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[ADVANCED Lv.12]
I don't particularly think this difficulty is fitting of SV. Save that for ADV 14.
00:10:011 (10011|3,10173|3,10335|3,10497|3,10660|2,10984|3) - Making this a trill on 1-2 instead will feel a lot more comfortable. CTRL+H this, and move back.
00:32:551 (32551|0) - Move to 2
00:32:714 (32714|3) - Move to 0
00:32:876 (32876|2) - Move to 3
00:33:038 (33038|0) - Move to 1
00:33:200 (33200|1) - Move to 0 -- captures pitch better.
00:35:146 (35146|0) - Move to 2
00:35:308 (35308|3) - Move to 0
00:35:470 (35470|2) - Move to 1
00:35:633 (35633|0) - Move to 3
00:35:957 (35957|3) - Move to 0 -- slight adaptation of first pattern, captures pitch well.
00:42:119 (42119|0) - Suggest to do this: (I want this stream to start on 0)
00:46:254 (46254|1) - Move to 0, uncomfortable
00:52:335 (52335|1) - Delete or change to something else, serves no purpose (other 1/2 LNs do)
00:53:308 (53308|2,53633|1,53795|2) - CTRL+H, better balance.
00:54:768 (54768|2) - Add at 0
00:57:362 (57362|0,57362|3,57687|0,57687|1) - CTRL+H, because pitch descends at the end (so LN should be on left)
01:01:578 (61578|1) - Try: (better for pitch)
01:12:605 (72605|0) - More comfortable at 1
01:17:633 (77633|3) - Move to 1
01:17:795 (77795|1,77957|0) - Shift right by 2
01:18:281 (78281|2) - Move to 0 -- pitch
01:38:876 (98876|2) - Move to 1, a lot more balanced / playable.
01:42:930 (102930|2) - Move to 0, balance (no notes in 0 orz) (maybe instead, you can rearrange other parts)
[ADVANCED Lv.14]
SV
16416 - 0.75 is better, slightly more smoother and better transition into notes again.
21362 to 24930 - not sure if these are necessary for this diff. They only really help the aesthetics and seem quite unnecessary (better for EXH and INF)
52497+ In these next SVs, slowdown (the 0.5x) points should be changed to something inbetween 0.65~0.8. Feels better for an easier diff like this.
83957 to 86227 - same as 21362 to 24930 -
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00:07:335 (7335|2) - This note is very inaudible compared to rest, consider removing and adding 00:07:092 (7092|1,7254|1) - here.
00:10:092 (10092|2,10416|2) - CTRL+H? optional.
00:14:227 (14227|2,14227|1,14389|0,14470|1,14551|3) - For some reason this feels kinda awkward. You can do two things:
1. Something like this: (At first glance, doesn't look that great, but it's good because it alleviates bias on left hand and spread things out a lot better.)
2. Turn the LN into three 1/3 LN. Something like this (captures the synth a lot better)
00:21:362 (21362|3,21362|1,22011|1,22011|3,22660|3,22660|1) - Repeated 3 times?
00:27:524 (27524|3,27524|0) - Hear noise in the red tick, so it's best to make these LN normal note, and map normally.
Something like this might do fine:
00:33:362 (33362|2) - Move to 1
00:33:524 (33524|0) - Move to 2
00:33:687 (33687|1) - Make LN? Because 00:33:849 (33849|2) - this noise isn't that audible
00:38:065 (38065|1) - Move to 2 for balance
00:42:119 (42119|0) - Stream could be a tiny bit more balanced, try this:
01:11:633 (71633|1) - Move to 2
01:28:173 (88173|2,88173|1,88173|0) - No need for 3, major diff spike. Consider rearranging.
01:43:092 (103092|0,103254|3,103416|0) - So empty all of a sudden? This is kiai time!
Will mod last 2 diffs next!