450|3) - reason for double? i think they all have the same sound like all these single note here. 00:17:036 (17036|3,17036|0) - here i can see why is double.
00:19:085 (19085|0,19085|2,19085|3) - and so on for all these triple, i think is too much here, better reduce it
00:23:182 (23182|0,23328|1,23475|2) - these guitar sound should end at 00:23:475 -
00:34:889 (34889|1) - remove? since u only focus on loud drum and kick and 00:36:353 - u empty this space too
00:40:743 (40743|3,40743|1,40743|0,40743|2,41036|1,41036|2,41036|3,41036|0,41621|2,41621|0,41621|1,41621|3,41914|1,41914|0,41914|3,41914|2) - quad note doesn't seems good here, unless they have clap + crash sound, make triple should be enough
01:05:475 (65475|1) - delete this better to make a flow here like u did at 01:01:963 -
01:24:060 - double note?
01:25:524 (85524|1,85524|3) - remove a note here since there isn't any loud kick here
01:27:280 (87280|2,87280|0,87280|3,87280|1,87426|0,87426|3,87426|2,87426|1,87572|3,87572|0,87572|1,87572|2,87719|0,87719|3,87719|1,87719|2,87865|3,87865|0,87865|1,87865|2,88011|2,88011|0,88011|3,88011|1,88158|2,88158|1,88158|0,88158|3,88304|0,88304|3,88304|2,88304|1) - i think is just kind of too plain for this pattern, is just feel like spamming it, making them triple note would be nice to variate the pattern here
01:29:036 (89036|2,89036|3,89036|0) - there is no need triple here, is just a normal sound
01:39:280 (99280|0,99280|3,99280|2,99572|2,99572|1,99572|0) - make them double here for consistency at 01:41:328 (101328|3,101328|2,101621|3,101621|1,101914|3,101914|0) -
03:01:085 (181085|2,181085|0,181085|3,181231|3,181231|1,181231|0,181377|3,181377|2,181377|0,181524|0,181524|3,181524|1,181670|0,181670|2,181670|3,181816|0,181816|3,181816|1,181963|0,181963|2,181963|3) - double for kick here is fine
03:32:987 (212987|2) - would prefer to remove this note for better pattern flow
03:37:816 - should be double note here
03:59:475 (239475|0,239475|1,239475|3,239475|2,239621|2,239621|0,239621|3,239621|1,239767|1,239767|3,239767|0,239767|2,239914|0,239914|2,239914|3,239914|1,240060|1,240060|3,240060|0,240060|2,240206|1,240206|0,240206|2,240206|3,240353|2,240353|0,240353|3,240353|1,240499|2,240499|0,240499|1,240499|3) - like before, just my suggestion
Good Luck~ :)
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Critical_Star wrote:

