Malikil wrote:

handsome's Insane
I couldn't actually play this, so everything I say is just from within the editor.
00:03:635 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I don't see what pattern was used here, there doesn't seem to be any consistency with where in the hexagon each circle is placed. it still play fine as a jump pattern.
00:39:859 (4,5) - These don't line up with the vocals, like you've been doing elsewhere keeping it calm here where the drums are quite prominent, i don't feel like following the vocals is necessary.
00:41:135 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:45:284 - Add a note? no, keeping lower rhythm
00:45:923 - ^ no, keeping lower rhythm
01:14:646 - ^ starting on instruments

Malikil wrote:

Mod as requested

Easy
You seem to be changing the consistency of note placement quite a bit throughout the song, or at least it's very sudden when you do, for an easy difficulty you'll probably be wanting to favor consistency in timeline placement over directly using only certain notes out of the song. Because players who are playing easy are still building their basic play skills and still getting used to the idea of how the game is played. When you throw a sudden timing change at them, they won't have any idea what happened.
00:21:667 (3) - This is the sort of thing I mean above, before this you were keeping notes on every second white mark, then this is saying "here have a note one white early, think fast" I think they usually just stare deeply into the approach circle to press
00:24:540 (2) - I think it sounds a bit strange to be leaving out the long white mark here. Welcome to the songs of not alwayswhiteticks :<
00:49:433 (3,4,1) - Consider making this a single repeat slider. No because I dont thing it would sound as nice :d[/color ]
00:59:486 (1,2,3) - Don't start these on the red marks, it's a sudden change in consistency from immediately before it.
01:21:188 (1) - Consider starting this on the long white mark. Sounds weird
01:28:050 (2) - Move this to the previous red mark, so that it stays consistent with the last few notes. Welcome to the songs of not alwayswhiteticks :<

Normal
Your consistency here also seems a bit lacking, but it's not quite so drastic and doesn't really affect playability as much as in easy.
00:10:178 (1,2,3) - Consider a circle folowed by a repeat slider then another circle. That way you still hit all the same notes, but you don't have a standalone circle on a red mark with nothing on the white before it. Like this:But it still sounds fine :d

00:19:912 (2) - Replace this slider with a circle on the white mark in the middle, to maintain consistency. But it still sounds fine :d
00:29:646 (3,4) - Either make this two sliders, or make 3 a repeat slider so that you hit the white mark.Sometimes its not always about white ticks
00:32:837 (1,2) - Make this one repeat sliderBut ill lose the blanket :d
00:34:274 (3) - Consider putting just a circle on the white mark, then having a 3/4 repeat slider to match the vocals. That will make it much harder to hit because 2 things right after a slider
00:35:710 (1,2,3) - Try a putting a circle, followed by a repeat slider, then move 3 to the next white mark. Because right now 2 doesn't match up to anything and sounds really bad to play.That part is sort of following the beats
01:09:220 (2,1) - Repeat 2, then put a circle at the end of 1 to maintain timing consistency.Following vocals tho
01:12:891 (3,4) - End both of these on the red marks. Nevarr
01:25:337 (1,2,3) - This might be a bit too much for a normal, but it's probably fine given some of the other points in the song. It seems pretty easy its just repeats :d

Hard
There are a few points where it's a bit awkward to play, but overall what you've got here seems pretty reasonable already. Though it does seem like a rather large step up from normal.
00:00:923 (1) - Consider ending the slider on the red mark, and adding a circle where it ends now.
00:03:954 (4) - Is this repeat really neccecary?Effeects
00:16:401 (2,3,4,1) - Unstack these
00:18:157 (6,1) - Consider unstacking these as well.
00:26:614 (1,2) - These probably don't need to be stacked.
00:31:880 (2,3,4,5) - This is a bit awkward to play
00:52:944 (1,2) - Why not just extend 1 for the whole duration and do away with the repeater.Because drum rolls
01:05:869 (3) - See 00:03:954 (4) Effeects
01:07:146 (3,4,5,6) - That might be a bit too much overlap Its probably ok since its a higher hard
01:13:609 (4,1,2,3,4) - Consider removing 4,1 as they aren't matching anything in the music, then spacing out 2,3,4Feels weird without them because long pauses
01:18:635 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a slider to match the vocals? Sort of already matches
01:21:188 (1,2,1) - This is a bit awkward to play Its to match vocals

Knotts wrote:

Yo, M4M wow dis star spam

General

1. Remove "Absolute" from tags, already in the Title Fixed
2. Disable Widescreen support on all difficulties Fixed
3. Add a silent sliderslide? Bugs me to not have one

Insane

1. 00:02:199 (1,2) - It'd be a lot nicer for these to be stacked, doubles are already hard as it isFixed
2. 00:03:316 (1) - Remove whistle on tail Fixed
3. 00:04:274 (7,8) - Flows better and looks more appealing like this Fixed
4. 00:05:231 (4,5) - Remove finishes. Should be a whistle on tail on (5) instead of clap. -
5. 00:05:869 (1) - Finish on head Fixed
6. 00:06:188 (2) - Whistle Fixed
7. 00:08:423 (1) - Finish on head and remove whistle on tail Fixed
8. 00:08:742 (2) - whistle Fixed
9. 00:10:337 (5,6) - Not really cymbals, I wouldn't use finishes here Fixed
10. 00:10:976 (1) - finish and remove whistleFixed
11. 00:13:688 (1) - Add finishFixed
12. 00:20:710 (1) - Adjust blanket Fixed
13. 00:23:742 - where da triplet at? Fixed
14. 00:25:497 (3,4,5) - Try out this rhythmFixed did a different pattern
15. 00:27:093 (5) - Ctrl + H and rotate a little bit clockwise. Circle to slider is a lot harder to execute than slider to circle and this helps with the flow. Fixed
16. 00:28:369 (5,6) - Awkward to play, rotating (6) clockwise would help the flow. Fixed
17. 00:34:752 (1,2,3) - Space these out evenly and NC on 00:35:231 (3) - for the SV change. Fixed
18. 00:36:029 (3,4,5) - Should space these out evenly too. Maybe increase SV for 00:36:508 (5) - since you did that previously Fixed
19. 00:38:582 (2,3) - NC on both of these for SV changes
20. 00:51:986 (3,4) - Finishes instead of whistles Fixed
21. 00:52:465 - Useless green line Magical Fairy dust things who the hell knows :<
22. 00:52:465 (4) - NC for SV change
23. 00:53:183 - Not really necessary to have a note here. Makes the stream look funny anyways because of the comboing.Does this mean I can totally nc a blue tick
24. 00:53:901 (1) - Remove clap I like my claps
25. 00:54:220 (2) - Normal sample set sounds better to use his rather than soft-hitclapIm using drums here
26. 00:54:540 - Oh man the drum sampleset. I guess it fits for some places but soft-whistle fits a lot better on places such as 00:55:018 (2) - Fixed
27. 00:55:497 (4,1) - Remove hitsounds from theseFixed
28. 00:56:614 (4,1) - ^. I'll just skip the rest of this section for hitsounding.
29. 01:03:396 (1) - It'd be more epic to remove the spinner and have two notes on the vocals at 01:04:114 and 01:04:274But handsome has something similar to thiss too :d and before this I had a practically borderline ninja spinner but people be complaining about it so I made it slightly longer with gap
    
    Hitsounding in the kiai is just off to me. To shorten this mod, PM if you want my advice on those

Knotts wrote:

My Love Handsome's Insane

1. 00:10:816 (5,3) - Make this overlap like 00:11:295 (2,5) - noice
2. 00:13:688 (1) - Nazi: move to (288,291) 289 292 is better
3. 00:37:944 (2,3,4,5) - Would it kill you to change these to 1/4 sliders? All those doubles are killer yada, doubles are love
4. 00:38:582 (2) - Move to (275,129) i understand your change with the straight overlap thingy and all, its its a rotating triangle pattern, following 00:37:146 (3,1,1) -
   
   Nice job, looks like the cleanest in the set ty i didnt hitsound this map so idk

Good luck!

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koreapenguin wrote:

handsome's Insane

1. 00:32:916 (2,4,6,8) - i think it's overmapped, there are haven't anysound also vocal's vibration is can't be 1/4 stream i can hear a distinct 1/4 buildup sound, i think it is fine to play.
2. 01:03:396 (1) - this spinner is doesn't really fit the mapping up to this point, feel so it just kind of comes out of nowhere imo spinenr isnt too good here, but without spinner is even worse imo. i will keep now

koreapenguin wrote:

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General

1. this hitsound is unrankable 'soft-hitclap.mp3' http://puu.sh/euX7J/723dedbb68.png has some 45ms delay. you should fix this http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/251629/start=15 , follow this rule use this > EDIT : http://puu.sh/euXFN/e949d0d8dc.wav
2. add audioleadin in handsome's Insane diff, also previewtime is difference with handsome's Insane diff, go to check them

Easy

1. 00:01:242 - 00:02:837 - seem there is have useless Inherited line, delete that. also you should check another Fixed
2. 00:05:710 (3) - add whistle on slider end, there is have bass drum sound Fixed
3. 00:08:582 (1) - how think about this? i think... it should be 00:08:423 - here, becuz there is so weird and have strong sound than 00:08:582 - here it's make some weird. so how about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/euYzr/9d6850c841.jpg Fixed
4. 00:09:859 (3) - del finish, clap on slider end, do you think they are fit 00:10:337 - this point? i think it's just noise I think I fixed it now
5. 00:11:454 - add note here, there is empty... and i think 00:10:657 (1,3) - really really weird, wa hard to explain... try this http://puu.sh/euYYb/3a4c52e15d.jpg it would be better than previous rhythm Fixed
6. 00:13:688 (1) - add finish here. even here 00:23:901 (1) - Fixed
7. 00:34:114 (3,2) - this part might be confuse for beginners, they are will think 00:34:114 (3) - next note is 00:35:391 (2) - this imo, so how about move x156, y316? and 00:34:752 (1) - adjust distance here Fixed
8. 00:50:231 (1) - delete newcombo here, why added here? Fixed because im stupid and dont know how to nc
9. 00:51:986 (2) - add finish on slider head Fixed
10. 01:02:040 (3) - add newcombo here Fixed
    
    I can't understand about newcombo in this diff.....

