Lindsey Stirling - Senbonzakura [Osu|OsuMania] · forum

RuberusuScarlet

Joined April 2013

RuberusuScarlet 2015-05-28T09:55:15+00:00

ruberusu's BN check (mania map)

from osu!chat (by Harbyter)

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[General]
diff name change…
Harby's 4K NM

Harby's 4K NM+
Harby's 4K HD

Harby's 4K HD+

The reason (4K NM) : Difficulties too and pattern for beginner
For example… 00:43:014 - to 00:43:794 - , 00:57:040 - to 01:06:391 - , 01:09:508 - to 01:14:183 - , 01:15:742 - to 01:20:027 - , 01:36:391 - to 01:40:677 -
01:45:352 - to 01:46:131 - , 01:59:378 - to 02:08:729 - , 02:10:287 - to 02:22:365 - , 02:30:547 - to 02:36:781 - , 02:43:014 (163014|1,163307|1) - ,02:46:131 (166131|1,166424|1) -
02:55:482 - to 03:06:001 -

The reason (4K HD) : Difficulties too and pattern in HD
For example… 00:57:040 - to 01:07:949 - , 01:09:508 - to 01:20:417 - , 01:59:378 - to 02:10:287 - , 02:12:235 - to 02:20:417 - , 02:55:482 - to 03:06:391 -

I recommend a diff name change

[4K NM]
02:15:157 (135157|1) - move to 4

violin pitch and avoid jack 02:14:962 (134962|1,135157|1,135352|1) -

02:15:937 (135937|2) - ^1

violin pitch and avoid jack 02:15:742 (135742|2,135937|2,136131|2) -

02:43:014 (163014|1) - end to 02:43:307 -
02:43:307 (163307|1) - move to 3
02:46:131 (166131|1) - end to 02:46:424 -
move to 02:46:424 (166424|1) -

In the same way as 02:43:307 (163307|1,169248|3,169540|1) -

02:49:735 (169735|3) - move to 3

It is not at the same pitch as 02:49:248 (169248|3) -

[4K HD]
01:41:456 - to 01:42:040 - established a note to the white line and red line (1/2)
and … sample import
01:41:456 - and 01:41:651 - soft-hitclap2 (20%)
01:41:846 - and 01:42:040 - ^ (30%)

02:49:735 (169735|3) - move to 3

It is not at the same pitch as 02:49:248 (169248|3) -

02:49:248 (169248|3) - end to 02:49:443 -
02:49:540 (169540|1) - move to 4

It is at the same pitch as 02:49:248 (169248|3) -

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3181339

Harbyter

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Harbyter 2015-05-28T12:25:29+00:00

RuberusuScarlet wrote:
ruberusu's BN check (mania map)

from osu!chat (by Harbyter)

|1|2|3|4|

[General]
diff name change…
Harby's 4K NM Harby's 4K NM+
Harby's 4K HD Harby's 4K HD+

The reason (4K NM) : Difficulties too and pattern for beginner
For example… 00:43:014 - to 00:43:794 - , 00:57:040 - to 01:06:391 - , 01:09:508 - to 01:14:183 - , 01:15:742 - to 01:20:027 - , 01:36:391 - to 01:40:677 -
01:45:352 - to 01:46:131 - , 01:59:378 - to 02:08:729 - , 02:10:287 - to 02:22:365 - , 02:30:547 - to 02:36:781 - , 02:43:014 (163014|1,163307|1) - ,02:46:131 (166131|1,166424|1) -
02:55:482 - to 03:06:001 -

The reason (4K HD) : Difficulties too and pattern in HD
For example… 00:57:040 - to 01:07:949 - , 01:09:508 - to 01:20:417 - , 01:59:378 - to 02:10:287 - , 02:12:235 - to 02:20:417 - , 02:55:482 - to 03:06:391 -

I recommend a diff name change

[4K NM]
02:15:157 (135157|1) - move to 4
violin pitch and avoid jack 02:14:962 (134962|1,135157|1,135352|1) -
02:15:937 (135937|2) - ^1
violin pitch and avoid jack 02:15:742 (135742|2,135937|2,136131|2) -
02:43:014 (163014|1) - end to 02:43:307 -
02:43:307 (163307|1) - move to 3
02:46:131 (166131|1) - end to 02:46:424 -
move to 02:46:424 (166424|1) -
In the same way as 02:43:307 (163307|1,169248|3,169540|1) -
02:49:735 (169735|3) - move to 3
It is not at the same pitch as 02:49:248 (169248|3) -
[4K HD]
01:41:456 - to 01:42:040 - established a note to the white line and red line (1/2)
and … sample import
01:41:456 - and 01:41:651 - soft-hitclap2 (20%)
01:41:846 - and 01:42:040 - ^ (30%) ^ keep like this, i want to keep only the LN in that section

02:49:735 (169735|3) - move to 3 ok
It is not at the same pitch as 02:49:248 (169248|3) -
02:49:248 (169248|3) - end to 02:49:443 -
02:49:540 (169540|1) - move to 4
It is at the same pitch as 02:49:248 (169248|3) - rearranged in different placement for better pitch
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3181339

ty rube NM+ all applied

IRC

12:04 RuberusuScarlet: hi harby-san
12:04 Harbyter: hey
12:05 RuberusuScarlet: p/4198395
12:05 Harbyter: ohh
12:05 RuberusuScarlet: check your map was the end
12:06 Harbyter: mmm
12:06 Harbyter: about diff name
12:06 Harbyter: maybe better NM+ and HD+ ?
12:06 Harbyter: cause icons are NM and HD
12:06 Harbyter: rating is wrong
12:06 Harbyter: those diff are underrated
12:07 RuberusuScarlet: hmm…
12:08 Harbyter: ask expew? for diff name?
12:08 Harbyter: i have bad relation with qat in those days
12:08 Harbyter: can't ask him
12:08 Harbyter: xD
12:08 RuberusuScarlet: …ok, I will change the contents of the things post
12:09 Harbyter: oky
12:11 RuberusuScarlet: well… I have never been involved with expew ...
12:11 Harbyter: oh
12:16 Harbyter: 01:43:988 (103988|1,104378|2) -
12:16 Harbyter: btw
12:16 *Harbyter is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/671989 Lindsey Stirling - Senbonzakura [Harby's 4K HD+]]
12:16 Harbyter: what do think
12:16 Harbyter: should i snap where the violin starts
12:16 Harbyter: ?
12:16 Harbyter: but it will feel weird
12:18 RuberusuScarlet: hmm…
12:19 Harbyter: in the NM i followed the violin so i think i should snap in 1/6 and 1/8 there
12:19 Harbyter: but there will be problem with snap consistency
12:19 Harbyter: throught the diff
12:24 RuberusuScarlet: change to LN → note?
12:24 RuberusuScarlet: in the same way as 01:43:794 -
12:25 Harbyter: 01:43:794 (103794|1,103988|1) - those?
12:27 RuberusuScarlet: yes
12:27 Harbyter: mmm
12:27 Harbyter: but the problem is this
12:27 Harbyter: if i have to follow the correct snap for violin here
12:27 Harbyter: should be like this
12:27 Harbyter: http://puu.sh/i3v7Y/5583c9c538.jpg
12:31 Harbyter: 02:17:365 (137365|3) -
12:31 Harbyter: here
12:31 Harbyter: want to confirm
12:31 Harbyter: this is better in 1/8
12:31 Harbyter: what do you think
12:34 RuberusuScarlet: hmm…
12:35 RuberusuScarlet: I also thought the same way
12:35 Harbyter: oky
12:35 Harbyter: already fixed
12:35 Harbyter: 01:14:962 -
12:35 Harbyter: 03:00:937 -
12:35 Harbyter: here too
12:35 Harbyter: 03:00:742 -
12:35 Harbyter: turned the LN here
12:35 Harbyter: in a simple note
12:35 Harbyter: cause a LN shield in 1/8 isn't good
12:35 Harbyter: xD
12:36 Harbyter: now the only problem is here
12:36 Harbyter: 01:43:988 -
12:37 Harbyter: ask expew?
12:37 Harbyter: i think is better
12:37 Harbyter: if keep the 1/2 snap is good for playability
12:38 Harbyter: oh
12:38 Harbyter: spy online
12:38 Harbyter: ask him?
12:38 Harbyter: xD
12:41 RuberusuScarlet: Please xD
12:41 RuberusuScarlet: I must make dinner for my sister from now xD
12:41 Harbyter: oh oky
12:41 Harbyter: ahhaha xD
12:42 Harbyter: i have to go to lunch too
12:42 Harbyter: see later then
12:42 RuberusuScarlet: ok ~
13:48 Harbyter: you back?
13:57 RuberusuScarlet: ~ ><)
14:12 Harbyter: btw
14:12 Harbyter: i rearranged
14:12 Harbyter: that pater
14:12 Harbyter: 01:44:037 - violin here in 1/8
14:12 Harbyter: 01:44:346 - 01:44:540 -
14:12 Harbyter: here in 1/12 the two other LN
14:12 Harbyter: keep the drum in 1/2
14:12 Harbyter: resnapped in the NM+
14:12 Harbyter: for the violin
14:13 Harbyter: push doesn't works
14:13 Harbyter: i can't do the pics
14:13 Harbyter: orz
14:13 RuberusuScarlet: hmm… ok ~
14:18 Harbyter: 01:55:482 (115482|2) -
14:18 Harbyter: should i end the LN here 01:55:774 -
14:20 Harbyter: mmm
14:20 Harbyter: better
14:20 Harbyter: feels good when playing with the music
14:22 RuberusuScarlet: hmm… ok
14:22 RuberusuScarlet: good ><)b
14:22 Harbyter: ok
14:22 Harbyter: then done
14:22 Harbyter: but i can't update the file
14:23 Harbyter: push error
14:23 Harbyter: orz
14:24 Harbyter: i'll use mediafire
14:24 Harbyter: xd

some additional IRC

ty for mod rube

http://www.mediafire.com/download/vkkjm ... zakura.rar

sergio quando uppi nella HD+ mi muovi questa nota 02:54:313 (174313|0) - nella col 4? grazie xD

