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hehe

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-10T05:07:40+00:00

Lazer wrote:
[handsome's Insane]

01:05:550 (5) - Sightreaders are going to have a hard time on this one (Not a problem, just pointing it out) its ezpz

This map is pretty solid overall besides a couple flow errors- However you might just be doing that on purpose.

no change lel

[ Nyx ]

102 posts

Joined January 2014

[ Nyx ] 2015-01-10T20:31:16+00:00

Replying to you M4M

Lets go!

These are only suggestions, change what you see fit.

[Easy]

00:06:029 (1,2) - Why not make these the same slider shape?
00:08:582 (1) - Maybe move this down more to better match the flow of the slider before it
00:59:486 (1,2) - Try this: http://puu.sh/el3wR/1029177ada.jpg
01:09:859 (2) - This slider shape doesn't look good, open it up a little more
01:14:805 (1) - Why not add a finish to the slider head
01:28:050 (2) - How about getting rid of this note and having the spinner start here

[Normal]

00:08:423 (1) - I would have preferred it if this was curved instead of straight
00:15:603 (1) - Remove NC
00:16:242 (2) - NC
00:17:518 (1) - Remove NC
00:18:795 (3) - NC
00:19:433 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:603 - Note here?
00:31:880 (3,1) - Blanket better
00:40:657 (1) - Remove NC
00:53:901 (4,1) - Maybe blanket these?
00:55:178 (2,4) - ^

[Hard]

00:00:923 (1,2) - Why not try this pattern http://puu.sh/el6vR/1c1bab4a0a.jpg
00:01:720 (4,1) - Fix up blanket just a little bit
00:28:050 (3,4,5) - try this: http://puu.sh/el7v3/d49e2ff1b6.jpg
00:31:880 (2,1) - These create a not so pretty overlap
00:39:699 (3,1) - Stack
01:10:976 (1,3) - Fix up the curves
01:22:465 (1,2) - Fix blanket

[handsome's Insane]

00:42:412 (3,4) - Stack (Nazi)
01:27:970 (2,3) - Stack (Nazi)

I really do like this insane, well done!

[Absolute Duo]

00:01:242 (3,2) - Why not stack these
00:12:891 (3) - Should the SV change be that big?
00:29:486 (5,6) - Stack (5) and (6)
00:33:954 - I personally am not a big fan of the SV change here, that's just me though
00:49:274 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Didn't you use this exact same layout/pattern in hard?
01:16:082 (1,2,3) - Put (2) in the middle of (1) and (3)

All in all, this map could still use more polishing. Keep it up and good luck!

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-11T01:18:28+00:00

Z3R0Xx wrote:
Replying to you M4M

Lets go!

These are only suggestions, change what you see fit.

[Easy]

00:06:029 (1,2) - Why not make these the same slider shape? Fixed
00:08:582 (1) - Maybe move this down more to better match the flow of the slider before it Fixed
00:59:486 (1,2) - Try this: http://puu.sh/el3wR/1029177ada.jpg Fixed
01:09:859 (2) - This slider shape doesn't look good, open it up a little more Fixed
01:14:805 (1) - Why not add a finish to the slider head wat
01:28:050 (2) - How about getting rid of this note and having the spinner start here Fixed

[Normal]

00:08:423 (1) - I would have preferred it if this was curved instead of straight Fixed
00:15:603 (1) - Remove NC
00:16:242 (2) - NC
00:17:518 (1) - Remove NC
00:18:795 (3) - NC
00:19:433 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:603 - Note here? Fixed
00:31:880 (3,1) - Blanket better I thought it was already a decent blanket
00:40:657 (1) - Remove NC
00:53:901 (4,1) - Maybe blanket these? Fixed
00:55:178 (2,4) - ^ Cant really do much about that :<

[Hard]

00:00:923 (1,2) - Why not try this pattern http://puu.sh/el6vR/1c1bab4a0a.jpg
00:01:720 (4,1) - Fix up blanket just a little bit I dont know what im supposed to fix
00:28:050 (3,4,5) - try this: http://puu.sh/el7v3/d49e2ff1b6.jpg Might be hard to read that
00:31:880 (2,1) - These create a not so pretty overlap Fixed
00:39:699 (3,1) - Stack Fixed
01:10:976 (1,3) - Fix up the curves Fixed
01:22:465 (1,2) - Fix blanket Fixed

[Absolute Duo]

00:01:242 (3,2) - Why not stack these Well the sound feels like it shouldnt stack
00:12:891 (3) - Should the SV change be that big? Fixed
00:29:486 (5,6) - Stack (5) and (6) But the spacing :d
00:33:954 - I personally am not a big fan of the SV change here, that's just me though I think its fine since I dont really like doing slow 1/4 slider chains :<
00:49:274 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Didn't you use this exact same layout/pattern in hard? Fixed switched the combo in hard
01:16:082 (1,2,3) - Put (2) in the middle of (1) and (3) Fixed

All in all, this map could still use more polishing. Keep it up and good luck!

Mystima

71 posts

Joined March 2011

Mystima 2015-01-11T02:36:26+00:00

Greetings from my mod queue :3 (click banner)
General:
The offset is wrong, change to the following:
I will continue the mod when u have fixed this since its a pain to adjust all the notes on all diffs to the right offset.

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-11T03:02:26+00:00

Mystima wrote:

Greetings from my mod queue :3 (click banner)
General:
The offset is wrong, change to the following:
I will continue the mod when u have fixed this since its a pain to adjust all the notes on all diffs to the right offset.

But I think its 923 offset since it matches the middle of the song and it lands on strong beats

Mystima

71 posts

Joined March 2011

Mystima 2015-01-11T03:47:01+00:00

Owntrolf wrote:

Greetings from my mod queue :3 (click banner)
General:
The offset is wrong, change to the following:
I will continue the mod when u have fixed this since its a pain to adjust all the notes on all diffs to the right offset.
But I think its 923 offset since it matches the middle of the song and it lands on strong beats

The map is currently unplayable. The bassdrum plays at blue lines atm, it should be playing on white lines. (Sliders generally start at bassdrum=White line)(your map=blue line=wrong)
PS, if u go to timing tab you can hear the ticks are off beat. (ticks and bassdrum should play at the same time)
Sry for complicated text but you should rly change it.
To convince you: go to timing and take 25% playback rate and let the map run at your offset 923 and then mine 364

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2015-01-11T03:52:18+00:00

yoooooooooo~
dat star spam tho

[General]

Is it just me or the mp3 quality is...bad?

[Easy]

I'd have used 1.1x (or 1.15x hehe) spacing, right now ur notes are very close of each other and it's hard to read for some people etc
00:07:305 (3) - it feels almost obligatory to use 1/1 repeated instead, cuz hitsounds and rhythm before to it. i mean, u have clap 00:06:348 - and 00:06:986 - but the one at 00:07:625 - is ignored which makes the rhythm awkward to play. u could also avoid most of these 1/1 slider imo but i guess they are fine uh. Anyways, it feels much better if u move it somewhere else like x247y72
00:09:859 (3,4) - uh the repeat on (3) feels unneccesary, what about something like this> http://puu.sh/em59B/ab7ce19aad.jpg so u dont ignore the finish at 00:10:976 - same about 00:05:869 - uh
00:13:688 (2) - nc ? the music start here
00:23:423 (5) - add finish (i'd remove clap from this and 00:22:305 (3,4) - to keep just the finish, sound better imo wuu)
00:20:071 (2) - this long slider kinda lose the rhythm, cuz it doesnt follow music nor vocals. ex http://puu.sh/em6vd/e6014e139f.jpg or http://puu.sh/em6RF/e95e43e79a.jpg (well im out of good ideas tbh asda)
00:23:901 (1) - i guess this'd work better just as a circle. cuz how u have mapped similar parts (ex 00:28:369 (4) - )
00:32:837 (2) - finish head hai
00:34:114 (3) - finish eh
00:35:391 (2) - ^ head and tail
00:39:220 (2) - ^ ... 00:40:497 (1) - head and tail..
00:45:509 - too lazy to map?hue. u can also add a spinner from 00:44:327 - to 00:46:880 - i guess
00:47:837 (1,2,3,4) - better use whitles where the high pitched piano are. I mean, delete whistles of 00:47:837 - 00:49:752 - and 00:50:231 -
00:48:157 (2) - also i feel like it should end at 00:48:795 - (u can add repeat there i guess
00:51:986 (2) - it should have finishes on head tail and repeat (delete whistlestoo asda)
00:51:348 - why does this section use default clap >< it's the same sound that before
00:53:901 (1) - delete clap on head asda there's no sound there i think
00:57:093 (1) - feel better if u use circle 2/1 slider like 00:55:178 (2,3) - cuz the girl scream sureteeeeeeeeeeee at 00:57:093 - and the other girl calling kamisama start at 00:57:731 -
00:57:093 (1,1) - it'd be much better if tails stacks instead of overlap /w\
01:00:763 (1) - cancel nc
01:02:040 (1,2) - make it just a slider cuz easy stuffs and 3/2 gaps are not well seen
01:04:114 (1) - why those hitsounds, there's nothing on the music..
01:05:391 (3,1,2,3) - wuu, if u wanna do this.. i'd suggest to not use sliders extremely curved, something smother like 01:09:859 (2) - is much better imo
01:07:305 (3) - also try to not overlap here ;w; ur pattern is already hard to play, uh http://puu.sh/embLH/b189b67689.jpg even something like that'd play better i guess. Also, there's no finish on the music for that slider, the only finish is at 01:07:146 - which u didnt map
01:12:412 (2) - this should start at 01:12:252 - the 3/2 gap feels nice to me
01:09:859 (2) - uhm it's weird that u added a repeat on this one, cuz it doesnt fit vocals, which is what u are mostly mapping. I guess something like this http://puu.sh/emcEX/d6a12d5bbe.jpg (uh it probably sucks.. im tiredx.x)
01:14:805 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/emcVD/3299e21f13.jpg dareeeeimoooo or something like that.
01:21:188 (1) - x.x where this repeat land.. i'd extent 01:20:710 (2) - till 01:21:188 - and add it a repeat > http://puu.sh/emdEz/b692df2605.jpg
01:23:103 (1) - just extend it 1/2 more.. or end it 1/2 before..
01:24:380 (1,2,3) - these are finishes and 01:25:337 (1) - just on tail i guess
01:28:050 (1) - this spinner has nothing to do with the music. i'd just replace it with a circle. the rest is just resonance
Uhm there's still plenty of errors on the hitsounding, uh u should look nc again. some others rhythms can also be improved ada.

[Normal]

why 0.9 sv when ur hard is 1.4 adasd spreed stuff this also makes ur 1/2 sliders short;w;
00:10:178 (1) - this long slider make the player lose the sense of rhythm, cuz it follows nothing (altleast the second half). It's better if u try mapping a rhythm out of it as u did before imo
00:14:008 (2,4) - plz no ;w,
00:15:603 (5) - i'd remove the middle point of it for better flow, and also it looks ugly imoasd
00:18:157 (2,3,4,1) - why these many overlaps.. make it familiar to newbies or something
00:24:061 (1) - i'd try something like 2 1/2 sliders here, it feels kinda empty> http://puu.sh/egIV3/2511c63c29.jpg
00:27:891 (4,1) - maybe stack these(? it's easier to play. And pretty much everytime u have this rhythm like 00:31:720 (2,3) -
00:27:412 (3) - make it 1/2 longer? now it lands on nothing
00:34:274 (3) - it should start at 00:34:114 - and the repeat land on 00:34:752 - i guess cuz vocals is what ur mapping(?.. altho u should map 00:35:231 - out i think
01:00:763 (3) - extend it 1/4 more lol
01:15:603 (2,3) - wu move (3) somewhere more friendly asda like x50y151 and rotate 45°
asda same issues as easy. in addition that ur flow and overlaps are quite forced and doesnt play well uhm

[Hard]

u should consider deleting a bunch of 1/2 notes or changing them to sliders, cuz spreed, its very hard etc. for example 00:05:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - asda quite hard for a hard (keep in mind that it's a 188 bpm song) i'd make 00:05:869 (1,3) - a 1/1 slider
00:15:603 (4) - what is dis
00:16:242 (1,2,3,4) - keep a constant ds between objects on hard
uh not sure how to mod this diff ;w; start deleting some objects and making this diff easier first. Check spacing and nc and hitsounding asda, if u need me just poke me (not sure why would u need me tho lol)

ill leave it here uh, i cant really mod those insanes properly.. if u really want me to do so, just poke me i guess
Gl <3

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-11T03:55:13+00:00

Mystima wrote:
The map is currently unplayable. The bassdrum plays at blue lines atm, it should be playing on white lines. (Sliders generally start at bassdrum=White line)(your map=blue line=wrong)
PS, if u go to timing tab you can hear the ticks are off beat. (ticks and bassdrum should play at the same time)
Sry for complicated text but you should rly change it.
To convince you: go to timing and take 25% playback rate and let the map run at your offset 923 and then mine 364

Did you delete and redownload the song, I changed the mp3 a few times before

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-11T04:49:42+00:00

Milan- wrote:
yoooooooooo~
dat star spam tho

[General]
Is it just me or the mp3 quality is...bad?
[Easy]
I'd have used 1.1x (or 1.15x hehe) spacing, right now ur notes are very close of each other and it's hard to read for some people etc
00:07:305 (3) - it feels almost obligatory to use 1/1 repeated instead, cuz hitsounds and rhythm before to it. i mean, u have clap 00:06:348 - and 00:06:986 - but the one at 00:07:625 - is ignored which makes the rhythm awkward to play. u could also avoid most of these 1/1 slider imo but i guess they are fine uh. Anyways, it feels much better if u move it somewhere else like x247y72 Probably flixed
00:09:859 (3,4) - uh the repeat on (3) feels unneccesary, what about something like this> http://puu.sh/em59B/ab7ce19aad.jpg so u dont ignore the finish at 00:10:976 - same about 00:05:869 - uh Fixed to something different
00:13:688 (2) - nc ? the music start here Fixed
00:23:423 (5) - add finish (i'd remove clap from this and 00:22:305 (3,4) - to keep just the finish, sound better imo wuu)
00:20:071 (2) - this long slider kinda lose the rhythm, cuz it doesnt follow music nor vocals. ex http://puu.sh/em6vd/e6014e139f.jpg or http://puu.sh/em6RF/e95e43e79a.jpg (well im out of good ideas tbh asda) Fixed
00:23:901 (1) - i guess this'd work better just as a circle. cuz how u have mapped similar parts (ex 00:28:369 (4) - ) Fixed
00:32:837 (2) - finish head hai
00:34:114 (3) - finish eh
00:35:391 (2) - ^ head and tail
00:39:220 (2) - ^ ... 00:40:497 (1) - head and tail..
00:45:509 - too lazy to map?hue. u can also add a spinner from 00:44:327 - to 00:46:880 - i guessFixed
00:47:837 (1,2,3,4) - better use whitles where the high pitched piano are. I mean, delete whistles of 00:47:837 - 00:49:752 - and 00:50:231 -
00:48:157 (2) - also i feel like it should end at 00:48:795 - (u can add repeat there i guess Fixed
00:51:986 (2) - it should have finishes on head tail and repeat (delete whistlestoo asda)
00:51:348 - why does this section use default clap >< it's the same sound that before
00:53:901 (1) - delete clap on head asda there's no sound there i think
00:57:093 (1) - feel better if u use circle 2/1 slider like 00:55:178 (2,3) - cuz the girl scream sureteeeeeeeeeeee at 00:57:093 - and the other girl calling kamisama start at 00:57:731 - Im just following the drums here to follow the loud drums
00:57:093 (1,1) - it'd be much better if tails stacks instead of overlap /w\ Fixed
01:00:763 (1) - cancel nc Fixed
01:02:040 (1,2) - make it just a slider cuz easy stuffs and 3/2 gaps are not well seen Fixed
01:04:114 (1) - why those hitsounds, there's nothing on the music..
01:05:391 (3,1,2,3) - wuu, if u wanna do this.. i'd suggest to not use sliders extremely curved, something smother like 01:09:859 (2) - is much better imo
01:07:305 (3) - also try to not overlap here ;w; ur pattern is already hard to play, uh http://puu.sh/embLH/b189b67689.jpg even something like that'd play better i guess. Also, there's no finish on the music for that slider, the only finish is at 01:07:146 - which u didnt map
01:12:412 (2) - this should start at 01:12:252 - the 3/2 gap feels nice to me
01:09:859 (2) - uhm it's weird that u added a repeat on this one, cuz it doesnt fit vocals, which is what u are mostly mapping. I guess something like this http://puu.sh/emcEX/d6a12d5bbe.jpg (uh it probably sucks.. im tiredx.x)
01:14:805 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/emcVD/3299e21f13.jpg dareeeeimoooo or something like that.
01:21:188 (1) - x.x where this repeat land.. i'd extent 01:20:710 (2) - till 01:21:188 - and add it a repeat > http://puu.sh/emdEz/b692df2605.jpg
01:23:103 (1) - just extend it 1/2 more.. or end it 1/2 before..
01:24:380 (1,2,3) - these are finishes and 01:25:337 (1) - just on tail i guess
01:28:050 (1) - this spinner has nothing to do with the music. i'd just replace it with a circle. the rest is just resonance Fixed
Uhm there's still plenty of errors on the hitsounding, uh u should look nc again. some others rhythms can also be improved ada.

