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Mafumafu

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Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2016-03-13T04:20:43+00:00

[General]
1. Why not adding some tags? At least it's from a TV Series or something like that I guess?
2. The current combo color set is beautiful however it's quite similar, strongly recommend to make a change.
3. Do you have a source for the meatdata?
[Easy]
00:48:041 (1) - fix DS to 1.0x (Now it's 1.1x)

[Normal]
AR +0.5 OD +0.5 HP +0.5
00:03:657 (3,4) - fix DS to 1.0x
00:45:243 - Blanket ><
01:08:589 (4,1) - Fix DS to 1.0x
01:11:671 (5,6) - Snap it prefectly (1 grid)
01:12:698 (1) - 0.95x 01:14:342 (3) - 1.07x better fix them to 1.0x ><

[Hard]
AR -0.5 HP -0.5

00:54:616 (1) - Remove, no sound here.
01:02:322 (4) - Remove, this is more like an overmap here. Same at 01:15:472 (4) -
01:21:637 (5) - Add a note here. There's a 1/4.
01:21:739 (1) - Remove NC and 01:22:561 (2) - NC

[Insane]

00:12:287 (3) - The first several reverses are not 1/4. Should be changed to http://puu.sh/nEAXq/b0ca3907d8.jpg
00:13:931 (4) - Same as above, recommend: http://puu.sh/nEB1j/b9ebdfa5dc.jpg
00:17:630 (3,4,5,6) - Also the vocal here is not snapped, and also the triplet sounds overmapped, try this instead: http://puu.sh/nEBdl/40c4cf5f32.jpg
00:20:815 (6) - Remove, overmapped
00:52:972 (1,2) - Too large spacing, try to reduce it. http://puu.sh/nECiq/33725ff3a5.jpg Same at 01:08:589 (1,2) -
00:54:616 (1) - Remove
00:59:753 There's a vocal in the middle of slider, it need to be mapped out. Same at 01:04:479 (1) - and 01:06:123 (1) -
01:00:780 (4,1,2) - The vocal here falls on the end of these sliders, which sounds not appropriate. Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/nECtY/7c25c315f0.jpg

01:02:322 (5) - Remove (Overmapped)
01:15:061 (4) - Remove (Overmapped) Same at 01:20:815 (6) -
01:19:274 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/nECCI/c5559fc4b0.jpg

Call me back after you fix these!

Doyak

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Doyak 2016-03-13T05:43:15+00:00

저는 '이렇게 하면 조금 더 낫게 표현할 수 있지 않을까' 싶은 것들을 제안한 거였는데 하비님은 '지금도 괜찮으니 안 고치겠다' 라고 하셨네요. 물론 지금도 박자가 어긋났다거나 한 건 아니지만, 노래가 부분부분 격변을 하고 있는 것에 비해 맵의 흐름에는 변화가 없이 너무 일관적으로만 흘러가고 있어서 제안해 본 것들이었습니다. 저는 맵이 노래의 분위기를 타고 좀 더 움직이면 좋겠는데, 지금은 그냥 처음부터 끝까지 무난하게 베이스만 깔아주는 느낌이라 밋밋하다고 느껴지는 건 어쩔 수가 없네요.

이 맵만 그런 게 아니고 하비님이 찍는 쉬운 난이도들에서는 공통적으로 제가 느끼는 바입니다.

그리고 오프셋이... '별로 차이가 없다'라고 하셨는데 나잇코어 모드 켜고 해보셨는지요? 심벌 소리가 주기적으로 나는데 이게 빨간 선 지점으로부터 8마디마다 한 번씩 나기 때문에 어긋나면 듣기가 별로 안 좋습니다. 아마 알고 계실 거라고 생각하는데요, 더 낫게 만들 수 있다면 고치지 않을 이유를 모르겠네요.

이지 - 노말 - 하드 지금도 문제가 될 정도는 아니지만, 단순히 '괜찮은' 것과 '더 좋게 하는' 건 완전히 다르다는 것도 알고 계실 겁니다. 지금은 아무리 봐도 이지 - 노말이 매우 가깝게 붙고 하드는 점프만 없다 뿐이지 많은 1/2과 연타들까지 쓰면서 꽤나 차이가 벌어진 느낌이네요. 딱히 이제 와서 고치라고 하진 않겠지만, 그냥 그렇다는 걸 인지라도 해주신다면 했습니다.

AR OD HP 설정은... Regraz도 비슷하게 지적했으니 고치시겠죠 뭐...

인세인에 00:57:904 (1) - 01:19:274 (1) - 이건 한 번 더 이야기하고 싶은데, 지금 슬라이더가 의미하는 게 뭔지 모르겠습니다. 저 슬라이더 자체에 해당하는 소리도 하나도 없고, 보컬은 슬라이더 안의 빨간 선에서 시작하는지라 걸리지 않고, 슬라이더 끝에는 정말 아무것도 들어있지가 않습니다. Regraz는 뒷부분만 지적을 했는데 여기는 3/4 슬라이더를 쓰는 것보단 1/2 박에 맞추어 써주는 게 훨씬 더 어울린다고 생각합니다. 보통 저렇게 3/4으로 끌어주는 슬라이더는 그 슬라이더의 시작 부분에서 시작한 소리가 길게 끌어서 다음 1/1까지 진행할 때 둘 다 클릭으로 만들어주기 위해 적당히 끌고 가다가 끊어주는 역할을 하는건데 지금은 정말 이도저도 아닌 것 같습니다.

