Ipas
Ipas wrote:
Hello! | As requested!
[General][Easy]
- Consider to add "TV size" and "Opening" to the tags
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- 00:08:462 - Skip out this beat might doesn't creates nice playable rhythm here, I guess . Keep the pattern consistent with 00:06:086 (1,2,3) - would create nice rhythm here, I'm sure . Try this, it works more better than the previous rhythm . A circle here 00:08:165 - then a slider pattern as shown in the image here 00:08:462 -
- 00:12:026 (3,4,1) - Well, this rhythm really doesn't worth for rhythm here . Try this rhythm pattern . It's more suitable in terms of rhythmical choices . Extend this slider by 1/2 afterwards 00:12:026 (3) - , 00:12:026 (3) - Remove this circle, 00:13:066 (1) - Move this slider behind by 1/2 too and extend it 1/2 afterwards
i think its fine for easy diff- 00:17:076 (3) - Nazi, blanket is more better here
- 00:23:313 (2,3) - The rhythm isn't match perfectly to playable here . Turn both of them into 1/1 slider 00:23:313 (2,3) - , then add a circle here 00:24:501 - . You can see the following pattern here maybe later or another mod mentions this
- 00:25:689 (2) - Nazi, blanket is nice here
- 00:36:977 (1,2) - Awkward rhythm here . This slider doesn't really plays well here 00:37:571 (2) - . Rearrange the pattern is the best choice to keep the rhythm sounded more nice and worth to be playable here . 00:36:977 (1) - Extend this slider by 1/2 then add a reverse on it, then move this slider 00:38:610 (2) - to 00:38:165 - and add a reverse on it . I'm pretty sure this rhythm is more playable and worth to avoid bad polarity rhythm here . The following pattern will looks like this
rearranged it a bit in my way- 00:46:482 (1,2,3) - Welp, this rhythm doesn't plays really well . It doesn't suitable to put this rhythm here . You skipped too much rhythm that could be more playable if you try to map it . Rearrange the pattern and try to extend this slider by 1/2 00:46:482 (1) - , add a circle here 00:47:670 - , make a 1/1 slider that starts from here 00:47:967 - , and make 1/1 slider too from 00:48:561 - . Bad polarity avoided, and the rhythm sounds more playable here
again should be okay with the simple rythem , if another mod mentions this i'll change- 00:50:046 (2) - Nazi, blanket please . Movement is too rough for me
- 00:53:610 (1,2,3) - Regarding to this pattern, this slider doesn't really accurate the rhythm well 00:54:501 (2) - . Try out this pattern, shorten this slider by 1/2 00:53:610 (1) - and add a reverse on it, then use simple 1/1 rhythm pattern start from here 00:54:798 - . You can try to use my 1/1 pattern as shown at my image here
this one i think i'm gonna disagree , it fits perfectly with the vocal here.- 01:00:887 (1,2) - No please, these two isn't suitable to be placed here . I'd rather to extend this spinner 00:55:986 (1) - until 01:00:739 - , then remove those two 01:00:887 (1,2) - . It fits more better than yours, honestly
- 01:10:838 (3) - Nazi, blanket please >w<
- 01:03:115 (2,3) - I don't feel suitability at those sliders, honestly . I'd rather to use same slider pattern like 01:01:927 (1) - to replace those sliders 01:03:115 (2,3) -
should be okay , but if another mod mentions this i'll change for sure- 01:05:491 (3,4) - With the same reason as above, replace this slider too, with the same pattern that I suggested above ^
- 01:10:838 (3) - To be honest I don't like this slider plays, it's very nonsense for me . I'd rather to add a reverse on this slider 01:10:095 (2) - and delete this slider 01:10:838 (3) -
i'm not fond of repeat sliders that much sorry :C- 01:12:620 - Put this downbeat at the slider tail isn't a nice idea here . How about place this slider 01:12:175 (2) - , keeping it reversed, remove this circle 01:13:511 (3) - . Then, you can just simply add a reverse on this slider 01:11:432 (1) - . It's more nicer and more playable rhythm in my opinion based on your rhythm preferences in entire map
now i want to use repeat slider so its not clumped and more simple pattern + its high BPM should consider this- 01:14:402 (2) - Well, I don't like how this slider plays, it's really interfere with the current background rhythm . I'd rather to make this slider length extended by 1/2 and add a reverse on it 01:13:808 (1) - . I'm pretty sure the whole rhythm will be sounded nice and more playable here
its fine to me- 01:17:967 (3) - I'd rather delete this circle and simply add a reverse on this slider for more better rhythm performances here 01:17:224 (2) -
its fine its easyl diff not hard +- 01:19:155 (2) - This slider doesn't feel right to be placed here . I suggest you to move it into 01:19:600 - , and delete this circle 01:20:046 (3) - . Then, add a reverse to 01:18:412 (1) - , so it'll creates nice playable rhythm here
feels fine to me- 01:24:353 (2,3,4) - If you want more nice rhythm here, let me rearrange it for you . Move 01:25:095 (3) - to 01:25:541 - and remove this circle 01:25:986 (4) - . Then, add a reverse on 01:24:353 (2) - . See the difference
Call me back if you need my mod too in other diff, I feel tired nowadays
Good Luck!
