ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

hi o/


[Easy]

1. http://puu.sh/eHLE1/19d0383582.png lol, just fix spacing between 00:06:313 (1,2) - How could I miss that?
2. 00:18:465 (4) - i think some like it looks better (is curved like 00:16:946 (2) - and do blanket with 00:19:984 (1) - ) I like the current motion more, keep for now.
   
   
3. 00:23:782 (5) - i think, curved is better fo consistency with 00:21:503 (2,3) - I don't think slider-shape consistency is needed here, the current one feels fine too.
4. 00:57:959 (1) - may be... it will look more consistent Like the flatter shape, it works so well with the vocal here
   
   

[Normal]

1. 00:49:605 - missing note? like 00:50:743 (4) - (pls, for consistency). Not needed, if you listen closer to the background instruments, this actually follows them pretty well.
2. 01:10:111 (1) - pls, make a bit more curved, like 01:11:630 (2) - But I like flat curved sliders too ;~;
3. 01:11:630 (2,2) - pls!, improve the stack (disable grid snap)
   
4. 01:17:326 (2) - whistle??
5. 01:18:845 (5) - ^, in head? It's the same as in every diff, no change.

[hard]

1. mm... mm... really, the start was not intutive, imo...
   if you move spinner end to 00:02:896 - and make some like: Oh, that's neat, I'll try it out.
   
   (remove hitsounds to spinner) feels better
2. 00:11:630 (3,1) - ugly overlap :'( Ugh, fine... increased the jump.
3. 00:28:908 (4) - i think you move it a bit, looks better:
   
   
4. 00:37:263 (3) - why a stack??!, this broken the flow, i really think it is a bad idea...
5. 00:43:149 (4,1) - overlap :'( Keep, I like this one. :3
6. 01:16:946 (3) - mm... idk xD, imo, curved will looks better Flow > aesthetics for me, i feel pretty fine withthe straight slider here
   
   

[Insane]

1. 00:20:744 (3) - two circles feels better with vocals. Feels not smooth enough to play imo.
2. 00:25:301 (3) - no ignore drums pls ._. Ikr, but it follows the vocal so well too. Let me hear another opinion about this.
3. 00:27:200 (4) - mm.. overmap??, why xD It's not overmap :c Listen closely to the music, there's also a beat on the blue tick.
4. 01:15:617 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - orz... for me.. this stack is bored D:, the music is very intence here, with a stack this lost emotion ._. My suggestion is it:
   
   Pandoras Box(?)

   1. move 01:15:238 (3,4,5) - like (1.6x spacing):
      
   2. make a 1/2 slider:
      
   3. .. and make the magic:
      
   ... or something (?) hehehe I really like to keep it clean here (as it is for the whole map). It's the only stream session in the song, and spacing it kind of works against the style i'm going for in this map. No change.
5. 01:20:364 (5,2) - stack is not perfect

Good song and mapset

Good luck

Xelasto wrote:

From my modding queue!

Easy

00:38:212 (2,3,1) - Improve triangle
00:41:250 (2,3,1) - ^
00:53:402 (3,1) - Same shape But they are oO
01:07:073 (1,2) - Blanket Not intended, and it'd break up from the windmill pattern.

I don't know if parts like 00:13:149 (2,3) are good for beginners, IDK. But anyway, nice job on this

Normal

00:05:554 (4) - Try and make this a repeat slider but still amount to the same length I don't see a reason for this to happen.
00:15:427 (1) - Improve blanket Not supposed to be one.
00:24:541 (1) - Ctrl H this to copy 3 I don't really know what you want me to do here, but doing this would kill the spacing.
00:28:339 (2,3,4) - This may be too confusing for beginners It's a normal diff, players should be able to comprehend it at this level.
00:31:377 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:39:351 (1) - Try and make it so 00:39:731 is the beginning of a note or slider, as it is a strong beat. Will think about this, but the slider follows vocal pretty well too.
01:16:187 (1) - Try and make this curve more to improve 3's blanket.
01:23:592 (4,5) - Try and improve blankets It looks fine as it is already.
01:25:870 (2,3,4) - IMO this doesn't look good nor flow well, but that might just be me. People like it :c It's fine, really.
Approach rate 5 Like current AR more to handle these 1/2 taps better.

Pretty good difficulty. Not much wrong here.