wew, sorry for the late delay :o
i will just the mod hardest diff i guess
[box=Reyzra's Alternate World [SHD:1337]]00:04:597 (4597|1) - the LN should stop at 00:04:743 - the long sound stopped at there
00:14:694 (14694|0,14694|2,14694|3) - there isn't need to have triple here, the sound isn't that strong enough to have triple
00:15:280 (15280|0,15280|1,15280|3) - not sure why this is triple..is kinda random here
00:15:719 (15719|0,15719|3,16011|2,16011|0,16304|0,16304|2,16450|1,16450|3) - reason for double? i think they all have the same sound like all these single note here. 00:17:036 (17036|3,17036|0) - here i can see why is double.
00:19:085 (19085|0,19085|2,19085|3) - and so on for all these triple, i think is too much here, better reduce it
00:23:182 (23182|0,23328|1,23475|2) - these guitar sound should end at 00:23:475 -
00:34:889 (34889|1) - remove? since u only focus on loud drum and kick and 00:36:353 - u empty this space too
00:40:743 (40743|3,40743|1,40743|0,40743|2,41036|1,41036|2,41036|3,41036|0,41621|2,41621|0,41621|1,41621|3,41914|1,41914|0,41914|3,41914|2) - quad note doesn't seems good here, unless they have clap + crash sound, make triple should be enough
01:05:475 (65475|1) - delete this better to make a flow here like u did at 01:01:963 -
01:24:060 - double note?
01:25:524 (85524|1,85524|3) - remove a note here since there isn't any loud kick here
01:27:280 (87280|2,87280|0,87280|3,87280|1,87426|0,87426|3,87426|2,87426|1,87572|3,87572|0,87572|1,87572|2,87719|0,87719|3,87719|1,87719|2,87865|3,87865|0,87865|1,87865|2,88011|2,88011|0,88011|3,88011|1,88158|2,88158|1,88158|0,88158|3,88304|0,88304|3,88304|2,88304|1) - i think is just kind of too plain for this pattern, is just feel like spamming it, making them triple note would be nice to variate the pattern here
01:29:036 (89036|2,89036|3,89036|0) - there is no need triple here, is just a normal sound
01:39:280 (99280|0,99280|3,99280|2,99572|2,99572|1,99572|0) - make them double here for consistency at 01:41:328 (101328|3,101328|2,101621|3,101621|1,101914|3,101914|0) -
03:01:085 (181085|2,181085|0,181085|3,181231|3,181231|1,181231|0,181377|3,181377|2,181377|0,181524|0,181524|3,181524|1,181670|0,181670|2,181670|3,181816|0,181816|3,181816|1,181963|0,181963|2,181963|3) - double for kick here is fine
03:32:987 (212987|2) - would prefer to remove this note for better pattern flow
03:37:816 - should be double note here
03:59:475 (239475|0,239475|1,239475|3,239475|2,239621|2,239621|0,239621|3,239621|1,239767|1,239767|3,239767|0,239767|2,239914|0,239914|2,239914|3,239914|1,240060|1,240060|3,240060|0,240060|2,240206|1,240206|0,240206|2,240206|3,240353|2,240353|0,240353|3,240353|1,240499|2,240499|0,240499|1,240499|3) - like before, just my suggestion

Good Luck~ :)why don't u mod all of the diff? ._.
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frozencyclone wrote:

Critical_Star wrote:

wew, sorry for the late delay :o
i will just the mod hardest diff i guess
[box=Reyzra's Alternate World [SHD:1337]]00:04:597 (4597|1) - the LN should stop at 00:04:743 - the long sound stopped at there
00:14:694 (14694|0,14694|2,14694|3) - there isn't need to have triple here, the sound isn't that strong enough to have triple
00:15:280 (15280|0,15280|1,15280|3) - not sure why this is triple..is kinda random here
00:15:719 (15719|0,15719|3,16011|2,16011|0,16304|0,16304|2,16450|1,16450|3) - reason for double? i think they all have the same sound like all these single note here. 00:17:036 (17036|3,17036|0) - here i can see why is double.
00:19:085 (19085|0,19085|2,19085|3) - and so on for all these triple, i think is too much here, better reduce it
00:23:182 (23182|0,23328|1,23475|2) - these guitar sound should end at 00:23:475 -
00:34:889 (34889|1) - remove? since u only focus on loud drum and kick and 00:36:353 - u empty this space too
00:40:743 (40743|3,40743|1,40743|0,40743|2,41036|1,41036|2,41036|3,41036|0,41621|2,41621|0,41621|1,41621|3,41914|1,41914|0,41914|3,41914|2) - quad note doesn't seems good here, unless they have clap + crash sound, make triple should be enough
01:05:475 (65475|1) - delete this better to make a flow here like u did at 01:01:963 -
01:24:060 - double note?
01:25:524 (85524|1,85524|3) - remove a note here since there isn't any loud kick here
01:27:280 (87280|2,87280|0,87280|3,87280|1,87426|0,87426|3,87426|2,87426|1,87572|3,87572|0,87572|1,87572|2,87719|0,87719|3,87719|1,87719|2,87865|3,87865|0,87865|1,87865|2,88011|2,88011|0,88011|3,88011|1,88158|2,88158|1,88158|0,88158|3,88304|0,88304|3,88304|2,88304|1) - i think is just kind of too plain for this pattern, is just feel like spamming it, making them triple note would be nice to variate the pattern here
01:29:036 (89036|2,89036|3,89036|0) - there is no need triple here, is just a normal sound
01:39:280 (99280|0,99280|3,99280|2,99572|2,99572|1,99572|0) - make them double here for consistency at 01:41:328 (101328|3,101328|2,101621|3,101621|1,101914|3,101914|0) -
03:01:085 (181085|2,181085|0,181085|3,181231|3,181231|1,181231|0,181377|3,181377|2,181377|0,181524|0,181524|3,181524|1,181670|0,181670|2,181670|3,181816|0,181816|3,181816|1,181963|0,181963|2,181963|3) - double for kick here is fine
03:32:987 (212987|2) - would prefer to remove this note for better pattern flow
03:37:816 - should be double note here
03:59:475 (239475|0,239475|1,239475|3,239475|2,239621|2,239621|0,239621|3,239621|1,239767|1,239767|3,239767|0,239767|2,239914|0,239914|2,239914|3,239914|1,240060|1,240060|3,240060|0,240060|2,240206|1,240206|0,240206|2,240206|3,240353|2,240353|0,240353|3,240353|1,240499|2,240499|0,240499|1,240499|3) - like before, just my suggestion

