Star, would like to see this one ranked

DJ KRZY wrote:

Star, would like to see this one ranked

Thanks ^^

DJ KRZY wrote:

Star, would like to see this one ranked

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the offset is strange since the last time i checked, it made the map messy

maybe...


i dunno maybe it's just me but the notes sounds messy :/

Arusha Shuna wrote:

the offset is strange since the last time i checked, it made the map messy

maybe...

Redownload the map. The mp3 appears to have been changed since this was first uploaded. You should also make a note of this in the original post. The post does say something about downloading for added storyboard elements, but there's nothing about an mp3 change, and it's easy to miss it in the changelog.

Lybydose wrote:

Arusha Shuna wrote:

the offset is strange since the last time i checked, it made the map messy

maybe...

Redownload the map. The mp3 appears to have been changed since this was first uploaded. You should also make a note of this in the original post. The post does say something about downloading for added storyboard elements, but there's nothing about an mp3 change, and it's easy to miss it in the changelog.

Ah, doing that right now. Thanks!

Ahahaha sanae~~~~~ Go strobs!!!

Must be ranked !

~Star

Lybydose wrote:

Arusha Shuna wrote:

the offset is strange since the last time i checked, it made the map messy

maybe...

Redownload the map. The mp3 appears to have been changed since this was first uploaded. You should also make a note of this in the original post. The post does say something about downloading for added storyboard elements, but there's nothing about an mp3 change, and it's easy to miss it in the changelog.

oh i see :X

thanks for the info

mekadon95 wrote:

Ahahaha sanae~~~~~ Go strobs!!!

SPOILER

Normal
00:22:625 (2) - Crash seems better here You mean finish? I don't agree though :<
02:02:262 (3) - Add another repeat with clap hitsounds in it Nah...
02:05:535 (2) - Clap here It seems to come out of nowhere though! D:
02:38:625 (1) - ^ &
02:41:171 (5) - ^ &

Impossiblexu's normal
00:11:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Etna should work fine here :3
00:32:080 (5) - Make this sound silent
00:46:625 (1) - Replace whistle with clap
00:47:353 (4) - ^
02:25:534 (3,4,5) - Zig-zag streams works better here
02:35:534 (1) - Remove note
02:35:716 (2) - New combo if you did ^
02:53:171 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really like stacking here

Hard
01:02:080 (6) - Add note Why?
01:05:171 (5) - Add clap Okie
02:06:625 (1) - Remove note No
02:06:989 (2) - New combo if you did ^ ^
02:38:625 (1) - Make arcs equal to midpoint Better
02:40:080 (3) - ^ ^
02:52:807 (6) - Add clap Nah

Lunatic
00:04:989 (4,5,6,7,8) - Those are wird, change it
02:20:442 (3) - 1/8 might not work well here since it's hard to clear it in Taiko
02:39:806 (1,2,3,4...16) - Make a better circle
Sadly, I don't really like this diff; lots notes are out though :3

Thanks!

nothing i could mod :(
i thought it was PV
but if u want a nazi:
- change spell card title animation horizontal from right outer screen to current left position
- make it bigger a little bit

btw.. nice lighting.png fx <3 never thought about it

These are suggestions, you don't have to change anything.

[General]

* delete osb file and fullsubmit.
* tag..'sanae' is doesn't suffice. add tags ' kochiya '

[Normal]

00:53:898 (1) - add finish in start
01:05:535 (1) - ^
01:41:898 (2) - add whistle?
01:52:080 (X) - Perhaps,add circle.

[Impossiblexu's Normal]

00:47:716 (5) - umm..add finish in end?

[Hard]

00:06:625 (6) - remove finish with start
00:48:080 (1) - add finish in start
00:59:353 (5) - remove finish
00:59:716 (1) - add finish in start

[dksslqj's Lunatic]

Fun



Good map!! >.<

Frill wrote:

These are suggestions, you don't have to change anything.

[General]

* delete osb file and fullsubmit. No, that would delete parts of my storyboard.
* tag..'sanae' is doesn't suffice. add tags ' kochiya ' Added

[Normal]

00:53:898 (1) - add finish in start Added in end.
01:05:535 (1) - ^ ^
01:41:898 (2) - add whistle? Nah
01:52:080 (X) - Perhaps,add circle. ^

[Impossiblexu's Normal]

00:47:716 (5) - umm..add finish in end?

