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Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World [OsuMania]
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ur audio is 320 kbps, osu doesnt allow that format
re-dl 192 kbps audio here, right click on bar and save as
wew 4 minutes
to all diffs: 03:19:601 (199601|3) - seems like this is a 1/12 not a 1/16
please confirm, im not too sure
00:04:838 (4838|0,4838|3,4838|2,4985|2,4985|0,4985|3) - these two are pretty instantaneous, whilst 00:05:131 (5131|3,5131|0,5131|2) - is a more drawn out crash. id suggest 00:04:838 (4838|3,4838|0,4838|2,4985|3,4985|2,4985|0) - to be doubles on one hand and the last one be a triple
00:04:692 (4692|1) - r u sure this is following something, cuz i wouldnt take the end of a pull synth to be worthy of a note
00:05:716 (5716|2) - move to 4
00:05:863 (5863|0,6009|2) - crtl-g to show continuity with pattern before
00:06:302 (6302|1,6448|2) - crtl-g
if you did everything above you should see something forming.
notice how those highlighted notes stack each other? yeah do that for this section, there are inconsistencies evrywhr. better to have to get to your feet and think about stuff than to have me keep "crtl-g "ng and "move to 4 "ing
00:09:814 - 00:10:107 - thr are synths here why miss them out
00:12:155 - theres still synths
00:12:302 - and above - understandable if you decide not to follow the synth here doe
00:13:473 (13473|0,13473|1,13473|3,13619|0,13619|3,13619|1,13765|0,13765|1,13765|3,13912|3,13912|2,13912|0) - maybe me but these look better if you were to jumble up their positions tbh
00:13:985 (13985|1) - theres no bass beat here
00:14:643 (14643|0,14936|3,15229|1,15521|3,15668|0,15960|2,16253|0,16399|3,16692|1) - the notes are fine, i have issue with the LNs doe. i tried thinking that they were following the vocals but nope 00:14:936 (14936|3) - proved me wrong becuz of the shift at 00:15:082 _ 00:15:521 (15521|3,15668|0) - are actually one long vocal line, 00:15:960 (15960|2,16253|0) - are also one long vocal line, so on so forth. im sure you know what to do here, please change this
00:22:253 (22253|1,23424|3) - nice one
00:24:448 (24448|2,24594|2) - remember what i said about consistency? yeah please do that for this section too
00:30:741 (30741|2,30887|2,31034|2,31180|2) - please why do this
00:32:643 (32643|2) - double
00:32:936 (32936|2,32936|3,32936|0,33082|3,33082|2,33082|0,33229|3,33229|0,33229|2) - no like seriously doe i think jumbling them up looks nicer
00:34:546 - 00:34:847 - oh so youre not following vocals then
00:33:668 (33668|3,33668|2) - then whats this
00:34:253 (34253|0,34253|1,34399|3,34399|2) - really weird design choice to have these two doubles not stack each other in anyway; like even the bass beats and the synth sound alike why not have them stack
00:35:131 (35131|0,35131|2,35277|3,35277|1) - same as above, this time only being the bass beats
00:36:594 (36594|1,36594|2,36741|1,36741|0) - later on you stack these. why so inconsistent?
00:34:546 - 00:36:009 - 00:36:887 - 00:37:912 - 00:38:351 - 00:39:229 - 00:40:838 - 00:41:716 - id rather you at least have a note here, theres like a shhh synth sound that goes on for 4 1/2 ticks throughout this section, example 00:34:253 (34253|1,34253|0,34399|3,34399|2,34692|1,34692|0,34692|2). without the notes this section just feels hollow in a sense, since youre mainly just layering to the bass and claps
00:56:351 (56351|3,56497|3,56643|3,56790|3) - remember i was talking about being consistent? yeah do this for the chorus too
00:56:643 (56643|2,56643|3,56643|0) - r u sure you want this to be a triple
00:56:936 - hi hat sound is present here so note here plis
00:59:570 (59570|1,59716|3) - crtl-g, remember before you had stacks right after the triples? 00:57:668 (57668|2,57668|0,57668|1,57814|2) - 00:58:253 (58253|2,58253|3,58253|1,58399|1) - 00:58:838 (58838|2,58838|0,58838|1,58985|2) -
00:57:082 (57082|2,57082|0,57082|3,57229|1) - same thing too
01:00:887 (60887|2,60887|3,61034|0,61034|1,61180|3,61180|2) - arent these supposed to be triples
01:09:741 (69741|1,69814|0,69887|2,69960|1,70034|3,70107|1,70180|2,70253|0,70326|1,70399|3) - looks so disconnected omg try to have the notes at least be related somehow
01:10:985 - 01:11:277 - 01:12:448 - why ignore these drum beats
01:11:863 - 01:13:034 - 01:14:204 - what happened to these crashes
01:14:936 (74936|1) - why is this a note you arent following the hihats here are you
01:15:521 (75521|3,75521|1,75668|2,75814|3,75814|1,75960|2,76107|1,76107|3,76253|2,76399|1,76399|3,76546|2) - you have no idea how mindblocky this pattern is for me i hate you so much
01:18:155 (78155|2,78302|2,78448|2,78594|2) - im sure you know how imbalanced this is.
01:19:985 (79985|1) - no drum/hihat delete plis
01:20:351 (80351|2,80497|2,80497|1,80643|2) - remember what i said about consistency? yeah ill stop reminding you
01:24:741 - 01:25:034 - 01:27:082 - theres still synths here
01:27:229 (87229|0,87229|1,87375|3,87375|2,87521|0,87521|1,87668|3,87668|2,87814|1,87814|0) - can you compare this to 00:13:473 (13473|0,13473|1,13473|3,13619|0,13619|3,13619|1,13765|0,13765|1,13765|3,13912|3,13912|2,13912|0) - and tell me whether or not this is consistent
01:38:643 (98643|2) - SVs are horrendous; they inhibit reading of this section. id be really mad if i played this.
1) they are really biased to the left hand
2) the anchors are too much
01:43:619 (103619|0,103619|1) - this one has a snare and a crash
01:43:765 (103765|2,103765|1,103765|3,103912|0,103912|1) - lmao this is a mistake is it
01:48:229 (108229|2) - double, there still a snare
01:47:716 (107716|3,107716|0,107790|1,107790|2,107863|3,107863|0,107936|2,107936|1,108009|3,108009|0,108082|1,108082|2,108155|0,108155|3) - can you like have a normal jumpthrill rather than a split one esp. after all those stacks
01:48:302 (108302|1,109180|3) - these are like the same pitch so what are you doing then
01:48:302 (108302|1,109180|3,110643|0,111521|2) - ^^^
01:52:985 (112985|1,113863|2) - ^^^
01:55:326 (115326|0,116204|2) - ^^
same thing about second chorus, consistency
02:11:863 - hihat here
02:24:741 - 02:24:887 - rather have these be doubles and remove 02:24:668 (144668|2,144814|1) - becuz predominant beat is bass not the synth here
02:24:668 (144668|2,144741|3,144814|1,144887|2,144960|0,145034|2,145107|1,145180|3,145253|2,145326|0) - copy paster
02:26:351 (146351|2,146351|3,146351|0) - r u sure you want this to be a triple
02:26:790 - 02:27:960 - 02:29:131 - what happened to these crashes
02:28:692 (148692|1,148692|2,148692|3) - im not sure if theres a snare here making this a triple i think not
02:29:863 (149863|2) - you werent following hihats here get this out of here
02:30:448 (150448|0,150448|2,150594|1,150741|0,150741|2,150887|1,151034|2,151034|0,151180|1,151326|2,151326|0) - copy pasting makes life easy doesnt it? ill not edit this part, just refer to the above suggestions
02:34:838 (154838|3,154912|2,154985|3) - bass beats not present
02:34:985 (154985|0,155863|3,157473|2,158058|3,158643|0) - what are these following? they seem so arbitrary and out of place, esp when you have 1/2 LN streams and shit. please consider removing them, it clears this section up and makes the LNs more bearable to play. you only have 4 columns to work with, dont limit yourself by having too many LNs
02:38:643 (158643|1) - 02:43:326 (163326|2) - LN here
02:46:692 (166692|2) - move to 4, i dont like your transition into the next section being a 3 note stack 02:46:546 (166546|2,166692|2,166838|2) -
02:49:326 (169326|1,169473|0,169619|1) - flip this, transition issues 02:49:034 (169034|1,169180|1,169326|1) -
02:51:082 (171082|1,171229|2,171375|1) - flip this, just my take but i dont like having LNs end stacking
02:53:570 (173570|0,173716|0) - sadly is this unavoidable
02:56:058 (176058|3,176204|3) - you could just ignore me if you think im being a whiny bitch about the stacks
02:58:399 (178399|1,178546|1,178692|1) - same thing
03:02:058 (182058|2,182058|0,182131|1,182131|3,182204|2,182204|0,182277|3,182277|1,182351|0,182351|2,182424|1,182424|3) - i dont like this at all, split thrills are the most mindblocky type of patterns you can ever do
same thing as last chorus, pretty obvious by now youve been copy pasting the whole chuck over and over so im not gonna bother to redo my mod; you can check through the last part yourself
04:00:009 (240009|1,240009|0,240082|2,240155|1,240155|3,240229|0,240302|1,240302|2,240375|3,240448|0,240448|2) - rather you have these be just double stacks, same thing about dominant beat thing above
04:01:765 - theres a sound here
clocking in at 1 hour 30 minutes now
00:14:058 (14058|3,14131|2,14204|3,14277|2) - i wont really recommend this
00:14:643 - to 00:22:838 - i dont understand how you decide layer doubles/triples here, please review this section.
00:34:838 (34838|2) - i dont get why this has a note, assuming youre layering to the background shhh synth sound
00:37:912 - 00:40:838 - 00:41:716 - note here, becuz of above mentioned synth
00:59:277 - theres a faint bass beat here; not sure if you wish to follow it here
01:10:107 (70107|2,70107|0,70180|1,70180|3,70253|0,70253|2,70326|1,70326|3,70399|0,70399|2,70473|3,70473|1,70546|0,70546|2) - i thought you were better than this
01:22:253 (82253|0,82253|3,82253|2) - some LNs have doubles cuz of the snare but some others 01:20:497 (80497|2,80497|3) - dont. why doe? is it cuz of the LN before for the one i listed out?
01:27:229 (87229|0,87229|2,87229|3,87375|3,87375|0,87375|1,87521|0,87521|2,87521|3,87668|3,87668|0,87668|1) - your SVs make these more mindblocky than ever; please vary the chords
01:28:399 (88399|0,88546|0,88692|0,88838|0,88985|0,89131|0,89277|0,89424|0,89570|0) - im sure you can make better streams than this
01:29:716 - 01:32:058 - 01:34:399 - 01:36:741 - theres the electric guitar sound here
00:51:375 (51375|1,51521|2,51668|3) - you followed vocals here so why not 01:38:643 - here
01:47:716 (107716|3,107716|1,107790|0,107790|2,107863|1,107863|3,107936|2,107936|0,108009|3,108009|1) - leading into LNs? ew why?
02:11:131 (131131|1,131424|1) - 02:20:497 (140497|2,140790|2) - why arent these doubles
btw i love the variation between choruses, makes playing this 4 minute tv size much more bearable
02:25:034 (145034|3,145034|1,145107|2,145107|0,145180|1,145180|3,145253|2,145253|0,145326|1,145326|3) - no really i want to know where you got these shit thrill ideas from, if its blastix remind me to kill myself
02:29:863 - 02:30:302 - theres that synth sound here
02:33:960 (153960|1,153960|0,154034|2,154034|3,154107|0,154107|1,154180|3,154180|2) - yes thats the way
02:35:277 (155277|3,155424|1,155570|3,155716|1,155863|3,156009|1) - these dont play well, the distinction provided in the music with the snares are ignored here, and the repetitive nature of these patterns make these really mindblocky, esp when they wear on only two fingers.
02:36:887 (156887|2,156887|0,157180|1,157180|3) - little justification for these to be doubles, also makes this section awkward due to the missing LN at 02:37:034 -
02:37:326 (157326|2) - if you listen carefully the synth resets at 02:37:473 -
02:37:619 (157619|0,157765|2,157912|0,158058|2) - same thing about coming in sets of 4
02:40:253 (160253|3,160399|1,160546|3,160692|2,160838|3) - are a little better, but column 4 is still too over the top. im sure you can think up with some variation
02:41:570 (161570|0,161570|2,161863|1,161863|3) - same thing as above
02:44:351 (164351|0) - the LN amplifies this awkwardness, try playing this section and youll see. tbh i really dont recommend you have the pattern continue on here, you have to remember we are playing with 4 columns, not 7. becuz of this limitation you can see here 02:46:253 (166253|1,166546|3) - that you seemingly ignored the synths at 02:46:399 - 02:46:692 - because you literally dont have enough space to spare. id suggest turning this section into a simple 1/2 stream, following the snares/crashes in the music.
02:49:034(169034|3,169180|2,169326|3,169473|1,169619|3,169765|1,169912|3,170058|1,170204|3,170351|1,170497|3,170643|1,170790|3) this is really really awkward, like even more awkward than anything. you have to hold down one finger, then have the other one keep pressing and holding down at regular intervals.
02:54:009 (174009|0,174155|1,174302|0,174448|1,174594|0,174741|1,174887|0,175034|1,175180|0,175326|1,175473|0,175619|1) - do i have to explain to you why this is awkward?
03:01:180 (181180|3,181180|2,181326|3,181326|2,181473|1,181473|0,181619|1,181619|0,181765|3,181765|2,181912|3,181912|2) - why not meld these together like
03:03:155 (183155|2) - ha starts at 03:03:229 -
03:03:155 (183155|2) - LN should really end at 03:04:398 - because thats when the singer takes in another breath
03:15:814 (195814|3,197277|0) - why not end a 1/4 tick earlier, leads into this 03:19:582 (199582|2,199619|1) - better
pretty smart move to use SVs as another way to differentiate the chorus sets from each other; although i feel as if this shouldnt be the end chorus since theyre pretty easy to hit. i wouldve made the SV chorus the second one and the second chorus the third one because of density, but yeah up to you
03:42:302 (222302|1,222302|3,222375|2,222375|0,222448|1,222448|3,222521|2,222521|0) - hahaha please dont do this im sure you can fix this by now
04:00:594 (240594|3,240668|2,240741|3,240887|3,240887|2,241034|3,241107|2,241180|3,241253|2,241326|3,241473|3,241473|2,241619|3) - same suggestion as above, just do whatever i did above but invert it
diff curve between meggumi's diff and reyzra's diff is too damn small, meggumi's diff just looks like an over inflated version of reyzra's one. id suggest not including meggumi's one for rank, unless you can show me that theres a conceivable style/chart difference between the two (excluding the SVs of course)
clocking in at 2 hours 30 minutes now
00:33:375 (33375|1) - to 3, 00:33:521 (33521|2) - to 1, 00:33:521 (33521|3) - to 3 00:32:936 (32936|1,33082|1,33229|1,33375|1) - isnt too fun, and becuz of 00:34:253 (34253|2,34253|3,34399|2,34399|3) - pattern consistency
00:34:838 (34838|3) - to 3, im sure 00:34:692 (34692|3,34838|3,34985|3) - isnt intentional
00:37:473 (37473|2) - to 1, 00:37:619 (37619|1) - to 4, same thing as above consistency thing
wow your chorus looks almost the same as reyzra's one; just with more notes on 1/2 tick
01:09:082 (69082|2,69082|1,69229|0) - flip this, 01:09:229 (69229|0,69375|0,69521|0,69668|0) - isnt fun to have it lead into the next pattern
01:11:424 (71424|3) - theres like a pretty loud snare here you seemingly ignored
01:19:034 (79034|1,79034|0,79034|3,79180|1,79180|3,79180|2,79326|0,79326|1,79326|3,79473|1,79473|0,79473|2) - why chu ignore the bass beats here? the jumpthrill should begin here
01:42:009 (102009|0,102009|1,102155|2,102155|1) - did pattern consistency suddenly die on you
01:42:448 (102448|2,102448|3,102594|1,102594|2) - no but seriously doe
01:42:887 (102887|2,102887|1,103034|0,103034|1) - what
01:43:326 (103326|0,103326|1,103473|2,103473|1) - happened to it
01:46:692 (106692|3,106692|2,106838|2,106838|1) - 01:47:131 (107131|2,107131|1,107277|1,107277|0) - same thing as above
00:51:375 - you didnt follow the vocals here but 02:06:302 (126302|0,126448|1,126594|2) - why here doe
02:22:107 (142107|3,142253|2) - you followed the vocals wrongly here
02:23:424 (143424|2,143424|1,143570|3,143716|3,143716|2,143716|0,143863|1,144009|2,144009|0) - what happened to the vocals here then
02:23:570 (143570|2,154107|1,154399|2,154546|3) - please dont force patterns into each other, just having 02:34:546 (154546|0,154546|1,154619|2,154692|0,154692|1,154765|2,154838|0,154838|1) - be jumpthrills should suffice.