Seijiro

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Topic Starter

Seijiro 2015-05-28T12:49:44+00:00

Updated~

RuberusuScarlet

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RuberusuScarlet 2015-05-28T14:06:38+00:00

ok, looks fine

IRC again

2015-05-28 21:48 RuberusuScarlet: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/671989 Lindsey Stirling - Senbonzakura [Harby's 4K HD+]]
2015-05-28 21:48 RuberusuScarlet: 01:09:118 - Audio 30~40%
2015-05-28 21:48 RuberusuScarlet: or
2015-05-28 21:48 RuberusuScarlet: 01:09:118 (69118|1) - change whistle
2015-05-28 21:48 RuberusuScarlet: 01:09:118 (69118|2) - delete hitsound and sampleset auto
2015-05-28 21:49 Harbyter: mmm
2015-05-28 21:49 Harbyter: better keep like this?
2015-05-28 21:49 Harbyter: cause there is a SV jump here too
2015-05-28 21:49 Harbyter: to express this strong sound that i put here on purpose
2015-05-28 21:49 Harbyter: xD
2015-05-28 21:51 RuberusuScarlet: hmm…
2015-05-28 21:52 Harbyter: oh
2015-05-28 21:53 Harbyter: sergio updated the diff
2015-05-28 21:53 Harbyter: maybe better redl
2015-05-28 21:53 RuberusuScarlet: I think drum-whistle is okay
2015-05-28 21:53 RuberusuScarlet: but I think soft-finish is not okay
2015-05-28 21:53 Harbyter: mmm
2015-05-28 21:54 RuberusuScarlet: sound is too large ><
2015-05-28 21:55 Harbyter: then 01:09:118 (69118|3,69118|1) -
2015-05-28 21:55 Harbyter: set volume of those two 20%?
2015-05-28 21:56 RuberusuScarlet: hmm… okeu
2015-05-28 21:56 RuberusuScarlet: okey
2015-05-28 21:58 Harbyter: something else?
2015-05-28 21:59 RuberusuScarlet: 01:59:378 (119378|1) - delete finish and sampleset auto
2015-05-28 21:59 Harbyter: ok
2015-05-28 22:00 Harbyter: done
2015-05-28 22:00 RuberusuScarlet: 00:57:040 (57040|1) - same
2015-05-28 22:02 Harbyter: 02:11:456 (131456|0,131456|2) -
2015-05-28 22:02 Harbyter: i'll make audio 20% those too
2015-05-28 22:02 RuberusuScarlet: ok
2015-05-28 22:04 RuberusuScarlet: 02:41:456 (161456|1,162235|0) - sampleset normal ?
2015-05-28 22:05 Harbyter: soft there
2015-05-28 22:05 Harbyter: on purpose
2015-05-28 22:05 Harbyter: if you notice this too 02:42:235 (162235|0) -
2015-05-28 22:05 Harbyter: the cymbal is a little different
2015-05-28 22:05 Harbyter: oh
2015-05-28 22:05 Harbyter: you linked that too
2015-05-28 22:05 Harbyter: xD
2015-05-28 22:07 RuberusuScarlet: NM+ http://puu.sh/i3zzD/0830685baa.jpg
2015-05-28 22:07 RuberusuScarlet: xD
2015-05-28 22:08 Harbyter: wut
2015-05-28 22:08 Harbyter: lemme change in the NM into soft
2015-05-28 22:08 Harbyter: xD
2015-05-28 22:09 RuberusuScarlet: ok ~
2015-05-28 22:11 RuberusuScarlet: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/671990 Lindsey Stirling - Senbonzakura [Harby's 4K NM+]]
2015-05-28 22:11 RuberusuScarlet: 00:57:040 (57040|1) - delete finish and sampleset auto
2015-05-28 22:11 RuberusuScarlet: oh
2015-05-28 22:12 Harbyter: ?
2015-05-28 22:12 Harbyter: in the song
2015-05-28 22:12 Harbyter: there isn't a cymbal at that point
2015-05-28 22:12 Harbyter: i added it cause it sounds more cool
2015-05-28 22:12 Harbyter: xD
2015-05-28 22:12 RuberusuScarlet: It is not anything
2015-05-28 22:12 RuberusuScarlet: Please have this proposal ignores
2015-05-28 22:12 RuberusuScarlet: xD
2015-05-28 22:13 Harbyter: but int he hd you told me to remove
2015-05-28 22:13 Harbyter: there too
2015-05-28 22:13 Harbyter: xD
2015-05-28 22:13 RuberusuScarlet: ok ~ xD
2015-05-28 22:13 Harbyter: ohhh
2015-05-28 22:13 Harbyter: i noticed a mistake
2015-05-28 22:14 Harbyter: 0:58:599 soft-hitfinish2.wav@50%
2015-05-28 22:14 Harbyter: sb note here
2015-05-28 22:14 Harbyter: should be here
2015-05-28 22:14 Harbyter: lol
2015-05-28 22:14 RuberusuScarlet: 00:58:599
2015-05-28 22:14 RuberusuScarlet: 00:58:599 -
2015-05-28 22:14 Harbyter: yes
2015-05-28 22:15 Harbyter: moved here 00:57:820 -
2015-05-28 22:16 RuberusuScarlet: okey ~
2015-05-28 22:17 RuberusuScarlet: 01:09:118 (69118|3) - change finish → drum-whistle?
2015-05-28 22:17 Harbyter: ok
2015-05-28 22:18 RuberusuScarlet: 02:11:456 (131456|0) - same
2015-05-28 22:20 Harbyter: 00:57:040 (57040|0) - changed this into soft hitclap2
2015-05-28 22:20 RuberusuScarlet: ok ~
2015-05-28 22:21 Harbyter: 01:59:378 (119378|1) - added finish normal
2015-05-28 22:23 RuberusuScarlet: ok
2015-05-28 22:25 RuberusuScarlet: hmm… end check ~
2015-05-28 22:25 Harbyter: oky
2015-05-28 22:26 Harbyter: ty again for the check
2015-05-28 22:26 RuberusuScarlet: ><)/
2015-05-28 22:29 Harbyter: ok sergio updated
2015-05-28 22:29 Harbyter: \o\
2015-05-28 22:29 RuberusuScarlet: ok, wait please…
2015-05-28 22:30 Harbyter: take you're time
2015-05-28 22:30 Harbyter: xd
2015-05-28 22:39 RuberusuScarlet: mmm…
2015-05-28 22:39 RuberusuScarlet: 00:57:040 - not add soft-clap2?
2015-05-28 22:39 RuberusuScarlet: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/671989 Lindsey Stirling - Senbonzakura [Harby's 4K HD+]]
2015-05-28 22:40 Harbyter: oh
2015-05-28 22:41 Harbyter: sergio missed that
2015-05-28 22:41 Harbyter: lol
2015-05-28 22:43 Harbyter: other thigns?
2015-05-28 22:43 Harbyter: xD
2015-05-28 22:45 RuberusuScarlet: 02:52:949 - to 02:53:144 -
2015-05-28 22:45 RuberusuScarlet: I think violin is heard a little early…
2015-05-28 22:48 Harbyter: mmmmmm
2015-05-28 22:48 Harbyter: 1/16
2015-05-28 22:48 Harbyter: snap
2015-05-28 22:48 Harbyter: fit here
2015-05-28 22:48 Harbyter: 02:52:925 - 02:52:998 - 02:53:071 -
2015-05-28 22:50 Harbyter: 02:52:925 - maybe here no
2015-05-28 22:51 RuberusuScarlet: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3182042　? (1/8)
2015-05-28 22:51 Harbyter: 02:52:949 - 02:52:998 - 02:53:071 -
2015-05-28 22:52 RuberusuScarlet: hmm… ok
2015-05-28 22:52 Harbyter: 02:53:047 - too early here
2015-05-28 22:53 RuberusuScarlet: ok, end re-check
2015-05-28 22:53 Harbyter: then?
2015-05-28 22:54 Harbyter: 1/8 and last note in 1/16
2015-05-28 22:54 Harbyter: ?
2015-05-28 22:54 Harbyter: or keep the 1/6?
2015-05-28 22:54 RuberusuScarlet: 1/16
2015-05-28 22:54 Harbyter: 02:52:949 - 02:52:998 - 02:53:071 -
2015-05-28 22:54 Harbyter: then snaps here
2015-05-28 22:55 RuberusuScarlet: okey
2015-05-28 22:55 Harbyter: 02:52:998 - col 2
2015-05-28 22:56 Harbyter: 02:53:071 - col 3
2015-05-28 22:57 RuberusuScarlet: hmm…
2015-05-28 22:58 RuberusuScarlet: good
2015-05-28 22:58 Harbyter: 02:52:949 (172949|3) -
2015-05-28 22:58 Harbyter: maybe this
2015-05-28 22:58 Harbyter: better in 1?
2015-05-28 22:58 Harbyter: 02:52:755 (172755|0) - and this in 2
2015-05-28 22:58 RuberusuScarlet: 02:52:755 (172755|0) - 2, 02:52:949 (172949|3) - 1
2015-05-28 22:59 Harbyter: yep
2015-05-28 22:59 RuberusuScarlet: ok ~
2015-05-28 23:01 Harbyter: ok update

PatZar

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Joined March 2013

PatZar 2015-05-31T08:00:42+00:00

wow will check soon..
probably after this, should ask taikoBat lmao

guineaQ wrote:
y e a

Only looking at Muzukashii owo/
but in detail >w<

Muzukashii

If the suggestion doesn't make sense to you, feel free to ignore them (don't really want to enforce things)
00:33:469 (57,58) - Personally, I would remove 00:33:469 (57) - and make 00:33:664 (58) - k instead move 00:33:469 (57) - 1/1 forward, and delete this 00:33:079 (55) -
00:34:443 (62) - k? im trying to not using oox things xD
00:36:586 (69) - you can remove this too, but its ok if you want to keep it to keep density consistent
00:44:768 - add d? monotune is better imo
00:46:521 (110,111,112) - maybeee you can make these d triplet currently mine is fit imo
00:47:495 - you can add a note here ;w; same reason with 00:44:768 -
00:52:560 (134,135,136,137,138,139) - not the biggest fan of putting two triplets in a row together in muzu, perhaps you can convert the k triplet into just two 1/2s? nope, the sound is high, so it would be good like that imo
00:55:872 (147) - you could move this to 00:55:774 - like what you did at 00:47:982 -
01:04:248 (180) - consider moving it to 01:04:443 (180) -
01:08:144 (194,195,196,197,198,199) - same as 00:52:560 (134,135,136,137,138,139) - same reason
01:11:456 (210) - k?00:34:443 (62) - same reason
01:13:599 - you can add k here :3 the previous kat is strong already =
01:16:716 (233) - imo feels less awkward to move it 1/2 later since there is a drum beat and the violin beat you are mapping to is kinda weak compared to it nope
01:30:547 (290,291,292,293,294,295) - convert the d triplet to 1/2 double ds instead nooo
01:35:222 - >w> add a note /o/ ummm, i have thinking about this part too, but the previous parts are hard so , its better blank like that
02:05:612 (428,429,430,431,432,433,434) - I feel this is more suitable rhythm
02:53:144 (622,623) - lol nope

Just some random nitpicks =w=

gl ' w ' )/

thanks
http://puu.sh/i889l/64129f0cad.rar

Bara-

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Bara- 2015-06-07T16:31:16+00:00

So many diffs now O.o
Yet the Extra is only 4.5 and the ~~Insane is labeled as H~~ NVM, Beginner and Insane are WIP (if you don't want to do insane for whatever reason, you may Always ask me, i love this song

) If you do, I can also make a Extra (Which is a little more then 4.5 star)

Are you sure Extra is Extra?
Inb4 ask Fort to make Extra 7star

Surono

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Joined November 2013

Surono 2015-06-14T14:46:25+00:00

hi petar :v
requested from facebook lol cacad <(``)
[Gen's Oni]
Gedein suaranya jadi 80%semua coeg
00:58:404 (217,219,221) - k
02:34:638 (830,831,832) - dkd
02:36:001 (841,842,843,844,845) - kdkkd
02:48:859 (923) - d

[Gen's Muzukashii]
good, no problem here

goodlak

Kyousuke-

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Joined May 2013

Kyousuke- 2015-06-16T13:56:42+00:00

patzar sent me on facebook

PatZar wrote:
Surono wrote:
hi petar :v
requested from facebook lol cacad <(``)
[Gen's Oni]
Gedein suaranya jadi 80%semua coeg
00:58:404 (217,219,221) - k
02:34:638 (830,831,832) - dkd
02:36:001 (841,842,843,844,845) - kdkkd
02:48:859 (923) - d

[Gen's Muzukashii]
good, no problem here

goodlak
http://puu.sh/iqYRq/b925b85bf2.rar
fix all

Seijiro

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Topic Starter

Seijiro 2015-06-16T20:32:41+00:00

Updated taiko diffs + Changed naming: Insane -> Extra + Added a new Insane + Nerfed a bit Hard + Removed Beginner

Now everything should be ready for modding :3

baraatje123 wrote:
So many diffs now O.o
Yet the Extra is only 4.5 and the ~~Insane is labeled as H~~ NVM, Beginner and Insane are WIP (if you don't want to do insane for whatever reason, you may Always ask me, i love this song ) If you do, I can also make a Extra (Which is a little more then 4.5 star)
Are you sure Extra is Extra?
Inb4 ask Fort to make Extra 7star

The star rating is balanced on a lower BPM.
Patterning differences should be fine if you see how the diffs get harder and harder I can't put circles from a corner to another just to increase the SR...

