Hi! as a continuation from this mod p/3868709#p3868709 so no kds
dang so many BN came idk if this is really helpful so yeah
[General]
goodluck~!
dang so many BN came idk if this is really helpful so yeah
[General]
byfar's Extra is too easy for me. i got C
and i just realized that byfar's diff has no stack leniency so idk i hope its fine
- 00:00:233 (1,2,1) - gdi i really thought this was a triplet ;w; well idk maybe im just noob. switching nc here 00:00:552 (1,2) - can really improve the reading because this 00:00:233 (1,2,1) - and this 00:00:711 (2,3,4,5,6) - are different pattern
- 00:16:190 (4) - lmao blanket nazi ahahdgfdsh move the last node to 204|264
- 00:20:179 (5,1) - hnng this anti-jump feels really awkward for me because it's between two sliders. different case with 00:20:020 (4,5) - tho because its between a circle and a slider and there's a challenge because we have to click really fast (at the upbeat and downbeat) meanwhile 00:20:179 (5,1) - we only click at the two consecutive upbeat and the anti jumps kinda makes it quite awkward for me. well idk why i'd explained that long. i'd lower 00:20:179 (5) - a bit to create jump with 00:20:498 (1) - http://puu.sh/g7lfn/9cb29a747d.jpg since moving 00:20:498 (1) - can ruin your pattern afterward and it's really a hassle
- 00:25:445 (6,1) - same like above. i think jumps like this 00:30:392 (5,1) - is really neat. and dang this one is really low
- 00:30:711 (1) - finish at slider's head? idk i think it's good to accent the vocal here
- 00:32:226 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - changing the sampleset into normal is quite good to emphasize the drums, rather than having a somewhat quiet stream when the song is getting tense
- 00:42:998 (4) - nc? idk the vocal has a kinda different atmosphere here so idk yeah only suggestion
- 00:44:594 (1,2) - switch nc? since only one combo here is weird 00:43:637 (1) - . and switching nc still make sense since 00:44:913 (2) - is at the big downbeat
- 00:48:105 (2,3) - i suggest adding some whistle pattern like you did at 00:46:350 (1,2,3) - since both patterns also have piano in the song
- 01:17:307 (4) - 01:19:701 (2) - finish at slider's tail seems weird tbh. i'd add finish here 01:20:498 - 01:21:137 - 01:21:775 - 01:22:413 - to balance the finish hitsound pattern here 01:19:222 (1,2) - . and maybe you should add finish at 01:17:307 (4) - 's head, not tail
- 00:01:030 (5) - idk just personal preference. i'd make this one more curved a bit since previous slider is also curved http://puu.sh/g7mp2/e501aa12b0.jpg . also it kinda improve the flow more. and gdi why is this one so out of border
- 00:28:318 (1,2) - switch nc? since you added nc at upbeat before, like 00:23:371 (1) - 00:25:924 (1) -
- 00:38:131 (3) - nc? this one also have sv change like 00:38:371 (1) - yet you only nc-ed 00:38:371 (1) -
- 01:05:658 (5,6) - hmm idk these two are quite close and its not really neat for me idk i'd separate them a bit http://puu.sh/g7n0f/5e0fd7eb86.jpg
- dang thats a lot of nc
- 00:02:626 (1) - i understand that you nc-ed this because of the sv change. but theres some inconsistencies with 00:05:179 (1) - 00:07:733 (1) - 00:10:286 (6) - . if i were you, i'd nc 00:08:052 (2) - and 00:10:286 (6) - to fix the inconsistency
- 00:11:562 (6) - i suggest to nc this since the music is quite different here.
- 00:14:594 (1) - dang remove this nc. no need to accent the long vocal tbh since its still in the same combo with 00:12:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
- 00:14:594 (1) - also ctrl+G this makes the flow more interesting, continuing the circular flow from here 00:13:637 (3,4,5,6) -
- 00:17:786 (1) - remove nc?
- 00:18:743 - 00:19:222 - 00:19:701 - hmm these sv changes is kinda weird unnecessary since there's no significant changes in the song. i think making it like 00:16:509 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - is better
- 00:20:498 (1,3) - these two have different sv even though they're in the same combo and there's nothing in the song that makes them different. i suggest to change 00:20:498 (1) - 's sv into 1.25x like 00:20:977 (3) -
- 00:26:881 - 00:27:360 - also weird sv changes. there's no significant change in vocal which is why it feels weird when you accented them
- 00:28:956 - ^
- 00:33:105 (1) - i suggest snapping this kick slider to 1/8 bsd http://puu.sh/g7ogg/c27b53d206.jpg more challenging, i guess. and it accent the drums well
- 00:36:615 (1) - ggggggg the sv gggggggggg i suppose you have to add slow slider like this somewhere for consistency. i'd make 00:37:254 (3,4) - like this http://puu.sh/g7ouj/57f3965860.jpg . i only changed 00:37:254 (3) - 's sv into 0.75x and nc-ed it like 00:36:615 (1) -
- 00:40:286 (1,2) - switch nc. because single combo like 00:39:967 (1) - is really weird. if you follow, remove nc 00:40:685 (1) -
- 00:42:839 (1) - remove nc? single combo is weird. and this slider is still in the same combo with 00:42:360 (1,2) - tbh
- 00:49:701 (1) - ^
goodluck~!