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Linked Horizon - Guren no Yumiya (TV Size ver.) [OsuMania]
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Topic Starter
yea i know my wrong thanks for rebubble shana[Shana Lesus] wrote:
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Topic Starter
fake guren no yumiya xD-Kamikaze- wrote:
Be sure to check out my my awesome map of that song too!
14K :3
you mean the only map that this song has ever deservedSpectorDG wrote:
fake guren no yumiya xD
14K :3
Topic Starter
Dat otaku song-Kamikaze- wrote:
you mean the only map that this song has ever deservedSpectorDG wrote:
fake guren no yumiya xD
14K :3
no I was talking about this song
argh why did it take me so long to check this
4K
[Pharos' Normal]
[Hard]
[Muu's Hard+]
sorry for taking way too long on this ;_;
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[Pharos' Normal]
Mod inside
[]00:24:705 (24705|1,24871|0,24871|3) - Make this pattern go inward instead of outward. Sort of like this: http://puu.sh/kHcAT/adadb0324f.png
Reason being is that chords in outer columns can leave a bigger impact than chord in inner columns, so in this way we can create a buildup to the next part of this section.
00:51:936 (51936|3,52268|0) - Ctrl + H to keep a variety of chords going instead of having those becoming a bit repetitive.
00:57:249 - Add a note here for impact
01:02:562 (62562|2,62894|1) - Ctrl + H, same reason as last time
01:04:887 (64887|2,65053|3) - Switch these around by column so they give a better lead to the upcoming chord.
01:09:204 to 01:25:144 - For each of the 2-note chords there on every other double-white tick, I'd suggest moving a note to 1 on some chords to keep some variety coming in.
01:25:476 (85476|0,85642|2,85974|3,86140|1) - Rearrange to 2,4,1,3 respectively to follow the pitch.
Reason being is that chords in outer columns can leave a bigger impact than chord in inner columns, so in this way we can create a buildup to the next part of this section.
00:51:936 (51936|3,52268|0) - Ctrl + H to keep a variety of chords going instead of having those becoming a bit repetitive.
00:57:249 - Add a note here for impact
01:02:562 (62562|2,62894|1) - Ctrl + H, same reason as last time
01:04:887 (64887|2,65053|3) - Switch these around by column so they give a better lead to the upcoming chord.
01:09:204 to 01:25:144 - For each of the 2-note chords there on every other double-white tick, I'd suggest moving a note to 1 on some chords to keep some variety coming in.
01:25:476 (85476|0,85642|2,85974|3,86140|1) - Rearrange to 2,4,1,3 respectively to follow the pitch.
[Hard]
Mod inside
[]This one's gonna be like the last mod ( p/4454955 ), except I'm gonna delve a bit deeper in it.
My main concern here is the lack of consistency with 00:02:788 to 00:13:415 - and 01:06:547 to 01:17:174 - . Both parts are essentially the same parts in the song, but the patterns themselves aren't really consistent. Keep in mind that the patterns don't have to be the same for both parts, but their density and consistency should be similar to each other and throughout the whole map.
Also 01:17:174 to the ending could be a bit denser to match the song's mood.
...poke me in IRC? This mod's gonna be a big block of text if I ever type it out, and suggesting stuff in real-time should make it easier for the both of us.
My main concern here is the lack of consistency with 00:02:788 to 00:13:415 - and 01:06:547 to 01:17:174 - . Both parts are essentially the same parts in the song, but the patterns themselves aren't really consistent. Keep in mind that the patterns don't have to be the same for both parts, but their density and consistency should be similar to each other and throughout the whole map.
Also 01:17:174 to the ending could be a bit denser to match the song's mood.
...poke me in IRC? This mod's gonna be a big block of text if I ever type it out, and suggesting stuff in real-time should make it easier for the both of us.
[Muu's Hard+]
Mod inside
00:13:415 - Add a note on 3 or 4 to emphasize the transition.
00:24:954 (24954|1) - Pretty sure this one's a ghost note.
If you removed the note above, rearrange 00:25:037 (25037|2,25120|3,25203|2,25286|1,25369|2,25536|1) - to 2,3,4,3,2,3 respectively to show a bit of balance on both hands.
