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- Consider to add "TV size" and "Opening" to the tags
- 00:08:462 - Skip out this beat might doesn't creates nice playable rhythm here, I guess . Keep the pattern consistent with 00:06:086 (1,2,3) - would create nice rhythm here, I'm sure . Try this, it works more better than the previous rhythm . A circle here 00:08:165 - then a slider pattern as shown in the image here 00:08:462 -
- 00:12:026 (3,4,1) - Well, this rhythm really doesn't worth for rhythm here . Try this rhythm pattern . It's more suitable in terms of rhythmical choices . Extend this slider by 1/2 afterwards 00:12:026 (3) - , 00:12:026 (3) - Remove this circle, 00:13:066 (1) - Move this slider behind by 1/2 too and extend it 1/2 afterwards
- 00:17:076 (3) - Nazi, blanket is more better here
- 00:23:313 (2,3) - The rhythm isn't match perfectly to playable here . Turn both of them into 1/1 slider 00:23:313 (2,3) - , then add a circle here 00:24:501 - . You can see the following pattern here
- 00:25:689 (2) - Nazi, blanket is nice here
- 00:36:977 (1,2) - Awkward rhythm here . This slider doesn't really plays well here 00:37:571 (2) - . Rearrange the pattern is the best choice to keep the rhythm sounded more nice and worth to be playable here . 00:36:977 (1) - Extend this slider by 1/2 then add a reverse on it, then move this slider 00:38:610 (2) - to 00:38:165 - and add a reverse on it . I'm pretty sure this rhythm is more playable and worth to avoid bad polarity rhythm here . The following pattern will looks like this
- 00:46:482 (1,2,3) - Welp, this rhythm doesn't plays really well . It doesn't suitable to put this rhythm here . You skipped too much rhythm that could be more playable if you try to map it . Rearrange the pattern and try to extend this slider by 1/2 00:46:482 (1) - , add a circle here 00:47:670 - , make a 1/1 slider that starts from here 00:47:967 - , and make 1/1 slider too from 00:48:561 - . Bad polarity avoided, and the rhythm sounds more playable here
- 00:50:046 (2) - Nazi, blanket please . Movement is too rough for me
- 00:53:610 (1,2,3) - Regarding to this pattern, this slider doesn't really accurate the rhythm well 00:54:501 (2) - . Try out this pattern, shorten this slider by 1/2 00:53:610 (1) - and add a reverse on it, then use simple 1/1 rhythm pattern start from here 00:54:798 - . You can try to use my 1/1 pattern as shown at my image here
- 01:00:887 (1,2) - No please, these two isn't suitable to be placed here . I'd rather to extend this spinner 00:55:986 (1) - until 01:00:739 - , then remove those two 01:00:887 (1,2) - . It fits more better than yours, honestly
- 01:10:838 (3) - Nazi, blanket please >w<
- 01:03:115 (2,3) - I don't feel suitability at those sliders, honestly . I'd rather to use same slider pattern like 01:01:927 (1) - to replace those sliders 01:03:115 (2,3) -
- 01:05:491 (3,4) - With the same reason as above, replace this slider too, with the same pattern that I suggested above
- 01:10:838 (3) - To be honest I don't like this slider plays, it's very nonsense for me . I'd rather to add a reverse on this slider 01:10:095 (2) - and delete this slider 01:10:838 (3) -
- 01:12:620 - Put this downbeat at the slider tail isn't a nice idea here . How about place this slider 01:12:175 (2) - , keeping it reversed, remove this circle 01:13:511 (3) - . Then, you can just simply add a reverse on this slider 01:11:432 (1) - . It's more nicer and more playable rhythm in my opinion based on your rhythm preferences in entire map
- 01:14:402 (2) - Well, I don't like how this slider plays, it's really interfere with the current background rhythm . I'd rather to make this slider length extended by 1/2 and add a reverse on it 01:13:808 (1) - . I'm pretty sure the whole rhythm will be sounded nice and more playable here
- 01:17:967 (3) - I'd rather delete this circle and simply add a reverse on this slider for more better rhythm performances here 01:17:224 (2) -
- 01:19:155 (2) - This slider doesn't feel right to be placed here . I suggest you to move it into 01:19:600 - , and delete this circle 01:20:046 (3) - . Then, add a reverse to 01:18:412 (1) - , so it'll creates nice playable rhythm here
- 01:24:353 (2,3,4) - If you want more nice rhythm here, let me rearrange it for you . Move 01:25:095 (3) - to 01:25:541 - and remove this circle 01:25:986 (4) - . Then, add a reverse on 01:24:353 (2) - . See the difference
