ohh COOL&CREATE
red=you have to fix this.
black=just suggestion.
blue=my onw opinion.you can totally ignore it.
[general]
don't use gray as combo color,it would be confusing with fail color in MP
01:45:820 - 02:00:347 (break) it's not necessary to put a huge break here,pls map them.at least shorten.
[Xgor's Easy]
set kiai time same to your other diffs.
[Normal]
00:11:715 (3,1) - too near.
00:20:557 - 00:21:189 - add a circle at 00:20:557, then put 00:20:715 (1) start at 00:20:873 , end at 00:21:189 , that sounds much better.
00:44:873 (5) - nazi right 2 small grid.
00:45:505 (6) - right 1 small grid.
00:48:663 (6) - add a circle.
00:49:294 (2) - add a return.
00:55:926 (5,1,2,3) - spacing not so tidy...there're many same problems and I won't point out them all.
[Hard]
01:20:241 (3,4,5) - confusing. it's a equilateral triangle,but beat in different time.01:21:031 (6) - new combo.
01:21:505 (8) - ^
01:21:978 (10) - ^,then this anti jump is readable.
01:22:136 (2) - remove new combo.
02:34:294 (6) - new combo.
[Lunatic]
I reaaaaaally suck at OD9.....
00:11:873 (7) - put it farther to (6).
00:13:136 (3) - ^
01:21:741 (4) - put it at 01:21:663.
beats a too similar with [Hard].... try to use more 1/4 beat.
that's all
star
red=you have to fix this.
black=just suggestion.
blue=my onw opinion.you can totally ignore it.
[general]
don't use gray as combo color,it would be confusing with fail color in MP
01:45:820 - 02:00:347 (break) it's not necessary to put a huge break here,pls map them.at least shorten.
[Xgor's Easy]
set kiai time same to your other diffs.
[Normal]
00:11:715 (3,1) - too near.
00:20:557 - 00:21:189 - add a circle at 00:20:557, then put 00:20:715 (1) start at 00:20:873 , end at 00:21:189 , that sounds much better.
00:44:873 (5) - nazi right 2 small grid.
00:45:505 (6) - right 1 small grid.
00:48:663 (6) - add a circle.
00:49:294 (2) - add a return.
00:55:926 (5,1,2,3) - spacing not so tidy...there're many same problems and I won't point out them all.
[Hard]
01:20:241 (3,4,5) - confusing. it's a equilateral triangle,but beat in different time.01:21:031 (6) - new combo.
01:21:505 (8) - ^
01:21:978 (10) - ^,then this anti jump is readable.
01:22:136 (2) - remove new combo.
02:34:294 (6) - new combo.
[Lunatic]
I reaaaaaally suck at OD9.....
00:11:873 (7) - put it farther to (6).
00:13:136 (3) - ^
01:21:741 (4) - put it at 01:21:663.
beats a too similar with [Hard].... try to use more 1/4 beat.
that's all
star