00:35:000 (35000|3) - What's the LN for?
00:38:072 (38072|0) - Ghost?
00:43:136 - Add a note here to accent the brass instrument.
00:43:468 - Same as above.
00:56:087 - Do this pattern to accent the brass and apply some pitch relevance into it with the way the LN's arranged?
01:16:510 - Pattern suggestion again: This is to apply pitch relevance to the accented instruments as well as keeping flow for other notes.
00:24:954 (24954|1) - Pretty sure this one's a ghost note.
If you removed the note above, rearrange 00:25:037 (25037|2,25120|3,25203|2,25286|1,25369|2,25536|1) - to 2,3,4,3,2,3 respectively to show a bit of balance on both hands.
00:35:000 (35000|3) - What's the LN for?
00:38:072 (38072|0) - Ghost?
00:43:136 - Add a note here to accent the brass instrument.
00:43:468 - Same as above.
00:56:087 - Do this pattern to accent the brass and apply some pitch relevance into it with the way the LN's arranged?
01:16:510 - Pattern suggestion again: This is to apply pitch relevance to the accented instruments as well as keeping flow for other notes.
sorry for taking way too long on this ;_;
Topic Starter
thanks for check Blocko <3
all okayBlocko wrote:
argh why did it take me so long to check this4K 4K Column:[]
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
[Pharos' Normal]Mod inside[]00:24:705 (24705|1,24871|0,24871|3) - Make this pattern go inward instead of outward. Sort of like this: http://puu.sh/kHcAT/adadb0324f.png
Reason being is that chords in outer columns can leave a bigger impact than chord in inner columns, so in this way we can create a buildup to the next part of this section.
00:51:936 (51936|3,52268|0) - Ctrl + H to keep a variety of chords going instead of having those becoming a bit repetitive.
00:57:249 - Add a note here for impact
01:02:562 (62562|2,62894|1) - Ctrl + H, same reason as last time
01:04:887 (64887|2,65053|3) - Switch these around by column so they give a better lead to the upcoming chord.
01:09:204 to 01:25:144 - For each of the 2-note chords there on every other double-white tick, I'd suggest moving a note to 1 on some chords to keep some variety coming in.
01:25:476 (85476|0,85642|2,85974|3,86140|1) - Rearrange to 2,4,1,3 respectively to follow the pitch.
sorry for taking way too long on this ;_;
http://puu.sh/kYe2u/224462d0d5.rar
everything above accepted^^ also adding a LN on the last part 01:28:631 (88631|0) -Blocko wrote:
[Muu's Hard+]Mod inside00:13:415 - Add a note on 3 or 4 to emphasize the transition.
00:24:954 (24954|1) - Pretty sure this one's a ghost note.
If you removed the note above, rearrange 00:25:037 (25037|2,25120|3,25203|2,25286|1,25369|2,25536|1) - to 2,3,4,3,2,3 respectively to show a bit of balance on both hands.
00:35:000 (35000|3) - What's the LN for? my baaad asdf. It is for short organ sound, i put it too long ;w; shorten it~
00:38:072 (38072|0) - Ghost?
00:43:136 - Add a note here to accent the brass instrument.
00:43:468 - Same as above.
00:56:087 - Do this pattern to accent the brass and apply some pitch relevance into it with the way the LN's arranged?
01:16:510 - Pattern suggestion again: This is to apply pitch relevance to the accented instruments as well as keeping flow for other notes.
update http://puu.sh/kYhI5/5130f4e58d.rar
Topic Starter
Updated
added in Tags "sound horizon revo jiyuu e no shingeki"
no kudosu
no kudosu
Topic Starter
:V thanksLigerZero wrote:
added in Tags "sound horizon revo jiyuu e no shingeki"
no kudosu
no need for 'horizon' imo since there's one in title
Topic Starter
Updated
Topic Starter
lmao double post
For the past few months, we covered a lot of things. It's probably too many to list.
I'm glad we made it this far, though!
4K
[Pharos' Normal]
[Hard]
[Muu-chan's Hard+]
Will most likely drop a hitsound mod on the whole mapset later. It looks like it needs a bit more organization before we get this moving.
Feel free send me a forum PM or poke me in IRC if you have any questions about the suggestions I made.