Side

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Joined October 2013

Side 2015-06-16T22:53:09+00:00

Woo here we go!!

from #modreqs (m4m)

SPOILER

Extra

General

I usually use this section to give my opinion about things in the map that are not wrong but I would change for certain reasons. You can disregard this if you like.

Raise AR to 9. Considering the map is only 231 BPM, has lenient drain and OD and would be over 6 stars this would make this too easy to DT farm. Nothing wrong with this but at least with AR9 DT it's more demanding than if it was just 8.6 which makes it much easier to read. It's also an extra difficulty (albeit weighted) so it should at least show a wider difficulty gap than the insane aside from just patterns.

Consider raising HP to 6. I tested it a few times with HR mod (I suck at ar10 btw) and the drain wasn't the reason I died :v Same goes for DT.

Also consider raising OD to 8 or at least 7.5. I say this because sure the BPM is low but that shouldn't mean that the map difficulty should be easier to reflect that. I wish I could play more lower bpm extras tbh cuz I'm not that fast :v
The way I see the hardest insane/extra is if you can play this then you can definitely sight read and aim better than most people so you should be able to play with a smaller hit error window (I think thats what its called)
It would also mark a more noticeable difference between the insane and the extra.

Consider either changing combo 2 or 3 to a lighter pink or adding an extra combo (preferrably between 2 and 3 or 3 and 4) The song is, after all, named a thousand cherry blossoms (or something idk) so it would make more sense to throw in a bit more pink in there.

Notes

00:19:638 (1) - Move the end node slightly to the right. It will blanket 2 better and have nicer visual chemistry with 3. Also do the same with 00:22:755 (1) - cuz I think that's its twin :3

00:41:846 (2,3) - Move these notes to y:80. Move 00:42:235 (4) - to x:200 y:157 and 00:42:820 (6) - to (roughly) x294 y156 for better symmetry between this combo. Maybe select both 4 and 5 when moving them so the spacing stays the same.

00:50:027 (3) - Try moving the 2nd and 3rd nodes just a little bit higher so it's a much comfier blanket sort of like [img=http://puu.sh/irtyd/54f6e913a0.jpg]this[/img].

01:11:846 (1,2,3) - Don't be afraid to make 2 this into 2 notes. This type of hammer-on/pull-off flutter/trill is very common in guitar and violin pieces and is very intuitive to the listener. I don't speak for other players of course but even not hearing this song my fingers sort of wanted to do this 1/3 triple. Same for 01:18:339 (2). If you didn't want to do this due to a readability concern then my proposal is to switch this section with the one pattern you have here 02:14:183 (1,2,3) - and 02:20:417 (1,2,3) - because then the player will be able to hear the pattern once and should expect this kind of sound in the 2nd chorus so it would make more sense to them reading it after having heard it.

01:34:833 - 01:40:287 - Arguably you don't NEED to have a break here since the violin is still very alive here but this is perfectly fine.

02:30:547 (1,2,3,4) - Space this out a bit more. Probably about x0.65 - .70 to stay consistent with 02:32:105 (2,3,4,5) - and 02:32:885 (2,3,4,5) - and so on. Also because it's four 1/4th notes and most people would expect 5 at first play since you don't expect her to only play 4 notes. So this would improve note visibility.

02:38:339 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is pretty inconsistent here. Consider standardizing to 2.30 (more or less) or you can go for like an increment of .05 to be clever :v

Insane

General

Consider raising AR to 8.5. Most people who can read AR8 DT don't have much of a problem DTing 8.5. It also looks very nice no mod

Also consider OD7. Maybe it's just my personal preference but I like Insanes and Extras to have more challenging ODs. Although I see nothing wrong with 6.5 (again this is usually an opinion section so you can disregard this)

Oh and same thing about the combo colors

Notes

00:30:157 (5,6) - I moved these two to x:337 y:200 and x337 y:80 respectively. It keeps the nice looking pattern/blanket from 3 and even looks nice in the editor because of the stack with 00:27:722 (2,3) -

00:34:443 (5) - Move the 2nd node here. It's really not that noticeable tbh but it's just a small cleanup never hurts :3

01:03:274 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can make this look like 01:04:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - or vice versa. It doesn't look bad though but so far your map has a lot of symmetric patterns so it would look nicer that way.

01:42:040 (4) - Move to x:85 y:202. Keeps the same distance spacing, adds a bit more spacing to get to 01:42:235 (5) - and adds a nice parallel between 1 + 3 and 2 + 4. Triple win!!

02:24:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - last few notes look a little off. I added a circle between that and slightly moved the notes around so it looks a bit cleaner like so. The note for reference.

02:58:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Honestly there's nothing wrong with this pattern but after seeing this pattern here 02:55:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - it feels a little eh. Maybe spice up the spacing a bit more or do something similar but like I said the current pattern isn't bad.

Hard

00:21:196 (1) - This is fine but you could also probably stack it on top of 2.

00:41:261 (4,1,2,3) - Something about this doesn't quite look right. I think it's the feel of the jump from the previous combo's 4 into 1 and then the stacked anti jump from 1 to 2. Some people might give you flak for having 2 start on the red tick but when you play that and you listen to the violin your fingers are tapping to the violin which is neat so I like that. Anyway enough rambling what I suggest here is stacking 4 on the previous slider, rotating 1 and 2 by -30 and stacking that on top of the slider head of 00:39:898 (1) - so it would look something like this. That way you keep similar spacing, the anti jump doesn't look or feel so awkward and you keep the section looking clean with the blanket and that stack and what not.

01:29:183 (2) - You might be able to get away with removing one reverse arrow and adding a note on the last white tick

I don't think this would make that too hard honestly because the player will have more than enough time to see the approach circle without thinking about anything other than holding click on that slider. Plus the bonus is that it feels better tapping out that violin strum (or whatever you call a violin strum) on 01:29:768 -

02:07:170 (1) - If possible, try using 02:07:949 (3) - for reference so you can do something like this more or less. Maybe moving a few things around so the blanketted 4 looks more centered.

02:48:469 (3) - Looks better at x:159 y:259 more or less.

Normal

01:30:157 (1) - Looks a little lopsided. Right side is longer than the left side. Consider cleaning it up a bit. Same with 01:26:651 (1).

Don't really see anythign wrong with this diff.

AsaNe's Easy

No changes.

Overall the mapset looks very solid with really only minor visual cleanups needed. Best of luck! I can see this being ranked soon!

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2015-06-17T07:23:53+00:00

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SPOILER
Extra

General

I usually use this section to give my opinion about things in the map that are not wrong but I would change for certain reasons. You can disregard this if you like.

Raise AR to 9. Considering the map is only 231 BPM, has lenient drain and OD and would be over 6 stars this would make this too easy to DT farm. Nothing wrong with this but at least with AR9 DT it's more demanding than if it was just 8.6 which makes it much easier to read. It's also an extra difficulty (albeit weighted) so it should at least show a wider difficulty gap than the insane aside from just patterns. ✔ Beside the fact that even with AR8.6 DT-ing is crazy I think that with nomod on it it is indeed to low, so I put AR9

Consider raising HP to 6. I tested it a few times with HR mod (I suck at ar10 btw) and the drain wasn't the reason I died :v Same goes for DT. ✘ A lot of people complained about the opposite and I find myself that the HP is already harsh, considering the patterning

Also consider raising OD to 8 or at least 7.5. I say this because sure the BPM is low but that shouldn't mean that the map difficulty should be easier to reflect that. I wish I could play more lower bpm extras tbh cuz I'm not that fast :v
The way I see the hardest insane/extra is if you can play this then you can definitely sight read and aim better than most people so you should be able to play with a smaller hit error window (I think thats what its called)
It would also mark a more noticeable difference between the insane and the extra. ✔ Good point and I was thinking about the same thing. To tell you the truth, these settings were left from when this diff was an Insane, that's why

Consider either changing combo 2 or 3 to a lighter pink or adding an extra combo (preferrably between 2 and 3 or 3 and 4) The song is, after all, named a thousand cherry blossoms (or something idk) so it would make more sense to throw in a bit more pink in there. AS for the pink colour, they already said me that it blended with the BG so I had to make it more dark. As for the other combo colour... let's say that I'll keep it in mind, because right now I don't really think there is any need

Notes

00:19:638 (1) - Move the end node slightly to the right. It will blanket 2 better and have nicer visual chemistry with 3. Also do the same with 00:22:755 (1) - cuz I think that's its twin :3 ✔ Yep, you're right here :3 My lazyness to not fix blankets xD

00:41:846 (2,3) - Move these notes to y:80. Move 00:42:235 (4) - to x:200 y:157 and 00:42:820 (6) - to (roughly) x294 y156 for better symmetry between this combo. Maybe select both 4 and 5 when moving them so the spacing stays the same. ✔ I hope I did it correctly xD

00:50:027 (3) - Try moving the 2nd and 3rd nodes just a little bit higher so it's a much comfier blanket sort of like [img=http://puu.sh/irtyd/54f6e913a0.jpg]this[/img]. ✔ Made the first part of the slider a bit more "softer" :3

01:11:846 (1,2,3) - Don't be afraid to make 2 this into 2 notes. This type of hammer-on/pull-off flutter/trill is very common in guitar and violin pieces and is very intuitive to the listener. I don't speak for other players of course but even not hearing this song my fingers sort of wanted to do this 1/3 triple. Same for 01:18:339 (2). If you didn't want to do this due to a readability concern then my proposal is to switch this section with the one pattern you have here 02:14:183 (1,2,3) - and 02:20:417 (1,2,3) - because then the player will be able to hear the pattern once and should expect this kind of sound in the 2nd chorus so it would make more sense to them reading it after having heard it. ✔ Really nice catch here. Used the mini slider and replaced the 1/2 slider with circle - minislider for both

01:34:833 - 01:40:287 - Arguably you don't NEED to have a break here since the violin is still very alive here but this is perfectly fine. ✘ I guess I have to explain this :3 Your point is perfectly correct, but: 1) I have to place some sort of break somewhere 2) That part is the only one without bass, which makes the violin's sound stronger (whihc therefore makes the violin's sound weaker when it stops playing)

02:30:547 (1,2,3,4) - Space this out a bit more. Probably about x0.65 - .70 to stay consistent with 02:32:105 (2,3,4,5) - and 02:32:885 (2,3,4,5) - and so on. Also because it's four 1/4th notes and most people would expect 5 at first play since you don't expect her to only play 4 notes. So this would improve note visibility. ✔ Nice one :3