02:37:326 (157326|0,157473|0) - you ignored the repeated synth here at 02:37:326 -
02:36:887 (156887|0,157034|3,157180|3) - theres an obvious shift upwards in pitch you didnt follow with LNs
02:39:229 (159229|1,159375|2,159375|0,159521|1,159668|3) - id understand if you chose to not follow the synths here with LNs like you did here 02:38:351 (158351|0,158497|1,158643|3,158790|2) - but i guess that some people would be like "omg inconsistent"
02:39:668 (159668|3,159668|1,159814|1) - same repeated synth
02:41:570 (161570|0,161716|2,161863|2) - same rise in pitch
02:43:765 (163765|0,163912|1,164058|2,164204|0) - you followed the lowering synth here, rather you not since you didnt to that at 02:39:229 (159229|1,159375|2,159375|0,159521|1,159668|3) -
02:46:838 (166838|3,166838|0,166838|1) - 02:49:180 (169180|1,169180|0,169180|3) - 02:51:521 (171521|0,171521|2,171521|3) - 02:53:716 (173716|0,173716|3,173716|1) - 02:56:204 (176204|0,176204|1,176204|2) - 02:58:546 (178546|2,178546|0,178546|3) - want to accent the crash with a quad or smth
03:19:601 (199601|3) - seems like this is a 1/12 not a 1/16
idk whether or not youre intentionally ignoring the crashes cuz you can have quads there but to each their own i guess
03:51:375 (231375|0,231375|2,231375|1,231521|3,231521|2,231521|0,231668|3,231668|0,231668|1) - same jumpthrill thing as above
03:59:277 (239277|2) - to 4, 03:58:985 (238985|2,239131|2,239277|2,239424|2,239570|2,239716|2) - yeah no thanks
04:00:302 (240302|2,240302|3,240375|1,240375|0,240448|3,240448|2,240521|0,240521|1) - same thing with the bzzz synth, end at 04:00:302 - so jumpthrill should end there
3 hours yay fun times am i righttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
hope my mod helped, better keep an eye on the diff gap between reyzra's and meggumi's diff @frozen
good luck with rank vv
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ur audio is 320 kbps, osu doesnt allow that format
re-dl 192 kbps audio here, right click on bar and save as
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i like how you have a difficulty indicator for 4 diffs but for the rest you somehow forgot to put anything
also Battle Begins, mind your SVA
also Battle Begins, mind your SVA
wew 4 minutes
to all diffs: 03:19:601 (199601|3) - seems like this is a 1/12 not a 1/16
please confirm, im not too sure
ur diff
00:04:107 (4107|2,4107|0,4253|1,4253|3,4399|2,4399|0) - maybe you could try varying the patterns here a bit? maybe flip this thing or smth00:04:838 (4838|0,4838|3,4838|2,4985|2,4985|0,4985|3) - these two are pretty instantaneous, whilst 00:05:131 (5131|3,5131|0,5131|2) - is a more drawn out crash. id suggest 00:04:838 (4838|3,4838|0,4838|2,4985|3,4985|2,4985|0) - to be doubles on one hand and the last one be a triple
00:04:692 (4692|1) - r u sure this is following something, cuz i wouldnt take the end of a pull synth to be worthy of a note
00:05:716 (5716|2) - move to 4
00:05:863 (5863|0,6009|2) - crtl-g to show continuity with pattern before
00:06:302 (6302|1,6448|2) - crtl-g
if you did everything above you should see something forming.
notice how those highlighted notes stack each other? yeah do that for this section, there are inconsistencies evrywhr. better to have to get to your feet and think about stuff than to have me keep "crtl-g "ng and "move to 4 "ing
00:09:814 - 00:10:107 - thr are synths here why miss them out
00:12:155 - theres still synths
00:12:302 - and above - understandable if you decide not to follow the synth here doe
00:13:473 (13473|0,13473|1,13473|3,13619|0,13619|3,13619|1,13765|0,13765|1,13765|3,13912|3,13912|2,13912|0) - maybe me but these look better if you were to jumble up their positions tbh
00:13:985 (13985|1) - theres no bass beat here
00:14:643 (14643|0,14936|3,15229|1,15521|3,15668|0,15960|2,16253|0,16399|3,16692|1) - the notes are fine, i have issue with the LNs doe. i tried thinking that they were following the vocals but nope 00:14:936 (14936|3) - proved me wrong becuz of the shift at 00:15:082 _ 00:15:521 (15521|3,15668|0) - are actually one long vocal line, 00:15:960 (15960|2,16253|0) - are also one long vocal line, so on so forth. im sure you know what to do here, please change this
00:22:253 (22253|1,23424|3) - nice one
00:24:448 (24448|2,24594|2) - remember what i said about consistency? yeah please do that for this section too
00:30:741 (30741|2,30887|2,31034|2,31180|2) - please why do this
00:32:643 (32643|2) - double
00:32:936 (32936|2,32936|3,32936|0,33082|3,33082|2,33082|0,33229|3,33229|0,33229|2) - no like seriously doe i think jumbling them up looks nicer
00:34:546 - 00:34:847 - oh so youre not following vocals then
00:33:668 (33668|3,33668|2) - then whats this
00:34:253 (34253|0,34253|1,34399|3,34399|2) - really weird design choice to have these two doubles not stack each other in anyway; like even the bass beats and the synth sound alike why not have them stack
00:35:131 (35131|0,35131|2,35277|3,35277|1) - same as above, this time only being the bass beats
00:36:594 (36594|1,36594|2,36741|1,36741|0) - later on you stack these. why so inconsistent?
00:34:546 - 00:36:009 - 00:36:887 - 00:37:912 - 00:38:351 - 00:39:229 - 00:40:838 - 00:41:716 - id rather you at least have a note here, theres like a shhh synth sound that goes on for 4 1/2 ticks throughout this section, example 00:34:253 (34253|1,34253|0,34399|3,34399|2,34692|1,34692|0,34692|2). without the notes this section just feels hollow in a sense, since youre mainly just layering to the bass and claps
00:56:351 (56351|3,56497|3,56643|3,56790|3) - remember i was talking about being consistent? yeah do this for the chorus too
00:56:643 (56643|2,56643|3,56643|0) - r u sure you want this to be a triple
00:56:936 - hi hat sound is present here so note here plis
00:59:570 (59570|1,59716|3) - crtl-g, remember before you had stacks right after the triples? 00:57:668 (57668|2,57668|0,57668|1,57814|2) - 00:58:253 (58253|2,58253|3,58253|1,58399|1) - 00:58:838 (58838|2,58838|0,58838|1,58985|2) -
00:57:082 (57082|2,57082|0,57082|3,57229|1) - same thing too
01:00:887 (60887|2,60887|3,61034|0,61034|1,61180|3,61180|2) - arent these supposed to be triples
01:09:741 (69741|1,69814|0,69887|2,69960|1,70034|3,70107|1,70180|2,70253|0,70326|1,70399|3) - looks so disconnected omg try to have the notes at least be related somehow
01:10:985 - 01:11:277 - 01:12:448 - why ignore these drum beats
01:11:863 - 01:13:034 - 01:14:204 - what happened to these crashes
01:14:936 (74936|1) - why is this a note you arent following the hihats here are you
01:15:521 (75521|3,75521|1,75668|2,75814|3,75814|1,75960|2,76107|1,76107|3,76253|2,76399|1,76399|3,76546|2) - you have no idea how mindblocky this pattern is for me i hate you so much
01:18:155 (78155|2,78302|2,78448|2,78594|2) - im sure you know how imbalanced this is.
01:19:985 (79985|1) - no drum/hihat delete plis
01:20:351 (80351|2,80497|2,80497|1,80643|2) - remember what i said about consistency? yeah ill stop reminding you
01:24:741 - 01:25:034 - 01:27:082 - theres still synths here
01:27:229 (87229|0,87229|1,87375|3,87375|2,87521|0,87521|1,87668|3,87668|2,87814|1,87814|0) - can you compare this to 00:13:473 (13473|0,13473|1,13473|3,13619|0,13619|3,13619|1,13765|0,13765|1,13765|3,13912|3,13912|2,13912|0) - and tell me whether or not this is consistent
do this for above
reason why 01:27:814 - 01:27:960 - 01:28:107 - are doubles is becuz of density; layering it to be triples like the rest wouldnt be too appropriate for the difficulty level of your chart
01:28:399 - can be a triple doe your call
reason why i started the stream at 01:28:399 - is cuz of major player thing - if a section has a more obvious drum/bass beat then ill layer to that first; if a section has clean hihats on 1/4 without anyth else id layer to that
will not speak about consistency again; sure you know what to clean up by nowreason why 01:27:814 - 01:27:960 - 01:28:107 - are doubles is becuz of density; layering it to be triples like the rest wouldnt be too appropriate for the difficulty level of your chart
01:28:399 - can be a triple doe your call
reason why i started the stream at 01:28:399 - is cuz of major player thing - if a section has a more obvious drum/bass beat then ill layer to that first; if a section has clean hihats on 1/4 without anyth else id layer to that
01:38:643 (98643|2) - SVs are horrendous; they inhibit reading of this section. id be really mad if i played this.
these are all the timing points you need, trust me on that one
remember to snap the green ticks.
either that, or you could ask reyzra to help you out, hes really smacking good at SVs
01:39:668 (99668|1,99668|0,99814|1,99814|0,100107|1,100107|0,100253|0,100253|1,100546|0,100546|1,100692|0,100692|1) - pretty neat idea, but there are pitfalls:either that, or you could ask reyzra to help you out, hes really smacking good at SVs
1) they are really biased to the left hand
2) the anchors are too much
try this
notice how the highest number of stacked notes remains at 3; try to keep it that way.
01:40:838 (100838|3,100838|2) - 01:41:277 (101277|2,101277|3) - 01:42:302 (102302|2,102302|1) - triple, theres a snare (i noticed ive been saying clap oops)01:43:619 (103619|0,103619|1) - this one has a snare and a crash
01:43:765 (103765|2,103765|1,103765|3,103912|0,103912|1) - lmao this is a mistake is it
01:48:229 (108229|2) - double, there still a snare
01:47:716 (107716|3,107716|0,107790|1,107790|2,107863|3,107863|0,107936|2,107936|1,108009|3,108009|0,108082|1,108082|2,108155|0,108155|3) - can you like have a normal jumpthrill rather than a split one esp. after all those stacks
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also please make the highlighted note a double thx
01:48:302 (108302|1,109180|3) - these are like the same pitch so what are you doing then
01:48:302 (108302|1,109180|3,110643|0,111521|2) - ^^^
01:52:985 (112985|1,113863|2) - ^^^
01:55:326 (115326|0,116204|2) - ^^
same thing about second chorus, consistency
02:11:863 - hihat here
02:24:741 - 02:24:887 - rather have these be doubles and remove 02:24:668 (144668|2,144814|1) - becuz predominant beat is bass not the synth here
02:24:668 (144668|2,144741|3,144814|1,144887|2,144960|0,145034|2,145107|1,145180|3,145253|2,145326|0) - copy paster
02:26:351 (146351|2,146351|3,146351|0) - r u sure you want this to be a triple
02:26:790 - 02:27:960 - 02:29:131 - what happened to these crashes
02:28:692 (148692|1,148692|2,148692|3) - im not sure if theres a snare here making this a triple i think not
02:29:863 (149863|2) - you werent following hihats here get this out of here
02:30:448 (150448|0,150448|2,150594|1,150741|0,150741|2,150887|1,151034|2,151034|0,151180|1,151326|2,151326|0) - copy pasting makes life easy doesnt it? ill not edit this part, just refer to the above suggestions
02:34:838 (154838|3,154912|2,154985|3) - bass beats not present
02:34:985 (154985|0,155863|3,157473|2,158058|3,158643|0) - what are these following? they seem so arbitrary and out of place, esp when you have 1/2 LN streams and shit. please consider removing them, it clears this section up and makes the LNs more bearable to play. you only have 4 columns to work with, dont limit yourself by having too many LNs
02:38:643 (158643|1) - 02:43:326 (163326|2) - LN here
02:46:692 (166692|2) - move to 4, i dont like your transition into the next section being a 3 note stack 02:46:546 (166546|2,166692|2,166838|2) -
02:49:326 (169326|1,169473|0,169619|1) - flip this, transition issues 02:49:034 (169034|1,169180|1,169326|1) -
02:51:082 (171082|1,171229|2,171375|1) - flip this, just my take but i dont like having LNs end stacking
02:53:570 (173570|0,173716|0) - sadly is this unavoidable
02:56:058 (176058|3,176204|3) - you could just ignore me if you think im being a whiny bitch about the stacks
02:58:399 (178399|1,178546|1,178692|1) - same thing
03:02:058 (182058|2,182058|0,182131|1,182131|3,182204|2,182204|0,182277|3,182277|1,182351|0,182351|2,182424|1,182424|3) - i dont like this at all, split thrills are the most mindblocky type of patterns you can ever do
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transition between the jumpthrills at 03:03:229 (183229|3) - can be a single, just cuz of variation and transition. also 03:03:229 - has a note becuz of styleeeeeee jk you can add a note there for the touche breath of air the singer takes at that moment
03:19:546 (199546|0) - absolutely non-existentsame thing as last chorus, pretty obvious by now youve been copy pasting the whole chuck over and over so im not gonna bother to redo my mod; you can check through the last part yourself
04:00:009 (240009|1,240009|0,240082|2,240155|1,240155|3,240229|0,240302|1,240302|2,240375|3,240448|0,240448|2) - rather you have these be just double stacks, same thing about dominant beat thing above
04:01:765 - theres a sound here
clocking in at 1 hour 30 minutes now
reyzra's one
i like this map; reyzra absolutely knows what hes doing00:14:058 (14058|3,14131|2,14204|3,14277|2) - i wont really recommend this
00:14:643 - to 00:22:838 - i dont understand how you decide layer doubles/triples here, please review this section.
00:34:838 (34838|2) - i dont get why this has a note, assuming youre layering to the background shhh synth sound
00:37:912 - 00:40:838 - 00:41:716 - note here, becuz of above mentioned synth
00:59:277 - theres a faint bass beat here; not sure if you wish to follow it here
01:10:107 (70107|2,70107|0,70180|1,70180|3,70253|0,70253|2,70326|1,70326|3,70399|0,70399|2,70473|3,70473|1,70546|0,70546|2) - i thought you were better than this
01:22:253 (82253|0,82253|3,82253|2) - some LNs have doubles cuz of the snare but some others 01:20:497 (80497|2,80497|3) - dont. why doe? is it cuz of the LN before for the one i listed out?
01:27:229 (87229|0,87229|2,87229|3,87375|3,87375|0,87375|1,87521|0,87521|2,87521|3,87668|3,87668|0,87668|1) - your SVs make these more mindblocky than ever; please vary the chords
01:28:399 (88399|0,88546|0,88692|0,88838|0,88985|0,89131|0,89277|0,89424|0,89570|0) - im sure you can make better streams than this
01:29:716 - 01:32:058 - 01:34:399 - 01:36:741 - theres the electric guitar sound here
00:51:375 (51375|1,51521|2,51668|3) - you followed vocals here so why not 01:38:643 - here
01:47:716 (107716|3,107716|1,107790|0,107790|2,107863|1,107863|3,107936|2,107936|0,108009|3,108009|1) - leading into LNs? ew why?
do this please
nothing wrong with having 01:48:229 (108229|1) - be a single to fit with your patterning
02:11:131 (131131|1,131424|1) - 02:20:497 (140497|2,140790|2) - why arent these doubles
btw i love the variation between choruses, makes playing this 4 minute tv size much more bearable
02:25:034 (145034|3,145034|1,145107|2,145107|0,145180|1,145180|3,145253|2,145253|0,145326|1,145326|3) - no really i want to know where you got these shit thrill ideas from, if its blastix remind me to kill myself
02:29:863 - 02:30:302 - theres that synth sound here
02:33:960 (153960|1,153960|0,154034|2,154034|3,154107|0,154107|1,154180|3,154180|2) - yes thats the way
02:35:277 (155277|3,155424|1,155570|3,155716|1,155863|3,156009|1) - these dont play well, the distinction provided in the music with the snares are ignored here, and the repetitive nature of these patterns make these really mindblocky, esp when they wear on only two fingers.
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having them be in sets of 4 at least makes these much more bearable in a sense of reading. i deleted all the side notes, you probably can fill them in where theres snares. try not to have notes for every alternate LN, it makes things really dense
02:36:887 (156887|2,156887|0,157180|1,157180|3) - little justification for these to be doubles, also makes this section awkward due to the missing LN at 02:37:034 -
02:37:326 (157326|2) - if you listen carefully the synth resets at 02:37:473 -
02:37:619 (157619|0,157765|2,157912|0,158058|2) - same thing about coming in sets of 4
02:40:253 (160253|3,160399|1,160546|3,160692|2,160838|3) - are a little better, but column 4 is still too over the top. im sure you can think up with some variation
02:41:570 (161570|0,161570|2,161863|1,161863|3) - same thing as above
02:44:351 (164351|0) - the LN amplifies this awkwardness, try playing this section and youll see. tbh i really dont recommend you have the pattern continue on here, you have to remember we are playing with 4 columns, not 7. becuz of this limitation you can see here 02:46:253 (166253|1,166546|3) - that you seemingly ignored the synths at 02:46:399 - 02:46:692 - because you literally dont have enough space to spare. id suggest turning this section into a simple 1/2 stream, following the snares/crashes in the music.
02:49:034(169034|3,169180|2,169326|3,169473|1,169619|3,169765|1,169912|3,170058|1,170204|3,170351|1,170497|3,170643|1,170790|3) this is really really awkward, like even more awkward than anything. you have to hold down one finger, then have the other one keep pressing and holding down at regular intervals.
02:54:009 (174009|0,174155|1,174302|0,174448|1,174594|0,174741|1,174887|0,175034|1,175180|0,175326|1,175473|0,175619|1) - do i have to explain to you why this is awkward?