EDIT
[Normal][Hard]
- 00:09:798 - Leaving this point emptied make this slider 00:09:947 (5) - started awkwardly at the moment . There's a correlation between this beat 00:09:798 - and this beat 00:09:947 - , but you leave the first one empty . I suggest you to map 00:09:798 - out for more nice working rhythm here
- 00:12:620 (4) - 00:13:808 (2) - I don't know which rhythm you followed on this two slider, honestly . I'd rather to use 1/2 repeat slider to replace those sliders, which doesn't even clearly indicate any beat at the music
it plays fine- 00:16:185 (2) - Maybe, you can try to apply suggestion above to this slider too, but keeping it for this one is fine for me, but I guess it will be more suitable to use 1/2 repeat slider here tho
no D:- 00:21:680 (4,5) - Well, this rhythm plays well but I'd rather to use this kind of pattern, because I think the vocal is more decent to be mapped at this point, not the drum . 00:21:680 (4) - Extend this slider by 1/2, then delete the next slider and replace it with a circle on 00:22:422 -
its fine for a normal diff i'm not gonna change it- 00:23:313 (2) - With the same reason beforehand, I'd rather to rearrange this slider into 1/2 reverse slider
- 00:26:878 (6) - This slider plays awkward for me . As you see that vocal on 00:26:729 - is more better to be placed by a slider, because there's a long both on vocal and the instrument here nonetheless you're map out 00:26:878 - that doesn't even important to the base rhythm you followed here actually . I'd rather to extend this slider by 1/2 00:26:729 (5) - , and make it replace this slider 00:26:729 (5) - to make it more better to be played here
fixed in my own way , but same rythem soooo- 00:36:977 (1) - You're follow the vocal here, suddenly use this slider 00:37:571 (2) - to map out the drum sound creates a bad polarity for me . It's better to keep this slider 00:37:571 (2) - emphasize the vocal here 00:37:422 - , so extend that slider (2) by 1/2 and move it 1/2 behind so it'll placed at 00:37:422 - will creates nice rhythm here
stil follows vocal lol- 00:38:610 - It seems like this beat need particularly to be accentuated by a long slider, as it appears with the cymbal sound and long vocal here . Put this beat at slider tail is very bad rhythm here . I strongly recommend you to delete this slider 00:38:313 (4) - , so it'll keep 1/2 rhythm with 00:38:165 (3) - and give more room to emphasize that important beat on 00:38:610 - (turn out these two (3) (4) into a 1/2 slider is fine tho) . Then, extend this slider by 1/2 and put it at 00:38:610 - , so the following pattern will looks like this
fixed in my own way- 00:39:947 (2,3,4) - Rhythm that appears on these objects is really similar with 00:42:323 (2,3,4,5,6) - . For me, keeping the pattern consistent is the best way to fix out the rhythm issues on 00:39:947 (2,3,4) - , because this rhythm doesn't plays really well here
variations so its okay , doesnt play badly- 00:55:986 (1,2) - I know what you're following here, but seems likely the rhythm feels really awkward here . Ctrl+G'ing those pattern 00:55:986 (1,2) - is more suitable for the current music section here, so I would recommend you to do it (Don't forget to apply it to 00:57:175 (3,4) - and 00:58:363 (5,6) - because they have similar rhythm)
yea im gonna change if anoyher mod mentions this- 01:10:838 (5) - This circle make the entire sequence feels empty . It doesn't indicate important beat here, honestly . I'm sorry but my suggestion is just only make the current rhythm feels dense, but it's more better than yours I guess . I guess it's fine because this is on kiai and a bridge to pass the first kiai section to the next half kiai section afterwards . Put 1/1 slider here 01:10:689 - , then keep (6) placed at its current pattern
its fine for a normal diff- 01:12:620 (4,5) - What is this spacing? -w- Fix it!
