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Linked Horizon - Guren no Yumiya (TV Size ver.) [OsuMania]

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Aste-
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Joined September 2014
Aste-
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Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening
not being picky so here's the rebubble since shana is inactive, though i'd like to give my thanks to shana for checking this before me
Blocko
osu! Alumni
742 posts
Joined February 2014
Blocko
Neat-o.
Have a hitsound mod.

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[Pharos' Normal]
Mod inside
awwright time to go more in-depth here.

Hitsounds
00:03:120 (3120|1) - Add clap here
00:05:777 (5777|0) - Same as above

00:03:286 (3286|3,3950|3) - Remove claps. There are no snares to justify these.
00:05:943 (5943|3,6607|3) - Same as above
00:08:600 (8600|3,9264|3) - Same
00:11:256 (11256|3,12584|2) - Same

00:04:615 (4615|2) - Replace clap with finish.
00:07:271 (7271|2) - Same as above
00:09:928 (9928|2) - Same
00:11:920 (11920|3) - Same

00:13:415 (13415|1,14079|2) - Add whistles

00:14:743 to 00:35:996 - Add whistles for every drum beat you hear to give a bit of life in this section.

00:20:056 (20056|3) - Add finish

00:37:324 (37324|2) - Replace clap with finish

00:42:638 (42638|3,43136|3) - Remove finishes. No crashes in the music there.
00:45:958 (45958|3,46290|2) - Snares should be enough to give a lead-in for the kiai. Remove finishes?

00:47:287 (47287|1,47453|0,47785|1) - Add whistles
00:48:615 (48615|2,48781|1) - Same as above
00:49:943 (49943|1,50109|2) - Same
00:52:600 (52600|2,52766|1,53098|2) - Same
00:53:928 (53928|1,54094|2) - Same
00:55:257 (55257|3,55423|2) - Same
00:57:913 (57913|0,58079|1,58411|0) - Same
00:59:242 (59242|3,59408|2) - Same
01:00:570 (60570|3,60736|2) - Same
01:03:226 (63226|2,63393|1,63725|3) - Same
01:04:721 (64721|1,65053|2) - Same

01:01:566 - Add a note on 4 with clap hitsound

01:06:879 (66879|1) - Add clap here, same for these notes below
01:09:536 (69536|1) - Same as above

01:07:045 (67045|3,67710|3) - Remove claps here
01:09:204 (69204|3) - Same as above
01:09:702 (69702|3,70366|3,71030|2) - Same
01:11:861 (71861|0) - Same
01:12:359 (72359|3,73023|3) - Same
01:14:517 (74517|3) - Same
01:15:015 (75015|3,75679|3,76344|2) - Same
01:17:672 (77672|2) - Same
01:20:329 (80329|2,80993|3,81657|2) - Same
01:22:985 (82985|3,83649|2,84313|3) - Same

01:08:374 (68374|2) - Replace clap with finish
01:13:687 (73687|2) - Same as above
01:18:336 (78336|3) - Same
01:19:000 (79000|2) - Same


Patterns
00:02:788 to 00:13:415 - Having the patterns repeat themselves per two measures makes this section a bit repetitive.
You could rearrange some of the overall structure in the patterns here while keeping pitch relevance in place so the patterns provide a good amount of variation throughout the difficulty.
Same case for 01:06:547 to 01:25:144 - . Some of the patterns here, like 01:22:487 - and 01:17:174 - , are examples of how pattern variation can be put into good use.
[]
[Hard]
Mod inside
00:02:788 (2788|1) - Add a finish here.
00:04:615 (4615|3) - Same as above

00:05:445 (5445|1) - Add a whistle here.

00:07:105 (7105|1) - Add a clap here.

00:07:271 (7271|0) - Add a finish here.
00:08:101 (8101|0) - Add a whistle here.
00:09:928 (9928|0) - Add a finish here.
00:10:758 (10758|2) - Add a whistle here.
00:11:920 (11920|0) - Add a finish here.