[Normal]
why 0.9 sv when ur hard is 1.4 adasd spreed stuff this also makes ur 1/2 sliders short;w;
00:10:178 (1) - this long slider make the player lose the sense of rhythm, cuz it follows nothing (altleast the second half). It's better if u try mapping a rhythm out of it as u did before imo Fixed
00:14:008 (2,4) - plz no ;w, Fixed
00:15:603 (5) - i'd remove the middle point of it for better flow, and also it looks ugly imoasd Fixed
00:18:157 (2,3,4,1) - why these many overlaps.. make it familiar to newbies or something
00:24:061 (1) - i'd try something like 2 1/2 sliders here, it feels kinda empty> http://puu.sh/egIV3/2511c63c29.jpg
00:27:891 (4,1) - maybe stack these(? it's easier to play. And pretty much everytime u have this rhythm like 00:31:720 (2,3) -
00:27:412 (3) - make it 1/2 longer? now it lands on nothing
00:34:274 (3) - it should start at 00:34:114 - and the repeat land on 00:34:752 - i guess cuz vocals is what ur mapping(?.. altho u should map 00:35:231 - out i think
01:00:763 (3) - extend it 1/4 more lol Fixed
01:15:603 (2,3) - wu move (3) somewhere more friendly asda like x50y151 and rotate 45° Fixed
asda same issues as easy. in addition that ur flow and overlaps are quite forced and doesnt play well uhm
[Hard]
u should consider deleting a bunch of 1/2 notes or changing them to sliders, cuz spreed, its very hard etc. for example 00:05:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - asda quite hard for a hard (keep in mind that it's a 188 bpm song) i'd make 00:05:869 (1,3) - a 1/1 slider
00:15:603 (4) - what is dis
00:16:242 (1,2,3,4) - keep a constant ds between objects on hard
uh not sure how to mod this diff ;w; start deleting some objects and making this diff easier first. Check spacing and nc and hitsounding asda, if u need me just poke me (not sure why would u need me tho lol)
ill leave it here uh, i cant really mod those insanes properly.. if u really want me to do so, just poke me i guess
Gl <3

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-11T05:09:26+00:00

Z3R0Xx wrote:
[handsome's Insane]

00:42:412 (3,4) - Stack (Nazi) ok
01:27:970 (2,3) - Stack (Nazi) ok

I really do like this insane, well done! thx

osu file format v13

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375,108,68582,5,10,0:0:0:0:
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14,216,70497,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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103,175,88050,1,4,0:3:0:0:

Mystima

71 posts

Joined March 2011

Mystima 2015-01-11T05:18:46+00:00

Owntrolf wrote:
The map is currently unplayable. The bassdrum plays at blue lines atm, it should be playing on white lines. (Sliders generally start at bassdrum=White line)(your map=blue line=wrong)
PS, if u go to timing tab you can hear the ticks are off beat. (ticks and bassdrum should play at the same time)
Sry for complicated text but you should rly change it.
To convince you: go to timing and take 25% playback rate and let the map run at your offset 923 and then mine 364
Did you delete and redownload the song, I changed the mp3 a few times before

Something was crazy but when I redownloaded the problem was fixed

Gonna do proper mod now.

blissfulyoshi

osu! Alumni

4,755 posts

Joined July 2008

blissfulyoshi 2015-01-11T06:08:59+00:00

You should probably change the combo colors away from the white white and gray that blend in with the video at times ( I know you are trying to blend with their school uniform, but it doesn't make the map that easy to read, esp the gray).

While not a requirement, it will be nice if the guest diff ends at the same time as every other diff. (Personally, I feel the spinner is too loud for the ending)

Absolute Duo:
Why do you want 8 drain, it is pretty much impossible to recover life in the slow section, and the song doesn't give you a break during the chorus. As a result, it is pretty easy to die in this map.

I had a lot of problems figuring out how I want to mod this map, so I am going to shotgun suggestions of all types, which you may or may not want to apply.
00:03:955 (4,5,6) - stack on the end of 00:03:316 (1)?
00:04:274 (7) - this jump was a bit large in comparison to the ones before it esp because you lose momentum from the stack
00:08:423 (1,2) - what is the connection between these 2 notes? I can't see how either note leads to the other
00:14:327 (1,4) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 4 to be consistent with your previous pattern of 1 combo every 1 tall white tick (you are also 1 red tick early, which makes sense with the song, so letting that be)
00:14:965 (4) - stack on the end of 00:14:327 (1)?
00:15:284 (1) - if you did the previous item, remove the new combo here to complete the consistency fix
00:15:284 (1,2) - another time where I wonder about the flow
00:16:880 (1,3) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to be consistent with your previous pattern of 1 combo every 1 tall white tick
00:17:359 (3,4) - move to the right a bit so that the slider looks like it forms a curve with 2
00:17:837 (1) - if you did the previous item, remove the new combo here to complete the consistency fix
00:18:954 (2,4) - fix the overlap (for neatness)
00:20:710 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to be consistent with your previous pattern of 1 combo every 1 tall white tick
00:21:667 (1) - if you did the previous item, remove the new combo here to complete the consistency fix
00:22:146 (3,2) - fix the overlap (for neatness)
00:24:380 (4,5) - prevent these notes from overlapping to make your map look neater
00:26:295 (5,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 5 to be consistent with your previous pattern of 1 combo every 1 tall white tick
00:29:965 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to be consistent with your previous pattern of 1 combo every 1 tall white tick
00:31:401 (6,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 6 to be consistent with your previous pattern of 1 combo every 1 tall white tick
I think you get the idea of the combo mods now, so I'll let you take care of the rest
00:33:476 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - try to make a smooth curve with both the slider and the notes like (doing this quickly, so a bit messy sorry)

SPOILER

00:49:433 (2,3,4) - raise2,3 up a bit and curve 4 so that 4, blankets the end of 2
00:52:944 (5) - move so that 4 blankets the end of it
01:05:550 (7,1) - this jump is huge in comparison to the ones before it, what is the justification for it?
01:09:061 (5,6) - anitjump? why?
01:14:008 (3,4) - stacking made the flow feel a bit weird for me

=================

Posting an incomplete mod because I might have to leave soon. Will work through the rest of the diffs in due time.

-Yuzuriha

581 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2015-01-11T20:22:44+00:00

General

tag Absolute Duo Soul Suzuki Konomi handsome

red remove plz . Artists name do not need .

you need tag opening

Audio lead in 1000 plz~

Easy

00:06:667 (2,3) - 2tail , blanket req~

00:22:784 (5,6) - forrow or stack
http://gyazo.com/cc63788d8ccfb450f3e833da6a5272f7

00:25:497 this saund is not better . i think remove best .
If status quo , 00:29:646 add clap req

00:37:944 (1) - no better Form it try ↓↓↓
http://gyazo.com/92cf33bfca8e2bbe90e5684a04c98fa0

00:43:050　remove finish

00:55:178 (2) - remove finish

01:05:391 (3,1,2,3) - Please listen to the song! I do not know this rhythm pattern

01:16:561 (1) - ^

01:07:625 remove finish ~ Little noisy

01:14:805 add finish req

01:25:337 (1,1) - Is guitar? Is the song?
01:25:337 (1) - this rhythm is song
01:26:614 (1) - this rhythm is guitar

I will either in basic .
song pattern ↓↓↓
http://gyazo.com/2672a3c6175572fc80ad881b74746122

同じ線は消しましょう　　Please be same line erases
http://gyazo.com/2f40d87f30d5cba1e492e6578e7e8b6c

Normal

00:10:178 add clap

00:10:657 (2) - ^

00:10:976 add finish

00:11:774 (4) - clap?

00:18:316 remove clap plz

00:30:603 (4) - and 00:30:923 (1) - tail add clap req

00:34:274 (3,1,2,3) - Since the song is heard well, I want a more flashy sound

00:56:774 (4) - 00:56:135 (3) - this forrow , it try ↓↓↓
http://gyazo.com/be50fa3046d83abefe87cfd66b4e6922

00:58:050 (2) - 　remove clap
00:58:688 ^

Hard

00:13:369 add sample soft vol 5％ req

00:23:582 (5,6) - remove note

00:24:859 (4) - try ↓↓↓
http://gyazo.com/33027e177c2e83998accf9a6d4b738e2

01:26:774 (2) - 　Ctrl G

01:27:252 (3,4,5) - Hard to see

handsome's Insane

00:03:635 (2,8) - stack

00:10:976 (1) - Curve req
http://gyazo.com/40ec4efe09676c6c320bc09fa2c18da9

00:28:369 (4,2) - stack

00:42:412 (3,4) - stack

Absolute Duo

00:09:939 (2) - delete
00:29:087 (2) - ^

00:33:875 (8,1) - why this type ? try↓↓↓
http://gyazo.com/4dd19fede33522e22f89966f06a73471

00:53:183 (6,1) - 　NC　swap

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

good luck ~

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-11T20:23:15+00:00

[Absolute Duo]
k tbh map's kinda ugly (BUT NO KAPPACINO ALRIGHT?)

so mainly this mod's gonna nazi ur aesthetics.
what I can tell after playing through this map is that you used quality time near the beginning and started to rush to quickly finish the map near the end.
The map quality was going str8 ------------->>> down

00:12:252 (1,2,3) - ???
change this completely or make this look good please
00:15:284 (1,2) - space it out??

00:16:401 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/enItT/96fef3180c.jpg ?
00:16:720 (5,1,2,3) - ugly
00:20:710 (1) - space this out
00:23:103 (3) - why would you use a slider tail on such a emphasized note? consider uncurving 00:22:784 (2) - and do something like this http://puu.sh/enJjP/66b7a0d65f.jpg (remove the green tick that changes the SV too)
00:23:901 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern looks ugly and that slider needs aesthetic improvement too
00:25:816 (4) - ? background instrumental starts on redtick @00:25:976 - not on whitetick.
00:17:837 (1) - ugly
00:18:635 (4) - please delete, no beat here
00:27:571 (1) - can you make this slider the same as 00:27:093 (5) -
00:29:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - ugly
00:31:720 (1,2) - no
00:31:401 (6) - bad flow to 00:31:720 (1) -
00:31:880 (2) - slider looks off
00:32:359 (3,4) - replace with slider
00:33:476 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - sigh. ugly
00:34:752 (1,2,3) - ugly
00:34:274 (2,3,4) - bad flow to 00:34:752 (1) -
00:36:268 (4,5) - uigly
00:35:550 (1,2,3) - ugly
00:37:545 (3) - uncurve a little and rotate 35 degrees clockwise? and align this with 00:37:305 (2) - ? http://puu.sh/enL7n/7f2eb88036.jpg
00:38:821 (3,1) - flow
00:39:859 (1,2,3) - ugly
00:41:933 (1,2,3,4,5) - ugly
00:43:050 (1,2,3,4) - ugly
00:49:274 (1) - delete. the emphasis is on the vocal. there is no vocal there
00:49:433 (2,3,4,5) - overlap better
00:50:391 (1) - boring slider. make it more beautiful like this? ---->> http://puu.sh/enLNl/39ee127883.jpg
I feel like you could use less curves and start using more red anchor points in this map
00:51:986 (3,4) - asdfa
00:53:901 (1,2) - space out
01:01:242 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - ?? --->> http://puu.sh/enMhl/216d68f363.jpg ??
01:02:359 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - make this cleaner?? -->> http://puu.sh/enMC1/9d806e2218.jpg
01:08:423 (1,2,3,4,5) - turn it into a star pattern please

k owntrolf. please go through your entire map again because the sliders are just way too low quality. consider using blankets, rad anchors and better flow.

[Handsome's insane]
00:09:220 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - messy
00:11:295 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:14:646 (4) - slightly jump this note (maybe like 2x DS) but keep the distance to 00:14:805 (1) - the same (1x)
00:25:337 (2) - to x:44 y:285
01:05:550 (5) - ctrl +g. flows better and easier to read
01:12:252 (1) - u should stack the slider tail with 01:13:210 (5) - slider head
01:16:242 (1) - ctrl + g
01:16:720 (2) - align with 01:16:242 (1) -

not bad

[Hard]
00:06:189 (3,5,6) - not the same spacing as previous?
00:15:603 (4) - disturbing slider
00:28:369 (4,5) - blanket better. this is currently what it looks like http://puu.sh/enPTt/b2d1e05ef1.jpg and I want the slider to perfectly blanket the approach circle

00:39:859 (4,5,6) - disturbing shape
00:40:337 (6) - if i were u i'd turn this into 2 1/2 notes
01:06:508 (1) - dsfadsafsd

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-11T23:26:16+00:00

byfar wrote:
[Absolute Duo]
k tbh map's kinda ugly (BUT NO KAPPACINO ALRIGHT?)

so mainly this mod's gonna nazi ur aesthetics.
what I can tell after playing through this map is that you used quality time near the beginning and started to rush to quickly finish the map near the end.
The map quality was going str8 ------------->>> down

00:12:252 (1,2,3) - ???
change this completely or make this look good please
00:15:284 (1,2) - space it out?? Fixed

00:16:401 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/enItT/96fef3180c.jpg ? Fixed
00:16:720 (5,1,2,3) - ugly
00:20:710 (1) - space this out
00:23:103 (3) - why would you use a slider tail on such a emphasized note? consider uncurving 00:22:784 (2) - and do something like this http://puu.sh/enJjP/66b7a0d65f.jpg (remove the green tick that changes the SV too)Fixed
00:23:901 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern looks ugly and that slider needs aesthetic improvement tooFixed
00:25:816 (4) - ? background instrumental starts on redtick @00:25:976 - not on whitetick.
00:17:837 (1) - ugly Fixed
00:18:635 (4) - please delete, no beat here
00:27:571 (1) - can you make this slider the same as 00:27:093 (5) - Fixed
00:29:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - ugly
00:31:720 (1,2) - no
00:31:401 (6) - bad flow to 00:31:720 (1) -
00:31:880 (2) - slider looks off
00:32:359 (3,4) - replace with slider
00:33:476 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - sigh. ugly I think fixed
00:34:752 (1,2,3) - ugly
00:34:274 (2,3,4) - bad flow to 00:34:752 (1) -
00:36:268 (4,5) - uigly
00:35:550 (1,2,3) - ugly
00:37:545 (3) - uncurve a little and rotate 35 degrees clockwise? and align this with 00:37:305 (2) - ? http://puu.sh/enL7n/7f2eb88036.jpg
00:38:821 (3,1) - flow
00:39:859 (1,2,3) - ugly
00:41:933 (1,2,3,4,5) - ugly
00:43:050 (1,2,3,4) - ugly
00:49:274 (1) - delete. the emphasis is on the vocal. there is no vocal there
00:49:433 (2,3,4,5) - overlap better
00:50:391 (1) - boring slider. make it more beautiful like this? ---->> http://puu.sh/enLNl/39ee127883.jpg
I feel like you could use less curves and start using more red anchor points in this map
00:51:986 (3,4) - asdfa Fixed
00:53:901 (1,2) - space out Fixed
01:01:242 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - ?? --->> http://puu.sh/enMhl/216d68f363.jpg ??
01:02:359 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - make this cleaner?? -->> http://puu.sh/enMC1/9d806e2218.jpg Fixed
01:08:423 (1,2,3,4,5) - turn it into a star pattern please Fixed

k owntrolf. please go through your entire map again because the sliders are just way too low quality. consider using blankets, rad anchors and better flow. Feels so circle now
[Hard]
00:06:189 (3,5,6) - not the same spacing as previous? Fixed
00:15:603 (4) - disturbing slider Fixed
00:28:369 (4,5) - blanket better. this is currently what it looks like http://puu.sh/enPTt/b2d1e05ef1.jpg and I want the slider to perfectly blanket the approach circle Fixed

00:39:859 (4,5,6) - disturbing shape
00:40:337 (6) - if i were u i'd turn this into 2 1/2 notes
01:06:508 (1) - dsfadsafsd Fixed

Maeglwn

Maeglwn 2015-01-12T05:38:40+00:00

~~THIS MAP SUCKS~~

[Easy]

00:07:305 (3) - this note should be blanketed around 2 and it shouldn't alst nearly as long as it does because you're missing the crucial downbeat while the slider is still going and the end of the slider doesn't actually hit anything
00:22:784 (5,6,1) - some weird ass flow here but I guess it's fine. it is an easy though, and 1 is on screen at the same time 6 is. so it might be confusing. might want to make 6 flow better.
00:24:540 (2,3) - blanket 3 around the end of 2 pls it'd look cuter
00:40:497 (1,2) - blanket these yo
01:21:188 (1,2) - same thing here. weird-ish flow. this one is probably more okay but yea

[Normal]

