Note: When I talk about "symmetry" I'm referring to the aesthetic placement of one object relative to the others, which doesn't have to be Andrea-style axis symmetry
- You can remove "m_o_k_o_r_i" from tags, since searching "mokori" or "m o k o r i" would both give the same results if your tag is "mokori"
- I really advise you find a storyboarder for this set, it could be turned into something amazing
- I think you could find a more fitting bg for this, as it is now it seems rather generic. You can pm me in-game if you'd like help with it.
- The red combo color provides a stark contrast with the other combos, is there a reason for this?
- I'd like to compliment you on this map, I can really see the effort you put into it and it turned out very awesome. Original style and cool sliders. Keep it up!
- 00:46:637 (1,2,3,4) - You could really improve this pattern if you fixed the slider and adjusted some note positions, like so http://puu.sh/hwbrO/7cb887176e.png
- 00:54:478 (6) - This is slightly too close to 00:54:819 (1) - , which kills the blanket you were going for. Try moving it to x345 y200. You can either stack 00:55:842 (3) - afterwards or leave it as-is.
- 00:55:671 (2) - ^Following up on this, you could put this circle closer to 00:54:819 (1) - to make the blankets more even. Of course, adjust 00:56:183 (1,2,3) - after that to maintain consistency.
- 01:06:239 (4) - I think it would look cleaner if you curved this slider out a bit, like so http://puu.sh/hwbOT/9bd982edce.png
- 01:18:853 (2,1) - This blanket could use some improvement
- 01:31:637 - Nice job! This section is really cool!
- 01:49:194 (3,4,1,2,1) - Why don't you try something like this? Would look much smoother in my opinion.
- 01:32:489 (1) - I think this would flow way cooler if you ctrl + G'd it
- 02:04:876 (1) - Try moving this to x381 y243 instead to prevent the sloppy overlap
- 02:07:433 (2) - This is suuuper nitpicky but move this like one osupixel to the right and it'll be perfect!
- 04:11:012 (10) - Try turning this into a 1/4 slider and then stack 04:11:183 (1) - on top of 04:10:245 (4) - like this
- 04:16:467 (10) - Ctrl + G'ing this would make the flow so much smoother here
- 04:24:137 (7,8,9,10) - I think these doubles might be a bit too spaced out internally but it might just be me
- 04:54:137 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Sounds good to me!