Hard

00:03:655 (2,3) - Blanket? Not intended.
00:11:250 (2) - Put this more inbetween 3 and 1 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2604135 Idk, but I like the current pattern more.
00:12:769 (1,2) - Please don't touch, really noticeable.That's intended.
00:16:187 (3) - Improve blanket
00:20:744 (6,7) - Make same slider Curved 7 instead.
00:28:339 (3) - Move middle point up by 1
00:43:149 (4,1) - Don't touch Again, intended.
00:57:959 (1,3) - Make same slider Why, the current pattern works fine too.
01:01:756 (1) - No New combo I think this is fine, wait for other people commenting on it.
01:07:073 (1) - Improve blanket
01:14:858 (1,2,3,4,5) - Improve this star formation Looks fine to me.
01:14:288 (3,6) - and at the same time stack these There's no need to stack at this point.
Approach rate 7 Like the current AR more.

Great difficulty. Just a few slight problems that don't look good. Also, a lot of the combos seem to short for hard mode.

Insane

00:05:554 (4) - This dip doesn't flow well I feel it's fine here.
00:10:111 (5,6) - Reverse the position on the timeline to flow better and mirror 1,2, and 3.
00:16:946 (2,3,4,5) - Make the same shape. Can't see a reason for that to happen, as the current pattern is fine already.
00:24:921 (2) - Center this more in the middle of 3
00:34:794 (1) - Make this sort of like 3, except upside down like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2603665
00:35:174 (5,6,7) - Make all the same slider (Copy and paste) They are actually. I just rotated them by 120/240°.
00:37:832 (1) - No new combo This one's fine.
00:39:351 (6) - Instead make this a copy of 5, then Ctrl H, G, then place it the left of 5 Again, it's only a bit rotated, still the same.
00:43:149 (1) - No new combo Needed to make the play more intuitively here.
00:48:845 (3) - New combo here instead of 1 NC'd here to make the jump more intuitively.
00:57:959 (1,3) - Same shape. I don't really know how you came up with the shape issues, but this one's perfectly symmetrical to the y-axis. >.<
01:01:756 (1) - No NC Needed for big jumps.
01:26:440 (1) - ^ But it fits well to the pattern :c.

Good job on this difficulty. It flows well, etc. Looks a little messy though. A few short combos

Good job on this map. It flows well and the hitsounds are beautiful. Some of the combos could be improved, and the map doesn't feel as clean as it could be in all difficulties though. (especially insane.) However, these aren't small problems and could be easily fixed. Keep mapping. I hope this gets ranked.

Easy and Normal look fine.

Hard

SPOILER

00:21:503(1) Overlap? Could snap it onto the 5 circle or move it somewhere else
00:49:415(2,3) Switch for a better sound beat?
01:02:326(1) I wouldn't have a NC there
01:04:605(2) Overlap
01:08:022(3)^
01:08:782(1,2) Switch the slider and circle for readability since the slider is on a red tick in a more clicky section
01:12:389(3,4) ^
01:27:877(5) Maybe align slider with the 4th back and forth slider

Insane

SPOILER

00:07:643(1,2) Align the slider end with the beginning of 2nd circle for polish
00:08:212(2) Place around x:352 y:342 to prevent overlap
00:25:372(3) Messed up slider from slider speed changes I guess. It also doesn't look well blanketed
00:27:200(4) Bit hard to read, or give it more emphasis, doesn't feel like the beat is there
00:54:179(3) Curve it the over way and blanket it with that 5th circle. Also makes a nice pair with the 4th slider
01:15:617(5,6,7,8,9) Make it into a moving stream for difficulty
01:16:946(3,4,5) Put another circle pattern in there, the square feels like it breaks flow and overlaps with 01:17:516(1)

Outside of the mapset
lmao

Zoom in on that pic. Add a space between 'isa'. Whatever

lol

Mikii wrote:

Hey from #modreq

Easy and Normal look fine.

Hard

SPOILER

00:21:503(1) Overlap? Could snap it onto the 5 circle or move it somewhere else Would break up the spacing. THis should be fine, both objects are far away in the timeline.
00:49:415(2,3) Switch for a better sound beat? It follows the instruments well in the background.
01:02:326(1) I wouldn't have a NC there It's there for the spacing change.
01:04:605(2) Overlap This should be fine. Will think about it.
01:08:022(3)^^
01:08:782(1,2) Switch the slider and circle for readability since the slider is on a red tick in a more clicky section It's there as there is a strong beat to follow at the red tick.
01:12:389(3,4) ^ Oh, I forgot I wanted to change this, thanks!
01:27:877(5) Maybe align slider with the 4th back and forth slider I like it more this way.