[Hard]

00:06:625 (6) - remove finish with start Nah
00:48:080 (1) - add finish in start Added
00:59:353 (5) - remove finish ^
00:59:716 (1) - add finish in start ^

[dksslqj's Lunatic]

Fun



Good map!! >.<

Thanks! :3

[dksslgj's Lunatic]
00:23:079 (6) 1grid up?

Star :]

Bump :p

Hi~

Great SB

yangzd88 wrote:

Hi~

Normal

01:56:444 (2) - Whistle哈哈我不覺得需要吧~

Impossiblexu

改成Normal+?
00:11:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,) - 165BPM的1/2连打有点难啊
01:10:625 (4) - 摆右一点...好难看清
01:26:444 (5) - 这个重叠没叠好
01:34:625 (1) - spacing
01:38:080 (5) - 重叠
01:44:080 (5) - 缩短1/4拍

Hard

Finish hitsounds is bad...
00:50:625 (4) - clap Ok
01:05:898 (2) - ^Already has~

Great SB 謝謝!　:3

Thanks!

star

Star~

[Normal]
01:48:625 (4) - You don't need the repeats except for spacing. I say get rid of them.
If you get rid of them add a note at 01:49:171

That's all i got.

Idk about some stuff but ima leave them alone since they sound good just not what i would do.

+star

johnsage92 wrote:

[Normal]
01:48:625 (4) - You don't need the repeats except for spacing. I say get rid of them.
If you get rid of them add a note at 01:49:171

That's all i got.

Idk about some stuff but ima leave them alone since they sound good just not what i would do.

+star

Haha I like that though :c

Thanks for the feedback nevertheless ^^

Seriously, why don't you find a BAT and get this map ranked?

Selee wrote:

Seriously, why don't you find a BAT and get this map ranked?

I do! But they're all busy/not taking requests at the moment/don't want to look at it/inactive.

General
Why do you have Soundtrack as a tag?

Normal

00:44:444 (1,2,1) - Move left 1 unit. (Aligns these)

00:45:898 (2,3) - Move these left roughly 1 unit. (Apply distance snap to both notes) After that reapply distance snap to 00:47:353 (4) - and that should completely fix the spacing discrepancies here.)

impossiblexu's Normal

00:16:989 (4,5,6,7,1) - I really don't like the curve of these notes.Look at the angle of note 4. It's sending the cursor downward of the next note. This is a semi awkward transition. I suggest you move 00:17:535 (5,6,7) - down 1 unit and 00:18:625 (1) - down 2 units.

00:41:535 (5) - Move 2 units to the left? (Use distance snap) (It's to close to the previous slider and I don't think it really needs to be.) After that make sure that these 00:42:989 (1,2,3,4) - are the proper distance away from note 5.

00:45:171 (4,5,1) - Spacing is offplaced here as well. Properly spaced out the 5,1 transition would match the spacing at 00:47:353 (4,5) -

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24104

00:52:807 (4,5,6) - Eh I'm on the fence with this. It's just not the right beat, but it is playable. It doesn't sound anything like the beat there. You could fix this by deleting note 6 and placing note 5 here: 00:53:171 -

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24110

00:58:262 (4,5,1) - Inconsistent spacing. Please fix this by moving note 5 left and down 1 unit. It plays notably better.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24112

01:01:171 (2) - Move up 1 unit? This is a suggestion. It feels more natural that the curve of these notes start above 00:59:716 (1) - , because that note is curved upward. It's fine either way.

01:25:171 (1,2,3,4) - Do these need to be curved inward like this? It looks slightly strange to me. It's technically fine.

02:41:171 (6) - I think this belongs here 02:41:080 -

Hard

00:02:262 (3) - Isn't centered between 1,2. Fix this by turning grid snap off and moving it with distance snap until it is centered. Realign notes after.
00:03:716 (6) - ^
00:05:171 (3) - ^
00:06:626 (6) - ^

00:40:625 (5,6,7,8) - This throws me off. I keep wanting to repeat with each slider, but 6 and 7 move in the same direction. I can hit it every time when the sliders reverse direction. 6 goes right, 7 goes left, 8 goes right.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24126

Eh that's the pattern I made up. I haven't went over all the variables or how the end would work. So the idea might not work. Ignore if you want.

01:36:080 (3) - Turn grid snap off and tug down on this with distance snap on. It will fix a slight spacing flaw.