00:13:415 (13415|2) - Add finish

00:13:415 (13415|0,13581|1,13747|2,13913|3,14079|0,14411|3) - Add whistles

00:14:411 (14411|1) - Add clap

00:14:743 (14743|2) - Replace clap with whistle

00:19:641 (19641|2,19807|1,19890|2,19973|3) - Remove whistles

00:20:056 (20056|1) - Add whistle

00:22:547 (22547|3) - Remove clap

00:25:369 (25369|0) - Guess you can add a finish here to give impact to the new phase

00:28:856 (28856|1) - Remove clap
00:29:520 (29520|2) - Remove clap

00:30:600 (30600|0) - Add clap

00:30:849 (30849|1) - Remove clap
00:31:513 (31513|2) - Remove clap
00:32:177 (32177|3) - Remove clap

00:32:675 (32675|3) - Add whistle

00:33:173 (33173|3) - Add clap

00:33:339 (33339|0) - Move this note down to 00:33:256 - and add clap

00:35:996 (35996|0) - Add clap

00:36:660 (36660|0) - Replace whistle with clap
00:37:324 (37324|3) - Same as above
00:37:988 (37988|1) - Same

00:36:826 (36826|2) - Remove whistle

00:37:324 (37324|0) - Add finish

00:41:475 (41475|0) - Add whistle
00:42:804 (42804|3) - Add whistle

00:45:294 (45294|2) - Replace whistle with clap

00:50:441 (50441|0) - Add finish

00:56:087 (56087|1) - Replace whistle with clap

01:01:068 (61068|0) - Add finish

01:04:389 (64389|1) - Remove whistle

01:04:555 (64555|0) - Add whistle
01:05:053 (65053|2) - Add whistle

01:05:136 (65136|1) - Remove whistle

01:06:547 (66547|0) - Add finish
01:08:374 (68374|0) - Add finish

01:09:204 (69204|1) - Add whistle

01:10:864 (70864|1) - Add clap

01:11:861 (71861|0) - Add whistle
01:13:687 (73687|0) - Add finish
01:14:517 (74517|2) - Add whistle

01:15:845 (75845|1) - Add clap
01:16:510 (76510|1) - Add clap
01:16:842 (76842|0) - Add clap

01:17:174 (77174|0) - Add finish
01:19:830 (79830|1) - Add finish

01:22:487 (82487|3) - Add clap

01:23:981 - Add a note on 1

01:25:144 (85144|3,85476|2,86140|0) - Add whistles
[]
[Muu-chan's Hard+]
Mod inside
00:00:132 (132|3) - Replace clap with finish

00:14:743 to 00:46:623 - I strongly advise you to put some hitsounds here. Leaving this area without hitsounds would make this area feel monotonous as it takes away the main elements in the difficulty.
You can also use Hard's hitsounds as reference, but at least have the hitsounds be frequently heard throughout this area.

00:47:287 (47287|0,47453|1,47785|1,48117|3,48615|1,48781|2,49113|1) - Add whistles to accent the semi-audible kicks.
00:49:943 (49943|1,50109|0) - Add whistles

00:50:940 (50940|3) - Add clap

00:52:600 (52600|1,52766|2,53098|2,53430|0,53928|0,54094|1,54426|2) - Add whistles
00:55:257 (55257|2,55423|3) - Add whistles

00:55:755 (55755|2) - Remove finish. The music at this part is not that strong enough to justify that one.

00:57:913 (57913|1,58079|0,58411|1,58743|1,59242|1,59408|2,59740|1) - Add whistles
01:00:570 (60570|1,60736|2) - Add whistles

01:03:226 (63226|3,63393|2,63725|2,64057|1,64555|3,64721|0,65053|1) - Add whistles

01:04:887 (64887|3) - Add clap

01:14:019 (74019|3) - Remove finish. The music at this part is not that strong enough to justify that one.

01:26:472 (86472|3,86555|2,86638|1,86721|2,86804|3,86887|0,86970|1,87053|2) - Add whistles to be consistent with Hard's hitsounding.

01:28:631 (88631|0) - Don't really get what this note is for. Remove?


Blerg.
Aste-
2,387 posts
Joined September 2014
Aste-

Blocko wrote:

Neat-o.
Have a hitsound mod.