I'm glad we made it this far, though!
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[Pharos' Normal]
Mod inside
[]00:35:498 (35498|2) - Remove clap. No drum snare there.
00:55:589 (55589|1) - Remove finish.
01:00:902 (60902|1) - Same as above
00:56:917 (56917|2) - Switch this finish into clap.
00:55:589 (55589|1) - Remove finish.
01:00:902 (60902|1) - Same as above
00:56:917 (56917|2) - Switch this finish into clap.
[Hard]
Mod inside
[]01:06:049 (66049|3,66132|0,66215|2,66298|1,66381|2,66464|1) - Ctrl + H. This is to give a better lead-in while having pitch relevance in the patterns.
01:15:347 (75347|3) - Move to 1 to give that column more attention and for a bit of hand balance.
01:16:510 - Maybe use a 1/4 stream here ending with a 2-note chord at 01:16:842 - so the patterns will not feel as monotonous.
01:17:174 - I'm guessing this part is emphasizing the drums now, but the consistency is all over the place.
Highly suggesting that you should stick to a certain pattern density so the instruments that you're trying to catch can be caught more effectively.
Something like this on 01:17:174 - and this on 01:19:830 - should suffice (the second one has 1/4 notes on it, but that's to accent the drum roll).
If the pattern suggestions conflict with the current patterns, try to rearrange them to blend in with the suggestions, if you're gonna apply those.
01:22:487 - Missed a note here.
01:24:978 (84978|0,85144|2) - Move to 2 and 1
01:25:642 (85642|0) - Snap the LN's end to 01:25:974 -
01:26:140 - Add another note here for impact.
01:15:347 (75347|3) - Move to 1 to give that column more attention and for a bit of hand balance.
01:16:510 - Maybe use a 1/4 stream here ending with a 2-note chord at 01:16:842 - so the patterns will not feel as monotonous.
01:17:174 - I'm guessing this part is emphasizing the drums now, but the consistency is all over the place.
Highly suggesting that you should stick to a certain pattern density so the instruments that you're trying to catch can be caught more effectively.
Something like this on 01:17:174 - and this on 01:19:830 - should suffice (the second one has 1/4 notes on it, but that's to accent the drum roll).
If the pattern suggestions conflict with the current patterns, try to rearrange them to blend in with the suggestions, if you're gonna apply those.
01:22:487 - Missed a note here.
01:24:978 (84978|0,85144|2) - Move to 2 and 1
01:25:642 (85642|0) - Snap the LN's end to 01:25:974 -
01:26:140 - Add another note here for impact.
[Muu-chan's Hard+]
Mod inside
00:10:260 (10260|3) - Remove finish, no cymbal there.
00:14:743 to 00:46:623 - Where did the hitsounds go?
00:52:268 (52268|0) - Following your hitsound patterning, I think this should be a finish.
01:02:064 (62064|1) - Add whistle here.
01:24:646 (84646|2) - Same as above
01:25:974 (85974|1) - Same
00:14:743 to 00:46:623 - Where did the hitsounds go?
00:52:268 (52268|0) - Following your hitsound patterning, I think this should be a finish.
01:02:064 (62064|1) - Add whistle here.
01:24:646 (84646|2) - Same as above
01:25:974 (85974|1) - Same
Will most likely drop a hitsound mod on the whole mapset later. It looks like it needs a bit more organization before we get this moving.
Feel free send me a forum PM or poke me in IRC if you have any questions about the suggestions I made.
Topic Starter
Applied all
thanks Blocko <3
thanks Blocko <3
All Applied
not being picky so here's the rebubble since shana is inactive, though i'd like to give my thanks to shana for checking this before me
Neat-o.
Have a hitsound mod.
4K
[Pharos' Normal]
[Hard]
[Muu-chan's Hard+]
Blerg.
Have a hitsound mod.
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[Pharos' Normal]
Mod inside
[]awwright time to go more in-depth here.
Hitsounds
00:03:120 (3120|1) - Add clap here
00:05:777 (5777|0) - Same as above
00:03:286 (3286|3,3950|3) - Remove claps. There are no snares to justify these.