Insane

SPOILER

00:07:643(1,2) Align the slider end with the beginning of 2nd circle for polish This should flow well already.
00:08:212(2) Place around x:352 y:342 to prevent overlap The previous circle faded away in time already, so it's fine.
00:25:372(3) Messed up slider from slider speed changes I guess. It also doesn't look well blanketed I don't really see a problem here. oO
00:27:200(4) Bit hard to read, or give it more emphasis, doesn't feel like the beat is there It is there, just delete and listen closer.
00:54:179(3) Curve it the over way and blanket it with that 5th circle. Also makes a nice pair with the 4th slider Hmm, guess I can try this out.
01:15:617(5,6,7,8,9) Make it into a moving stream for difficulty Not needed, I feel comfortably with this stacked stream.
01:16:946(3,4,5) Put another circle pattern in there, the square feels like it breaks flow and overlaps with 01:17:516(1) I rearranged a slider only.

Outside of the mapset
lmao

Zoom in on that pic. Add a space between 'isa'. Whatever Not needed :3

lol hue

Good luck!

Mikii wrote:

No kudosu???
But yeah most of what I said was just personal preferences and nitpicks. The map is good enough as it is. I'm still learning so kudosu or not, at least you got some use out of the mod.

I guess I should read that it was a BAT req before I started

Mao wrote:

Everyone tries the speedrank *runs*

jonathanlfj wrote:

woot woot

[General]
offset needs about -8ms
also better fix the title xD

[Easy]
00:09:351 (1) - maybe a finish on the start here (applies to all diffs)
00:45:427 (3) - missing a NC here i think
01:08:782 - since there is a clap here, consider swapping 01:08:592 (2) for a 1/2 slider I prefer it the way it is currently, 1/2 slider here feels a bit strange to me.
01:23:782 (2) - there is actually no clap on the end here, similar to 01:18:845 (5)

[Normal]
00:16:187 (2) - use a repeat slider here like 00:19:225 (2) would fit better imo
00:34:415 (2) - same thing here, since there is a vocal you can follow at 00:34:605
01:03:845 - another sound that can be covered for build up, try making 01:03:655 (2) a 1/2 slider
01:18:465 (4) - this note flows a bit weird, I would have done something like this:

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:00:806 (1) - i would decrease the volume more at the end for the fade effect to be stronger
00:57:769 (3) - i was thinking maybe you could center this note to carry forward the symmetry from 00:56:440 (1,2)
01:01:756 (1) - i dont really find this NC necessary, since it belongs to the same musical section and pattern as 01:00:997 (1,2). I seem to have set the NC unconsciously here orz
01:02:326 (1) - this is fine since it contains a spacing change and a transition of the music
01:09:351 (4,5) - i can't really tell what these short kick sliders are following in the music, you are better off using some sort of jump pattern here to make the emphasis
01:22:168 (5) - this would be an insane-style gimmick, do not recommend overmaps like this on a hard diff
01:25:301 (1,2,3) - oh god my OCD, please fix the blanket spacing with 01:25:301 (1,3) lol allright

[Insane]
00:00:807 (1) - same as Hard, maybe a lower volume for the spinner end
00:25:301 (3) - there is a pretty significant beat at 00:25:491, i would try not to skip it Thought nobody would notice it, allright~
01:01:946 (2) - maybe you could center this note to preserve the symmetry a bit
01:20:364 (5,1) - this sudden direction change is a little hard to play, you could try ctrl+g on 01:19:984 (3,4) to make a zig-zag flow out of this I don't really want to jump here since I'm already jumping in the next combo. I moved the slider a bit to the left to redeem this.

thats about all, let me know after you are done

HabiHolic wrote:

yo pho!

i will check your map!

trammiexo wrote:

Hi from my modding queue! bạn có khỏe không? :> Bạn khỏe :>

"Whoa vietnamese modder/mapper, that's a rare sight. I need to learn vietnamese again...."
Lol ikr.. I never met a Vietnamese player on osu personally... maybe from some multiroom but definitely do not know them personally. But here's a viet mapper right here xD

Easy

00:13:711 (2,3,4) - Flow feels a bit weird. At 00:12:381 (1,2) these are parallel to each other then combo 3 comes and --- to me it seem visually wrong. I know DS is also a pain to deal with too (when you move one, must move other to have consistent ds) but I'd move combo 3 to the left in a way, and then adjust the follow objects' DS. you dont have to agree with my opinion though, just my thought I might fix the flow at that section a bit when the next BN is coming for a recheck. Your solution is not really viable since it causes inconsistent spacing in the combo which really want to avoid in general in easy diffs.

