All fixed, very useful mod, I also made some changes..ZiRoX wrote:
Took a loooong time, sorry for the delay, I was really busy.
[Lost Grapes]I'll stop pointing out the 1/4 patterns that are overmapped and don't fit the song really well. You can already get an idea of what parts those are and changed them on your own from this point onwards.
- 00:13:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This small spacing... it just feels weird to me. There's no significant change in the piano sounds, so it feels really inconsistent with other similar patterns. I'd increase the spacing.
- 00:16:517 (2,3,4,5) - Again, the small spacing doesn't really fit. Move (3) to x:220 and (5) to x:156. It's a really small change, but it gives a whole new look to the pattern, a more interesting one.
- 00:19:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^Similar stuff here
- 00:24:187 (2) - Move to x:204, the small jump feels really nicely IMO.
- 00:24:528 (3) - NC here so 00:23:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - doesn't become such a large combo.
- 00:26:914 (2) - In the same way as in 00:24:187 (2) -, move this to x:284.
- 00:27:937 (3,4,5,6,7) - I find this spacing a bit weird. I think you can try this placement. I think it plays nicely.
- 00:29:301 (9,10) - Why did you throw a different pattern here? It's bad looking :/ I suggest you replace this one with the same slider shape as 00:24:187 (2) - , placed on x:356. I also think you should move 00:29:983 (1) - a bit to the right so there isn't a stack. Here's a pic if you want to have a visual reference for this suggestion.
- 00:30:494 (3,4,5,6) - I think a little more spacing would benefit this pattern, making it more interesting to play.
- 00:33:733 (2,1) - Uh, this is really close to becoming an hyperdash. That, along the fact that the pattern is quite unexpected (when I tested it threw me off), makes it quite difficult to catch. I think it's better to move 00:34:073 (1) - to x:372 so it triggers the hyperdash and the player gets some help reaching this fruit
- 00:43:193 (6) - There's is no sound here worth placing a circle (yes, there's a hold sound on the back, but that would be better represented by a slider, but not a circle). This note may be removed.
- 00:43:875 (3,6) - This two notes are overmapped, and they don't really add to much. Also, the pattern looks cleaner without them.
- 00:45:835 (4,5) - I think this should be a single 1/2 slider.
- 00:49:073 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - The jumps here are not placed right. They should go from each (3) to (1) (circle 4 on the last case), you even marked the strong sounds (that would be emphasized by a jump) with a NC!
- There are a few overmapped 1/4s that don't fit at all, they reaaaally feel disconnected from the song. Pointing them out: 00:54:869 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - , 00:56:914 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
- 01:05:011 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - This flows bad, really bad. Try this:
- 01:09:102 (3) - Why did you add a 1/4 where there's no sound! It would have been more adequate on 01:06:034 - , 01:07:397 - or 01:08:761 - , where you can actually hear a 1/4 sound.
- 01:49:073 (1,2) - Again, forcing 1/4s. Try something like this:
- 01:51:715 (7) - I think the hyperdash flows more natural if this is placed on x:232
- 01:51:801 (1,2) - And again, forcing a 1/4 pattern.
- 01:59:897 (4,3) - Overmapped 1/4s.
- 02:16:261 (6,7,8) - Hyperdash should be between (6,7), not (7,8). (7) is the strongest sound, marked by vocals, piano and drums.
- 02:21:289 (1) - Replace with a single circle, there's no significant sound on the 1/4.
- 02:23:505 (2) - Clearly, there's a strong vocal sound on the red tick.
- 02:31:858 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make this have a smaller spacing. The movement back from (8) to (1) might be a bit hard to get after the hyperdash, and the spaced streams with sharp turns doesn't really help to making this comfortable to play.
I'll leave it until this point, most of the issues I found in your map are because of overmapped 1/4s. I hope that taking a good look at which 1/4s are really necessary and which are forced and worsen flow will make your map look better, and make you a better mapper :3
- 02:58:193 (3,4,5) - Adding a bit more distance will make this pattern nicer. Try this:
- 03:36:801 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Killer movement, reduce spacing a bit.
- 03:57:255 (7) - NC, the combo is too long.
Good luck!
thank you !