Hi! M4M
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Very nice song and good map. Good luck
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NM
00:41:855 (41855|1) - Stretch till 00:42:591 - and start next LN from there.
00:51:793 - Missed note (same sound with 00:52:161 (52161|4) - ).
01:01:179 (61179|4,61363|3) - Ctrl+j for pattern.
01:05:228 - Missed note.
01:08:909 - ^
01:13:694 - ^
01:14:799 - ^
01:29:523 (89523|1,89615|2,89707|3,89707|6) - 7-6-35 is better imo. It's less difficult for left hand and more clear pattern. If accept, then 01:30:075 (90075|5,90443|1) - Ctrl+h for pattern.
01:33:572 - Missed note.
00:51:793 - Missed note (same sound with 00:52:161 (52161|4) - ).
01:01:179 (61179|4,61363|3) - Ctrl+j for pattern.
01:05:228 - Missed note.
01:08:909 - ^
01:13:694 - ^
01:14:799 - ^
01:29:523 (89523|1,89615|2,89707|3,89707|6) - 7-6-35 is better imo. It's less difficult for left hand and more clear pattern. If accept, then 01:30:075 (90075|5,90443|1) - Ctrl+h for pattern.
01:33:572 - Missed note.
HD
00:21:978 - This section seems a bit weird. Maybe try this? http://puu.sh/j31DU/0075f05a26.png
00:26:211 (26211|6) - To 6, 00:26:579 (26579|5,26947|5,27131|5) - to 7 and 00:26:763 (26763|1) - to 5 for pattern. It's ok, you don't have to use same column for same sounds always. Using doubles is enough in this case.
00:27:867 (27867|0,27867|6) - Try 36 for pattern.
00:35:598 (35598|1) - To 3 for pattern.
00:35:229 (35229|6) - To 6 and 00:35:413 (35413|5,35782|5,35966|5) - to 7, 00:35:782 (35782|3) - to 5, if accept previous mod for similar section. Just to keep similarity.
00:36:334 (36334|2,36518|4,36702|6) - Move 1 column left and 00:36:886 (36886|3,37070|2,37254|1,37438|0) - 1 column right to conjoin your patterns in one common thing.
00:41:855 (41855|1,42223|6) - Same with NM.
01:11:118 - Missed note.
01:13:694 - ^
00:26:211 (26211|6) - To 6, 00:26:579 (26579|5,26947|5,27131|5) - to 7 and 00:26:763 (26763|1) - to 5 for pattern. It's ok, you don't have to use same column for same sounds always. Using doubles is enough in this case.
00:27:867 (27867|0,27867|6) - Try 36 for pattern.
00:35:598 (35598|1) - To 3 for pattern.
00:35:229 (35229|6) - To 6 and 00:35:413 (35413|5,35782|5,35966|5) - to 7, 00:35:782 (35782|3) - to 5, if accept previous mod for similar section. Just to keep similarity.
00:36:334 (36334|2,36518|4,36702|6) - Move 1 column left and 00:36:886 (36886|3,37070|2,37254|1,37438|0) - 1 column right to conjoin your patterns in one common thing.
00:41:855 (41855|1,42223|6) - Same with NM.
01:11:118 - Missed note.
01:13:694 - ^
MX
So much LN's. Sorry, i can't understand most of them, so just check patterns
00:06:518 (6518|6,6518|4) - Delete one note, there's no piano sound and that tick itself don't deserve 2 notes.
00:32:837 (32837|6,33021|0) - Ctrl+j?
00:42:039 - Missed note.
00:47:560 (47560|5) - Move to 2 for comfort.
00:49:769 (49769|4) - Maybe 2 would be more comfortable to read?
00:51:977 (51977|3) - Better change to note.
00:54:001 (54001|1) - Delete.
01:12:038 - 01:13:510 - Left hand is overloaded here. Move 1 or 2 notes to right. I re-arranged this, but couldn't keep your style, so do it on your own.
Also, i recommend you to refuse of that doubles 01:12:774 (72774|2,72958|2,74247|4,74431|4) - . They are not necessary here since player's attention will be concentrated on whole patterns, not on certain sounds. And it seems like you can't do comfortable or even balanced patterns keeping doubles.
01:26:394 (86394|1,86394|6,86394|4,86394|3) - It's too goddamn overmapping. Delete one note.
01:27:130 (87130|6,87130|0,87130|1,87130|4) - ^
01:36:700 (96700|6,97252|1,97252|5) - Delete. Unrankable overmapping.
00:06:518 (6518|6,6518|4) - Delete one note, there's no piano sound and that tick itself don't deserve 2 notes.
00:32:837 (32837|6,33021|0) - Ctrl+j?
00:42:039 - Missed note.
00:47:560 (47560|5) - Move to 2 for comfort.
00:49:769 (49769|4) - Maybe 2 would be more comfortable to read?
00:51:977 (51977|3) - Better change to note.
00:54:001 (54001|1) - Delete.
01:12:038 - 01:13:510 - Left hand is overloaded here. Move 1 or 2 notes to right. I re-arranged this, but couldn't keep your style, so do it on your own.
Also, i recommend you to refuse of that doubles 01:12:774 (72774|2,72958|2,74247|4,74431|4) - . They are not necessary here since player's attention will be concentrated on whole patterns, not on certain sounds. And it seems like you can't do comfortable or even balanced patterns keeping doubles.
01:26:394 (86394|1,86394|6,86394|4,86394|3) - It's too goddamn overmapping. Delete one note.
01:27:130 (87130|6,87130|0,87130|1,87130|4) - ^
01:36:700 (96700|6,97252|1,97252|5) - Delete. Unrankable overmapping.
Very nice song and good map. Good luck