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small problem though- 01:16:020 (1,3) - try to avoid overlap like this though, its not looking nice also it makes confusion for normal players. I think you can use an other pattern you can think of, but i cant really give a example because there is too much pattern that can avoid some ugly overlap like this, they are much better than this pattern you are using
- 01:26:020 (3,1) - when you do a blanket, do it well or dont do it, this pattern here just not looking nice for most of the ppl.
- 02:14:020 (3,4,1) - unrankable pattern, you are not allowed to do a ds change by using a green line
- 02:16:020 (1,2) - also ds problem, make sure you keep your ds all the same in normal
- 02:05:020 (3) - i suggest you add a clap here because there is a sound in the bgm that is similar to ur clap hitsound. it fits the music more when you add it
- 02:48:738 (2) - 02:52:738 (2,3) - welp, if you want to do this, do it in the whole kiai but not only do 2 at the middle of the kiai. if a person sing like instantly high in the middle of the refrain, and dont sing that in the second refrain, will you think that he did a good job? same as the maps, people wont think its a good map for these instant and unreasonable rhythm change, i suggest you to do rhythm similar to what you did like 03:00:831 (2,3) - , much better and fits the song much more. be consider about this
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