02:38:339 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is pretty inconsistent here. Consider standardizing to 2.30 (more or less) or you can go for like an increment of .05 to be clever :v Did a Ctrl + G on 02:38:534 (2) - & 02:38:924 (4) -

Insane

General

Consider raising AR to 8.5. Most people who can read AR8 DT don't have much of a problem DTing 8.5. It also looks very nice no mod

Also consider OD7. Maybe it's just my personal preference but I like Insanes and Extras to have more challenging ODs. Although I see nothing wrong with 6.5 (again this is usually an opinion section so you can disregard this) ✘ Considering the new diff spread which came out I thinn this settings fit well as they are. Both AR and OD are half way between Hard and Extra (and I don't care about people FC-ing my map in DT :^)))))

Oh and same thing about the combo colors Same as before

Notes

00:30:157 (5,6) - I moved these two to x:337 y:200 and x337 y:80 respectively. It keeps the nice looking pattern/blanket from 3 and even looks nice in the editor because of the stack with 00:27:722 (2,3) - ✔ Let's be finicky about blankets, got it xD Sorry for being lazy, but I don't notice these things xD

00:34:443 (5) - Move the 2nd node here. It's really not that noticeable tbh but it's just a small cleanup never hurts :3 ✔ Fixed

01:03:274 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can make this look like 01:04:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - or vice versa. It doesn't look bad though but so far your map has a lot of symmetric patterns so it would look nicer that way. lol, I did the other way around. Used the first stream to make the second

01:42:040 (4) - Move to x:85 y:202. Keeps the same distance spacing, adds a bit more spacing to get to 01:42:235 (5) - and adds a nice parallel between 1 + 3 and 2 + 4. Triple win!! ✔ God xD

02:24:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - last few notes look a little off. I added a circle between that and slightly moved the notes around so it looks a bit cleaner like so. The note for reference. Changed that part, it was silly and not really understandable at first glance. It now resembles the Extra's pattern

02:58:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Honestly there's nothing wrong with this pattern but after seeing this pattern here 02:55:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - it feels a little eh. Maybe spice up the spacing a bit more or do something similar but like I said the current pattern isn't bad. ✔ It is bad xD Spiced things up a little I hope so at least...

Hard

00:21:196 (1) - This is fine but you could also probably stack it on top of 2. ✔ I did so on the Insane too and it looks a lot neater, and it was actually the only circle placed like that, wtf I was doing...?

00:41:261 (4,1,2,3) - Something about this doesn't quite look right. I think it's the feel of the jump from the previous combo's 4 into 1 and then the stacked anti jump from 1 to 2. Some people might give you flak for having 2 start on the red tick but when you play that and you listen to the violin your fingers are tapping to the violin which is neat so I like that. Anyway enough rambling what I suggest here is stacking 4 on the previous slider, rotating 1 and 2 by -30 and stacking that on top of the slider head of 00:39:898 (1) - so it would look something like this. That way you keep similar spacing, the anti jump doesn't look or feel so awkward and you keep the section looking clean with the blanket and that stack and what not. Tbh, I nerfed this diff just this morning, because it was way too hard and this pattern came out like this... I used your suggestion and also made another couple of improvements on my own (blanketing, slider shapes)

01:29:183 (2) - You might be able to get away with removing one reverse arrow and adding a note on the last white tick I don't think this would make that too hard honestly because the player will have more than enough time to see the approach circle without thinking about anything other than holding click on that slider. Plus the bonus is that it feels better tapping out that violin strum (or whatever you call a violin strum) on 01:29:768 - ✔ Lol, I changed this as it is now, but it was formely the way you just told me. After thinking again with more experience in my eyes, I decided that I want that note :3

02:07:170 (1) - If possible, try using 02:07:949 (3) - for reference so you can do something like this more or less. Maybe moving a few things around so the blanketted 4 looks more centered. ✔ Damn, another of those screwed up patterns due to the nerfing... Blanketed way better now

02:48:469 (3) - Looks better at x:159 y:259 more or less. ✔ Wow, again one of those lazy blankets I skip everytime

Normal

01:30:157 (1) - Looks a little lopsided. Right side is longer than the left side. Consider cleaning it up a bit. Same with 01:26:651 (1). The first one is really... "picky", because I tried to make a blanket with 3 and then tried to merge the spacing for the next note, which I wanted to be not clustered with the next slider too... Basically, it was something really enforced... Fixed the second one tho, since I had more freedom

Don't really see anythign wrong with this diff. Changed OD to 3.5 to fit better the gap

AsaNe's Easy

No changes.

Overall the mapset looks very solid with really only minor visual cleanups needed. Best of luck! I can see this being ranked soon!

Thanks a bunch for the mod :3
~~I guess your mod will come tomorrow, because here's already past midnight xD~~ Alright, my connection died yesterday, rip

AsakuraNe

690 posts

Joined January 2015

AsakuraNe 2015-06-17T10:48:08+00:00

Checked my diff and realized there was no hitsounds lewl

CHANGES:

Added Hitsounds
Fixed some aesthetics(blankets and symmetries) and flows

Click me Senpaaaai~ :3

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132,276,86261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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496,236,116651,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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256,148,139638,2,0,P|272:224|260:276,1,120,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
220,344,140807,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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460,132,148988,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,308,149768,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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316,204,156001,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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320,296,172755,1,10,0:3:0:0:
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Seijiro

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Topic Starter

Seijiro 2015-06-17T11:16:12+00:00

Updated and sorry for the tag, AsaNe >.<

BAldoTridentE

117 posts

Joined November 2013

BAldoTridentE 2015-06-17T16:46:07+00:00

Ciao Sergio

So che mi metterai tutte le linee rosse

EXTRA

00:27:040 (6) - Ctrl+G ci starebbe bene
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00:32:105 (1,2,3,4) - Mi sembrano un po' messi a caso, non sarebbe più piacevole vederli tutti con un senso?
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01:04:053 (1,2,3,4) - anche questi li ordinerei un po' meglio
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02:07:560 (5) - azzarderei 2 slider creando una cosa del genere: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3266948
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02:17:300 (3) - stessa cosa

INSANE

00:47:690 (3,4,5) - Che brutto overlap, farei una cosa tipo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3266996
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01:14:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Non è molto bello da vedere: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3267029
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03:00:742 (4) - su X: 252 e Y: 64

Seijiro

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Topic Starter

Seijiro 2015-06-17T17:20:14+00:00

BAldoTridentE wrote:
Ciao Sergio

So che mi metterai tutte le linee rosse Baka

EXTRA
00:27:040 (6) - Ctrl+G ci starebbe bene
| 00:26:261 (3,6) - Sono uno l'opposto dell'altro se stai ad ascoltare il violino e poi il movimento da 6 a 1 diverrebbe troppo forzato :/
00:32:105 (1,2,3,4) - Mi sembrano un po' messi a caso, non sarebbe più piacevole vederli tutti con un senso?
| Aspettavo qualcuno che lo dicesse lololololol
01:04:053 (1,2,3,4) - anche questi li ordinerei un po' meglio
| Baldo, that's art u.u No seriously, quella parte e' quella che non ho mai modificato dopo tutte le mod che mi hanno fatto perche' e' querlla sol miglior flow di tutte, please xD
02:07:560 (5) - azzarderei 2 slider creando una cosa del genere: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3266948
| Fatto qualcosa di diverso xD
02:17:300 (3) - stessa cosa
| Quella parte non posso proprio toccarla per via delle 1/6 :/

INSANE
00:47:690 (3,4,5) - Che brutto overlap, farei una cosa tipo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3266996
| Lo screen e' al secondo 56 lol. In ogni caso era brutto e l'ho fixato con uno slider
01:14:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Non è molto bello da vedere: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3267029
| Fixato a mio modo ma mi hai dato una bella idea per il pattern (y)
03:00:742 (4) - su X: 252 e Y: 64
| Ora quel pattern ha piu' senso xD

Grazie baldino <3 Ti meriti un biscotto :3

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2015-06-18T19:18:42+00:00

The violinist and dancer <3 <3
From my queue

[General]

Disable widescreen support since there is no storyboard

[AsaNe's Easy]

00:22:755 (3) - I wouldn't recommend setting a strong beat on a slider end, try shortening the slider and at the slider end's corresponding timeline instead.
00:52:365 (2) - Perhaps tilt this a bit clockwise, so the slider is directed towards the next circle to improve the flow.
01:14:183 (7) - The reverse part of the slider doesnt really fit the song at all, would be better to shorten it to a 1/1 reverse slider and maybe add a circle at 01:15:352
01:30:547 (4) -
01:34:443 - Add a circle here as a finish, to emphasize the downbeat here.
01:50:027 (5) - Strong 01:51:196
02:16:521 (7) - Same problem as 01:14:183 (7)
02:22:755 (6) - Would be better to use a 1/1 slider and use a circle to emphasize the downbeat at 02:23:652
03:00:157 (7) - Same as above

[Insane]

00:22:365 (3,4) - Although the current pattern is fine, I would suggest putting a 1/2 slider here instead, due to the presence of a long violin sound in the song.
00:30:937 (1) - Curve this a bit, so it leads into the next note more smoothly and improves the flow?
00:34:443 (5) - Not really unrankable, but try to make this a bit cleaner; right now it seems rather randomly shaped.
00:37:560 (4) - The slider ends on a long beat; try to avoid that by shortening the slider to a 1/2 and putting a circle at 00:37:949 instead.
00:55:872 (2,3) - This pattern not only doesn't match the song, it feels really empty at a rather chorus-like part of the music. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/itNH4/2fd44e49b6.jpg
I'd recommend stacking 01:09:508 (1,3) 01:10:287 (4,6) 01:11:066 (7,9) 01:15:742 (1,3) 01:16:521 (4,6) 01:17:300 (7,9) for a cleaner look of the map overall
01:20:027 (3,4,5,6) - This stream is rather overmapped, especially 01:20:320 (6) when there isn't really anything to map to in the song. Try this timeline arrangement instead http://puu.sh/itO7c/27803e7f6d.jpg
01:29:962 - Add a circle to make this a triple, right now it seems empty
01:55:872 (4,1) - Stack these two for a cleaner look
01:57:820 (1,2) - This flow seems awkward. You could curve the slider so it allows the cursor to move more naturally into the next note.
02:02:495 (3,4,5) - This pattern seems inconsistent with 02:03:274 (3,4,5) since its stacked... (not really mod, just opinion)
02:10:677 (3,1) - Stack these 2 to make it cleaner
02:45:742 (4,1) - ^

[Extra]

00:21:196 (1,2) - I think you should actually just take a look at the whole map and stack some of the objects. (Actually forgot to mention this applies to insane as well) Another example, 00:24:313 (1,2) would be better to stack since there is a short pause in the music, therefore halting the movement of the cursor until the beat resumes.
00:36:196 (4) - ctrl+g, also rotate the slider to make it seem more natural flowing into the next slider.
This is the hardest diff, yet parts like 00:55:287 and 00:56:261 are a complete blank even when there are clearly parts in the music that you can map.
01:31:326 (7) - NC this, should be the first beat of a new section in the music.
01:31:618 (1,2) - Not really fitting the song, especially the 1/4 slider. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/itRD4/582e86e2c7.jpg
01:34:053 (2,3) - Blanket these two for a cleaner look
01:44:573 (4) - I'm not really sure about this one... while it seems fine, after some listening to it the high pitch at this moment in the music doesn't really call for a reverse slider. Make a 1/1 instead.
02:43:794 (3) - Eh... I'm sure that this slider can be improved, right now the shape looks rather messy.
02:46:131 (3) - ctrl+g this, would be awkward for the player to suddenly shift direction to play the following objects.

