Please reposition your black screen cover to cover the entire picture because currently a line of colors still show through.
Screenshot:
Edit: Make sure all the tags and sources are consistent. Personally I believe Touhou should be the source and Mountain of Faith should be in the tags.

Normal:
Combo mod:
talked about online

Timing section mod:
01:46:085 - Why is this a soft timing section? the only note this could possibly affect is the next note and that note has a timing section with a normal hitsound setting on it. I advise you remove this hitsound entirely because it is unneeded unless the kiai section is a soft hitsound section.
02:21:085 - move a full quarter note back (you currently have it move back about an eighth note right now)

Impossiblexu's Normal:
Combo mod:
00:47:667 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:57:485 (11) and becuase you did not use short combos before

Timing section mod:
01:57:449 - move a full quarter note back (you currently have it move back about an eighth note right now)
02:56:121 - unneeded timing section, please remove=

Hard:
Normal mod:
00:50:575 (4,5,6,7,8) - this stack was random for me because you didn't use any stacks this large before and I don't know what this is snapped to.

Combo mod:
00:40:757 (1) - y is there a new combo here? Your pattern of adding combos seems to suggest that should not be a new combo here
01:23:666 (1) to the next kiai section - make this section like the first occurrence (00:13:121 to the next kiai section)

Timing section mod:
same as normal

dksslqj's Lunatic:
Combo mod:
01:28:756 (6,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 6 to be consistent with 00:30:575 (1)
01:42:575 (1,3) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to be consistent with 01:30:938 (5)
02:09:484 (6,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 6 to be consistent with 01:57:847 (1)
02:12:393 (3) - add a new combo to be consistent with 01:57:847 (1)

Timing section mod:
02:21:666 - move a full quarter note back (you currently have it move back about an eighth note right now)

==================================
Nice map overall. Star.

Great map, can't find any big mistakes ^^ Star~

Fixed:

EDIT:2010-4-28 Fix by Shinxyn's mod

Download: ZUN - Faith is for the Transient People (thepianist) [Impossiblexu's Normal].osu

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~Normal~
- Increase Overall Difficulty a bit, things like 00:22:212 (2,3,4,5) may be a bit hard to distinguish >_<

00:29:121 (1) - Delete New Combo.
01:25:848 (1) - ^
01:34:576 (1,2,3) - It's okay as it is, but the low OD makes it really hard to know where to click (2). You can also move (2) away... Up to you.
01:38:394 (3) - Could you make this totally vertical so the next combo is visible? (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8163)
02:20:394 (1) - Delete New Combo.

~Impossiblexu's Normal~
- Consider rename this to Normal+ (or Hard... I'm not so agreed with "+" diffs :/), there are too many 1/2 streams =x

00:22:848 (5) - Extend to red tick?
01:42:576 (7) - New Combo.
01:44:303 (11) - Extend to red tick?

~Hard~
01:45:848 (4) - Delete this note and add a repeat to the slider?
02:52:757 (6) - The endpoint is silent, is this intentional? It sounds weird imo...

~dksslqj's Lunatic~
01:04:029 (3) - Snap to 1/4, it sounds horrible on 1/3 >_<
01:18:938 (4) - A bit hard to see with the hitbursts around there x_x
02:13:847 (7) - Snap to 1/4, it sounds horrible on 1/3 >_<
02:23:302 (5) - ^

Awesome map <3 *star*

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~Normal~
- Increase Overall Difficulty a bit, things like 00:22:212 (2,3,4,5) may be a bit hard to distinguish >_< Bumped

00:29:121 (1) - Delete New Combo. Fixed
01:25:848 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:34:576 (1,2,3) - It's okay as it is, but the low OD makes it really hard to know where to click (2). You can also move (2) away... Up to you. Moved
01:38:394 (3) - Could you make this totally vertical so the next combo is visible? (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8163) Hmm. Will this fix work?
02:20:394 (1) - Delete New Combo. Fixed

~Impossiblexu's Normal~
- Consider rename this to Normal+ (or Hard... I'm not so agreed with "+" diffs :/), there are too many 1/2 streams =x

00:22:848 (5) - Extend to red tick?
01:42:576 (7) - New Combo.
01:44:303 (11) - Extend to red tick?

~Hard~
01:45:848 (4) - Delete this note and add a repeat to the slider? Fixed
02:52:757 (6) - The endpoint is silent, is this intentional? It sounds weird imo... Oops

~dksslqj's Lunatic~
01:04:029 (3) - Snap to 1/4, it sounds horrible on 1/3 >_<
01:18:938 (4) - A bit hard to see with the hitbursts around there x_x
02:13:847 (7) - Snap to 1/4, it sounds horrible on 1/3 >_<
02:23:302 (5) - ^

Awesome map <3 *star*

Thank you!