Normal:

00:13:141 (2) - You can make this stack with 00:11:622 (5,6) just turn of DS, adjust, then adjust 00:13:711 (3) to maintain consistent DS Stack is not what I really intended to do here since I do that 1/2 slider spacing consistently at the beginning. Keep
01:02:128 (4) - I think pointing the slider outward would look more appealing I like the sharp angle for emphasis :p

sry if its not as much help but, im still learning in modding and mapping ;w; best of luck though, its a nice map set ;DD No prob, you got a point tho. Thanks for mod anyway

DakeDekaane wrote:

Didn't see people were already crowding on this map *cries*

1. 00:03:267 - Whistle is redundant with no kick, just placing clap is enough. Same goes for 00:04:597 (6) - 00:10:103 - 00:10:673 - 00:11:242 - 00:11:622 (4) - 00:20:736 - 01:00:230 - 01:03:267 - 01:06:685 (4) - 01:11:242 (4) - You need to be fair to all snares, please.
2. 00:06:875 - Missing whistle. Same for 00:08:774 - 00:11:052 (2) - 00:11:432 - 00:11:812 (5) - 00:14:090 - 00:14:470 - 00:27:192 - 01:09:913 (6) - 01:16:179 - 01:17:888 - 01:27:856 (4) - You also need to be fair to all kicks, please.
3. 00:12:002 (6) - You can remove whistle here.
4. 00:13:141 - Missing clap.
5. 00:45:040 (2) - CTRL+G makes the flow more comfortable.
6. 00:46:938 (5,1) - Also a CTRL+G for vocal on 00:46:938 - and kick on 00:47:318 - , since you didn't put any hitsounds on 00:47:128 - which makes it hollow even the music has a tiny synthesizer sound.
7. 00:51:495 - Default soft whistle. Same applies on 00:51:495 - & 00:54:913 - .
8. 00:51:495 (5,1,2) - The usage of distance snapping here is really poor, even most people have listened to this song so many times, not everyone who listen to this song for the first time can clearly read the gap in between.
9. 00:57:761 (3) - Delete this for the sake of distance snap, the music doesn't provide potentials for such a big jump to be honest. 00:57:951 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - are different because of solid vocals.
10. 01:10:008 (7) - Overmapping doesn't fit with the whole diff.
11. 01:11:622 - This should be a clap instead.
12. 01:12:381 (4) - Swap the hitsound, kick is on slider tail instead of head.
13. 01:15:040 - Remove the whistle and put it on 01:15:230 - where kick is found.
14. 01:15:609 - Lower the volume a bit on streams please, it's too much like a machine gun shooting now.
15. 01:19:217 - Why not finish? Whistle is of too low pitch.
16. 01:27:666 (2,3) - Claps missing.
    Copied hitsounds again to other diffs

1. 00:00:799 - Redundant green line.
2. 00:43:141 (4,1) - This placement can be polished by ignoring distance snap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2765657
3. 00:46:938 (4,1) - Your mapping style is to alter the spacing suddenly sometimes with no grounds on the music which makes it really untidy from my point of view. 00:48:078 (3,4,1) - Also this is really confusing, it can be a 1/1 halt if I am just looking at the spacing. And these: 00:53:014 (4,1,2) - 01:04:976 (3,4,1) - 01:18:837 (5,1) - 01:20:356 (4) - Maybe recessive jumps look more tidier and neat.
4. 00:50:736 (1,4) - Intentional no-blanket?
5. 01:18:078 (2) - This flow is quite uncomfortable, I suggest doing something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2765699
6. 01:25:293 (1,2,3) - Avoid the unaesthetic overlapping: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2765711

1. AR5 is fine enough for such BPM, 5.5 is too exaggerated.
2. 00:49:597 - Add a circle here for the sake of avoiding polarity and the kick.
3. 01:04:027 (1) - May curve it facing another orientation: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2765745

IamKwaN wrote:

I love maps with no GDs :3
Pop for now, I hope you don't mind as you have so many BN-deep darkfriends above who are glad to help qualify. Uhm okay. I don't know how they pop up in this thread either
[I]