Normal

1. 00:13:688 (1) - add finish, even this 00:32:837 (1) - add on slider head Fixed
2. 00:18:157 (1,2) - swap newcombo here and 00:19:433 (1) - delete newcombo here. even this 00:28:050 (1,2) - swap newcombo Fixed
3. 01:04:114 (1,2) - why did you add clap, finish on there? do you think really that's fit this point? also i don't know what did you followed there which sounds. if you add hitsound there then soft-whistle is better becuz match with vocal
4. 01:07:625 (4,1) - i don't want recommend this, maintain distance x1.2 same as other spacing. it would be confuse it's 1/1 gap or 1/2 gap. don't look at only your view Fixed
5. 01:13:529 (4) - this slider's end... i think it should be snap on here 01:14:167 - . try it then will be knowFixed
6. 01:26:295 (3) - delete clap on slider endFixed
   
   when we are make newcombo then normally make like this http://puu.sh/ev0Ff/aad244f366.jpg right? or http://puu.sh/ev0GL/e8b7e4dc46.jpg. i think you should check them, don't mix also make sure

Hard

1. 00:03:954 (4) - change just 1/2 note or slider, 00:04:034 - there is haven't any sound, also 01:13:609 (4) - delete this note same as this reason, evne this 01:18:715 (2) - Fixed
2. 00:23:901 (1) - add finish here. 00:31:401 (1) - add slider head, same this 00:32:837 (5) - ,01:09:699 (1) - Fixed
3. 00:53:183 (2) - what the..., delete and you really should listen that part carefully again. Fixed
4. 01:04:114 (1,2) - same as normal I think I Fixed it
   
   still i can't understand your newcombo style... how about make same as handsome's insane diff? Ill check it later :d

Insane

1. 00:07:864 (5) - delete note here, there is haven't anysound also it's just weird to me Fixed
2. 00:09:939 (2) - same as ^, even this 00:15:843 (5//) - 00:16:481 (3) - ,00:26:694 (2) - ,00:29:087 (2) - ,01:00:364 (7) - ,01:01:641 (7) - i don't like them really, it's just stupid rhythm and weird at play, if they are fit that point then i can understnad but isn't. plz listen the song carefully again
3. 01:03:396 (1) - same as handsome's Insane diff

that's all

No Dap wrote:

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• [General]
  The mp3 you are using is a little quiet and low quality, try with this one: http://puu.sh/ezvSz/e35bd063a7.mp3
  Offset should be 300

• [Easy]

1. 00:08:423 (4) - Add finish at the start, there is cymbal sound on the song.
2. 00:10:816 (1) - Keep consistent spacing and add finish at the end for the same reason as above.
3. 00:23:901 (1) - Whistle
4. 00:24:540 (2) - This slider breaks consistency, it would be better if you kept the 2/1 rhythm you have been using.
5. 00:27:093 (3) - This is missing a whistle at the end
6. 00:27:093 (3) - It would follow the song better if you ended this 1/2 a beat back. If you do this add a finish at the end
7. 01:04:114 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Lots of hitsounding errors, try to add claps on every 2nd and 4th beats of a measure (large white lines) and use finish only when you hear cymbal on the song or when you wan to emphasize a very intense part of the song.
   These hitsounds problems are present in the whole diff.
8. 01:20:710 (2,1) - Try to avoid using 1/2 rhythms on easy
9. 01:24:380 (1,2,3) - Too hard for easy imo
   
   This difficulty may need a remap soon and the hitsounds need some work.

• [Normal]

1. Same thing about claps/finishes
2. 00:05:869 (1) - Finish at slider head
3. 00:08:423 (1) - Same as above
4. 00:07:784 (4) - Try to start this on the red tick and extend it to where it ended before
   http://puu.sh/ezfHf/669f3388ec.jpg
5. 00:14:008 (2,3) - Remove whistle to 2 and to the end of 3 to be consistent with the rest of that section.
6. 00:19:433 (3,4,5) - This is a bit unexpected because here 00:14:327 (3,4) - you didn't use that 1/2 sepaaration. Make both the same rhythm for consistency.
7. 00:25:178 (3) - Same thing, i think it would work well if you changed the circle with a slider, like this:
   
   image

   
8. 00:25:497 (4) - Clap at the end
9. 00:28:050 (5) - This slider sounds weird, how about two 1/1 sliders?
10. 00:30:923 (1) - Finish at the end
11. 00:35:710 (1,2,3) - Suggestion to improve rhythm here after making the 00:34:274 (3) - fix:
    
    image

    
    and then
    
12. 00:51:986 (1,2) - Finishes would sound better than whistles here
13. 01:01:720 (1) - Finish at slider end
14. 01:04:593 (1) - Finish at slider start
    
    Same as easy but a bit better overall

• [Hard]

1. 00:13:688 (1,4) - The same whistle thing from easy
2. 00:03:795 (3,4,5) - Even if it's hard, try to keep consistent spacing when you are not trying to make a jump
3. 00:03:795 (3,4,5) - Rotate 120 degrees, then ctrl+h and position like this http://puu.sh/ezlsD/b6f1f16da6.jpg for a better flow
4. 00:13:688 (1,4) - Move stuff around to stack 1 with 4 http://puu.sh/ezlNb/e9e279b0aa.jpg
5. 00:21:667 (5) - It would flow better like this
   
   image

   
6. 00:25:816 (4) - Move the clap to the slider end, it makes more sense since nothing on the song changed.
7. 00:31:401 (1) - Would sound better without the clap
8. 00:46:880 (4) - Extend this slider here 00:47:359 - to follow the piano better and delete the circle that is after.
9. 01:03:954 - You shouldn't silence the hitsounds (it's unrankable i think). You should remove the silence and add a whistle.
10. 01:04:593 (3,4,5,1,2) - Same thing about claps
11. 01:09:699 (1) - Add Finish on slider head
12. 01:14:805 (2) - ^
13. 01:27:571 (5) - Turn this into a 1/1 slider and delete this circle 01:27:891 (1) - To follow the guitar sound
    
    Needs some work but it's a lot better than easier diffs

1. 00:08:423 (1) - Finish on slider head?
2. 00:10:976 (1) - ^
3. 00:23:423 (4) - Drum finish on slider head??
4. 00:31:401 (1) - Yeah, finish lol
5. 00:45:603 (1) - This feels a bit empty, try mapping the vocals here
6. 00:51:746 (5,6) - These notes are overmapped, try turning 00:51:667 (4) - into a 1/2 slider.
7. 01:03:396 (1) - Eeeeh i think whistle sounds better than finish and clap
8. 01:05:550 (5) - This is a bit confusing, one would think that this starts from the other side, move the slider to other place if you don't want to ctrl+g
9. 01:07:146 (1) - Add finish on head
10. 01:09:699 (1) - ^
11. 01:14:805 (1) - This slider is wrong, try adding a circle here 01:14:646 - to catch the vocal and delete this circle 01:15:125 (7) - to extend the slider there.
12. 01:15:284 (7,8,9,1) - Why did you change the clap pattern here? You were placing them on every 2nd and 4th beats before.
13. 01:24:061 (2) - Finish on head
14. 01:26:295 (1) - Drum finish on head instead of the whistle?

1. 00:31:401 (6) - Finish on slider head and the drum finish seems out of place
2. 00:44:167 (4,1) - Separate them a bit
3. 00:46:880 (1) - Same as hard
4. 00:49:274 (1) - Delete this circle as it is not following anything
5. 00:50:391 (1,1) - Move the circle farther away from the slider, they are 1 beat away
   
   image

   
6. 00:53:183 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped, you should change it
   You are missing beats here 00:54:061 - and here 00:54:380 - . Consider adding circles or something
7. 01:27:571 (4) - Same as hard
   
   Not bad but it can improve

image

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Faan wrote:

byfar's extra:
00:10:337 (4) - maybe intentional but slider end stack （2）? eh
00:32:518 (2) - move y to 109 k
00:41:614 (2) - little offscreeni think it's fine. it's only offscreen on editor
00:51:827 (4) - maybe it's too far away compare to 123? emphasis

Faan wrote:

byfar's extra:
00:10:337 (4) - maybe intentional but slider end stack （2）? eh
00:32:518 (2) - move y to 109 k
00:41:614 (2) - little offscreeni think it's fine. it's only offscreen on editor
00:51:827 (4) - maybe it's too far away compare to 123? emphasis

Atsuro wrote:

