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thepianist

johnsage92 wrote:

[Normal]
01:48:625 (4) - You don't need the repeats except for spacing. I say get rid of them.
If you get rid of them add a note at 01:49:171

That's all i got.

Idk about some stuff but ima leave them alone since they sound good just not what i would do.

+star
Haha I like that though :c

Thanks for the feedback nevertheless ^^
Selee
Seriously, why don't you find a BAT and get this map ranked?
Topic Starter
thepianist

Selee wrote:

Seriously, why don't you find a BAT and get this map ranked?
I do! But they're all busy/not taking requests at the moment/don't want to look at it/inactive.
TheVileOne
General
Why do you have Soundtrack as a tag?

Normal

00:44:444 (1,2,1) - Move left 1 unit. (Aligns these)

00:45:898 (2,3) - Move these left roughly 1 unit. (Apply distance snap to both notes) After that reapply distance snap to 00:47:353 (4) - and that should completely fix the spacing discrepancies here.)

impossiblexu's Normal

00:16:989 (4,5,6,7,1) - I really don't like the curve of these notes.Look at the angle of note 4. It's sending the cursor downward of the next note. This is a semi awkward transition. I suggest you move 00:17:535 (5,6,7) - down 1 unit and 00:18:625 (1) - down 2 units.

00:41:535 (5) - Move 2 units to the left? (Use distance snap) (It's to close to the previous slider and I don't think it really needs to be.) After that make sure that these 00:42:989 (1,2,3,4) - are the proper distance away from note 5.

00:45:171 (4,5,1) - Spacing is offplaced here as well. Properly spaced out the 5,1 transition would match the spacing at 00:47:353 (4,5) -

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24104

00:52:807 (4,5,6) - Eh I'm on the fence with this. It's just not the right beat, but it is playable. It doesn't sound anything like the beat there. You could fix this by deleting note 6 and placing note 5 here: 00:53:171 -

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24110

00:58:262 (4,5,1) - Inconsistent spacing. Please fix this by moving note 5 left and down 1 unit. It plays notably better.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24112

01:01:171 (2) - Move up 1 unit? This is a suggestion. It feels more natural that the curve of these notes start above 00:59:716 (1) - , because that note is curved upward. It's fine either way.

01:25:171 (1,2,3,4) - Do these need to be curved inward like this? It looks slightly strange to me. It's technically fine.

02:41:171 (6) - I think this belongs here 02:41:080 -

Hard

00:02:262 (3) - Isn't centered between 1,2. Fix this by turning grid snap off and moving it with distance snap until it is centered. Realign notes after.
00:03:716 (6) - ^
00:05:171 (3) - ^
00:06:626 (6) - ^

00:40:625 (5,6,7,8) - This throws me off. I keep wanting to repeat with each slider, but 6 and 7 move in the same direction. I can hit it every time when the sliders reverse direction. 6 goes right, 7 goes left, 8 goes right.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24126

Eh that's the pattern I made up. I haven't went over all the variables or how the end would work. So the idea might not work. Ignore if you want.

01:36:080 (3) - Turn grid snap off and tug down on this with distance snap on. It will fix a slight spacing flaw.

Lunatic

00:04:989 (4) - This tone is to low to follow properly. I highly suggest you don't place this note here and instead follow the notable beat. Move 4 to here 00:04:807 - and add a note here 00:05:171 - . This is the proper beat here.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24132

In the screenshot I tried to make a proper pattern that would fit. Note 4 is 4 units from the end of note 3 and the top edge is 1 unit above the horizontal axis. Knowing that, you can place note 5 and 6 in position. Use my design if you want, just please fix the beat here.

00:09:716 (5) - This is supposed to go here 00:09:898 - . If you listen closely you can hear the triple. It can also be placed here.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24136

00:21:169 (1,2) - The overlap here does not look good. You should fix this. (Try moving note 2 left and up 1 unit. Just use distance snap to move it into place.) Check note 3 afterward.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24138

00:36:988 (3,4,5) - What is with the spacing increase here? Reduce the spacing by 1 unit. (And yes it broke flow when I played it)

00:59:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - So awkward. Move 01:01:169 (7) - down 3 or so units? If you do this move 01:01:715 (8,9,10) - left 2 units and down 1 unit to fix the spacing. I'm not entirely sure how it ill affect the flow into 01:02:624 (1,2,3) -

01:32:806 (3) - Move up 1 unit? (Suggestion: purely cosmetic)

02:37:079 - Add note?