00:05:943 (5943|3,6607|3) - Same as above
00:08:600 (8600|3,9264|3) - Same
00:11:256 (11256|3,12584|2) - Same
00:04:615 (4615|2) - Replace clap with finish.
00:07:271 (7271|2) - Same as above
00:09:928 (9928|2) - Same
00:11:920 (11920|3) - Same
00:13:415 (13415|1,14079|2) - Add whistles
00:14:743 to 00:35:996 - Add whistles for every drum beat you hear to give a bit of life in this section.
00:20:056 (20056|3) - Add finish
00:37:324 (37324|2) - Replace clap with finish
00:42:638 (42638|3,43136|3) - Remove finishes. No crashes in the music there.
00:45:958 (45958|3,46290|2) - Snares should be enough to give a lead-in for the kiai. Remove finishes?
00:47:287 (47287|1,47453|0,47785|1) - Add whistles
00:48:615 (48615|2,48781|1) - Same as above
00:49:943 (49943|1,50109|2) - Same
00:52:600 (52600|2,52766|1,53098|2) - Same
00:53:928 (53928|1,54094|2) - Same
00:55:257 (55257|3,55423|2) - Same
00:57:913 (57913|0,58079|1,58411|0) - Same
00:59:242 (59242|3,59408|2) - Same
01:00:570 (60570|3,60736|2) - Same
01:03:226 (63226|2,63393|1,63725|3) - Same
01:04:721 (64721|1,65053|2) - Same
01:01:566 - Add a note on 4 with clap hitsound
01:06:879 (66879|1) - Add clap here, same for these notes below
01:09:536 (69536|1) - Same as above
01:07:045 (67045|3,67710|3) - Remove claps here
01:09:204 (69204|3) - Same as above
01:09:702 (69702|3,70366|3,71030|2) - Same
01:11:861 (71861|0) - Same
01:12:359 (72359|3,73023|3) - Same
01:14:517 (74517|3) - Same
01:15:015 (75015|3,75679|3,76344|2) - Same
01:17:672 (77672|2) - Same
01:20:329 (80329|2,80993|3,81657|2) - Same
01:22:985 (82985|3,83649|2,84313|3) - Same
01:08:374 (68374|2) - Replace clap with finish
01:13:687 (73687|2) - Same as above
01:18:336 (78336|3) - Same
01:19:000 (79000|2) - Same
Patterns
00:02:788 to 00:13:415 - Having the patterns repeat themselves per two measures makes this section a bit repetitive.
You could rearrange some of the overall structure in the patterns here while keeping pitch relevance in place so the patterns provide a good amount of variation throughout the difficulty.
Same case for 01:06:547 to 01:25:144 - . Some of the patterns here, like 01:22:487 - and 01:17:174 - , are examples of how pattern variation can be put into good use.
Hitsounds
00:03:120 (3120|1) - Add clap here
00:05:777 (5777|0) - Same as above
00:03:286 (3286|3,3950|3) - Remove claps. There are no snares to justify these.
00:05:943 (5943|3,6607|3) - Same as above
00:08:600 (8600|3,9264|3) - Same
00:11:256 (11256|3,12584|2) - Same
00:04:615 (4615|2) - Replace clap with finish.
00:07:271 (7271|2) - Same as above
00:09:928 (9928|2) - Same
00:11:920 (11920|3) - Same
00:13:415 (13415|1,14079|2) - Add whistles
00:14:743 to 00:35:996 - Add whistles for every drum beat you hear to give a bit of life in this section.
00:20:056 (20056|3) - Add finish
00:37:324 (37324|2) - Replace clap with finish
00:42:638 (42638|3,43136|3) - Remove finishes. No crashes in the music there.
00:45:958 (45958|3,46290|2) - Snares should be enough to give a lead-in for the kiai. Remove finishes?
