hi renchan & guest staff
red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.
Sorry Poor a english
GL
mod time: 2hour
Ps : renchan M4M plz
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Thanks
red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.
General
- plz Audio Leedin 2000
KwaN's Easy
- 00:06:993 (2) - ummm 00:07:482 - un fit for me,00:02:264 - 00:12:699 - unlike here, it sounds strange because the person here is a strong sound 00:07:645 -
try 00:06:341 - 1/1reverse.00:07:971 - circle - 00:24:601 (3) - Uo the end point a little
- 00:31:123 (4) - end at 00:31:775 - I do not feel the need to extend
- 00:37:645 (1) - it is not enough little,00:37:645 - and 00:38:297 - add Sampleset Drum 00:37:645 - also additions Soft
- 00:39:601 - ^
- 00:40:906 - Do you want to add Tick sound?
- 00:45:145 - add whistle here? I think o fit the vocal
- 01:02:428 (2) - u-m, I want is a change in the rhythm. 3/4reverse or 01:05:036 (4,5) - 3/4reverse? I like this
Mackenzie's Normal
- 00:02:101 (2,3) - Ctrl + G rhythm better
- 00:03:732 (5) - NC
- 00:07:971 (4) - 00:06:667 (2,3) - You here sound picked up did not for melody is strange
it should not be ignored here 00:08:297 -
00:07:971 - add circle
00:08:297 - 1/2slider
00:08:949 - 1/1slider
00:09:928 - circle. just fit for me :3 - 00:08:949 (5) - NC
- 00:12:536 (2,3) - ^ G rhythm here
- 00:15:145 (2,3) - ^
- 00:17:754 (2,3) - ^ you can follow the rhythm and vocal
- 00:18:732 (4) - 1/1slider and 00:19:710 - add note? if you change NC 00:19:384 -
- 00:21:993 (1) - 1/1slider. imo
- 00:35:036 (1) - unnecessary nc
- 00:40:254 (1) - un fit vocal :< I like 1/1slider 00:41:232 - add note
- 00:42:210 (4,5) - I think i should not stack
- 00:45:145 - add whistle?
- 00:49:058 (6,7,8) - Do not pick up the piano for the beginner player?
I think that hard this rhythm to understand - 00:54:275 (6,7) - ^
- 00:58:514 - missing whistle
- 01:03:732 - ^
- 01:06:014 (4) - Change to circle
- 01:23:297 (1,1) - unnecessary nc
wcx's Hard
- 00:07:482 (4,5) - worst rhythm lol,I think it quite difficult
I suggest 00:07:645 - add note or 00:07:482 - 1/2slider - 00:19:221 - add note or 3/4slider?
- 00:26:232 - add whistle? piano follow
- 00:27:210 - ^
- 00:31:123 - ^
- 00:34:710 (4) - Remove note ,very small sound here
- try sound
00:38:460 - add Drum Finish
00:39:275 - Change to Drum Finish
00:39:601 (7) - Remove Clap add Sample Drum
00:38:623 (3,8) - whistle - 00:44:167 (2,3,4,5) - It is difficult than Insane rhythm,
00:44:819 - Change to 1/2slider? - 00:57:047 - add whistle?
- 01:02:101 - ^
- 01:05:036 (5,6,7) - 01:05:525 (6) - I think this speed up is very difficult :<
vocal follow plz; - 01:07:482 (4,5) - Change to 1/2slider? 00:46:612 (4,5) - here and the difference between the strange sound
idk. maybe it's just me - 01:18:080 - move to whistle 01:17:917 -
- 01:23:786 - 01:24:275 - add Drum Finish?
Insane
- 00:00:471 (1,2) - noisy...Sample normal fit. imo
- 00:12:862 (4) - I like curve flow
- 00:17:917 (4,5,6,7) - It is too steep flowing.I hate :< try this
- 00:23:460 (5,6,1) - ummm...I think that it is not a good flow
00:23:623 (6) - try this flow - 00:25:743 (4,5) - too close, Natural playng for 00:25:906 (5) -
- 00:26:232 - add whistle? I want to follow the piano
00:27:210 - 00:28:841 - 00:29:819 - 00:31:123 - ^ - 00:34:710 (5) - Remove note ,very small sound here
- 00:37:971 - 00:38:949 - 00:39:112 - 00:39:275 - 00:39:601 - Drum clap seems out of place to be in this continuous
Volume down or try this sound
00:37:971 - Drum Finish
00:38:134 - whistle
00:38:623 - ^
00:38:949 (4) - Sample Drum Finish
00:39:112 (5) - Drum Finish
00:39:275 - ^
00:39:438 - whistle
00:39:601 - Sample Drum Finish
00:39:928 - whistle - 00:42:047 (5) - Remove note, also 00:42:536 - I want to click here
00:42:536 (6,7,1) - Jump a bit - 00:44:493 - 00:45:145 - add whistle? become lively sound
- 01:05:036 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - u---m< Personally
01:05:036 - Change to soft whistle
01:05:199 - Change to soft Clap
01:05:688 (9) - ^
01:05:851 (10) - ^
01:06:014 (11) - Change to soft whistle, Well it's my favorite - 01:05:525 (7) - NC, 1/8 3hit here
- 01:17:917 (4,5) - try Ctrl + G rhythm
- 01:23:949 - 01:24:438 - add whistle? Either is fine lol
wkyik's Kurumi
- 00:00:797 (3) - Drum Finish here?
- 00:07:645 - Here is the starting point because here extends the sound?
00:07:482 - add note,00:07:645 - 1/2slider - 00:20:688 (1,5) - Sample normal here?
- 00:38:134 (2,1) - I think easy to play is 1/2 slider
- 00:39:438 - add note, It jammed during play
- 00:39:601 (6) - add Drum Finish?
- 00:44:819 - 00:45:145 - add whistle, same as Insane
- 00:54:601 - missing whistle
- 00:58:514 - ^
- 01:03:732 - ^
- 01:05:036 - ^
- 01:05:199 (2,2) - Sample normal?
- 01:17:917 - 01:18:406 - 01:19:058 - add whistle? very fit imo
- 01:19:384 (1,2) - too close, more DS
Very like flow
Sorry Poor a english
GL
mod time: 2hour
Ps : renchan M4M plz
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/673632
Thanks