03:01:180 (181180|3,181180|2,181326|3,181326|2,181473|1,181473|0,181619|1,181619|0,181765|3,181765|2,181912|3,181912|2) - why not meld these together like
03:03:155 (183155|2) - ha starts at 03:03:229 -
03:03:155 (183155|2) - LN should really end at 03:04:398 - because thats when the singer takes in another breath
03:15:814 (195814|3,197277|0) - why not end a 1/4 tick earlier, leads into this 03:19:582 (199582|2,199619|1) - better
pretty smart move to use SVs as another way to differentiate the chorus sets from each other; although i feel as if this shouldnt be the end chorus since theyre pretty easy to hit. i wouldve made the SV chorus the second one and the second chorus the third one because of density, but yeah up to you
03:42:302 (222302|1,222302|3,222375|2,222375|0,222448|1,222448|3,222521|2,222521|0) - hahaha please dont do this im sure you can fix this by now
04:00:594 (240594|3,240668|2,240741|3,240887|3,240887|2,241034|3,241107|2,241180|3,241253|2,241326|3,241473|3,241473|2,241619|3) - same suggestion as above, just do whatever i did above but invert it
diff curve between meggumi's diff and reyzra's diff is too damn small, meggumi's diff just looks like an over inflated version of reyzra's one. id suggest not including meggumi's one for rank, unless you can show me that theres a conceivable style/chart difference between the two (excluding the SVs of course)
clocking in at 2 hours 30 minutes now
meggumi's one
dense LN play isnt my taste and style but ill try to look past it00:33:375 (33375|1) - to 3, 00:33:521 (33521|2) - to 1, 00:33:521 (33521|3) - to 3 00:32:936 (32936|1,33082|1,33229|1,33375|1) - isnt too fun, and becuz of 00:34:253 (34253|2,34253|3,34399|2,34399|3) - pattern consistency
00:34:838 (34838|3) - to 3, im sure 00:34:692 (34692|3,34838|3,34985|3) - isnt intentional
00:37:473 (37473|2) - to 1, 00:37:619 (37619|1) - to 4, same thing as above consistency thing
wow your chorus looks almost the same as reyzra's one; just with more notes on 1/2 tick
01:09:082 (69082|2,69082|1,69229|0) - flip this, 01:09:229 (69229|0,69375|0,69521|0,69668|0) - isnt fun to have it lead into the next pattern
01:11:424 (71424|3) - theres like a pretty loud snare here you seemingly ignored
01:19:034 (79034|1,79034|0,79034|3,79180|1,79180|3,79180|2,79326|0,79326|1,79326|3,79473|1,79473|0,79473|2) - why chu ignore the bass beats here? the jumpthrill should begin here
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jumpthrill transits at 01:19:546 - because of pattern variation and becuz the word world is mentioned there so
01:28:107 (88107|3,88107|2,88180|0,88180|1,88253|2,88253|3,88326|1,88326|0) - the zzzzzz synth sound stops at 01:28:107 - so end the jumpthrill there01:42:009 (102009|0,102009|1,102155|2,102155|1) - did pattern consistency suddenly die on you
01:42:448 (102448|2,102448|3,102594|1,102594|2) - no but seriously doe
01:42:887 (102887|2,102887|1,103034|0,103034|1) - what
01:43:326 (103326|0,103326|1,103473|2,103473|1) - happened to it
01:46:692 (106692|3,106692|2,106838|2,106838|1) - 01:47:131 (107131|2,107131|1,107277|1,107277|0) - same thing as above
00:51:375 - you didnt follow the vocals here but 02:06:302 (126302|0,126448|1,126594|2) - why here doe
02:22:107 (142107|3,142253|2) - you followed the vocals wrongly here
02:23:424 (143424|2,143424|1,143570|3,143716|3,143716|2,143716|0,143863|1,144009|2,144009|0) - what happened to the vocals here then
02:23:570 (143570|2,154107|1,154399|2,154546|3) - please dont force patterns into each other, just having 02:34:546 (154546|0,154546|1,154619|2,154692|0,154692|1,154765|2,154838|0,154838|1) - be jumpthrills should suffice.
02:37:326 (157326|0,157473|0) - you ignored the repeated synth here at 02:37:326 -
02:36:887 (156887|0,157034|3,157180|3) - theres an obvious shift upwards in pitch you didnt follow with LNs
02:39:229 (159229|1,159375|2,159375|0,159521|1,159668|3) - id understand if you chose to not follow the synths here with LNs like you did here 02:38:351 (158351|0,158497|1,158643|3,158790|2) - but i guess that some people would be like "omg inconsistent"
02:39:668 (159668|3,159668|1,159814|1) - same repeated synth
02:41:570 (161570|0,161716|2,161863|2) - same rise in pitch
02:43:765 (163765|0,163912|1,164058|2,164204|0) - you followed the lowering synth here, rather you not since you didnt to that at 02:39:229 (159229|1,159375|2,159375|0,159521|1,159668|3) -
02:46:838 (166838|3,166838|0,166838|1) - 02:49:180 (169180|1,169180|0,169180|3) - 02:51:521 (171521|0,171521|2,171521|3) - 02:53:716 (173716|0,173716|3,173716|1) - 02:56:204 (176204|0,176204|1,176204|2) - 02:58:546 (178546|2,178546|0,178546|3) - want to accent the crash with a quad or smth
03:19:601 (199601|3) - seems like this is a 1/12 not a 1/16
idk whether or not youre intentionally ignoring the crashes cuz you can have quads there but to each their own i guess
03:51:375 (231375|0,231375|2,231375|1,231521|3,231521|2,231521|0,231668|3,231668|0,231668|1) - same jumpthrill thing as above
03:59:277 (239277|2) - to 4, 03:58:985 (238985|2,239131|2,239277|2,239424|2,239570|2,239716|2) - yeah no thanks
04:00:302 (240302|2,240302|3,240375|1,240375|0,240448|3,240448|2,240521|0,240521|1) - same thing with the bzzz synth, end at 04:00:302 - so jumpthrill should end there
3 hours yay fun times am i righttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
to frozen
19/30, 63.3% map is -ok- in a sense, i wouldnt want to play it for so long doe. main things are with YOUR PATTERN CONSISTENCY plis be more consistent in your usage of patterns and esp. transitions between them
to reyzra
24/30, 80% urs is the best amongst the ones i scrutinized, really appreciate the effort in making the map interesting throughout, even though i didnt agree on the usage of the differences. one word though: please dont abuse the [13][24] splitthrill pattern, those patterns are the hardest to hit out of the possible sets of jumpthrills, and they usually are pretty easy to mindblock on.
to meggumi
20/30, 66.6% there isnt anything inherently wrong with your chart, but in the context of other diffs (esp. reyzra's one) it kinda turns irrelevant imo. chart generally is solid in terms of patterning and layering, although i dont really agree with the use of LNs in your chart. i really dont know if there is anything that stands out to me in your chart tbh, maybe its just me but i just feel as if i was playing a harder vers of reyzra's one. maybe thats good, since the diff gap is less of a problem, but when it comes to quality this chart kinda just suffers because of that fact.
hope my mod helped, better keep an eye on the diff gap between reyzra's and meggumi's diff @frozen
good luck with rank vv
Topic Starter
yokai-BANGKE- wrote:
3 diff 4k icon I? gg
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thanks for the mod AbraxosAbraxos wrote:
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ur audio is 320 kbps, osu doesnt allow that format
re-dl 192 kbps audio here, right click on bar and save asnamesi like how you have a difficulty indicator for 4 diffs but for the rest you somehow forgot to put anything
also Battle Begins, mind your SVA
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to all diffs: 03:19:601 (199601|3) - seems like this is a 1/12 not a 1/16 when i take a look once again its just missplaced the note i guess, but it is 1/12 alright
please confirm, im not too surereyzra's one
i like this map; reyzra absolutely knows what hes doing
00:14:058 (14058|3,14131|2,14204|3,14277|2) - i wont really recommend this shizo- said the same things too so gonna applied this
00:14:643 - to 00:22:838 - i dont understand how you decide layer doubles/triples here, please review this section. ok, i added 1 note for this 1st note, you cant figure it out? i use double for making difference with guitar and the other sound, i use double for guitar, triple for tom sound that looks like high sound
00:34:838 (34838|2) - i dont get why this has a note, assuming youre layering to the background shhh synth sound i hope you counting for vocal too there
00:37:912 - 00:40:838 - 00:41:716 - note here, becuz of above mentioned synth applied at 00:37:912 , but not the other two, this is intentionally to making gap between 4 notes, so it doesnt need to be hard to press
00:59:277 - theres a faint bass beat here; not sure if you wish to follow it here there is already note here.. what are you trying to say here?
01:10:107 (70107|2,70107|0,70180|1,70180|3,70253|0,70253|2,70326|1,70326|3,70399|0,70399|2,70473|3,70473|1,70546|0,70546|2) - i thought you were better than this nah, i dont think this is good pattern for synth stream, your pattern that you suggest is more like fit drum roll stream ([12][34])
01:22:253 (82253|0,82253|3,82253|2) - some LNs have doubles cuz of the snare but some others 01:20:497 (80497|2,80497|3) - dont. why doe? is it cuz of the LN before for the one i listed out? because it end of the tempo just like this 00:41:863 , and also the pitch si kinda high there so i added it for three
01:27:229 (87229|0,87229|2,87229|3,87375|3,87375|0,87375|1,87521|0,87521|2,87521|3,87668|3,87668|0,87668|1) - your SVs make these more mindblocky than ever; please vary them not for now, at least not yet..., just want adding this for as a challenge, this is intentionally as you can see lol
01:28:399 (88399|0,88546|0,88692|0,88838|0,88985|0,89131|0,89277|0,89424|0,89570|0) - im sure you can make better streams than this hmm good but i applied at other point instead but not this part
01:29:716 - 01:32:058 - 01:34:399 - 01:36:741 - theres the electric guitar sound here this is intentionally, to make player can take a breathe for taking massive jack afterward 01:39:668
00:51:375 (51375|1,51521|2,51668|3) - you followed vocals here so why not 01:38:643 - here nope, this is different, i added it only before chorus , so it can set mood before go into chorus
01:47:716 (107716|3,107716|1,107790|0,107790|2,107863|1,107863|3,107936|2,107936|0,108009|3,108009|1) - leading into LNs? ew why? huh? i think there is nothing wrong with that, your suggestion is makes [12][34] again, im sure this wrong to medo this please
02:11:131 (131131|1,131424|1) - 02:20:497 (140497|2,140790|2) - why arent these doubles doubles in red line which means snare, im sure you heard of it very clearly that
btw i love the variation between choruses, makes playing this 4 minute tv size much more bearable thats just how m mapping style work is~
02:25:034 (145034|3,145034|1,145107|2,145107|0,145180|1,145180|3,145253|2,145253|0,145326|1,145326|3) - no really i want to know where you got these shit thrill ideas from, if its blastix remind me to kill myself lol okay i follow this for 2nd part chorus for variation since the old one is inverted ver from 1st chorus
02:29:863 - 02:30:302 - theres that synth sound here intentionally, i make a gap so there is space for keeping the balance of your hands
02:33:960 (153960|1,153960|0,154034|2,154034|3,154107|0,154107|1,154180|3,154180|2) - yes thats the way
02:35:277 (155277|3,155424|1,155570|3,155716|1,155863|3,156009|1) - these dont play well, the distinction provided in the music with the snares are ignored here, and the repetitive nature of these patterns make these really mindblocky, esp when they wear on only two fingers.img
02:36:887 (156887|2,156887|0,157180|1,157180|3) - little justification for these to be doubles, also makes this section awkward due to the missing LN at 02:37:034 - lol this is intentional because of the pitch there is high so i add it doubles
02:37:326 (157326|2) - if you listen carefully the synth resets at 02:37:473 - ok
02:37:619 (157619|0,157765|2,157912|0,158058|2) - same thing about coming in sets of 4 ^
02:40:253 (160253|3,160399|1,160546|3,160692|2,160838|3) - are a little better, but column 4 is still too over the top. im sure you can think up with some variation ^
02:41:570 (161570|0,161570|2,161863|1,161863|3) - same thing as above ^
02:44:351 (164351|0) - the LN amplifies this awkwardness, try playing this section and youll see. tbh i really dont recommend you have the pattern continue on here, you have to remember we are playing with 4 columns, not 7. becuz of this limitation you can see here 02:46:253 (166253|1,166546|3) - that you seemingly ignored the synths at 02:46:399 - 02:46:692 - because you literally dont have enough space to spare. id suggest turning this section into a simple 1/2 stream, following the snares/crashes in the music.
02:49:034(169034|3,169180|2,169326|3,169473|1,169619|3,169765|1,169912|3,170058|1,170204|3,170351|1,170497|3,170643|1,170790|3) this is really really awkward, like even more awkward than anything. you have to hold down one finger, then have the other one keep pressing and holding down at regular intervals. not really, i asked player to tesplay it which rank around 700 and also 1k rank, it seems they have no prob with that and said makes sense
02:54:009 (174009|0,174155|1,174302|0,174448|1,174594|0,174741|1,174887|0,175034|1,175180|0,175326|1,175473|0,175619|1) - do i have to explain to you why this is awkward? do i need to explain what is pitch to you?
03:01:180 (181180|3,181180|2,181326|3,181326|2,181473|1,181473|0,181619|1,181619|0,181765|3,181765|2,181912|3,181912|2) - why not meld these together like hmm good idea! i take this~
03:03:155 (183155|2) - ha starts at 03:03:229 - i bet you missheard for echo sound there
03:03:155 (183155|2) - LN should really end at 03:04:398 - because thats when the singer takes in another breath sry im not following the vocal but the synth
03:15:814 (195814|3,197277|0) - why not end a 1/4 tick earlier, leads into this 03:19:582 (199582|2,199619|1) - better ok
pretty smart move to use SVs as another way to differentiate the chorus sets from each other; although i feel as if this shouldnt be the end chorus since theyre pretty easy to hit. i wouldve made the SV chorus the second one and the second chorus the third one because of density, but yeah up to you
03:42:302 (222302|1,222302|3,222375|2,222375|0,222448|1,222448|3,222521|2,222521|0) - hahaha please dont do this im sure you can fix this by now ok i inverted it from 2nd chorus
04:00:594 (240594|3,240668|2,240741|3,240887|3,240887|2,241034|3,241107|2,241180|3,241253|2,241326|3,241473|3,241473|2,241619|3) - same
suggestion as above, just do whatever i did above but invert it nopeto reyzra24/30, 80% urs is the best amongst the ones i scrutinized, really appreciate the effort in making the map interesting throughout, even though i didnt agree on the usage of the differences. one word though: please dont abuse the [13][24] splitthrill pattern, those patterns are the hardest to hit out of the possible sets of jumpthrills, and they usually are pretty easy to mindblock on.
this diff is supposed to be hard so you have to be expecting chart like spillthrill pattern like you said, otherwise there is no reason this diff gotta be hard lol, so i can say this for you, please "Just Deal With it"
hope my mod helped, better keep an eye on the diff gap between reyzra's and meggumi's diff @frozen
good luck with rank vv
Edit :
since the mp3 change offset got changed to~
froze offsetnya jd 640, klo digeser inherited point jd kegser jg jd block smua yg garis ijonya trs "move" +45
here the update froze after mp3 change (knp gk bilang drtd cba lol gk pke update 2x ane lol)
Random modding time!
Seriously, what is up with the popularity of this song? I've seen like 5 Mania maps of this already (this one looks the nicest imo though). Also, it's the full version, which is always best version
Column 1|2|3|4
*Note to self* Add notes at end Sorry, I got interrupted right before I could add these.
Ok, so I've forgotten like 90% of what I was going to put here. Anywayssss
- In Battle Begins difficulty, you have a short 1/4 burst at the very end of the song, but in places where you could add a burst, you don't have them. Examples are 00:14:058 (14058|1,69668|0,79034|0,144594|0,153960|0,231229|0) Some of the LN's I just mentioned actually just have a 1/2 beat in it, but you know what I mean. If you're going to add a 1/4 burst at the end, add them where the LN's are too. Or even substitute them with 1/2 bursts.
- Seriously, fix the offset T.T
- Get some other people's inputs on the SV's too. It may just be because the offset is 1/4 beat off, but they feel too slow or they're "caught" too soon (when it accelerates really fast, then suddenly stops before the note).
- Some parts of your song are buildups, but you make them lighter in difficulty than the surrounding parts. I'd do the opposite of that, and at parts where there's a buildup, make that section slightly more difficult than the other parts, either by adding a 1/2 beat in the background, or increasing the frequency of jumps in the measure, or even having LN's.
Wee, mod done!
Seriously, what is up with the popularity of this song? I've seen like 5 Mania maps of this already (this one looks the nicest imo though). Also, it's the full version, which is always best version
Column 1|2|3|4
General
[HP and OD values and stuff]- Woah. HP and OD of 8 for Preparation? That's some hardcore keyboard smashing for an EZ. Reduce to 7 for both?
- Same thing for Last Prep. Reduce HP and OD to 7.2 ~ 7.5?
- HP 7 for Battle Begins? Uhm, increase it to 7.6 ~ 7.8? Also, maybe reduce the OD to ~7.7
- Same for Doy's Battlefield ^^
- Lastly, increase HP and OD of Meggumi's New World to ~8.3 (currently lower than the second highest diff, Alternate World).
[AImod Here with a Special TV Offer]
- Check your Kiai end snappings in Battle Begins.
02:34:985 (154985|0) - Stacked under an LN in Asterisk War
[Timing]Your offset is off by about 1/4 a beat. The correct offset is ~649 Wait to apply my mod because I use the old offset.
- Also, as I said above, in Battle Begins, your inherited timing points aren't snapped.
- Same thing for Last Prep. Reduce HP and OD to 7.2 ~ 7.5?
- HP 7 for Battle Begins? Uhm, increase it to 7.6 ~ 7.8? Also, maybe reduce the OD to ~7.7
- Same for Doy's Battlefield ^^
- Lastly, increase HP and OD of Meggumi's New World to ~8.3 (currently lower than the second highest diff, Alternate World).
[AImod Here with a Special TV Offer]
- Check your Kiai end snappings in Battle Begins.
02:34:985 (154985|0) - Stacked under an LN in Asterisk War
[Timing]Your offset is off by about 1/4 a beat. The correct offset is ~649 Wait to apply my mod because I use the old offset.
- Also, as I said above, in Battle Begins, your inherited timing points aren't snapped.
Battle Begins
00:05:277 - Add a double here for the drum sound and start of the measure.
00:05:424 - ^^ since I notice that you make the drums here doubles, this is also a drum here.
00:10:253 (10253|0,10253|1) - I'd suggest moving this to be different from 00:09:960 (9960|1,9960|0) because they're separate sounds, but in the same lane, so move them to differentiate them?