Decided to mod it

00:31:401 (3) - Finish on the slider's head (Also, that slider's end is unsnapped)
00:31:720 (4) - This circle is hard to notice, align it with the previous slider i want it to have a jump. nice suggestion though

image

00:31:401 (3) - Starting here the 1/4 jumps get a bit ridiculous, i don't like them but that's my personal opinion (also this part is why i can't pass it, please nerf ) understandable, however this is the map style (and an extra)
00:42:412 (1) - I think this would flow better like this:

image

nice
00:43:050 (1,2) - Holy yea
01:02:997 (1,2) - lol yup
01:09:699 (3) - Finish on slider headnice
01:14:167 (3) - Drum finish like you did here 01:13:529 (1) - no need
01:14:805 (2) - Soft finish would fit better than the whistle yea
01:21:188 (3) - I think a finish is enough, no need for a clap it's ok
01:22:305 (1) - ^ on slider return^
01:23:103 (1) - Why use whistle, finish AND clap? i think it's good without any of those lol i'd prefer to change the hitsounds as minimal as possible. no hitsounds there sounds bad
01:23:901 (1) - This doesn't need a repeat, there is no sound here 01:23:901 (1) - vocal hold on red + slider end is a soft hitsound so it's not really gameplay disrupting. actually after checking there is sound there so yeah keeping

Rad- wrote:

byfar's Extra

01:03:316 (1) - I actually think instead of faster slider it would be better as 0.5x, with hitosund volume in the end at 15% nononono i have a huge jump and making slider velo 0.5x is illogical
01:04:593 (1) - Again with these claps, remove clap of slider start, this clap 01:04:912 (2) -, 01:05:391 (1) - this one and remove the finish of 01:05:550 (2) - go fix ur hitsounds already owntrofl
01:10:976 (1) - Instead of that form how about:

Coordinates: Slider start same place, 2nd slider point (squared one) at x:412 and y:28 and 3rd slider point is x:388 y:120, the end slider point should change and remain on top of circle behind it. considering. my shape isn't good right now but i dont exactly like this either. will consider this though

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Atsuro wrote:

Hello!
Reverse m4m from your queue

• [General]
  The mp3 you are using is a little quiet and low quality, try with this one: http://puu.sh/ezvSz/e35bd063a7.mp3
  Offset should be 300

• [Easy]

1. 00:08:423 (4) - Add finish at the start, there is cymbal sound on the song. Fixed
2. 00:10:816 (1) - Keep consistent spacing and add finish at the end for the same reason as above. Fixed
3. 00:23:901 (1) - Whistle Fixed
4. 00:24:540 (2) - This slider breaks consistency, it would be better if you kept the 2/1 rhythm you have been using. Fixed
5. 00:27:093 (3) - This is missing a whistle at the end Fixed
6. 00:27:093 (3) - It would follow the song better if you ended this 1/2 a beat back. If you do this add a finish at the end
7. 01:04:114 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Lots of hitsounding errors, try to add claps on every 2nd and 4th beats of a measure (large white lines) and use finish only when you hear cymbal on the song or when you wan to emphasize a very intense part of the song. Fixed
   These hitsounds problems are present in the whole diff.
8. 01:20:710 (2,1) - Try to avoid using 1/2 rhythms on easy
9. 01:24:380 (1,2,3) - Too hard for easy imo Fixed
   
   This difficulty may need a remap soon and the hitsounds need some work.

• [Normal]

1. Same thing about claps/finishes
2. 00:05:869 (1) - Finish at slider headFixed
3. 00:08:423 (1) - Same as above Fixed
4. 00:07:784 (4) - Try to start this on the red tick and extend it to where it ended before Fixed
   http://puu.sh/ezfHf/669f3388ec.jpg
5. 00:14:008 (2,3) - Remove whistle to 2 and to the end of 3 to be consistent with the rest of that section. Fixed
6. 00:19:433 (3,4,5) - This is a bit unexpected because here 00:14:327 (3,4) - you didn't use that 1/2 sepaaration. Make both the same rhythm for consistency. Fixed
7. 00:25:178 (3) - Same thing, i think it would work well if you changed the circle with a slider, like this: Fixed
   
   image

   
8. 00:25:497 (4) - Clap at the end Fixed
9. 00:28:050 (5) - This slider sounds weird, how about two 1/1 sliders? Somewhat fixed
10. 00:30:923 (1) - Finish at the endFixed
11. 00:35:710 (1,2,3) - Suggestion to improve rhythm here after making the 00:34:274 (3) - fix: Fixed
    
    image

    
    and then
    
12. 00:51:986 (1,2) - Finishes would sound better than whistles here Fixed
13. 01:01:720 (1) - Finish at slider end Fixed
14. 01:04:593 (1) - Finish at slider start Fixed
    
    Same as easy but a bit better overall

• [Hard]

1. 00:13:688 (1,4) - The same whistle thing from easy Fixed
2. 00:03:795 (3,4,5) - Even if it's hard, try to keep consistent spacing when you are not trying to make a jump Fixed
3. 00:03:795 (3,4,5) - Rotate 120 degrees, then ctrl+h and position like this http://puu.sh/ezlsD/b6f1f16da6.jpg for a better flow
4. 00:13:688 (1,4) - Move stuff around to stack 1 with 4 http://puu.sh/ezlNb/e9e279b0aa.jpg Fixed
5. 00:21:667 (5) - It would flow better like this Fixed
   
   image

   
6. 00:25:816 (4) - Move the clap to the slider end, it makes more sense since nothing on the song changed. Fixed
7. 00:31:401 (1) - Would sound better without the clap Buth the claps every 2 white ticks :<
8. 00:46:880 (4) - Extend this slider here 00:47:359 - to follow the piano better and delete the circle that is after.But i like my repeats :< and sounds fine since vocals are actually on the white ticks
9. 01:03:954 - You shouldn't silence the hitsounds (it's unrankable i think). You should remove the silence and add a whistle. Fixed
10. 01:04:593 (3,4,5,1,2) - Same thing about claps
11. 01:09:699 (1) - Add Finish on slider head Fixed
12. 01:14:805 (2) - ^ Fixed
13. 01:27:571 (5) - Turn this into a 1/1 slider and delete this circle 01:27:891 (1) - To follow the guitar sound Fixed
    
    Needs some work but it's a lot better than easier diffs

[Insane]

1. 00:31:401 (6) - Finish on slider head and the drum finish seems out of place Fixed
2. 00:44:167 (4,1) - Separate them a bit Fixed
3. 00:46:880 (1) - Same as hard
4. 00:49:274 (1) - Delete this circle as it is not following anything Fixed
5. 00:50:391 (1,1) - Move the circle farther away from the slider, they are 1 beat away Fixed
   
   image

   
6. 00:53:183 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped, you should change it I think its supported :d by the vocals, long slider vs stream
   You are missing beats here 00:54:061 - and here 00:54:380 - . Consider adding circles or something[color=#FF8800]but matching vocals :d[/b]
7. 01:27:571 (4) - Same as hard
   
   Not bad but it can improve

Good luck!

Rad- wrote:

Hello! I know i am modding already before you modded my map, but i wanted to get back to modding after 6 months since last i did it anyway so i just took the chance to mod your map even if you don't mod mine. and it seems i am 2 hours too late lol

Easy

Reduce Drain and OD by -1 to balance the overall difficulty of the map. [color=#08800]Fixed[/color]

00:08:423 (4) - NC Fixed
00:10:816 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
00:10:816 (1) - Properly distance this object Wat
00:12:252 (4) - Because this sliders distance will bring alot of confusion for its change of timing, i suggest a new pattern for example similar to this Fixed

Replacing circle 00:11:774 (3) - with a slider and at the end of slider add an object to then flip horizontally for circle 5, and as for circle 4 you could make it on the Y Axis with 1.1x distance so its not too close, ofc you can change it to something better as long as the rhythm isnt as confusing as the slider you had.
00:15:603 (4) - Not sure if it really is necessary that slider end point, but no big deal. Fixed
00:22:305 (4) - NC Fixed
00:31:880 (1) - Remove NC, so its easier to know the rhythm change right away Fixed
00:34:114 (5,1) - Switch the NCs between these 2 Fixed
00:37:305 (4,1) - ^ Fixed
00:39:220 (3) - NC Fixed
00:40:497 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
00:49:433 (3) - NC Fixed
00:49:752 (2) - Place it at x:392 y:228 and the end of slider at x:432 y:264 Rip DS
00:50:231 (3) - Place it at x:368 y:312 and the end of slider at x:324 y:348 Rip DS
00:51:348 (1) - Place it at x:204 y:136 in case you changed the 2 sliders above so it now is properly distanced and instead of clap use Finish I like my clap though :< 2 cymbals in a row feels a bit weird for a slow section
00:53:901 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
00:55:178 (5) - NC Fixed
00:57:093 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
00:59:486 (1,2) - This rhythm is so confusing, specially for an easy, starting with Red ticks on this difficulty will surely cause some slider breaks, try these patterns: Not really sure what im supposed to do

Because changing the slider to end at red ticks it will be easier for the player to follow the song and even hit 01:02:040 (1,2) - properly. Though you will have to remap it in order for it to fit the rest of the map.
Oh, and 00:59:327 (5) - NC this Fixed
01:04:114 (1) - Remove all the hitsounds on this slider, to fit the no beat part with voice. But the whistle sounds nice :d
01:04:593 (2,3) - Remove the claps on the start of these sliders, they sound way off. Fixed moved to end of sliders
01:04:593 (2) - And NC this Feels a bit small to nc there
01:08:263 - Add a circle here with a clap Fixed
01:08:582 (1) - Remove the Clap on the Start of this Slider and remove NC Fixed but I want to keep the nc
01:09:859 (6) - Add NC
01:11:135 (1) - Remove NC and my reccomendation is to change the rhythm of this too because before you had mapped rhythm with a red tick and this time you skipped it at 01:12:252 - So try doing this instaed:

and make 01:12:093 (3,4,5) - all claps.
01:19:912 (1) - Add a curve to this slider, looks weird as a straight one after a curved one.
01:21:188 (1) - This slider follows no rhythm with that blue tick, so here is my suggestion:

Add claps to this slider 01:21:029 (3) - both start and finish and start of 01:21:508 (4) -
01:23:103 (1) - Drag this slider to 01:22:944 and add a clap to its end
Now from 01:19:912 - to 01:24:380 - it will need some remapping if you changed most of what i said above, cant really make
01:26:614 (1) - Remove NC
01:28:050 (3) - Place it at x:256 y:356 to avoid clicking too early as it changed rhythm. Also add a NC to it.