So much detailed mods already...
"Soundtrack" tag? this is a rhythm game oi >_>

Normal- :x could've been mapped easier for Easy, but yea, its a Normal
00:18:576 (4) - hmm, maybe replace the finish for another whistle to follow up from the one before?
00:23:667 (5) - add whistle to start of this? (it sorta sounds like 00:17:848 (2))
00:24:394 (6) - ^ if added, follow up with another whistle here?
00:29:121 (4) - follow up with whistle at end instead of finish?
01:28:394 (4) - like before, follow up with whistle instead of finish?
01:33:485 (1) - like 23:667 and 24:394
01:39:303 (2,3) - sounds like 00:29:121 (4) (add whistle to 2 and middle repeat of 3?)
Just pointing out those cuz I thought the whistles sounded odd alone

Impossiblexu's-
00:22:848 (5) - what beuchi said, not that it sounds wrong here, it just sounds awkward and plays awkward as it is
01:44:303 (11) - ^
01:51:485 (5) - ... maybe continue following the piano here? (requires 1/4)

Hard-
00:23:303 (1,2,3,4) - apply volume change like 00:17:484 (1,2,3,4)? (though a bit louder on this part..)
01:26:212 (3) - add clap to start of this note? (follow up from clap in last combo...?)
01:27:303 (1,2,3,4) - maybe apply volume thing here too?
01:28:394 (4) - die random whistle, dieee!
01:32:030 (2) - clap?
01:37:848 (3) - ^
01:38:939 (1,2,3,4) - same thing as 1:27:303 and 01:28:394 ^
01:42:212 (2,2) - claps..? (then again, 01:42:394 (3) makes the clap sound odd...)
01:45:484 (3,4) - odd pace, just keep the 3 repeat short slider pace going (like 00:34:939 (1,2,3,4)!)
02:06:212 (1) - claps end too suddenly after this note, add clap to 02:07:666 (4)? or maybe even start of 02:08:030 (5) instead)
:X

dksslqj's- weeeee fun
00:04:939 (4) - I don't really get this 1/4 note... whyyy D:
00:22:817 (4,5,6) - sounds weird on 1/3... sounds worse on 1/4... mmm remove 5 please?
02:14:332 (8) - I don't mind the slider before it being on 1/3 (since it wouldn't sound right otherwise), but I'm pretty sure this sounds like it starts on a 1/4 note, not 1/3
02:21:726 (1) - ? 1/3 note here..? really...?
02:23:302 (5) - what beuchi said.
All the long streams could look better D:

Sb sound effects~
The sliderscorepoint is cute~

Shinxyn wrote:

So much detailed mods already...
"Soundtrack" tag? this is a rhythm game oi >_>

Normal- could've been mapped easier for Easy, but yea, its a Normal
00:18:576 (4) - hmm, maybe replace the finish for another whistle to follow up from the one before? Sure
00:23:667 (5) - add whistle to start of this? (it sorta sounds like 00:17:848 (2)) Sure
00:24:394 (6) - ^ if added, follow up with another whistle here? Sure
00:29:121 (4) - follow up with whistle at end instead of finish? Sure
01:28:394 (4) - like before, follow up with whistle instead of finish? Sure
01:33:485 (1) - like 23:667 and 24:394 Sure
01:39:303 (2,3) - sounds like 00:29:121 (4) (add whistle to 2 and middle repeat of 3?) Sure
Just pointing out those cuz I thought the whistles sounded odd alone

Impossiblexu's-
00:22:848 (5) - what beuchi said, not that it sounds wrong here, it just sounds awkward and plays awkward as it is
01:44:303 (11) - ^
01:51:485 (5) - ... maybe continue following the piano here? (requires 1/4)

Hard-
00:23:303 (1,2,3,4) - apply volume change like 00:17:484 (1,2,3,4)? (though a bit louder on this part..) Sure
01:26:212 (3) - add clap to start of this note? (follow up from clap in last combo...?) Sure
01:27:303 (1,2,3,4) - maybe apply volume thing here too? Sure
01:28:394 (4) - die random whistle, dieee! Killed
01:32:030 (2) - clap? Sure
01:37:848 (3) - ^ Sure
01:38:939 (1,2,3,4) - same thing as 1:27:303 and 01:28:394 ^ Sure
01:42:212 (2,2) - claps..? (then again, 01:42:394 (3) makes the clap sound odd...) Hmm ok.
01:45:484 (3,4) - odd pace, just keep the 3 repeat short slider pace going (like 00:34:939 (1,2,3,4)!) Sure
02:06:212 (1) - claps end too suddenly after this note, add clap to 02:07:666 (4)? or maybe even start of 02:08:030 (5) instead) Sure
:X

dksslqj's- weeeee fun
00:04:939 (4) - I don't really get this 1/4 note... whyyy D:
00:22:817 (4,5,6) - sounds weird on 1/3... sounds worse on 1/4... mmm remove 5 please?
02:14:332 (8) - I don't mind the slider before it being on 1/3 (since it wouldn't sound right otherwise), but I'm pretty sure this sounds like it starts on a 1/4 note, not 1/3
02:21:726 (1) - ? 1/3 note here..? really...?
02:23:302 (5) - what beuchi said.
All the long streams could look better D:

