KONNICHI-FUCKING-WA
General
For God's sake remove Letterbox during breaks, I don't like her face cut in half by the black stripes xD
Insane
00:19:452 (1) - I think a "ding" hitsound like this 00:52:495 (1) would be fine here as well
00:20:321 (3) - ^
00:23:148 (1,2,3) - Here too
00:22:495 (6,1) - Improve this blanket maybe
00:28:474 - I don't know, I feel like you should try to put a note here, to follow the vocal
00:33:582 (2,4,7) - Same as 00:19:452 (1)
00:40:756 (3,7,10) - ^
00:44:669 (4) - Drum whistle here? Was it intended?
01:00:974 (1) - I don't like it, it doesn't sound to my ears... I'd replace it with this rhythm (ignore note placement)
(The second slider can also be 1/2 lol)
01:38:148 (1) - I disagree with this NC, is it really necessary?
01:39:452 (1) - add a ding plx
01:43:148 (1,2,3) - Here too. The song is all the same and I think you figured out where to add "ding" sounds so I won't mention them anymore!Also because I'm lazy as fuck ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º)
01:48:474 - Same as 00:28:474
02:05:539 (1,2) - Stack these properly
02:16:626 (2,3,4) - ^
03:54:237 - Are you sure that there isn't any timing change here? If you listen carefully with 25%, this note should be on 03:54:201 - And the slider should end in 03:54:961 - (1/12 snap) I think there's a sort of slowdown in timing but I'm not sure, you should ask someone else because I'm noob at timing xD This applies for all diffs, the same for hitsound suggestions of course
Hard
00:05:539 (1,2) - This blanket is a bit messy imo
00:43:148 (3) - I suggest to replace with circle + 1/2 slider because sliders that start on red lines don't always sound really good
01:00:974 (1) - Same as insane, I'd replace this with circle + 1/2 slider
01:27:713 - Start the break here, like in insane!
01:37:278 (1) - Unnecessary NC, imo
01:51:626 (5,2) - blanket
02:15:539 (4) - Clap here maybe?
02:47:713 - Start the break here
02:59:452 (1) - Uhm, maybe it's a bit short for an Hard diff, I don't know
Normal
00:09:887 (4,5) - I think this is not acceptable because this is the easiest diff in your set, and newbies can't read something like this ;w;
00:13:365 (4,5) - The same, I suggest to put a repeat instead!
00:18:148 - Add a clap on this slidertick, and on all the sliderticks that need it! (Too lazy to point out ever single one, zorry ;_;)
01:00:756 (3,4) - I don't know if this is readable by newbies, unstack these please. I think you should also change the rhythm because I don't like it, the slider should start on the big, white tick
01:22:495 (3,4) - Same, unstack them
01:27:713 - Start the break here
02:20:756 (3,4) - Derp
02:42:495 (3,4) - ^
02:47:713 - Start break here
02:59:343 - Oh, I think this is not really in time... Try to start it 1/4 later, even if it keeps feeling a bit off
03:42:930 (1,2) - Adjust this blanket a bit
03:45:104 (3,4) - OOwrower)%£$H%)
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Finished, I haven't modded anything for three months so this mod is probably useless ;W;
General
For God's sake remove Letterbox during breaks, I don't like her face cut in half by the black stripes xD
Insane
00:19:452 (1) - I think a "ding" hitsound like this 00:52:495 (1) would be fine here as well
00:20:321 (3) - ^
00:23:148 (1,2,3) - Here too
00:22:495 (6,1) - Improve this blanket maybe
00:28:474 - I don't know, I feel like you should try to put a note here, to follow the vocal
00:33:582 (2,4,7) - Same as 00:19:452 (1)
00:40:756 (3,7,10) - ^
00:44:669 (4) - Drum whistle here? Was it intended?
01:00:974 (1) - I don't like it, it doesn't sound to my ears... I'd replace it with this rhythm (ignore note placement)
(The second slider can also be 1/2 lol)
01:38:148 (1) - I disagree with this NC, is it really necessary?
01:39:452 (1) - add a ding plx
01:43:148 (1,2,3) - Here too. The song is all the same and I think you figured out where to add "ding" sounds so I won't mention them anymore!
01:48:474 - Same as 00:28:474
02:05:539 (1,2) - Stack these properly
02:16:626 (2,3,4) - ^
03:54:237 - Are you sure that there isn't any timing change here? If you listen carefully with 25%, this note should be on 03:54:201 - And the slider should end in 03:54:961 - (1/12 snap) I think there's a sort of slowdown in timing but I'm not sure, you should ask someone else because I'm noob at timing xD This applies for all diffs, the same for hitsound suggestions of course
Hard
00:05:539 (1,2) - This blanket is a bit messy imo
00:43:148 (3) - I suggest to replace with circle + 1/2 slider because sliders that start on red lines don't always sound really good
01:00:974 (1) - Same as insane, I'd replace this with circle + 1/2 slider
01:27:713 - Start the break here, like in insane!
01:37:278 (1) - Unnecessary NC, imo
01:51:626 (5,2) - blanket
02:15:539 (4) - Clap here maybe?
02:47:713 - Start the break here
02:59:452 (1) - Uhm, maybe it's a bit short for an Hard diff, I don't know
Normal
00:09:887 (4,5) - I think this is not acceptable because this is the easiest diff in your set, and newbies can't read something like this ;w;
00:13:365 (4,5) - The same, I suggest to put a repeat instead!
00:18:148 - Add a clap on this slidertick, and on all the sliderticks that need it! (Too lazy to point out ever single one, zorry ;_;)
01:00:756 (3,4) - I don't know if this is readable by newbies, unstack these please. I think you should also change the rhythm because I don't like it, the slider should start on the big, white tick
01:22:495 (3,4) - Same, unstack them
01:27:713 - Start the break here
02:20:756 (3,4) - Derp
02:42:495 (3,4) - ^
02:47:713 - Start break here
02:59:343 - Oh, I think this is not really in time... Try to start it 1/4 later, even if it keeps feeling a bit off
03:42:930 (1,2) - Adjust this blanket a bit
03:45:104 (3,4) - OOwrower)%£$H%)
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Finished, I haven't modded anything for three months so this mod is probably useless ;W;