Good luck~

Swiftrax

236 posts

Joined November 2013

Swiftrax 2015-06-18T19:20:09+00:00

This map is amazing.
Go go go!

Seijiro

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Topic Starter

Seijiro 2015-06-18T22:51:25+00:00

StarrStyx wrote:
The violinist and dancer <3 <3
From my queue This is AsaNe's doing. I hope I can do something for her in return someday <3 Like doing the mod she asked me 22 days ago for example...

[General]
Disable widescreen support since there is no storyboard lol, forgot to disable it only on the new diff xD

[Insane]
00:22:365 (3,4) - Although the current pattern is fine, I would suggest putting a 1/2 slider here instead, due to the presence of a long violin sound in the song. Those are actually 2 distinct notes of the violin if your hear close. Take 00:20:807 (3) - as an example. <-- This one it's a long, single pinch on the chords, while what you pointed out are clearly 2 pinches
00:30:937 (1) - Curve this a bit, so it leads into the next note more smoothly and improves the flow? Here the flow is solely on the short stream. Because it's like the first sound (00:30:937 (1) - ) "falls out" of its way to the second sound (00:31:326 (3) - )
00:34:443 (5) - Not really unrankable, but try to make this a bit cleaner; right now it seems rather randomly shaped. Now that I look at it it had a really awful shape (it was meant to be some sort of failed slider art)
00:37:560 (4) - The slider ends on a long beat; try to avoid that by shortening the slider to a 1/2 and putting a circle at 00:37:949 instead. I agree on this. It looked a bit too forced :/
00:55:872 (2,3) - This pattern not only doesn't match the song, it feels really empty at a rather chorus-like part of the music. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/itNH4/2fd44e49b6.jpg Made something different probably, since the ticks don't seem to be the same as the screen
I'd recommend stacking 01:09:508 (1,3) 01:10:287 (4,6) 01:11:066 (7,9) 01:15:742 (1,3) 01:16:521 (4,6) 01:17:300 (7,9) for a cleaner look of the map overall I see what you're trying to suggest here, but this is clearly intentional since as you probably noticed, this map requires a lot of reading in general. If someone else complains about this I'll try to see what I can do tho (even if I find it quite clean as it is since I use always the same patterns there)
01:20:027 (3,4,5,6) - This stream is rather overmapped, especially 01:20:320 (6) when there isn't really anything to map to in the song. Try this timeline arrangement instead http://puu.sh/itO7c/27803e7f6d.jpg Ops, my bad.. I kept it similar to the Extra here xD Removed 6
01:29:962 - Add a circle to make this a triple, right now it seems empty But you complained about overmapping just above xD I don't hear any beat there and I have no idea how I should map it anyway, since the DS will become too much otherwise
01:55:872 (4,1) - Stack these two for a cleaner look Seeing that I used a lot of other patterns in which I placed such circles I don't really think it stands out too much xD (Just think it like this: if I move that note there it means I should do like that for every other similar note or pattern and that will be really troublesome)
01:57:820 (1,2) - This flow seems awkward. You could curve the slider so it allows the cursor to move more naturally into the next note. We unfortunately have different concepts regarding this flow then, since I find it quite fitting seeing were the next slider is placed. Also, the whole combo has only straight sliders and being the pattern well structured it will be quite a waste imo...
02:02:495 (3,4,5) - This pattern seems inconsistent with 02:03:274 (3,4,5) since its stacked... (not really mod, just opinion) In a second thought about that I find it it really unpleasant to see, so I made both straight for consistency
02:10:677 (3,1) - Stack these 2 to make it cleaner Avoided completely the stack here xD At first it was a similar pattern to all the other "half-stacks" but since it has a different SV I thought it was more ugly in this circumstance
02:45:742 (4,1) - ^ After denying all the other similar suggestions to this it would be kinda awkward to accept this one (and I actually think it keeps consistency with everything else)

[Extra]
00:21:196 (1,2) - I think you should actually just take a look at the whole map and stack some of the objects. (Actually forgot to mention this applies to insane as well) Another example, 00:24:313 (1,2) would be better to stack since there is a short pause in the music, therefore halting the movement of the cursor until the beat resumes. I used the NC from the Insane to fix the strange spacings
00:36:196 (4) - ctrl+g, also rotate the slider to make it seem more natural flowing into the next slider. Indeed. Fixed
This is the hardest diff, yet parts like 00:55:287 and 00:56:261 are a complete blank even when there are clearly parts in the music that you can map. Difficulty not always comes from a lot of notes, you know These breaks in the rhythm are meant for reading purposes and because this IS one of the most energetic parts is the reason to place unusual/unexpected patterns
01:31:326 (7) - NC this, should be the first beat of a new section in the music. Both hitsounds and spacing are telling the player that it's not like that xD Above all spacing: if I were to move that NC there will be a spacing inconsistency since the spacing between 01:31:326 (7,1,2) - will be the same, which shouldn't be, because I have different timings: 01:31:326 (7,1) - 3/4 & 01:31:618 (1,2) - 1/2
01:31:618 (1,2) - Not really fitting the song, especially the 1/4 slider. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/itRD4/582e86e2c7.jpg I tried to avoid that kind of overmapping tho. Also, I tried to emphasize the bass part here, both with hitsounds and spacing
01:34:053 (2,3) - Blanket these two for a cleaner look That particular spacing wasn't meant for a blanket to begin with... Actually, shortening the spacing there will create a strange feeling now that I look at it. Maybe it's due to the finish... I wonder...
01:44:573 (4) - I'm not really sure about this one... while it seems fine, after some listening to it the high pitch at this moment in the music doesn't really call for a reverse slider. Make a 1/1 instead. It will feel strange with a 1/1 sldier too in this case, because it means I'm following the long sound of the violin, but that sound ends at 01:45:157 - actually...
02:43:794 (3) - Eh... I'm sure that this slider can be improved, right now the shape looks rather messy. Daw... what the heck I was thinking...? Sorta fixed I guess xD
02:46:131 (3) - ctrl+g this, would be awkward for the player to suddenly shift direction to play the following objects. Yep. There was another similar pattern to that at the beginning but it looks like I changed it long ago, so rip this one too

Good luck~

Thanks for your mod and above all for your time :3~

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-06-18T23:32:48+00:00

Hello , you are the next from my modding queue!

AsaNe's Easy
00:27:820 (3) - Blanket slightly off http://puu.sh/iu7I7/b6f7870641.jpg
00:38:339 (3) - Make the middle dot red :p
01:00:157 (4) - If this is a blanket, it's off
02:53:924 (7) - The end of this slider is a bit weird

Insane
00:30:937 (1,2,3) - I don't like this type of pattern, but feel free to ignore this
00:55:774 - Circle ? Play at 25% playback and you'll that there's a note here
01:40:677 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Volume is noticeable loud at some circles than others
02:43:014 (1) - Maybe turn this into a blanket?
02:56:261 (6,11) - NC? Will make the pattern look better

Extra
00:35:222 (1) - Make blanket with 00:34:443 (5) - ?
00:36:196 (4,5) - Don't feels good, (4) is too far from the start of (5) imo
00:43:794 (1) - Remove clap?
00:43:794 (1) - Circle?
01:10:287 (6,11) - NC? Will make the pattern look better too
01:40:677 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same problem of HS too loud at some and not at others. It seens that the normal is louder than the whistle
02:12:625 (6,9) - NC? Same reason as 01:10:287 (6,11) -
02:15:742 (4) - ^
02:19:638 (5) - ^
02:18:859 (3) - ^
02:56:261 (6) - ^
02:57:040 (11) - ^
02:59:378 (5) - ^
03:02:495 (6) - ^
03:03:274 (11) - ^

The NC is pretty much option, but I think it makes the pattern more clean, also big numbers are ugly :p. But, That's it

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Seijiro 2015-06-19T00:05:11+00:00

LucaSA4 wrote:
Hello , you are the next from my modding queue! Second time thanks to AsaNe <3

Insane
00:30:937 (1,2,3) - I don't like this type of pattern, but feel free to ignore this Poor little pattern, what do you have with it? ;w;
00:55:774 - Circle ? Play at 25% playback and you'll that there's a note here I can ensure that that timing right there is more strange then what you think (it's like 1/6 or around there), but I had to skip a couple of beats here and there for patterning or just flow reasons. Also, hitsounds tried to emphasize what rhythm I was following there :3
01:40:677 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Volume is noticeable loud at some circles than others Increased the volume after 01:41:456 -
02:43:014 (1) - Maybe turn this into a blanket? Already blanketed :3
02:56:261 (6,11) - NC? Will make the pattern look better I had quite a long mod from monstrata about NCs and how I used them with patterns instead of with music. As long as those notes are part of the same rhythm I won't add unnecessary NCs, sorry :/

Extra
00:35:222 (1) - Make blanket with 00:34:443 (5) - ? Ops, my bad xD
00:36:196 (4,5) - Don't feels good, (4) is too far from the start of (5) imo I did a Ctrl +G from the previous mod, could it be you didn't update? .-. Anyway, it doesn't look too far away now...
00:43:794 (1) - Remove clap? Good idea for this one
00:43:794 (1) - Circle? Sorry, but I can't xD I used this patter other 2 times at least and it's meant to follow/emphasize the violin
01:10:287 (6,11) - NC? Will make the pattern look better too Same as mentioned on the Insane
01:40:677 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same problem of HS too loud at some and not at others. It seens that the normal is louder than the whistle Did the same as for the INsane, but I wonder if it's really what you meant xD
02:12:625 (6,9) - NC? Same reason as 01:10:287 (6,11) -
02:15:742 (4) - ^
02:19:638 (5) - ^
02:18:859 (3) - ^
02:56:261 (6) - ^
02:57:040 (11) - ^
02:59:378 (5) - ^
03:02:495 (6) - ^
03:03:274 (11) - ^ Same as explained above

The NC is pretty much option, but I think it makes the pattern more clean, also big numbers are ugly :p. But, That's it I'm not a fan of big combos too, but monstrata's points where really valid and I now think the same, so that's it :/

Thanks for your time and your mod :3~
Feel free to call me for a mod if you need it =w=)b (Same goes for every modder on this thread actually)

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-06-19T00:52:04+00:00

[-MrSergio-] wrote:
LucaSA4 wrote:
Extra
00:36:196 (4,5) - Don't feels good, (4) is too far from the start of (5) imo I did a Ctrl +G from the previous mod, could it be you didn't update? .-. Anyway, it doesn't look too far away now...

