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From my queue
[General]
[AsaNe's Easy]
[Insane]
[Extra]
Good luck~
From my queue
[General]
- Disable widescreen support since there is no storyboard
[AsaNe's Easy]
- 00:22:755 (3) - I wouldn't recommend setting a strong beat on a slider end, try shortening the slider and at the slider end's corresponding timeline instead.
- 00:52:365 (2) - Perhaps tilt this a bit clockwise, so the slider is directed towards the next circle to improve the flow.
- 01:14:183 (7) - The reverse part of the slider doesnt really fit the song at all, would be better to shorten it to a 1/1 reverse slider and maybe add a circle at 01:15:352
- 01:30:547 (4) -
- 01:34:443 - Add a circle here as a finish, to emphasize the downbeat here.
- 01:50:027 (5) - Strong 01:51:196
- 02:16:521 (7) - Same problem as 01:14:183 (7)
- 02:22:755 (6) - Would be better to use a 1/1 slider and use a circle to emphasize the downbeat at 02:23:652
- 03:00:157 (7) - Same as above
[Insane]
- 00:22:365 (3,4) - Although the current pattern is fine, I would suggest putting a 1/2 slider here instead, due to the presence of a long violin sound in the song.
- 00:30:937 (1) - Curve this a bit, so it leads into the next note more smoothly and improves the flow?
- 00:34:443 (5) - Not really unrankable, but try to make this a bit cleaner; right now it seems rather randomly shaped.
- 00:37:560 (4) - The slider ends on a long beat; try to avoid that by shortening the slider to a 1/2 and putting a circle at 00:37:949 instead.
- 00:55:872 (2,3) - This pattern not only doesn't match the song, it feels really empty at a rather chorus-like part of the music. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/itNH4/2fd44e49b6.jpg
- I'd recommend stacking 01:09:508 (1,3) 01:10:287 (4,6) 01:11:066 (7,9) 01:15:742 (1,3) 01:16:521 (4,6) 01:17:300 (7,9) for a cleaner look of the map overall
- 01:20:027 (3,4,5,6) - This stream is rather overmapped, especially 01:20:320 (6) when there isn't really anything to map to in the song. Try this timeline arrangement instead http://puu.sh/itO7c/27803e7f6d.jpg
- 01:29:962 - Add a circle to make this a triple, right now it seems empty
- 01:55:872 (4,1) - Stack these two for a cleaner look
- 01:57:820 (1,2) - This flow seems awkward. You could curve the slider so it allows the cursor to move more naturally into the next note.
- 02:02:495 (3,4,5) - This pattern seems inconsistent with 02:03:274 (3,4,5) since its stacked... (not really mod, just opinion)
- 02:10:677 (3,1) - Stack these 2 to make it cleaner
- 02:45:742 (4,1) - ^
[Extra]
- 00:21:196 (1,2) - I think you should actually just take a look at the whole map and stack some of the objects. (Actually forgot to mention this applies to insane as well) Another example, 00:24:313 (1,2) would be better to stack since there is a short pause in the music, therefore halting the movement of the cursor until the beat resumes.
- 00:36:196 (4) - ctrl+g, also rotate the slider to make it seem more natural flowing into the next slider.
- This is the hardest diff, yet parts like 00:55:287 and 00:56:261 are a complete blank even when there are clearly parts in the music that you can map.
- 01:31:326 (7) - NC this, should be the first beat of a new section in the music.
- 01:31:618 (1,2) - Not really fitting the song, especially the 1/4 slider. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/itRD4/582e86e2c7.jpg
- 01:34:053 (2,3) - Blanket these two for a cleaner look
- 01:44:573 (4) - I'm not really sure about this one... while it seems fine, after some listening to it the high pitch at this moment in the music doesn't really call for a reverse slider. Make a 1/1 instead.
- 02:43:794 (3) - Eh... I'm sure that this slider can be improved, right now the shape looks rather messy.
- 02:46:131 (3) - ctrl+g this, would be awkward for the player to suddenly shift direction to play the following objects.
Good luck~