Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
ahh...where's the kiai?
[Easy]
orz... HP Drain Rate:3 and Overall Diff:3, plz... a [Easy] is easy not only because of its settings. (in fact this is more like a [Normal])
there's lots of green timing sections... but most of them have no use.
00:07:303 (5) - make this slider symmetrical?
01:06:939 (3,4,5) - maybe 1 grid up and 1 grid right.
01:23:667 (2,3,4,5) and notes like these...- honestly, these are not for a [Easy], maybe use a repeating slider instead of the 3/4 circles.
01:46:576 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest not to use offbeats in [Easy] frequently.
02:08:757 (5) - new combo?
02:20:394 (4,1) - spacing
02:30:576 - add a note?
[Impossiblexu's Normal]
increase OA to 4
00:31:303 (2,3,4) - 3/4s like this is hard to read for me.
00:49:848 (2,3) - what is this for...? too strange, delete(3) and add a note at 00:50:212 may be better.
00:52:757 (6,7,8,9) - ^
01:02:576 (6,7,8) - ^
01:07:303 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:09:848 (1,2,3,4) - yes! i've seen this before! The Doll Maker of Bucuresti!...[Hard] lol. maybe change it a bit. this is a [Normal]= =
01:25:848 (9) - new combo?
01:37:485 (9) - ^
01:43:303 (10) - ^
01:50:939 (3,4,5) - ...make it fits to the piano, plz.
02:11:667 (7) - ends at 02:12:030 would be better.
02:31:303 (1) - ................<< 16 .s for this note
02:35:485 (6) - new combo?
02:43:667 (12) - why so many 1/4s in a [Normal]? "taiko beginners go back to play your [Easy]"?
[Hard]
00:10:212 (1) - if you want to silence the end of the spinner, make the green line 1/4 or 1/2 earlier.
00:12:757 (3) - remove whistle
00:32:030 (5) - whistle at the start.
00:37:394 (4) - really need this 1/4? i don't think so.
00:40:303 (4) - ^
00:49:484 (3) - make it symmetrical?
01:03:303 (2,3) - just feel strange= =
01:40:757 (2,5) - overmapped.
01:45:848 (4) - new combo?
02:48:030 (2) - 1 grid left
[dksslqj's Lunatic]
the combo colors are different from other diffs.
00:22:817 (4,5,6) - no one will know these are 1/3s.
01:43:211 (3) - twice more repeats?
that's all. awesome map.
awesome SB, my star.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
ahh...where's the kiai?
[Easy]
orz... HP Drain Rate:3 and Overall Diff:3, plz... a [Easy] is easy not only because of its settings. (in fact this is more like a [Normal])
there's lots of green timing sections... but most of them have no use.
00:07:303 (5) - make this slider symmetrical?
01:06:939 (3,4,5) - maybe 1 grid up and 1 grid right.
01:23:667 (2,3,4,5) and notes like these...- honestly, these are not for a [Easy], maybe use a repeating slider instead of the 3/4 circles.
01:46:576 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest not to use offbeats in [Easy] frequently.
02:08:757 (5) - new combo?
02:20:394 (4,1) - spacing
02:30:576 - add a note?
[Impossiblexu's Normal]
increase OA to 4
00:31:303 (2,3,4) - 3/4s like this is hard to read for me.
00:49:848 (2,3) - what is this for...? too strange, delete(3) and add a note at 00:50:212 may be better.
00:52:757 (6,7,8,9) - ^
01:02:576 (6,7,8) - ^
01:07:303 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:09:848 (1,2,3,4) - yes! i've seen this before! The Doll Maker of Bucuresti!...[Hard] lol. maybe change it a bit. this is a [Normal]= =
01:25:848 (9) - new combo?
01:37:485 (9) - ^
01:43:303 (10) - ^
01:50:939 (3,4,5) - ...make it fits to the piano, plz.
02:11:667 (7) - ends at 02:12:030 would be better.
02:31:303 (1) - ................<< 16 .s for this note
02:35:485 (6) - new combo?
02:43:667 (12) - why so many 1/4s in a [Normal]? "taiko beginners go back to play your [Easy]"?
[Hard]
00:10:212 (1) - if you want to silence the end of the spinner, make the green line 1/4 or 1/2 earlier.
00:12:757 (3) - remove whistle
00:32:030 (5) - whistle at the start.
00:37:394 (4) - really need this 1/4? i don't think so.
00:40:303 (4) - ^
00:49:484 (3) - make it symmetrical?
01:03:303 (2,3) - just feel strange= =
01:40:757 (2,5) - overmapped.
01:45:848 (4) - new combo?
02:48:030 (2) - 1 grid left
[dksslqj's Lunatic]
the combo colors are different from other diffs.
00:22:817 (4,5,6) - no one will know these are 1/3s.
01:43:211 (3) - twice more repeats?
that's all. awesome map.
awesome SB, my star.