00:12:302 (12302|1,12302|0,13473|1,13473|2) - (too lazy to insert time) I think you should make this measure a little more difficult than the ones before it since this is like, the ending to the intro of the song, and it had kind of a buildup. So, I think you should add notes on the red ticks so you can keep the same kind of rhythm going as before, but upping the frequency of doubles in this measure can make it more important sounding.
00:22:253 - I don't think you should discontinue the 1/2 notes you had here. I'd keep playing those up until 00:23:424 when the synth stops.
00:33:375 to 00:42:741 - I honestly don't think you need to add an SV in this section because the mood hasn't changed, only the style and rhythm from a steady 1/2 beat to short and accented notes.
00:51:960 - The SV's leading up to this note are a bit strange, but that's probably because their snaps are all wrong. Anyways, the SV that should be here 00:51:887 the .40 one, I think should have its speed increased, but I haven't messed with the snaps yet, so it may just be because of that. It just feels like it's "caught" to early so it makes it too hard to predict the note coming.
00:52:985 (52985|3,52985|2) - Reduce this to a single note? Its sound is a lot quieter than the notes around it.
00:53:570 (53570|3,53570|1) - ^^
00:54:155 (54155|1,54155|0) - ^^ and etc. I'll stop mentioning them now.
00:56:351 (56351|0,56351|3,56643|0,56643|3) - These, for sure though, should be singles as they're way too quiet to be doubles.
01:05:716 (65716|2,65716|1,66009|1,66009|2) - ^^
01:11:277 - Add double here for drum.
01:12:448 - ^^
01:36:009 (96009|2,96009|1,96155|0,96155|3,96302|2,96302|1,96448|0,96448|3,96594|2,96594|1) - You use this pattern a lot. Why don't you try something else for once, like a [13][24] pattern?
01:38:643 - Whatever I said about the SV's, apply them here.
02:06:594 - ^^ Same for these SV's too.
02:11:863 - Add a note here. I can understand why you have that space there (for emphasis?) but it just doesn't feel right when playing it imo.
02:21:229 - ^^
03:05:570 - I'd recommend starting the SV at 03:03:229 instead so it doesn't suddenly slow down the moment you hit the first note.
03:33:229 (213229|1,213229|0) - Remove one of these notes. The sound is a lot quieter than the ones around it.
03:50:643 (230643|1,230643|0,230790|0,230790|1) - Try using different patterns. Maybe make this a [13] and the next set 03:50:936 (230936|3,230936|2,231082|2,231082|3) a [24]
00:05:424 - ^^ since I notice that you make the drums here doubles, this is also a drum here.
00:10:253 (10253|0,10253|1) - I'd suggest moving this to be different from 00:09:960 (9960|1,9960|0) because they're separate sounds, but in the same lane, so move them to differentiate them?
00:12:302 (12302|1,12302|0,13473|1,13473|2) - (too lazy to insert time) I think you should make this measure a little more difficult than the ones before it since this is like, the ending to the intro of the song, and it had kind of a buildup. So, I think you should add notes on the red ticks so you can keep the same kind of rhythm going as before, but upping the frequency of doubles in this measure can make it more important sounding.
00:22:253 - I don't think you should discontinue the 1/2 notes you had here. I'd keep playing those up until 00:23:424 when the synth stops.
00:33:375 to 00:42:741 - I honestly don't think you need to add an SV in this section because the mood hasn't changed, only the style and rhythm from a steady 1/2 beat to short and accented notes.
00:51:960 - The SV's leading up to this note are a bit strange, but that's probably because their snaps are all wrong. Anyways, the SV that should be here 00:51:887 the .40 one, I think should have its speed increased, but I haven't messed with the snaps yet, so it may just be because of that. It just feels like it's "caught" to early so it makes it too hard to predict the note coming.
00:52:985 (52985|3,52985|2) - Reduce this to a single note? Its sound is a lot quieter than the notes around it.
00:53:570 (53570|3,53570|1) - ^^
00:54:155 (54155|1,54155|0) - ^^ and etc. I'll stop mentioning them now.
00:56:351 (56351|0,56351|3,56643|0,56643|3) - These, for sure though, should be singles as they're way too quiet to be doubles.
01:05:716 (65716|2,65716|1,66009|1,66009|2) - ^^
01:11:277 - Add double here for drum.
01:12:448 - ^^
01:36:009 (96009|2,96009|1,96155|0,96155|3,96302|2,96302|1,96448|0,96448|3,96594|2,96594|1) - You use this pattern a lot. Why don't you try something else for once, like a [13][24] pattern?
01:38:643 - Whatever I said about the SV's, apply them here.
02:06:594 - ^^ Same for these SV's too.
02:11:863 - Add a note here. I can understand why you have that space there (for emphasis?) but it just doesn't feel right when playing it imo.
02:21:229 - ^^
03:05:570 - I'd recommend starting the SV at 03:03:229 instead so it doesn't suddenly slow down the moment you hit the first note.
03:33:229 (213229|1,213229|0) - Remove one of these notes. The sound is a lot quieter than the ones around it.
03:50:643 (230643|1,230643|0,230790|0,230790|1) - Try using different patterns. Maybe make this a [13] and the next set 03:50:936 (230936|3,230936|2,231082|2,231082|3) a [24]
Ok, so I've forgotten like 90% of what I was going to put here. Anywayssss
- In Battle Begins difficulty, you have a short 1/4 burst at the very end of the song, but in places where you could add a burst, you don't have them. Examples are 00:14:058 (14058|1,69668|0,79034|0,144594|0,153960|0,231229|0) Some of the LN's I just mentioned actually just have a 1/2 beat in it, but you know what I mean. If you're going to add a 1/4 burst at the end, add them where the LN's are too. Or even substitute them with 1/2 bursts.
- Seriously, fix the offset T.T
- Get some other people's inputs on the SV's too. It may just be because the offset is 1/4 beat off, but they feel too slow or they're "caught" too soon (when it accelerates really fast, then suddenly stops before the note).
- Some parts of your song are buildups, but you make them lighter in difficulty than the surrounding parts. I'd do the opposite of that, and at parts where there's a buildup, make that section slightly more difficult than the other parts, either by adding a 1/2 beat in the background, or increasing the frequency of jumps in the measure, or even having LN's.
Wee, mod done!
Hi cyclone 
i think your mapset offset is wrong, it should be at 5191
that why i feel kind of odd while i am modding your map, all note were delayed a lot.
u should fix this first then i will mod it again
i think your mapset offset is wrong, it should be at 5191
that why i feel kind of odd while i am modding your map, all note were delayed a lot.
u should fix this first then i will mod it again
Critical_Star wrote:
Hi cyclone
i think your mapset offset is wrong, it should be at 5191
that why i feel kind of odd while i am modding your map, all note were delayed a lot.
u should fix this first then i will mod it again
lol it seems froze still hasnt update the beatmap yet, especially the offset since the mp3 is changed, i just told him to update it quickly before someone start modding it tho, maybe he's still busyProtastic101 wrote:
- Seriously, fix the offset T.T
Topic Starter
done with the offsetCritical_Star wrote:
Hi cyclone
i think your mapset offset is wrong, it should be at 5191
that why i feel kind of odd while i am modding your map, all note were delayed a lot.
u should fix this first then i will mod it again
Topic Starter
yup that's rightAtHeoN wrote:
woo a full version mania set :O
+1
can u mod this?
Mod Here
ok. for Easier diff. i'll focus on the pattern flow
my format column 1/2/3/4
[general]
tags : Asterisk War academy battle city Opening OP 1st
source: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shiena_Nishizawa https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Asterisk_War http://asterisk.wikia.com/wiki/Brand-new_World
Check AI MOD, there some Un-Snapped Kiai
[EZ]
00:06:493 (6493|0,6786|2) - if you want a smooth LR Flow, you can swap this note.
00:08:396 (8396|3,8542|2) - you are breaking the Flow here, try to swap it, and Move this 00:09:127 (9127|1,9274|3) - to 4 and 3 or 2 for nice flow and pattern feel
00:11:908 (11908|1,12054|3) - this too, you know what to do
00:19:079 (19079|3) - better move it to 3 to make a nice flow with the music, and 00:22:005 (22005|2) - this note to 2 to make a difference between this part and 00:22:298 (22298|3,22883|2) - this vocal part
00:23:761 (23761|0,24054|3,24347|1) - Flip it horizontaly. it lack of Hard beat feel over here 00:23:761 (23761|0,24054|3) - and swaping the column will do, plus, can tell the player that the flow's gonna be change after this
00:27:127 (27127|2,27274|3) - try to move it to 4-3 or 4-2, because the flow in the previous part are from left to right. and change this flow from right to left to ballance it
00:27:566 (27566|1,27859|0,28005|3,28298|1,28444|0) - Try this? http://puu.sh/oFMld/8e32513525.jpg , if you do. then move 00:28:737 (28737|3) - to 1 to avoid un-necesary jack. plus fixing the Flow
00:33:420 (33420|2,33566|3) - Swap it. the pattern here are in the different part now, to make a difference. you can swap it
[NM]
00:22:005 (22005|0) - how about move it to 2? the flow form the current placement are breaking
01:00:347 (60347|3) - move it to 3 to ballance this Jack 00:59:469 (59469|0,59761|0) -
[HD]
00:15:566 (15566|3) - i still can hear the back Syth, add one more
00:17:908 (17908|2) - ^
00:20:249 (20249|2) - ^
[Punya nya Adot]
00:07:810 - not adding any note to represent the hi hat? i see you've folowing that while adding another drum part like Kick and Snare
00:09:859 - This too
00:06:347 - this too *idk if you following the main synth or hi hat. because the snap are almost similar lol
for snap similar like that. add it. or be consistence with the snapping, because i feel a bit confuse in here 00:06:054 (6054|3,6054|2,6200|3,6200|1,6200|0) - that following the hi hat, and here 00:07:664 (7664|0,7664|3,7957|2,7957|0,7957|1,8103|3) - that folowing the Synth
00:14:688 (14688|1) - from here, why not trying to map those sound? those small sound are pretty audible thou
00:32:103 - missing note for hi hat, and here too 00:32:396 -
00:34:737 -- missing note for snare
other problem are similar with this one
[Asterisk War]
Whoaa 50% volume? too high man. try to reduce it to 40% or 30%
00:24:932 (24932|2,24932|0,24932|3) - Wrong HS here. should be Snare
00:32:688 (32688|1,32688|2,32835|1,32835|0,32981|2,32981|3,33127|0,33127|1,33274|2,33274|3,33420|3,33420|1,33420|2,33420|0) - the sound are fading here, why dont you try to add kick or snare here?
00:54:347 (54347|1,54347|3) - from what i see. you use 3plets for crash and snare. add 1 more maybe??
01:03:713 (63713|1,63713|0,63713|2,63713|3) - and this one 4plets.. hmm how about you check the other part similar with this and make it 3plets or 4plets, i suggest you use 4plets here, so.. add 1 more for Crash here and another part that similar with this one
Done~
ok. for Easier diff. i'll focus on the pattern flow
my format column 1/2/3/4
[general]
tags : Asterisk War academy battle city Opening OP 1st
source: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shiena_Nishizawa https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Asterisk_War http://asterisk.wikia.com/wiki/Brand-new_World
Check AI MOD, there some Un-Snapped Kiai
[EZ]
00:06:493 (6493|0,6786|2) - if you want a smooth LR Flow, you can swap this note.
00:08:396 (8396|3,8542|2) - you are breaking the Flow here, try to swap it, and Move this 00:09:127 (9127|1,9274|3) - to 4 and 3 or 2 for nice flow and pattern feel
00:11:908 (11908|1,12054|3) - this too, you know what to do
00:19:079 (19079|3) - better move it to 3 to make a nice flow with the music, and 00:22:005 (22005|2) - this note to 2 to make a difference between this part and 00:22:298 (22298|3,22883|2) - this vocal part
00:23:761 (23761|0,24054|3,24347|1) - Flip it horizontaly. it lack of Hard beat feel over here 00:23:761 (23761|0,24054|3) - and swaping the column will do, plus, can tell the player that the flow's gonna be change after this
00:27:127 (27127|2,27274|3) - try to move it to 4-3 or 4-2, because the flow in the previous part are from left to right. and change this flow from right to left to ballance it
00:27:566 (27566|1,27859|0,28005|3,28298|1,28444|0) - Try this? http://puu.sh/oFMld/8e32513525.jpg , if you do. then move 00:28:737 (28737|3) - to 1 to avoid un-necesary jack. plus fixing the Flow
00:33:420 (33420|2,33566|3) - Swap it. the pattern here are in the different part now, to make a difference. you can swap it
[NM]
00:22:005 (22005|0) - how about move it to 2? the flow form the current placement are breaking
01:00:347 (60347|3) - move it to 3 to ballance this Jack 00:59:469 (59469|0,59761|0) -
[HD]
00:15:566 (15566|3) - i still can hear the back Syth, add one more
00:17:908 (17908|2) - ^
00:20:249 (20249|2) - ^
[Punya nya Adot]
00:07:810 - not adding any note to represent the hi hat? i see you've folowing that while adding another drum part like Kick and Snare
00:09:859 - This too
00:06:347 - this too *idk if you following the main synth or hi hat. because the snap are almost similar lol
for snap similar like that. add it. or be consistence with the snapping, because i feel a bit confuse in here 00:06:054 (6054|3,6054|2,6200|3,6200|1,6200|0) - that following the hi hat, and here 00:07:664 (7664|0,7664|3,7957|2,7957|0,7957|1,8103|3) - that folowing the Synth
00:14:688 (14688|1) - from here, why not trying to map those sound? those small sound are pretty audible thou
00:32:103 - missing note for hi hat, and here too 00:32:396 -
00:34:737 -- missing note for snare
other problem are similar with this one
[Asterisk War]
Whoaa 50% volume? too high man. try to reduce it to 40% or 30%
00:24:932 (24932|2,24932|0,24932|3) - Wrong HS here. should be Snare
00:32:688 (32688|1,32688|2,32835|1,32835|0,32981|2,32981|3,33127|0,33127|1,33274|2,33274|3,33420|3,33420|1,33420|2,33420|0) - the sound are fading here, why dont you try to add kick or snare here?
00:54:347 (54347|1,54347|3) - from what i see. you use 3plets for crash and snare. add 1 more maybe??
01:03:713 (63713|1,63713|0,63713|2,63713|3) - and this one 4plets.. hmm how about you check the other part similar with this and make it 3plets or 4plets, i suggest you use 4plets here, so.. add 1 more for Crash here and another part that similar with this one
Done~
sry i can't mod mania >_<frozencyclone wrote:
yup that's rightAtHeoN wrote:
woo a full version mania set :O
+1
can u mod this?
LOL. Poor doykyoto..doykyoto wrote:
WHERE ARE THE MODS FOR ME!!
Topic Starter
@AtHeon : try it, it's good if you can do all of the diff
Req from PM ~
Mod Request
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that's it x.x
sorry i cant mod diff IN cause no much time more x,x and to this song lenght 3 minute lol :v
ok, hope my mod helpfully ^^
and GL everyone ><
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General
Before apply my mod, please check your Aimod(Ctrl+Shift+A)
MOD
[EZ]
no problem is here
[NM]
01:06:200 - add for finish sound or cymbal ( before you add it )
01:08:542 - ^
01:17:908 - add 1 for cymbal
02:21:127 - add note in col 4
02:32:835 (152835|3,153127|2) - same action change pattern with >> 01:17:908 -
03:50:103 - add 1 for cymbal
[HD]
skipp mod this cause your HS and general of audio not you option
dat SV to -_-
WARNING: its will be over, if your SV not suitable
[Doy's HD]
eaaa xD
00:01:810 (1810|3) - move col 3 ( gak cocok dibikin jack doy -_-)
00:03:127 (3127|2) - move col 4 ( same above reason)
00:10:298 - add note lagi ? nih note sama ma yg kek gini 00:10:883 - pitch ny
00:24:786 - add note in col 2
00:27:566 (27566|2) - move 4 deh...dibikin jack kek gitu terasa gk cocok
00:31:957 (31957|0) - move to col 2
00:51:859 (51859|1) - bila didenger suara ny agak rada kecil bngt....mending delete aja ini
00:53:908 (53908|3) - move to col 2
00:56:837 (56837|0) - move to col 2
00:59:178 - cymbal doy :v not add lgi ? lu di bagian cymbal lu jadiin triple note :v
01:31:373 - until 01:31:959 - gak yakin pattern ny x,x tapi saran mending bikin kek gini >>> http://puu.sh/oHSVp/54b0d1e6ab.jpg
01:33:715 (93715|0,93715|3,93861|3,93861|0,93861|2,94007|3,94007|0,94154|3,94154|0,94154|1,94300|2,94300|0) - lel sama :v bikin kek yg di atas tdi aja terus di ctrl + H in
01:36:056 - sampe atas.....sama uy :v inti nya 01:36:349 (96349|0,96349|3) - yg disini jadiin 1 note aja.....klo kek gitu gak cocok amat pattern untuk HD+ lel
02:13:814 - >>> http://puu.sh/oHTKh/9c0a1d48eb.jpg 02:14:105 - disini ny add for cymbal
02:25:812 - cymbal uy :v add 1 lagi di col 3
02:28:446 (148446|1) - delete...karena gak ada cymbal :v
02:31:666 - nah ini baru add :v
02:58:593 - add ( you know that )
03:28:739 (208739|0,208739|3) - nih cukup 1 note aja
03:31:373 - cymbal ( add )
pitch ini 03:47:763 - 03:48:056 - 03:48:349 - sampe keatas.....di bagian reff sebelum ny or kiai ente cmn menggunakan 2 note doy x.x
03:52:885 (232885|2) - move 2
03:54:056 (234056|1) - move 3
xD
no problem is here
[NM]
01:06:200 - add for finish sound or cymbal ( before you add it )
01:08:542 - ^
01:17:908 - add 1 for cymbal
02:21:127 - add note in col 4
02:32:835 (152835|3,153127|2) - same action change pattern with >> 01:17:908 -
03:50:103 - add 1 for cymbal
[HD]
skipp mod this cause your HS and general of audio not you option
dat SV to -_-
WARNING: its will be over, if your SV not suitable
[Doy's HD]
eaaa xD
00:01:810 (1810|3) - move col 3 ( gak cocok dibikin jack doy -_-)
00:03:127 (3127|2) - move col 4 ( same above reason)
00:10:298 - add note lagi ? nih note sama ma yg kek gini 00:10:883 - pitch ny
00:24:786 - add note in col 2
00:27:566 (27566|2) - move 4 deh...dibikin jack kek gitu terasa gk cocok
00:31:957 (31957|0) - move to col 2
00:51:859 (51859|1) - bila didenger suara ny agak rada kecil bngt....mending delete aja ini
00:53:908 (53908|3) - move to col 2
00:56:837 (56837|0) - move to col 2
00:59:178 - cymbal doy :v not add lgi ? lu di bagian cymbal lu jadiin triple note :v
01:31:373 - until 01:31:959 - gak yakin pattern ny x,x tapi saran mending bikin kek gini >>> http://puu.sh/oHSVp/54b0d1e6ab.jpg
01:33:715 (93715|0,93715|3,93861|3,93861|0,93861|2,94007|3,94007|0,94154|3,94154|0,94154|1,94300|2,94300|0) - lel sama :v bikin kek yg di atas tdi aja terus di ctrl + H in
01:36:056 - sampe atas.....sama uy :v inti nya 01:36:349 (96349|0,96349|3) - yg disini jadiin 1 note aja.....klo kek gitu gak cocok amat pattern untuk HD+ lel
02:13:814 - >>> http://puu.sh/oHTKh/9c0a1d48eb.jpg 02:14:105 - disini ny add for cymbal
02:25:812 - cymbal uy :v add 1 lagi di col 3
02:28:446 (148446|1) - delete...karena gak ada cymbal :v
02:31:666 - nah ini baru add :v
02:58:593 - add ( you know that )
03:28:739 (208739|0,208739|3) - nih cukup 1 note aja
03:31:373 - cymbal ( add )
pitch ini 03:47:763 - 03:48:056 - 03:48:349 - sampe keatas.....di bagian reff sebelum ny or kiai ente cmn menggunakan 2 note doy x.x
03:52:885 (232885|2) - move 2
03:54:056 (234056|1) - move 3
xD
that's it x.x
sorry i cant mod diff IN cause no much time more x,x and to this song lenght 3 minute lol :v
ok, hope my mod helpfully ^^
and GL everyone ><
IRC with dodotkyoto
10:26 -BANGKE-: dot, gelem irc ra?