Normal

Reduce OD by -1 and Drain by -2. [color=#08800]Fixed[/color]

00:23:901 - Add a circle here? Theres sort of no sound there
00:25:497 (4) - Add a clap to the end of this slider. Fixed
From 00:33:954 to 00:37:944 - Replace this whole rhythm with this: Changed some

Also use those NCs.
00:39:859 (2) - You could make this slider use the blue tick this time: I think its fine staying as it is

but you will have to add some space before 00:40:657 (1) -
01:04:593 (1) - Add finish to the start of slider and remove clap of the end of slider Fixed
01:05:071 (2) - Add clap to start of slider and remove clap of end of slider Fixed
01:08:582 (1) - Remove the clap from the start of slider
01:12:891 (3) - Move it to 01:12:731 - and make this slider closer to 01:12:571 (2) I want to maintain DS
01:28:050 (4) - NC Fixed

Hard

Reduce drain by 1

00:26:614 (1) - it would be better to just place it at x:59 y:171 Fixed
00:36:508 (3) - Place it at x:268 y:204 to give it some space to the next object, it was too close in spacing. Fixed
00:36:827 (4) - NC and place it x:88 y:240 Fixed
00:37:305 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
00:44:327 (4) - Starting from here, reduce the slider velocity till here 00:51:667 - it doesnt make sense why everything is as fast as the kiai part. Fixed
00:48:157 (3) - On this slider, use only one middle slider point Fixed
00:53:183 (2) - Make this slider 1 point shorter and place it 00:53:263 - and give it a proper distance. Fixed
00:58:848 (7,1) - Avoid this huge jump on Hard. Fixed
01:04:593 (3) - Remove the clap at the beginning of this slider, 01:04:912 (4) - on this circle, 01:05:391 (1) - this circle as well and remove the finish on this slider start 01:05:550 (2) - Fixed
01:04:593 (3) - NC and 01:05:391 (1) - remove NC
01:05:869 (6) - NC and 01:06:508 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:146 (11) - NC Fixed
01:07:146 (1,2,3,4) - I don't have an idea to fix this, and you really dont have to, but it just looks a bit weird imo having straight sliders over each other like that.
01:08:423 (1) - Remove the claps on this slider Fixed
01:11:614 (3) - Fix sliders points: try 2nd point at x:88 y:212 and 3rd point at x:152 y:216.
01:13:210 (3) - Add claps to start and end of slider.
01:23:582 - Add a circle in between here. Fixed

Just wanna say that the spacing on kiai time, being 1.5x with slider velocity still being the same, you should have increased slider speed and still maintained at least the 1.3x spacing like the rest of the map.

Insane

You could simply rename this to Extra. No problem in having 2 Extra difficulties since there already is an Insane.

00:01:720 (5) - make the slider shorter and add a circle here 00:02:040 - so you dont skip a beat of the intro, even though you were following guitar, it's better this way.
00:12:891 (3) - This slider speed change was hardly predictable, so i reccomend adding a NC as a warning for it.Still better than what it was in the beginning x1.75
00:22:385 (8) - Place it in x:263 y:196 [color=#FF8000]Lolwut that far :d
00:44:167 (4) - Delete this slider and make slider 00:43:928 (3) - end at 00:44:167 - with for example: middle slider point at x:400 y:104 and end slider point at x:476 y:180 It wouldnt have as much impact with that :<
00:53:821 - New pattern: I like what I currently have because the 2 1/1 circles are basically slowdowns

Basically make the first stream end with circle 9 and then another stream before the slider you had there, also respec the NCs.
01:04:593 (1) - Remove the clap of this slider start, the clap on this circle 01:04:912 (2) -, and this one as well 01:05:391 (4) - and lastly, remove the finish on the start of this slider: 01:05:550 (5)

This mod was before Atsuro's mod, so some things may have been fixed already.

Good Luck!

Faan wrote:

from reverse m4m (._. wut)

I think there can be a kiai from 34:114 ----- 44:327 (please ignore)

Easy:
00:07:305 (3) - maybe move to 332,45. The distance will get slightly screwed but the blanket will be better .w. Psh who even sleeps with blankets
00:10:816 (1) - the slider is @#&*dy short, maybe no curve Ok no curve
00:11:774 (3) - maybe, mayyyybe move to the next red tick The feels arent teh same
00:10:816 (1) - DS m8Fixed
00:32:837 (2) - can adjust a little to fit blanket better, for example: move the second tick to 217,93 Fixed
00:53:263 (3) - can move and rotate a little so it flows from 2 and into better Fixed

rhythme is a little weird .~. polarity issue maybe?

Normal:
00:02:837 (1,1) - who doesn't love nazimod blanket thanks Fixed
00:14:008 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
00:14:008 (2,4) - ^ Fixed
00:10:178 (1,3) - slight overlap Fixed
01:04:593 (1) - maybe http://puu.sh/ezWHb/12afb674a7.jpg Wat no I like my kimi

Hard:
00:02:199 (1) - rotate around selection center 1 degree anti-clockwise for better blanket Lel you mean 2 degrees
00:23:103 (4) - I find the slider path slightly unclear Fixed
00:31:082 (3,1) - blanketable Fixed
00:36:667 - sounds like a note Fixed

Insane:
00:39:380 (1) - move a bit to the right Fixed
00:49:274 (1) - maybe delete Fixed


@_@ insane and extra 3fast5me

Jere-Chan wrote:

hi! from my modQ!

[Easy]
Is it just me or is it the beatmap cuz its off-beat. O_o
the start should be like this (http://puu.sh/eDhPt.jpg) since its off-beat

[Normal]
this is off beat too.. do the same thing as i told u to do above

[Hard]
Still off-beat

[handsome's Insane]
Off-beat

[Absolute Duo]
Not off-beat.
a great difficulty.

[Insane]
Off-beat

[Byfar's Extra]
off-beat

General:
The maps were off-beat (except 1.)
but they were good maps the problem was just the off beat thing but gj.

Xinely wrote:

from ticket

• 
  Easy

1. 00:03:316 (1) - the design looks still can improved here, same for flow too, i'd say like Fixedhttp://puu.sh/eAsF5.jpg
2. 00:06:667 (2,3) - anyway this blanket looks not really good here (http://puu.sh/eAsZ5.jpg) , try follow the curve on approach circle and blanket will be fine :3 Fixed
3. 00:08:423 (4) - should NC for consistency here Fixed
4. 00:09:220 (5) - the curve looks so curvy and break the flow here. hmm try smoother it like Fixed http://puu.sh/eAtBh.jpg ?
5. 00:09:859 (6,1) - why (6)'s tail and (1)'s head have claps here? they really dont fit with musics Q_Q
6. 00:12:252 - 00:12:571 - 00:12:891 - if you want to use finish so volume should be 40% coz 55% is too noisy Fixed
7. 00:21:667 (3) - add whistle, the background music still a weak drum here Fixed
8. 00:23:901 (1) - add finish coz it has cymbal sound Fixed
9. 00:24:540 (2) - why clap here suddenly? it sounds quite random here imo, better to use whistle Fixed
10. from 00:27:093 - here you have lot of unnecessary greenlines http://puu.sh/eDkMN.png Fixed
11. 00:31:401 - it has cymbal sound at this time, better to map it imo, well break your design but rhythm would be better with http://puu.sh/eDkXJ.jpg
12. 00:34:114 (1) - finish coz cymbal /.\
13. 00:34:752 (2) - and all 3rd whiteticks until - 00:43:688 - + 00:37:944 - and 00:43:050 - , remove finish here coz no cymbal sound, sounds random for me, claps are enough for me /.\ Fixed
14. 00:39:220 (1) - and finish here coz cymbal Fixed
15. 00:47:837 (1) - should be removed coz recovery time after spinner should be full measure here Fixed
16. 00:49:433 (1,2,3) - just suggestion if you follow piano only, these rhythm could be nerfed become 3/2 slider repeat only Fixed
17. 00:51:348 (1) - hmm not bad but i think the hitsound feels more fit if you use drum finish here. ofc just a suggestion Fixed
18. 00:51:986 (2) - im sure whistle isnt enough to emphasize vocal on repeat, how about add finish too? it feels nicely for me Fixed
19. 00:53:263 (3) - this slider is too curvy so it doesnt give nice flow imo, i would say to make it smoother, i guess something like Fixed http://puu.sh/eDlRj.jpg
20. 00:53:901 (4) - hmm drum finish on tail doesnt emphasize the cymbal at all imo, use soft finish instead? Fixed
21. 00:59:486 (1) - same as above but at slider's head here Fixed
22. 01:02:040 (1) - soft default finish on slider's head coz the cymbal /:3\ Fixed
23. 01:03:954 - well unnecessary greenline =w=/ Fixed
24. 01:09:699 - should be mapped coz cymbal x.x, change 01:08:582 (1,2) - become Fixedhttp://puu.sh/eDmu7.jpg instead
25. 01:12:412 (2) - anyway this slider should be start at 01:12:252 - coz the cymbal, end the Fixedslider at 01:12:891 - is fine :p
26. 01:14:805 (1) - should be soft finish on head coz the cymbal, and the vocal is high too Fixed
27. 01:20:710 (2,1) - try avoid to use 1/2 gap for Easy diff, that's hard for newbie http://puu.sh/eDmS3.jpg <- use this instead Fixed
28. 01:30:284 - unnecessary greenline too Fixed