Good Luck~ :)why don't u mod all of the diff? ._.;w;w sorry my time ran out, maybe i will try to mod other diff some other time ... >:(
Adinata28
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7 Diff * 4 Minute is kinda long... orz
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Adinata28 wrote:

7 Diff * 4 Minute is kinda long... orz
protes aja njink.. mod aja sini
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Adinata28 wrote:

7 Diff * 4 Minute is kinda long... orz
mod coeg, jgn comment mulu :v
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frozencyclone wrote:

why don't u mod all of the diff? ._.
Omg, this is completely a 'kerja rodi'.

Critical_Star wrote:

;w;w sorry my time ran out, maybe i will try to mod other diff some other time ... >:(
Iktf *hugs my star-nya.

Adinata28 wrote:

7 Diff * 4 Minute is kinda long... orz
Agree with this tbh.

Placeholder, will mod this asap.
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MOD STATUS: COMPLETE

Difficulties yet to mod:

~STRICTLY NO KUDOSU IF MOD IS STILL INCOMPLETE~

Hi~ :) Mod request via PM
I guess I'm too late for a guest difficulty for this map LOL


[General]
Don't forget to check AiMod~! for every difficulty. It can show a lot of issues, such as unsnapped kiai sections and a difference in metadata ( aside from the title of course :p . Actually it only shows unsnapped kiai times, but do note that there are some difficulties that have unsnapped inheriting sections.

Missing kiai sections for doy's HD+ also.

[EZ]
01:10:889 - 01:15:280 - the sounds at the 1/2 snap (red lines) can be heard very well than some 1/1 snap(white lines) notes, which makes it confusing to play. For example, you may remove the note located at 01:11:475 - since it's not that audible enough compared to the 1/2 snap sounds. The problem is, this will increase star difficulty. So if following the 1/2 snap sounds makes the map more harder than the Easy difficulty cap, I recommend mapping the sounds that can be heard at 01:11:182 - , and the cymbal sounds that can be heard in this part. ( Atleast put a note on those cymbal parts )

02:25:816 - 02:30:206 - same issue as above

03:43:085 - 03:47:475 - same issue as above

01:17:036 (77036|1,77328|2,77621|3) - you may ctrl+g these notes so that 01:16:743 (76743|0) - can be emphasized as a cymbal sound.

01:48:353 - 01:56:255 - I recommend making these notes sliders so it can be a slider lift challenge for beginners :D

02:37:816 (157816|3) - personally, I wouldn't jack this with 02:37:524 (157524|3) - since the similarity based on their sounds is almost not audible, since 02:37:524 (157524|3) - plays a cymbal sound. So I recommend moving this note somewhere else.

02:41:328 (161328|1) - you may jack this with 02:41:036 (161036|0) - so that it's the same pattern with 02:35:767 - with the same sound

02:40:743 (160743|3) - you may jack this with 02:40:450 (160450|2) - , reason is stated above.

02:41:914 (161914|3) - you may jack this with 02:41:621 (161621|2) - , reason is stated above.

02:44:402 - in my opinion, these slider parts can bore beginners, so instead you need to follow the 1/1 drum sounds. But of course, star difficulty is a problem, so we need to remove some notes in some other parts. I recommend removing some notes in 00:14:694 - 00:22:011 - . Personally, I would make it a break time part, but if you don't want to, you can map the sounds that can be heard at 00:17:036 - , 00:17:475 - and 00:17:914 - (sorry, I don't know what sound it is xD). This would also make sense, because a quiet section of the song is more mapped than the climatic part of the song, which is 02:44:402 - 03:03:280 - .