Now it's fixed, I was probably modding while you was updating, also the volume problem is fine now

AsakuraNe

690 posts

Joined January 2015

AsakuraNe 2015-06-19T11:50:15+00:00

StarrStyx wrote:
The violinist and dancer <3 <3
From my queue

[AsaNe's Easy]
00:22:755 (3) - I wouldn't recommend setting a strong beat on a slider end, try shortening the slider and at the slider end's corresponding timeline instead. -Shortened it and added a circle
00:52:365 (2) - Perhaps tilt this a bit clockwise, so the slider is directed towards the next circle to improve the flow. -Done
01:14:183 (7) - The reverse part of the slider doesnt really fit the song at all, would be better to shorten it to a 1/1 reverse slider and maybe add a circle at 01:15:352 -Well, will see if others mod this too and will change it :3
01:30:547 (4) - -Did something~
01:34:443 - Add a circle here as a finish, to emphasize the downbeat here. -The beats are just the same at that part if the hitsounds were removed and the other sliders ends with a clap so you thought the beat was emphasized :3
01:50:027 (5) - Strong 01:51:196 -^^
02:16:521 (7) - Same problem as 01:14:183 (7) -^^Same as above
02:22:755 (6) - Would be better to use a 1/1 slider and use a circle to emphasize the downbeat at 02:23:652 -Done
03:00:157 (7) - Same as above -Done

Good luck~

Thanks for Modding

LucaSA4 wrote:
Hello , you are the next from my modding queue!

AsaNe's Easy
00:27:820 (3) - Blanket slightly off http://puu.sh/iu7I7/b6f7870641.jpg -lewl fixed :3
00:38:339 (3) - Make the middle dot red :p - haha Well, the current one is smoother than the more curved one with the redpoint
01:00:157 (4) - If this is a blanket, it's off -Did something
02:53:924 (7) - The end of this slider is a bit weird -it's okay to me though. It follow the beat more too.~

Thanks for the Mod :3

UPDATE:

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Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Seijiro 2015-06-19T12:09:55+00:00

Updated and also new page~~~~

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Spayyce 2015-06-20T23:49:11+00:00

From my mod queue.

[General]

On your insane, according to AiMod, this issue is brought up:
Metadata: Good
All seems cool to me.
Halfway through modding, it's really good you should call a BN now. I think it's ready for rank.

[AsaNe's Easy]

00:47:690 (5) - iI believe this curve can be improved on such that the curve isn't as sharp, something which ruins integral flow imo, also doing this will improve flow

New Curve

01:04:833 (3) - I don't think the first part of this slider flows from the previous one too well, why not curve it so it flows from the previous one?

01:26:651 (1) - The middle curve is way to prominent in my opinion, I would curve it less for consistency with the other curves present in the slider.

01:31:326 (5) - NC because of the change in the song pitch and it is getting a little long.

01:53:144 (1) - I would make the curves of the individual parts of this slider equal for consistency.

02:02:495 (4) - I don't think this slider looks too good, the curve is so randomly placed it just doesn't make sense to me.

02:52:365 (4) - There is a gap here and it is own a downbeat so I would NC.

02:58:599 (5) - ^ (no gap, I just believe the music warrants one)

[Normal]

00:21:586 (2,2) - Use the slider ball circle to check the blanket, at the moment, the end of the last slider is too broad, bring it in a bit more

Blanket You Used

Remember to check the blanket at 00:23:144 (2,1) if you agree to the above suggestion.

00:29:378 (2) - The curves are uneven, for better flow and consistency I would make them even, perhaps like so:

Even Slider

01:30:157 (1) - The curves are uneven, the last curve on this slider isn't as curved as the first one.

02:24:313 (1,2) - The curves in the middle of these aren't centred properly, while not important just bug me XD

02:54:703 (2,1) - This can be improved to accommodate the blanket more like so:

Blanket

02:56:261 (2,3) - If you accept the above suggestion, make sure these a now consistent

[Hard]

00:26:651 (3,4) - Make these parallel for more consistency with the next set of notes that show up that are parallel

00:42:235 (4) - Curve this for a blanket and better flow onto the next slider.

01:28:209 (1) - I think this slider would like nicer like this, wouldn't you agree?:

Slider

02:43:209 (1,3) - Curve the first slider more so it blankets the next slider for nice looks.

02:45:742 (1,2) - Curve slider 2 more for the same reason

[Insane]

00:50:417 (1,2,3) - I would make the spacing of these notes all even for consistency and clarity.

01:28:209 (5,1) - The flow here isn't so great, I would choose to curve the end of the slider and blanket it over so the flow is improved.

02:25:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I can see where this inherits from, I would make the curves on the note shapes even for consistency

[Extra]

No glaring issues, looks solid good job

Very nice map, love it all you should get a BN right now though !

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Seijiro 2015-06-21T00:57:41+00:00

Gonna check tomorrow =3=
Time for bed now~~~ Energy restored \:D/

[ Space ] wrote:

From my mod queue.

[General]
On your insane, according to AiMod, this issue is brought up: lol, how that even happened xD
Metadata: Good It looks like I didn't put "Instrumental" into tags
All seems cool to me.
Halfway through modding, it's really good you should call a BN now. I think it's ready for rank.
[Normal]

00:21:586 (2,2) - Use the slider ball circle to check the blanket, at the moment, the end of the last slider is too broad, bring it in a bit more

Blanket You Used
Fixed

Remember to check the blanket at 00:23:144 (2,1) if you agree to the above suggestion. Checked this one too

00:29:378 (2) - The curves are uneven, for better flow and consistency I would make them even, perhaps like so: I hope I fixed them xD

Even Slider

01:30:157 (1) - The curves are uneven, the last curve on this slider isn't as curved as the first one. I worked like 15 minutes on that and it wasn't mean to be any blanket or anything at all. As long as I have the right movement I'm fine with it lol

02:24:313 (1,2) - The curves in the middle of these aren't centred properly, while not important just bug me XD

02:54:703 (2,1) - This can be improved to accommodate the blanket more like so: I can't see the waypoints of that xD And anyway, they already bugged me for that pattern, but it was intentional. I mean, there's already some sort of blanket in itself xD

Blanket

02:56:261 (2,3) - If you accept the above suggestion, make sure these a now consistent ^

[Hard]

00:26:651 (3,4) - Make these parallel for more consistency with the next set of notes that show up that are parallel I don't really like to see parallel sliders there tbh :/

00:42:235 (4) - Curve this for a blanket and better flow onto the next slider. Why not, it looks cleaner too

01:28:209 (1) - I think this slider would like nicer like this, wouldn't you agree?: Changed in my own way

Slider

02:43:209 (1,3) - Curve the first slider more so it blankets the next slider for nice looks. I can't find that point o.O It just highlights me something that doesn't exist in the map xD Could it be you misclicked somewhere?

02:45:742 (1,2) - Curve slider 2 more for the same reason Blanketed better

[Insane]

00:50:417 (1,2,3) - I would make the spacing of these notes all even for consistency and clarity. Highlighting 00:50:612 (2) - I get this lol

01:28:209 (5,1) - The flow here isn't so great, I would choose to curve the end of the slider and blanket it over so the flow is improved. O did that kind of blanket, but with the previous slider :3

02:25:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I can see where this inherits from, I would make the curves on the note shapes even for consistency Somehow fixed xD

[Extra]

No glaring issues, looks solid good job Yay :33333

Very nice map, love it all you should get a BN right now though ! Would you like to go hunting BNs with me? xD lolololololol 2 months waiting for even one of them to check my map :/

Thanks a lot for the mod

Tell me if you'll ever need a mod :3

Also updated AsaNe's diff :3

Last edited by Seijiro 2015-06-21T10:16:01+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

AsakuraNe

690 posts

Joined January 2015

AsakuraNe 2015-06-21T05:45:40+00:00

[-MrSergio-] wrote:
StarrStyx wrote:
The violinist and dancer <3 <3
From my queue This is AsaNe's doing. I hope I can do something for her in return someday <3 Like doing the mod she asked me 22 days ago for example...
Wahahaha LMAO xD Didn't see this until now~ Well, For that map, I'm just waiting for the CTB diff and it will be ranked

[ Space ] wrote:

From my mod queue.

[AsaNe's Easy]

00:47:690 (5) - iI believe this curve can be improved on such that the curve isn't as sharp, something which ruins integral flow imo, also doing this will improve flow -DOne

New Curve

01:04:833 (3) - I don't think the first part of this slider flows from the previous one too well, why not curve it so it flows from the previous one? -DOne

01:26:651 (1) - The middle curve is way to prominent in my opinion, I would curve it less for consistency with the other curves present in the slider. -DOne

01:31:326 (5) - NC because of the change in the song pitch and it is getting a little long. -DOne

01:53:144 (1) - I would make the curves of the individual parts of this slider equal for consistency. -DOne

02:02:495 (4) - I don't think this slider looks too good, the curve is so randomly placed it just doesn't make sense to me. -Did something :3

02:52:365 (4) - There is a gap here and it is own a downbeat so I would NC. -DOne

02:58:599 (5) - ^ (no gap, I just believe the music warrants one) -Didn't do it because the previous parts like this part were not NCed sooo.. for consistency :3

Very nice map, love it all you should get a BN right now though ! -I AGREE~!! \o/ So we can know the BN's pov

Thanks for Modding

UPDATE:

BAKABAKABAKABAKABAKA

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DahplA

1,099 posts

Joined March 2014

DahplA 2015-06-21T14:16:22+00:00

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

Not sure if you knew, but AsaNe requested this for you. I've already modded this, but I was bad back then. Still surprised to see this isn't ranked yet, because I remember how good it was.

Extra

00:19:638 (1) - The curved shape here implies a blanket of 00:20:027 (2) - However, 00:20:417 (3) - blankets with 1. I recommend just changing the shape of 1 so it doesn't look like a blanket
00:43:209 (2) - I think stack works better here, since it appears soon after 00:42:235 (4) -
00:43:794 (1) - Not really feeling this shape. This may or may not fall under "slider manipulation" (since it wiggles) which is unrankable. Double check with BN maybe
01:05:807 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think you should start the 1/4 circles on a white note, to make it slightly easier (might be hard to change now, so decline if you want)
01:14:378 (2,3) - I think the hitsounding is wrong here
01:20:417 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should NC on 4, since 1,2,3 is a 3/4 rhythm which is different from the spacing of 4. Also, 4 has a finish, so it's a good spot
01:43:794 (1) - Whistle on the red? And missing 01:44:183 (2) -
01:46:132 (1) - Same note as before
01:56:846 (5) - Why not add reverse, I can hear the 1/6 noise continue, and it keeps consistency with 00:54:573 (3) -
01:58:079 (2,3) - Not a fan of 1/6 streams. Keep it if you want, just note that they are sometimes hard to hit to the untrained person
01:58:988 (1,2) - Just wondering why there is NC here
02:01:716 (1,2,1,2) - How come you cut your NC in half here?
02:16:521 (1) - Whistle on red?

Insane

01:14:378 (2,3) - I think hitsound is wrong here. Clap should be on 3
01:45:157 (5) - Not stacked perfectly
02:16:521 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle on 1,2,3 but not on 4? Also I think missing a clap

Hard

00:26:651 (3,4) - Parallel?
00:49:053 (6) - Not stacked perfectly
02:13:404 (5) - ^

Normal

All good

AsaNe's Easy

00:24:313 (4,5,4,5) - Just a little thing, wondering why you use circle into slider 00:24:313 (4,5) - then slider into circle 00:30:547 (4,5) -
01:14:183 (7) - Not really feeling the 3/2 here. I just don't hear a good enough sound on the red tick for it to be good.
01:21:975 How come you NC every 3 downbeats here, but in your kiai you NC every 4?
01:54:703 (2) - Very close to 01:53:144 (1) - consider repositioning
02:53:924 (4) - Not sure about the end wiggles here. Might be confusing for new players
How come at the start, you didn't use whistle sound on the whole slider, but near the end it is?