I'm sure someone will find fun in that last difficulty. It's somewhere. Since my post is mostly suggestions, I'll star this.
Topic Starter
thepianist

TheVileOne wrote:

General
Why do you have Soundtrack as a tag?

Normal

00:44:444 (1,2,1) - Move left 1 unit. (Aligns these)

00:45:898 (2,3) - Move these left roughly 1 unit. (Apply distance snap to both notes) After that reapply distance snap to 00:47:353 (4) - and that should completely fix the spacing discrepancies here.)

Both fixed

Hard

00:02:262 (3) - Isn't centered between 1,2. Fix this by turning grid snap off and moving it with distance snap until it is centered. Realign notes after.
00:03:716 (6) - ^
00:05:171 (3) - ^
00:06:626 (6) - ^

All should be fixed

00:40:625 (5,6,7,8) - This throws me off. I keep wanting to repeat with each slider, but 6 and 7 move in the same direction. I can hit it every time when the sliders reverse direction. 6 goes right, 7 goes left, 8 goes right.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24126

Eh that's the pattern I made up. I haven't went over all the variables or how the end would work. So the idea might not work. Ignore if you want.

Personally, I think it's fine as is;;


01:36:080 (3) - Turn grid snap off and tug down on this with distance snap on. It will fix a slight spacing flaw.

Done
Thanks! (Will contact other two about diffs.)
Kotone
:)
Dotsu
Remapped ;)


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Download: ZUN - Faith is for the Transient People (thepianist) [Impossiblexu's Normal].osu

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Topic Starter
thepianist

impossiblexu wrote:

Remapped ;)


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[attachment=0:41bfc]ZUN - Faith is for the Transient People (thepianist) [Impossiblexu's Normal].osu[/attachment:41bfc]

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Updated!
DarkDunskin
Dunno if it's just me, but I think dksslqj's Lunatic diff Sounds a bit off.
It works if you drag all notes 1/8 backwards though.

All in all a good map -> Star :D

EDIT: actually it's 1/6
OnosakiHito
Hm, the map is really good. I like it.
- But in the follwing parts: 0:22:897, 1:03:897, 1:49:716, 2:13:897, 2:24:806 it can confuse some player's(Dosen't mean it confuse me).
Maybe there are better way's to manage this parts.

What I also have remark, you put the cirlces/sliders on the hearable clang. I like that.
- But at the point, 1:04:534 there is also an clang but you didn't put in a circle.
That makes me going to the first point again: Confusing players.
Maybe you should check out were do you forgot a circle?

Atm, I don't have so much time so I can't chek out every clang and second and write down every solution, sorry. :?

Please remark that this are just suggestions.

Well, good luck with the ranking~! It's really nice.
Greetings,
おのさき人
Topic Starter
thepianist

DarkDunskin wrote:

Dunno if it's just me, but I think dksslqj's Lunatic diff Sounds a bit off.
It works if you drag all notes 1/8 backwards though.

All in all a good map -> Star :D

EDIT: actually it's 1/6
It's probably just you~ Lybydose checked the timing with many others, and it sounds fine~ Thanks for trying though!

OnosakiHito wrote:

Hm, the map is really good. I like it.
- But in the follwing parts: 0:22:897, 1:03:897, 1:49:716, 2:13:897, 2:24:806 it can confuse some player's(Dosen't mean it confuse me).
Maybe there are better way's to manage this parts.

What I also have remark, you put the cirlces/sliders on the hearable clang. I like that.
- But at the point, 1:04:534 there is also an clang but you didn't put in a circle.
That makes me going to the first point again: Confusing players.
Maybe you should check out were do you forgot a circle?

Atm, I don't have so much time so I can't chek out every clang and second and write down every solution, sorry. :?

Please remark that this are just suggestions.

Well, good luck with the ranking~! It's really nice.
Greetings,
おのさき人
Ahaha I don't get your mod post at all without difficulty tags or whatnot ;; I'll probably contact you via in game PM.
Eriasu_old
I get lost in some parts >.<, anyway it's well synchronized with the song. Well done~
Orkel
Fun map, but light strobes.. hate those.
Topic Starter
thepianist

Orkel wrote:

Fun map, but light strobes.. hate those.
The light strobes very light (ie I believe 4 for the whole map or so) (no pun intended) to signify spell card ends...;;
nonoh_old
starr >:(
Sakura
Please remove unnecessary transparencies from
  1. Epilepsy Warning.png
  2. Spotlight.png
  3. leaves.png
  4. A Wind blows.png
  5. cardbg.png
  6. Secretly Inherited Art of Danmaku.png
  7. face07mct.png
  8. MoreSakura.png
  9. Sakura1.png
[impossiblexu's Normal]
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/29216 Is this supposed to be the correct strobe for this diff?

