Count 0-1-2-3 as usual.
[BASIC]
00:44:065 (44065|1) - Move this to 2 pls pls pls I got people to testplay and they all missed here
[NOVICE]
01:01:254 (61254|3) - Move to 2, again testplaying this seems unbalanced.
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In both ADV diffs I suggest to listen to my SV suggestions.
[EXHAUST]
00:00:849 (849|0) - Move to 3, pitch.
00:01:092 (1092|3) - Move to 0, pitch. (If you don't like these hand switches feel free to smooth them out. This is only really for example)
00:01:173 (1173|2,1254|1) - Shift right by 1 perhaps.
00:01:497 (1497|3) - Move to 2
00:01:578 (1578|2) - Move to 3
00:01:660 (1660|1,1741|0) - Shift right by 1
00:01:822 (1822|2) - Move to 0
etc.
Pitch relevancy is important in this stream and it'll be good if you can nail it down here. I'm sure you can rearrange it appropriately like my example.
00:11:308 (11308|3,11957|3) - Why only 1 note in these parts, but you have 2 notes 00:12:605 (12605|2,12605|3) - here?
Then in the next stream you just start using 2 notes for all.
Best to add to the points I specified.
00:16:984 (16984|1) - Move to 2
00:17:065 (17065|2) - Move to 1
00:17:146 (17146|1) - Move to 3. A 1/8 trill at 185 is probably not a good idea. ;w;
Long suggestion00:18:930 (18930|0,19011|1,19092|2,19092|3,19173|0,19173|1,19254|3,19335|2,19416|1,19416|0,19578|0,19660|1,19741|3,19741|2,19822|0,19822|1,19903|3,19984|2,20065|0,20065|1,20173|3,20173|2,20281|1,20281|0,20389|2,20389|3,20497|1,20497|0,20605|2,20605|3) - CTRL+H
00:20:714 (20714|0) - Move to 2
00:20:876 (20876|1,20957|2) - Move left by 1.
Currently this pattern has reverse pitch relevancy which is kinda awkward. You hear those 0-1 and 3-2 parts being reversed, so it's best to CTRL+H all of this imo.
00:32:065 (32065|3) - Move to 2
00:32:389 (32389|1) - Move to 3
00:32:714 (32714|3) - Move to 1
00:32:876 (32876|1,33038|2) - Shift right by 1
00:33:200 (33200|3,33362|2,33524|1) - CTRL+G
00:33:687 (33687|3) - Move to 1
00:34:011 (34011|2) - Move to 3
00:34:335 (34335|3) - Move to 1. -- These suggestions are recommended as they help the pitch relevancy of this section. IMO pitch relevancy in slow parts are really important.
00:37:254 (37254|0) - Move to 2
00:37:416 (37416|2) - Move to 1
00:37:578 (37578|1) - Move to 3
00:37:741 (37741|2,37903|3) - Shift left by 1
00:38:065 (38065|2) - Move to 1
00:38:227 (38227|0,38389|3) - CTRL+H -- Again for pitch relevancy. If you don't follow this patterning, at least you can rearrange them to follow it yourself.
00:39:687 (39687|2) - Move to 3, necessary for balance.
00:41:470 (41470|2) - Move to 1? The next chord sounds slightly higher pitch.
00:42:443 (42443|1) - Move to 3 for pitch and slightly better balance.
00:46:335 (46335|2,46416|1) - Shift right by 1
00:46:497 (46497|3) - Move to 1, pitch
00:50:227 (50227|1) - Move to 0 for balance.
00:51:768 (51768|1,51808|0,51849|1) - Again we have this 1/8 trill on the left hand which isn't that suitable for this difficulty IMO.
Try this:
00:51:849 (51849|1) - Move to 2
00:51:970 (51970|2) - Move to 1
00:52:011 (52011|1) - Move to 0
00:52:051 (52051|0) - Move to 2
00:52:092 (52092|2) - Move to 1
00:52:133 (52133|1) - Move to 0
00:52:173 (52173|0) - Move to 2.
00:58:578 (58578|2) - Delete, to make it consistent with 01:01:092 (61092|2,61092|0) - . Also from here, make the chords the same too.
01:14:876 (74876|3) - etc. This slow section should be following pitch relevancy a lot more strictly.