• 
  Normal

1. 00:03:316 (1) - nazi but blanket still can improved here Fixed http://puu.sh/eDn6n.jpg
2. 00:07:784 (4) - change clap on tail with whistle here, no kick drum so clap sounds random :C Fixed
3. 00:10:178 (1,2) - remove both finishes from them and add finish on 00:10:976 - coz the musics ;3; Fixed
4. 00:11:774 (4) - aa flow suddenly become go to upward feels weird for me when the natural flow actually go to diagonal upward or downward, use this instead? Fixed http://puu.sh/eDntX.jpg
5. 00:16:242 (1,2) - aaa actually you can improve the flow become more natural if you use circular flow here, something like Fixed http://puu.sh/eDnGF.jpg
6. aaa actually i have much problems about flow in this diff, example 01:22:465 (1,2) - if you curve the first slider to downward, dont curve the 2nd slider to downward again but try the opposite (upward) so it will give more natural on flow http://puu.sh/eDnV7.jpg (apply this to all sliders in whole diff )
7. I have problems with hitsounds as well, literally claps used for 2nd and 4th whiteticks here but no for 00:44:327 - until 00:53:582 - coz the calm part so just use whistle, keep on mind claps on redticks dont work properly here, and some finish hitsounds i told already in Easy, apply for this one too

• 
  Hard

1. to be honest the rhythms feel like Insane here, too many 1/2 gap with 1/2 sliders or circles, it should have more 1/1 sliders here (well i know you are following vocal too much here) but imo the spread become huge from Normal to Hard coz the rhyhtms , some rhythms like 00:03:316 (1,2) - , 00:05:231 (2,3) -, 00:15:284 (3,4) - (1/1 slider and then circle), 00:07:146 (1,2) - etc can be 1/1 sliders for easier rhythms
2. Also same as Normal, the hitsounds please :'3

For Insane diff, hitsounds same as Normal too. i cant mod coz too hard for me to play so yeah, cant mod it.. same for Extra

Good Luck :3~

Broccoly wrote:

http://puu.sh/eFTD9/b0a75b5293.osr

I love posting like this everybody watch pls

monstrata wrote:

Hi Owntrolf, my mod for reverse M4M. I don't usually mod GD's for M4M but I see byfar asking for testplays on #modhelp way too often lol~ Hope this helps! Good luck with ranking :3. So many stars o___o

[Insane?]

00:03:635 (2,3) - Ctrl+G better flow coming out of 1. Fixed ctrl+g'd 1
00:22:146 (7,8,1) - Space 8 evenly in between 7, and 1? Fixed
00:34:593 (4,2) - Lots of ways to position 4 so that it doesn't overlap. Fixed
00:52:944 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream doesn't fit, honestly . Consider the fact that this stream both follows a "rest/slow" section in the map and is followed by another "rest" section.
01:02:040 (2,4) - maybe stack them? But muh impacts
01:02:040 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Seem's unnecessarily spaced for an Insane... I scaled it down only by a factor of x0.9 and the Diff fell to 5.24 which is Insane instead of Extra lol. Ill wait :<
01:07:146 (1,2) - Not sure what you are following here . The vocals are held, and the drum skips a beat too... Slider maybe? Because im evil and dont want to use a slider :<
01:21:188 (1,1) - Naziblankets. Use multiple control points in the middle, ur only using one that's really pulled out atm. Fixed
01:26:614 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Seem random... Idk. Maybe its just be but i can't identify any pattern to these circles at all x___x" ctrl+h magic

[Hard]

00:04:433 (4) - Why not rotate 180 degrees, then Ctrl+G and reposition. Fixed
00:20:231 (2,1) - Don't let them overlap. Fixed
00:31:082 (3,1) - Blanket. Looks blanketed to me already
00:46:242 (3) - Bend it upward instead of downward? Better flow Fixed
00:55:497 (4,1) - Blanket Fixed
00:59:965 (4,5,1) - Naziblanket. Fixed
01:00:603 (2,3) - NaziblanketFixed
01:01:720 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
01:07:146 (1,2,3,4) - Make them symmetrical? 3 and 4 overlap different portions of their previous sliders which makes this pattern a bit sloppy. Fixed
01:09:380 (4,5,1) - Blanket Fixed
01:16:561 (6,1,2) - How about just having the repeat slider going vertically downward instead of angled? Better flow. Fixed

[Normal]

00:31:880 (3,1) - Blanket Isnt that already blanketed?
00:58:369 (3,4) - ^ ^ this is where the word naziblanket comes into play
01:06:667 (3) - This repeat slider doesn't really fit imo. After listening to it a bit, the beat here just isnt the same as 4, so there should also be a difference in pattern.I could always just say im mapping the the back drums :<

• Hard
  00:23:901 - add object
  00:31:082 (3) - ctrl+g plz. ;-;

• handsome's Insane
  dem jumps omg xD
  OD 7 or 7.5?
  00:15:923 (6) - a bit more up?
  00:33:476 (1,2) - doesn't suit the beat. I think a continue stream or a more rapid repeat slider on 1/4
  00:45:284 - 00:45:923 - in this timeframe, try to put some more objects. Recommend: Slider - SliderEnd - Hitcircle
  01:14:646 - add hitcircle
  01:23:901 (1,2) - not suitable. eliminate 01:24:061 (2) and extend 01:23:901 (1) until 01:24:061.

• Insane
  Ever considered changing diffname to Extra?
  00:33:476 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think better to make it a smooth stream instead of zigzag stream.
  00:39:061 - slider velocity escalates owo (try to drop it to 1.35x or something). too fast in my opinion
  00:48:954 - 00:49:274 - I suggest add a hitcircle and slider. 00:48:954 - hitcircle, 00:49:114 - slider

• byfar's Extra
  00:14:008 (2) - ctrl+g
  00:53:901 (3,4,5) - hitsound change? ._.

monstrata wrote:

Hi Owntrolf, my mod for reverse M4M. I don't usually mod GD's for M4M but I see byfar asking for testplays on #modhelp way too often lol~ Hope this helps! Good luck with ranking :3. So many stars o___o cuz i need opinions on the flow & things from players that can actually play it ;_;. no offence to all you modders though!

[byfar's Extra]

00:40:497 - You miss a strong beat here. Make the slider longer and add circle? ???no i didnt..
00:41:774 - ^^
01:19:912 (1,2,3) - No triangular pattern here? it's fine
01:21:188 (3,1,2) - Ehh... this flow could be improved. Ctrl+G 1? nah it's fine
01:02:359 (1,1,1,2,1,2) - I feel like you could improve this pattern. Mainly because 01:02:518 (1) - is a bit out of place with the rest of the pattern. Also, not really sure why the jumps don't begin until 01:02:837 (2) - . You could make this whole pattern jumps, no? Or NC at 01:02:837 (2) - as an indicator that the jumps will begin there. and remove the NC from the 3 sliders before. all intended. and the reason why i didnt begin the jump too early was to have emphasis.

• byfar's Extra
  00:14:008 (2) - ctrl+g nah
  00:53:901 (3,4,5) - hitsound change? ._. yup

Anxient wrote:

from your reverse m4m. nearly forgot about it. im so good at this.

• Hard
  00:23:901 - add object But thats a breath
  00:31:082 (3) - ctrl+g plz. ;-;Done

• Insane
  Ever considered changing diffname to Extra?
  00:33:476 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think better to make it a smooth stream instead of zigzag stream. But muh vocals dont sound smooth
  00:39:061 - slider velocity escalates owo (try to drop it to 1.35x or something). too fast in my opinion Its barely noticable
  00:48:954 - 00:49:274 - I suggest add a hitcircle and slider. 00:48:954 - hitcircle, 00:49:114 - sliderWat

That's it for me!

FlobuFlobs wrote:

[byfar's Extra]

1. Here the same, check all your Inherited Points and remove unnecesarry points
2. 00:02:997 (2) - Change the direction of this jump, it could confuse player when they try to jump on 00:03:316 (1) - and it would emphasize better no i intentionally changed the direction.
3. 00:05:869 (1,2,3) - this doesnt play that well, it like going 2 time the same way although the music doesnt repeat. yea
   it gives the feeling of "why"
   also, 00:06:348 (3) - its hard to read this
   you should probably change somehow the pattern yea
4. 00:19:433 - you shouldnt start from 1.0 to 1.35 SV, its not sidereable for a first time play and results in sliderbreak
5. 00:21:508 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern has so far the highest distance spacing but the music is one of the quietest part until now, it doesnt really make sense to increase the spacing so much. it doesnt make sense to decrease it either when the 'music tension' has already built to this extend. changed a little
6. 00:25:018 (1,2,3) - just a optical thing, it doesnt looks nice. Its like you've copy paste the slider and rotate it a bit and the continue to 00:25:976 (1) - doesnt look so smooth yea changed
7. 00:30:444 (1,2) - how about this here? 00:30:444 (1) - doesnt really get a good emphasize and 00:30:603 (2) - overlapps with 00:31:082 (2) -
   also 00:30:603 (2,1) - this flow horrible improved aesthetics. flow is fine. also, my spacing emphasizes the song well enough. i had the super small spacing there for constrasting reasons
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:52:465 (2) - HP bar overlapp dam
9. 00:53:901 (1,2) - they dont make sense, theres nothing in the music you have to emphasize also the nc does confuse 00:53:901 (1) - lol did you entirely miss the piano? removed NC
10. 00:58:848 (2) - Im not sure but i think its unrankable it is rankable
11. 01:02:359 (1,1,1,2,1,2) - IF you have to silence out objects it means it doesnt fit at all, change patterns completly normals notes do not fit. i've tried. the silenced 1/4s are meant for the piano. it gives an effect that normal notes cannot
12. 01:07:305 (1,1,1) - get you nc consistent, its enough if you space them like crazy and add finishes to emphasize yea
13. 01:16:720 (1,2,3) - this makes sense from spacing cuz the lyrics get louder but 01:17:359 (1,2,3) - ? reduce spacing abit please no
14. 01:18:635 (2) - like mentioned before, how am i supposed to read that sv change? it fits the vocals
15. 01:19:114 (1,2,1,1) - nccccc yea
16. 01:21:348 (1) - you should probably put the slider one tick back the finish is on the red tick here 01:21:188 (3) - but you try to emphasize 01:21:348 (1) - it feels random and is horrible if you play it k changed a little
17. 01:21:668 (2) - 01:21:986 (3,4) - <- ctrl+g pls 01:21:668 (2) - it makes no sense to have a jump here I always put a jump a tick before the vocal
18. 01:22:305 (1) - remove finish removed on tail only
    