Just like I remember. Great work, however some of the hitsounding is weird. I couldn't quite figure out what pattern you were placing claps and whistles on, but just make sure it's consistent.

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Seijiro 2015-06-21T18:59:57+00:00

DahplA wrote:
Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

Not sure if you knew, but AsaNe requested this for you. I've already modded this, but I was bad back then. Still surprised to see this isn't ranked yet, because I remember how good it was.

Extra
00:19:638 (1) - The curved shape here implies a blanket of 00:20:027 (2) - However, 00:20:417 (3) - blankets with 1. I recommend just changing the shape of 1 so it doesn't look like a blanket Tehy told me to make it look like a blanket before lol. Anyways, I prefer the pseudo-blanket there :3
00:43:209 (2) - I think stack works better here, since it appears soon after 00:42:235 (4) - Fixed ~
00:43:794 (1) - Not really feeling this shape. This may or may not fall under "slider manipulation" (since it wiggles) which is unrankable. Double check with BN maybe Keeping this in mind from the start of the modding process ans still waiting for a BN to tell me if it's ok or not /
01:05:807 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think you should start the 1/4 circles on a white note, to make it slightly easier (might be hard to change now, so decline if you want) I hope that moving the NC to the circle will make this part more readable...
01:14:378 (2,3) - I think the hitsounding is wrong here There was a clap missing xD
01:20:417 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should NC on 4, since 1,2,3 is a 3/4 rhythm which is different from the spacing of 4. Also, 4 has a finish, so it's a good spot Yep
01:43:794 (1) - Whistle on the red? And missing 01:44:183 (2) - Removed the whistle from the slider tail, but I didn't add it on the other circle
01:46:132 (1) - Same note as before Same
01:56:846 (5) - Why not add reverse, I can hear the 1/6 noise continue, and it keeps consistency with 00:54:573 (3) - The violin is playing different notes and there is no note to add a repeat where you pointed out :/
01:58:079 (2,3) - Not a fan of 1/6 streams. Keep it if you want, just note that they are sometimes hard to hit to the untrained person Some users asked for that since they wanted to click those notes ._.
01:58:988 (1,2) - Just wondering why there is NC here Because it is a different rhythm I wanted to emphasize
02:01:716 (1,2,1,2) - How come you cut your NC in half here? Lol, I forgot about that. THey were previously forming a different pattern in which I needed those NCs
02:16:521 (1) - Whistle on red? Yep, whistle on red xD
Insane
01:14:378 (2,3) - I think hitsound is wrong here. Clap should be on 3 I'm using the soft clap as a background sound, that's why I placed it on red ticks
01:45:157 (5) - Not stacked perfectly Fixed xD
02:16:521 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle on 1,2,3 but not on 4? Also I think missing a clap The whistle makes that part too "noisy", while I don't understand the clap... the soft clap isn't audible at all, while the drum clap is too loud there, but I don't know which hitsound you suggested...
Hard
00:26:651 (3,4) - Parallel? See previous mod xD Basically, they were meant to be like that, since the parallel movement didn't satisfy me the way I wanted :/
00:49:053 (6) - Not stacked perfectly Fixed ~
02:13:404 (5) - ^ ^
Normal
All good Yay~~~

Just like I remember. Great work, however some of the hitsounding is weird. I couldn't quite figure out what pattern you were placing claps and whistles on, but just make sure it's consistent. It's a pretty basic hitsounding: lclaps every 2nd and 4th measure and whistles on slider heads (finishes just in special cases)

Thanks for the re-mod xD

AsakuraNe

690 posts

Joined January 2015

AsakuraNe 2015-06-22T12:09:37+00:00

DahplA wrote:
AsaNe's Easy
00:24:313 (4,5,4,5) - Just a little thing, wondering why you use circle into slider 00:24:313 (4,5) - then slider into circle 00:30:547 (4,5) - -Both parts have different instrument emphasized part. The first one w/ the circle into slider, the part with the slider was more emphasized and the second one w/ the slider to circle, the slider was emphasized first soo... it's like that
01:14:183 (7) - Not really feeling the 3/2 here. I just don't hear a good enough sound on the red tick for it to be good. -2 times. :3 I'll count until 5 and I'll change it lewl
01:21:975 How come you NC every 3 downbeats here, but in your kiai you NC every 4? -Fixed
01:54:703 (2) - Very close to 01:53:144 (1) - consider repositioning -another "didn't see that one" moment :3 Fixed
02:53:924 (4) - Not sure about the end wiggles here. Might be confusing for new players -We'll see if someone will mod this too. I'll remove it after 5 mods on this part
How come at the start, you didn't use whistle sound on the whole slider, but near the end it is? -Because the first part is a silent one and I want to emphasize parts using whistles and the end part has already the beat and a full whistle will compliment with it~ :3

Just like I remember. Great work, however some of the hitsounding is weird. I couldn't quite figure out what pattern you were placing claps and whistles on, but just make sure it's consistent.

Thanks for Modding AlphaD

UPDATE:

AsaNe's Easy

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Also, Mr. Sergioooo~ :3 Can you remove the Instrumental in the tags? because it's gonna be one of the genre in the map~

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Seijiro 2015-06-22T17:10:16+00:00

rip tag

EDIT: I asked a couple of BNs around. I hope they can make it through their schedule to make a stop here too :3

EDIT2: Changed username and updated diffs with the correct one

Exa

445 posts

Joined January 2015

Exa 2015-06-24T12:30:45+00:00

[Easy]

00:53:534 - Better not skip that beat.
01:14:573 - Have the return point here.
01:57:040 (5,6) - The blanket is not perfect.
01:58:988 - Better not skip that beat.

[Normal]

00:19:638 (1,2) - The blanket is not perfect.
00:28:988 (1,2) - Try blanketing them.
00:34:833 (6,1) - Same goes for these.
01:20:027 (2,1) - Try blanketing these too.
01:29:768 (3,1) - You can also make a good blanket here.
01:40:677 (1,2,3,4) - Try keeping the instructional flow of the new section more user-friendly.
01:52:755- Better not skip that beat.
02:02:495 (2,3) - Try faking a better blanket here.
02:33:664 (1,2) - The blanket is not perfect.

[Hard]

00:26:651 (3,4) - These are not symmetrical.
00:27:820 (2,3) - The blanket is not perfect.
00:29:378 (2,4,1) - The blanket is not perfect.
00:32:105 (1,2,3) - I would use sliders here.
01:18:469 (3,1) - Try blanketing these.
01:55:092 (2,3) - The blanket is not perfect.
01:55:482 (3,1) - The blanket is not perfect.
02:19:248 (4,5) - The blanket is not perfect.
02:46:911 (4) - Does not look clean.
02:49:638 (2,3) - The blanket is not perfect.
03:00:157 (1,4) - Try making those symmetrical to the note between them.
03:06:391 (1) - Use circles here.

Due to the condition my hand is in, I can not play - and therefore mod - your harder difficulties.
By taking a glance at them I found nothing wrong aside from some imperfect blankets, but I don't want to bother you with those since you have already done an amazing job.
Why is this not ranked yet? Kds for you!

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Seijiro 2015-06-24T18:01:38+00:00

Exa wrote:
[Normal]

00:19:638 (1,2) - The blanket is not perfect. lol: http://puu.sh/iBbWE/5214086d4e.jpg
00:28:988 (1,2) - Try blanketing them. It wasn't supposed to be a blanket at all xD
00:34:833 (6,1) - Same goes for these. I changed 1's shape since it was ugly, but it wasn't intended to be any sort of blanket
01:20:027 (2,1) - Try blanketing these too. Done
01:29:768 (3,1) - You can also make a good blanket here. Fixed
01:40:677 (1,2,3,4) - Try keeping the instructional flow of the new section more user-friendly. Re-arranged
01:52:755- Better not skip that beat. Following violin here, why shouldn't I skip that? xD
02:02:495 (2,3) - Try faking a better blanket here. I hope I fixed it, even if it's hard to blanket with an edgy slider xD
02:33:664 (1,2) - The blanket is not perfect. Fixed

[Hard]

00:26:651 (3,4) - These are not symmetrical. Already rejected twice lol. They aren't meant to be parallel at all xD
00:27:820 (2,3) - The blanket is not perfect. Fixed
00:29:378 (2,4,1) - The blanket is not perfect. Checked with AR5 and it looks fine...
00:32:105 (1,2,3) - I would use sliders here. I used them for the Extra only to make things a little bit more difficult
01:18:469 (3,1) - Try blanketing these. It will become unreadable tho xD
01:55:092 (2,3) - The blanket is not perfect.
01:55:482 (3,1) - The blanket is not perfect.
02:19:248 (4,5) - The blanket is not perfect. All of these 3 look fine for me tho .-.
02:46:911 (4) - Does not look clean. Moved a bit and made less curvy
02:49:638 (2,3) - The blanket is not perfect. Really? xD http://puu.sh/iBe5P/8235b2c4f2.jpg
03:00:157 (1,4) - Try making those symmetrical to the note between them. I used Ctrl + D to make 4, using 1 as reference xD After that Ctrl + H & Ctrl + J
03:06:391 (1) - Use circles here. I don't want to make this diff too hard :/

Due to the condition my hand is in, I can not play - and therefore mod - your harder difficulties.
By taking a glance at them I found nothing wrong aside from some imperfect blankets, but I don't want to bother you with those since you have already done an amazing job. Thansk~
Why is this not ranked yet? Kds for you!

Thanks for your mod and your time :3

AsakuraNe

690 posts

Joined January 2015

AsakuraNe 2015-06-25T08:59:40+00:00

Exa wrote:
[Easy]

00:53:534 - Better not skip that beat. -I'm following the violin. :3 If i add a note here then all of the parts i made with breaks will be mapped :<
01:14:573 - Have the return point here. -3rd time >:) Well i guess i could change it now~
01:57:040 (5,6) - The blanket is not perfect. -Fixed
01:58:988 - Better not skip that beat. -Done

Thanks for Modding

UPDATE:

AsaNe's Easy

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JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2015-06-26T08:36:10+00:00

Checking hitsounds on the Std diffs by PM request:

General Comments:
Hitsound Selection: Fine, but consider adding a blank soft-sliderslide2.wav file to make your slider bodies silent, as I feel the default sound contrasts with the violin in an awkward way
File Quality: soft-hitfinish2 and drum-hitfinish2 are both 2822kbps, which is fine, although it increases the file size a little. If this bothers you, here's a 1411kbps version which should sound identical, and saves roughly 700KB
Playback Delay: No issues
Unused Hitsounds: No issues
Volume: Hitsounds are pretty hard to hear in some sections, especially hitnormal and hitwhistle during the second half of the song (they just get overpowered by the drums IMO). I'd like to suggest a few changes (Just an overview, will need to be applied on an individual basis to each diff):

Add an uniherited section at 00:44:573 to raise the volume slightly after the intro (~60%)
Increase volume at 00:57:040 in the first kiai to ~75% - there aren't many drum claps (snare sounds) present yet so this doesn't need to be too high
From 01:21:975 the rhythm is the same as in the kiai, but you don't need the extra emphasis, so you'll want something like 60-65%
If you want to keep the volume increase at 01:46:521 that you have currently, I'd make the above section 60% and this one 65%
For the second kiai at 01:59:378 I'd try something like 70% as there's more emphasis on the violin and less on the drums here. Then in the third kiai at 02:11:846 try increasing it a little more, to say, 80% (you're helping to build emphasis throughout the whole song in this way)
After the third kiai at 02:24:313 keeping a ~70-75% hitsound volume draws lots of emphasis to the finality of the kick drum sounds which would be good. You can then keep this all the way up until 02:41:456 where you may want to increase slightly for the kick drum buildup, then revert back to around 55-60% at 02:43:014 for the calm section
Lastly, I feel that 02:55:482 should really be a kiai section instead of 02:36:781, since it's the same pattern as the other choruses. Either way, you want to be building to a climax here, so increase the volume again slightly relative to your last chorus (~90%)