00:09:220 (2,3,4) - this triangle looks REALLY angry at life. look at it. this triangle is struggling with its life and you need to put it out of its misery
00:18:157 (1,1) - visible overlap here
01:28:210 (1) - why the spinner there's no reason to have it honestly song ends on 4, spinner is just needless extra

[Hard]

00:16:401 (2,3,4,1) - I don't really see any reason to keep these stacked, there's nothing in the music that notes a stopping point for flow
00:43:688 (1,2,3) - this is unreadable. people are gonna try and hit this like it's 1/4th when it's not. space out to actual DS
00:49:274 (1) - make this a 1/2 slider that starts on the white tick instead of the way it is now
00:55:497 (4,1) - this is overlapping FEEX
00:57:571 (2,3) - and this
01:07:146 (3,4,5,6) - you should space these out more so they're not overlapping cause I don't know if this is rankable like this considering how they're all definitely overlapping during play

jesus christ looking at this map in edit mode with all the overlapping makes me hurt

[handsome's Insane]

00:03:635 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I literally hate everything about this, this is not a good way to open a map and I despise it in every way but that's just my opinion so do whatever with it
00:06:188 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - god it stings
00:08:742 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - jesus christ dude this is like almost unreadable what are you doing, like you realize this is an insane right holy crap this is REALLY hard
00:32:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is overmapping. very, very blatant overmapping. after removing the notes and just listening to the song itself, there's definitely nothing there that warrants this
00:34:832 (4,6) - so is this
okay I can't mod this anymore I'm sorry like I looked at the second half of the map first and I thought itw as going to be really good ,and honestly it is really clean and stuff but GOD I hate the patterns that are used so excessively in this map and I hate the overmapping, so I'm just going to spare you the rest. since all of this is opinionated I don't expect you to take any of it, but this in my opinion is definitely an issue

I'm not modding the last 2 diffs because of the above reason as well and the extremely excessive difficulty

good luck, I mean.. yea, I don't really know what else to say. I have a lot of personal issues with the last 3 diffs, but since it's probably not a thing that everybody thinks I'm not going to mod them at all

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-12T05:53:20+00:00

handsoem's insane

nominated best PP map of 2015

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-12T06:43:22+00:00

Maeglwn wrote:
~~THIS MAP SUCKS~~

[Easy]
00:07:305 (3) - this note should be blanketed around 2 and it shouldn't alst nearly as long as it does because you're missing the crucial downbeat while the slider is still going and the end of the slider doesn't actually hit anything Fixed
00:22:784 (5,6,1) - some weird ass flow here but I guess it's fine. it is an easy though, and 1 is on screen at the same time 6 is. so it might be confusing. might want to make 6 flow betterFixed
00:24:540 (2,3) - blanket 3 around the end of 2 pls it'd look cuterFixed
00:40:497 (1,2) - blanket these yoFixed
01:21:188 (1,2) - same thing here. weird-ish flow. this one is probably more okay but yea
[Normal]
00:09:220 (2,3,4) - this triangle looks REALLY angry at life. look at it. this triangle is struggling with its life and you need to put it out of its misery
00:18:157 (1,1) - visible overlap here Fixed
01:28:210 (1) - why the spinner there's no reason to have it honestly song ends on 4, spinner is just needless extra/color]
[Hard]
00:16:401 (2,3,4,1) - I don't really see any reason to keep these stacked, there's nothing in the music that notes a stopping point for flow
00:43:688 (1,2,3) - this is unreadable. people are gonna try and hit this like it's 1/4th when it's not. space out to actual DS Fixed
00:49:274 (1) - make this a 1/2 slider that starts on the white tick instead of the way it is now Fixed
00:55:497 (4,1) - this is overlapping FEEXFixed
00:57:571 (2,3) - and this Fixed
01:07:146 (3,4,5,6) - you should space these out more so they're not overlapping cause I don't know if this is rankable like this considering how they're all definitely overlapping during playFixed

jesus christ looking at this map in edit mode with all the overlapping makes me hurt
I'm not modding the last 2 diffs because of the above reason as well and the extremely excessive difficulty

good luck, I mean.. yea, I don't really know what else to say. I have a lot of personal issues with the last 3 diffs, but since it's probably not a thing that everybody thinks I'm not going to mod them at all

Last edited by Owntrolf 2015-01-12T14:31:23+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-12T09:20:10+00:00

-Yuzuriha-inori- > thx for mod

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:
handsome's Insane

00:03:635 (2,8) - stack

00:10:976 (1) - Curve req do not like

00:28:369 (4,2) - stack

00:42:412 (3,4) - stack

byfar > ty for mod~

byfar wrote:
[Handsome's insane]
00:09:220 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - messy fixed it up
00:11:295 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ doesnt need fixing
00:14:646 (4) - slightly jump this note (maybe like 2x DS) but keep the distance to 00:14:805 (1) - the same (1x) i wanna keep this calm first
00:25:337 (2) - to x:44 y:285 i don't like this, pretty boring-ish pattern
01:05:550 (5) - ctrl +g. flows better and easier to read no, opening a new pattern, use antiflow
01:12:252 (1) - u should stack the slider tail with 01:13:210 (5) - slider head i like the current spacing, don't want to mess with it for now
01:16:242 (1) - ctrl + g blah i understand your point but i dislike this flow
01:16:720 (2) - align with 01:16:242 (1) - intentional

not bad ty

Maeglwn > ty for mod

Maeglwn wrote:
[handsome's Insane]
00:03:635 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I literally hate everything about this, this is not a good way to open a map and I despise it in every way but that's just my opinion so do whatever with it asdf
00:06:188 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - god it stings asdf
00:08:742 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - jesus christ dude this is like almost unreadable what are you doing, like you realize this is an insane right holy crap this is REALLY hard looks messy in edit but its definitely playable ingame...
00:32:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is overmapping. very, very blatant overmapping. after removing the notes and just listening to the song itself, there's definitely nothing there that warrants this there is though, its pretty soft but its there. i mean even fi you can't hear the 1/4s the 1/8s are really audible.
00:34:832 (4,6) - so is this this is not overmapped, not two ways about it. its extremely audible doubles in the drums.
okay I can't mod this anymore I'm sorry like I looked at the second half of the map first and I thought itw as going to be really good ,and honestly it is really clean and stuff but GOD I hate the patterns that are used so excessively in this map and I hate the overmapping, so I'm just going to spare you the rest. since all of this is opinionated I don't expect you to take any of it, but this in my opinion is definitely an issue
i understand your opinion, and its a shame that you didnt like my map. i guess not everyone can be satisfied. but thank you for looking at it anyway.

byfar wrote:
handsoem's insane

nominated best PP map of 2015 this was heavily nerfed. original had a little more spacing and was 5.1~ ;_;

coed

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Owntrolf

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Owntrolf 2015-01-13T02:59:24+00:00

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:
General

tag Absolute Duo Soul Suzuki Konomi handsome

red remove plz . Artists name do not need .Fixed

you need tag openingFixed

Audio lead in 1000 plz~Fixed

Easy

00:06:667 (2,3) - 2tail , blanket req~ Fixed

00:22:784 (5,6) - forrow or stack Fixed
http://gyazo.com/cc63788d8ccfb450f3e833da6a5272f7

00:25:497 this saund is not better . i think remove best . Fixed
If status quo , 00:29:646 add clap req

00:37:944 (1) - no better Form it try ↓↓↓ Fixed
http://gyazo.com/92cf33bfca8e2bbe90e5684a04c98fa0

00:43:050　remove finish Fixed

00:55:178 (2) - remove finish Fixed

01:05:391 (3,1,2,3) - Please listen to the song! I do not know this rhythm pattern
01:16:561 (1) - ^

01:07:625 remove finish ~ Little noisy Fixed

01:14:805 add finish req Fixed

01:25:337 (1,1) - Is guitar? Is the song?
01:25:337 (1) - this rhythm is song
01:26:614 (1) - this rhythm is guitar

I will either in basic .
song pattern ↓↓↓
http://gyazo.com/2672a3c6175572fc80ad881b74746122

同じ線は消しましょう　　Please be same line erases
http://gyazo.com/2f40d87f30d5cba1e492e6578e7e8b6c

Normal

00:10:178 add clapFixed

00:10:657 (2) - ^ Fixed

00:10:976 add finish Fixed

00:11:774 (4) - clap? Fixed

00:18:316 remove clap plz Fixed

00:30:603 (4) - and 00:30:923 (1) - tail add clap req Fixed

00:34:274 (3,1,2,3) - Since the song is heard well, I want a more flashy sound

00:56:774 (4) - 00:56:135 (3) - this forrow , it try ↓↓↓
http://gyazo.com/be50fa3046d83abefe87cfd66b4e6922 Fixed

00:58:050 (2) - 　remove clapFixed
00:58:688 ^Fixed

Hard

00:13:369 add sample soft vol 5％ req

00:23:582 (5,6) - remove noteFixed

00:24:859 (4) - try ↓↓↓ Fixed
http://gyazo.com/33027e177c2e83998accf9a6d4b738e2

01:26:774 (2) - 　Ctrl G Fixed

01:27:252 (3,4,5) - Hard to see Fixed

Absolute Duo

00:09:939 (2) - delete
00:29:087 (2) - ^

00:33:875 (8,1) - why this type ? try↓↓↓
http://gyazo.com/4dd19fede33522e22f89966f06a73471

00:53:183 (6,1) - 　NC　swap

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good luck ~

Owntrolf

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Owntrolf 2015-01-13T03:27:58+00:00

SPOILER

18:54 LordRaika: hi ^^/
18:54 Owntrolf: hi
18:54 *LordRaika is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/593647 Suzuki Konomi - Absolute Soul [Absolute Duo]]
18:54 Owntrolf: hi modder guy
18:54 LordRaika: regarding your request
18:54 LordRaika: >w<
18:54 LordRaika: hmmmm
18:54 Owntrolf: redownload it it got renamed to insane
18:54 LordRaika: oh
18:56 LordRaika: okay
18:56 LordRaika: so im too lazy to post stuff
18:56 LordRaika: i mod not because i wnt a kds
18:57 LordRaika: so i will give a quick check via IRC ^^
18:57 LordRaika: and some suggestion
18:57 Owntrolf: sure
18:57 LordRaika: 00:00:923 (1,2) - why not add whistle too here?
18:57 LordRaika: its kick sound right
18:58 Owntrolf: fixed
18:58 LordRaika: im not nazi modder XD but....
18:58 LordRaika: 00:03:795 - from here, u add clap for each 2/1
18:59 LordRaika: but the song is full of kick only.... no snare sound or whatsover >w<
18:59 LordRaika: u sure wnt to keep it?
18:59 Owntrolf: idunno :d
18:59 LordRaika: err actually its fine ^^
18:59 LordRaika: maybe reduce the volume into 30%
19:00 LordRaika: to have a different feeling on chorus
19:00 Owntrolf: for that one note?
19:00 LordRaika: no no
19:00 LordRaika: 00:03:316 - this timing, set to 30~35% volume
19:01 LordRaika: and now
19:01 LordRaika: 00:14:008 (3) - from here, for each 2/1 , remove the clap, yeah absolutely no drum snare here ^^
19:01 LordRaika: View > volume > music 100% , sample 0%
19:02 LordRaika: 00:23:901 - this part, yes, u can keep all the clap ^^b its nice
19:02 Owntrolf: wut you can actually set it to 0%
19:02 LordRaika: hehe yea
19:02 LordRaika: to listen to the music
19:02 LordRaika: actually thts just your option
19:03 LordRaika: it wont effect other player
19:03 LordRaika: say... do u ever use whistle in this song?
19:04 LordRaika: if not, im going to suggest a custom hitsound of soft-hitwhistle
19:04 Owntrolf: theres already a soft hitwhistle :>
19:04 LordRaika: ah
19:04 LordRaika: damn
19:04 LordRaika: i forgot
19:05 LordRaika: let me change the question XD
19:05 LordRaika: can u change the sampleset without using timing >w<
19:05 LordRaika: can u change the sampleset without using timing >w< ?
19:05 Owntrolf: i dont think so
19:05 LordRaika: hmmm want to try that? >w< ???
19:06 Owntrolf: but :d
19:07 LordRaika: here
19:07 LordRaika: u will knw what i mean
19:07 LordRaika: [https://www.dropbox.com/s/4trmd2ah5ctfy3h/LR_Drum%20Hit%20Clap%20Sn.wav?dl=0 download and rename this into drum-hitclap] and put inside song folder, exit and reenter editor
19:08 LordRaika: 00:33:476 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - press CTRL+R >w< ( this change the additional into : drum set ) without touching new timing
19:08 LordRaika: howd u like that one?
19:09 Owntrolf: sounds a bit weird :d
19:09 LordRaika: its actually a drum roll
19:10 LordRaika: nah, its okay too if u dont like it

19:11 LordRaika: 00:33:476 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - then add fiinish , remove clap, but keep the additional drum
19:11 LordRaika: like u did here
19:11 LordRaika: 00:53:263 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
19:12 Owntrolf: I mostly just did that because there wasnt any of the fancy customs
19:13 LordRaika: fancy XD
19:13 LordRaika: ahaha
19:13 LordRaika: [https://www.dropbox.com/s/v3tbaw2vx3n1x9r/LR_Kick%20Loud%20Bass%20Drop.wav?dl=0 try this as drum-hitfinish] and check those part
19:16 Owntrolf: welp doesnt work
19:16 LordRaika: exit and reenter editor to redresh
19:16 LordRaika: *refresh
19:17 Owntrolf: fixed had to set custom drums
19:17 LordRaika: ops i forgot u use simple S there XD
19:17 LordRaika: well?
19:17 LordRaika: hmm sounds okay?
19:17 Owntrolf: it sounds fine .-.
19:18 LordRaika: and i cant really find missing hitsound ^^b
19:18 LordRaika: nice
19:18 Owntrolf: \o/
19:18 Owntrolf: howtosavechatlogplstellhow
19:18 Owntrolf: !log
19:18 LordRaika: 01:24:380 - this part is, u spam the clap too much XD
19:18 Owntrolf: :>
19:18 LordRaika: why not use that drumfinish here now
19:19 LordRaika: because at the music, its only heavy kick sound
19:19 LordRaika: no drum snare
19:19 Owntrolf: sounds like a rolling drum x.x
19:22 LordRaika: [https://www.dropbox.com/sh/dpw4uevtd47xv5h/AACoiSEIynVEivql05352mPJa allrite, XD there, find your preferences ^^]
19:22 Owntrolf: asdf error
19:23 LordRaika: oh
19:23 LordRaika: dropbox is down right now orz
19:23 LordRaika: i cant acccess my own dropbox
19:23 LordRaika: jst a few scd ago
19:23 Owntrolf: op
19:23 LordRaika: they will restore in a few moment i think XD

Thanks Raika

Malikil

64 posts

Joined August 2013

Malikil 2015-01-13T05:24:07+00:00

Mod as requested

Easy
You seem to be changing the consistency of note placement quite a bit throughout the song, or at least it's very sudden when you do, for an easy difficulty you'll probably be wanting to favor consistency in timeline placement over directly using only certain notes out of the song. Because players who are playing easy are still building their basic play skills and still getting used to the idea of how the game is played. When you throw a sudden timing change at them, they won't have any idea what happened.
00:21:667 (3) - This is the sort of thing I mean above, before this you were keeping notes on every second white mark, then this is saying "here have a note one white early, think fast"
00:24:540 (2) - I think it sounds a bit strange to be leaving out the long white mark here.
00:49:433 (3,4,1) - Consider making this a single repeat slider.
00:59:486 (1,2,3) - Don't start these on the red marks, it's a sudden change in consistency from immediately before it.
01:21:188 (1) - Consider starting this on the long white mark.
01:28:050 (2) - Move this to the previous red mark, so that it stays consistent with the last few notes.

Normal
Your consistency here also seems a bit lacking, but it's not quite so drastic and doesn't really affect playability as much as in easy.
00:10:178 (1,2,3) - Consider a circle folowed by a repeat slider then another circle. That way you still hit all the same notes, but you don't have a standalone circle on a red mark with nothing on the white before it. Like this:

00:19:912 (2) - Replace this slider with a circle on the white mark in the middle, to maintain consistency.
00:29:646 (3,4) - Either make this two sliders, or make 3 a repeat slider so that you hit the white mark.
00:32:837 (1,2) - Make this one repeat slider
00:34:274 (3) - Consider putting just a circle on the white mark, then having a 3/4 repeat slider to match the vocals.
00:35:710 (1,2,3) - Try a putting a circle, followed by a repeat slider, then move 3 to the next white mark. Because right now 2 doesn't match up to anything and sounds really bad to play.
01:09:220 (2,1) - Repeat 2, then put a circle at the end of 1 to maintain timing consistency.
01:12:891 (3,4) - End both of these on the red marks.
01:25:337 (1,2,3) - This might be a bit too much for a normal, but it's probably fine given some of the other points in the song.