Sb sound effects~
The sliderscorepoint is cute~

Thanks! ^^

update

Download: ZUN - Faith is for the Transient People (thepianist) [dksslqj's Lunatic].osu

dksslqj wrote:

update

And updated~

All looks ok.Nice map +Star

Sorry that it took me so long to get to this. @-@

[General]
*"Faith" isn't really needed in tags, but I guess it doesn't matter.
*I'd say that this needs an epilepsy warning on all diffs due to the white strobes.
*face07mct.png is cut off on the left and right sides a bit. Think you could crop it a bit better? :/

[Normal]
*lowest drain level wat; raise it a few ticks please =x
01:08:757 (1) - perhaps move this back to the red tick and extend?
01:36:757 (5,6,7) - THANK YOU. You used offbeats in an easier difficulty CORRECTLY. I was sick of modding maps where people would throw offbeat or triplet patterns in as single beats and then LATER using sliders. NO. Sliders first, then single beats to show the player what is going on. Kudos to you. <3
02:45:848 (1,1,1,2) - Maybe finish these?
02:53:121 (1) - If you really want to silence this, then use the soft sample set. Otherwise, the normal one leaves a small "pop" at the end.

[Impossiblexu's Normal]
*lead-in time doesn't match the other diffs
00:22:576 (4) - I think this would sound better ending on the red tick (there seems to be a triplet pattern on 00:22:576, 00:22:848, 00:23:121)
00:42:212 - expected a note here
01:44:030 (5) - I think this would sound better ending on the red tick (like above)

[Hard]
01:05:121 - expected a note here
02:53:121 (1) - again, I suggest using a soft sample to silence this.

[dksslqj's Lunatic]
*Why not just use one uninherited section but use a 0.5x bpm inherited to obtain the same effect? :/
00:22:847 (4,5,6) - Like I said in another diff, the triplet is on the first blue tick and the red tick, but this stream doesn't have a note on the following red tick so it sounds a bit off...

Offset looks fine. Nice~

Derekku Chan wrote:

Sorry that it took me so long to get to this. @-@

[General]
*"Faith" isn't really needed in tags, but I guess it doesn't matter. Fixed
*I'd say that this needs an epilepsy warning on all diffs due to the white strobes. Ah...it lasts through the first two notes...may I storyboard in a warning instead and put it on the OP as well?
*face07mct.png is cut off on the left and right sides a bit. Think you could crop it a bit better? :/ Iono this was the only copy I found that actually contains the whole body...

[Normal]
*lowest drain level wat; raise it a few ticks please =x Raised 2 ticks!
01:08:757 (1) - perhaps move this back to the red tick and extend? Sure
01:36:757 (5,6,7) - THANK YOU. You used offbeats in an easier difficulty CORRECTLY. I was sick of modding maps where people would throw offbeat or triplet patterns in as single beats and then LATER using sliders. NO. Sliders first, then single beats to show the player what is going on. Kudos to you. <3 ^^ Thanks!
02:45:848 (1,1,1,2) - Maybe finish these? Sure
02:53:121 (1) - If you really want to silence this, then use the soft sample set. Otherwise, the normal one leaves a small "pop" at the end. Reworked

[Impossiblexu's Normal]
*lead-in time doesn't match the other diffs Changed for Impossiblexu
00:22:576 (4) - I think this would sound better ending on the red tick (there seems to be a triplet pattern on 00:22:576, 00:22:848, 00:23:121)
00:42:212 - expected a note here
01:44:030 (5) - I think this would sound better ending on the red tick (like above)

[Hard]
01:05:121 - expected a note here Sure
02:53:121 (1) - again, I suggest using a soft sample to silence this. Fix as described above.

[dksslqj's Lunatic]
*Why not just use one uninherited section but use a 0.5x bpm inherited to obtain the same effect? :/
00:22:847 (4,5,6) - Like I said in another diff, the triplet is on the first blue tick and the red tick, but this stream doesn't have a note on the following red tick so it sounds a bit off...

Offset looks fine. Nice~

Thank you~ ^^

wait i thought i starred this? ;_; *shooting a star again i guess*
Also shooting a kudos star to help it get more attention (if that even helps)

Sakura301 wrote:

wait i thought i starred this? ;_; *shooting a star again i guess*
Also shooting a kudos star to help it get more attention (if that even helps)

Thanks! ^^

Skin
Skin is poor quality.

Normal
Could be made into a great Easy by removing a few things.

For some reason the SB disappeared during gameplay, but it shows fine in Test and in the editor.

Impossiblexu's Normal
Most of your 1/2 parts are poor except the longer stream. The doubles don't fit at all in almost all cases, especially the notes doubled with sliders.

For 1/1 parts, increase spacing to make things more readable.

Hard
More like a Hard+.

Do not stack your 1/3's.
Remove all 1/4 notes (though the slider things are fine).