Difficulty Specific Comments:

AsaNe's Easy

00:55:482 (6) - Replace clap on head with whistle, it sounds weird to have both as claps to me, and for following the drums, the tail has more prominence
00:57:040 - Whistle seems overused to me here - consider removing whistle where you have a clap (mostly slider tails) to draw more emphasis to that hitsound
01:09:508 - In this section, you could change the sampleset on some of the slider tails to Drum addition to emphasise the kick drum notes, e.g. 01:10:287 - 01:11:846 etc.
01:20:417 (6) - Finish on the tail instead of the head? You use it this way round at 02:22:755 (6,7) and it sounds a little better to me
01:31:326 (4) - Add whistle here to keep a consistent pattern alternating whistle/clap
01:50:027 (5) - Add drum clap on the tail
01:57:820 (6) - Same as 00:55:482 (6)
01:59:378 - Clap is overused here (on almost every note lol) - Your existing pattern alternating whistle/clap worked fine, so I'd stick to it, but use a louder volume as I suggested above to keep the emphasis here
02:10:287 (6) - Swap to whistle on head and repeat to match the kick drum buildup
02:11:846 - Same as the other choruses, so use the same hitsound pattern for consistency - here you're only using soft additions when previous sections used drum
02:24:313 (1,2) - Clap on the heads of these sliders? It's the same sound in the music as 02:27:430 (3,4,5,6) - Also do the same for the heads of 02:30:547 (1,2,3)
02:41:456 (4,5) - Drum sampleset to match the kick drum buildup?
02:43:014 (1) - Clap not really necessary here, it's not as prominent as the head of 02:43:794 (2)
02:53:144 (3,4) - Whistle on the sliderbodies here sounds really out of place considering you don't use it anywhere else. Consider removing it
02:55:482 - Pretty much the same as I suggested for the other kiais, to maintain consistency

Normal

00:38:339 (1) - Remove whistle on the tail to be consistent with 00:39:118 (2)
00:58:599 (1,2) and 01:02:495 (1,2) - - Consider removing the tail whistles, they feel a little overbearing here (and other 1/2 slider tails such as 01:14:183 (3) if possible)
01:25:092 (1,2) - Drum clap on the tails of these two? It seems to fit with your following pattern
01:44:573 (3,4,5) - I'd remove the whistle from these last (5) beats to draw more attention to the kick drum (claps)
02:11:846 - As above, remove whistles from slider tails where there is a kick drum beat for better emphasis
02:24:313 (1,2) - Clap on the heads of these sliders? It's the same sound in the music as 02:27:430 (3,4,5,6) - Also do the same for the head of 02:30:547 (1)
02:55:482 - Same as in the last chorus, 02:11:846

Hard

00:38:047 (4,5) - 1/4 whistles used in this way produce a kind of "ringing" effect which I'm not a fan of. I'd remove these whistles, but if you like them feel free to keep them
00:58:599 (1,2) - Whistle feels overused here, consider removing from these slider tails
01:08:729 (1) - Why does the slider tail here have a default finish, when in the Normal it had the SC:2 finish? Is this intentional?
01:23:144 (4,4) - You could switch to drum clap addition here for a double snare sound like you've done at 01:27:820 (5) and 01:30:937 (3)
02:54:703 (5) - Same as 00:38:047 (4,5) - consider removing the blue tick whistles

You get the idea by now, and since the last two difficulties are similar to Hard but with more difficult patterns, there wouldn't be much point in pointing out the same things again. Of course all of these are just suggestions based on my own personal opinion, so don't feel you have to accept any of them.

Hopefully you found this helpful, but if you have any questions, feel free to get back to me. Good luck!

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2015-06-26T10:15:44+00:00

Gonna check this afternoon once I get home from work, but just a quick look made me realize that I should start studying hitsounding more seriously

Gilda03

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Gilda03 2015-06-26T18:17:04+00:00

nice map ♡

Last edited by Gilda03 2017-10-01T16:29:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

AsakuraNe

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AsakuraNe 2015-06-28T11:16:20+00:00

I'll answer the mod after you have updated

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2015-06-28T17:43:24+00:00

Ok, my life is a total pain, sorry AsaNe :/

@JBH Basically, followed everything, since your hitsounds made sense, while mine where just something made on the spoor :/
Anyway, I'm really glad that someone finally checked my hitsounds, since I know my lack on this subject =3=
Can I give you a double kudosu? :^)

@AsaNe Updated with the last code you left me :3

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2015-06-29T22:35:11+00:00

Personal banner to attract more BNs :3

Blizs

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Blizs 2015-07-01T21:43:31+00:00

Hi MrSergio :3~~~
from F Ant's Priority Queue !! (Requested by AsakuraNe)
your Number of Priority : 4

Okay, Here is it~~

General

02:11:846 - Double green lines here (STD Diffs)

AsaNe's Easy

Asa-Neeeee! ~~ :p
01:09:118 - You forgot to add a green line here like you did on 02:11:456 -
Can't found anything else T.T .... Nice Easy diff Asa-nee

Normal

01:05:612 (3) - The way this slider curving was looks forced. I know you want to avoid the offscreen by making this flow for this "Narrow spaced place", but I think a normal curve looks have a better transition to the next note than this => http://puu.sh/iIJED/c327b9e740.jpg
01:53:144 (1) - I wonder why did you user 3/4 repeated slider here when you just use 1 beat slider and 1 circle for the part like this (Example 00:50:807 (1,2) - ). I suggest to follow 00:50:807 (1,2) - because it plays more enjoyable than this one. I know you follow the violin for this one but don't you think it's a bit weird if there suddenly 3/4 ?

Hard

did an IRC

IRC

04:34 Fantastica: Hi :3~~
04:35 MrSergio: o/
04:35 Fantastica: I just want to say something about this
04:35 *Fantastica is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/630747 Lindsey Stirling - Senbonzakura [Hard]]
04:35 MrSergio: Sure
04:36 Fantastica: 01:11:846 (1,2,3) - This should be 1/6 if we her it directly to the song
04:36 MrSergio: Not on a Hard xD
04:37 Fantastica: I know it XD
04:37 MrSergio: I can't stress players too much on such a low difficulty
04:37 MrSergio: I used those snaps only for the Extra
04:37 Fantastica: but don't you think it's a bit weird
04:37 MrSergio: If I try to follow 1/6 snaps on the other diffs too I can't make a proper spread :/
04:37 Fantastica: I have anouther suggestion
04:38 MrSergio: Players of that level won't notice
04:38 Fantastica: another*
04:38 Fantastica: don't follow the violin
04:38 MrSergio: I mean, OD is 5.6
04:38 MrSergio: It's really hard to miss that xD
04:38 MrSergio: Why do you say so?
04:39 MrSergio: The violin is a really important part of the song, why shouldn't I follow it? .-.
04:39 Fantastica: If I can make it more reasonable, I'll remove the 1/4 circle
04:39 Fantastica: maybe something like this http://puu.sh/iJRmY/091408b06d.jpg
04:40 MrSergio: They aren't the same sound tho xD
04:40 MrSergio: Which means I can't use the same slider for both
04:40 MrSergio: I do agree that I should remove the circle tho
04:41 Fantastica: yeah.... it's just an example XD you can use your own style ;)
04:42 MrSergio: It should be fixewd now
04:42 Fantastica: and don't forget to apply it for all parts like this
04:43 MrSergio: Dawh, that's a problem tho xD
04:43 MrSergio: 02:14:378 (2,3,4) -
04:43 Fantastica: XD
04:44 Fantastica: I'll give another points
04:44 MrSergio: I need a moment to think about it
04:45 Fantastica: 01:18:079 (1,2,3) - , 02:20:612 (2,3,4) - , 02:57:820 (1,2,3) - , 03:04:053 (1,2,3) - 
04:46 MrSergio: Those points made me realize that this pattern was pretty consisntent for all the diff
04:46 MrSergio: Which means that I won't change anything. I get your point about that, but I can't change my whole mapping style for just one pattern :/
04:47 Fantastica: yea I know it's consistent.... but I just feel weird when I click it :3
04:47 Fantastica: It's okay ;)
04:47 Fantastica: Let's see 01:43:794 (1,2) - 
04:47 MrSergio: Unfortunately that part is messy, I know :/
04:48 MrSergio: I can't do much tho
04:48 MrSergio: At least, not now
04:48 MrSergio: I could have changed that while mapping the diff xD
04:48 MrSergio: Oh, that point lol
04:48 MrSergio: It was even stranger before
04:48 Fantastica: I suggest to reverse 01:43:794 (1) - 
04:49 MrSergio: Nope, it was like that before and that's why it was completely wrong, because there is a spacing inconsistency
04:49 MrSergio: I removed that sldier and put 2 stacked circles there :3
04:50 Fantastica: I think people will click 01:44:378 (2) - at white tick because 2 was too close with 3's head
04:51 MrSergio: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3330311
04:52 Fantastica: Nah... I like this :3 but I suggest to make 2 more visible. I affraid it will read as stream
04:53 MrSergio: lol, that's not a stream xD
04:53 MrSergio: I just have the stacking enalbed
04:53 MrSergio: enabled*
04:53 MrSergio: Basically, they are on the same point
04:53 Fantastica: lol i didn't notice it
04:53 MrSergio: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3330311 :P
04:54 Fantastica: okay ;) last point 02:31:813 (1,2) - 
04:55 MrSergio: lol
04:55 MrSergio: Blue polarity
04:55 MrSergio: That's really weird and I can't do much either xD
04:55 MrSergio: Placing sliders was the best option I had
04:56 Fantastica: lol yea.... but I think it's okay
04:56 Fantastica: what I want to say here wasn't about that
04:57 Fantastica: (2)'s head was near (1)'s tail not head that makes (1) will read as 2 repeated slider
04:58 Fantastica: but the other sliders you put (2) near (1)'s head (example 02:31:034 (1,2) - )
04:59 MrSergio: Hm...
05:00 MrSergio: I changed a couple of things
05:00 MrSergio: It now makes a bit more sense, but I hope it isn't just me xD
05:01 Fantastica: okay that's all for this diff
05:02 MrSergio: yay

Insane

00:56:261 - I just think it's weird to ignore the violin here since generally you follow the violin here.
And that's all :3

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00:53:924 (1,2,3,4) - This part looks "too complex". The way 00:54:313 (2,3) - jumping and the bad overlapping on 00:53:924 (1,3) - made it pain to read. If I can suggest a flow, I'll suggest this flow => http://puu.sh/iJV8F/29c7f0b277.jpg . i think it's more readable. (depending on your own style. I just want to avoid those killing jump and overlap T.T)
00:56:261 - Like I said in Insane diff
01:57:820 (1,2,3,4) - Don't force yourself to use 1/6 here. I hear this point was 1/4.

Okay that's all :3
Enjoyable map with nice pattern and flow >w<
Good Luck !!

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