Hard
There are a few points where it's a bit awkward to play, but overall what you've got here seems pretty reasonable already. Though it does seem like a rather large step up from normal.
00:00:923 (1) - Consider ending the slider on the red mark, and adding a circle where it ends now.
00:03:954 (4) - Is this repeat really neccecary?
00:16:401 (2,3,4,1) - Unstack these
00:18:157 (6,1) - Consider unstacking these as well.
00:26:614 (1,2) - These probably don't need to be stacked.
00:31:880 (2,3,4,5) - This is a bit awkward to play
00:52:944 (1,2) - Why not just extend 1 for the whole duration and do away with the repeater.
01:05:869 (3) - See 00:03:954 (4)
01:07:146 (3,4,5,6) - That might be a bit too much overlap
01:13:609 (4,1,2,3,4) - Consider removing 4,1 as they aren't matching anything in the music, then spacing out 2,3,4
01:18:635 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a slider to match the vocals?
01:21:188 (1,2,1) - This is a bit awkward to play

handsome's Insane
I couldn't actually play this, so everything I say is just from within the editor.
00:03:635 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I don't see what pattern was used here, there doesn't seem to be any consistency with where in the hexagon each circle is placed.
00:39:859 (4,5) - These don't line up with the vocals, like you've been doing elsewhere
00:41:135 (4,5) - ^
00:45:284 - Add a note?
00:45:923 - ^
01:14:646 - ^

Insane
I can't play this, and I didn't see anything from in the editor.

byfar's Extra
Okay, now you've lost me

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-13T05:35:34+00:00

Malikil wrote:
handsome's Insane
I couldn't actually play this, so everything I say is just from within the editor.
00:03:635 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I don't see what pattern was used here, there doesn't seem to be any consistency with where in the hexagon each circle is placed. it still play fine as a jump pattern.
00:39:859 (4,5) - These don't line up with the vocals, like you've been doing elsewhere keeping it calm here where the drums are quite prominent, i don't feel like following the vocals is necessary.
00:41:135 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:45:284 - Add a note? no, keeping lower rhythm
00:45:923 - ^ no, keeping lower rhythm
01:14:646 - ^ starting on instruments

no change and plz update with my previous code

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-13T06:11:36+00:00

need testplaysssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-13T15:50:51+00:00

Malikil wrote:
Mod as requested

Easy
You seem to be changing the consistency of note placement quite a bit throughout the song, or at least it's very sudden when you do, for an easy difficulty you'll probably be wanting to favor consistency in timeline placement over directly using only certain notes out of the song. Because players who are playing easy are still building their basic play skills and still getting used to the idea of how the game is played. When you throw a sudden timing change at them, they won't have any idea what happened.
00:21:667 (3) - This is the sort of thing I mean above, before this you were keeping notes on every second white mark, then this is saying "here have a note one white early, think fast" I think they usually just stare deeply into the approach circle to press
00:24:540 (2) - I think it sounds a bit strange to be leaving out the long white mark here. Welcome to the songs of not alwayswhiteticks :<
00:49:433 (3,4,1) - Consider making this a single repeat slider. No because I dont thing it would sound as nice :d[/color ]
00:59:486 (1,2,3) - Don't start these on the red marks, it's a sudden change in consistency from immediately before it.
01:21:188 (1) - Consider starting this on the long white mark. Sounds weird
01:28:050 (2) - Move this to the previous red mark, so that it stays consistent with the last few notes. Welcome to the songs of not alwayswhiteticks :<

Normal
Your consistency here also seems a bit lacking, but it's not quite so drastic and doesn't really affect playability as much as in easy.
00:10:178 (1,2,3) - Consider a circle folowed by a repeat slider then another circle. That way you still hit all the same notes, but you don't have a standalone circle on a red mark with nothing on the white before it. Like this:But it still sounds fine :d

00:19:912 (2) - Replace this slider with a circle on the white mark in the middle, to maintain consistency. But it still sounds fine :d
00:29:646 (3,4) - Either make this two sliders, or make 3 a repeat slider so that you hit the white mark.Sometimes its not always about white ticks
00:32:837 (1,2) - Make this one repeat sliderBut ill lose the blanket :d
00:34:274 (3) - Consider putting just a circle on the white mark, then having a 3/4 repeat slider to match the vocals. That will make it much harder to hit because 2 things right after a slider
00:35:710 (1,2,3) - Try a putting a circle, followed by a repeat slider, then move 3 to the next white mark. Because right now 2 doesn't match up to anything and sounds really bad to play.That part is sort of following the beats
01:09:220 (2,1) - Repeat 2, then put a circle at the end of 1 to maintain timing consistency.Following vocals tho
01:12:891 (3,4) - End both of these on the red marks. Nevarr
01:25:337 (1,2,3) - This might be a bit too much for a normal, but it's probably fine given some of the other points in the song. It seems pretty easy its just repeats :d

Hard
There are a few points where it's a bit awkward to play, but overall what you've got here seems pretty reasonable already. Though it does seem like a rather large step up from normal.
00:00:923 (1) - Consider ending the slider on the red mark, and adding a circle where it ends now.
00:03:954 (4) - Is this repeat really neccecary?Effeects
00:16:401 (2,3,4,1) - Unstack these
00:18:157 (6,1) - Consider unstacking these as well.
00:26:614 (1,2) - These probably don't need to be stacked.
00:31:880 (2,3,4,5) - This is a bit awkward to play
00:52:944 (1,2) - Why not just extend 1 for the whole duration and do away with the repeater.Because drum rolls
01:05:869 (3) - See 00:03:954 (4) Effeects
01:07:146 (3,4,5,6) - That might be a bit too much overlap Its probably ok since its a higher hard
01:13:609 (4,1,2,3,4) - Consider removing 4,1 as they aren't matching anything in the music, then spacing out 2,3,4Feels weird without them because long pauses
01:18:635 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a slider to match the vocals? Sort of already matches
01:21:188 (1,2,1) - This is a bit awkward to play Its to match vocals

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2015-01-14T05:12:47+00:00

Yo, M4M wow dis star spam

General

Remove "Absolute" from tags, already in the Title
Disable Widescreen support on all difficulties
Add a silent sliderslide? Bugs me to not have one

byfar's Extra

First off, check AImod. Couple of errors in there. My hitsound mods are gonna be in Owntrolf's difficulty since you're copying them from there.
00:14:805 (5) - Should probably rotate this by 38 degrees counter-clockwise for better flow from 00:14:646 (4) since that's such a crazy jump. Also add NC here.
00:15:763 (1) - Remove NC and add NC on 00:16:242 (4).
00:18:476 (3) - Would be better to revise this so that a note is on 00:18:795 rather than a slider end.
00:19:433 (4,2) - Not really sure what these SV changes are emphasizing. Vocals don't really suggest anything like this.
00:21:508 (1) - I'd move this to (490, 182) for better readability and flow leading into 00:21:667 (2).
00:24:061 (4,8) - This should look the same as 00:24:220 (5,2). Pick which you think looks better and adjust one of them so it looks more clean.
00:27:571 (1,1) - Did you miss the stack on 00:26:295 (3) purposely? Because it looks bleh to me.
00:28:848 (5,6) - Blanket
00:31:401 (1) - Probably sounds better as a 1/1
00:39:061 (1) - Ctrl + G would feel a lot better
00:40:258 (1) - This slider starts on nothing :3
00:40:417 (1) - ^
00:43:688 (2,2) - These are getting pretty close to the HP bar
00:44:327 (3,1) - It'd make more sense to start the NC on (3)
00:53:901 (3) - Maybe replace this with a 1/4 slider to follow the vocal
00:54:220 (6,1) - This rhythm probably fits more (copy the NC aswell)
01:26:614 (1,1,1) - 1/2 circle spam would be a better idea tbh

Insane

00:02:199 (1,2) - It'd be a lot nicer for these to be stacked, doubles are already hard as it is.
00:03:316 (1) - Remove whistle on tail
00:04:274 (7,8) - Flows better and looks more appealing like this
00:05:231 (4,5) - Remove finishes. Should be a whistle on tail on (5) instead of clap.
00:05:869 (1) - Finish on head
00:06:188 (2) - Whistle
00:08:423 (1) - Finish on head and remove whistle on tail
00:08:742 (2) - whistle
00:10:337 (5,6) - Not really cymbals, I wouldn't use finishes here
00:10:976 (1) - finish and remove whistle
00:13:688 (1) - Add finish
00:20:710 (1) - Adjust blanket
00:23:742 - where da triplet at?
00:25:497 (3,4,5) - Try out this rhythm
00:27:093 (5) - Ctrl + H and rotate a little bit clockwise. Circle to slider is a lot harder to execute than slider to circle and this helps with the flow.
00:28:369 (5,6) - Awkward to play, rotating (6) clockwise would help the flow.
00:34:752 (1,2,3) - Space these out evenly and NC on 00:35:231 (3) - for the SV change.
00:36:029 (3,4,5) - Should space these out evenly too. Maybe increase SV for 00:36:508 (5) - since you did that previously
00:38:582 (2,3) - NC on both of these for SV changes
00:51:986 (3,4) - Finishes instead of whistles
00:52:465 - Useless green line
00:52:465 (4) - NC for SV change
00:53:183 - Not really necessary to have a note here. Makes the stream look funny anyways because of the comboing.
00:53:901 (1) - Remove clap
00:54:220 (2) - Normal sample set sounds better to use his rather than soft-hitclap
00:54:540 - Oh man the drum sampleset. I guess it fits for some places but soft-whistle fits a lot better on places such as 00:55:018 (2) -
00:55:497 (4,1) - Remove hitsounds from these
00:56:614 (4,1) - ^. I'll just skip the rest of this section for hitsounding.
01:03:396 (1) - It'd be more epic to remove the spinner and have two notes on the vocals at 01:04:114 and 01:04:274

Hitsounding in the kiai is just off to me. To shorten this mod, PM if you want my advice on those

My Love Handsome's Insane

00:08:423 (1) - finish
00:10:337 (4) - Not sure if finishes work here
00:10:816 (5,3) - Make this overlap like 00:11:295 (2,5) -
00:13:688 (1) - Nazi: move to (288,291)
00:37:944 (2,3,4,5) - Would it kill you to change these to 1/4 sliders? All those doubles are killer
00:38:582 (2) - Move to (275,129)
00:39:220 (1) - finish
01:03:396 (1) - Hitsounds do not sound good at the end of this spinner
01:09:699 (1) - finish
01:14:805 (1) - ^
01:20:391 (2) - remove finish
01:23:103 (4) - idk what you're hitsounding here, but I don't hear any of those.
01:26:295 (1) - finish instead of whistle
01:26:774 (2,3,4,5,6) - Normal sampleset spam here? Also at the end of 01:26:295 (1) - if you do that
01:27:571 (1) - drum clap

Nice job, looks like the cleanest in the set

Good luck!

blissfulyoshi

osu! Alumni

4,755 posts

Joined July 2008

blissfulyoshi 2015-01-14T05:58:02+00:00

Slowly making my way through your diffs. (No kds pls, since you gave me kds earlier)

Normal:
Your mix of red and white ticks make this diff really hard to follow at times, and I often lose track of what you are trying to snap to.
00:10:178 (1,3) - remove overlap (also with the amount of direct flow you have, I expected 1 to be up higher to form a line with 00:09:859 (4)
00:10:657 (2,3) - no blanketing of 00:10:657 (2)?
00:10:657 (2,4) - since I can complain, fix this overlap as well
00:17:518 (4,2) - another aesthetically unpleasing overlap, please fix
(I'm going to stop here for overlaps in this diff, but you really should go fix them)
00:24:061 (1) - I would move this back to 00:23:901 since the lyrics it starts on are fairly weak
00:34:274 (3) - maybe something like

00:37:625 - gap felt random
00:51:667 (4) - follow 00:50:391 (3)'s curve and not go off to the side?
01:05:550 - Since the previous slider is following vocals, it felt weird there was no slider here. You can make a short slider from here to 01:05:710
01:12:891 (3) - what is this slider supposed to follow? I feel like hear empty spots in the middle of it
maybe use something like

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-14T06:30:28+00:00

Knotts wrote:
Yo, M4M wow dis star spam

General
Remove "Absolute" from tags, already in the Title Fixed
Disable Widescreen support on all difficulties Fixed
Add a silent sliderslide? Bugs me to not have one

Insane
00:02:199 (1,2) - It'd be a lot nicer for these to be stacked, doubles are already hard as it isFixed
00:03:316 (1) - Remove whistle on tail Fixed
00:04:274 (7,8) - Flows better and looks more appealing like this Fixed
00:05:231 (4,5) - Remove finishes. Should be a whistle on tail on (5) instead of clap. -
00:05:869 (1) - Finish on head Fixed
00:06:188 (2) - Whistle Fixed
00:08:423 (1) - Finish on head and remove whistle on tail Fixed
00:08:742 (2) - whistle Fixed
00:10:337 (5,6) - Not really cymbals, I wouldn't use finishes here Fixed
00:10:976 (1) - finish and remove whistleFixed
00:13:688 (1) - Add finishFixed
00:20:710 (1) - Adjust blanket Fixed
00:23:742 - where da triplet at? Fixed
00:25:497 (3,4,5) - Try out this rhythmFixed did a different pattern
00:27:093 (5) - Ctrl + H and rotate a little bit clockwise. Circle to slider is a lot harder to execute than slider to circle and this helps with the flow. Fixed
00:28:369 (5,6) - Awkward to play, rotating (6) clockwise would help the flow. Fixed
00:34:752 (1,2,3) - Space these out evenly and NC on 00:35:231 (3) - for the SV change. Fixed
00:36:029 (3,4,5) - Should space these out evenly too. Maybe increase SV for 00:36:508 (5) - since you did that previously Fixed
00:38:582 (2,3) - NC on both of these for SV changes
00:51:986 (3,4) - Finishes instead of whistles Fixed
00:52:465 - Useless green line Magical Fairy dust things who the hell knows :<
00:52:465 (4) - NC for SV change
00:53:183 - Not really necessary to have a note here. Makes the stream look funny anyways because of the comboing.Does this mean I can totally nc a blue tick
00:53:901 (1) - Remove clap I like my claps
00:54:220 (2) - Normal sample set sounds better to use his rather than soft-hitclapIm using drums here
00:54:540 - Oh man the drum sampleset. I guess it fits for some places but soft-whistle fits a lot better on places such as 00:55:018 (2) - Fixed
00:55:497 (4,1) - Remove hitsounds from theseFixed
00:56:614 (4,1) - ^. I'll just skip the rest of this section for hitsounding.
01:03:396 (1) - It'd be more epic to remove the spinner and have two notes on the vocals at 01:04:114 and 01:04:274But handsome has something similar to thiss too :d and before this I had a practically borderline ninja spinner but people be complaining about it so I made it slightly longer with gap

Hitsounding in the kiai is just off to me. To shorten this mod, PM if you want my advice on those

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-14T08:43:17+00:00

Knotts wrote:
My Love Handsome's Insane
00:10:816 (5,3) - Make this overlap like 00:11:295 (2,5) - noice
00:13:688 (1) - Nazi: move to (288,291) 289 292 is better
00:37:944 (2,3,4,5) - Would it kill you to change these to 1/4 sliders? All those doubles are killer yada, doubles are love
00:38:582 (2) - Move to (275,129) i understand your change with the straight overlap thingy and all, its its a rotating triangle pattern, following 00:37:146 (3,1,1) -

Nice job, looks like the cleanest in the set ty i didnt hitsound this map so idk

Good luck!