10:26 *doykyoto is away: noob
10:26 -BANGKE-: noob
10:26 doykyoto: serah
10:26 doykyoto: pokkoke jok sampe jumatan
10:26 doykyoto: oh jangkrek
10:26 -BANGKE-: aku ae tangi turu
10:26 doykyoto: map opo?
10:26 *-BANGKE- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World]
10:26 doykyoto: n00b
10:26 -BANGKE-: aku duwe urang
10:26 -BANGKE-: utang
10:26 -BANGKE-: anjeng
10:27 doykyoto: btw
10:27 doykyoto: aku GD ne
10:27 doykyoto: xD
10:27 -BANGKE-: iyo ancen
10:27 -BANGKE-: wes ayo irc
10:27 doykyoto: yowis..
10:27 -BANGKE-: tak nazi mod ban apik map e
10:27 doykyoto: serah awakmu ae wes...
10:27 doykyoto: bah nazi bah jjepang mod raurus
10:28 -BANGKE-: ojo kesinggung tp ya :VVV
10:28 -BANGKE-: aku lek ngemod
10:28 -BANGKE-: kasar
10:28 doykyoto: gpp
10:28 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World [doy's Battlefield [HD]]]
10:28 doykyoto: wes tau onok sing kasar pisan mbek aku
(
10:28 *doykyoto is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World [doy's Battlefield [HD]]]
10:28 doykyoto: btw aku nggarap e iiku ng sekolah tbh
10:28 doykyoto: pasti akeh salahe
10:28 -BANGKE-: 00:01:518 (1518|2,1664|3) - ctrl j
10:28 -BANGKE-: ban ga ngejack karo 00:01:664 (1664|3,1810|3) -
10:29 -BANGKE-: 00:03:274 (3274|2) - pindahen ndek 4
10:29 -BANGKE-: 1|2|3|4
10:29 doykyoto: monggoo
10:29 doykyoto: lanjut
10:29 -BANGKE-: 00:04:152 (4152|3) - ki mending delete'en, soale perubahan pitch'e ndek kene 00:04:298 (4298|1) -
10:30 doykyoto: oh ok.. i see
10:30 -BANGKE-: 00:04:152 - 00:04:444 - trs add note ndek kono
10:31 -BANGKE-: 00:05:176 (5176|0) - 00:06:493 (6493|2) - 00:07:664 (7664|3) - kok nanggung melok synth'e?
10:31 -BANGKE-: delete en ae
10:31 -BANGKE-: ban ga dadi major issue
10:31 -BANGKE-: 00:09:274 (9274|2,9420|0) - ctrl j
10:31 -BANGKE-: ban ga ngejack 00:09:127 (9127|2,9127|3,9274|2,9274|3) -
10:32 doykyoto: ngene apik ra? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5087687
10:32 -BANGKE-: ojo, mending seng tak saran o maeng, soale kan jek onok suara kick snare
10:32 -BANGKE-: ojo di skip
10:32 -BANGKE-: sayang
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:12:347 (12347|2) - pindahen ndek 4
10:33 doykyoto: iyo2 beb
10:33 doykyoto: jack e ilangno kabeh maren
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:14:103 (14103|0,14176|1) - ki kok single, lah iki kok double 00:14:249 (14249|2,14249|3) -
10:33 -BANGKE-: padahal pitch'e podo
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:14:688 - tekan kene kok kosong
10:33 doykyoto: okok
10:34 doykyoto: gpp
10:34 -BANGKE-: padahal onok suara gitar 1/4
10:34 -BANGKE-: eh 1/2
10:34 -BANGKE-: layering laaa :VVV
10:34 -BANGKE-: major issue loh
10:34 doykyoto: moso masalah se -- gak prasaan ;v
10:34 -BANGKE-: ojo sampe bolong
10:34 doykyoto: wtf
10:34 doykyoto: yowesla
10:35 -BANGKE-: ndek mania gak oleh sampe onok bolong" selagi jek iso di layering
10:35 doykyoto: okaylah
10:35 -BANGKE-: 00:31:079 - ga di add 1 maneh ta, cymbal
10:36 doykyoto: ngejack lo
10:36 -BANGKE-: 00:34:591 (34591|0,34591|1) - heh :V snare'e ndek kene
10:37 -BANGKE-: gaween kyk ngene ngkok http://puu.sh/oHTu2/aeacb775dc.jpg
10:37 -BANGKE-: seng00:31:079 -
10:37 -BANGKE-: 00:36:932 (36932|0) - ghost
10:37 -BANGKE-: delete
10:37 -BANGKE-: 00:36:786 (36786|0) - pindah ndek 2
10:38 -BANGKE-: 00:37:518 (37518|2,37664|2,37810|2) - ojo di jack
10:38 doykyoto: onok kok bang...
10:38 -BANGKE-: jack'e ilangono kabeh
10:38 -BANGKE-: coba gawe 25% nek gk percoyo
10:38 doykyoto: wes mas...
10:38 -BANGKE-: soale ndek part iki awakmu melok'i kick snare
10:38 -BANGKE-: konsistensi
10:38 -BANGKE-: 00:40:883 (40883|2) - iki yo ghost
10:39 -BANGKE-: 00:40:737 - kene add 1, soale snare'e mok layering double
10:39 doykyoto: wes tak fix sing iki 00:40:737 -
10:39 -BANGKE-: oke
10:39 doykyoto: dadi ngene https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5087710
10:39 doykyoto: terus
10:39 doykyoto: lanjut
10:40 -BANGKE-: 00:53:615 (53615|2,53761|0) - ctrl j, awakmu kakean ndek kanan iki
10:40 -BANGKE-: 00:53:908 (53908|3) - pindah ndek 3
10:40 -BANGKE-: eh 2
10:40 doykyoto: okok
10:41 -BANGKE-: 00:56:688 (56688|3,56688|0) - iki lapo kok double? kan mek hithat
10:41 -BANGKE-: 1 ae
10:41 -BANGKE-: trs delehen ndek 2 ban ga ngejack
10:41 -BANGKE-: 00:57:859 (57859|0,58005|1) - ctrl j, variasi ban ga monoton
10:42 -BANGKE-: 01:02:249 (62249|3) - pindahen 3
10:42 -BANGKE-: ndek 3*
10:42 -BANGKE-: 01:03:713 (63713|3) - iki cymbal kok LN 1? iki cymbal sisan tapi 3 01:01:371 (61371|3,61371|2,61371|0) -
10:43 -BANGKE-: 01:09:859 (69859|1,70005|1,70152|1) - stack 3 stream iki angel di hit, 01:09:859 (69859|1) - pindahen ndek 1
10:43 -BANGKE-: 01:13:079 - add double, cymbal ki
10:44 doykyoto: jembat
10:44 doykyoto: akehe se
10:44 doykyoto: duso opo aku
10:44 -BANGKE-: 01:15:713 - 01:16:005 - 01:16:298 - 01:16:591 - 01:16:883 - 01:17:176 - 01:17:469 - 01:17:761 - missing :VVVV
10:44 doykyoto: lanjutno ae del
10:44 doykyoto: aku ngeroki ibuku diluk
10:45 doykyoto: ngkok ben tak apply
10:45 -BANGKE-: 01:17:908 - tekan sampe 01:19:079 - iki 1/2 ojo di layering 1/4
10:45 -BANGKE-: okeoke
10:45 -BANGKE-: 01:20:103 (80103|0) - LN e deleten
10:45 -BANGKE-: podo kyk seng awalan mau
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:19:957 (79957|2,79957|3) - deleten, aku gk ngerungokno opo" ndek 25% PR
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:20:103 - trs kene tambah 1 note maneh, cymbal
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:20:835 (80835|3) - pindah 3
10:47 -BANGKE-: 01:21:566 (81566|2,81713|3) - ctrl j, terus 01:21:859 (81859|2) - pindah 4
10:48 -BANGKE-: 01:31:371 (91371|1,91371|0,91518|2,91518|0,91518|3,91664|0,91664|3,91810|0,91810|3,91810|1,91957|2,91957|1) - gaween kyk ngene ae http://puu.sh/oHU1i/df69e5bbcf.jpg lebih gampang di hit
10:49 -BANGKE-: 01:33:713 (93713|3,93713|0,93859|3,93859|0,93859|2,94005|0,94005|3,94152|1,94152|0,94152|3,94298|0,94298|2) - > http://puu.sh/oHU4d/f343dfd73e.jpg
10:49 -BANGKE-: 01:36:054 (96054|0,96054|3,96200|1,96200|3,96200|0,96347|3,96347|0,96493|3,96493|0,96493|2,96639|3,96639|0) - gaween podo kyk ^
10:50 -BANGKE-: 01:37:371 (97371|0) - pindah 3, ojo jack 3 ngene 01:37:371 (97371|0,97518|0,97664|0) -
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:10:152 (130152|3) - pindah ndek 3
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:16:444 (136444|0) - delete, ghost
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:26:835 - jek onok suarane, add
10:52 -BANGKE-: 02:29:176 (149176|3,149322|3,149469|3) - http://puu.sh/oHUcQ/d10145f688.jpg flow ne lebih enak
10:53 -BANGKE-: 02:32:835 (152835|3,152835|0,152908|1,152981|2,153054|3,153127|2,153127|0,153200|1,153274|2,153347|3) - iki 1/2 dot,
10:53 -BANGKE-: 02:34:883 (154883|2,154883|0) - gk onok suarane
10:54 -BANGKE-: wes yo samono ae :V lagune kedowoen aras"en aku
10:26 *doykyoto is away: noob
10:26 -BANGKE-: noob
10:26 doykyoto: serah
10:26 doykyoto: pokkoke jok sampe jumatan
10:26 doykyoto: oh jangkrek
10:26 -BANGKE-: aku ae tangi turu
10:26 doykyoto: map opo?
10:26 *-BANGKE- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World]
10:26 doykyoto: n00b
10:26 -BANGKE-: aku duwe urang
10:26 -BANGKE-: utang
10:26 -BANGKE-: anjeng
10:27 doykyoto: btw
10:27 doykyoto: aku GD ne
10:27 doykyoto: xD
10:27 -BANGKE-: iyo ancen
10:27 -BANGKE-: wes ayo irc
10:27 doykyoto: yowis..
10:27 -BANGKE-: tak nazi mod ban apik map e
10:27 doykyoto: serah awakmu ae wes...
10:27 doykyoto: bah nazi bah jjepang mod raurus
10:28 -BANGKE-: ojo kesinggung tp ya :VVV
10:28 -BANGKE-: aku lek ngemod
10:28 -BANGKE-: kasar
10:28 doykyoto: gpp
10:28 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World [doy's Battlefield [HD]]]
10:28 doykyoto: wes tau onok sing kasar pisan mbek aku
(10:28 *doykyoto is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World [doy's Battlefield [HD]]]
10:28 doykyoto: btw aku nggarap e iiku ng sekolah tbh
10:28 doykyoto: pasti akeh salahe
10:28 -BANGKE-: 00:01:518 (1518|2,1664|3) - ctrl j
10:28 -BANGKE-: ban ga ngejack karo 00:01:664 (1664|3,1810|3) -
10:29 -BANGKE-: 00:03:274 (3274|2) - pindahen ndek 4
10:29 -BANGKE-: 1|2|3|4
10:29 doykyoto: monggoo
10:29 doykyoto: lanjut
10:29 -BANGKE-: 00:04:152 (4152|3) - ki mending delete'en, soale perubahan pitch'e ndek kene 00:04:298 (4298|1) -
10:30 doykyoto: oh ok.. i see
10:30 -BANGKE-: 00:04:152 - 00:04:444 - trs add note ndek kono
10:31 -BANGKE-: 00:05:176 (5176|0) - 00:06:493 (6493|2) - 00:07:664 (7664|3) - kok nanggung melok synth'e?
10:31 -BANGKE-: delete en ae
10:31 -BANGKE-: ban ga dadi major issue
10:31 -BANGKE-: 00:09:274 (9274|2,9420|0) - ctrl j
10:31 -BANGKE-: ban ga ngejack 00:09:127 (9127|2,9127|3,9274|2,9274|3) -
10:32 doykyoto: ngene apik ra? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5087687
10:32 -BANGKE-: ojo, mending seng tak saran o maeng, soale kan jek onok suara kick snare
10:32 -BANGKE-: ojo di skip
10:32 -BANGKE-: sayang
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:12:347 (12347|2) - pindahen ndek 4
10:33 doykyoto: iyo2 beb
10:33 doykyoto: jack e ilangno kabeh maren
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:14:103 (14103|0,14176|1) - ki kok single, lah iki kok double 00:14:249 (14249|2,14249|3) -
10:33 -BANGKE-: padahal pitch'e podo
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:14:688 - tekan kene kok kosong
10:33 doykyoto: okok
10:34 doykyoto: gpp
10:34 -BANGKE-: padahal onok suara gitar 1/4
10:34 -BANGKE-: eh 1/2
10:34 -BANGKE-: layering laaa :VVV
10:34 -BANGKE-: major issue loh
10:34 doykyoto: moso masalah se -- gak prasaan ;v
10:34 -BANGKE-: ojo sampe bolong
10:34 doykyoto: wtf
10:34 doykyoto: yowesla
10:35 -BANGKE-: ndek mania gak oleh sampe onok bolong" selagi jek iso di layering
10:35 doykyoto: okaylah
10:35 -BANGKE-: 00:31:079 - ga di add 1 maneh ta, cymbal
10:36 doykyoto: ngejack lo
10:36 -BANGKE-: 00:34:591 (34591|0,34591|1) - heh :V snare'e ndek kene
10:37 -BANGKE-: gaween kyk ngene ngkok http://puu.sh/oHTu2/aeacb775dc.jpg
10:37 -BANGKE-: seng00:31:079 -
10:37 -BANGKE-: 00:36:932 (36932|0) - ghost
10:37 -BANGKE-: delete
10:37 -BANGKE-: 00:36:786 (36786|0) - pindah ndek 2
10:38 -BANGKE-: 00:37:518 (37518|2,37664|2,37810|2) - ojo di jack
10:38 doykyoto: onok kok bang...
10:38 -BANGKE-: jack'e ilangono kabeh
10:38 -BANGKE-: coba gawe 25% nek gk percoyo
10:38 doykyoto: wes mas...
