Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.
Not sure if you knew, but AsaNe requested this for you. I've already modded this, but I was bad back then. Still surprised to see this isn't ranked yet, because I remember how good it was.
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- 00:19:638 (1) - The curved shape here implies a blanket of 00:20:027 (2) - However, 00:20:417 (3) - blankets with 1. I recommend just changing the shape of 1 so it doesn't look like a blanket
- 00:43:209 (2) - I think stack works better here, since it appears soon after 00:42:235 (4) -
- 00:43:794 (1) - Not really feeling this shape. This may or may not fall under "slider manipulation" (since it wiggles) which is unrankable. Double check with BN maybe
- 01:05:807 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think you should start the 1/4 circles on a white note, to make it slightly easier (might be hard to change now, so decline if you want)
- 01:14:378 (2,3) - I think the hitsounding is wrong here
- 01:20:417 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should NC on 4, since 1,2,3 is a 3/4 rhythm which is different from the spacing of 4. Also, 4 has a finish, so it's a good spot
- 01:43:794 (1) - Whistle on the red? And missing 01:44:183 (2) -
- 01:46:132 (1) - Same note as before
- 01:56:846 (5) - Why not add reverse, I can hear the 1/6 noise continue, and it keeps consistency with 00:54:573 (3) -
- 01:58:079 (2,3) - Not a fan of 1/6 streams. Keep it if you want, just note that they are sometimes hard to hit to the untrained person
- 01:58:988 (1,2) - Just wondering why there is NC here
- 02:01:716 (1,2,1,2) - How come you cut your NC in half here?
- 02:16:521 (1) - Whistle on red?
- 01:14:378 (2,3) - I think hitsound is wrong here. Clap should be on 3
- 01:45:157 (5) - Not stacked perfectly
- 02:16:521 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle on 1,2,3 but not on 4? Also I think missing a clap
- 00:26:651 (3,4) - Parallel?
- 00:49:053 (6) - Not stacked perfectly
- 02:13:404 (5) - ^
- All good
- 00:24:313 (4,5,4,5) - Just a little thing, wondering why you use circle into slider 00:24:313 (4,5) - then slider into circle 00:30:547 (4,5) -
- 01:14:183 (7) - Not really feeling the 3/2 here. I just don't hear a good enough sound on the red tick for it to be good.
- 01:21:975 How come you NC every 3 downbeats here, but in your kiai you NC every 4?
- 01:54:703 (2) - Very close to 01:53:144 (1) - consider repositioning
- 02:53:924 (4) - Not sure about the end wiggles here. Might be confusing for new players
- How come at the start, you didn't use whistle sound on the whole slider, but near the end it is?
Just like I remember. Great work, however some of the hitsounding is weird. I couldn't quite figure out what pattern you were placing claps and whistles on, but just make sure it's consistent.