CODE IS HERE

THE CODE HERE RIGHT HERE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE PELASE PEASE UDAPTE

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Absolute Soulrev2.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 63954
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

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Title:Absolute Soul
TitleUnicode:Absolute Soul
Artist:Suzuki Konomi
ArtistUnicode:鈴木このみ
Creator:Owntrolf
Version:handsome's Insane
Source:アブソリュート・デュオ
Tags:Duo Soul Opening handsome byfar
BeatmapID:597423
BeatmapSetID:255287

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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324,140,60763,6,0,P|253:84|150:117,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,270,61241,1,12,0:0:0:0:
334,262,61401,2,0,P|416:229|440:122,1,180,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,57,61880,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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240,240,62518,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,136,62678,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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331,85,62997,1,14,0:0:0:0:
363,267,63157,1,14,0:0:0:0:
149,117,63316,1,14,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63396,12,12,64114,0:0:0:0:
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462,95,64912,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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375,108,68582,5,10,0:0:0:0:
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384,266,69699,6,0,P|310:298|203:208,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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14,216,70497,1,2,0:0:0:0:
211,31,70657,2,0,P|264:62|280:124,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,214,70976,6,0,P|371:251|492:191,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,55,71454,1,8,0:0:0:0:
209,173,71614,2,0,L|222:291,1,107.999996704102,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,277,71933,2,0,L|144:395,1,107.999996704102,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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123,25,72571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,98,72731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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293,98,74008,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,106,74167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
399,313,74805,6,0,L|264:338,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,384,75125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
101,220,75284,2,0,P|149:150|215:140,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,254,75603,2,0,P|215:247|173:195,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,64,75923,2,0,P|265:140|241:202,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,235,76242,6,0,L|247:353,2,107.999996704102,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,105,76720,2,0,P|241:72|362:135,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,282,77199,1,2,0:0:0:0:
251,194,77359,6,0,L|150:260,1,107.999996704102,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,379,77678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
33,288,77837,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,321,77997,2,0,L|314:261,1,107.999996704102,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,194,78316,2,0,L|341:134,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,67,78635,6,0,P|228:28|156:44,1,107.999996704102,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,183,78954,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,138,79114,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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149,147,80710,2,0,P|123:186|134:257,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,370,81029,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,298,81188,6,0,L|429:273,1,107.999996704102,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,91,81508,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,163,81667,2,0,L|307:188,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,127,81986,2,0,L|108:152,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,230,82305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
146,274,82465,6,0,P|183:311|192:363,1,107.999996704102,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,384,82784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
250,243,82943,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,353,83103,2,0,P|61:304|63:242,1,107.999996704102,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,83,83423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,97,83502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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103,175,88050,1,4,0:3:0:0:

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2015-01-14T10:24:00+00:00

Owntrolfffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

General

this hitsound is unrankable 'soft-hitclap.mp3' http://puu.sh/euX7J/723dedbb68.png has some 45ms delay. you should fix this t/251629/start=15 , follow this rule use this > EDIT : http://puu.sh/euXFN/e949d0d8dc.wav
add audioleadin in handsome's Insane diff, also previewtime is difference with handsome's Insane diff, go to check them

Easy

00:01:242 - 00:02:837 - seem there is have useless Inherited line, delete that. also you should check another
00:05:710 (3) - add whistle on slider end, there is have bass drum sound
00:08:582 (1) - how think about this? i think... it should be 00:08:423 - here, becuz there is so weird and have strong sound than 00:08:582 - here it's make some weird. so how about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/euYzr/9d6850c841.jpg
00:09:859 (3) - del finish, clap on slider end, do you think they are fit 00:10:337 - this point? i think it's just noise
00:11:454 - add note here, there is empty... and i think 00:10:657 (1,3) - really really weird, wa hard to explain... try this http://puu.sh/euYYb/3a4c52e15d.jpg it would be better than previous rhythm
00:13:688 (1) - add finish here. even here 00:23:901 (1) -
00:34:114 (3,2) - this part might be confuse for beginners, they are will think 00:34:114 (3) - next note is 00:35:391 (2) - this imo, so how about move x156, y316? and 00:34:752 (1) - adjust distance here
00:50:231 (1) - delete newcombo here, why added here?
00:51:986 (2) - add finish on slider head
01:02:040 (3) - add newcombo here

I can't understand about newcombo in this diff.....

Normal

00:13:688 (1) - add finish, even this 00:32:837 (1) - add on slider head
00:18:157 (1,2) - swap newcombo here and 00:19:433 (1) - delete newcombo here. even this 00:28:050 (1,2) - swap newcombo
01:04:114 (1,2) - why did you add clap, finish on there? do you think really that's fit this point? also i don't know what did you followed there which sounds. if you add hitsound there then soft-whistle is better becuz match with vocal
01:07:625 (4,1) - i don't want recommend this, maintain distance x1.2 same as other spacing. it would be confuse it's 1/1 gap or 1/2 gap. don't look at only your view
01:13:529 (4) - this slider's end... i think it should be snap on here 01:14:167 - . try it then will be know
01:26:295 (3) - delete clap on slider end

when we are make newcombo then normally make like this http://puu.sh/ev0Ff/aad244f366.jpg right? or http://puu.sh/ev0GL/e8b7e4dc46.jpg. i think you should check them, don't mix also make sure

Hard

00:03:954 (4) - change just 1/2 note or slider, 00:04:034 - there is haven't any sound, also 01:13:609 (4) - delete this note same as this reason, evne this 01:18:715 (2) -
00:23:901 (1) - add finish here. 00:31:401 (1) - add slider head, same this 00:32:837 (5) - ,01:09:699 (1) -
00:53:183 (2) - what the..., delete and you really should listen that part carefully again.
01:04:114 (1,2) - same as normal

still i can't understand your newcombo style... how about make same as handsome's insane diff?

handsome's Insane

00:23:901 (1) - add finish here, 01:09:699 (1) - add on slider head even this 01:14:805 (1) -
00:32:916 (2,4,6,8) - i think it's overmapped, there are haven't anysound also vocal's vibration is can't be 1/4 stream
00:44:327 (1) - add whistle on slider end
01:03:396 (1) - delete finish and clap, same as normal diff
01:03:396 (1) - this spinner is doesn't really fit the mapping up to this point, feel so it just kind of comes out of nowhere imo

nothing to say much, good

Insane

00:07:864 (5) - delete note here, there is haven't anysound also it's just weird to me
00:09:939 (2) - same as ^, even this 00:15:843 (5) - 00:16:481 (3) - ,00:26:694 (2) - ,00:29:087 (2) - ,01:00:364 (7) - ,01:01:641 (7) - i don't like them really, it's just stupid rhythm and weird at play, if they are fit that point then i can understnad but isn't. plz listen the song carefully again
01:03:396 (1) - same as handsome's Insane diff

byfar's Extra

if you want test play then replay file here, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2522531 http://puu.sh/ev6mp/fbde09efe3.osr
just check something

that's all

Last edited by koreapenguin 2015-01-14T23:44:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-14T15:26:00+00:00

lol KP was it that easy to FC

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-14T15:53:33+00:00

[quote="Knotts"]Yo, M4M wow dis star spam

General

Remove "Absolute" from tags, already in the Title
Disable Widescreen support on all difficulties
Add a silent sliderslide? Bugs me to not have one

byfar's Extra

First off, check AImod. Couple of errors in there. My hitsound mods are gonna be in Owntrolf's difficulty since you're copying them from there.
00:14:805 (5) - Should probably rotate this by 38 degrees counter-clockwise for better flow from 00:14:646 (4) since that's such a crazy jump. Also add NC here. will consider
00:15:763 (1) - Remove NC and add NC on 00:16:242 (4). yea
00:18:476 (3) - Would be better to revise this so that a note is on 00:18:795 rather than a slider end. it's fine. it's for the vocal hold + background instrumental
00:19:433 (4,2) - Not really sure what these SV changes are emphasizing. Vocals don't really suggest anything like this. decreased sv. keeping the sv changes still.
00:21:508 (1) - I'd move this to (490, 182) for better readability and flow leading into 00:21:667 (2). k
00:24:061 (4,8) - This should look the same as 00:24:220 (5,2). Pick which you think looks better and adjust one of them so it looks more clean. k
00:27:571 (1,1) - Did you miss the stack on 00:26:295 (3) purposely? Because it looks bleh to me.k
00:28:848 (5,6) - Blanket? what. they're 2 notes
00:31:401 (1) - Probably sounds better as a 1/1 fine. vocal hold needs slider
00:39:061 (1) - Ctrl + G would feel a lot better not changed
00:40:258 (1) - This slider starts on nothing :3 ohhh yeah.. im PROBABLY gonna change this but as of now i dont have any ideas
00:40:417 (1) - ^ ^
00:43:688 (2,2) - These are getting pretty close to the HP bar k
00:44:327 (3,1) - It'd make more sense to start the NC on (3) yea k
00:53:901 (3) - Maybe replace this with a 1/4 slider to follow the vocal maybe
00:54:220 (6,1) - This rhythm probably fits more (copy the NC aswell) yea i dont know what ur picture is directing to lol
01:26:614 (1,1,1) - 1/2 circle spam would be a better idea tbh it's fine

thanks for mod!
~

http://puu.sh/evC6V/cc6d80c411.osu upupup

Last edited by byfar 2015-01-15T21:22:16+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-14T17:11:39+00:00

koreapenguin wrote:
handsome's Insane
00:32:916 (2,4,6,8) - i think it's overmapped, there are haven't anysound also vocal's vibration is can't be 1/4 stream i can hear a distinct 1/4 buildup sound, i think it is fine to play.
01:03:396 (1) - this spinner is doesn't really fit the mapping up to this point, feel so it just kind of comes out of nowhere imo spinenr isnt too good here, but without spinner is even worse imo. i will keep now

no change~

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-14T17:22:53+00:00

koreapenguin wrote:
Owntrolfffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

General
this hitsound is unrankable 'soft-hitclap.mp3' http://puu.sh/euX7J/723dedbb68.png has some 45ms delay. you should fix this http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/251629/start=15 , follow this rule use this > EDIT : http://puu.sh/euXFN/e949d0d8dc.wav
add audioleadin in handsome's Insane diff, also previewtime is difference with handsome's Insane diff, go to check them

Easy
00:01:242 - 00:02:837 - seem there is have useless Inherited line, delete that. also you should check another Fixed
00:05:710 (3) - add whistle on slider end, there is have bass drum sound Fixed
00:08:582 (1) - how think about this? i think... it should be 00:08:423 - here, becuz there is so weird and have strong sound than 00:08:582 - here it's make some weird. so how about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/euYzr/9d6850c841.jpg Fixed
00:09:859 (3) - del finish, clap on slider end, do you think they are fit 00:10:337 - this point? i think it's just noise I think I fixed it now
00:11:454 - add note here, there is empty... and i think 00:10:657 (1,3) - really really weird, wa hard to explain... try this http://puu.sh/euYYb/3a4c52e15d.jpg it would be better than previous rhythm Fixed
00:13:688 (1) - add finish here. even here 00:23:901 (1) - Fixed
00:34:114 (3,2) - this part might be confuse for beginners, they are will think 00:34:114 (3) - next note is 00:35:391 (2) - this imo, so how about move x156, y316? and 00:34:752 (1) - adjust distance here Fixed
00:50:231 (1) - delete newcombo here, why added here? Fixed because im stupid and dont know how to nc
00:51:986 (2) - add finish on slider head Fixed
01:02:040 (3) - add newcombo here Fixed

I can't understand about newcombo in this diff.....

Normal
00:13:688 (1) - add finish, even this 00:32:837 (1) - add on slider head Fixed
00:18:157 (1,2) - swap newcombo here and 00:19:433 (1) - delete newcombo here. even this 00:28:050 (1,2) - swap newcombo Fixed
01:04:114 (1,2) - why did you add clap, finish on there? do you think really that's fit this point? also i don't know what did you followed there which sounds. if you add hitsound there then soft-whistle is better becuz match with vocal
01:07:625 (4,1) - i don't want recommend this, maintain distance x1.2 same as other spacing. it would be confuse it's 1/1 gap or 1/2 gap. don't look at only your view Fixed
01:13:529 (4) - this slider's end... i think it should be snap on here 01:14:167 - . try it then will be knowFixed
01:26:295 (3) - delete clap on slider endFixed

when we are make newcombo then normally make like this http://puu.sh/ev0Ff/aad244f366.jpg right? or http://puu.sh/ev0GL/e8b7e4dc46.jpg. i think you should check them, don't mix also make sure

Hard
00:03:954 (4) - change just 1/2 note or slider, 00:04:034 - there is haven't any sound, also 01:13:609 (4) - delete this note same as this reason, evne this 01:18:715 (2) - Fixed
00:23:901 (1) - add finish here. 00:31:401 (1) - add slider head, same this 00:32:837 (5) - ,01:09:699 (1) - Fixed
00:53:183 (2) - what the..., delete and you really should listen that part carefully again. Fixed
01:04:114 (1,2) - same as normal I think I Fixed it

still i can't understand your newcombo style... how about make same as handsome's insane diff? Ill check it later :d
Insane
00:07:864 (5) - delete note here, there is haven't anysound also it's just weird to me Fixed
00:09:939 (2) - same as ^, even this 00:15:843 (5//) - 00:16:481 (3) - ,00:26:694 (2) - ,00:29:087 (2) - ,01:00:364 (7) - ,01:01:641 (7) - i don't like them really, it's just stupid rhythm and weird at play, if they are fit that point then i can understnad but isn't. plz listen the song carefully again
01:03:396 (1) - same as handsome's Insane diff
that's all

Darkform

29 posts

Joined July 2013

Darkform 2015-01-14T22:47:31+00:00

loving the map!

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DeletedUser_3044645 2015-01-15T01:57:20+00:00

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byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-15T03:55:20+00:00

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Atsuro

1,290 posts

Joined January 2013

Atsuro 2015-01-16T00:11:00+00:00

Hello!
Reverse m4m from your queue

[General]
The mp3 you are using is a little quiet and low quality, try with this one: http://puu.sh/ezvSz/e35bd063a7.mp3
Offset should be 300

[Easy]

00:08:423 (4) - Add finish at the start, there is cymbal sound on the song.
00:10:816 (1) - Keep consistent spacing and add finish at the end for the same reason as above.
00:23:901 (1) - Whistle
00:24:540 (2) - This slider breaks consistency, it would be better if you kept the 2/1 rhythm you have been using.
00:27:093 (3) - This is missing a whistle at the end
00:27:093 (3) - It would follow the song better if you ended this 1/2 a beat back. If you do this add a finish at the end
01:04:114 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Lots of hitsounding errors, try to add claps on every 2nd and 4th beats of a measure (large white lines) and use finish only when you hear cymbal on the song or when you wan to emphasize a very intense part of the song.
These hitsounds problems are present in the whole diff.
01:20:710 (2,1) - Try to avoid using 1/2 rhythms on easy
01:24:380 (1,2,3) - Too hard for easy imo

This difficulty may need a remap soon and the hitsounds need some work.

[Normal]

Same thing about claps/finishes
00:05:869 (1) - Finish at slider head
00:08:423 (1) - Same as above
00:07:784 (4) - Try to start this on the red tick and extend it to where it ended before
http://puu.sh/ezfHf/669f3388ec.jpg
00:14:008 (2,3) - Remove whistle to 2 and to the end of 3 to be consistent with the rest of that section.
00:19:433 (3,4,5) - This is a bit unexpected because here 00:14:327 (3,4) - you didn't use that 1/2 sepaaration. Make both the same rhythm for consistency.
00:25:178 (3) - Same thing, i think it would work well if you changed the circle with a slider, like this:
image
00:25:497 (4) - Clap at the end
00:28:050 (5) - This slider sounds weird, how about two 1/1 sliders?
00:30:923 (1) - Finish at the end
00:35:710 (1,2,3) - Suggestion to improve rhythm here after making the 00:34:274 (3) - fix:
image

and then
00:51:986 (1,2) - Finishes would sound better than whistles here
01:01:720 (1) - Finish at slider end
01:04:593 (1) - Finish at slider start

Same as easy but a bit better overall

[Hard]

00:13:688 (1,4) - The same whistle thing from easy
00:03:795 (3,4,5) - Even if it's hard, try to keep consistent spacing when you are not trying to make a jump
00:03:795 (3,4,5) - Rotate 120 degrees, then ctrl+h and position like this http://puu.sh/ezlsD/b6f1f16da6.jpg for a better flow
00:13:688 (1,4) - Move stuff around to stack 1 with 4 http://puu.sh/ezlNb/e9e279b0aa.jpg
00:21:667 (5) - It would flow better like this
image
00:25:816 (4) - Move the clap to the slider end, it makes more sense since nothing on the song changed.
00:31:401 (1) - Would sound better without the clap
00:46:880 (4) - Extend this slider here 00:47:359 - to follow the piano better and delete the circle that is after.
01:03:954 - You shouldn't silence the hitsounds (it's unrankable i think). You should remove the silence and add a whistle.
01:04:593 (3,4,5,1,2) - Same thing about claps
01:09:699 (1) - Add Finish on slider head
01:14:805 (2) - ^
01:27:571 (5) - Turn this into a 1/1 slider and delete this circle 01:27:891 (1) - To follow the guitar sound

Needs some work but it's a lot better than easier diffs

[handsome's Insane]

00:08:423 (1) - Finish on slider head?
00:10:976 (1) - ^
00:23:423 (4) - Drum finish on slider head??
00:31:401 (1) - Yeah, finish lol
00:45:603 (1) - This feels a bit empty, try mapping the vocals here
00:51:746 (5,6) - These notes are overmapped, try turning 00:51:667 (4) - into a 1/2 slider.
01:03:396 (1) - Eeeeh i think whistle sounds better than finish and clap
01:05:550 (5) - This is a bit confusing, one would think that this starts from the other side, move the slider to other place if you don't want to ctrl+g
01:07:146 (1) - Add finish on head
01:09:699 (1) - ^
01:14:805 (1) - This slider is wrong, try adding a circle here 01:14:646 - to catch the vocal and delete this circle 01:15:125 (7) - to extend the slider there.
01:15:284 (7,8,9,1) - Why did you change the clap pattern here? You were placing them on every 2nd and 4th beats before.
01:24:061 (2) - Finish on head
01:26:295 (1) - Drum finish on head instead of the whistle?

Nice diff!