10:38 -BANGKE-: soale ndek part iki awakmu melok'i kick snare
10:38 -BANGKE-: konsistensi
10:38 -BANGKE-: 00:40:883 (40883|2) - iki yo ghost
10:39 -BANGKE-: 00:40:737 - kene add 1, soale snare'e mok layering double
10:39 doykyoto: wes tak fix sing iki 00:40:737 -
10:39 -BANGKE-: oke
10:39 doykyoto: dadi ngene https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5087710
10:39 doykyoto: terus
10:39 doykyoto: lanjut
10:40 -BANGKE-: 00:53:615 (53615|2,53761|0) - ctrl j, awakmu kakean ndek kanan iki
10:40 -BANGKE-: 00:53:908 (53908|3) - pindah ndek 3
10:40 -BANGKE-: eh 2
10:40 doykyoto: okok
10:41 -BANGKE-: 00:56:688 (56688|3,56688|0) - iki lapo kok double? kan mek hithat
10:41 -BANGKE-: 1 ae
10:41 -BANGKE-: trs delehen ndek 2 ban ga ngejack
10:41 -BANGKE-: 00:57:859 (57859|0,58005|1) - ctrl j, variasi ban ga monoton
10:42 -BANGKE-: 01:02:249 (62249|3) - pindahen 3
10:42 -BANGKE-: ndek 3*
10:42 -BANGKE-: 01:03:713 (63713|3) - iki cymbal kok LN 1? iki cymbal sisan tapi 3 01:01:371 (61371|3,61371|2,61371|0) -
10:43 -BANGKE-: 01:09:859 (69859|1,70005|1,70152|1) - stack 3 stream iki angel di hit, 01:09:859 (69859|1) - pindahen ndek 1
10:43 -BANGKE-: 01:13:079 - add double, cymbal ki
10:44 doykyoto: jembat
10:44 doykyoto: akehe se
10:44 doykyoto: duso opo aku
10:44 -BANGKE-: 01:15:713 - 01:16:005 - 01:16:298 - 01:16:591 - 01:16:883 - 01:17:176 - 01:17:469 - 01:17:761 - missing :VVVV
10:44 doykyoto: lanjutno ae del
10:44 doykyoto: aku ngeroki ibuku diluk
10:45 doykyoto: ngkok ben tak apply
10:45 -BANGKE-: 01:17:908 - tekan sampe 01:19:079 - iki 1/2 ojo di layering 1/4
10:45 -BANGKE-: okeoke
10:45 -BANGKE-: 01:20:103 (80103|0) - LN e deleten
10:45 -BANGKE-: podo kyk seng awalan mau
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:19:957 (79957|2,79957|3) - deleten, aku gk ngerungokno opo" ndek 25% PR
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:20:103 - trs kene tambah 1 note maneh, cymbal
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:20:835 (80835|3) - pindah 3
10:47 -BANGKE-: 01:21:566 (81566|2,81713|3) - ctrl j, terus 01:21:859 (81859|2) - pindah 4
10:48 -BANGKE-: 01:31:371 (91371|1,91371|0,91518|2,91518|0,91518|3,91664|0,91664|3,91810|0,91810|3,91810|1,91957|2,91957|1) - gaween kyk ngene ae http://puu.sh/oHU1i/df69e5bbcf.jpg lebih gampang di hit
10:49 -BANGKE-: 01:33:713 (93713|3,93713|0,93859|3,93859|0,93859|2,94005|0,94005|3,94152|1,94152|0,94152|3,94298|0,94298|2) - > http://puu.sh/oHU4d/f343dfd73e.jpg
10:49 -BANGKE-: 01:36:054 (96054|0,96054|3,96200|1,96200|3,96200|0,96347|3,96347|0,96493|3,96493|0,96493|2,96639|3,96639|0) - gaween podo kyk ^
10:50 -BANGKE-: 01:37:371 (97371|0) - pindah 3, ojo jack 3 ngene 01:37:371 (97371|0,97518|0,97664|0) -
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:10:152 (130152|3) - pindah ndek 3
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:16:444 (136444|0) - delete, ghost
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:26:835 - jek onok suarane, add
10:52 -BANGKE-: 02:29:176 (149176|3,149322|3,149469|3) - http://puu.sh/oHUcQ/d10145f688.jpg flow ne lebih enak
10:53 -BANGKE-: 02:32:835 (152835|3,152835|0,152908|1,152981|2,153054|3,153127|2,153127|0,153200|1,153274|2,153347|3) - iki 1/2 dot,
10:53 -BANGKE-: 02:34:883 (154883|2,154883|0) - gk onok suarane
10:54 -BANGKE-: wes yo samono ae :V lagune kedowoen aras"en aku
diff lainya ntar pas abis jumatan ye, goodluck
anjeng akwowkowkAdinata28 wrote:
LOL. Poor doykyoto..doykyoto wrote:
WHERE ARE THE MODS FOR ME!!
Draftnell wrote:
[Doy's HD]
eaaa xD
00:01:810 (1810|3) - move col 3 ( gak cocok dibikin jack doy -_-)
00:03:127 (3127|2) - move col 4 ( same above reason)
00:10:298 - add note lagi ? nih note sama ma yg kek gini 00:10:883 - pitch ny
00:24:786 - add note in col 2
00:27:566 (27566|2) - move 4 deh...dibikin jack kek gitu terasa gk cocok
00:31:957 (31957|0) - move to col 2
00:51:859 (51859|1) - bila didenger suara ny agak rada kecil bngt....mending delete aja ini
00:53:908 (53908|3) - move to col 2
00:56:837 (56837|0) - move to col 2
00:59:178 - cymbal doy :v not add lgi ? lu di bagian cymbal lu jadiin triple note :v
01:31:373 - until 01:31:959 - gak yakin pattern ny x,x tapi saran mending bikin kek gini >>> http://puu.sh/oHSVp/54b0d1e6ab.jpg
01:33:715 (93715|0,93715|3,93861|3,93861|0,93861|2,94007|3,94007|0,94154|3,94154|0,94154|1,94300|2,94300|0) - lel sama :v bikin kek yg di atas tdi aja terus di ctrl + H in
01:36:056 - sampe atas.....sama uy :v inti nya 01:36:349 (96349|0,96349|3) - yg disini jadiin 1 note aja.....klo kek gitu gak cocok amat pattern untuk HD+ lel
02:13:814 - >>> http://puu.sh/oHTKh/9c0a1d48eb.jpg 02:14:105 - disini ny add for cymbal
02:25:812 - cymbal uy :v add 1 lagi di col 3
02:28:446 (148446|1) - delete...karena gak ada cymbal :v
02:31:666 - nah ini baru add :v
02:58:593 - add ( you know that )
03:28:739 (208739|0,208739|3) - nih cukup 1 note aja
03:31:373 - cymbal ( add )
pitch ini 03:47:763 - 03:48:056 - 03:48:349 - sampe keatas.....di bagian reff sebelum ny or kiai ente cmn menggunakan 2 note doy x.x
03:52:885 (232885|2) - move 2
03:54:056 (234056|1) - move 3
xD
dosa apa w ...-BANGKE- wrote:
IRC with dodotkyoto10:26 -BANGKE-: dot, gelem irc ra?
10:26 *doykyoto is away: noob
10:26 -BANGKE-: noob
10:26 doykyoto: serah
10:26 doykyoto: pokkoke jok sampe jumatan
10:26 doykyoto: oh jangkrek
10:26 -BANGKE-: aku ae tangi turu
10:26 doykyoto: map opo?
10:26 *-BANGKE- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World]
10:26 doykyoto: n00b
10:26 -BANGKE-: aku duwe urang
10:26 -BANGKE-: utang
10:26 -BANGKE-: anjeng
10:27 doykyoto: btw
10:27 doykyoto: aku GD ne
10:27 doykyoto: xD
10:27 -BANGKE-: iyo ancen
10:27 -BANGKE-: wes ayo irc
10:27 doykyoto: yowis..
10:27 -BANGKE-: tak nazi mod ban apik map e
10:27 doykyoto: serah awakmu ae wes...
10:27 doykyoto: bah nazi bah jjepang mod raurus
10:28 -BANGKE-: ojo kesinggung tp ya :VVV
10:28 -BANGKE-: aku lek ngemod
10:28 -BANGKE-: kasar
10:28 doykyoto: gpp
10:28 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World [doy's Battlefield [HD]]]
10:28 doykyoto: wes tau onok sing kasar pisan mbek aku
10:28 *doykyoto is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/941367 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World [doy's Battlefield [HD]]]
10:28 doykyoto: btw aku nggarap e iiku ng sekolah tbh
10:28 doykyoto: pasti akeh salahe
10:28 -BANGKE-: 00:01:518 (1518|2,1664|3) - ctrl j
10:28 -BANGKE-: ban ga ngejack karo 00:01:664 (1664|3,1810|3) -
10:29 -BANGKE-: 00:03:274 (3274|2) - pindahen ndek 4
10:29 -BANGKE-: 1|2|3|4
10:29 doykyoto: monggoo
10:29 doykyoto: lanjut
10:29 -BANGKE-: 00:04:152 (4152|3) - ki mending delete'en, soale perubahan pitch'e ndek kene 00:04:298 (4298|1) -
10:30 doykyoto: oh ok.. i see
10:30 -BANGKE-: 00:04:152 - 00:04:444 - trs add note ndek kono
10:31 -BANGKE-: 00:05:176 (5176|0) - 00:06:493 (6493|2) - 00:07:664 (7664|3) - kok nanggung melok synth'e?
10:31 -BANGKE-: delete en ae
10:31 -BANGKE-: ban ga dadi major issue
10:31 -BANGKE-: 00:09:274 (9274|2,9420|0) - ctrl j
10:31 -BANGKE-: ban ga ngejack 00:09:127 (9127|2,9127|3,9274|2,9274|3) -
10:32 doykyoto: ngene apik ra? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5087687
10:32 -BANGKE-: ojo, mending seng tak saran o maeng, soale kan jek onok suara kick snare
10:32 -BANGKE-: ojo di skip
10:32 -BANGKE-: sayang
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:12:347 (12347|2) - pindahen ndek 4
10:33 doykyoto: iyo2 beb
10:33 doykyoto: jack e ilangno kabeh maren
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:14:103 (14103|0,14176|1) - ki kok single, lah iki kok double 00:14:249 (14249|2,14249|3) -
10:33 -BANGKE-: padahal pitch'e podo
10:33 -BANGKE-: 00:14:688 - tekan kene kok kosong
10:33 doykyoto: okok
10:34 doykyoto: gpp
10:34 -BANGKE-: padahal onok suara gitar 1/4
10:34 -BANGKE-: eh 1/2
10:34 -BANGKE-: layering laaa :VVV
10:34 -BANGKE-: major issue loh
10:34 doykyoto: moso masalah se -- gak prasaan ;v
10:34 -BANGKE-: ojo sampe bolong
10:34 doykyoto: wtf
10:34 doykyoto: yowesla
10:35 -BANGKE-: ndek mania gak oleh sampe onok bolong" selagi jek iso di layering
10:35 doykyoto: okaylah
10:35 -BANGKE-: 00:31:079 - ga di add 1 maneh ta, cymbal
10:36 doykyoto: ngejack lo
10:36 -BANGKE-: 00:34:591 (34591|0,34591|1) - heh :V snare'e ndek kene
10:37 -BANGKE-: gaween kyk ngene ngkok http://puu.sh/oHTu2/aeacb775dc.jpg
10:37 -BANGKE-: seng00:31:079 -
10:37 -BANGKE-: 00:36:932 (36932|0) - ghost
10:37 -BANGKE-: delete
10:37 -BANGKE-: 00:36:786 (36786|0) - pindah ndek 2
10:38 -BANGKE-: 00:37:518 (37518|2,37664|2,37810|2) - ojo di jack
10:38 doykyoto: onok kok bang...
10:38 -BANGKE-: jack'e ilangono kabeh
10:38 -BANGKE-: coba gawe 25% nek gk percoyo
10:38 doykyoto: wes mas...
10:38 -BANGKE-: soale ndek part iki awakmu melok'i kick snare
10:38 -BANGKE-: konsistensi
10:38 -BANGKE-: 00:40:883 (40883|2) - iki yo ghost
10:39 -BANGKE-: 00:40:737 - kene add 1, soale snare'e mok layering double
10:39 doykyoto: wes tak fix sing iki 00:40:737 -
10:39 -BANGKE-: oke
10:39 doykyoto: dadi ngene https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5087710
10:39 doykyoto: terus
10:39 doykyoto: lanjut
10:40 -BANGKE-: 00:53:615 (53615|2,53761|0) - ctrl j, awakmu kakean ndek kanan iki
10:40 -BANGKE-: 00:53:908 (53908|3) - pindah ndek 3
10:40 -BANGKE-: eh 2
10:40 doykyoto: okok
10:41 -BANGKE-: 00:56:688 (56688|3,56688|0) - iki lapo kok double? kan mek hithat
10:41 -BANGKE-: 1 ae
10:41 -BANGKE-: trs delehen ndek 2 ban ga ngejack
10:41 -BANGKE-: 00:57:859 (57859|0,58005|1) - ctrl j, variasi ban ga monoton
10:42 -BANGKE-: 01:02:249 (62249|3) - pindahen 3
10:42 -BANGKE-: ndek 3*
10:42 -BANGKE-: 01:03:713 (63713|3) - iki cymbal kok LN 1? iki cymbal sisan tapi 3 01:01:371 (61371|3,61371|2,61371|0) -
10:43 -BANGKE-: 01:09:859 (69859|1,70005|1,70152|1) - stack 3 stream iki angel di hit, 01:09:859 (69859|1) - pindahen ndek 1
10:43 -BANGKE-: 01:13:079 - add double, cymbal ki
10:44 doykyoto: jembat
10:44 doykyoto: akehe se
10:44 doykyoto: duso opo aku
10:44 -BANGKE-: 01:15:713 - 01:16:005 - 01:16:298 - 01:16:591 - 01:16:883 - 01:17:176 - 01:17:469 - 01:17:761 - missing :VVVV
10:44 doykyoto: lanjutno ae del
10:44 doykyoto: aku ngeroki ibuku diluk
10:45 doykyoto: ngkok ben tak apply
10:45 -BANGKE-: 01:17:908 - tekan sampe 01:19:079 - iki 1/2 ojo di layering 1/4
10:45 -BANGKE-: okeoke
10:45 -BANGKE-: 01:20:103 (80103|0) - LN e deleten
10:45 -BANGKE-: podo kyk seng awalan mau
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:19:957 (79957|2,79957|3) - deleten, aku gk ngerungokno opo" ndek 25% PR
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:20:103 - trs kene tambah 1 note maneh, cymbal
10:46 -BANGKE-: 01:20:835 (80835|3) - pindah 3
10:47 -BANGKE-: 01:21:566 (81566|2,81713|3) - ctrl j, terus 01:21:859 (81859|2) - pindah 4
10:48 -BANGKE-: 01:31:371 (91371|1,91371|0,91518|2,91518|0,91518|3,91664|0,91664|3,91810|0,91810|3,91810|1,91957|2,91957|1) - gaween kyk ngene ae http://puu.sh/oHU1i/df69e5bbcf.jpg lebih gampang di hit
10:49 -BANGKE-: 01:33:713 (93713|3,93713|0,93859|3,93859|0,93859|2,94005|0,94005|3,94152|1,94152|0,94152|3,94298|0,94298|2) - > http://puu.sh/oHU4d/f343dfd73e.jpg
10:49 -BANGKE-: 01:36:054 (96054|0,96054|3,96200|1,96200|3,96200|0,96347|3,96347|0,96493|3,96493|0,96493|2,96639|3,96639|0) - gaween podo kyk ^
10:50 -BANGKE-: 01:37:371 (97371|0) - pindah 3, ojo jack 3 ngene 01:37:371 (97371|0,97518|0,97664|0) -
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:10:152 (130152|3) - pindah ndek 3
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:16:444 (136444|0) - delete, ghost
10:51 -BANGKE-: 02:26:835 - jek onok suarane, add
10:52 -BANGKE-: 02:29:176 (149176|3,149322|3,149469|3) - http://puu.sh/oHUcQ/d10145f688.jpg flow ne lebih enak
10:53 -BANGKE-: 02:32:835 (152835|3,152835|0,152908|1,152981|2,153054|3,153127|2,153127|0,153200|1,153274|2,153347|3) - iki 1/2 dot,
10:53 -BANGKE-: 02:34:883 (154883|2,154883|0) - gk onok suarane
10:54 -BANGKE-: wes yo samono ae :V lagune kedowoen aras"en aku
semuanya ngomen cymbal
pakya
kutukan terlalu lama nggantung. blame frozencyclone
nih apply gih http://puu.sh/oHWdV/e8411a58d1.osu
-[ AmiShici ]-
yo
mod rede
4k=|1|2|3|4|
mod rede
4k=|1|2|3|4|
Click Me!
gl :v[Megummin IN]
- 00:06:200 (6200|2,6200|0,6200|1,6200|3) - why you use 4 note while this you use 3 note. i think better dont make LN and normal note is different. so 1 LN + 2 note = 3 note normal = 3 note LN etc. since this is 4k. there have limit colomb for add note. so yeah :v
- 00:33:713 (33713|1,34005|1,34591|1,34883|3) - etc. what are you following for this note? maybe better delete it. since i think therehave no sound for note o.o
- 00:52:152 (52152|1,52591|2,53322|0,53761|1) - ^
- 00:56:835 (56835|1,56835|3,56835|2) - double is enough thought?
- 00:59:176 (59176|0,59176|3,59176|1) - ^
- 01:01:225 (61225|1,61225|3,61225|0,61371|1,61371|2) - ctrl+G
- 01:10:664 (70664|2) - LN should be start from 01:10:591 -
[doy HD] - 00:34:737 - missing note?