- 01:14:105 (2) - Because your current base rhythm at this section is vocal, I guess make this slider into 1/2 reverse slider is more accurately emphasizing the vocals here
its fine here i think lol :C- 01:27:472 (4) - Delete please, it sounded overmap here to be honest because if you're intended to make this slider to follow the vocal, you need to map 01:27:917 - too . Either remove it or map 01:27:917 - is the nice idea here
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- 00:42:323 (3) - Keep the rhythm constant with the previous 1/2 would be reasonable here, because I don't feel right about this 1/1 slider its fine
- 00:44:699 (2) - Same as above ^
- 00:48:264 (3) - ^ ^
- 00:51:234 (1,2) - Swap the NC maybe? The cymbal sound at (2) particularly needs to be emphasized I think dont want to ruin the consistency
Continue later!
Rohit6
Rohit6 wrote:
Hello!
[Easy]
00:17:076 (3,1) - Bad blanket
00:24:947 (1,2) - ^
00:46:185 (3,1) - ^
[Normal]
00:02:800 (2,1) -Bad blanket
00:36:234 (4,1) - ^
00:49:897 (2,3) - ^
00:53:016 (4,1) - ^
01:04:006 (6,1) - ^
01:19:600 (4,5) - Blanket isnt perfect
01:22:125 (4,5) - Bad blanket
I havent played , mapped or modded easy and normal diffs since ever but these look fine
[Hard]
00:13:957 (4,1) - Potential blanket
00:47:670 (1,2) - Bad blanket
00:49:155 (1,2) - Potential blanket
00:49:897 (1,2) - ^
00:52:274 (1,2) - Bad blanket
01:03:561 (2,3) - ^
01:05:937 (2,3) - ^
01:08:165 (2,3) - ^
01:11:878 (2,3) - ^
01:17:224 (1,2) - ^
No flow problems at all,just a few visual problems because blankets
[Insane]
00:13:066 (1,2) - Bad blanket
00:24:947 (1,2) - Blanket isnt perfect
00:40:244 (5,1) - Awkward transition from 5 to 1 in terms of flow.Ctrl+g and rotate the slider a bit try playing the diff
00:45:145 (1,2) - Potential blanket
00:47:373 (5,2) - Linear blankets are kinda eh imo
00:47:967 (3,5) - ^
00:55:095 (2,4) - Potential blanket
01:18:412 (1,2) - Bad blanket
01:21:977 (1,2) - Potential blanket
01:28:660 (1) - I dont think you need a NC here no its fine here with the NC
Better than the Expert diff.
No real issues except some bad blankets and a place or two with awkward flow
[Expert]
00:17:967 (1,2) - Blanket isnt perfect
00:31:927 (5,6,1) - Those jumps dont feel fitting there fine to me
00:38:610 (3,4) - Potential blanket
00:44:105 (1,1) - Lower volume on sliderends should be okay
00:48:858 (1) - ^ ^
00:51:531 (1) - ^^
00:53:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is very awkward to play try playing it , it flows nice and palys nice too
00:59:254 (2,3) - Place these a more far away as it doesnt feel very satisfying to play as of now
01:07:719 (1,2) - Bad blanket
01:13:066 (3,1) - ^
01:18:412 (1,2) - Blanket isnt perfect
01:28:957 (1,2) - Needs higher DS here its anti jump no need to increase to spike diff again its free pp already
I'm not particularly fond of the straight stream placement but theyre ok i guess
Giving some kd because why not
No Reply = Fixed
Thanks !