00:47:287 (47287|1,47453|0,47785|1) - Add whistles
00:48:615 (48615|2,48781|1) - Same as above
00:49:943 (49943|1,50109|2) - Same
00:52:600 (52600|2,52766|1,53098|2) - Same
00:53:928 (53928|1,54094|2) - Same
00:55:257 (55257|3,55423|2) - Same
00:57:913 (57913|0,58079|1,58411|0) - Same
00:59:242 (59242|3,59408|2) - Same
01:00:570 (60570|3,60736|2) - Same
01:03:226 (63226|2,63393|1,63725|3) - Same
01:04:721 (64721|1,65053|2) - Same
01:01:566 - Add a note on 4 with clap hitsound
01:06:879 (66879|1) - Add clap here, same for these notes below
01:09:536 (69536|1) - Same as above
01:07:045 (67045|3,67710|3) - Remove claps here
01:09:204 (69204|3) - Same as above
01:09:702 (69702|3,70366|3,71030|2) - Same
01:11:861 (71861|0) - Same
01:12:359 (72359|3,73023|3) - Same
01:14:517 (74517|3) - Same
01:15:015 (75015|3,75679|3,76344|2) - Same
01:17:672 (77672|2) - Same
01:20:329 (80329|2,80993|3,81657|2) - Same
01:22:985 (82985|3,83649|2,84313|3) - Same
01:08:374 (68374|2) - Replace clap with finish
01:13:687 (73687|2) - Same as above
01:18:336 (78336|3) - Same
01:19:000 (79000|2) - Same
Patterns
00:02:788 to 00:13:415 - Having the patterns repeat themselves per two measures makes this section a bit repetitive.
You could rearrange some of the overall structure in the patterns here while keeping pitch relevance in place so the patterns provide a good amount of variation throughout the difficulty.
Same case for 01:06:547 to 01:25:144 - . Some of the patterns here, like 01:22:487 - and 01:17:174 - , are examples of how pattern variation can be put into good use.
[Hard]
Mod inside
[]00:02:788 (2788|1) - Add a finish here.
00:04:615 (4615|3) - Same as above
00:05:445 (5445|1) - Add a whistle here.
00:07:105 (7105|1) - Add a clap here.
00:07:271 (7271|0) - Add a finish here.
00:08:101 (8101|0) - Add a whistle here.
00:09:928 (9928|0) - Add a finish here.
00:10:758 (10758|2) - Add a whistle here.
00:11:920 (11920|0) - Add a finish here.
00:13:415 (13415|2) - Add finish
00:13:415 (13415|0,13581|1,13747|2,13913|3,14079|0,14411|3) - Add whistles
00:14:411 (14411|1) - Add clap
00:14:743 (14743|2) - Replace clap with whistle
00:19:641 (19641|2,19807|1,19890|2,19973|3) - Remove whistles
00:20:056 (20056|1) - Add whistle
00:22:547 (22547|3) - Remove clap
00:25:369 (25369|0) - Guess you can add a finish here to give impact to the new phase
00:28:856 (28856|1) - Remove clap
00:29:520 (29520|2) - Remove clap
00:30:600 (30600|0) - Add clap
00:30:849 (30849|1) - Remove clap
00:31:513 (31513|2) - Remove clap
00:32:177 (32177|3) - Remove clap
00:32:675 (32675|3) - Add whistle
00:33:173 (33173|3) - Add clap
00:33:339 (33339|0) - Move this note down to 00:33:256 - and add clap
00:35:996 (35996|0) - Add clap
00:36:660 (36660|0) - Replace whistle with clap
00:37:324 (37324|3) - Same as above
00:37:988 (37988|1) - Same
00:36:826 (36826|2) - Remove whistle
00:37:324 (37324|0) - Add finish
00:41:475 (41475|0) - Add whistle
00:42:804 (42804|3) - Add whistle
00:45:294 (45294|2) - Replace whistle with clap
00:50:441 (50441|0) - Add finish
00:56:087 (56087|1) - Replace whistle with clap
01:01:068 (61068|0) - Add finish
01:04:389 (64389|1) - Remove whistle
01:04:555 (64555|0) - Add whistle
01:05:053 (65053|2) - Add whistle
01:05:136 (65136|1) - Remove whistle
01:06:547 (66547|0) - Add finish
01:08:374 (68374|0) - Add finish
01:09:204 (69204|1) - Add whistle
01:10:864 (70864|1) - Add clap
01:11:861 (71861|0) - Add whistle
01:13:687 (73687|0) - Add finish
01:14:517 (74517|2) - Add whistle
01:15:845 (75845|1) - Add clap
01:16:510 (76510|1) - Add clap
01:16:842 (76842|0) - Add clap
01:17:174 (77174|0) - Add finish
01:19:830 (79830|1) - Add finish
01:22:487 (82487|3) - Add clap
01:23:981 - Add a note on 1
01:25:144 (85144|3,85476|2,86140|0) - Add whistles
00:04:615 (4615|3) - Same as above
00:05:445 (5445|1) - Add a whistle here.
