01:06:049 (66049|3,66132|0,66215|2,66298|1,66381|2,66464|1) - Ctrl + H. This is to give a better lead-in while having pitch relevance in the patterns.
01:15:347 (75347|3) - Move to 1 to give that column more attention and for a bit of hand balance.
01:16:510 - Maybe use a 1/4 stream here ending with a 2-note chord at 01:16:842 - so the patterns will not feel as monotonous.
01:17:174 - I'm guessing this part is emphasizing the drums now, but the consistency is all over the place.
Highly suggesting that you should stick to a certain pattern density so the instruments that you're trying to catch can be caught more effectively.
Something like
this on 01:17:174 - and
this on 01:19:830 - should suffice (the second one has 1/4 notes on it, but that's to accent the drum roll).
If the pattern suggestions conflict with the current patterns, try to rearrange them to blend in with the suggestions, if you're gonna apply those.
01:22:487 - Missed a note here.
01:24:978 (84978|0,85144|2) - Move to 2 and 1
01:25:642 (85642|0) - Snap the LN's end to 01:25:974 -
01:26:140 - Add another note here for impact.