4K
4K Column:
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
[]
[Pharos' Normal]
Mod inside
awwright time to go more in-depth here.

Hitsounds
00:03:120 (3120|1) - Add clap here
00:05:777 (5777|0) - Same as above

00:03:286 (3286|3,3950|3) - Remove claps. There are no snares to justify these.
00:05:943 (5943|3,6607|3) - Same as above
00:08:600 (8600|3,9264|3) - Same
00:11:256 (11256|3,12584|2) - Same

00:04:615 (4615|2) - Replace clap with finish.
00:07:271 (7271|2) - Same as above
00:09:928 (9928|2) - Same
00:11:920 (11920|3) - Same

00:13:415 (13415|1,14079|2) - Add whistles

00:14:743 to 00:35:996 - Add whistles for every drum beat you hear to give a bit of life in this section.

00:20:056 (20056|3) - Add finish

00:37:324 (37324|2) - Replace clap with finish

00:42:638 (42638|3,43136|3) - Remove finishes. No crashes in the music there.
00:45:958 (45958|3,46290|2) - Snares should be enough to give a lead-in for the kiai. Remove finishes?

00:47:287 (47287|1,47453|0,47785|1) - Add whistles
00:48:615 (48615|2,48781|1) - Same as above
00:49:943 (49943|1,50109|2) - Same
00:52:600 (52600|2,52766|1,53098|2) - Same
00:53:928 (53928|1,54094|2) - Same
00:55:257 (55257|3,55423|2) - Same
00:57:913 (57913|0,58079|1,58411|0) - Same
00:59:242 (59242|3,59408|2) - Same
01:00:570 (60570|3,60736|2) - Same
01:03:226 (63226|2,63393|1,63725|3) - Same
01:04:721 (64721|1,65053|2) - Same

01:01:566 - Add a note on 4 with clap hitsound

01:06:879 (66879|1) - Add clap here, same for these notes below
01:09:536 (69536|1) - Same as above

01:07:045 (67045|3,67710|3) - Remove claps here
01:09:204 (69204|3) - Same as above
01:09:702 (69702|3,70366|3,71030|2) - Same
01:11:861 (71861|0) - Same
01:12:359 (72359|3,73023|3) - Same
01:14:517 (74517|3) - Same
01:15:015 (75015|3,75679|3,76344|2) - Same
01:17:672 (77672|2) - Same
01:20:329 (80329|2,80993|3,81657|2) - Same
01:22:985 (82985|3,83649|2,84313|3) - Same

01:08:374 (68374|2) - Replace clap with finish
01:13:687 (73687|2) - Same as above
01:18:336 (78336|3) - Same
01:19:000 (79000|2) - Same


Patterns
00:02:788 to 00:13:415 - Having the patterns repeat themselves per two measures makes this section a bit repetitive.
You could rearrange some of the overall structure in the patterns here while keeping pitch relevance in place so the patterns provide a good amount of variation throughout the difficulty.
Same case for 01:06:547 to 01:25:144 - . Some of the patterns here, like 01:22:487 - and 01:17:174 - , are examples of how pattern variation can be put into good use.


Blerg.

BOOOM

Done!

All Applied Thanks Blocko

DOOONE~
SpectorDG
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Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
SpectorDG
All diffs updated
Applied all <3 :'3
Muu-chan
1,605 posts
Joined August 2014
Muu-chan
didn't mean to be rude.. but how many times i have to told you about editing GD w/out owner permissions? lol
also sorry for being busy. lol dunno what to say.

i hope you understand.
SpectorDG
1,167 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
SpectorDG
Sorry muu i can't wait some updates, because i can't update .. just BSS problems in my home
i everyday going to Internet Cafe ... and it's just HS please understand me :|
Aste-
2,387 posts
Joined September 2014
Aste-

SpectorDG wrote:

Sorry muu i can't wait some updates, because i can't update .. just BSS problems in my home
i everyday going to Internet Cafe ... and it's just HS please understand me :|
why dont you try the app EXE suggested to me yesterday, if you read it on #osumania yesterday
SpectorDG
1,167 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
SpectorDG