00:07:105 (7105|1) - Add a clap here.
00:07:271 (7271|0) - Add a finish here.
00:08:101 (8101|0) - Add a whistle here.
00:09:928 (9928|0) - Add a finish here.
00:10:758 (10758|2) - Add a whistle here.
00:11:920 (11920|0) - Add a finish here.
00:13:415 (13415|2) - Add finish
00:13:415 (13415|0,13581|1,13747|2,13913|3,14079|0,14411|3) - Add whistles
00:14:411 (14411|1) - Add clap
00:14:743 (14743|2) - Replace clap with whistle
00:19:641 (19641|2,19807|1,19890|2,19973|3) - Remove whistles
00:20:056 (20056|1) - Add whistle
00:22:547 (22547|3) - Remove clap
00:25:369 (25369|0) - Guess you can add a finish here to give impact to the new phase
00:28:856 (28856|1) - Remove clap
00:29:520 (29520|2) - Remove clap
00:30:600 (30600|0) - Add clap
00:30:849 (30849|1) - Remove clap
00:31:513 (31513|2) - Remove clap
00:32:177 (32177|3) - Remove clap
00:32:675 (32675|3) - Add whistle
00:33:173 (33173|3) - Add clap
00:33:339 (33339|0) - Move this note down to 00:33:256 - and add clap
00:35:996 (35996|0) - Add clap
00:36:660 (36660|0) - Replace whistle with clap
00:37:324 (37324|3) - Same as above
00:37:988 (37988|1) - Same
00:36:826 (36826|2) - Remove whistle
00:37:324 (37324|0) - Add finish
00:41:475 (41475|0) - Add whistle
00:42:804 (42804|3) - Add whistle
00:45:294 (45294|2) - Replace whistle with clap
00:50:441 (50441|0) - Add finish
00:56:087 (56087|1) - Replace whistle with clap
01:01:068 (61068|0) - Add finish
01:04:389 (64389|1) - Remove whistle
01:04:555 (64555|0) - Add whistle
01:05:053 (65053|2) - Add whistle
01:05:136 (65136|1) - Remove whistle
01:06:547 (66547|0) - Add finish
01:08:374 (68374|0) - Add finish
01:09:204 (69204|1) - Add whistle
01:10:864 (70864|1) - Add clap
01:11:861 (71861|0) - Add whistle
01:13:687 (73687|0) - Add finish
01:14:517 (74517|2) - Add whistle
01:15:845 (75845|1) - Add clap
01:16:510 (76510|1) - Add clap
01:16:842 (76842|0) - Add clap
01:17:174 (77174|0) - Add finish
01:19:830 (79830|1) - Add finish
01:22:487 (82487|3) - Add clap
01:23:981 - Add a note on 1
01:25:144 (85144|3,85476|2,86140|0) - Add whistles
[Muu-chan's Hard+]
Mod inside
00:00:132 (132|3) - Replace clap with finish
00:14:743 to 00:46:623 - I strongly advise you to put some hitsounds here. Leaving this area without hitsounds would make this area feel monotonous as it takes away the main elements in the difficulty.
You can also use Hard's hitsounds as reference, but at least have the hitsounds be frequently heard throughout this area.
00:47:287 (47287|0,47453|1,47785|1,48117|3,48615|1,48781|2,49113|1) - Add whistles to accent the semi-audible kicks.
00:49:943 (49943|1,50109|0) - Add whistles
00:50:940 (50940|3) - Add clap
00:52:600 (52600|1,52766|2,53098|2,53430|0,53928|0,54094|1,54426|2) - Add whistles
00:55:257 (55257|2,55423|3) - Add whistles
00:55:755 (55755|2) - Remove finish. The music at this part is not that strong enough to justify that one.