    Way too much Unnecesarry spacing with confusing patterns, you should probably map abit cleaner and take a look over your flow.
    it often changes suddenly and it confuses fine. keeping most of the spacing though lol

FlobuFlobs wrote:

Sup grils
Mostly Flow/Pattern/Rhythm mod
Im not gonna mod indepth, you can send me a pm to recheck if it gets more mods

[Hard]

1. Idk what AR8 does on a Hard diff but it shouldnt be here, change to 7
2. 00:02:838 (1) - Add NC here for better readability Fixed
3. 00:11:933 (3,4) - you shouldnt stack that in any diff, its horrible to read, espacially on a hard diff, change the pattern Fixed
4. 00:46:242 (3) - Blank q_____q It starts on when they say tai :d
   The Pattern are confusing and they dont flow that well.
   Try to use simple pattern and consistent spacing, ask some bats or some experienced mapper if they can help you with patterns to map more tidy

[Insane]

1. Here the same, check all your Inherited Points and remove unnecesarry points
2. 00:02:838 (1) - Add NC, you are using a Big white tick NC pattern so why notI dont think its needed since the next one is so close
3. 00:03:316 (1) - Increase spacing abit more, same problem like Extra, it could confuse some player to have such little spacing between 00:02:997 (2,1) - It doesnt really change the playability since the DS for everything else is a bit weird and its a pause
4. 00:05:869 (1) - Change the slidershape, 00:05:231 (4,5) - it works here because its the same line in the music but 00:05:869 (1) - here changes the music so the slider should also change But symmetry
5. 00:06:348 (3) - ^ ^
6. 00:10:178 (3,4,5) - Fix your claps here Fixed
7. 01:11:933 (5) - Whats up with the spacing here Fixed
   
   
   Way more chaotic than Byfar's extra but reasonable Spacing and flow.
   But you should try to map abit more tidy

1. 00:08:901 & 00:09:540 - Uh, no clap? Dunno, I just feel that these places are too empty without any hitsounding.
2. 00:25:178 - What's the purpose of the clap? I think you're supposed to use a whistle.
3. 00:33:476 - ^
4. 00:49:433 (2,1) - What's with such a small spacing here at all sudden? Might as well remove a repeat on (2), remove (1), and make a slider that goes from 00:50:391 to 00:51:348.
5. 00:53:901 - 00:54:220 - Why would you use claps here (again)? They don't really emphasize anything well, neither do they support the current hitsounding pattern.
6. 01:21:188 - Might as well use a finish instead of a clap to follow that cymbal in the background music.
7. 01:23:103 - A whistle should be sufficient here. Finish and clap are too much.
8. 01:25:337 (1,1) - Just use a whistle on the head and finish on the tail of the sliders? The claps are way too loud and unfitting compared to the instruments they're emphasizing. (Honestly, I have a problem with the custom clap... idk why, but it just feels really off compared to the instruments that are played in the song.)

1. 00:27:093 - 00:28:050 - Try only using a clap at 00:27:412 and 00:28:050, then leave the others hitsounded. If you've read through my mod in the Easy diff... you should know why.
2. 00:34:274 - A finish here isn't necessary since the instrument it's emphasizing doesn't support the finish's existence.
3. 00:36:029 - ^
4. 00:37:305 - ^ (So pretty much every finish you've put up to 00:44:167 is all wrongly placed. Weirdly enough, you skipped the places where the finishes actually fit, like 00:41:774.)
5. 00:47:837 (2) - I assure you that you don't need a whistle here since it's not really emphasizing anything and sounds redundant.
6. 00:47:837 (2,3) - Place them like so they'll look neater?
7. 00:49:752 & 00:50:231 - Remove the whistles too since there are already too much whistles here, which makes all these whistles lose their accentuation effect.
8. 01:07:305 - It is extremely not recommended to add a finish to follow an instrument sound that you skipped, as it will make the players feel awkward while playing.
9. 01:07:625 (4,2) - Try not to make such overmaps, especially on easier diffs, as they look unaesthetic.
10. 01:19:912 - Starting from this spot until the end, you overused the clap a lot. Seriously, why? Don't use a clap to go along with a finish in this song since the strong instruments aren't accompanied by any percussions. And then there comes 01:25:337 (1,2), which just uses too many claps (I'd recommend to remove all the claps on the sliders except 01:25:816, then use a whistle at 01:25:337).

1. 00:05:231 (2,3) - You don't use finishes to emphasize instruments that aren't sounding strong enough and has a vibration effect (like cymbals) or vocals that sounds "focused" on a spot (00:36:029 (1,2,3) in Hard for example). (That's all I'm gonna say about the finishes. And remember not to overuse claps. I'm not even going to bother mentioning hitsounding problems anymore.)
2. 00:16:242 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why the spacing inconsistency...? It isn't an extremely major problem, but there's no reason to keep it like that, since making the spacing consistent can make them look neater.
3. 00:40:337 (6,1) - Why is the spacing lower here...

1. 00:09:061 (4) - Replace the clap with a whistle? A double clap at 00:08:901 (3,4) doesn't really fit the song.
2. 00:10:178 (3) - Do the opposite of the suggestion above: Replace the whistle with a clap. Again, this goes well with the instrument.
3. 00:44:327 (1) - Might as well end this to 00:45:284. I think you're following the instrument at 00:45:125, but the voice at 00:45:284 is stronger than that.
4. 00:49:114 - Consider adding a whistle. Listen to the instruments here and you'll know why.
5. 00:55:178 - 00:55:657 - There isn't any valid reason to use finishes here, I'm pretty sure of that.
6. 01:07:146 - Why don't you have a finish now? It's nice to accentuate the instrument and vocal here.
7. 01:08:263 - 01:08:901 - wait what. What's with the claps all the way here? I don't really think these claps actually go with anything, be it either in the song or in the hitsound pattern. I recommend to remove all the clap here except the first and the last one. (Honestly, I feel that you overused claps in the kiai time. It's as if you sprinkled them everywhere just for the sake of having a hitsound pattern... Try to revise this patterning. Seriously.)

1. 00:02:838 (4,5) - Move to (311,31) so the jump here will accentuate the instruments better.

1. 00:02:837 (1,2) - Considering the claps fit the song quite well, I believe you don't need the finishes as they sound quite redundant.
2. 00:03:316 (1,2) - ...Hold on. This is an Extra diff, but an extremely big jump that goes across the entire screen is just fucked up, especially combined with the fact that the spacing is pretty normal from the beginning, and the music doesn't indicate any need of a jump like this.
3. 00:11:774 (3,4,5) - This series of jumps looks kinda exaggerated too since the music isn't so strong to the point where they can support the existence f the jumps here.
4. 00:14:327 (3,4,5) - ...And this one is unreasonable too, for the reason I said before. (All in all, this map is pretty much a gathering of massive jumps that are placed seemingly without any thoughts put aside from just wanting to have big jumps to make the map feel fun and difficult. That isn't really how mapping works... So I hope you'd like to cooperate and reduce most of the bigger jumps; those that don't fit the music's power at all. I believe it should be easy enough to differ the fitting and unfitting ones, but feel free to ask if you want.)
5. 00:19:912 (2) & 00:20:391 (2) - ...Why would you make the slider velocity higher when the music doesn't call for it? It comes out as unexpected and confusing for players.
6. 01:02:678 (1,2,1,2) - These 1/4 jumps are just crazy, man. They only barely fit the song, and can be hard to follow even by pro players. Try something like this.
7. 01:08:263 (4,1) - What's the reason of making an anti-jump here? It isn't consistent with how jumpy the map is and how the song goes.

Hinsvar wrote:

Uh hi o.o hey hinsvar

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.