- 00:36:054 (36054|3,36932|0) - delete? ga ada sound
- 00:37:518 (37518|2,37664|2,37810|2) - jacknya cuman di 00:37:518 (37518|2,37664|2) - jadi lebih baik ini 00:37:810 (37810|2) - di pindah ke 2 atau 4
- 00:38:396 (38396|1,39274|1) - ^
- 00:40:591 (40591|2) - ke 1 atau 4
- 00:40:737 - double
Hi Frozen ^^
Req mod from message
Col :1|2|3|4|
Well kirain map berapa menit -,- ternyata durasinya ampun ~~~ T.T
Req mod from message
Col :1|2|3|4|
Well kirain map berapa menit -,- ternyata durasinya ampun ~~~ T.T
doy's Battlefield [HD]
00:06:347 - add note , suara persis kek ini 00:07:518 (7518|1) -
00:08:835 (8835|1,8981|0) - ctrl+g & 00:09:127 (9127|1) - move col 1
jika yang di atas di acc 00:09:274 (9274|3) - move col 2
00:09:566 - add note same here 00:09:274 (9274|2,9274|1) - 00:10:737 (10737|3,10737|2) -
00:14:322 - 00:14:396 - add note lah itu masih ada suara dudududuu :v
00:24:786 - add note same here 00:25:225 (25225|2,25225|3) -
00:32:835 (32835|0,32835|3,32981|2,32981|1) - ctrl+g well soalnya itu same pattern suaranya
00:33:420 - add note ngebass
00:33:566 - ^
00:34:591 (34591|0,34591|1) - LN nya ngikut kemana ini ? :/
00:37:518 (37518|2,37664|2,37810|2) - jack ? :v 00:37:810 (37810|2) - move col 4
00:45:127 - add note
00:47:469 - ^
00:49:810 - ^
00:58:298 (58298|1) - move col 3 biar kerasa flow xD
01:01:810 (61810|2,62103|3) - ctrl+g
01:15:859 (75859|0,75859|2,75859|3,76152|3,76152|1,76152|0,76444|3,76444|0,76444|2) - why triple ? T.T
01:27:274 (87274|3,87274|1,87420|1,87420|3,87566|3,87566|1,87713|1,87713|3,87859|0,87859|2,88005|2,88005|0,88152|0,88152|2) - ini jangan kaya gini di HD
01:36:054 (96054|0,96054|3,96200|3,96347|0,96347|3,96493|0,96493|3,96639|0,96639|3) - ngejack terus :3
01:36:347 (96347|0,96347|3) - pindahin ke 2&3
01:55:371 (115371|2) - move cool 1 keep balanced
02:29:469 (149469|3) - move col 3 hindari jack
02:36:200 (156200|1) - del
03:01:664 (181664|1,181664|2) - geser ke kanan 1 col
03:01:810 (181810|2,181810|3) - geser ke kiri 2 col
03:03:200 - 03:03:274 - add note
03:28:737 (208737|0,208737|3) - jadikan note 2&3
00:06:347 - add note , suara persis kek ini 00:07:518 (7518|1) -
00:08:835 (8835|1,8981|0) - ctrl+g & 00:09:127 (9127|1) - move col 1
jika yang di atas di acc 00:09:274 (9274|3) - move col 2
00:09:566 - add note same here 00:09:274 (9274|2,9274|1) - 00:10:737 (10737|3,10737|2) -
00:14:322 - 00:14:396 - add note lah itu masih ada suara dudududuu :v
00:24:786 - add note same here 00:25:225 (25225|2,25225|3) -
00:32:835 (32835|0,32835|3,32981|2,32981|1) - ctrl+g well soalnya itu same pattern suaranya
00:33:420 - add note ngebass
00:33:566 - ^
00:34:591 (34591|0,34591|1) - LN nya ngikut kemana ini ? :/
00:37:518 (37518|2,37664|2,37810|2) - jack ? :v 00:37:810 (37810|2) - move col 4
00:45:127 - add note
00:47:469 - ^
00:49:810 - ^
00:58:298 (58298|1) - move col 3 biar kerasa flow xD
01:01:810 (61810|2,62103|3) - ctrl+g
01:15:859 (75859|0,75859|2,75859|3,76152|3,76152|1,76152|0,76444|3,76444|0,76444|2) - why triple ? T.T
01:27:274 (87274|3,87274|1,87420|1,87420|3,87566|3,87566|1,87713|1,87713|3,87859|0,87859|2,88005|2,88005|0,88152|0,88152|2) - ini jangan kaya gini di HD
01:36:054 (96054|0,96054|3,96200|3,96347|0,96347|3,96493|0,96493|3,96639|0,96639|3) - ngejack terus :3
01:36:347 (96347|0,96347|3) - pindahin ke 2&3
01:55:371 (115371|2) - move cool 1 keep balanced
02:29:469 (149469|3) - move col 3 hindari jack
02:36:200 (156200|1) - del
03:01:664 (181664|1,181664|2) - geser ke kanan 1 col
03:01:810 (181810|2,181810|3) - geser ke kiri 2 col
03:03:200 - 03:03:274 - add note
03:28:737 (208737|0,208737|3) - jadikan note 2&3
Meggumi's New World [IN]
00:30:054 (30054|1) - move col 3
00:34:883 (34883|3) - missing note ._.
00:54:347 (54347|1,54493|0) - ctrl+g
01:29:908 (89908|2,90054|1) - ^
02:04:152 (124152|1,124298|2) - LN ini ngikut apa ? :/ single ajah
02:21:127 (141127|2,141127|3,141274|2) - LN col 3 single col 4
00:30:054 (30054|1) - move col 3
00:34:883 (34883|3) - missing note ._.
00:54:347 (54347|1,54493|0) - ctrl+g
01:29:908 (89908|2,90054|1) - ^
02:04:152 (124152|1,124298|2) - LN ini ngikut apa ? :/ single ajah
02:21:127 (141127|2,141127|3,141274|2) - LN col 3 single col 4
Ajg.. kemaren ngeluh ga ada yg Mod...doykyoto wrote:
AMPUN MAS. BANYAK BANGET MOD BUAT W
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Topic Starter
Sumbang star dong (
(Sorry for late mods ;(
I was pretty busy handling other tasks. Really sorry
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Feel free to reject my mods, but please explain me why.
Columns : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4
General Checklists
i) BPM & Offsets : √ (Maybe Offset 645?)
ii) Unsnapped things : Notes : √ // Timing points : X - Kiai Unsnapped (All Difficulties), X - Unsnapped SV points (All Difficulties with SV Points, except Reyzra's difficulty)
iii) Song Setups : √
iv) Misc. : △ - Tags exist only in 'Asterisk War [IN]'
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Preperation [EZ]
- All Kiai times: Eh, did you copy every notes from this first kiai time..? 00:52:005 (52005|1,52005|0) ~ 01:20:103 (80103|0) Well, variations in EZ can be pretty irritating, but just copy & pasting every notes may make players bored, and degrade the quality of that difficulty. I suggest to move some notes in other Kiai times.
- Parts after Kiai times : ^^ (Like 01:20:103 (80103|0) ~ 01:28:444 (88444|0) - 03:52:298 (232298|0) ~ 04:00:639 (240639|0))
- 02:44:396 (164396|0) ~ 02:58:591 (178591|0) : Even if it's EZ difficulty, I think this part is too empty. Maybe add some notes, less frequent than NM.
Last Preperation [NM]
- All Kiai times & Parts after Kiai times : Same suggestion as EZ.
- 01:28:444 : Add note to 2
- 01:31:371 (91371|3,91518|2) - Move to 3, 4
- 01:33:713 (93713|1) ~ 01:34:298 (94298|3) - I suggest this pattern : http://puu.sh/oIfKj/074b326e43.png
- 01:48:347 (108347|0) ~ 01:56:249 (116249|0) - Change these notes to LNs like this : http://puu.sh/oIfP4/eeae933578.png - sounds that you're following lasts a bit long.
- 02:33:859 : Add note to 3 - Drumkick in music.
Battle Begins [HD]
- Hitsound volume become 100% (??)
- 00:58:005 (58005|0) - 00:59:176 (59176|3) : Repetition of same pattern. I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgrB/e54f8e546b.png (Don't mind about blue thing). Also can be applied to your similar parts.
- 01:09:713 (69713|0) ~ 01:10:883 (70883|3) - Too empty despite its difficulty. Maybe add some notes every white lines like 4-3-2? (1/4)
- 01:28:444 - Did you intentionally skip this drumkick?
- 02:31:664 (151664|0) - Same as 00:58:005 (58005|0) - 00:59:176 (59176|3) : I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgzZ/78bcdc29ff.png
doy's Battlefield [HD]
- 00:04:444 - Small, but sound exist that you were following. I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgOx/0990fafc1c.png
- 00:14:322 - Drumkicks here, actually. Add note to 1, 2
- 01:13:079 - 'Crash sound' in BGM. Add note to 1, 2
- 01:17:908 (77908|0) - Monotonous stair processing. I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgYT/6c7bf5a922.png
- 02:25:591 ~ 02:25:737 - Some sounds in BGM. Maybe connect them with continuous stairs (like 3-4-3?)
- 03:03:200 - Drumkick here. Add note to 4
- 03:45:274 - Same as 01:13:079, Add note to 3
Asterisk War [IN]
- 00:05:030 (5030|3) - Maybe apply a drumkick. (whistle)
- 00:05:176 (5176|2) - ^^
- 00:10:005 (10005|1) - ^^
- 04:01:810 (241810|2) - Delete : Music ends in blue line. (1/4)
Reyzra's Alternate World [IN]
- 02:57:420 - Add notes & drumkick (Drumkick exist in BGM)
Meggumi's New World [IN]
- 00:56:688 : Add note - Need similar volume of HS compared with below.
- 01:06:054 : ^^
- 01:10:664 (70664|2) - Move to 01:10:591
I, personally suggest that you delete unnecessary or too easy difficulties like EZ or something, or modify some just-copy-and-pasted patterns.
Like I've mentioned above, mere duplication of patterns may decrease the quality of that difficulty.
Please consider about this, and I hope those mod become helpful to you.
Good luck with your beatmap!
I was pretty busy handling other tasks. Really sorry
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Feel free to reject my mods, but please explain me why.
Columns : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4
i) BPM & Offsets : √ (Maybe Offset 645?)
ii) Unsnapped things : Notes : √ // Timing points : X - Kiai Unsnapped (All Difficulties), X - Unsnapped SV points (All Difficulties with SV Points, except Reyzra's difficulty)
iii) Song Setups : √
iv) Misc. : △ - Tags exist only in 'Asterisk War [IN]'
- All Kiai times: Eh, did you copy every notes from this first kiai time..? 00:52:005 (52005|1,52005|0) ~ 01:20:103 (80103|0) Well, variations in EZ can be pretty irritating, but just copy & pasting every notes may make players bored, and degrade the quality of that difficulty. I suggest to move some notes in other Kiai times.
- Parts after Kiai times : ^^ (Like 01:20:103 (80103|0) ~ 01:28:444 (88444|0) - 03:52:298 (232298|0) ~ 04:00:639 (240639|0))
- 02:44:396 (164396|0) ~ 02:58:591 (178591|0) : Even if it's EZ difficulty, I think this part is too empty. Maybe add some notes, less frequent than NM.
- All Kiai times & Parts after Kiai times : Same suggestion as EZ.
- 01:28:444 : Add note to 2
- 01:31:371 (91371|3,91518|2) - Move to 3, 4
- 01:33:713 (93713|1) ~ 01:34:298 (94298|3) - I suggest this pattern : http://puu.sh/oIfKj/074b326e43.png
- 01:48:347 (108347|0) ~ 01:56:249 (116249|0) - Change these notes to LNs like this : http://puu.sh/oIfP4/eeae933578.png - sounds that you're following lasts a bit long.
- 02:33:859 : Add note to 3 - Drumkick in music.
- Hitsound volume become 100% (??)
- 00:58:005 (58005|0) - 00:59:176 (59176|3) : Repetition of same pattern. I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgrB/e54f8e546b.png (Don't mind about blue thing). Also can be applied to your similar parts.
- 01:09:713 (69713|0) ~ 01:10:883 (70883|3) - Too empty despite its difficulty. Maybe add some notes every white lines like 4-3-2? (1/4)
- 01:28:444 - Did you intentionally skip this drumkick?
- 02:31:664 (151664|0) - Same as 00:58:005 (58005|0) - 00:59:176 (59176|3) : I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgzZ/78bcdc29ff.png
- 00:04:444 - Small, but sound exist that you were following. I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgOx/0990fafc1c.png
- 00:14:322 - Drumkicks here, actually. Add note to 1, 2
- 01:13:079 - 'Crash sound' in BGM. Add note to 1, 2
- 01:17:908 (77908|0) - Monotonous stair processing. I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgYT/6c7bf5a922.png
- 02:25:591 ~ 02:25:737 - Some sounds in BGM. Maybe connect them with continuous stairs (like 3-4-3?)
- 03:03:200 - Drumkick here. Add note to 4
- 03:45:274 - Same as 01:13:079, Add note to 3
- 00:05:030 (5030|3) - Maybe apply a drumkick. (whistle)
- 00:05:176 (5176|2) - ^^
- 00:10:005 (10005|1) - ^^
- 04:01:810 (241810|2) - Delete : Music ends in blue line. (1/4)
- 02:57:420 - Add notes & drumkick (Drumkick exist in BGM)
- 00:56:688 : Add note - Need similar volume of HS compared with below.
- 01:06:054 : ^^
- 01:10:664 (70664|2) - Move to 01:10:591
I, personally suggest that you delete unnecessary or too easy difficulties like EZ or something, or modify some just-copy-and-pasted patterns.
Like I've mentioned above, mere duplication of patterns may decrease the quality of that difficulty.
Please consider about this, and I hope those mod become helpful to you.
Good luck with your beatmap!
thanks for the modCometicRush wrote:
Sorry for late mods ;(
I was pretty busy handling other tasks. Really sorry
----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Feel free to reject my mods, but please explain me why.
Columns : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4General Checklists
i) BPM & Offsets : √ (Maybe Offset 645?)
ii) Unsnapped things : Notes : √ // Timing points : X - Kiai Unsnapped (All Difficulties), X - Unsnapped SV points (All Difficulties with SV Points, except Reyzra's difficulty)
iii) Song Setups : √
iv) Misc. : △ - Tags exist only in 'Asterisk War [IN]'------------------------------------- Reyzra's Alternate World [IN]
- 02:57:420 - Add notes & drumkick Applied (Drumkick exist in BGM)
I, personally suggest that you delete unnecessary or too easy difficulties like EZ or something, or modify some just-copy-and-pasted patterns.
Like I've mentioned above, mere duplication of patterns may decrease the quality of that difficulty.
Please consider about this, and I hope those mod become helpful to you.
Good luck with your beatmap!
nih froze diff ane upgrade jd 5* lol
http://puu.sh/oIt44/77bd51a39c.rar
Topic Starter
SEDAP COEGGG :VReyzra wrote:
thanks for the mod
nih froze diff ane upgrade jd 5* lol
http://puu.sh/oIt44/77bd51a39c.rar
Topic Starter
Udh dot --doykyoto wrote:
apdet diff w COEG. jaad beud lu
mod lanjutan
1|2|3|4
goodluck guys!
1|2|3|4
Reyzra SHD
- 00:02:987 (2987|3,2987|0,2987|1) - nih napa kok 3 hitsound? 1 aja cukup, biar ga terlalu nggghhh gimana geto :^)
- 00:02:402 (2402|3,2402|0) - ^ ini juga, 1 aja
- 00:14:694 (14694|0,14694|3,14694|2) - ^
- 00:15:280 (15280|3,15280|0,15280|1) - ^ dll.
- 00:32:987 (32987|1) - pindah ke 1, avoid jack 00:32:694 (32694|1,32841|1,32987|1) -
- 00:36:499 (36499|1,36499|0,36499|2,36499|3) - wadooo 4? ini 3 lho sama" snarenya padahal 00:36:206 (36206|2,36206|1,36206|3) -
- 00:42:792 (42792|2,42792|3,42792|1,42792|0) - suaranya ga terlalu keras kek 00:41:914 (41914|3,41914|0,41914|2,41914|1) - , jadi pake 2 atau 3 saja cukup, but prefer ke 2 sih menurut gw
- 00:51:719 (51719|3) - vocal kan ya, kalo ya harusnya berenti di sini suara vocal nya 00:51:865 - , coba denger pake 25% PR
- 00:56:841 (56841|3,56841|0,56841|2) - cymbal kok 3? konsistensi la sama ini 00:54:353 (54353|1,54353|0,54353|2,54353|3) -
- 01:06:206 (66206|0,66206|1,66206|3) - same reason ^
- 01:08:841 (68841|1,68841|2,68841|0,68841|3) - snare 4 note?
- 01:09:426 (69426|3,69572|3,69719|3,69865|3) - wado stack 4, coba" di arrange" lagi aja biar ga stack 4 gini
- 01:38:987 (98987|3,98987|1,98987|0,98987|2,99280|0,99280|1,99280|2,99280|3,99572|3,99572|1,99572|0,99572|2) - gw ga ngerti :/ kok 4 smua? di note" sebelumnya snare make 3 note lho, 4 di cymbal
- 01:41:328 (101328|3,101328|1,101328|2,101328|0,101621|1,101621|2,101621|0,101621|3,101914|1,101914|2,101914|0,101914|3) - ^
- 01:43:670 (103670|2,103670|0,103670|1,103670|3,103963|0,103963|1,103963|3,103963|2,104255|2,104255|1,104255|3,104255|0) - ^
- 01:46:011 (106011|3,106011|2,106011|1,106011|0,106304|1,106304|3,106304|0,106304|2,106597|0,106597|3,106597|1,106597|2) - ^
- 02:06:645 (126645|2) - nih sama yg tadi, vocal nya end di sini 02:06:792 -
- 02:13:816 (133816|2,133816|3,133816|0,133816|1) - snare 4 note?
- 02:23:182 (143182|1,143182|2,143182|0,143182|3) - ^
- 03:03:206 (183206|2) - nih LN harusnya end di sini 03:04:450 -
- 03:06:499 (186499|3,186499|2,186499|0) - 03:11:182 (191182|3,191182|0,191182|1) - 03:15:865 (195865|0,195865|1,195865|3) - yakin 3 note? suaranya ga keras, lagian ini kan rest part, part" sebelumnya udah killer, jadi layer 2 note saja cukup
- 03:23:914 (203914|1) - sama kyk yg vocal tadi
- 03:29:036 - 03:32:841 - wow sv part, idnt get it, lebih baik di remove atau nanti kena gamplang bn di sv part
- 03:38:694 - ^
- 03:38:694 (218694|0,218694|1,218694|2,218694|3,219280|2,219280|3,219280|0,219280|1) - snare 4 note? di sini 3 lho 03:29:328 (209328|2,209328|3,209328|0,209914|3,209914|2,209914|0) -
goodluck guys!
AHAHAHAAdinata28 wrote:
Ajg.. kemaren ngeluh ga ada yg Mod...doykyoto wrote:
AMPUN MAS. BANYAK BANGET MOD BUAT W
~~~
Rekt...