[NM]
00:05:182 (5182|1) - up to you, but you can mvoe this note to 4 to make a "blast" effect for the cymbals and as a good effect to start up the part. It would cost you a jack though, but I don' think that's a problem.

00:14:109 (14109|2) - make it a slider, just like in your EZ difficulty to map the drum sounds that are supposed to be streams.

00:32:548 - here's a suggestion for this part.
Link: [ http://puu.sh/oLc6c/2d21ba640a.jpg ]
there are different reasons:
-> from 00:31:963 - , in column 3, there will be 3 notes stacked on each other, which is kinda unusual for the whole map.
-> so that the 1/2 snap notes will be distributed more properly to each column (specifically 2 number of notes per each column, except for the third, which makes it 3)
-> of course there's a downside for this, not sure if it's your pattern, but you put a space between two notes like the notes in 00:35:767 (35767|3,35914|0) - . Maybe it's just coincidence :p

01:08:548 - uncertain why this have 2 notes. If it's for the cymbal, I suggest removing it because other cymbal sounds in the kiai time doesn't have 2 notes for it. // I should suggest that all cymbal sounds in the kiai parts should have 2 notes xD.

01:10:889 - 01:15:133 - the 1/2 drum sounds are kinda audible imo. Plus the other 1/1 sound are barely audible, specifically 01:11:475 - . I suggest mapping them and turning this part into something like these:
1. 01:10:889 - http://puu.sh/oLcGc/f4cf4e693b.jpg
2. 01:11:914 - 3. http://puu.sh/oLcJs/7a978f811d.jpg
4. 01:12:938 - 5. http://puu.sh/oLcKO/5b97e7e108.jpg
01:13:963 - http://puu.sh/oLcMu/cf68aa53b2.jpg
01:14:841 - http://puu.sh/oLcNs/df157638a7.jpg
Note: same situation with 03:43:085 - 03:47:328 - , and 02:25:816 - 02:30:060 -

01:16:743 - if you don't mind a jack, you can make a different pattern starting here, like a [1][4] [2][3] or a [1][3] [2][4]. Same situation with 02:31:670 - 02:32:548 - .

01:45:572 (105572|1,105572|3) - ctrl+h, it can be pattern like the same with 01:47:767 - ( just imagine having a note at column 2 that time xD )

01:48:353 - extend these sliders by a 1/1 snap, for example you can extend 01:48:353 (108353|0) - until 01:48:353 (108353|0) - and 01:49:231 (109231|2) - until 01:49:816 - .

01:50:694 - 01:56:255 - why not make these sliders also?

02:11:621 - i don't think this sound is the same drum sound as 02:11:328 - . not sure though

02:33:572 (153572|3) - I recommend deleting this note and making the other single notes have a double note. It's to be consistent with your pattern. Do note that this part doesn't have the same pattern with 01:17:914 - 01:19:085 - ( in other words, the other part only has one note for that sound, while the second one has 2 notes. ) Also at the last chorus, this same exact sound part only has single notes. Think about it

02:35:036 - 02:44:402 - add notes for the cymbals, it's to build up density for the upcoming climatic part, specifically it starts at 02:44:402 -

02:44:402 - 03:00:645 - this part is the climatic part of the song imo. I suggest putting a note in all 1/1 snaps atleast, so it feels "difficult" ( well maybe it IS difficult xD well it's okay to buff this part's difficulty, since it is climatic after all. )

General Mod: you've missed out a lot of sliders, since they have a strong beat and kinda needs to be mapped with 2 sounds to differentiate it's sound strength compared to the other notes. Maybe it's your pattern to make it have 1 note on these kiai parts, but note that there are cymbal sounds in the kiai parts that have 2 notes. So up to you if you will make it 2 notes or 1 note only.

