00:16:990 - this section actually should be considered to be improved, because what i heard from the music they have bass on their drum which is make it feel that this should be good place for double pattern, it's different from what u map. you shouldn't put on the same column. what i see from here that u only mapped the drum with double, what i mean is you should make a pedal pattern
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http://puu.sh/nSdc7/6a144a729a.jpg00:18:865 -
http://puu.sh/nSdfl/3df277fe38.png00:20:623 -
http://puu.sh/nSdkY/73611efb98.jpg -
These patterns are improved already with my self mod \o/00:21:912 - there's no drum beat here, it's only buzz or 1/8 sound, so it shouldn't be double because it's only 1 instrument while there 00:22:146 - u should put the double, and i also suggest some easy pattern for it which is because u use to much 12 34 trill :
http://puu.sh/nSdFa/37e9c73aa7.png -
Same00:23:259 - miss kick here
00:23:259 - add to 4 and then 00:23:318 (23318|3) - move to 2 -
Fixed with my intended!00:24:255 (24255|1,24490|0) - Ctrl+J this which is fit with the pitch also improve your pattern variety -
It was also improved with my self-mod lool 00:26:013 (26013|3,26013|2,26072|1,26072|0,26130|3,26130|2,26248|1,26248|0,26365|3,26365|2,26423|1,26423|0,26482|2,26482|3,26599|0,26599|1) - these, feels like play 2K, i really suggest to rearrange the double at the single tap of the drum like this
http://puu.sh/nSdXg/96ca453e3d.jpg -
Nice00:30:876 - Should add note here for the drum -
I considered about playable so I didn't add there00:31:638 - Add triple note here and 00:32:693 (32693|3) - Move this to 4 -
Fixed00:33:220 (33220|1,33279|2) - change to double, u can use pattern 14 23 14 to represent the drum beat -
Have a lof of change on there, almost using only a one note now00:34:568 - the pattern is really repeating here which hard to identify what u map here pls rearrange some of it like this
http://puu.sh/nSerr/3bd998c7a3.png single tap drum use [14] double -
Had some changed!00:37:849 (37849|1) - better move up to 00:37:439 - this triple is not consistent, mostly on this parts for the snare only use 2 notes. if u change it pls check the hitsound too -
Same00:38:084 (38084|3,38084|2,38142|0,38142|1,38201|2,38201|3,38259|1,38259|0,38318|3,38318|2) - i dont understand this, the drum was too low to be mapped double -
Changed with some intended patterns00:38:787 (38787|1) - move up to 00:38:845 - same reason with 00:37:849
00:43:591 - some parts here should be improved, what i see here that there's double spam here. i suggest u to remove some note on the last part when there isnot vocal sound
http://puu.sh/nSfgI/f75bbd91c2.jpg -
Sure01:22:263 (82263|1,82263|2,82380|1,82380|2,82498|1,82498|2,82615|1,82615|2,82732|1,82732|2) - comes different vocal, i suggest to change this double structure to [14] double instead of [23] -
amm Sorry but I want to keep here ;w;01:36:267 (96267|3,96326|0,96326|2,96384|3,96443|1,96443|2) - check this pattern 01:36:267 (96267|3) - this note should be deleted while 01:36:384 (96384|3) - this note should be double instead -
Self modded!01:40:544 (100544|0,100544|2,100603|1,100603|3,100662|0,100662|2,100691|1,100720|3,100750|2,100779|0,100808|1,100837|3,100867|2,100896|1,100896|0) - rearrange this pattern, this is really common pattern on this diff
http://puu.sh/nSfHB/05d42fe02b.jpg -
Changed simliar01:42:478 (102478|0,102507|3) - a long gap at 1/8 may cause some miss accuracy when hit pls, make it easier to read. i suggest
http://puu.sh/nSfHB/05d42fe02b.jpg -
hmm sorry but I want to keep here01:54:959 - At this point i hear drum hits when the buzz sound started, consider rearrange you double note around here that, from what i heard
01:55:105 - 01:55:281 - 01:55:574 - 01:55:750 - 01:55:427 - Every note here should be double because of the drum sounds,pls rearrange it, and also if u fix this, u should apply it on EXTRA difficulty too -
Here is what I intended, I putted two notes at some "new start sound" maybe you can here it with 25% playback there are (Two notes) having some powerful starting of 1/8 ;w;