01:00:939 (3,4,5) - Total shit.
02:24:666 (2) - Timing?

For some reason the SB disappeared during gameplay, but it shows fine in Test and in the editor.

dksslqj's Lunatic
Do not stack your 1/3's.

I don't like the abuse of Clap. Doesn't fit well IMO.

Okay stream diff.

Storyboard
"For some reason the SB disappeared during gameplay, but it shows fine in Test and in the editor."
I think this is caused by you using the background image in a storyboard script.

The warning at the beginning of each diff goes by WAYYYY too fast. Before I even get a chance to read it it's gone, and I'm a native English reader.

Good job on the SB'ing, btw.

strager wrote:

Skin
Skin is poor quality. Overall? B-but I used some of Cyclone's and Lybydose's elements... *checks*

Normal
Could be made into a great Easy by removing a few things.
Some notes were changed to sliders, others removed completely. Perhaps this is slightly better?

For some reason the SB disappeared during gameplay, but it shows fine in Test and in the editor.

Impossiblexu's Normal
Most of your 1/2 parts are poor except the longer stream. The doubles don't fit at all in almost all cases, especially the notes doubled with sliders.

For 1/1 parts, increase spacing to make things more readable.

Hard
More like a Hard+.

Do not stack your 1/3's. Unstacked
Remove all 1/4 notes (though the slider things are fine). Removed

01:00:939 (3,4,5) - Total shit. Unshitted.
02:24:666 (2) - Timing? I moved this 1/8 forward, and it fits better, although it feels weird starting on a yellow tick...

For some reason the SB disappeared during gameplay, but it shows fine in Test and in the editor.

dksslqj's Lunatic
Do not stack your 1/3's.

I don't like the abuse of Clap. Doesn't fit well IMO.

Okay stream diff.

Storyboard
"For some reason the SB disappeared during gameplay, but it shows fine in Test and in the editor."
I think this is caused by you using the background image in a storyboard script.
Ok, hopefully worked around by making separate sprites for the background.
The warning at the beginning of each diff goes by WAYYYY too fast. Before I even get a chance to read it it's gone, and I'm a native English reader.
Extended
Good job on the SB'ing, btw. Thanks :3

Again, thanks ^^

Ran what are you doing in there get out this is a Sanae map
Yeah. Not very fitting. Just recolour a sliderball so its green?
Or better yet, throw in a snake to represent Kanako and the Frogs as Suwako.

The petals are a nice touch. The sudden bg pulsing, not so much, but that's just me.

Starred,

Offset +50 (1,535)

JInxyjem wrote:

Ran what are you doing in there get out this is a Sanae map
Yeah. Not very fitting. Just recolour a sliderball so its green?
Or better yet, throw in a snake to represent Kanako and the Frogs as Suwako.
Used a star unless I can find / someone suggests a better alternative.

The petals are a nice touch. The sudden bg pulsing, not so much, but that's just me.

Starred,

Thanks ^^

Lybydose wrote:

Offset +50 (1,535)

Changed. Thanks!

Sorry I'm not pro about modding, and couldn't find any big problem. @_@

Here are some suggestions.

Maybe add the same time setting for the last spinner of Impossiblexu's diff and dksslqj's diff?

I remember there's a rule that all diff's first time points must be the same. So perhaps change the dksslqj's diff's BPM from 82.5 to 165.0, and make a BPM adjustment of 0.5x.

Perhaps Touhou 10: Mountain of Faith is a more accurate source? Also, I don't think you need impossiblexu dksslqj in your tags.

I love this song, and star~~

Selee wrote:

Sorry I'm not pro about modding, and couldn't find any big problem. @_@

Here are some suggestions.

Maybe add the same time setting for the last spinner of Impossiblexu's diff and dksslqj's diff?
Haha it's their difficulties~ I don't really have their permission to change these.

I remember there's a rule that all diff's first time points must be the same. So perhaps change the dksslqj's diff's BPM from 82.5 to 165.0, and make a BPM adjustment of 0.5x.
Same...

Perhaps Touhou 10: Mountain of Faith is a more accurate source? Also, I don't think you need impossiblexu dksslqj in your tags.
Nope! Mountain of Faith goes in the tags, and only Touhou is in the source. Since impossiblexu and dksslqj are guest mappers, by courtesy, they are in the tags as well.
I love this song, and star~~

Thanks ^^

Hello thepianist.

At first it needs to say that whole map is cute,really well-mapped,so have a star~

[Normal]
Haven't spot something bad while testing,but maybe some little remarks:
00:33:535 (5) - Maybe adding a circle and starting spinner at 00:33:716?
01:39:716 (3) - Maybe change it to reverse-slider up to 01:40:080 and then add a circle at 01:40:444? Sounds better to me.
01:52:080 - I bet you missed it purposely,but maybe adding a circle?

