Natteke ft. tieff - The Dream · forum

tieff

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tieff 2010-06-03T23:05:56+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年6月7日 at 3:17:49

Artist: Natteke ft. tieff
Title: The Dream
Tags: Natteke_Desu
BPM: 125
Filesize: 5344kb
Play Time: 02:38
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.87 stars, 289 notes)
Natteke (4.55 stars, 205 notes)
Relaxing (3.46 stars, 154 notes)

Download: Natteke ft. tieff - The Dream
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This composition is a result of creative project by tieff and Natteke. Melody written by tieff. Arranged by Natteke.

Last edited by tieff 2010-06-06T23:17:57+00:00, edited 11 times in total.

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-06-03T23:17:56+00:00

diff

Download: Natteke ft. tieff - The Dream (tieff) [Natteke].osu

Last edited by Natteke 2010-06-04T14:28:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

TKiller

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TKiller 2010-06-04T11:34:32+00:00

отстаньте от фрутилупса D:

Alice

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Alice 2010-06-04T15:36:24+00:00

Tags: Natteke

x_x;;

Hard
01:20:178 (1) - to be honest I disagree with this spinner, kinda short T~T but the fact it can reach 1000 points probably makes it rankable.

Natteke's diff is pretty calm and cool, I'll try to update this map often so I can test [Hard] when it's done (and maybe say something about it, who knows? I doubt I will, though, your maps are actually pretty good. o.o)

Nice job guys, have this star for now~~

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-06-04T16:17:03+00:00

Alice Margatroid wrote:
Nice job guys, have this star for now~~

I guess it's not quite ready for modding yet XD

Zekira

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Zekira 2010-06-04T16:18:14+00:00

Why would you need Natteke on the tags when it's already in the artist? Maybe put something like "Natteke_Desu" instead?

Furawa

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Furawa 2010-06-06T11:43:32+00:00

nice map and song

ignorethis

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ignorethis 2010-06-06T12:09:44+00:00

Mostly nazi-ing

<General>
why doesn't this mp3 file have fade out o.o (/me runs)

<Relaxing>
Better use a custom hitsound to remove the sliding sound, or manually remove them in the editor.
00:49:938 (1) - Move this to the left, the spacing seems misleading o.o

<Natteke>
01:02:418 (3) - Clap on this slider doesn't sound fit, remove?

<Hard>
01:24:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - The volume on 3,4,5 gets too loud. Consider lowering? (Just gradually adding up to normal volume)
01:40:098 (1,2,3) - ^
01:55:458 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:13:698 (2) - From this note on, the volume is obviously louder than before. Since the volume of the music doesn't increase, the increase and decrease (later in the map?) on the volume of the notes are unnecessary imo. Consider lowering the volume.

nice map/music. +star

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-06-06T12:16:48+00:00

[Relaxing]
00:49:938 (1,2) - this spacing is little confusing @_@
01:24:978 (2) - make it more symmetric?

[Natteke]
Good.

[Hard]
01:24:738 (1) - i guess it's jump, but dosen't fit imo.

Oh, i like Dream Trance XD
Cool song, nice map, awesome hitsounds.

Star~

tieff

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tieff 2010-06-06T12:28:53+00:00

Fixed.

DJPop

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Here since the beginning

DJPop 2010-06-06T14:55:20+00:00

The ending is very bad, why don't fade-out it? D:

~Relaxing~
01:36:738 (3) - remove sliderwhistle
01:59:778 (3) - ^
02:01:938 (2) - ^
02:15:618 (3) - ^
02:17:778 (4) - ^
02:29:298 (5) - ^
02:30:738 (2) - ^
02:34:578 (4) - ^

~Natteke~
02:15:258 - add note? sync to bd

~Hard~
01:39:138 (6) - add a clap
02:27:378 (6) - remove sliderwhistle
02:31:218 (4) - ^
02:35:058 (5) - ^
02:36:978 (3) - ^

Don't know you intended on those sliderwhistles, but without them is better imo.
Good song, +Star

tieff

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tieff 2010-06-06T15:00:18+00:00

Fixed Relaxing and Hard.
The end of a song is fine.

Alice

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Alice 2010-06-06T15:20:45+00:00

About the .mp3, I have to agree it's a bit strange at the end. Maybe just fade out from 02:41:778 or something, because it brutally stops at 02:43:265 when the last sound isn't finished yet >.<
Maybe it's fine though, but as the end of the map is only a few seconds before, it could be kinda.. disturbing if you leave the score panel opened (that's the main problem of non-faded .mp3s >.<)

Tags : you only changed "Natteke" to "Natteke_Desu" in [Hard], add it to every difficulties.
It's anyway an useless tags because _ doesn't work as a space in search mode D: See this for example xD; Just add "Natteke desu" or "desu" (as Natteke is the artist) since underscores doesn't work.

The map is really fine after rechecking and retesting so I'm just gonna ~~nazi~~ suggest a few things:

Skin : really nice, I always liked those hitcircles <3, but the map would look even cooler, in my opinion, if you complete it a little more (blue-colored HP bar, etc, so it fits the map well)
Relaxing : HP Drain Rate -1?
Natteke : it's really a suggestion but, I find [Natteke] a bit cold for a diff name. It sure is fine but I'd rather see something like "Natteke's Dream" or.. whatever you want.

Hard : I like your hitsounds <3

Get it ranked <3

Garven

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Garven 2010-06-06T16:51:03+00:00

This is awesome. The only thing I can really complain about is the lack of a break on the easiest diff.

Mystearica

Mystearica 2010-06-06T21:47:15+00:00

meh you don't need my star but why not anyway

Shinxyn

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Shinxyn 2010-06-06T23:10:50+00:00

Awesome :D
Apparently you should add an "approachcircle.png" skin when adding hitcircles now? (to be safe~)
Heheh, I'm not the only one who mentioned the mp3's ending :D

Relaxing-
02:31:218 (3) - add finish to end to follow the pace?
02:33:618 (2,3) - remove whistle from 2 and add finish to 3 to follow same pace as ^?
Great!

Natteke-
01:30:978 (2) - add finish to start to match 01:29:058 (2)?
Awesome~

Hard-
01:00:378 (4,5) - I say use one of the two hitsounds here only, not both (match 00:58:458 (8,9) and use finish only, or go different with whistles)
01:20:178 - add note? O.o
01:24:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - rawrrr, you made this spacing on purpose? hard to tell it was 1/4
01:35:658 (5) - finish instead of clap on start? or you like the double claps? (01:39:138 (6,7) sounds better :P)
02:13:518 - :P you have two timing panels here (plus, I like this 1/8's slider volume rather than the other 3 which increases to max)
02:26:898 (4) - miss a clap?
I love how the music makes the 1/8 sliders sound more intense halfway through~
Awesome~

Could use some non-custom finishes, but oh well.
Yeaaaa ~.~ can't bubble while its in WIP :]

Edit: bubbled ><!!

yaya

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yaya 2010-06-07T10:18:34+00:00

ranked

Mok

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Mok 2010-06-07T11:41:19+00:00

fast