00:09:279 (9279|2) - move to 4, better flow
00:10:567 (10567|4) - should be part of this flow 00:09:095 (9095|6,9831|6) - , therefore move to 7
00:10:751 (10751|3) - move to 5, column consistency
00:13:144 (13144|6,13144|3) - the sound existing here are very weak. You can still add 2 notes but not as counterpart of 00:12:776 (12776|3,12776|0) -
I suggest you allocated them as dual notes instead, by moving 00:13:144 (13144|3) - to 6
00:14:616 (14616|6,14616|3) - same case as above, but this time, you moved them to column 1 and 2 respectively for mirroring purpose
00:14:248 (14248|5,14248|2) - shift them 1 time to the right, counterpart of 00:12:776 (12776|3,12776|0) -
00:21:058 (21058|6,21058|3,21058|0) - no crash sound presence here, unlike 00:19:586 (19586|4,19586|1,19586|0) - and 00:18:113 (18113|6,18113|4,18113|1) - I suggest reduce note density/ delete 1 note
00:22:714 (22714|6,22714|4) - quite heavy impact can be heard, perhaps add note on 2
00:22:714 (22714|4,22898|3,23083|2,23267|1) - not fun to execute, suggestion:
00:23:267 (23267|1) - move to 5
00:23:451 (23451|2) - move to 4
00:23:635 (23635|3) - move to 6
00:24:003 (24003|2) - move to 2,
00:30:076 (30076|6,30076|4,30076|2) - these 3 notes but 00:30:444 (30444|0,30444|1,30812|5,30812|4) - overwhelmingly louder with 2 notes
i suggest keep it with 2 notes for current stream
00:35:229 (35229|3,35229|5) - invalid emphasis, delete 1 note, if you were to emphasis vocal you would add note on 00:35:045 (35045|1) - as well but i don't think that's the case
00:38:910 (38910|4,38910|0,38910|2) - keep it consistent with 2 notes
00:41:855 (41855|4,41855|2,41855|1) -00:42:223 (42223|6,42223|5,42223|2) - oh for the 2nd cour of this stream, it's ok to use 3 notes you can keep them
00:48:112 (48112|1,48112|0,48480|3,48849|5) - the formation totally break here ee, suggestions:
00:48:112 (48112|6,48112|0) - ctrl + h
00:48:112 (48112|1) - move to 5
00:47:744 (47744|0) - move to 7
00:47:744 (47744|6) - move to 2
00:57:130 (57130|6) - move to 3 or 5 lol
00:57:314 (57314|2) - move to 7, pattern consistency for 00:54:369 (54369|0,54369|1) - , refer her vocal
01:05:780 (65780|6,65872|5,65964|4,66056|3,66148|2) - i don't think stairs fit well with current rhythm, i suggest:
http://puu.sh/kDUMX/45485924a8.png01:24:553 (84553|3) - move to 6
01:24:737 (84737|5,84921|4) - shift them 1 time to the left
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