[Impossiblexu's Normal]
00:22:625 (4) - End it at 00:22:989 and add a circle at 00:23:171?
00:34:989 - Maybe adding a circle to follow the rhytm?
00:35:171 (1) - Start spinner here?
01:44:080 (5) - Ending the slider at 01:44:444 and putting the circle to 01:44:625?
02:54:444 (5) - Maybe adding a circle? Sounds better to me.

[Hard]
01:10:625 (3) - Fine,but a bit hard to read.
01:56:444 (6) - Adding a circle here,and starting spinner at 01:56:625?
02:52:989 - Fine,but maybe you could silence this one at all?

[dksslqj's Lunatic]
00:22:897 (4) - I don't like this.
00:46:897 (8) - Maybe start here 00:46:988?
02:13:897 (5) - Very hard to read with this distance snapping.

Good luck to your map.

SadKangaroo wrote:

Hello thepianist.

At first it needs to say that whole map is cute,really well-mapped,so have a star~

[Normal]
Haven't spot something bad while testing,but maybe some little remarks:
00:33:535 (5) - Maybe adding a circle and starting spinner at 00:33:716? Sure.
01:39:716 (3) - Maybe change it to reverse-slider up to 01:40:080 and then add a circle at 01:40:444? Sounds better to me. Nah.
01:52:080 - I bet you missed it purposely,but maybe adding a circle? Haha I don't think it's needed.

[Impossiblexu's Normal]
00:22:625 (4) - End it at 00:22:989 and add a circle at 00:23:171?
00:34:989 - Maybe adding a circle to follow the rhytm?
00:35:171 (1) - Start spinner here?
01:44:080 (5) - Ending the slider at 01:44:444 and putting the circle to 01:44:625?
02:54:444 (5) - Maybe adding a circle? Sounds better to me.

[Hard]
01:10:625 (3) - Fine,but a bit hard to read. Should be better.
01:56:444 (6) - Adding a circle here,and starting spinner at 01:56:625? Added
02:52:989 - Fine,but maybe you could silence this one at all? Oops

[dksslqj's Lunatic]
00:22:897 (4) - I don't like this.
00:46:897 (8) - Maybe start here 00:46:988?
02:13:897 (5) - Very hard to read with this distance snapping.

Good luck to your map.

Thanks!

Star, would like to see this one ranked

DJ KRZY wrote:

Star, would like to see this one ranked

Thanks ^^

DJ KRZY wrote:

Star, would like to see this one ranked

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the offset is strange since the last time i checked, it made the map messy

maybe...


i dunno maybe it's just me but the notes sounds messy :/

Arusha Shuna wrote:

the offset is strange since the last time i checked, it made the map messy

maybe...

Redownload the map. The mp3 appears to have been changed since this was first uploaded. You should also make a note of this in the original post. The post does say something about downloading for added storyboard elements, but there's nothing about an mp3 change, and it's easy to miss it in the changelog.

Lybydose wrote:

Arusha Shuna wrote:

the offset is strange since the last time i checked, it made the map messy

maybe...

Redownload the map. The mp3 appears to have been changed since this was first uploaded. You should also make a note of this in the original post. The post does say something about downloading for added storyboard elements, but there's nothing about an mp3 change, and it's easy to miss it in the changelog.

Ah, doing that right now. Thanks!

Ahahaha sanae~~~~~ Go strobs!!!

Must be ranked !

~Star

Lybydose wrote:

Arusha Shuna wrote:

the offset is strange since the last time i checked, it made the map messy

maybe...

Redownload the map. The mp3 appears to have been changed since this was first uploaded. You should also make a note of this in the original post. The post does say something about downloading for added storyboard elements, but there's nothing about an mp3 change, and it's easy to miss it in the changelog.

oh i see :X

thanks for the info

mekadon95 wrote:

Ahahaha sanae~~~~~ Go strobs!!!

SPOILER

Normal
00:22:625 (2) - Crash seems better here You mean finish? I don't agree though :<
02:02:262 (3) - Add another repeat with clap hitsounds in it Nah...
02:05:535 (2) - Clap here It seems to come out of nowhere though! D:
02:38:625 (1) - ^ &
02:41:171 (5) - ^ &

Impossiblexu's normal
00:11:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Etna should work fine here :3
00:32:080 (5) - Make this sound silent
00:46:625 (1) - Replace whistle with clap
00:47:353 (4) - ^
02:25:534 (3,4,5) - Zig-zag streams works better here
02:35:534 (1) - Remove note
02:35:716 (2) - New combo if you did ^
02:53:171 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really like stacking here

Hard
01:02:080 (6) - Add note Why?
01:05:171 (5) - Add clap Okie
02:06:625 (1) - Remove note No
02:06:989 (2) - New combo if you did ^ ^
02:38:625 (1) - Make arcs equal to midpoint Better
02:40:080 (3) - ^ ^
02:52:807 (6) - Add clap Nah

Lunatic
00:04:989 (4,5,6,7,8) - Those are wird, change it
02:20:442 (3) - 1/8 might not work well here since it's hard to clear it in Taiko
02:39:806 (1,2,3,4...16) - Make a better circle
Sadly, I don't really like this diff; lots notes are out though :3

Thanks!

nothing i could mod :(
i thought it was PV
but if u want a nazi:
- change spell card title animation horizontal from right outer screen to current left position
- make it bigger a little bit

btw.. nice lighting.png fx <3 never thought about it

These are suggestions, you don't have to change anything.

