m4m with https://osu.ppy.sh/s/336863
Wow, a bunch of pro mappers. I'm learning a lot from your map
[General]
* I wonder if the artist is correct, because of this. I don't know, just make it clear.
[KwaN's Easy]
* 00:14:819 (4) - I'd like to loosen the curve.
* 00:19:384 (3) - I think 00:20:036 - this beat is pretty strong to neglect. There is no extended vocal either. Since the bpm is pretty low, I think you can end it there and add a circle 00:20:362 - here?
* 00:44:167 (1) - remove NC? I think it's better to keep the NC term without a great reason.
* 01:05:688 (5) - this feels a little awkward since the vocal actually starts 01:05:525 - here and the drum on the background isn't very strong. How about using 3/4 repeat slider on 01:05:036 - ?
[Mackenzie's Normal]
* 00:44:819 (3) - I don't hear any good sounds for those 1/4s, especially for 00:44:819 - here. If it's about that very little drum sound, I can barely hear it. I would follow vocal there instead.
* 01:13:188 (3,4,5) - Make a better triangle shape? 4 is a bit close to 5
* 00:48:080 (5) - 00:53:297 (5) - 01:08:949 (5) - 01:14:167 (5) - Why only they have different NC term?
* 01:10:254 - 01:15:471 - I can't overlook those sound... map it?
* 01:21:993 (1,1,1) - I think it's little boring. Make them move around?
[wcx's Hard]
* 00:07:645 - I think this sound is kinda important.
* 01:03:080 (6,1) - can make better blanket. Move 01:03:080 (6) - to 01:03:569 - and see the approach circle on 01:03:406 -
* 01:24:275 (4,5) - use 1/4 repeat slider to save the vocal on 01:24:438 - ?
[Insane]
* 00:05:036 (4,5,6) - I assume you tried a straight pattern for this, but it's ruined because of the stack with 00:04:384 (2) - . Furthermore, the distance got unidentical too.
* 00:31:123 (5,6,7,8,9) - these jumps feel a little difficult compared to the overall difficulty of the map and how intense that part feels.
* 00:34:058 (4,5) - I hope to reduce this distance since 4 ends at down, which is opposite from where the cursor should go next. Many players would not be able to read it as 1/6 on first try, so it's likely that they'll try to move on too early, therefore 100 occurs.
* 00:46:286 (2,5) - maybe I'm too strict on blankets, but look at this.
* 01:05:607 - Hard saved this rhythm, why not on Insane?
* 01:06:014 (10) - Are you sure it's 1/6 there? I barely hear any sounds.
* 01:23:949 - I feel a little empty.
[wkyik's Kurumi]
* 00:21:178 (4) - the drum feels like 2/12 and 1/12. Not sure it's fine to just use 1/8 there.
* 00:21:830 (7,1) - You don't want to blanket this?
* 00:36:667 (3,4) - this too, feels like 1/6
* 00:45:471 (1) - I think the SV gap is way too big. The song is pretty consistent and I don't think there should be this big SV jump on the kiai. At least increase sv little by little from 00:37:645 - since the tension goes tighter?
* 01:17:428 (2,3) - better blanket please.
* 01:19:384 (1) - Same here, this might be too confusing. It's more than 2x speed gap. The song only starts to loosen the tension just now, but this sudden decrease of SV is too much imo.
Nice mapset Good luck.
Wow, a bunch of pro mappers. I'm learning a lot from your map
[General]
* I wonder if the artist is correct, because of this. I don't know, just make it clear.
[KwaN's Easy]
* 00:14:819 (4) - I'd like to loosen the curve.
* 00:19:384 (3) - I think 00:20:036 - this beat is pretty strong to neglect. There is no extended vocal either. Since the bpm is pretty low, I think you can end it there and add a circle 00:20:362 - here?
* 00:44:167 (1) - remove NC? I think it's better to keep the NC term without a great reason.
* 01:05:688 (5) - this feels a little awkward since the vocal actually starts 01:05:525 - here and the drum on the background isn't very strong. How about using 3/4 repeat slider on 01:05:036 - ?
[Mackenzie's Normal]
* 00:44:819 (3) - I don't hear any good sounds for those 1/4s, especially for 00:44:819 - here. If it's about that very little drum sound, I can barely hear it. I would follow vocal there instead.
* 01:13:188 (3,4,5) - Make a better triangle shape? 4 is a bit close to 5
* 00:48:080 (5) - 00:53:297 (5) - 01:08:949 (5) - 01:14:167 (5) - Why only they have different NC term?
* 01:10:254 - 01:15:471 - I can't overlook those sound... map it?
* 01:21:993 (1,1,1) - I think it's little boring. Make them move around?
[wcx's Hard]
* 00:07:645 - I think this sound is kinda important.
* 01:03:080 (6,1) - can make better blanket. Move 01:03:080 (6) - to 01:03:569 - and see the approach circle on 01:03:406 -
* 01:24:275 (4,5) - use 1/4 repeat slider to save the vocal on 01:24:438 - ?
[Insane]
* 00:05:036 (4,5,6) - I assume you tried a straight pattern for this, but it's ruined because of the stack with 00:04:384 (2) - . Furthermore, the distance got unidentical too.
* 00:31:123 (5,6,7,8,9) - these jumps feel a little difficult compared to the overall difficulty of the map and how intense that part feels.
* 00:34:058 (4,5) - I hope to reduce this distance since 4 ends at down, which is opposite from where the cursor should go next. Many players would not be able to read it as 1/6 on first try, so it's likely that they'll try to move on too early, therefore 100 occurs.
* 00:46:286 (2,5) - maybe I'm too strict on blankets, but look at this.
* 01:05:607 - Hard saved this rhythm, why not on Insane?
* 01:06:014 (10) - Are you sure it's 1/6 there? I barely hear any sounds.
* 01:23:949 - I feel a little empty.
[wkyik's Kurumi]
* 00:21:178 (4) - the drum feels like 2/12 and 1/12. Not sure it's fine to just use 1/8 there.
* 00:21:830 (7,1) - You don't want to blanket this?
* 00:36:667 (3,4) - this too, feels like 1/6
* 00:45:471 (1) - I think the SV gap is way too big. The song is pretty consistent and I don't think there should be this big SV jump on the kiai. At least increase sv little by little from 00:37:645 - since the tension goes tighter?
* 01:17:428 (2,3) - better blanket please.
* 01:19:384 (1) - Same here, this might be too confusing. It's more than 2x speed gap. The song only starts to loosen the tension just now, but this sudden decrease of SV is too much imo.
Nice mapset Good luck.