Squirrel wrote:
hey there!
from my queue~ :3
I'm just making suggetsions, feel free to disagree with anything mentioned! c:
GeneralEasy
- is there something missing at the end of the map? there are so many green lines, but nothing's mapped.. O: Added a spinner o3o
- I like the diff, very neat~ I just disagree with DS of 1.1 >: the objects look kinda glued together
have you considered using slightly higher DS like 1.2 or 1.3? I feel like that'd match the song better It was the CS, i changed for CS 3 and it's much better nowNormal
- 00:08:026 (3) - it's the same as 00:04:434 (3) - , which is not a bad thing, but considering the strong vocals that are added here, I'd prefer if it were slightly different. maybe you can try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/l2san.jpg maybe you think it's too hard for an Easy, but I think it's quite suitable.. Hmm, sorry, i prefer my actual rhythm.
- 00:11:618 (2,3) - hmh. imo a 1/2 slider on 00:12:741 - works better than just a circle. just an alterntaive, ofc Fixed.
- 00:19:701 (3,1) - movemnt is a little uncomfortable ;-; you could try to smoothen it a little by moving (1) elsewhere. example: http://puu.sh/l2ss2.jpg Done.
- 00:33:172 (3) - the slidertail is a little offscreen :/ can you move this further up to avoid that? (I don't think it has any effect on the gameplay, but to be on the safe side.. also it'd look better, imo xD) Changed the shape o3o
- 01:09:095 (3,1) - pretty close, can you move (1) a pixel or two to the right? Changed the CS, so i don't need to change this anymore!!
Hard
- 00:20:599 (1) - consider changing the rhythm here, the long sliders matched better in the beginning, but the music gets more lively here, so it feels a little out of place. it's, imo, "too less to play", I expected more to click. I'd go with this: http://puu.sh/l2t7Q.jpg You're right, i didn't follow your example, but i changed the slider here.
- 00:24:191 (1) - similar here. also, there's a pretty strong beat on the second and the third white tick and they shouldn't be ignored, imo. consider shortening the slider and adding two circles on 00:24:865 - and 00:25:089 - ^
- 00:25:987 (3) - same as the first point. the rhythm I suggested before would work here, too, but I'm sure you can come up with another one (in case you want to change anything) ^^
- 00:40:356 (2,3,4) - rhythm seems off to me because the strong beats are on the sliderends of (3,4). maybe a different rhythm would work better. example: http://puu.sh/l2tu5.jpg Fixed.
- eeh, is this diff finished yet? the copypasted Kiai part was unexpected. :/ I mean it's fine if you like it that way, but I have to admit it's pretty boring to play the same thing twice, especially if it's in such a sort time.. Ughhh, i'm too lazy xDDDD okay, i'll map something different.
- 00:16:894 - missing a circle here? you mapped hte blue tick before (00:16:333 (2) - ) so leaving this blank sounds off Added.
- 00:38:560 (1) - I'd prefer a circle here over the slider because there's no sound that exactly matches the slider (vocals start way before the slider and the next beat is on the next white tick..) I prefer a slider at this part, but i extended to 1/2
- 00:44:622 - there's another beat here, so consider adding another circle? or you might want to try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/l2ucQ.jpg Added.
- 00:52:031 (3) - there's nothing on the blue tick, but one on the red tick, so I think shortening this to a 1/2 slider matches the melody slightly better Oki.
- 00:58:318 (4,5) - I miss some emphasis on the beats here. following vocals is nice too, hmm~ up to you ofcourse! ( http://puu.sh/l2ur9.jpg ) Emphasis done! O3O
- 01:27:056 - missing something clickable here ;o; add a circle? Nice catch
- 01:28:740 - here, too. another circle? ^
rather short mod, but the set looks nice as it is :3 Thanks for the mod, it was really helpful!
Good luck with this!
//squee