[HD]
00:05:182 - same suggestion with NM difficulty. If you don't mind a jack, you can put 00:05:182 (5182|0) - to 4 ( yeah, i don't think you mind in this difficulty xD, so it's now a recommendation. )

00:22:304 - great slider pattern here. Fits the vocals :D

01:10:889 - 01:10:889 - don't forget to map the 1/2 drum sound snaps. They're actually as audible as the lesser drum sounds you were mapping. You also forgot to map the cymbals. For example, 01:12:499 - have a really audible drum sound.

01:11:475 - I recommend this 1/1 snap only gets 1 note, because it's not heavy as the other 1/1 tick, OR the 1/2 drum sound snaps.
Same situation with 01:12:645 - and 01:13:816 -
Note that the two mods above should also be applied to 02:25:816 - 02:30:206 - , and 03:43:085 - 03:47:475 - .

01:16:743 - again, you can change your pattern here into a [1][4] [2][3] or [1][3] [2][4], just like my recommendation in NM difficulty.

01:19:085 - add a note at 2. It is a strong sound after all (cymbal). Same with 03:51:280 - . 02:34:011 - has 2 notes after all.

01:39:719 - these jacks really fit the sound well :o

01:52:450 (112450|1) - extend this slider to 01:52:889 -

04:01:816 - even without a sound here, you can add a note to put a better stop for these streams ( idk, maybe something's just wrong with my fingers xD )

[doy's HD+]
00:09:566 - add a note here. I'm pretty sure you're mapping this sound with 2 notes. If you're preventing jacks, then I don't think you have to, since it's a hard difficulty after all ( with a + :p )
00:28:005 - ^
00:33:274 - ^
00:35:176 - ^
00:35:322 - ^
00:35:908 - ^
00:36:639 - ^
00:36:786 - ^
00:37:518 - ^
00:38:249 - ^
00:38:835 - ^
00:38:981 - ^
00:39:859 - ^
00:40:591 - ^
00:41:322 - ^
00:42:200 - ^
00:42:347 - ^
00:39:127 - ^, and 00:39:274 - should only have 1 note because a drum sound can be barely heard here.
00:34:444 - ^, and 00:34:591 - should only have 1 note.

00:33:566 - don't forget the 2 notes for this part. There's a sound here, same sound with 00:32:981 - .

00:33:859 - shouldn't this have 3 notes? same beat with 00:36:200 - and 00:34:737 - and other 1/1 snaps with the same sound.
00:34:152 - ^
00:35:469 - ^
00:37:371 - ^
00:39:713 - ^
00:41:908 - ^
00:35:761 - ^, because it's a cymbal sound.
00:38:103 - ^
00:40:444 - ^

01:11:469 - no strong drum sound. note that in this part ( specifically 01:10:883 - 01:15:274 - ), there are 1/1 drum sound snaps that don't have a strong beat after all, like the first timestamp I have mentioned.. Better watch out for that. Same situation with 02:25:810 - 02:30:200 - , and 03:43:371 - 03:47:469 - .

01:11:761 - inconsistent pattern with 01:12:932 - and 01:14:103 - .

01:21:859 - this part shouldn't have 2 notes because it's not as strong as the drum sound like in 01:22:152 - .
01:26:542 - ^

01:53:030 (113030|0,113908|2) - these sliders are 1/2 short. Extend 01:53:030 (113030|0) - to 01:53:615 - and 01:53:908 (113908|2) - to 01:54:493 - .

02:06:932 - kiai section missing!!!! ;oooo and what is the inheriting section between 01:01:298 - and 01:01:371 - doing there

03:24:200 - missing kiai section again :<

03:28:444 - them jacks at column 1. Rearrange them to avoid that much stack in a column, I think I missed out for other stuff like these, so better watch out for them.

03:36:347 - remove a note? I thought you aren't mapping this sound with 3 notes in the chorus parts.

General Mod: there are some parts that are inconsistent with others ( based from sound. ) For example: 01:11:761 - this sound has 3 notes, but with other parts that has the same sound like 01:12:347 - , it only has 2 notes. Better watch out for things like that.

[IN]
00:13:524 - 00:14:402 - ctrl+h the notes in these section. The main reason is for 00:13:524 (13524|1,13524|0) - to be moved to the other hand. It's for hand balance.

00:40:450 - too many jack at column 1, which didn't happen at other parts. Please rearrange.

00:52:889 - another triple jack. This is really avoidable, like putting 00:53:182 (53182|3) - to 1. It seems there are a lot of triple jacks.