>byfar's Extra

1. 00:02:837 (1,2) - Considering the claps fit the song quite well, I believe you don't need the finishes as they sound quite redundant.
2. 00:03:316 (1,2) - ...Hold on. This is an Extra diff, but an extremely big jump that goes across the entire screen is just fucked up, especially combined with the fact that the spacing is pretty normal from the beginning, and the music doesn't indicate any need of a jump like this. . the spacing serves as a 'kick start'. why i decided to do this? because of the sudden stop in the music and then the large downbeat
3. 00:11:774 (3,4,5) - This series of jumps looks kinda exaggerated too since the music isn't so strong to the point where they can support the existence f the jumps here. nah it's fine. it's only .25x DS larger than the previous star pattern jump
4. 00:14:327 (3,4,5) - ...And this one is unreasonable too, for the reason I said before. (All in all, this map is pretty much a gathering of massive jumps that are placed seemingly without any thoughts put aside from just wanting to have big jumps to make the map feel fun and difficult. That isn't really how mapping works... So I hope you'd like to cooperate and reduce most of the bigger jumps; those that don't fit the music's power at all. I believe it should be easy enough to differ the fitting and unfitting ones, but feel free to ask if you want.) i really feel like there needs to be a large emphasized jump. if i make the bigger ones smaller, then i'd have to make every other smaller ones smaller (and tbh the small ones are pretty small right now) i will continue to ask for testplays. i imho the jumps fit perfectly with the music, however i will change the more ridiculous jumps.
5. 00:19:912 (2) & 00:20:391 (2) - ...Why would you make the slider velocity higher when the music doesn't call for it? It comes out as unexpected and confusing for players. hmm.. was intended but ill look into it
6. 01:02:678 (1,2,1,2) - These 1/4 jumps are just crazy, man. They only barely fit the song, and can be hard to follow even by pro players. Try something like this. changed just a little
7. 01:08:263 (4,1) - What's the reason of making an anti-jump here? It isn't consistent with how jumpy the map is and how the song goes. oh yeaaaa

Well in the end... I believe Owntrolf should try to make the designing and hitsounding of his diffs better, because they're quite a mess right now (Insane's design is okay-ish but I feel that it can be better than how it is right now). handsome's hitsounding still feels a little random too, especially in the kiai, but that can be improved. And for byfar, the jumps are too much. Way too much. Make an Extra diff with jumps, not making super big jumps in an attempt to make an artificial difficulty in order to create an Extra diff.

That's it.

Good luck on the way

Hinsvar wrote:

Uh hi o.o

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Easy

1. 00:08:901 & 00:09:540 - Uh, no clap? Dunno, I just feel that these places are too empty without any hitsounding.
2. 00:25:178 - What's the purpose of the clap? I think you're supposed to use a whistle.
3. 00:33:476 - ^
4. 00:49:433 (2,1) - What's with such a small spacing here at all sudden? Might as well remove a repeat on (2), remove (1), and make a slider that goes from 00:50:391 to 00:51:348. Added
5. 00:53:901 - 00:54:220 - Why would you use claps here (again)? They don't really emphasize anything well, neither do they support the current hitsounding pattern.
6. 01:21:188 - Might as well use a finish instead of a clap to follow that cymbal in the background music.
7. 01:23:103 - A whistle should be sufficient here. Finish and clap are too much.
8. 01:25:337 (1,1) - Just use a whistle on the head and finish on the tail of the sliders? The claps are way too loud and unfitting compared to the instruments they're emphasizing. (Honestly, I have a problem with the custom clap... idk why, but it just feels really off compared to the instruments that are played in the song.)

>Normal

1. 00:27:093 - 00:28:050 - Try only using a clap at 00:27:412 and 00:28:050, then leave the others hitsounded. If you've read through my mod in the Easy diff... you should know why.
2. 00:34:274 - A finish here isn't necessary since the instrument it's emphasizing doesn't support the finish's existence.
3. 00:36:029 - ^
4. 00:37:305 - ^ (So pretty much every finish you've put up to 00:44:167 is all wrongly placed. Weirdly enough, you skipped the places where the finishes actually fit, like 00:41:774.)
5. 00:47:837 (2) - I assure you that you don't need a whistle here since it's not really emphasizing anything and sounds redundant.
6. 00:47:837 (2,3) - Place them like so they'll look neater? Fixed
7. 00:49:752 & 00:50:231 - Remove the whistles too since there are already too much whistles here, which makes all these whistles lose their accentuation effect.
8. 01:07:305 - It is extremely not recommended to add a finish to follow an instrument sound that you skipped, as it will make the players feel awkward while playing.
9. 01:07:625 (4,2) - Try not to make such overmaps, especially on easier diffs, as they look unaesthetic. I think I got it fixed now replaced with some long sliders
10. 01:19:912 - Starting from this spot until the end, you overused the clap a lot. Seriously, why? Don't use a clap to go along with a finish in this song since the strong instruments aren't accompanied by any percussions. And then there comes 01:25:337 (1,2), which just uses too many claps (I'd recommend to remove all the claps on the sliders except 01:25:816, then use a whistle at 01:25:337).

>Hard

1. 00:05:231 (2,3) - You don't use finishes to emphasize instruments that aren't sounding strong enough and has a vibration effect (like cymbals) or vocals that sounds "focused" on a spot (00:36:029 (1,2,3) in Hard for example). (That's all I'm gonna say about the finishes. And remember not to overuse claps. I'm not even going to bother mentioning hitsounding problems anymore.)
2. 00:16:242 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why the spacing inconsistency...? It isn't an extremely major problem, but there's no reason to keep it like that, since making the spacing consistent can make them look neater Fixed I was totally high
3. 00:40:337 (6,1) - Why is the spacing lower here... Fixed I was totally high

>Insane

1. 00:02:838 (4,5) - Move to (311,31) so the jump here will accentuate the instruments better.Applied

Well in the end... I believe Owntrolf should try to make the designing and hitsounding of his diffs better, because they're quite a mess right now (Insane's design is okay-ish but I feel that it can be better than how it is right now). handsome's hitsounding still feels a little random too, especially in the kiai, but that can be improved. And for byfar, the jumps are too much. Way too much. Make an Extra diff with jumps, not making super big jumps in an attempt to make an artificial difficulty in order to create an Extra diff.

That's it.

Good luck on the way

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Easy
00:08:423 (1,2,3) This pattern looks weird because of how (3) is placed. I suggest to remake (3) so it fits better Fixed
00:15:603 (4) Whats wrong with this slider? It really doesnt fit as how it looks. Make it just curvy, looks way better Fixed
00:31:880 (3,4) Those two are looking weird too, i know you want them to be blanket, but maybe you should remake them.
00:32:837 (4,2) Those two are overlapping Fixed
00:40:497 (3,5) ^ Looks fine when played
00:59:486 (1,2) Blank them I dont know what you mean delete them?
01:10:497 (3,1) Flow is weird between those two Im trying to avoid using 1/2 spacing

Normal
00:17:518 (4,1) They are overalpping. Looks not so good, you should fix that Fixed
00:34:274 (3) Make this a normal 1/1 slider I can hear a strong beat on the blue tick
00:44:327 (1) This one looks weird, let it look different. But its for a blanket of the next slider
01:01:720 (1,3) Those two are awfully close, fix that Fixed
01:07:625 (4,2) Bad overlap I think its in the safe zone L:

Hard
00:09:859 (1,2) Blank them Unsure what you mean
00:13:688 (1) Copy this one and place it here 00:14:327 . Delete 00:14:327 (3) ofc Fixed
00:15:923 (5,2,3) Those two are really close to each other which looks bad I think its fine
00:18:316 (1) Delete NC 00:18:954 (2) Add NC Fixed
00:31:082 (3,1) Blank them Wat
00:44:327 (4) This one looks weird Its fine
00:48:157 (3) ^ ^
00:50:391 (3,3) Bad overlap Its probably fine
01:12:571 (1,2,3) Flow is weird here Fixed

Insane
00:01:242 (3) Make this on curvy so it fits with 00:01:720 (5) Variety
00:02:199 (1,2) Make a triplet instead But mai feels
00:11:454 (3) Make this one just straight or curvy Variety
00:12:891 (3) This one is really ugly Im just outlining the previous ones
01:17:359 (1,3) Overlap is bad Doesnt that only apply when the starting of a slider is covered?

Good luck with it :3

Yuii- wrote:

[byfar's Extra]

General: Change OD to "8,5" or "9,0". I don't have too much to mod here, but the jumps are way too forced tbh.

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Yuii- wrote:

[handsome's Insane]

General: Change OD to "8,0"... "7,8" is random. no, i don't see why i should. 'random' isn't a very convincing argument.

1. 00:22:784 (2) - Ctrl+G no
   
2. 00:45:603 (1) - Try this: no
   
3. 01:24:699 (2) - Ctrl+G no, i wont understand your suggestion if you don't bother explaining.

-Mo- wrote:

byfar's Extra
Note that this difficulty is just outside of my skill level, and as such this mod may not be as high quality.
- 00:10:018 (2,4) - I'm not sure if this is an intended offset from the stack or not.
- 00:23:901 (3) - Same as handsome's Insane about placing Whistles on the downbeats.
- 00:27:093 (4) - The tail of this isn't perfectly stacked with 00:27:571 (1,1).
- 00:41:614 (2,2) - These aren't perfectly stacked.
- 00:58:848 (2) - Having this completely obstructed by 00:58:210 (3) made me read this as just a circle. As it's a slider, I wouldn't completely obstruct it's view since it's difficult to read.
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted since it's not doing anything.
- 01:10:976 (6,7) - These aren't perfectly stacked on the tail.
- 01:15:125 (3,1) - These aren't perfectly stacked.
- 01:19:114 (1,2,3) - As above.

Good luck

Fort wrote:

Yuii- wrote:

[byfar's Extra]

General: Change OD to "8,5" or "9,0". I don't have too much to mod here, but the jumps are way too forced tbh.

seems its right

edit 1:
http://puu.sh/f5Mb7/79a96da5ed.png - just use

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edit 2:
byfar's extra:
i cant really feel my mouse so rigid by playing this map #RIP flow ;_;
okay this is fucking no fun!