1. 00:03:267 - Whistle is redundant with no kick, just placing clap is enough. Same goes for 00:04:597 (6) - 00:10:103 - 00:10:673 - 00:11:242 - 00:11:622 (4) - 00:20:736 - 01:00:230 - 01:03:267 - 01:06:685 (4) - 01:11:242 (4) - You need to be fair to all snares, please. #BlameMyEars
2. 00:06:875 - Missing whistle. Same for 00:08:774 - 00:11:052 (2) - 00:11:432 - 00:11:812 (5) - 00:14:090 - 00:14:470 - 00:27:192 - 01:09:913 (6) - 01:16:179 - 01:17:888 - 01:27:856 (4) - You also need to be fair to all kicks, please. #BlameMyEars
3. 00:12:002 (6) - You can remove whistle here.
4. 00:13:141 - Missing clap.
5. 00:45:040 (2) - CTRL+G makes the flow more comfortable.
6. 00:46:938 (5,1) - Also a CTRL+G for vocal on 00:46:938 - and kick on 00:47:318 - , since you didn't put any hitsounds on 00:47:128 - which makes it hollow even the music has a tiny synthesizer sound.
7. 00:51:495 - Default soft whistle. Same applies on 00:51:495 - & 00:54:913 - . I'd rather leave these out, I don't think the piano notes need more emphasis.
8. 00:51:495 (5,1,2) - The usage of distance snapping here is really poor, even most people have listened to this song so many times, not everyone who listen to this song for the first time can clearly read the gap in between. Lowered.
9. 00:57:761 (3) - Delete this for the sake of distance snap, the music doesn't provide potentials for such a big jump to be honest. 00:57:951 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - are different because of solid vocals. Kept that note as it is pretty dominant in the track. Lowered the spacing though.
10. 01:10:008 (7) - Overmapping doesn't fit with the whole diff.
11. 01:11:622 - This should be a clap instead.
12. 01:12:381 (4) - Swap the hitsound, kick is on slider tail instead of head.
13. 01:15:040 - Remove the whistle and put it on 01:15:230 - where kick is found.
14. 01:15:609 - Lower the volume a bit on streams please, it's too much like a machine gun shooting now.
15. 01:19:217 - Why not finish? Whistle is of too low pitch.Finish feels over the top here, there isn't a cymbal here either and the snare isn't really strong either.
16. 01:27:666 (2,3) - Claps missing.
    Copied hitsounds again to other diffs

[H]

1. 00:00:799 - Redundant green line.
2. 00:43:141 (4,1) - This placement can be polished by ignoring distance snap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2765657 Why evryone hates this orz.
3. 00:46:938 (4,1) - Your mapping style is to alter the spacing suddenly sometimes with no grounds on the music which makes it really untidy from my point of view. Equally spaced now. Yeah, I got that quirk to sometimes space strangely in hard maps, not sure where that comes from.
   00:48:078 (3,4,1) - Also this is really confusing, it can be a 1/1 halt if I am just looking at the spacing. I liked the halt at this point though.
   And these: 00:53:014 (4,1,2) - 01:04:976 (3,4,1) - 01:18:837 (5,1) - 01:20:356 (4) - Maybe recessive jumps look more tidier and neat. I do that sometimes in the map already, at the sections you pointed out I don't think it is necessary.
4. 00:50:736 (1,4) - Intentional no-blanket? yes
5. 01:18:078 (2) - This flow is quite uncomfortable, I suggest doing something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2765699
6. 01:25:293 (1,2,3) - Avoid the unaesthetic overlapping: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2765711 I don't feel this looks so bad. :/

[N]

1. AR5 is fine enough for such BPM, 5.5 is too exaggerated.
2. 00:49:597 - Add a circle here for the sake of avoiding polarity and the kick.
3. 01:04:027 (1) - May curve it facing another orientation: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2765745 Like the current pattern more though.

1. 00:18:457 (4,1) - change NC batter.
2. 01:23:394 - clap
3. 01:23:774 - whistle
4. 01:24:913 - clap

1. 01:20:546 (1) - Ctrl+G is flow batter

HabiHolic wrote:

ok~

[Easy]

1. 00:18:457 (4,1) - change NC batter.
2. 01:23:394 - clap
3. 01:23:774 - whistle
4. 01:24:913 - clap

[Insane]

1. 01:20:546 (1) - Ctrl+G is flow batter

nice map and hitsound~

call me back

Mao wrote:

Herzlichen Glückwunsch!