[General]

* delete osb file and fullsubmit.
* tag..'sanae' is doesn't suffice. add tags ' kochiya '

[Normal]

00:53:898 (1) - add finish in start
01:05:535 (1) - ^
01:41:898 (2) - add whistle?
01:52:080 (X) - Perhaps,add circle.

[Impossiblexu's Normal]

00:47:716 (5) - umm..add finish in end?

[Hard]

00:06:625 (6) - remove finish with start
00:48:080 (1) - add finish in start
00:59:353 (5) - remove finish
00:59:716 (1) - add finish in start

[dksslqj's Lunatic]

Fun



Good map!! >.<

Frill wrote:

These are suggestions, you don't have to change anything.

[General]

* delete osb file and fullsubmit. No, that would delete parts of my storyboard.
* tag..'sanae' is doesn't suffice. add tags ' kochiya ' Added

[Normal]

00:53:898 (1) - add finish in start Added in end.
01:05:535 (1) - ^ ^
01:41:898 (2) - add whistle? Nah
01:52:080 (X) - Perhaps,add circle. ^

[Impossiblexu's Normal]

00:47:716 (5) - umm..add finish in end?

[Hard]

00:06:625 (6) - remove finish with start Nah
00:48:080 (1) - add finish in start Added
00:59:353 (5) - remove finish ^
00:59:716 (1) - add finish in start ^

[dksslqj's Lunatic]

Fun



Good map!! >.<

Thanks! :3

[dksslgj's Lunatic]
00:23:079 (6) 1grid up?

Star :]

Bump :p

Hi~

Great SB

yangzd88 wrote:

Hi~

Normal

01:56:444 (2) - Whistle哈哈我不覺得需要吧~

Impossiblexu

改成Normal+?
00:11:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,) - 165BPM的1/2连打有点难啊
01:10:625 (4) - 摆右一点...好难看清
01:26:444 (5) - 这个重叠没叠好
01:34:625 (1) - spacing
01:38:080 (5) - 重叠
01:44:080 (5) - 缩短1/4拍

Hard

Finish hitsounds is bad...
00:50:625 (4) - clap Ok
01:05:898 (2) - ^Already has~

Great SB 謝謝!　:3

Thanks!

star

Star~

[Normal]
01:48:625 (4) - You don't need the repeats except for spacing. I say get rid of them.
If you get rid of them add a note at 01:49:171

That's all i got.

Idk about some stuff but ima leave them alone since they sound good just not what i would do.

+star

johnsage92 wrote:

[Normal]
01:48:625 (4) - You don't need the repeats except for spacing. I say get rid of them.
If you get rid of them add a note at 01:49:171

That's all i got.

Idk about some stuff but ima leave them alone since they sound good just not what i would do.

+star

Haha I like that though :c

Thanks for the feedback nevertheless ^^

Seriously, why don't you find a BAT and get this map ranked?

Selee wrote:

Seriously, why don't you find a BAT and get this map ranked?

I do! But they're all busy/not taking requests at the moment/don't want to look at it/inactive.

General
Why do you have Soundtrack as a tag?

Normal

00:44:444 (1,2,1) - Move left 1 unit. (Aligns these)

00:45:898 (2,3) - Move these left roughly 1 unit. (Apply distance snap to both notes) After that reapply distance snap to 00:47:353 (4) - and that should completely fix the spacing discrepancies here.)

impossiblexu's Normal

00:16:989 (4,5,6,7,1) - I really don't like the curve of these notes.Look at the angle of note 4. It's sending the cursor downward of the next note. This is a semi awkward transition. I suggest you move 00:17:535 (5,6,7) - down 1 unit and 00:18:625 (1) - down 2 units.

00:41:535 (5) - Move 2 units to the left? (Use distance snap) (It's to close to the previous slider and I don't think it really needs to be.) After that make sure that these 00:42:989 (1,2,3,4) - are the proper distance away from note 5.

00:45:171 (4,5,1) - Spacing is offplaced here as well. Properly spaced out the 5,1 transition would match the spacing at 00:47:353 (4,5) -

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24104

00:52:807 (4,5,6) - Eh I'm on the fence with this. It's just not the right beat, but it is playable. It doesn't sound anything like the beat there. You could fix this by deleting note 6 and placing note 5 here: 00:53:171 -

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24110

00:58:262 (4,5,1) - Inconsistent spacing. Please fix this by moving note 5 left and down 1 unit. It plays notably better.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24112

01:01:171 (2) - Move up 1 unit? This is a suggestion. It feels more natural that the curve of these notes start above 00:59:716 (1) - , because that note is curved upward. It's fine either way.