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- 00:09:798 - Leaving this point emptied make this slider 00:09:947 (5) - started awkwardly at the moment . There's a correlation between this beat 00:09:798 - and this beat 00:09:947 - , but you leave the first one empty . I suggest you to map 00:09:798 - out for more nice working rhythm here
- 00:12:620 (4) - 00:13:808 (2) - I don't know which rhythm you followed on this two slider, honestly . I'd rather to use 1/2 repeat slider to replace those sliders, which doesn't even clearly indicate any beat at the music
- 00:16:185 (2) - Maybe, you can try to apply suggestion above to this slider too, but keeping it for this one is fine for me, but I guess it will be more suitable to use 1/2 repeat slider here tho
- 00:21:680 (4,5) - Well, this rhythm plays well but I'd rather to use this kind of pattern, because I think the vocal is more decent to be mapped at this point, not the drum . 00:21:680 (4) - Extend this slider by 1/2, then delete the next slider and replace it with a circle on 00:22:422 -
- 00:23:313 (2) - With the same reason beforehand, I'd rather to rearrange this slider into 1/2 reverse slider
- 00:26:878 (6) - This slider plays awkward for me . As you see that vocal on 00:26:729 - is more better to be placed by a slider, because there's a long both on vocal and the instrument here nonetheless you're map out 00:26:878 - that doesn't even important to the base rhythm you followed here actually . I'd rather to extend this slider by 1/2 00:26:729 (5) - , and make it replace this slider 00:26:729 (5) - to make it more better to be played here
- 00:36:977 (1) - You're follow the vocal here, suddenly use this slider 00:37:571 (2) - to map out the drum sound creates a bad polarity for me . It's better to keep this slider 00:37:571 (2) - emphasize the vocal here 00:37:422 - , so extend that slider (2) by 1/2 and move it 1/2 behind so it'll placed at 00:37:422 - will creates nice rhythm here
- 00:38:610 - It seems like this beat need particularly to be accentuated by a long slider, as it appears with the cymbal sound and long vocal here . Put this beat at slider tail is very bad rhythm here . I strongly recommend you to delete this slider 00:38:313 (4) - , so it'll keep 1/2 rhythm with 00:38:165 (3) - and give more room to emphasize that important beat on 00:38:610 - (turn out these two (3) (4) into a 1/2 slider is fine tho) . Then, extend this slider by 1/2 and put it at 00:38:610 - , so the following pattern will looks like this
- 00:39:947 (2,3,4) - Rhythm that appears on these objects is really similar with 00:42:323 (2,3,4,5,6) - . For me, keeping the pattern consistent is the best way to fix out the rhythm issues on 00:39:947 (2,3,4) - , because this rhythm doesn't plays really well here
- 00:55:986 (1,2) - I know what you're following here, but seems likely the rhythm feels really awkward here . Ctrl+G'ing those pattern 00:55:986 (1,2) - is more suitable for the current music section here, so I would recommend you to do it (Don't forget to apply it to 00:57:175 (3,4) - and 00:58:363 (5,6) - because they have similar rhythm)
- 01:10:838 (5) - This circle make the entire sequence feels empty . It doesn't indicate important beat here, honestly . I'm sorry but my suggestion is just only make the current rhythm feels dense, but it's more better than yours I guess . I guess it's fine because this is on kiai and a bridge to pass the first kiai section to the next half kiai section afterwards . Put 1/1 slider here 01:10:689 - , then keep (6) placed at its current pattern
- 01:12:620 (4,5) - What is this spacing? -w- Fix it!
- 01:14:105 (2) - Because your current base rhythm at this section is vocal, I guess make this slider into 1/2 reverse slider is more accurately emphasizing the vocals here
- 01:27:472 (4) - Delete please, it sounded overmap here to be honest because if you're intended to make this slider to follow the vocal, you need to map 01:27:917 - too . Either remove it or map 01:27:917 - is the nice idea here
- 00:42:323 (3) - Keep the rhythm constant with the previous 1/2 would be reasonable here, because I don't feel right about this 1/1 slider
- 00:44:699 (2) - Same as above
- 00:48:264 (3) - ^
- 00:51:234 (1,2) - Swap the NC maybe? The cymbal sound at (2) particularly needs to be emphasized I think
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