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Natteke ft. tieff - The Dream

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tieff
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年6月7日 at 3:17:49

Artist: Natteke ft. tieff
Title: The Dream
Tags: Natteke_Desu
BPM: 125
Filesize: 5344kb
Play Time: 02:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.87 stars, 289 notes)
  2. Natteke (4.55 stars, 205 notes)
  3. Relaxing (3.46 stars, 154 notes)
Download: Natteke ft. tieff - The Dream
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This composition is a result of creative project by tieff and Natteke. Melody written by tieff. Arranged by Natteke.
Natteke
TKiller
отстаньте от фрутилупса D:
Alice
Tags: Natteke

x_x;;

Hard
01:20:178 (1) - to be honest I disagree with this spinner, kinda short T~T but the fact it can reach 1000 points probably makes it rankable.

Natteke's diff is pretty calm and cool, I'll try to update this map often so I can test [Hard] when it's done (and maybe say something about it, who knows? I doubt I will, though, your maps are actually pretty good. o.o)

Nice job guys, have this star for now~~
Natteke

Alice Margatroid wrote:

Nice job guys, have this star for now~~
I guess it's not quite ready for modding yet XD
Zekira
Why would you need Natteke on the tags when it's already in the artist? Maybe put something like "Natteke_Desu" instead?
Furawa
:) nice map and song
ignorethis
Mostly nazi-ing :P

<General>
why doesn't this mp3 file have fade out o.o (/me runs)

<Relaxing>
Better use a custom hitsound to remove the sliding sound, or manually remove them in the editor.
00:49:938 (1) - Move this to the left, the spacing seems misleading o.o

<Natteke>
01:02:418 (3) - Clap on this slider doesn't sound fit, remove?

<Hard>
01:24:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - The volume on 3,4,5 gets too loud. Consider lowering? (Just gradually adding up to normal volume)
01:40:098 (1,2,3) - ^
01:55:458 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:13:698 (2) - From this note on, the volume is obviously louder than before. Since the volume of the music doesn't increase, the increase and decrease (later in the map?) on the volume of the notes are unnecessary imo. Consider lowering the volume.

nice map/music. +star :P
MoonFragrance
[Relaxing]
00:49:938 (1,2) - this spacing is little confusing @_@
01:24:978 (2) - make it more symmetric?

[Natteke]
Good.

[Hard]
01:24:738 (1) - i guess it's jump, but dosen't fit imo.

Oh, i like Dream Trance XD
Cool song, nice map, awesome hitsounds.

Star~
Topic Starter
tieff
Fixed.
DJPop
The ending is very bad, why don't fade-out it? D:


~Relaxing~
01:36:738 (3) - remove sliderwhistle
01:59:778 (3) - ^
02:01:938 (2) - ^
02:15:618 (3) - ^
02:17:778 (4) - ^
02:29:298 (5) - ^
02:30:738 (2) - ^
02:34:578 (4) - ^

~Natteke~
02:15:258 - add note? sync to bd

~Hard~
01:39:138 (6) - add a clap
02:27:378 (6) - remove sliderwhistle
02:31:218 (4) - ^
02:35:058 (5) - ^
02:36:978 (3) - ^


Don't know you intended on those sliderwhistles, but without them is better imo.
Good song, +Star
Topic Starter
tieff
Fixed Relaxing and Hard.
The end of a song is fine.
Alice
About the .mp3, I have to agree it's a bit strange at the end. Maybe just fade out from 02:41:778 or something, because it brutally stops at 02:43:265 when the last sound isn't finished yet >.<
Maybe it's fine though, but as the end of the map is only a few seconds before, it could be kinda.. disturbing if you leave the score panel opened (that's the main problem of non-faded .mp3s >.<)

Tags : you only changed "Natteke" to "Natteke_Desu" in [Hard], add it to every difficulties.
It's anyway an useless tags because _ doesn't work as a space in search mode D: See this for example xD; Just add "Natteke desu" or "desu" (as Natteke is the artist) since underscores doesn't work.

The map is really fine after rechecking and retesting so I'm just gonna nazi suggest a few things:

Skin : really nice, I always liked those hitcircles <3, but the map would look even cooler, in my opinion, if you complete it a little more (blue-colored HP bar, etc, so it fits the map well)
Relaxing : HP Drain Rate -1?
Natteke : it's really a suggestion but, I find [Natteke] a bit cold for a diff name. It sure is fine but I'd rather see something like "Natteke's Dream" or.. whatever you want. :P
Hard : I like your hitsounds <3

Get it ranked <3
Garven
This is awesome. The only thing I can really complain about is the lack of a break on the easiest diff.
Mystearica
meh you don't need my star but why not anyway
Shinxyn
Awesome :D
Apparently you should add an "approachcircle.png" skin when adding hitcircles now? (to be safe~)
Heheh, I'm not the only one who mentioned the mp3's ending :D

Relaxing-
02:31:218 (3) - add finish to end to follow the pace?
02:33:618 (2,3) - remove whistle from 2 and add finish to 3 to follow same pace as ^?
Great!

Natteke-
01:30:978 (2) - add finish to start to match 01:29:058 (2)?
Awesome~

Hard-
01:00:378 (4,5) - I say use one of the two hitsounds here only, not both (match 00:58:458 (8,9) and use finish only, or go different with whistles)
01:20:178 - add note? O.o
01:24:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - rawrrr, you made this spacing on purpose? hard to tell it was 1/4
01:35:658 (5) - finish instead of clap on start? or you like the double claps? (01:39:138 (6,7) sounds better :P)
02:13:518 - :P you have two timing panels here (plus, I like this 1/8's slider volume rather than the other 3 which increases to max)
02:26:898 (4) - miss a clap?
I love how the music makes the 1/8 sliders sound more intense halfway through~
Awesome~

Could use some non-custom finishes, but oh well.
Yeaaaa ~.~ can't bubble while its in WIP :]

Edit: bubbled ><!!
yaya
ranked
Mok
fast :twisted:
insaeno
Love it~
Ending is alright, imo.
Wonderful~
Alace
oh man
it is ranked so fast
let me FC it anyway XD
Grats

EDIT:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12191
It`s sounds pretty nice,this is my modding for your map XD
insaeno
Eh, what did you use to produce this song?
TKiller
they used FruityLoops Studio. Well, at least tieff used it, but I'm pretty sure Natteke was using it too.
Natteke
The only program you know is FL, right?
Andrea
Too awesome.
GabrielRKF
Just great <3
Cillu
Wow this song is hella sick! Make more like this.

I'm going to play this in my car.
Natteke
^_^
GabrielRKF

Cillu wrote:

I'm going to play this in my car.
It's already on my cellphone~ (y)
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