00:37:545 (2,3) - this one broke flow remapped this part
00:38:582 (1,1,1) - unnecessary combo spam .. fine
00:39:859 (1,1,1) - feels random + unnecessary combo spam remapped this part
00:41:135 (1,1,2) - ah..... nice flow (and i smashing my mouse there :<<<<) :)
00:43:050 (1,1) - why you nc in 00:43:290 (1) - ? to keep consistency with NCing before
00:44:168 (3,1) - okay ._. http://puu.sh/f5N3b/cc225288fb.png yep
00:58:848 (2) - seems not really readable for this thing change a little
01:03:157 (2) - why no 1/4 slider for kill player? hahahahah >:D lol
01:11:933 (2,1) - oh... i see yep
01:18:316 (1) - why nc this? oops

i swear i didnt mod people map again :< (RIP)
/me commit suicide.

edit 2: i will not stop mod this again.
00:44:327 - and this part is wake it worse enough to kill player with high unnecessary HP, consider lowering it to 6 or 5 [
00:49:433 (1,2,3) - this is ver not consistant because you cant really see follow points in 00:49:752 (2,3) - eh NC'ed a bit

i will back for this!

edit 3: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2622229

i edited this map by HP5, seems okay for some slow part. and more enjoyable than use HP7 (it's VERY STRESSFUL!!) HP 7 to HP 6

Yuii- wrote:

[byfar's Extra]

General: Change OD to "8,5" or "9,0". I don't have too much to mod here, but the jumps are way too forced tbh. fixed somem forced jumps

-Mo- wrote:

Hey, Mod4Mod from your queue.

Easy
- 00:07:305 (3,1) - I would consider this poor polarity and is difficult to read. On lower level difficulties, you should consider red and white ticks as seperate levels of polarity. Probably fixed
- 00:12:891 (4) - Perhaps move to 224:144 to create a triangle with 2 and 3? Probably fixed
- 00:13:688 (1,2,3) - Make a perfect equilateral triangle out of this? The distance from 1-2 is shorter than 1-3. Probably fixed
- 00:40:497 (3) - This would look better if it was a circular blanket over 4 in my opinion. If you view it from [00:41:454], it is parabolic. Probably fixed
- 00:40:497 (3,5) - Kind of minor, but I would prefer it if these didn't overlap. Probably fixed
- 00:55:816 (2,3) - These would look better if they had a circular flow. Currently it looks eccentric. 00:55:816 (2) -

Example

- 00:59:008 (4,1) - As before about polarity. Probably fixed
- 01:00:763 (2,1) - As above.Probably fixed
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted since it's not doing anything. Probably fixed
- 01:11:135 (1,2) - As before about polarity. Probably fixed

Normal
- 00:06:986 (3) - This slider would look better if the curve was more shallow in my opinion. My suggestion would be placing the centre slider point at 416:328. Fixed
- 00:16:880 (3,4) - I don't think this flows well due to how sharp the curve of 4 is. Fixed
- 00:37:625 (4) - Moving to 323:296 would improve the flow. Fixed
- 00:40:657 (1,2) - The flow of these could be improved. Have them be the same shape so that they look symmetrical to eachother. Fixed
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted since it's not doing anything. Fixed

Hard
- 00:07:146 (1) - I don't like how this slider looks. I think a regular bezier curve should suffice. Fixed
- 00:18:954 (1) - Why not have this be a blanket too? I think it would compliment with 00:19:433 (2) very nicely. Fixed
- 00:33:954 (8,1) - I would reduce the spacing between these. Fixed
- 00:35:550 (5) - New combo here and remove the one on 00:36:029 (1) since the new line of the lyrics is here. Fixed
- 01:02:359 (1) - Remove new combo; I don't think it's necessary. Fixed
- 01:12:571 (1) - The flow would be better if the curve of this slider went the other direction. 01:10:976 (1) -
- 01:21:188 (1) - Wow those are some oddly placed slider points. What about just like this? Fixed

Example

Insane
- 00:01:242 (3) - I've commented on this shape of slider before. I think having the slider point at the centre would look better. At least for this one anyway since it's on the horizontal. Fixed
- 00:07:465 (2,3,4) - You could make a regular equilateral triangle out of this. Fixed
- 00:44:327 (1) - Have the blanket of this slider be circular rather than parabolic. If you reverse 00:45:284 (1), you can view a suitable approach circle to work with. Fixed
- 00:59:965 (4,5,6,7,1) - Having two stacks of different timings in the same combo is kind of confusing to read. I was seperate one of these to be flowing rather than stacked. Fixed
- 01:01:242 (4,5,6,7,8) - As above. Fixed
- 01:03:954 - As in handsome's Insane about the spinner and timing point. Fixed
- 01:21:188 (1) - Again with the oddly placed slider points. Follow something similar to the example I gave you before and have a linear point at the centre with bezier curves.Later
- 01:22:465 (1) - As above.
- 01:26:614 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - How about creating a regular shape with Create Polygon Circles for this star instead of placing the notes by hand? Done


Good luck

byfar wrote:

it fits it perfectly as long as you are familiar with the AR and are able to sufficiently play jumps.

-Mo- wrote:

handsome's Insane
- 00:00:923 (1,2,3) - I really thought this was on 1/4 beats at first. Keep this if you really want, but I'm just noting I had trouble reading it. lol its fine
- 00:13:688 (1) - I'm not sure about the head of this slider being completely obstructed from view. Again, keep it if you want, but I personally don't like it. lol its fine
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted. It kind of messes how the spinner sounds. Or atleast I'm not a huge fan of how it silences like that. The alternative would be to end the spinner at this point. nope, fine with this.

SPOILER

1. u have combo colour inconsistencies
2. delete "soul" and "absolute" from tags.

1. 00:23:742 (1,2,3) - nazi stack
2. 00:33:476 (1,2,3,4) - add some hitsounds, drum sample maybe
3. 00:37:944 - even hanzer does this right.
4. 01:14:167 - add some hitsounds
5. 00:41:454 - green line unsnapped?
   okay...

1. 00:02:199 (1,2) - why?
2. 00:59:486 (3) - what is this end snapped to?

1. oh something somewhat normal, thanks
2. missing video
3. 00:32:917 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try drum addition, shouldn't leave a stream unhitsounded
   01:23:423 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^

1. 00:18:316 (7) - use 2 1/2 sliders like before
2. 00:34:752 (2,3,4) - please use 3/4 repeat sliders for all these.

1. 00:31:401 - feels weird without any hitsounds

1. needs a full measure of recovery time 00:00:923 (1,1) -

Kibbleru wrote:

General

1. u have combo colour inconsistencies Fixed
2. delete "soul" and "absolute" from tags. Fixed

Nsane

1. 00:02:199 (1,2) - why? Fixed
   
2. 00:59:486 (3) - what is this end snapped to? Fixed

Hard

1. 00:18:316 (7) - use 2 1/2 sliders like before Changed with something different
2. 00:34:752 (2,3,4) - please use 3/4 repeat sliders for all these.I only changed 2 of them :<

Normal

1. 00:31:401 - feels weird without any hitsounds Added normal hitsound

Easy

1. needs a full measure of recovery time 00:00:923 (1,1) -Removed Spinnier

Why do you use so many brezier sliders?? Ill fix it later


Damn this map is so good, the patterns, the hitsounds, good job.
Im not worthy enough to bubble this. I only know how to deal with bad maps.

Kibbleru wrote:

Handsome

1. oh something somewhat normal, thanks lolk
2. missing video lolk
3. 00:32:917 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try drum addition, shouldn't leave a stream unhitsounded ok
   01:23:423 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ ok

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 63954
Countdown: 0
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Title:Absolute Soul
TitleUnicode:Absolute Soul
Artist:Suzuki Konomi
ArtistUnicode:鈴木このみ
Creator:Owntrolf
Version:handsome's Insane
Source:アブソリュート・デュオ
Tags:Duo Opening handsome byfar  tv size
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dorothy3242 wrote:

Hello Mod From The Banana Queue For Standard
Mini-mod it is because I can't really find anything wrong with this map yeah it's too nice too fun.

[Easy]
00:04:114 (2) – and 00:09:220 (2,3) - are the same sounds so they should probably also have the same pattern in sliders for an easy.
00:17:518 (2) – Rotate -2 degrees to be more of a symmetrical thing with 00:20:071 (2) - Done
01:04:593 (2,3) – (2) is a whole lot more curved than (3) try checking by ctrl+h'ing (3) to make their curves more alikeI think I fixed it View lazy image version of instructions here
01:08:582 (1) - The added whistle sound here sounds weird since it breaks up the clap pattern for seemingly no reason.
01:28:050 (2) – Should probably be the same as the finish sounds used during the kiai since having it like that as a single note is rather.. anti-climatic. In the other difficulties it makes sense since they end in multiple notes with the same sound but here it becomes a bit odd sounding.

[Normal]
00:05:869 (1) - forgive my nazi blanket instincts but you could move that middle point to x:116 y:314 to improve that blanket. Fixed
00:05:710 (5) - Are we missing a clap hereIts not really a clap its a normal-hitnormal fixed
00:39:380 (1) - Why are the whistle additions using the drum set? It sounds a bit out of place.
00:44:327 (1) - Cool slider :3
00:51:667 (4,1) - Consider moving these two to the right a bit since (1) looks rather uncomfortably close to 00:50:391 (3).Fixed
01:28:050 (2) – Same as Easy /;A;/

[Hard]
00:36:827 (1) - This blanket so much pain actually noticed it during gameplay your other blankets are so nice and pretty what is this \;A;/ Fixed
00:50:391 (3) – How about something like this instead so the inner corner isn't so sharp. Fixed

[Insane]
00:50:391 (1) – Oh woah same time as the last slider okay maybe something like this so the curve on the outer side isn't so sharp when it looks like it should be smooth.

Already done here have a nice day nananana~