01:25:171 (1,2,3,4) - Do these need to be curved inward like this? It looks slightly strange to me. It's technically fine.

02:41:171 (6) - I think this belongs here 02:41:080 -

Hard

00:02:262 (3) - Isn't centered between 1,2. Fix this by turning grid snap off and moving it with distance snap until it is centered. Realign notes after.
00:03:716 (6) - ^
00:05:171 (3) - ^
00:06:626 (6) - ^

00:40:625 (5,6,7,8) - This throws me off. I keep wanting to repeat with each slider, but 6 and 7 move in the same direction. I can hit it every time when the sliders reverse direction. 6 goes right, 7 goes left, 8 goes right.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24126

Eh that's the pattern I made up. I haven't went over all the variables or how the end would work. So the idea might not work. Ignore if you want.

01:36:080 (3) - Turn grid snap off and tug down on this with distance snap on. It will fix a slight spacing flaw.

Lunatic

00:04:989 (4) - This tone is to low to follow properly. I highly suggest you don't place this note here and instead follow the notable beat. Move 4 to here 00:04:807 - and add a note here 00:05:171 - . This is the proper beat here.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24132

In the screenshot I tried to make a proper pattern that would fit. Note 4 is 4 units from the end of note 3 and the top edge is 1 unit above the horizontal axis. Knowing that, you can place note 5 and 6 in position. Use my design if you want, just please fix the beat here.

00:09:716 (5) - This is supposed to go here 00:09:898 - . If you listen closely you can hear the triple. It can also be placed here.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24136

00:21:169 (1,2) - The overlap here does not look good. You should fix this. (Try moving note 2 left and up 1 unit. Just use distance snap to move it into place.) Check note 3 afterward.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24138

00:36:988 (3,4,5) - What is with the spacing increase here? Reduce the spacing by 1 unit. (And yes it broke flow when I played it)

00:59:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - So awkward. Move 01:01:169 (7) - down 3 or so units? If you do this move 01:01:715 (8,9,10) - left 2 units and down 1 unit to fix the spacing. I'm not entirely sure how it ill affect the flow into 01:02:624 (1,2,3) -

01:32:806 (3) - Move up 1 unit? (Suggestion: purely cosmetic)

02:37:079 - Add note?

I'm sure someone will find fun in that last difficulty. It's somewhere. Since my post is mostly suggestions, I'll star this.

TheVileOne wrote:

General
Why do you have Soundtrack as a tag?

Normal

00:44:444 (1,2,1) - Move left 1 unit. (Aligns these)

00:45:898 (2,3) - Move these left roughly 1 unit. (Apply distance snap to both notes) After that reapply distance snap to 00:47:353 (4) - and that should completely fix the spacing discrepancies here.)

Both fixed

Hard

00:02:262 (3) - Isn't centered between 1,2. Fix this by turning grid snap off and moving it with distance snap until it is centered. Realign notes after.
00:03:716 (6) - ^
00:05:171 (3) - ^
00:06:626 (6) - ^

All should be fixed

00:40:625 (5,6,7,8) - This throws me off. I keep wanting to repeat with each slider, but 6 and 7 move in the same direction. I can hit it every time when the sliders reverse direction. 6 goes right, 7 goes left, 8 goes right.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/24126

Eh that's the pattern I made up. I haven't went over all the variables or how the end would work. So the idea might not work. Ignore if you want.

Personally, I think it's fine as is;;


01:36:080 (3) - Turn grid snap off and tug down on this with distance snap on. It will fix a slight spacing flaw.

Done

Thanks! (Will contact other two about diffs.)

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Updated!

Dunno if it's just me, but I think dksslqj's Lunatic diff Sounds a bit off.
It works if you drag all notes 1/8 backwards though.

All in all a good map -> Star

EDIT: actually it's 1/6

Hm, the map is really good. I like it.
- But in the follwing parts: 0:22:897, 1:03:897, 1:49:716, 2:13:897, 2:24:806 it can confuse some player's(Dosen't mean it confuse me).
Maybe there are better way's to manage this parts.

What I also have remark, you put the cirlces/sliders on the hearable clang. I like that.
- But at the point, 1:04:534 there is also an clang but you didn't put in a circle.
That makes me going to the first point again: Confusing players.
Maybe you should check out were do you forgot a circle?

Atm, I don't have so much time so I can't chek out every clang and second and write down every solution, sorry.

Please remark that this are just suggestions.

Well, good luck with the ranking~! It's really nice.
Greetings,
おのさき人

DarkDunskin wrote:

Dunno if it's just me, but I think dksslqj's Lunatic diff Sounds a bit off.
It works if you drag all notes 1/8 backwards though.

All in all a good map -> Star

EDIT: actually it's 1/6

It's probably just you~ Lybydose checked the timing with many others, and it sounds fine~ Thanks for trying though!

OnosakiHito wrote:

Hm, the map is really good. I like it.
- But in the follwing parts: 0:22:897, 1:03:897, 1:49:716, 2:13:897, 2:24:806 it can confuse some player's(Dosen't mean it confuse me).
Maybe there are better way's to manage this parts.