General Mod: there are jacks in the songs where it could be avoided, especially in smooth flows in the map. If triple or more jacks are avoidable, please do so, because it can really strain the hand. Patterns like in 01:38:987 - are exempted of course. I already gave an example which can be found above the mods.

03:19:694 (199694|2) - slider end is wrong. Look at 03:22:011 - .

[Meggumi's SC]
00:05:182 - if there is a way, please move 00:05:182 (5182|2) - to column 2. It's to differentiate the note pattern from 00:05:036 - so players will know that a different sound will play, which is the cymbal sound.

00:09:133 - this is the one that should have 3 notes, not 00:09:280 -

00:39:865 (39865|1) - move to 4. For balance, and the same pattern with 00:37:524 - . It's to avoid triple jack also.

00:42:792 - add a note at 4. It has a cymbal sound after all.

00:51:426 - you can add sliders starting here following the vocals, just like in 02:06:353 - .

General Mod: personally, I felt the 2nd kiai section a bit weird, because you mapped the vocals with sliders. I recommend doing it at the last kiai section instead to have that " finishing touch ". ( just suggestion dw. ) or if you want you can map vocals on all kiai sections :D

[Reyzra's SHD]
00:05:914 - if you're mapping the drum sounds, you should remove a note. But if you're following that lesser sound ( which i don't know what it is ) then you should keep. Take note that parts like 00:08:255 - only have 1 note, so i'm not really sure what you're following :<

01:23:767 - missing note. Better watch out for other parts like these.

01:27:719 - I think you could map a stream here. But I like these quadbursts more xD

03:29:036 - these sliders I love it

also, http://puu.sh/oLgou/2c3d5995da.jpg ( idk who that is lol )

P.S: nice difficulty here
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Dellvangel wrote:

SPOILER

frozencyclone wrote:

why don't u mod all of the diff? ._.
Omg, this is completely a 'kerja rodi'.

Critical_Star wrote:

;w;w sorry my time ran out, maybe i will try to mod other diff some other time ... >:(
Iktf *hugs my star-nya.

Adinata28 wrote:

7 Diff * 4 Minute is kinda long... orz
Agree with this tbh.

Placeholder, will mod this asap.
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[IN]
00:56:987 - sampai 01:00:792 - re-arrange pls, pattern nya teralu monoton, serasa bosen aja gitu pas di testplay.
01:02:548 (62548|3) - move to col 1 for balance.
01:06:353 - sampai 01:09:426 - re-arrange juga, terlalu monoton, jangan takut2 lah ngemap pake jack di lagu ginian.
01:11:036 (71036|2,71328|2) - sound nya keras, harusnya masiing2 itu 2 note.
01:12:645 (72645|1,72645|0) - hapus salah satu, no drum sound here.
01:20:402 (80402|1,80402|2,80548|3,80548|2,80548|0) - sama 01:20:987 (80987|1,80987|2,81133|2,81133|3,81133|0) - pattennya mirip, kesannya 'de ja vu' (boring) pas di testplay, coba gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5104032 .
01:40:889 (100889|2,100889|0,101036|0,101036|2,101182|0,101182|2,101328|2,101328|0) - lel, bisa2 dirimu lah re-arrange part ini, soalnya rombak dikit pasti ujung2 nya jadi rombak banyak, kasian hammer nya sadis banget di main itu.
02:11:914 - sampai 02:15:719 - re-arrange juga, patternnya terlalu simple, terasa bosan di testplay.
02:21:280 - sampai 02:24:353 - ^ sama, terlalu simple patternnya.
03:19:694 (199694|2) - wrong snap, liat akhir LN nya kan harusnya berhenti di 03:22:011 - bukan di 03:22:036 - .
03:29:182 - sampai 03:32:987 - terlalu simple, re-arrange.
03:38:548 - sampai 03:41:621 - ^ sama.
03:43:231 (223231|2,223524|2) - masing2 harusnya 2 note.
03:44:841 (224841|1,224841|0) - sound nya ga keras, 1 note aja cukup.

Sekedar saran, coba liat yg punya sakura gimana dia variasiin note.
Sorry kalo mod ini rada gimana gitu, bingung mau mod apaan dari pattern mu.
Good luck!
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