00:57:913 (57913|1,58079|0,58411|1,58743|1,59242|1,59408|2,59740|1) - Add whistles
01:00:570 (60570|1,60736|2) - Add whistles
01:03:226 (63226|3,63393|2,63725|2,64057|1,64555|3,64721|0,65053|1) - Add whistles
01:04:887 (64887|3) - Add clap
01:14:019 (74019|3) - Remove finish. The music at this part is not that strong enough to justify that one.
01:26:472 (86472|3,86555|2,86638|1,86721|2,86804|3,86887|0,86970|1,87053|2) - Add whistles to be consistent with Hard's hitsounding.
01:28:631 (88631|0) - Don't really get what this note is for. Remove?
00:14:743 to 00:46:623 - I strongly advise you to put some hitsounds here. Leaving this area without hitsounds would make this area feel monotonous as it takes away the main elements in the difficulty.
You can also use Hard's hitsounds as reference, but at least have the hitsounds be frequently heard throughout this area.
00:47:287 (47287|0,47453|1,47785|1,48117|3,48615|1,48781|2,49113|1) - Add whistles to accent the semi-audible kicks.
00:49:943 (49943|1,50109|0) - Add whistles
00:50:940 (50940|3) - Add clap
00:52:600 (52600|1,52766|2,53098|2,53430|0,53928|0,54094|1,54426|2) - Add whistles
00:55:257 (55257|2,55423|3) - Add whistles
00:55:755 (55755|2) - Remove finish. The music at this part is not that strong enough to justify that one.
00:57:913 (57913|1,58079|0,58411|1,58743|1,59242|1,59408|2,59740|1) - Add whistles
01:00:570 (60570|1,60736|2) - Add whistles
01:03:226 (63226|3,63393|2,63725|2,64057|1,64555|3,64721|0,65053|1) - Add whistles
01:04:887 (64887|3) - Add clap
01:14:019 (74019|3) - Remove finish. The music at this part is not that strong enough to justify that one.
01:26:472 (86472|3,86555|2,86638|1,86721|2,86804|3,86887|0,86970|1,87053|2) - Add whistles to be consistent with Hard's hitsounding.
01:28:631 (88631|0) - Don't really get what this note is for. Remove?
Blerg.
Blocko wrote:
Neat-o.
Have a hitsound mod.4K 4K Column:[]
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
[Pharos' Normal]Mod insideawwright time to go more in-depth here.
Hitsounds
00:03:120 (3120|1) - Add clap here
00:05:777 (5777|0) - Same as above
00:03:286 (3286|3,3950|3) - Remove claps. There are no snares to justify these.
00:05:943 (5943|3,6607|3) - Same as above
00:08:600 (8600|3,9264|3) - Same
00:11:256 (11256|3,12584|2) - Same
00:04:615 (4615|2) - Replace clap with finish.
00:07:271 (7271|2) - Same as above
00:09:928 (9928|2) - Same
00:11:920 (11920|3) - Same
00:13:415 (13415|1,14079|2) - Add whistles
00:14:743 to 00:35:996 - Add whistles for every drum beat you hear to give a bit of life in this section.
00:20:056 (20056|3) - Add finish
00:37:324 (37324|2) - Replace clap with finish
00:42:638 (42638|3,43136|3) - Remove finishes. No crashes in the music there.
00:45:958 (45958|3,46290|2) - Snares should be enough to give a lead-in for the kiai. Remove finishes?
