Hello! I'm bored and I like ZUN, so here I am.
From #modreq.
[General]
00:24:731 (1) - ^
00:28:229 (4,4,4,4,4,4) - Remove these notes to lower the difficulty.
00:49:896 (3) - Remove note.
00:55:229 (3) - ^
01:00:562 (3) - ^
01:05:896 (3) - ^
01:20:562 (4) - ^
01:23:229 (4) - ^
01:25:896 (4) - ^
01:28:562 (4) - ^
01:29:729 (4,5) - Make them into a single slider like this: http://puu.sh/i8kZ9/044845296a.png
01:35:229 (4) - Remove note.
01:36:229 (4) - ^
01:38:062 (1) - Remove nc.
01:51:229 (4) - Remove note.
01:52:731 (1,2) - Make them into a single slider like this: http://puu.sh/i8juo/4503028880.png
02:10:624 (5) - Remove note, or make a slider like this: http://puu.sh/i8kU8/33b441295b.png
02:13:182 (1,2,3) - Turn them into a slider like this: http://puu.sh/i8l2I/52b554bd74.png
02:16:782 (1) - Place it in the centre of the grid.
[Hard]
00:21:481 (1) - End the spinner at 00:23:064 - , that way it's easier to read the next pattern.
00:51:396 (1,2) - You can make the curves prettier like this: http://puu.sh/i8iLR/fc1de9172d.png
It won't affect the gameplay, but it'll look nice.
01:02:063 (1,2) - ^
01:36:896 (2,3) - Make them into a single slider like this: http://puu.sh/i8iUR/9b24641a4c.png
01:38:063 (1,2,3) - Make them into a single repeating slider like this: http://puu.sh/i8j28/1b66b2f0fc.png
01:49:396 (7,8) - A little confusing. How about this? http://puu.sh/i8j7v/3041ae651c.png
[Hyper]
00:02:730 (1) - Remove nc.
00:57:562 (4,5) - If you select them and press ctrl+g, they make a cool "jump"!
[Another]
00:52:229 - Add a note to make the flow better.
01:02:896 - ^
[VOLCANO]
00:02:730 (1) - Remove nc.
Overall difficult but very fun and well-made map! I like it!~
Good luck! /runs
From #modreq.
[General]
- Change the title to "LeaF - Resurrection Spell"? You can put "ZUN remixed" in tags.
- The combo colors are nice, but they don't really match the background (and song... and Mokou).
How about making them more... warm? Kinda like this: http://puu.sh/i8ioz/3cb7866b76.png
- The part at 01:52:729 - untill 01:58:269 - needs more whistles.
- I think this diff is too intense for "normal", so I'll try to help making it easier.
00:24:731 (1) - ^
00:28:229 (4,4,4,4,4,4) - Remove these notes to lower the difficulty.
00:49:896 (3) - Remove note.
00:55:229 (3) - ^
01:00:562 (3) - ^
01:05:896 (3) - ^
01:20:562 (4) - ^
01:23:229 (4) - ^
01:25:896 (4) - ^
01:28:562 (4) - ^
01:29:729 (4,5) - Make them into a single slider like this: http://puu.sh/i8kZ9/044845296a.png
01:35:229 (4) - Remove note.
01:36:229 (4) - ^
01:38:062 (1) - Remove nc.
01:51:229 (4) - Remove note.
01:52:731 (1,2) - Make them into a single slider like this: http://puu.sh/i8juo/4503028880.png
02:10:624 (5) - Remove note, or make a slider like this: http://puu.sh/i8kU8/33b441295b.png
02:13:182 (1,2,3) - Turn them into a slider like this: http://puu.sh/i8l2I/52b554bd74.png
02:16:782 (1) - Place it in the centre of the grid.
[Hard]
00:21:481 (1) - End the spinner at 00:23:064 - , that way it's easier to read the next pattern.
00:51:396 (1,2) - You can make the curves prettier like this: http://puu.sh/i8iLR/fc1de9172d.png
It won't affect the gameplay, but it'll look nice.
01:02:063 (1,2) - ^
01:36:896 (2,3) - Make them into a single slider like this: http://puu.sh/i8iUR/9b24641a4c.png
01:38:063 (1,2,3) - Make them into a single repeating slider like this: http://puu.sh/i8j28/1b66b2f0fc.png
01:49:396 (7,8) - A little confusing. How about this? http://puu.sh/i8j7v/3041ae651c.png
[Hyper]
00:02:730 (1) - Remove nc.
00:57:562 (4,5) - If you select them and press ctrl+g, they make a cool "jump"!
[Another]
00:52:229 - Add a note to make the flow better.
01:02:896 - ^
[VOLCANO]
00:02:730 (1) - Remove nc.
Overall difficult but very fun and well-made map! I like it!~
Good luck! /runs