[Insane]

00:31:401 (6) - Finish on slider head and the drum finish seems out of place
00:44:167 (4,1) - Separate them a bit
00:46:880 (1) - Same as hard
00:49:274 (1) - Delete this circle as it is not following anything
00:50:391 (1,1) - Move the circle farther away from the slider, they are 1 beat away
image
00:53:183 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped, you should change it
You are missing beats here 00:54:061 - and here 00:54:380 - . Consider adding circles or something
01:27:571 (4) - Same as hard

Not bad but it can improve

[byfar's extra]
Wow, i can't mod this, those jumps ( i can't pass it D: )
Sorry
Decided to mod it

00:31:401 (3) - Finish on the slider's head (Also, that slider's end is unsnapped)
00:31:720 (4) - This circle is hard to notice, align it with the previous slider

image

00:31:401 (3) - Starting here the 1/4 jumps get a bit ridiculous, i don't like them but that's my personal opinion (also this part is why i can't pass it, please nerf

)
00:42:412 (1) - I think this would flow better like this:

image

00:43:050 (1,2) - Holy
01:02:997 (1,2) - lol
01:09:699 (3) - Finish on slider head
01:14:167 (3) - Drum finish like you did here 01:13:529 (1) -
01:14:805 (2) - Soft finish would fit better than the whistle
01:21:188 (3) - I think a finish is enough, no need for a clap
01:22:305 (1) - ^ on slider return
01:23:103 (1) - Why use whistle, finish AND clap? i think it's good without any of those lol
01:23:901 (1) - This doesn't need a repeat, there is no sound here 01:23:901 (1) -

Good luck!

Last edited by Atsuro 2015-01-16T03:12:42+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-16T01:56:06+00:00

rip atsuro

u cant mod thru editor?

Rad-

595 posts

Joined June 2011

Rad- 2015-01-16T02:30:38+00:00

Hello! I know i am modding already before you modded my map, but i wanted to get back to modding after 6 months since last i did it anyway so i just took the chance to mod your map even if you don't mod mine. and it seems i am 2 hours too late lol

Easy

Reduce Drain and OD by -1 to balance the overall difficulty of the map.

00:08:423 (4) - NC
00:10:816 (1) - Remove NC
00:10:816 (1) - Properly distance this object
00:12:252 (4) - Because this sliders distance will bring alot of confusion for its change of timing, i suggest a new pattern for example similar to this

Replacing circle 00:11:774 (3) - with a slider and at the end of slider add an object to then flip horizontally for circle 5, and as for circle 4 you could make it on the Y Axis with 1.1x distance so its not too close, ofc you can change it to something better as long as the rhythm isnt as confusing as the slider you had.
00:15:603 (4) - Not sure if it really is necessary that slider end point, but no big deal.
00:22:305 (4) - NC
00:31:880 (1) - Remove NC, so its easier to know the rhythm change right away
00:34:114 (5,1) - Switch the NCs between these 2
00:37:305 (4,1) - ^
00:39:220 (3) - NC
00:40:497 (1) - Remove NC
00:49:433 (3) - NC
00:49:752 (2) - Place it at x:392 y:228 and the end of slider at x:432 y:264
00:50:231 (3) - Place it at x:368 y:312 and the end of slider at x:324 y:348
00:51:348 (1) - Place it at x:204 y:136 in case you changed the 2 sliders above so it now is properly distanced and instead of clap use Finish
00:53:901 (1) - Remove NC
00:55:178 (5) - NC
00:57:093 (1) - Remove NC
00:59:486 (1,2) - This rhythm is so confusing, specially for an easy, starting with Red ticks on this difficulty will surely cause some slider breaks, try these patterns:

Because changing the slider to end at red ticks it will be easier for the player to follow the song and even hit 01:02:040 (1,2) - properly. Though you will have to remap it in order for it to fit the rest of the map.
Oh, and 00:59:327 (5) - NC this
01:04:114 (1) - Remove all the hitsounds on this slider, to fit the no beat part with voice.
01:04:593 (2,3) - Remove the claps on the start of these sliders, they sound way off.
01:04:593 (2) - And NC this
01:08:263 - Add a circle here with a clap
01:08:582 (1) - Remove the Clap on the Start of this Slider and remove NC
01:09:859 (6) - Add NC
01:11:135 (1) - Remove NC and my reccomendation is to change the rhythm of this too because before you had mapped rhythm with a red tick and this time you skipped it at 01:12:252 - So try doing this instaed:

and make 01:12:093 (3,4,5) - all claps.
01:19:912 (1) - Add a curve to this slider, looks weird as a straight one after a curved one.
01:21:188 (1) - This slider follows no rhythm with that blue tick, so here is my suggestion:

Add claps to this slider 01:21:029 (3) - both start and finish and start of 01:21:508 (4) -
01:23:103 (1) - Drag this slider to 01:22:944 and add a clap to its end
Now from 01:19:912 - to 01:24:380 - it will need some remapping if you changed most of what i said above, cant really make
01:26:614 (1) - Remove NC
01:28:050 (3) - Place it at x:256 y:356 to avoid clicking too early as it changed rhythm. Also add a NC to it.

Normal

Reduce OD by -1 and Drain by -2.

00:23:901 - Add a circle here?
00:25:497 (4) - Add a clap to the end of this slider.
From 00:33:954 to 00:37:944 - Replace this whole rhythm with this:

Also use those NCs.
00:39:859 (2) - You could make this slider use the blue tick this time:

but you will have to add some space before 00:40:657 (1) -
01:04:593 (1) - Add finish to the start of slider and remove clap of the end of slider
01:05:071 (2) - Add clap to start of slider and remove clap of end of slider
01:08:582 (1) - Remove the clap from the start of slider
01:12:891 (3) - Move it to 01:12:731 - and make this slider closer to 01:12:571 (2)
01:28:050 (4) - NC

Hard

Reduce drain by 1

00:26:614 (1) - it would be better to just place it at x:59 y:171
00:36:508 (3) - Place it at x:268 y:204 to give it some space to the next object, it was too close in spacing.
00:36:827 (4) - NC and place it x:88 y:240
00:37:305 (1) - Remove NC
00:44:327 (4) - Starting from here, reduce the slider velocity till here 00:51:667 - it doesnt make sense why everything is as fast as the kiai part.
00:48:157 (3) - On this slider, use only one middle slider point
00:53:183 (2) - Make this slider 1 point shorter and place it 00:53:263 - and give it a proper distance.
00:58:848 (7,1) - Avoid this huge jump on Hard.
01:04:593 (3) - Remove the clap at the beginning of this slider, 01:04:912 (4) - on this circle, 01:05:391 (1) - this circle as well and remove the finish on this slider start 01:05:550 (2) -
01:04:593 (3) - NC and 01:05:391 (1) - remove NC
01:05:869 (6) - NC and 01:06:508 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:146 (11) - NC
01:07:146 (1,2,3,4) - I don't have an idea to fix this, and you really dont have to, but it just looks a bit weird imo having straight sliders over each other like that.
01:08:423 (1) - Remove the claps on this slider
01:11:614 (3) - Fix sliders points: try 2nd point at x:88 y:212 and 3rd point at x:152 y:216.
01:13:210 (3) - Add claps to start and end of slider.
01:23:582 - Add a circle in between here.

Just wanna say that the spacing on kiai time, being 1.5x with slider velocity still being the same, you should have increased slider speed and still maintained at least the 1.3x spacing like the rest of the map.

handsome's Insane

Reduce Drain by 1, so it's not the same as the extras.

00:04:274 (6,7) - Reverse selection (get the clap on the right place too)
00:23:423 (4) - Add a finish to the start of this slider
00:54:380 (5) - Place it at x:360 y:88
01:03:396 (1) - Remove the hitsounds on this spinner
01:04:912 (2) - Remove clap
01:05:071 (3) - Flip Horizintally
01:05:390 (4) - Place it at x:256 y:52
01:05:550 (5) - Remove the Finish at the start of this slider
01:07:146 (1) - Add a Finish to the start of this slider
01:08:264 (4) - Remove the clap on the end of this slider and on this circle 01:08:582 (1) -
01:14:646 - Add a circle here on top of slider 01:14:805 (2) - Also add a Finish to the start of the slider and remove the clap on the end.
01:17:997 (4) - Remove the finish of the end of slider.
01:24:380 (1,2) - Add soft whistles to the start of these 2 sliders.
01:24:699 (2) - CTRL+G

Insane

You could simply rename this to Extra. No problem in having 2 Extra difficulties since there already is an Insane.

00:01:720 (5) - make the slider shorter and add a circle here 00:02:040 - so you dont skip a beat of the intro, even though you were following guitar, it's better this way.
00:12:891 (3) - This slider speed change was hardly predictable, so i reccomend adding a NC as a warning for it.
00:22:385 (8) - Place it in x:263 y:196
00:44:167 (4) - Delete this slider and make slider 00:43:928 (3) - end at 00:44:167 - with for example: middle slider point at x:400 y:104 and end slider point at x:476 y:180
00:53:821 - New pattern:

Basically make the first stream end with circle 9 and then another stream before the slider you had there, also respec the NCs.
01:04:593 (1) - Remove the clap of this slider start, the clap on this circle 01:04:912 (2) -, and this one as well 01:05:391 (4) - and lastly, remove the finish on the start of this slider: 01:05:550 (5)

byfar's Extra

01:03:316 (1) - I actually think instead of faster slider it would be better as 0.5x, with hitosund volume in the end at 15%
01:04:593 (1) - Again with these claps, remove clap of slider start, this clap 01:04:912 (2) -, 01:05:391 (1) - this one and remove the finish of 01:05:550 (2) -
01:10:976 (1) - Instead of that form how about:

Coordinates: Slider start same place, 2nd slider point (squared one) at x:412 and y:28 and 3rd slider point is x:388 y:120, the end slider point should change and remain on top of circle behind it.

This mod was before Atsuro's mod, so some things may have been fixed already.

Good Luck!

Faan

269 posts

Joined July 2013

Faan 2015-01-16T03:06:44+00:00

from reverse m4m (._. wut)

I think there can be a kiai from 34:114 ----- 44:327 (please ignore)

Easy:
00:07:305 (3) - maybe move to 332,45. The distance will get slightly screwed but the blanket will be better .w.
00:10:816 (1) - the slider is @#&*dy short, maybe no curve
00:11:774 (3) - maybe, mayyyybe move to the next red tick
00:10:816 (1) - DS m8
00:32:837 (2) - can adjust a little to fit blanket better, for example: move the second tick to 217,93
00:53:263 (3) - can move and rotate a little so it flows from 2 and into better

rhythme is a little weird .~. polarity issue maybe?

Normal:
00:02:837 (1,1) - who doesn't love nazimod

blanket thanks
00:14:008 (2,3) - ^
00:14:008 (2,4) - ^
00:10:178 (1,3) - slight overlap
01:04:593 (1) - maybe http://puu.sh/ezWHb/12afb674a7.jpg

Hard:
00:02:199 (1) - rotate around selection center 1 degree anti-clockwise for better blanket
00:23:103 (4) - I find the slider path slightly unclear
00:31:082 (3,1) - blanketable
00:36:667 - sounds like a note

Insane:
00:39:380 (1) - move a bit to the right
00:49:274 (1) - maybe delete

handsome's insane:
00:26:454 (1) - offscreen
00:28:529 (5) - slightly^
00:39:859 (4) - ^
01:22:784 (2) - ^
00:54:061 (3,4,5) - I don't like the jump anti-jump jump thing

byfar's extra:
00:10:337 (4) - maybe intentional but slider end stack （2）?
00:32:518 (2) - move y to 109
00:41:614 (2) - little offscreen
00:51:827 (4) - maybe it's too far away compare to 123?

@_@ insane and extra 3fast5me

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-16T05:12:04+00:00

Faan wrote:
byfar's extra:
00:10:337 (4) - maybe intentional but slider end stack （2）? eh
00:32:518 (2) - move y to 109 k
00:41:614 (2) - little offscreeni think it's fine. it's only offscreen on editor
00:51:827 (4) - maybe it's too far away compare to 123? emphasis

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-16T05:29:06+00:00

Faan wrote:
byfar's extra:
00:10:337 (4) - maybe intentional but slider end stack （2）? eh
00:32:518 (2) - move y to 109 k
00:41:614 (2) - little offscreeni think it's fine. it's only offscreen on editor
00:51:827 (4) - maybe it's too far away compare to 123? emphasis

Atsuro wrote:
Decided to mod it

00:31:401 (3) - Finish on the slider's head (Also, that slider's end is unsnapped)
00:31:720 (4) - This circle is hard to notice, align it with the previous slider i want it to have a jump. nice suggestion though
image
00:31:401 (3) - Starting here the 1/4 jumps get a bit ridiculous, i don't like them but that's my personal opinion (also this part is why i can't pass it, please nerf ) understandable, however this is the map style (and an extra)
00:42:412 (1) - I think this would flow better like this:
image
nice
00:43:050 (1,2) - Holy yea
01:02:997 (1,2) - lol yup
01:09:699 (3) - Finish on slider headnice
01:14:167 (3) - Drum finish like you did here 01:13:529 (1) - no need
01:14:805 (2) - Soft finish would fit better than the whistle yea
01:21:188 (3) - I think a finish is enough, no need for a clap it's ok
01:22:305 (1) - ^ on slider return^
01:23:103 (1) - Why use whistle, finish AND clap? i think it's good without any of those lol i'd prefer to change the hitsounds as minimal as possible. no hitsounds there sounds bad
01:23:901 (1) - This doesn't need a repeat, there is no sound here 01:23:901 (1) - vocal hold on red + slider end is a soft hitsound so it's not really gameplay disrupting. actually after checking there is sound there so yeah keeping

Rad- wrote:
byfar's Extra
01:03:316 (1) - I actually think instead of faster slider it would be better as 0.5x, with hitosund volume in the end at 15% nononono i have a huge jump and making slider velo 0.5x is illogical
01:04:593 (1) - Again with these claps, remove clap of slider start, this clap 01:04:912 (2) -, 01:05:391 (1) - this one and remove the finish of 01:05:550 (2) - go fix ur hitsounds already owntrofl
01:10:976 (1) - Instead of that form how about:

Coordinates: Slider start same place, 2nd slider point (squared one) at x:412 and y:28 and 3rd slider point is x:388 y:120, the end slider point should change and remain on top of circle behind it. considering. my shape isn't good right now but i dont exactly like this either. will consider this though

thanks for modding guys

Last edited by byfar 2015-01-16T05:45:21+00:00, edited 6 times in total.

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-16T05:31:03+00:00

Atsuro > thanks for modding!

Atsuro wrote:
[handsome's Insane]
00:45:603 (1) - This feels a bit empty, try mapping the vocals here intentional calm part
00:51:746 (5,6) - These notes are overmapped, try turning 00:51:667 (4) - into a 1/2 slider. i disagree, i think the drums are audible enough to play
01:05:550 (5) - This is a bit confusing, one would think that this starts from the other side, move the slider to other place if you don't want to ctrl+g i enjoy using this pattern
01:14:805 (1) - This slider is wrong, try adding a circle here 01:14:646 - to catch the vocal and delete this circle 01:15:125 (7) - to extend the slider there. don't wanna map to an empty vocal without instruments, the current rhythm has more emphasis on the 'loudness' of the new section
Nice diff! thanks, owntrolf fix hitsounds plz

Rad- > thanks for mod

Reduce Drain by 1, so it's not the same as the extras. drain is already low enough, so, no.