CometicRush wrote:
doy's Battlefield [HD]
- 00:04:444 - Small, but sound exist that you were following. I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgOx/0990fafc1c.png
- 00:14:322 - Drumkicks here, actually. Add note to 1, 2
- 01:13:079 - 'Crash sound' in BGM. Add note to 1, 2
- 01:17:908 (77908|0) - Monotonous stair processing. I suggest this : http://puu.sh/oIgYT/6c7bf5a922.png
- 02:25:591 ~ 02:25:737 - Some sounds in BGM. Maybe connect them with continuous stairs (like 3-4-3?)
- 03:03:200 - Drumkick here. Add note to 4
- 03:45:274 - Same as 01:13:079, Add note to 3
thank you
btw.. sori.. emang yg kukasih bukan updateanya diff w AKWOKWOWKOWKW
ini yg baru... gl http://puu.sh/oIW9Y/54574e56a6.osu
ke upgrade dikit
Topic Starter
no one mod my diff?
okay then :v
okay then :v
really busy for the week, i wont be able to mod soooo have some stars :c
Topic Starter
THANK YOUUU >.<Lenfried- wrote:
really busy for the week, i wont be able to mod soooo have some stars :c
thanks for the mod -BANGKE--BANGKE- wrote:
mod lanjutan
1|2|3|4Reyzra SHD
- 00:02:987 (2987|3,2987|0,2987|1) - nih napa kok 3 hitsound? 1 aja cukup, biar ga terlalu nggghhh gimana geto :^) konsiten dari sininya mas
- 00:02:402 (2402|3,2402|0) - ^ ini juga, 1 aja pitch relatif tinggi drpd yg 1 note
- 00:14:694 (14694|0,14694|3,14694|2) - ^ ^
- 00:15:280 (15280|3,15280|0,15280|1) - ^ dll. ^
- 00:32:987 (32987|1) - pindah ke 1, avoid jack 00:32:694 (32694|1,32841|1,32987|1) - aplied
- 00:36:499 (36499|1,36499|0,36499|2,36499|3) - wadooo 4? ini 3 lho sama" snarenya padahal 00:36:206 (36206|2,36206|1,36206|3) - lupa delete lol
- 00:42:792 (42792|2,42792|3,42792|1,42792|0) - suaranya ga terlalu keras kek 00:41:914 (41914|3,41914|0,41914|2,41914|1) - , jadi pake 2 atau 3 saja cukup, but prefer ke 2 sih menurut gw ok drop ke 3
- 00:51:719 (51719|3) - vocal kan ya, kalo ya harusnya berenti di sini suara vocal nya 00:51:865 - , coba denger pake 25% PR ssh klo lepas LN nya mnding samakan aja
- 00:56:841 (56841|3,56841|0,56841|2) - cymbal kok 3? konsistensi la sama ini 00:54:353 (54353|1,54353|0,54353|2,54353|3) - applied
- 01:06:206 (66206|0,66206|1,66206|3) - same reason ^ aplied
- 01:08:841 (68841|1,68841|2,68841|0,68841|3) - snare 4 note?
- 01:09:426 (69426|3,69572|3,69719|3,69865|3) - wado stack 4, coba" di arrange" lagi aja biar ga stack 4 gini ok
- 01:38:987 (98987|3,98987|1,98987|0,98987|2,99280|0,99280|1,99280|2,99280|3,99572|3,99572|1,99572|0,99572|2) - gw ga ngerti :/ kok 4 smua? di note" sebelumnya snare make 3 note lho, 4 di cymbal ok aplied
- 01:41:328 (101328|3,101328|1,101328|2,101328|0,101621|1,101621|2,101621|0,101621|3,101914|1,101914|2,101914|0,101914|3) - ^ ^
- 01:43:670 (103670|2,103670|0,103670|1,103670|3,103963|0,103963|1,103963|3,103963|2,104255|2,104255|1,104255|3,104255|0) - ^ ^
- 01:46:011 (106011|3,106011|2,106011|1,106011|0,106304|1,106304|3,106304|0,106304|2,106597|0,106597|3,106597|1,106597|2) - ^ ^
- 02:06:645 (126645|2) - nih sama yg tadi, vocal nya end di sini 02:06:792 - nay ada sv
- 02:13:816 (133816|2,133816|3,133816|0,133816|1) - snare 4 note? deleted
- 02:23:182 (143182|1,143182|2,143182|0,143182|3) - ^ ^
- 03:03:206 (183206|2) - nih LN harusnya end di sini 03:04:450 - msh ada suara menurut ane tp kecil
- 03:06:499 (186499|3,186499|2,186499|0) - 03:11:182 (191182|3,191182|0,191182|1) - 03:15:865 (195865|0,195865|1,195865|3) - yakin 3 note? suaranya ga keras, lagian ini kan rest part, part" sebelumnya udah killer, jadi layer 2 note saja cukup ok
- 03:23:914 (203914|1) - sama kyk yg vocal tadi
- 03:29:036 - 03:32:841 - wow sv part, idnt get it, lebih baik di remove atau nanti kena gamplang bn di sv part for vatiation antar reff, sama jd boring ntar
- 03:38:694 - ^ ^
- 03:38:694 (218694|0,218694|1,218694|2,218694|3,219280|2,219280|3,219280|0,219280|1) - snare 4 note? di sini 3 lho 03:29:328 (209328|2,209328|3,209328|0,209914|3,209914|2,209914|0) - deleted
goodluck guys!
Update
http://puu.sh/oJaHz/e30809e3f1.rar
wew, sorry for the late delay 
i will just the mod hardest diff i guess
[box=Reyzra's Alternate World [SHD:1337]]00:04:597 (4597|1) - the LN should stop at 00:04:743 - the long sound stopped at there
00:14:694 (14694|0,14694|2,14694|3) - there isn't need to have triple here, the sound isn't that strong enough to have triple
00:15:280 (15280|0,15280|1,15280|3) - not sure why this is triple..is kinda random here
00:15:719 (15719|0,15719|3,16011|2,16011|0,16304|0,16304|2,16450|1,16450|3) - reason for double? i think they all have the same sound like all these single note here. 00:17:036 (17036|3,17036|0) - here i can see why is double.
00:19:085 (19085|0,19085|2,19085|3) - and so on for all these triple, i think is too much here, better reduce it
00:23:182 (23182|0,23328|1,23475|2) - these guitar sound should end at 00:23:475 -
00:34:889 (34889|1) - remove? since u only focus on loud drum and kick and 00:36:353 - u empty this space too
00:40:743 (40743|3,40743|1,40743|0,40743|2,41036|1,41036|2,41036|3,41036|0,41621|2,41621|0,41621|1,41621|3,41914|1,41914|0,41914|3,41914|2) - quad note doesn't seems good here, unless they have clap + crash sound, make triple should be enough
01:05:475 (65475|1) - delete this better to make a flow here like u did at 01:01:963 -
01:24:060 - double note?
01:25:524 (85524|1,85524|3) - remove a note here since there isn't any loud kick here
01:27:280 (87280|2,87280|0,87280|3,87280|1,87426|0,87426|3,87426|2,87426|1,87572|3,87572|0,87572|1,87572|2,87719|0,87719|3,87719|1,87719|2,87865|3,87865|0,87865|1,87865|2,88011|2,88011|0,88011|3,88011|1,88158|2,88158|1,88158|0,88158|3,88304|0,88304|3,88304|2,88304|1) - i think is just kind of too plain for this pattern, is just feel like spamming it, making them triple note would be nice to variate the pattern here
01:29:036 (89036|2,89036|3,89036|0) - there is no need triple here, is just a normal sound
01:39:280 (99280|0,99280|3,99280|2,99572|2,99572|1,99572|0) - make them double here for consistency at 01:41:328 (101328|3,101328|2,101621|3,101621|1,101914|3,101914|0) -
03:01:085 (181085|2,181085|0,181085|3,181231|3,181231|1,181231|0,181377|3,181377|2,181377|0,181524|0,181524|3,181524|1,181670|0,181670|2,181670|3,181816|0,181816|3,181816|1,181963|0,181963|2,181963|3) - double for kick here is fine
03:32:987 (212987|2) - would prefer to remove this note for better pattern flow
03:37:816 - should be double note here
03:59:475 (239475|0,239475|1,239475|3,239475|2,239621|2,239621|0,239621|3,239621|1,239767|1,239767|3,239767|0,239767|2,239914|0,239914|2,239914|3,239914|1,240060|1,240060|3,240060|0,240060|2,240206|1,240206|0,240206|2,240206|3,240353|2,240353|0,240353|3,240353|1,240499|2,240499|0,240499|1,240499|3) - like before, just my suggestion
Good Luck~
i will just the mod hardest diff i guess
[box=Reyzra's Alternate World [SHD:1337]]00:04:597 (4597|1) - the LN should stop at 00:04:743 - the long sound stopped at there
00:14:694 (14694|0,14694|2,14694|3) - there isn't need to have triple here, the sound isn't that strong enough to have triple
00:15:280 (15280|0,15280|1,15280|3) - not sure why this is triple..is kinda random here
00:15:719 (15719|0,15719|3,16011|2,16011|0,16304|0,16304|2,16450|1,16450|3) - reason for double? i think they all have the same sound like all these single note here. 00:17:036 (17036|3,17036|0) - here i can see why is double.
00:19:085 (19085|0,19085|2,19085|3) - and so on for all these triple, i think is too much here, better reduce it
00:23:182 (23182|0,23328|1,23475|2) - these guitar sound should end at 00:23:475 -
00:34:889 (34889|1) - remove? since u only focus on loud drum and kick and 00:36:353 - u empty this space too
00:40:743 (40743|3,40743|1,40743|0,40743|2,41036|1,41036|2,41036|3,41036|0,41621|2,41621|0,41621|1,41621|3,41914|1,41914|0,41914|3,41914|2) - quad note doesn't seems good here, unless they have clap + crash sound, make triple should be enough
01:05:475 (65475|1) - delete this better to make a flow here like u did at 01:01:963 -
01:24:060 - double note?
01:25:524 (85524|1,85524|3) - remove a note here since there isn't any loud kick here
01:27:280 (87280|2,87280|0,87280|3,87280|1,87426|0,87426|3,87426|2,87426|1,87572|3,87572|0,87572|1,87572|2,87719|0,87719|3,87719|1,87719|2,87865|3,87865|0,87865|1,87865|2,88011|2,88011|0,88011|3,88011|1,88158|2,88158|1,88158|0,88158|3,88304|0,88304|3,88304|2,88304|1) - i think is just kind of too plain for this pattern, is just feel like spamming it, making them triple note would be nice to variate the pattern here
01:29:036 (89036|2,89036|3,89036|0) - there is no need triple here, is just a normal sound
01:39:280 (99280|0,99280|3,99280|2,99572|2,99572|1,99572|0) - make them double here for consistency at 01:41:328 (101328|3,101328|2,101621|3,101621|1,101914|3,101914|0) -
03:01:085 (181085|2,181085|0,181085|3,181231|3,181231|1,181231|0,181377|3,181377|2,181377|0,181524|0,181524|3,181524|1,181670|0,181670|2,181670|3,181816|0,181816|3,181816|1,181963|0,181963|2,181963|3) - double for kick here is fine
03:32:987 (212987|2) - would prefer to remove this note for better pattern flow
03:37:816 - should be double note here
03:59:475 (239475|0,239475|1,239475|3,239475|2,239621|2,239621|0,239621|3,239621|1,239767|1,239767|3,239767|0,239767|2,239914|0,239914|2,239914|3,239914|1,240060|1,240060|3,240060|0,240060|2,240206|1,240206|0,240206|2,240206|3,240353|2,240353|0,240353|3,240353|1,240499|2,240499|0,240499|1,240499|3) - like before, just my suggestion
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Critical_Star wrote:
wew, sorry for the late delay
i will just the mod hardest diff i guess
[box=Reyzra's Alternate World [SHD:1337]]00:04:597 (4597|1) - the LN should stop at 00:04:743 - the long sound stopped at there
00:14:694 (14694|0,14694|2,14694|3) - there isn't need to have triple here, the sound isn't that strong enough to have triple
00:15:280 (15280|0,15280|1,15280|3) - not sure why this is triple..is kinda random here
00:15:719 (15719|0,15719|3,16011|2,16011|0,16304|0,16304|2,16450|1,16450|3) - reason for double? i think they all have the same sound like all these single note here. 00:17:036 (17036|3,17036|0) - here i can see why is double.
00:19:085 (19085|0,19085|2,19085|3) - and so on for all these triple, i think is too much here, better reduce it
00:23:182 (23182|0,23328|1,23475|2) - these guitar sound should end at 00:23:475 -
00:34:889 (34889|1) - remove? since u only focus on loud drum and kick and 00:36:353 - u empty this space too
00:40:743 (40743|3,40743|1,40743|0,40743|2,41036|1,41036|2,41036|3,41036|0,41621|2,41621|0,41621|1,41621|3,41914|1,41914|0,41914|3,41914|2) - quad note doesn't seems good here, unless they have clap + crash sound, make triple should be enough
01:05:475 (65475|1) - delete this better to make a flow here like u did at 01:01:963 -
01:24:060 - double note?
01:25:524 (85524|1,85524|3) - remove a note here since there isn't any loud kick here
01:27:280 (87280|2,87280|0,87280|3,87280|1,87426|0,87426|3,87426|2,87426|1,87572|3,87572|0,87572|1,87572|2,87719|0,87719|3,87719|1,87719|2,87865|3,87865|0,87865|1,87865|2,88011|2,88011|0,88011|3,88011|1,88158|2,88158|1,88158|0,88158|3,88304|0,88304|3,88304|2,88304|1) - i think is just kind of too plain for this pattern, is just feel like spamming it, making them triple note would be nice to variate the pattern here
01:29:036 (89036|2,89036|3,89036|0) - there is no need triple here, is just a normal sound
01:39:280 (99280|0,99280|3,99280|2,99572|2,99572|1,99572|0) - make them double here for consistency at 01:41:328 (101328|3,101328|2,101621|3,101621|1,101914|3,101914|0) -
03:01:085 (181085|2,181085|0,181085|3,181231|3,181231|1,181231|0,181377|3,181377|2,181377|0,181524|0,181524|3,181524|1,181670|0,181670|2,181670|3,181816|0,181816|3,181816|1,181963|0,181963|2,181963|3) - double for kick here is fine
03:32:987 (212987|2) - would prefer to remove this note for better pattern flow
03:37:816 - should be double note here
03:59:475 (239475|0,239475|1,239475|3,239475|2,239621|2,239621|0,239621|3,239621|1,239767|1,239767|3,239767|0,239767|2,239914|0,239914|2,239914|3,239914|1,240060|1,240060|3,240060|0,240060|2,240206|1,240206|0,240206|2,240206|3,240353|2,240353|0,240353|3,240353|1,240499|2,240499|0,240499|1,240499|3) - like before, just my suggestion
Good Luck~
why don't u mod all of the diff? ._.frozencyclone wrote:
Critical_Star wrote:
wew, sorry for the late delay
i will just the mod hardest diff i guess
[box=Reyzra's Alternate World [SHD:1337]]00:04:597 (4597|1) - the LN should stop at 00:04:743 - the long sound stopped at there
00:14:694 (14694|0,14694|2,14694|3) - there isn't need to have triple here, the sound isn't that strong enough to have triple
00:15:280 (15280|0,15280|1,15280|3) - not sure why this is triple..is kinda random here
00:15:719 (15719|0,15719|3,16011|2,16011|0,16304|0,16304|2,16450|1,16450|3) - reason for double? i think they all have the same sound like all these single note here. 00:17:036 (17036|3,17036|0) - here i can see why is double.
00:19:085 (19085|0,19085|2,19085|3) - and so on for all these triple, i think is too much here, better reduce it
00:23:182 (23182|0,23328|1,23475|2) - these guitar sound should end at 00:23:475 -
00:34:889 (34889|1) - remove? since u only focus on loud drum and kick and 00:36:353 - u empty this space too
00:40:743 (40743|3,40743|1,40743|0,40743|2,41036|1,41036|2,41036|3,41036|0,41621|2,41621|0,41621|1,41621|3,41914|1,41914|0,41914|3,41914|2) - quad note doesn't seems good here, unless they have clap + crash sound, make triple should be enough
01:05:475 (65475|1) - delete this better to make a flow here like u did at 01:01:963 -
01:24:060 - double note?
01:25:524 (85524|1,85524|3) - remove a note here since there isn't any loud kick here
01:27:280 (87280|2,87280|0,87280|3,87280|1,87426|0,87426|3,87426|2,87426|1,87572|3,87572|0,87572|1,87572|2,87719|0,87719|3,87719|1,87719|2,87865|3,87865|0,87865|1,87865|2,88011|2,88011|0,88011|3,88011|1,88158|2,88158|1,88158|0,88158|3,88304|0,88304|3,88304|2,88304|1) - i think is just kind of too plain for this pattern, is just feel like spamming it, making them triple note would be nice to variate the pattern here
01:29:036 (89036|2,89036|3,89036|0) - there is no need triple here, is just a normal sound
01:39:280 (99280|0,99280|3,99280|2,99572|2,99572|1,99572|0) - make them double here for consistency at 01:41:328 (101328|3,101328|2,101621|3,101621|1,101914|3,101914|0) -
03:01:085 (181085|2,181085|0,181085|3,181231|3,181231|1,181231|0,181377|3,181377|2,181377|0,181524|0,181524|3,181524|1,181670|0,181670|2,181670|3,181816|0,181816|3,181816|1,181963|0,181963|2,181963|3) - double for kick here is fine
03:32:987 (212987|2) - would prefer to remove this note for better pattern flow
03:37:816 - should be double note here
03:59:475 (239475|0,239475|1,239475|3,239475|2,239621|2,239621|0,239621|3,239621|1,239767|1,239767|3,239767|0,239767|2,239914|0,239914|2,239914|3,239914|1,240060|1,240060|3,240060|0,240060|2,240206|1,240206|0,240206|2,240206|3,240353|2,240353|0,240353|3,240353|1,240499|2,240499|0,240499|1,240499|3) - like before, just my suggestion
Good Luck~
why don't u mod all of the diff? ._.;w;w sorry my time ran out, maybe i will try to mod other diff some other time ... 