Lunatic

00:04:989 (4) - This tone is to low to follow properly. I highly suggest you don't place this note here and instead follow the notable beat. Move 4 to here 00:04:807 - and add a note here 00:05:171 - . This is the proper beat here.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24132

In the screenshot I tried to make a proper pattern that would fit. Note 4 is 4 units from the end of note 3 and the top edge is 1 unit above the horizontal axis. Knowing that, you can place note 5 and 6 in position. Use my design if you want, just please fix the beat here.

00:09:716 (5) - This is supposed to go here 00:09:898 - . If you listen closely you can hear the triple. It can also be placed here.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24136

00:21:169 (1,2) - The overlap here does not look good. You should fix this. (Try moving note 2 left and up 1 unit. Just use distance snap to move it into place.) Check note 3 afterward.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24138

00:36:988 (3,4,5) - What is with the spacing increase here? Reduce the spacing by 1 unit. (And yes it broke flow when I played it)

00:59:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - So awkward. Move 01:01:169 (7) - down 3 or so units? If you do this move 01:01:715 (8,9,10) - left 2 units and down 1 unit to fix the spacing. I'm not entirely sure how it ill affect the flow into 01:02:624 (1,2,3) -

01:32:806 (3) - Move up 1 unit? (Suggestion: purely cosmetic)

02:37:079 - Add note?

I'm sure someone will find fun in that last difficulty. It's somewhere. Since my post is mostly suggestions, I'll star this.

TheVileOne wrote:

General
Why do you have Soundtrack as a tag?

Normal

00:44:444 (1,2,1) - Move left 1 unit. (Aligns these)

00:45:898 (2,3) - Move these left roughly 1 unit. (Apply distance snap to both notes) After that reapply distance snap to 00:47:353 (4) - and that should completely fix the spacing discrepancies here.)

Both fixed

Hard

00:02:262 (3) - Isn't centered between 1,2. Fix this by turning grid snap off and moving it with distance snap until it is centered. Realign notes after.
00:03:716 (6) - ^
00:05:171 (3) - ^
00:06:626 (6) - ^

All should be fixed

00:40:625 (5,6,7,8) - This throws me off. I keep wanting to repeat with each slider, but 6 and 7 move in the same direction. I can hit it every time when the sliders reverse direction. 6 goes right, 7 goes left, 8 goes right.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24126

Eh that's the pattern I made up. I haven't went over all the variables or how the end would work. So the idea might not work. Ignore if you want.

Personally, I think it's fine as is;;


01:36:080 (3) - Turn grid snap off and tug down on this with distance snap on. It will fix a slight spacing flaw.

Done

Thanks! (Will contact other two about diffs.)

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impossiblexu wrote:

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Updated!

Dunno if it's just me, but I think dksslqj's Lunatic diff Sounds a bit off.
It works if you drag all notes 1/8 backwards though.

All in all a good map -> Star

EDIT: actually it's 1/6

Hm, the map is really good. I like it.
- But in the follwing parts: 0:22:897, 1:03:897, 1:49:716, 2:13:897, 2:24:806 it can confuse some player's(Dosen't mean it confuse me).
Maybe there are better way's to manage this parts.

What I also have remark, you put the cirlces/sliders on the hearable clang. I like that.
- But at the point, 1:04:534 there is also an clang but you didn't put in a circle.
That makes me going to the first point again: Confusing players.
Maybe you should check out were do you forgot a circle?

Atm, I don't have so much time so I can't chek out every clang and second and write down every solution, sorry.

Please remark that this are just suggestions.

Well, good luck with the ranking~! It's really nice.
Greetings,
おのさき人

DarkDunskin wrote:

Dunno if it's just me, but I think dksslqj's Lunatic diff Sounds a bit off.
It works if you drag all notes 1/8 backwards though.

All in all a good map -> Star

EDIT: actually it's 1/6

It's probably just you~ Lybydose checked the timing with many others, and it sounds fine~ Thanks for trying though!

OnosakiHito wrote:

Hm, the map is really good. I like it.
- But in the follwing parts: 0:22:897, 1:03:897, 1:49:716, 2:13:897, 2:24:806 it can confuse some player's(Dosen't mean it confuse me).
Maybe there are better way's to manage this parts.

What I also have remark, you put the cirlces/sliders on the hearable clang. I like that.
- But at the point, 1:04:534 there is also an clang but you didn't put in a circle.
That makes me going to the first point again: Confusing players.
Maybe you should check out were do you forgot a circle?

Atm, I don't have so much time so I can't chek out every clang and second and write down every solution, sorry.

Please remark that this are just suggestions.