01:35:633 (95633|2,95633|1) - Shift right by 1? Seems to be better for balance.
01:36:443 (96443|3) - Try this:
01:37:903 (97903|0) - Delete, doesn't play well and no reason to have a 3 note chord here.
01:38:984 (98984|3) - And here, it's probably best to delete this as it doesn't play that well and the 3 note chord doesn't signify anything in particular. It's fine if you want to keep this, although I really do suggest you sort this part out.
01:43:660 (103660|3,103660|2) - This chord kinda ruins the effect of 01:43:741 (103741|1,103741|0,103822|2,103822|3,103903|1,103903|0,103984|3,103984|2) - the cutting section here. Perhaps it may be a good idea to remove 01:43:660 (103660|3) - ?
01:54:119 (114119|0) - Hmm, perhaps a more simplified pattern may be suitable for this small 1/3 chord part.
I'm suggesting something like this:
It goes well with the feel of the music, and plays a lot better than what is currently there.
[INFINITE]
00:00:606 (606|0) - Nothing feels pitch relevant in this stream ;w;.
00:07:335 - Add at 1 for the small piano sound?
00:15:038 (15038|1,15119|2,15200|1,15362|1) - This whole part doesn't really feel that comfortable, too cluttered. Try:
00:15:200 (15200|1) - Move to 3
00:15:362 (15362|1) - Move to 2
00:15:768 (15768|3) - Move to 1
00:15:849 (15849|2) - Move to 0 -- Overall a lot smoother pattern.
00:20:065 (20065|1) - Something like this is perhaps more consistent:
00:21:687 (21687|0,21687|1,22335|1,22335|2) - These have 2 LNs? But 00:23:957 (23957|1,24605|2) - only 1? Perhaps make it more consistent.
00:25:687 (25687|3,25687|2,25795|1,25795|2) - CTRL+G works a lot better for this part. (Makes the 1/3 ascending chord pattern consistent)
00:31:335 (31335|2,31416|2) - Change this jack, definitely not fitting here.
00:32:065 (32065|0,32227|1) - Etc. I've already mentioned lots in the EXH part about making these slow section patterns a lot more pitch relevant. Try to rearrange some.
00:37:416 (37416|0) - Like eg. Why wouldn't this be on 2? o.o
00:47:551 (47551|2) - This should be a chord too, since it's a cutting section that lasts for 5 1/4 beats. So,
00:47:551 (47551|2) - Add at 3
00:47:633 (47633|3) - Move to 0
00:48:200 (48200|2) - Same concept, add at 0
00:48:281 (48281|0) - Move to 3
00:48:362 (48362|3,48443|2) - CTRL+G
00:52:051 (52051|0,52051|3) - No real need for a chord in this 1/8 and it's rough coming off of the LN too.
Try this:
00:52:011 (52011|1) - Move to 3
00:52:051 (52051|3) - Delete
00:52:092 (52092|2,52133|1) - CTRL+H -- makes the pattern generally smoother and a lot friendlier to play.
00:53:308 (53308|0,53308|1) - Just thinking a chord like this probably suits 1-2 better instead of 0-1 here.
00:56:065 (56065|1) - Move to 2, higher pitched. ( and stops this 00:55:741 (55741|1,55903|1,56065|1,56227|1) - )
00:58:822 (58822|2,58822|3) - Same concept as previous suggestions, probably fits a lot better at 1-2
01:04:173 (64173|1,64173|3,64173|0,64497|2,64497|3,64497|0) - I'm seeing these three note chords and then I see 01:04:822 (64822|1,64822|0) -
01:07:984 (67984|2) - I mean well, adding at 3 doesn't do any harm... Makes it more consistent I suppose
Next slow section pitch relevancy pls
01:28:822 (88822|3,88822|1,88822|2,88822|0) - Not quite sure 4 notes is fitting here. The noise is basically a drowned out synth. Im thinking perhaps a 2 chord w/ LN works a lot better and just makes a lot more sense.
01:39:200 (99200|0) - Move to 1? Plays a slightly bit better according to the song (the chord shouldn't be the same since it's a completely different noise)
01:48:281 (108281|0,108281|2,108281|1,108281|3,108605|1,108605|0,108605|3,108605|2) - You sure you wanna keep these? ;x 01:48:768 (108768|1) - Might as well move to 2 if you do just for balance.