What I also have remark, you put the cirlces/sliders on the hearable clang. I like that.
- But at the point, 1:04:534 there is also an clang but you didn't put in a circle.
That makes me going to the first point again: Confusing players.
Maybe you should check out were do you forgot a circle?

Atm, I don't have so much time so I can't chek out every clang and second and write down every solution, sorry.

Please remark that this are just suggestions.

Well, good luck with the ranking~! It's really nice.
Greetings,
おのさき人

Ahaha I don't get your mod post at all without difficulty tags or whatnot ;; I'll probably contact you via in game PM.

I get lost in some parts >.<, anyway it's well synchronized with the song. Well done~

Fun map, but light strobes.. hate those.

Orkel wrote:

Fun map, but light strobes.. hate those.

The light strobes very light (ie I believe 4 for the whole map or so) (no pun intended) to signify spell card ends...;;

starr

Please remove unnecessary transparencies from

1. Epilepsy Warning.png
2. Spotlight.png
3. leaves.png
4. A Wind blows.png
5. cardbg.png
6. Secretly Inherited Art of Danmaku.png
7. face07mct.png
8. MoreSakura.png
9. Sakura1.png

[impossiblexu's Normal]
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/29216 Is this supposed to be the correct strobe for this diff?

[Normal]
Dont like the normal-hit whistle used here, i recommend you use a different hitsound in those instances

[Overall]
Amazing indeed, fix theese and i'll bubble

Sakura Hana wrote:

Please remove unnecessary transparencies from

1. Epilepsy Warning.pngX
2. Spotlight.pngAlready at minimum size
   
   SPOILER

   
3. leaves.pngX
4. A Wind blows.png X
5. cardbg.pngAlready at minimum size
   
   SPOILER

   
6. Secretly Inherited Art of Danmaku.pngX
7. face07mct.pngX
8. MoreSakura.png X
9. Sakura1.pngX

Changed!
[impossiblexu's Normal]
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/29216 Is this supposed to be the correct strobe for this diff?
Whoops, fixed
[Normal]
Dont like the normal-hit whistle used here, i recommend you use a different hitsound in those instances
Changed

[Overall]
Amazing indeed, fix theese and i'll bubble

Thank you!

Okay then Bubbled!~

Sakura Hana wrote:

Okay then Bubbled!~

Thank you!

Looks good to me. Special thanks to Sakura Hana for poiting out a good old pending map here.

Ranked~

Congratulations pianist!

As Alace said to me I did a mistake x_x

[dksslqj's Lunatic]

02:13:897 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Wrong snap.

Unranked.

o.0

wow

ohhhh my FCed ･ﾟ･(ﾉД`;)･ﾟ･

it looked good to me >_>

uh.......

osuplayer111 wrote:

As Alace said to me I did a mistake x_x

[dksslqj's Lunatic]

02:13:897 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Wrong snap.

Unranked.

I agree. wrong snap

Sorry thepainist orz you're going to need 2 different BAT/MAT to bubble/rerank this

oh my god

x.x fixed.

Awwrite!
Bubbled.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Awwrite!
Bubbled.

Thank you! :3

OMG

sorry thepianist

offset:-7ms, move all green lines and SB stuffs, need to full submit

<Normal+Hard>
slidertick 1 sounds better ?

<Lunatic>
01:04:079 (3) - 1/3 shounds bad too i suggest only putobjects on white tick only
02:13:897 (5,6,7) - ^

Alace wrote:

offset:-7ms, move all green lines and SB stuffs, need to full submit

<Normal+Hard>
slidertick 1 sounds better ?

<Lunatic>
01:04:079 (3) - 1/3 shounds bad too i suggest only putobjects on white tick only
02:13:897 (5,6,7) - ^

Changed tick frequency and snapping + timing. Thanks~

Lunatic`s offset didn`t chqnge XD

EDIT:OK GO!

Just one more thing, add an approachcircle.png to the folder since you have a custom hitcircle.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Just one more thing, add an approachcircle.png to the folder since you have a custom hitcircle.

Ok, added! thanks~

Reranked!

Mafiamaster wrote:

Reranked!

Thank you! :]

Submitted:
Ranked: Jan 11, 2010
Not yet

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o:?

Nice map ^^"

KuraiPettan wrote:

o:?

Nice map ^^"

Thanks!

Also, thank you peppy! C:

Ranked by peppy woot!

Congrat！

Selee wrote:

Congrat！

Thank you!

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ranked by peppy woot!

Haha there was a ranking scoreboard problem so it had to be 're-re-re-reranked'.

Finally~

Congratulations

impossiblexu wrote:

Finally~

Congratulations

Thank you!

Yayz !

Finally, congrats

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ranked by peppy woot!

Epic win xD

Fight69 wrote:

Yayz !

Finally, congrats

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ranked by peppy woot!

Epic win xD

Thank you!