Well, good luck with the ranking~! It's really nice.
Greetings,
おのさき人

Ahaha I don't get your mod post at all without difficulty tags or whatnot ;; I'll probably contact you via in game PM.

I get lost in some parts >.<, anyway it's well synchronized with the song. Well done~

Fun map, but light strobes.. hate those.

Orkel wrote:

Fun map, but light strobes.. hate those.

The light strobes very light (ie I believe 4 for the whole map or so) (no pun intended) to signify spell card ends...;;

starr

Please remove unnecessary transparencies from

1. Epilepsy Warning.png
2. Spotlight.png
3. leaves.png
4. A Wind blows.png
5. cardbg.png
6. Secretly Inherited Art of Danmaku.png
7. face07mct.png
8. MoreSakura.png
9. Sakura1.png

[impossiblexu's Normal]
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/29216 Is this supposed to be the correct strobe for this diff?

[Normal]
Dont like the normal-hit whistle used here, i recommend you use a different hitsound in those instances

[Overall]
Amazing indeed, fix theese and i'll bubble

Sakura Hana wrote:

Please remove unnecessary transparencies from

1. Epilepsy Warning.pngX
2. Spotlight.pngAlready at minimum size
   
   SPOILER

   
3. leaves.pngX
4. A Wind blows.png X
5. cardbg.pngAlready at minimum size
   
   SPOILER

   
6. Secretly Inherited Art of Danmaku.pngX
7. face07mct.pngX
8. MoreSakura.png X
9. Sakura1.pngX

Changed!
[impossiblexu's Normal]
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/29216 Is this supposed to be the correct strobe for this diff?
Whoops, fixed
[Normal]
Dont like the normal-hit whistle used here, i recommend you use a different hitsound in those instances
Changed

[Overall]
Amazing indeed, fix theese and i'll bubble

Thank you!

Okay then Bubbled!~

Sakura Hana wrote:

Okay then Bubbled!~

Thank you!

Looks good to me. Special thanks to Sakura Hana for poiting out a good old pending map here.

Ranked~

Congratulations pianist!

As Alace said to me I did a mistake x_x

[dksslqj's Lunatic]

02:13:897 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Wrong snap.

Unranked.

o.0

wow

ohhhh my FCed ･ﾟ･(ﾉД`;)･ﾟ･

it looked good to me >_>

uh.......

osuplayer111 wrote:

As Alace said to me I did a mistake x_x

[dksslqj's Lunatic]

02:13:897 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Wrong snap.

Unranked.

I agree. wrong snap

Sorry thepainist orz you're going to need 2 different BAT/MAT to bubble/rerank this

oh my god

x.x fixed.

Awwrite!
Bubbled.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Awwrite!
Bubbled.

Thank you! :3

OMG

sorry thepianist

offset:-7ms, move all green lines and SB stuffs, need to full submit

<Normal+Hard>
slidertick 1 sounds better ?

<Lunatic>
01:04:079 (3) - 1/3 shounds bad too i suggest only putobjects on white tick only
02:13:897 (5,6,7) - ^

Alace wrote:

offset:-7ms, move all green lines and SB stuffs, need to full submit

<Normal+Hard>
slidertick 1 sounds better ?

<Lunatic>
01:04:079 (3) - 1/3 shounds bad too i suggest only putobjects on white tick only
02:13:897 (5,6,7) - ^

Changed tick frequency and snapping + timing. Thanks~

Lunatic`s offset didn`t chqnge XD

EDIT:OK GO!

Just one more thing, add an approachcircle.png to the folder since you have a custom hitcircle.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Just one more thing, add an approachcircle.png to the folder since you have a custom hitcircle.

Ok, added! thanks~

Reranked!

Mafiamaster wrote:

Reranked!

Thank you! :]

Submitted:
Ranked: Jan 11, 2010
Not yet

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o:?

Nice map ^^"

KuraiPettan wrote:

o:?

Nice map ^^"

Thanks!

Also, thank you peppy! C:

Ranked by peppy woot!

Congrat！

Selee wrote:

Congrat！

Thank you!

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ranked by peppy woot!

Haha there was a ranking scoreboard problem so it had to be 're-re-re-reranked'.

Finally~

Congratulations

impossiblexu wrote:

Finally~

Congratulations

Thank you!

Yayz !

Finally, congrats

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ranked by peppy woot!

Epic win xD

Fight69 wrote:

Yayz !

Finally, congrats

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ranked by peppy woot!

Epic win xD

Thank you!