[Normal]
Dont like the normal-hit whistle used here, i recommend you use a different hitsound in those instances

[Overall]
Amazing indeed, fix theese and i'll bubble
Topic Starter
thepianist

Sakura Hana wrote:

Please remove unnecessary transparencies from
  1. Epilepsy Warning.pngX
  2. Spotlight.pngAlready at minimum size
  3. leaves.pngX
  4. A Wind blows.png X
  5. cardbg.pngAlready at minimum size
  6. Secretly Inherited Art of Danmaku.pngX
  7. face07mct.pngX
  8. MoreSakura.png X
  9. Sakura1.pngX
Changed!
[impossiblexu's Normal]
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/29216 Is this supposed to be the correct strobe for this diff?
Whoops, fixed
[Normal]
Dont like the normal-hit whistle used here, i recommend you use a different hitsound in those instances
Changed

[Overall]
Amazing indeed, fix theese and i'll bubble
Thank you!
Sakura
Okay then Bubbled!~
Topic Starter
thepianist

Sakura Hana wrote:

Okay then Bubbled!~
Thank you!
Andrea
Looks good to me. Special thanks to Sakura Hana for poiting out a good old pending map here.

Ranked~
Sakura
Congratulations pianist!
Andrea
As Alace said to me I did a mistake x_x

[dksslqj's Lunatic]

02:13:897 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Wrong snap.

Unranked.
Frill
o.0
Muya
wow
Cyril Scarlet
ohhhh my FCed ・゚・(ノД`;)・゚・
intermu
it looked good to me >_>
dNextGen
uh.......
Sure

osuplayer111 wrote:

As Alace said to me I did a mistake x_x

[dksslqj's Lunatic]

02:13:897 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Wrong snap.

Unranked.
I agree. wrong snap :o
Sakura
Sorry thepainist orz you're going to need 2 different BAT/MAT to bubble/rerank this
matthewhln
oh my god :o
Topic Starter
thepianist
x.x fixed.
Mafiamaster
Awwrite!
Bubbled.
Topic Starter
thepianist

Mafiamaster wrote:

Awwrite!
Bubbled.
Thank you! :3
Nakagawa-Kanon
OMG

sorry thepianist
Alace
offset:-7ms, move all green lines and SB stuffs, need to full submit

<Normal+Hard>
slidertick 1 sounds better ?

<Lunatic>
01:04:079 (3) - 1/3 shounds bad too i suggest only putobjects on white tick only
02:13:897 (5,6,7) - ^
Topic Starter
thepianist

Alace wrote:

offset:-7ms, move all green lines and SB stuffs, need to full submit

<Normal+Hard>
slidertick 1 sounds better ?

<Lunatic>
01:04:079 (3) - 1/3 shounds bad too i suggest only putobjects on white tick only
02:13:897 (5,6,7) - ^
Changed tick frequency and snapping + timing. Thanks~
Alace
Lunatic`s offset didn`t chqnge XD

EDIT:OK GO!
Mafiamaster
Just one more thing, add an approachcircle.png to the folder since you have a custom hitcircle.
Topic Starter
thepianist

Mafiamaster wrote:

Just one more thing, add an approachcircle.png to the folder since you have a custom hitcircle.
Ok, added! thanks~
Mafiamaster
Reranked!
Topic Starter
thepianist

Mafiamaster wrote:

Reranked!
Thank you! :]
Muya
Submitted:
Ranked: Jan 11, 2010
Not yet
?
Kurai

o:?

Nice map ^^"
Topic Starter
thepianist

KuraiPettan wrote:


o:?

Nice map ^^"
Thanks!

Also, thank you peppy! C:
Sakura
Ranked by peppy woot!
Selee
Congrat! ;)
Topic Starter
thepianist

Selee wrote:

Congrat! ;)
Thank you!

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ranked by peppy woot!
Haha there was a ranking scoreboard problem so it had to be 're-re-re-reranked'.
Dotsu
Finally~

Congratulations :D
Topic Starter
thepianist

impossiblexu wrote:

Finally~

Congratulations :D
Thank you!
Fight69
Yayz !

Finally, congrats :D

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ranked by peppy woot!
Epic win xD
Topic Starter
thepianist

Fight69 wrote:

Yayz !

Finally, congrats :D

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ranked by peppy woot!
Epic win xD
Thank you!
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