00:47:287 (47287|1,47453|0,47785|1) - Add whistles
00:48:615 (48615|2,48781|1) - Same as above
00:49:943 (49943|1,50109|2) - Same
00:52:600 (52600|2,52766|1,53098|2) - Same
00:53:928 (53928|1,54094|2) - Same
00:55:257 (55257|3,55423|2) - Same
00:57:913 (57913|0,58079|1,58411|0) - Same
00:59:242 (59242|3,59408|2) - Same
01:00:570 (60570|3,60736|2) - Same
01:03:226 (63226|2,63393|1,63725|3) - Same
01:04:721 (64721|1,65053|2) - Same
01:01:566 - Add a note on 4 with clap hitsound
01:06:879 (66879|1) - Add clap here, same for these notes below
01:09:536 (69536|1) - Same as above
01:07:045 (67045|3,67710|3) - Remove claps here
01:09:204 (69204|3) - Same as above
01:09:702 (69702|3,70366|3,71030|2) - Same
01:11:861 (71861|0) - Same
01:12:359 (72359|3,73023|3) - Same
01:14:517 (74517|3) - Same
01:15:015 (75015|3,75679|3,76344|2) - Same
01:17:672 (77672|2) - Same
01:20:329 (80329|2,80993|3,81657|2) - Same
01:22:985 (82985|3,83649|2,84313|3) - Same
01:08:374 (68374|2) - Replace clap with finish
01:13:687 (73687|2) - Same as above
01:18:336 (78336|3) - Same
01:19:000 (79000|2) - Same
Patterns
00:02:788 to 00:13:415 - Having the patterns repeat themselves per two measures makes this section a bit repetitive.
You could rearrange some of the overall structure in the patterns here while keeping pitch relevance in place so the patterns provide a good amount of variation throughout the difficulty.
Same case for 01:06:547 to 01:25:144 - . Some of the patterns here, like 01:22:487 - and 01:17:174 - , are examples of how pattern variation can be put into good use.
Blerg.
BOOOM
Done!
All Applied Thanks Blocko
DOOONE~
Topic Starter
All diffs updated
Applied all <3 :'3
Applied all <3 :'3
didn't mean to be rude.. but how many times i have to told you about editing GD w/out owner permissions? lol
also sorry for being busy. lol dunno what to say.
i hope you understand.
also sorry for being busy. lol dunno what to say.
i hope you understand.
Topic Starter
Sorry muu i can't wait some updates, because i can't update .. just BSS problems in my home
i everyday going to Internet Cafe ... and it's just HS please understand me
i everyday going to Internet Cafe ... and it's just HS please understand me
why dont you try the app EXE suggested to me yesterday, if you read it on #osumania yesterdaySpectorDG wrote:
Sorry muu i can't wait some updates, because i can't update .. just BSS problems in my home
i everyday going to Internet Cafe ... and it's just HS please understand me
Topic Starter
i will try afterPharos21 wrote:
why dont you try the app EXE suggested to me yesterday, if you read it on #osumania yesterdaySpectorDG wrote:
Sorry muu i can't wait some updates, because i can't update .. just BSS problems in my home
i everyday going to Internet Cafe ... and it's just HS please understand me
and i updated this song in 2 days ago
Muu Said '' Just HS but changed the notes ? seems Interresting .
sorry for being so arrogant and egoist. nvm
good luck ><b
''
sorry for being so arrogant and egoist. nvm
good luck ><b
''
Topic Starter
UPDATED
After a series of checks and re-checks, I think this map is ready to be qualified.
Here we go.
Qualified!
Congratulations, SpectorDG, Pharos21 and Muu-chan!
Here we go.
Congratulations, SpectorDG, Pharos21 and Muu-chan!
Topic Starter
thank you for check this map Blocko
Finally congratulations
Finally
Gratz
Gratz
Topic Starter
Kuo Kyoka wrote:
Finally congratulations
thanks guys :3Aste- wrote:
Finally
Gratz
Congrats your map ranked......
maybe next i'm create discography soudn horizon revo / Linked Horizon after hardworking in game and IRL
maybe next i'm create discography soudn horizon revo / Linked Horizon after hardworking in game and IRL
Topic Starter
xD thanks ... goodluck :3LigerZero wrote:
Congrats your map ranked......
maybe next i'm create discography soudn horizon revo / Linked Horizon after hardworking in game and IRL
Hi, SpectorDG. The title of the mapset is incorrect. It should be 紅蓮の弓矢（TVサイズ ver.）, according to the official site of Linked Horizon: http://shingeki.linked-horizon.com/news/2013/04?cat=2.
Romanised title: Guren no Yumiya (TV Size ver.)
Good luck on requalification.
Romanised title: Guren no Yumiya (TV Size ver.)
Good luck on requalification.
Topic Starter
OWO FIXED?!! I cannot believe
@Fycho omitting 「 」 ? i don't know how this works so uh, how do you even romanize those brackets anyways