00:04:274 (6,7) - Reverse selection (get the clap on the right place too) i prefer current pattern
00:54:380 (5) - Place it at x:360 y:88 ok
01:05:071 (3) - Flip Horizintally nope, current pattern is good
01:05:390 (4) - Place it at x:256 y:52 ^
01:14:646 - Add a circle here on top of slider 01:14:805 (2) nono i won't do this, i won't map to 'empty' vocals.
01:24:699 (2) - CTRL+G no, its ugly, and the current is good

Faan > thanks for mod~

Faan wrote:
handsome's insane:
00:26:454 (1) - offscreen if it can be placed in the editor its not offscreen
00:28:529 (5) - slightly^ ^
00:39:859 (4) - ^ ^
01:22:784 (2) - ^ ^
00:54:061 (3,4,5) - I don't like the jump anti-jump jump thing but i do

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60,323,66188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,188,66348,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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212,176,67944,2,0,L|330:191,1,107.999996704102,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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375,108,68582,5,10,0:0:0:0:
308,193,68742,2,0,P|284:244|297:302,1,107.999996704102,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,364,69061,2,0,L|423:241,1,107.999996704102,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
463,55,69380,2,0,L|493:178,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,266,69699,6,0,P|310:298|203:208,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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14,216,70497,1,2,0:0:0:0:
211,31,70657,2,0,P|264:62|280:124,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,214,70976,6,0,P|371:251|492:191,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,55,71454,1,8,0:0:0:0:
209,173,71614,2,0,L|222:291,1,107.999996704102,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,277,71933,2,0,L|144:395,1,107.999996704102,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,210,72252,6,0,B|116:186|116:186|125:119,1,107.999996704102,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,25,72571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,98,72731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
266,240,72891,2,0,P|202:261|151:233,1,107.999996704102,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,132,73210,2,0,P|169:111|220:139,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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293,98,74008,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,106,74167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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132,379,77678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
33,288,77837,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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202,138,79114,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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103,175,87970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
103,175,88050,1,4,0:3:0:0:

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byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-16T05:36:42+00:00

absolute soul = liar mask all over agin

-Yuzuriha

581 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2015-01-16T10:11:56+00:00

star persents ☆彡

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-16T15:53:01+00:00

Atsuro wrote:
Hello!
Reverse m4m from your queue

[General]
The mp3 you are using is a little quiet and low quality, try with this one: http://puu.sh/ezvSz/e35bd063a7.mp3
Offset should be 300
[Easy]
00:08:423 (4) - Add finish at the start, there is cymbal sound on the song. Fixed
00:10:816 (1) - Keep consistent spacing and add finish at the end for the same reason as above. Fixed
00:23:901 (1) - Whistle Fixed
00:24:540 (2) - This slider breaks consistency, it would be better if you kept the 2/1 rhythm you have been using. Fixed
00:27:093 (3) - This is missing a whistle at the end Fixed
00:27:093 (3) - It would follow the song better if you ended this 1/2 a beat back. If you do this add a finish at the end
01:04:114 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Lots of hitsounding errors, try to add claps on every 2nd and 4th beats of a measure (large white lines) and use finish only when you hear cymbal on the song or when you wan to emphasize a very intense part of the song. Fixed
These hitsounds problems are present in the whole diff.
01:20:710 (2,1) - Try to avoid using 1/2 rhythms on easy
01:24:380 (1,2,3) - Too hard for easy imo Fixed

This difficulty may need a remap soon and the hitsounds need some work.
[Normal]
Same thing about claps/finishes
00:05:869 (1) - Finish at slider headFixed
00:08:423 (1) - Same as above Fixed
00:07:784 (4) - Try to start this on the red tick and extend it to where it ended before Fixed
http://puu.sh/ezfHf/669f3388ec.jpg
00:14:008 (2,3) - Remove whistle to 2 and to the end of 3 to be consistent with the rest of that section. Fixed
00:19:433 (3,4,5) - This is a bit unexpected because here 00:14:327 (3,4) - you didn't use that 1/2 sepaaration. Make both the same rhythm for consistency. Fixed
00:25:178 (3) - Same thing, i think it would work well if you changed the circle with a slider, like this: Fixed
image
00:25:497 (4) - Clap at the end Fixed
00:28:050 (5) - This slider sounds weird, how about two 1/1 sliders? Somewhat fixed
00:30:923 (1) - Finish at the endFixed
00:35:710 (1,2,3) - Suggestion to improve rhythm here after making the 00:34:274 (3) - fix: Fixed
image

and then
00:51:986 (1,2) - Finishes would sound better than whistles here Fixed
01:01:720 (1) - Finish at slider end Fixed
01:04:593 (1) - Finish at slider start Fixed

Same as easy but a bit better overall
[Hard]
00:13:688 (1,4) - The same whistle thing from easy Fixed
00:03:795 (3,4,5) - Even if it's hard, try to keep consistent spacing when you are not trying to make a jump Fixed
00:03:795 (3,4,5) - Rotate 120 degrees, then ctrl+h and position like this http://puu.sh/ezlsD/b6f1f16da6.jpg for a better flow
00:13:688 (1,4) - Move stuff around to stack 1 with 4 http://puu.sh/ezlNb/e9e279b0aa.jpg Fixed
00:21:667 (5) - It would flow better like this Fixed
image
00:25:816 (4) - Move the clap to the slider end, it makes more sense since nothing on the song changed. Fixed
00:31:401 (1) - Would sound better without the clap Buth the claps every 2 white ticks :<
00:46:880 (4) - Extend this slider here 00:47:359 - to follow the piano better and delete the circle that is after.But i like my repeats :< and sounds fine since vocals are actually on the white ticks
01:03:954 - You shouldn't silence the hitsounds (it's unrankable i think). You should remove the silence and add a whistle. Fixed
01:04:593 (3,4,5,1,2) - Same thing about claps
01:09:699 (1) - Add Finish on slider head Fixed
01:14:805 (2) - ^ Fixed
01:27:571 (5) - Turn this into a 1/1 slider and delete this circle 01:27:891 (1) - To follow the guitar sound Fixed

Needs some work but it's a lot better than easier diffs
[Insane]
00:31:401 (6) - Finish on slider head and the drum finish seems out of place Fixed
00:44:167 (4,1) - Separate them a bit Fixed
00:46:880 (1) - Same as hard
00:49:274 (1) - Delete this circle as it is not following anything Fixed
00:50:391 (1,1) - Move the circle farther away from the slider, they are 1 beat away Fixed
image
00:53:183 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped, you should change it I think its supported :d by the vocals, long slider vs stream
You are missing beats here 00:54:061 - and here 00:54:380 - . Consider adding circles or something[color=#FF8800]but matching vocals :d[/b]
01:27:571 (4) - Same as hard

Not bad but it can improve
Good luck!

Xinely

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Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-01-16T20:32:51+00:00

placeholder (keep on mind im so slow coz busy)

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-17T03:46:43+00:00

Rad- wrote:
Hello! I know i am modding already before you modded my map, but i wanted to get back to modding after 6 months since last i did it anyway so i just took the chance to mod your map even if you don't mod mine. and it seems i am 2 hours too late lol

Easy
Reduce Drain and OD by -1 to balance the overall difficulty of the map. [color=#08800]Fixed[/color]

00:08:423 (4) - NC Fixed
00:10:816 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
00:10:816 (1) - Properly distance this object Wat
00:12:252 (4) - Because this sliders distance will bring alot of confusion for its change of timing, i suggest a new pattern for example similar to this Fixed

Replacing circle 00:11:774 (3) - with a slider and at the end of slider add an object to then flip horizontally for circle 5, and as for circle 4 you could make it on the Y Axis with 1.1x distance so its not too close, ofc you can change it to something better as long as the rhythm isnt as confusing as the slider you had.
00:15:603 (4) - Not sure if it really is necessary that slider end point, but no big deal. Fixed
00:22:305 (4) - NC Fixed
00:31:880 (1) - Remove NC, so its easier to know the rhythm change right away Fixed
00:34:114 (5,1) - Switch the NCs between these 2 Fixed
00:37:305 (4,1) - ^ Fixed
00:39:220 (3) - NC Fixed
00:40:497 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
00:49:433 (3) - NC Fixed
00:49:752 (2) - Place it at x:392 y:228 and the end of slider at x:432 y:264 Rip DS
00:50:231 (3) - Place it at x:368 y:312 and the end of slider at x:324 y:348 Rip DS
00:51:348 (1) - Place it at x:204 y:136 in case you changed the 2 sliders above so it now is properly distanced and instead of clap use Finish I like my clap though :< 2 cymbals in a row feels a bit weird for a slow section
00:53:901 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
00:55:178 (5) - NC Fixed
00:57:093 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
00:59:486 (1,2) - This rhythm is so confusing, specially for an easy, starting with Red ticks on this difficulty will surely cause some slider breaks, try these patterns: Not really sure what im supposed to do

Because changing the slider to end at red ticks it will be easier for the player to follow the song and even hit 01:02:040 (1,2) - properly. Though you will have to remap it in order for it to fit the rest of the map.
Oh, and 00:59:327 (5) - NC this Fixed
01:04:114 (1) - Remove all the hitsounds on this slider, to fit the no beat part with voice. But the whistle sounds nice :d
01:04:593 (2,3) - Remove the claps on the start of these sliders, they sound way off. Fixed moved to end of sliders
01:04:593 (2) - And NC this Feels a bit small to nc there
01:08:263 - Add a circle here with a clap Fixed
01:08:582 (1) - Remove the Clap on the Start of this Slider and remove NC Fixed but I want to keep the nc
01:09:859 (6) - Add NC
01:11:135 (1) - Remove NC and my reccomendation is to change the rhythm of this too because before you had mapped rhythm with a red tick and this time you skipped it at 01:12:252 - So try doing this instaed:

and make 01:12:093 (3,4,5) - all claps.
01:19:912 (1) - Add a curve to this slider, looks weird as a straight one after a curved one.
01:21:188 (1) - This slider follows no rhythm with that blue tick, so here is my suggestion:

Add claps to this slider 01:21:029 (3) - both start and finish and start of 01:21:508 (4) -
01:23:103 (1) - Drag this slider to 01:22:944 and add a clap to its end
Now from 01:19:912 - to 01:24:380 - it will need some remapping if you changed most of what i said above, cant really make
01:26:614 (1) - Remove NC
01:28:050 (3) - Place it at x:256 y:356 to avoid clicking too early as it changed rhythm. Also add a NC to it.

Normal
Reduce OD by -1 and Drain by -2. [color=#08800]Fixed[/color]

00:23:901 - Add a circle here? Theres sort of no sound there
00:25:497 (4) - Add a clap to the end of this slider. Fixed
From 00:33:954 to 00:37:944 - Replace this whole rhythm with this: Changed some

Also use those NCs.
00:39:859 (2) - You could make this slider use the blue tick this time: I think its fine staying as it is

but you will have to add some space before 00:40:657 (1) -
01:04:593 (1) - Add finish to the start of slider and remove clap of the end of slider Fixed
01:05:071 (2) - Add clap to start of slider and remove clap of end of slider Fixed
01:08:582 (1) - Remove the clap from the start of slider
01:12:891 (3) - Move it to 01:12:731 - and make this slider closer to 01:12:571 (2) I want to maintain DS
01:28:050 (4) - NC Fixed

Hard
Reduce drain by 1

00:26:614 (1) - it would be better to just place it at x:59 y:171 Fixed
00:36:508 (3) - Place it at x:268 y:204 to give it some space to the next object, it was too close in spacing. Fixed
00:36:827 (4) - NC and place it x:88 y:240 Fixed
00:37:305 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
00:44:327 (4) - Starting from here, reduce the slider velocity till here 00:51:667 - it doesnt make sense why everything is as fast as the kiai part. Fixed
00:48:157 (3) - On this slider, use only one middle slider point Fixed
00:53:183 (2) - Make this slider 1 point shorter and place it 00:53:263 - and give it a proper distance. Fixed
00:58:848 (7,1) - Avoid this huge jump on Hard. Fixed
01:04:593 (3) - Remove the clap at the beginning of this slider, 01:04:912 (4) - on this circle, 01:05:391 (1) - this circle as well and remove the finish on this slider start 01:05:550 (2) - Fixed
01:04:593 (3) - NC and 01:05:391 (1) - remove NC
01:05:869 (6) - NC and 01:06:508 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:146 (11) - NC Fixed
01:07:146 (1,2,3,4) - I don't have an idea to fix this, and you really dont have to, but it just looks a bit weird imo having straight sliders over each other like that.
01:08:423 (1) - Remove the claps on this slider Fixed
01:11:614 (3) - Fix sliders points: try 2nd point at x:88 y:212 and 3rd point at x:152 y:216.
01:13:210 (3) - Add claps to start and end of slider.
01:23:582 - Add a circle in between here. Fixed

Just wanna say that the spacing on kiai time, being 1.5x with slider velocity still being the same, you should have increased slider speed and still maintained at least the 1.3x spacing like the rest of the map.

Insane
You could simply rename this to Extra. No problem in having 2 Extra difficulties since there already is an Insane.

00:01:720 (5) - make the slider shorter and add a circle here 00:02:040 - so you dont skip a beat of the intro, even though you were following guitar, it's better this way.
00:12:891 (3) - This slider speed change was hardly predictable, so i reccomend adding a NC as a warning for it.Still better than what it was in the beginning x1.75
00:22:385 (8) - Place it in x:263 y:196 [color=#FF8000]Lolwut that far :d
00:44:167 (4) - Delete this slider and make slider 00:43:928 (3) - end at 00:44:167 - with for example: middle slider point at x:400 y:104 and end slider point at x:476 y:180 It wouldnt have as much impact with that :<
00:53:821 - New pattern: I like what I currently have because the 2 1/1 circles are basically slowdowns

Basically make the first stream end with circle 9 and then another stream before the slider you had there, also respec the NCs.
01:04:593 (1) - Remove the clap of this slider start, the clap on this circle 01:04:912 (2) -, and this one as well 01:05:391 (4) - and lastly, remove the finish on the start of this slider: 01:05:550 (5)

This mod was before Atsuro's mod, so some things may have been fixed already.

Good Luck!

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-17T06:55:00+00:00

Faan wrote:
from reverse m4m (._. wut)

I think there can be a kiai from 34:114 ----- 44:327 (please ignore)

Easy:
00:07:305 (3) - maybe move to 332,45. The distance will get slightly screwed but the blanket will be better .w. Psh who even sleeps with blankets
00:10:816 (1) - the slider is @#&*dy short, maybe no curve Ok no curve
00:11:774 (3) - maybe, mayyyybe move to the next red tick The feels arent teh same
00:10:816 (1) - DS m8Fixed
00:32:837 (2) - can adjust a little to fit blanket better, for example: move the second tick to 217,93 Fixed
00:53:263 (3) - can move and rotate a little so it flows from 2 and into better Fixed

rhythme is a little weird .~. polarity issue maybe?

Normal:
00:02:837 (1,1) - who doesn't love nazimod blanket thanks Fixed
00:14:008 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
00:14:008 (2,4) - ^ Fixed
00:10:178 (1,3) - slight overlap Fixed
01:04:593 (1) - maybe http://puu.sh/ezWHb/12afb674a7.jpg Wat no I like my kimi

Hard:
00:02:199 (1) - rotate around selection center 1 degree anti-clockwise for better blanket Lel you mean 2 degrees
00:23:103 (4) - I find the slider path slightly unclear Fixed
00:31:082 (3,1) - blanketable Fixed
00:36:667 - sounds like a note Fixed

Insane:
00:39:380 (1) - move a bit to the right Fixed
00:49:274 (1) - maybe delete Fixed

@_@ insane and extra 3fast5me

Jere-Chan

70 posts

Joined December 2013

Jere-Chan 2015-01-17T08:59:06+00:00

hi! from my modQ!

[Easy]
Is it just me or is it the beatmap cuz its off-beat. O_o
the start should be like this (http://puu.sh/eDhPt.jpg) since its off-beat

[Normal]
this is off beat too.. do the same thing as i told u to do above

[Hard]
Still off-beat

[handsome's Insane]
Off-beat

[Absolute Duo]
Not off-beat.
a great difficulty.

[Insane]
Off-beat

[Byfar's Extra]
off-beat

General:
The maps were off-beat (except 1.)
but they were good maps the problem was just the off beat thing but gj.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-01-17T10:23:44+00:00

from ticket

Easy

00:03:316 (1) - the design looks still can improved here, same for flow too, i'd say like http://puu.sh/eAsF5.jpg
00:06:667 (2,3) - anyway this blanket looks not really good here (http://puu.sh/eAsZ5.jpg) , try follow the curve on approach circle and blanket will be fine :3
00:08:423 (4) - should NC for consistency here
00:09:220 (5) - the curve looks so curvy and break the flow here. hmm try smoother it like http://puu.sh/eAtBh.jpg ?
00:09:859 (6,1) - why (6)'s tail and (1)'s head have claps here? they really dont fit with musics Q_Q
00:12:252 - 00:12:571 - 00:12:891 - if you want to use finish so volume should be 40% coz 55% is too noisy
00:21:667 (3) - add whistle, the background music still a weak drum here
00:23:901 (1) - add finish coz it has cymbal sound
00:24:540 (2) - why clap here suddenly? it sounds quite random here imo, better to use whistle
from 00:27:093 - here you have lot of unnecessary greenlines http://puu.sh/eDkMN.png
00:31:401 - it has cymbal sound at this time, better to map it imo, well break your design but rhythm would be better with http://puu.sh/eDkXJ.jpg
00:34:114 (1) - finish coz cymbal /.\
00:34:752 (2) - and all 3rd whiteticks until - 00:43:688 - + 00:37:944 - and 00:43:050 - , remove finish here coz no cymbal sound, sounds random for me, claps are enough for me /.\
00:39:220 (1) - and finish here coz cymbal
00:47:837 (1) - should be removed coz recovery time after spinner should be full measure here
00:49:433 (1,2,3) - just suggestion if you follow piano only, these rhythm could be nerfed become 3/2 slider repeat only
00:51:348 (1) - hmm not bad but i think the hitsound feels more fit if you use drum finish here. ofc just a suggestion
00:51:986 (2) - im sure whistle isnt enough to emphasize vocal on repeat, how about add finish too? it feels nicely for me
00:53:263 (3) - this slider is too curvy so it doesnt give nice flow imo, i would say to make it smoother, i guess something like http://puu.sh/eDlRj.jpg
00:53:901 (4) - hmm drum finish on tail doesnt emphasize the cymbal at all imo, use soft finish instead?
00:59:486 (1) - same as above but at slider's head here
01:02:040 (1) - soft default finish on slider's head coz the cymbal /:3\
01:03:954 - well unnecessary greenline =w=/
01:09:699 - should be mapped coz cymbal x.x, change 01:08:582 (1,2) - become http://puu.sh/eDmu7.jpg instead
01:12:412 (2) - anyway this slider should be start at 01:12:252 - coz the cymbal, end the slider at 01:12:891 - is fine :p
01:14:805 (1) - should be soft finish on head coz the cymbal, and the vocal is high too
01:20:710 (2,1) - try avoid to use 1/2 gap for Easy diff, that's hard for newbie http://puu.sh/eDmS3.jpg <- use this instead
01:30:284 - unnecessary greenline too

