Hi there!
[General]
[General]
- The spinner at the end is excessively long, and will be tiring for some players - especially in the case of Easy difficulty. I also think it fits the song better if you just remove the spinner and end on the last note of the kiai section.
- 00:13:414 (1) - The whistle at the end doesn't seem to fit with the hitsound pattern used with the previous iterations of this phrase at 00:02:638 (1) and 00:06:230 (1)
- 00:15:210 (3) - I think it would be nice to use drum sampleset with soft additions here to highlight the drums.
- 00:18:803 (2) - Remove whistle from end.
- 00:20:599 (1) - Add whistle on head?
- 00:25:987 (3) - Same as above.
- 00:32:723 (2,3) - Looks nicer if you make the curve match with (1) like this: http://puu.sh/liV5r/f1a2c0ed1c.jpg
- 00:36:764 (3) - Flows slightly better when curved the other direction to lead into (1) a little smoother in my opinion: http://puu.sh/liVd4/7ba7e14a35.jpg
- 00:43:949 (3) - I think it would be nice to use drum sampleset with soft additions here to highlight the drums.
- 00:58:318 (3) - Same as above.
- 01:08:197 (2) - Remove whistle from head?
- 01:09:095 (3) - At most other parts with this rhythm, you used a whistle on the repeat. Would you like to do the same here?
- 01:10:891 (1) - Whistle on head to match 00:27:783 (1)
- 00:06:903 (2,3) - I recommend changing the rhythm here to match 00:03:311 (2) The rhythm in the song is the same, and since the beginning of the song is relatively calm, I recommend starting out with fewer clicks so you have room to build up.
- 00:20:599 (1) - Why is there a red node on the repeat? I'm not sure what difference that makes, but you should probably make it a white node.
- 00:31:376 (1) - This is way outside the grid, and comes close to touching the edge of the screen. If possible, try moving it more to the left, starting with the objects at 00:24:191
- 00:35:866 (3,4,1) - This rhythm is really awkward to play. I know it follows the vocals, but skipping beat four makes it feel very empty without the clap. I think this will be a more appropriate rhythm: Image It will also help to give emphasis on the downbeat with a circle rather than a weak slider end, espcially if you stack the circle on the head of the next slider like so: Image
- 00:37:887 (4,5) - I think this will be better as a 1/2 beat slider to help emphasize the repeated offbeat vocals.
- Some of the hitsound suggestions for Easy may apply here. Make sure to check.
- 00:13:863 (1,2) - Would look nice if you blanketed these: http://puu.sh/ljhoF/68757674d7.jpg
- 00:30:702 (4) - Drum sampleset would fit nicely on the head.
- Some of the hitsound suggestions for Easy may apply here. Make sure to check.