Pharos21 wrote:

SpectorDG wrote:

Sorry muu i can't wait some updates, because i can't update .. just BSS problems in my home
i everyday going to Internet Cafe ... and it's just HS please understand me :|
why dont you try the app EXE suggested to me yesterday, if you read it on #osumania yesterday
i will try after
and i updated this song in 2 days ago
Fubukicat
970 posts
Joined February 2012
Fubukicat
Muu Said '' Just HS but changed the notes ? seems Interresting .
sorry for being so arrogant and egoist. nvm ;)
good luck ><b
''
SpectorDG
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Topic Starter
SpectorDG
UPDATED
Blocko
osu! Alumni
742 posts
Joined February 2014
Blocko
After a series of checks and re-checks, I think this map is ready to be qualified.

Here we go.

Qualified!

Congratulations, SpectorDG, Pharos21 and Muu-chan!
SpectorDG
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Topic Starter
SpectorDG
thank you for check this map Blocko
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
4,418 posts
Joined April 2013
Akasha-
Finally congratulations :D
Aste-
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Joined September 2014
Aste-
Finally
Gratz
SpectorDG
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Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
SpectorDG

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Finally congratulations :D

Aste- wrote:

Finally
Gratz
thanks guys :3
LigerZero
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Joined August 2013
LigerZero
Congrats your map ranked......

maybe next i'm create discography soudn horizon revo / Linked Horizon after hardworking in game and IRL
SpectorDG
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Topic Starter
SpectorDG

LigerZero wrote:

Congrats your map ranked......

maybe next i'm create discography soudn horizon revo / Linked Horizon after hardworking in game and IRL
xD thanks ... goodluck :3
Fycho
Global Moderator
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Joined August 2012
Fycho
Hi, SpectorDG. The title of the mapset is incorrect. It should be 紅蓮の弓矢（TVサイズ ver.）, according to the official site of Linked Horizon: http://shingeki.linked-horizon.com/news/2013/04?cat=2.


Romanised title: Guren no Yumiya (TV Size ver.)

Good luck on requalification.
SpectorDG
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Topic Starter
SpectorDG
OWO FIXED?!! I cannot believe

Evening
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Joined December 2012
Evening
@Fycho omitting 「 」 ? i don't know how this works so uh, how do you even romanize those brackets anyways
Fycho
Global Moderator
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Fycho
「 」 is the quote of the title, which isn't a part of the real title, so we omit it on title setting, also we do not romanise it.
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening

Fycho wrote:

「 」 is the quote of the title, which isn't a part of the real title, so we omit it on title setting, also we do not romanise it.
alright, looks fine then
SpectorDG
1,167 posts
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Topic Starter
SpectorDG
thank you for metadata check and rebubble guys ~ <3
Blocko
osu! Alumni
742 posts
Joined February 2014
Blocko
woops

Re-Qualified!

Re-Congratulations, SpectorDG, Pharos21 and Muu-chan!
SpectorDG
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Topic Starter
SpectorDG
thank you Blocko <3
burrou
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Joined September 2016
burrou

SpectorDG wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015 оны 12 дугаар сарын 24 at 0:09:56

Artist: Linked Horizon
Title: Guren no Yumiya (TV Size ver.)
Source: 進撃の巨人
Tags: sound revo jiyuu e no shingeki kyojin titan Pharos21 Muu-chan Opening OP 1
BPM: 180,68
Filesize: 15120kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Pharos' Normal - 4Key (1,71 stars, 359 notes)
  2. Hard - 4Key (2,61 stars, 700 notes)
  3. Muu's Hard+ - 4Key (2,72 stars, 730 notes)
Download: Linked Horizon - Guren no Yumiya (TV Size ver.)
Download: Linked Horizon - Guren no Yumiya (TV Size ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The first and last time TV Size & Anime song, now im planning SDVX only (On December 15, 2015)
Bubbled by [Shana Lesus]
Disbubbled by My wish
Re-Bubbled by Evening
Ranked by Blocko
DQ by Fycho

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This song make too late but this song mania version very rare. Because i make decided
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