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2016-03-13T06:32:08+00:00

Regraz wrote:
[General]
1. Why not adding some tags? At least it's from a TV Series or something like that I guess?
2. The current combo color set is beautiful however it's quite similar, strongly recommend to make a change.
3. Do you have a source for the meatdata?
[Easy]
00:48:041 (1) - fix DS to 1.0x (Now it's 1.1x)

[Normal]
AR +0.5 OD +0.5 HP +0.5
00:03:657 (3,4) - fix DS to 1.0x
00:45:243 - Blanket ><
01:08:589 (4,1) - Fix DS to 1.0x
01:11:671 (5,6) - Snap it prefectly (1 grid)
01:12:698 (1) - 0.95x 01:14:342 (3) - 1.07x better fix them to 1.0x ><

[Hard]
AR -0.5 HP -0.5

00:54:616 (1) - Remove, no sound here.
01:02:322 (4) - Remove, this is more like an overmap here. Same at 01:15:472 (4) -
01:21:637 (5) - Add a note here. There's a 1/4.
01:21:739 (1) - Remove NC and 01:22:561 (2) - NC

[Insane]

00:12:287 (3) - The first several reverses are not 1/4. Should be changed to http://puu.sh/nEAXq/b0ca3907d8.jpg
00:13:931 (4) - Same as above, recommend: http://puu.sh/nEB1j/b9ebdfa5dc.jpg
00:17:630 (3,4,5,6) - Also the vocal here is not snapped, and also the triplet sounds overmapped, try this instead: http://puu.sh/nEBdl/40c4cf5f32.jpg
00:20:815 (6) - Remove, overmapped
00:52:972 (1,2) - Too large spacing, try to reduce it. http://puu.sh/nECiq/33725ff3a5.jpg Same at 01:08:589 (1,2) -
00:54:616 (1) - Remove
00:59:753 There's a vocal in the middle of slider, it need to be mapped out. Same at 01:04:479 (1) - and 01:06:123 (1) - // Kip This... now better!
01:00:780 (4,1,2) - The vocal here falls on the end of these sliders, which sounds not appropriate. Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/nECtY/7c25c315f0.jpg

01:02:322 (5) - Remove (Overmapped)
01:15:061 (4) - Remove (Overmapped) Same at 01:20:815 (6) -
01:19:274 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/nECCI/c5559fc4b0.jpg

Call me back after you fix these!

Another all Fixed!

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2016-03-13T12:12:44+00:00

No kudosu for this!

[Easy]
00:48:041 (1,2) - blanket should be improved!
01:01:191 (4,5) - ^
01:13:931 (2,3) - This is 1.08x!

[Normal]
00:40:643 (4,1,2,3,4) - Blanket

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HabiHolic

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Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2016-03-13T15:32:26+00:00

Regraz wrote:
No kudosu for this!

[Easy]
00:48:041 (1,2) - blanket should be improved!
01:01:191 (4,5) - ^
01:13:931 (2,3) - This is 1.08x!

[Normal]
00:40:643 (4,1,2,3,4) - Blanket

Call me back!

Fixed all!

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

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Mafumafu 2016-03-13T15:34:34+00:00

Good Luck!

HabiHolic

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Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2016-03-13T15:50:11+00:00

Regraz wrote:
Good Luck!

Thanks Regraz!

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2016-03-18T14:49:46+00:00

[Normal]

00:39:822 (3,1) - Stack those ends better

[Hard]

01:09:411 (3,4) - I don't suggest you to stack it when 01:09:205 (1,2,3) - are stacked as they are in different snapping

[Insane]

00:02:630 (2,3) - Reduce the jump, the current one is too big when compare to the music
00:34:479 (1,2,3,4) - 00:37:767 (5,6,7,8) - Better to keep the same spacing in this two streams?

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HabiHolic

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Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2016-03-18T15:03:15+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
[Normal]

00:39:822 (3,1) - Stack those ends better
[Hard]

01:09:411 (3,4) - I don't suggest you to stack it when 01:09:205 (1,2,3) - are stacked as they are in different snapping
[Insane]

00:02:630 (2,3) - Reduce the jump, the current one is too big when compare to the music
00:34:479 (1,2,3,4) - 00:37:767 (5,6,7,8) - Better to keep the same spacing in this two streams?

Call me back!

all Fixed!

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

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Mafumafu 2016-03-18T17:15:07+00:00

I almost watched the entire tv series to find the metadata:

(from episode 6 ending)
The title should be The king "k" should not be capitalized.

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2016-03-19T03:49:34+00:00

lol my internet stopped, and just puushed cuz I felt a bit lazy..

Mafumafu

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Mafumafu 2016-03-19T03:58:07+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:

lol my internet stopped, and just puushed cuz I felt a bit lazy..

It's true however drama ending could be regarded as an official source.

Album websites are not official. They could not be used as references.

It seems that this song is in Moorim School OST Part 2, the booklet of it may contain "title and artist", which should be counted as official source yet I couldn't find any picture about that ;w;
So I guess drama ending should be an reliable source
~~anyway i guess both are ok since it's just a capital~~

Last edited by Mafumafu 2016-03-19T04:01:43+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

HabiHolic

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Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2016-03-19T03:58:21+00:00