Normal

00:03:316 (1) - nazi but blanket still can improved here http://puu.sh/eDn6n.jpg
00:07:784 (4) - change clap on tail with whistle here, no kick drum so clap sounds random :C
00:10:178 (1,2) - remove both finishes from them and add finish on 00:10:976 - coz the musics ;3;
00:11:774 (4) - aa flow suddenly become go to upward feels weird for me when the natural flow actually go to diagonal upward or downward, use this instead? http://puu.sh/eDntX.jpg
00:16:242 (1,2) - aaa actually you can improve the flow become more natural if you use circular flow here, something like http://puu.sh/eDnGF.jpg
aaa actually i have much problems about flow in this diff, example 01:22:465 (1,2) - if you curve the first slider to downward, dont curve the 2nd slider to downward again but try the opposite (upward) so it will give more natural on flow http://puu.sh/eDnV7.jpg (apply this to all sliders in whole diff)
I have problems with hitsounds as well, literally claps used for 2nd and 4th whiteticks here but no for 00:44:327 - until 00:53:582 - coz the calm part so just use whistle, keep on mind claps on redticks dont work properly here, and some finish hitsounds i told already in Easy, apply for this one too

Hard

to be honest the rhythms feel like Insane here, too many 1/2 gap with 1/2 sliders or circles, it should have more 1/1 sliders here (well i know you are following vocal too much here) but imo the spread become huge from Normal to Hard coz the rhyhtms , some rhythms like 00:03:316 (1,2) - , 00:05:231 (2,3) -, 00:15:284 (3,4) - (1/1 slider and then circle), 00:07:146 (1,2) - etc can be 1/1 sliders for easier rhythms
Also same as Normal, the hitsounds please :'3

handsome's Insane

00:01:242 (3) - NC please, make confuse here after the anti jump
00:05:231 (4) - i still dont get why finish on head and tail when the musics arent cymbal, cymbal sounds at 00:05:869 - actually
00:08:423 - here too, finish coz cymbal
00:09:061 (4) - why clap here? i dont hear any kick drum sound o.o
00:10:337 (4) - same as 00:05:231 (4) -
00:11:454 (3) - why no clap here when it has kick drum sound?
00:31:401 - finish coz cymbal
00:34:114 - ^
01:03:396 (1) - let the spinner has no hitsound here coz finish and clap sound so bad, the music is so weak so yeah
well hitsound same as Normal too, better to fix it.. also i'd like to ask reduce the spacing of some jumps.. somehow i almost see all jumps for this diff rather than see normal spacings

For Insane diff, hitsounds same as Normal too. i cant mod coz too hard for me to play so yeah, cant mod it.. same for Extra

Good Luck :3~

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-17T12:41:18+00:00

Jere-Chan wrote:
hi! from my modQ!

[Easy]
Is it just me or is it the beatmap cuz its off-beat. O_o
the start should be like this (http://puu.sh/eDhPt.jpg) since its off-beat

[Normal]
this is off beat too.. do the same thing as i told u to do above

[Hard]
Still off-beat

[handsome's Insane]
Off-beat

[Absolute Duo]
Not off-beat.
a great difficulty.

[Insane]
Off-beat

[Byfar's Extra]
off-beat

General:
The maps were off-beat (except 1.)
but they were good maps the problem was just the off beat thing but gj.

this is the best mod ever

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-17T14:21:02+00:00

should just give kudosu ez star

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-17T16:55:22+00:00

handsome's Insane

00:01:242 (3) - NC please, make confuse here after the anti jump ok
well hitsound same as Normal too, better to fix it.. also i'd like to ask reduce the spacing of some jumps.. somehow i almost see all jumps for this diff rather than see normal spacings the spacing is pretty tame on the non-intense portions, and goes up during kiai. i like it this way.

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-17T23:17:20+00:00

Xinely wrote:
from ticket

Easy
00:03:316 (1) - the design looks still can improved here, same for flow too, i'd say like Fixedhttp://puu.sh/eAsF5.jpg
00:06:667 (2,3) - anyway this blanket looks not really good here (http://puu.sh/eAsZ5.jpg) , try follow the curve on approach circle and blanket will be fine :3 Fixed
00:08:423 (4) - should NC for consistency here Fixed
00:09:220 (5) - the curve looks so curvy and break the flow here. hmm try smoother it like Fixed http://puu.sh/eAtBh.jpg ?
00:09:859 (6,1) - why (6)'s tail and (1)'s head have claps here? they really dont fit with musics Q_Q
00:12:252 - 00:12:571 - 00:12:891 - if you want to use finish so volume should be 40% coz 55% is too noisy Fixed
00:21:667 (3) - add whistle, the background music still a weak drum here Fixed
00:23:901 (1) - add finish coz it has cymbal sound Fixed
00:24:540 (2) - why clap here suddenly? it sounds quite random here imo, better to use whistle Fixed
from 00:27:093 - here you have lot of unnecessary greenlines http://puu.sh/eDkMN.png Fixed
00:31:401 - it has cymbal sound at this time, better to map it imo, well break your design but rhythm would be better with http://puu.sh/eDkXJ.jpg
00:34:114 (1) - finish coz cymbal /.\
00:34:752 (2) - and all 3rd whiteticks until - 00:43:688 - + 00:37:944 - and 00:43:050 - , remove finish here coz no cymbal sound, sounds random for me, claps are enough for me /.\ Fixed
00:39:220 (1) - and finish here coz cymbal Fixed
00:47:837 (1) - should be removed coz recovery time after spinner should be full measure here Fixed
00:49:433 (1,2,3) - just suggestion if you follow piano only, these rhythm could be nerfed become 3/2 slider repeat only Fixed
00:51:348 (1) - hmm not bad but i think the hitsound feels more fit if you use drum finish here. ofc just a suggestion Fixed
00:51:986 (2) - im sure whistle isnt enough to emphasize vocal on repeat, how about add finish too? it feels nicely for me Fixed
00:53:263 (3) - this slider is too curvy so it doesnt give nice flow imo, i would say to make it smoother, i guess something like Fixed http://puu.sh/eDlRj.jpg
00:53:901 (4) - hmm drum finish on tail doesnt emphasize the cymbal at all imo, use soft finish instead? Fixed
00:59:486 (1) - same as above but at slider's head here Fixed
01:02:040 (1) - soft default finish on slider's head coz the cymbal /:3\ Fixed
01:03:954 - well unnecessary greenline =w=/ Fixed
01:09:699 - should be mapped coz cymbal x.x, change 01:08:582 (1,2) - become Fixedhttp://puu.sh/eDmu7.jpg instead
01:12:412 (2) - anyway this slider should be start at 01:12:252 - coz the cymbal, end the Fixedslider at 01:12:891 - is fine :p
01:14:805 (1) - should be soft finish on head coz the cymbal, and the vocal is high too Fixed
01:20:710 (2,1) - try avoid to use 1/2 gap for Easy diff, that's hard for newbie http://puu.sh/eDmS3.jpg <- use this instead Fixed
01:30:284 - unnecessary greenline too Fixed

Normal
00:03:316 (1) - nazi but blanket still can improved here Fixed http://puu.sh/eDn6n.jpg
00:07:784 (4) - change clap on tail with whistle here, no kick drum so clap sounds random :C Fixed
00:10:178 (1,2) - remove both finishes from them and add finish on 00:10:976 - coz the musics ;3; Fixed
00:11:774 (4) - aa flow suddenly become go to upward feels weird for me when the natural flow actually go to diagonal upward or downward, use this instead? Fixed http://puu.sh/eDntX.jpg
00:16:242 (1,2) - aaa actually you can improve the flow become more natural if you use circular flow here, something like Fixed http://puu.sh/eDnGF.jpg
aaa actually i have much problems about flow in this diff, example 01:22:465 (1,2) - if you curve the first slider to downward, dont curve the 2nd slider to downward again but try the opposite (upward) so it will give more natural on flow http://puu.sh/eDnV7.jpg (apply this to all sliders in whole diff )
I have problems with hitsounds as well, literally claps used for 2nd and 4th whiteticks here but no for 00:44:327 - until 00:53:582 - coz the calm part so just use whistle, keep on mind claps on redticks dont work properly here, and some finish hitsounds i told already in Easy, apply for this one too

Hard
to be honest the rhythms feel like Insane here, too many 1/2 gap with 1/2 sliders or circles, it should have more 1/1 sliders here (well i know you are following vocal too much here) but imo the spread become huge from Normal to Hard coz the rhyhtms , some rhythms like 00:03:316 (1,2) - , 00:05:231 (2,3) -, 00:15:284 (3,4) - (1/1 slider and then circle), 00:07:146 (1,2) - etc can be 1/1 sliders for easier rhythms
Also same as Normal, the hitsounds please :'3

For Insane diff, hitsounds same as Normal too. i cant mod coz too hard for me to play so yeah, cant mod it.. same for Extra

Good Luck :3~

Broccoly

1,359 posts

Joined May 2012

Broccoly 2015-01-18T05:43:13+00:00

http://puu.sh/eFTD9/b0a75b5293.osr

I love posting like this everybody watch pls

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-18T14:40:49+00:00

Broccoly wrote:

http://puu.sh/eFTD9/b0a75b5293.osr

I love posting like this everybody watch pls

nice now HDHR it

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,661 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-01-20T02:33:17+00:00

Hi Owntrolf, my mod for reverse M4M. I don't usually mod GD's for M4M but I see byfar asking for testplays on #modhelp way too often lol~ Hope this helps! Good luck with ranking :3. So many stars o___o

[byfar's Extra]

00:40:497 - You miss a strong beat here. Make the slider longer and add circle?
00:41:774 - ^
01:19:912 (1,2,3) - No triangular pattern here?
01:21:188 (3,1,2) - Ehh... this flow could be improved. Ctrl+G 1?
01:02:359 (1,1,1,2,1,2) - I feel like you could improve this pattern. Mainly because 01:02:518 (1) - is a bit out of place with the rest of the pattern. Also, not really sure why the jumps don't begin until 01:02:837 (2) - . You could make this whole pattern jumps, no? Or NC at 01:02:837 (2) - as an indicator that the jumps will begin there. and remove the NC from the 3 sliders before.

[Insane?]

00:03:635 (2,3) - Ctrl+G better flow coming out of 1.
00:22:146 (7,8,1) - Space 8 evenly in between 7, and 1?
00:34:593 (4,2) - Lots of ways to position 4 so that it doesn't overlap.
00:52:944 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream doesn't fit, honestly

. Consider the fact that this stream both follows a "rest/slow" section in the map and is followed by another "rest" section.
01:02:040 (2,4) - maybe stack them?
01:02:040 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Seem's unnecessarily spaced for an Insane... I scaled it down only by a factor of x0.9 and the Diff fell to 5.24 which is Insane instead of Extra lol.
01:07:146 (1,2) - Not sure what you are following here

. The vocals are held, and the drum skips a beat too... Slider maybe?
01:21:188 (1,1) - Naziblankets. Use multiple control points in the middle, ur only using one that's really pulled out atm.
01:26:614 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Seem random... Idk. Maybe its just be but i can't identify any pattern to these circles at all x___x"

[Hard]

00:04:433 (4) - Why not rotate 180 degrees, then Ctrl+G and reposition.
00:20:231 (2,1) - Don't let them overlap.
00:31:082 (3,1) - Blanket.
00:46:242 (3) - Bend it upward instead of downward? Better flow
00:55:497 (4,1) - Blanket
00:59:965 (4,5,1) - Naziblanket.
01:00:603 (2,3) - Naziblanket
01:01:720 (1,2,3) - ^
01:07:146 (1,2,3,4) - Make them symmetrical? 3 and 4 overlap different portions of their previous sliders which makes this pattern a bit sloppy.
01:09:380 (4,5,1) - Blanket
01:16:561 (6,1,2) - How about just having the repeat slider going vertically downward instead of angled? Better flow.

[Normal]

00:31:880 (3,1) - Blanket
00:58:369 (3,4) - ^
01:06:667 (3) - This repeat slider doesn't really fit imo. After listening to it a bit, the beat here just isnt the same as 4, so there should also be a difference in pattern.

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-20T03:54:23+00:00

monstrata wrote:
Hi Owntrolf, my mod for reverse M4M. I don't usually mod GD's for M4M but I see byfar asking for testplays on #modhelp way too often lol~ Hope this helps! Good luck with ranking :3. So many stars o___o

[Insane?]

00:03:635 (2,3) - Ctrl+G better flow coming out of 1. Fixed ctrl+g'd 1
00:22:146 (7,8,1) - Space 8 evenly in between 7, and 1? Fixed
00:34:593 (4,2) - Lots of ways to position 4 so that it doesn't overlap. Fixed
00:52:944 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream doesn't fit, honestly . Consider the fact that this stream both follows a "rest/slow" section in the map and is followed by another "rest" section.
01:02:040 (2,4) - maybe stack them? But muh impacts
01:02:040 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Seem's unnecessarily spaced for an Insane... I scaled it down only by a factor of x0.9 and the Diff fell to 5.24 which is Insane instead of Extra lol. Ill wait :<
01:07:146 (1,2) - Not sure what you are following here . The vocals are held, and the drum skips a beat too... Slider maybe? Because im evil and dont want to use a slider :<
01:21:188 (1,1) - Naziblankets. Use multiple control points in the middle, ur only using one that's really pulled out atm. Fixed
01:26:614 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Seem random... Idk. Maybe its just be but i can't identify any pattern to these circles at all x___x" ctrl+h magic

[Hard]

00:04:433 (4) - Why not rotate 180 degrees, then Ctrl+G and reposition. Fixed
00:20:231 (2,1) - Don't let them overlap. Fixed
00:31:082 (3,1) - Blanket. Looks blanketed to me already
00:46:242 (3) - Bend it upward instead of downward? Better flow Fixed
00:55:497 (4,1) - Blanket Fixed
00:59:965 (4,5,1) - Naziblanket. Fixed
01:00:603 (2,3) - NaziblanketFixed
01:01:720 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
01:07:146 (1,2,3,4) - Make them symmetrical? 3 and 4 overlap different portions of their previous sliders which makes this pattern a bit sloppy. Fixed
01:09:380 (4,5,1) - Blanket Fixed
01:16:561 (6,1,2) - How about just having the repeat slider going vertically downward instead of angled? Better flow. Fixed

[Normal]

00:31:880 (3,1) - Blanket Isnt that already blanketed?
00:58:369 (3,4) - ^ ^ this is where the word naziblanket comes into play
01:06:667 (3) - This repeat slider doesn't really fit imo. After listening to it a bit, the beat here just isnt the same as 4, so there should also be a difference in pattern.I could always just say im mapping the the back drums :<

Aerous

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Joined September 2013

Aerous 2015-01-20T06:46:10+00:00

REMIND ME TO MOD WHEN YOURE DESPERATE FOR ONE !

Anxient

1,573 posts

Joined June 2014

Anxient 2015-01-20T16:53:43+00:00

from your reverse m4m. nearly forgot about it. im so good at this.

Hard
00:23:901 - add object
00:31:082 (3) - ctrl+g plz. ;-;

handsome's Insane
dem jumps omg xD
OD 7 or 7.5?
00:15:923 (6) - a bit more up?
00:33:476 (1,2) - doesn't suit the beat. I think a continue stream or a more rapid repeat slider on 1/4
00:45:284 - 00:45:923 - in this timeframe, try to put some more objects. Recommend: Slider - SliderEnd - Hitcircle
01:14:646 - add hitcircle
01:23:901 (1,2) - not suitable. eliminate 01:24:061 (2) and extend 01:23:901 (1) until 01:24:061.

Insane
Ever considered changing diffname to Extra?
00:33:476 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think better to make it a smooth stream instead of zigzag stream.
00:39:061 - slider velocity escalates owo (try to drop it to 1.35x or something). too fast in my opinion
00:48:954 - 00:49:274 - I suggest add a hitcircle and slider. 00:48:954 - hitcircle, 00:49:114 - slider

byfar's Extra
00:14:008 (2) - ctrl+g
00:53:901 (3,4,5) - hitsound change? ._.

----
That's it for me!

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-21T01:37:05+00:00

monstrata wrote:
Hi Owntrolf, my mod for reverse M4M. I don't usually mod GD's for M4M but I see byfar asking for testplays on #modhelp way too often lol~ Hope this helps! Good luck with ranking :3. So many stars o___o cuz i need opinions on the flow & things from players that can actually play it ;_;. no offence to all you modders though!

[byfar's Extra]

00:40:497 - You miss a strong beat here. Make the slider longer and add circle? ???no i didnt..
00:41:774 - ^^
01:19:912 (1,2,3) - No triangular pattern here? it's fine
01:21:188 (3,1,2) - Ehh... this flow could be improved. Ctrl+G 1? nah it's fine
01:02:359 (1,1,1,2,1,2) - I feel like you could improve this pattern. Mainly because 01:02:518 (1) - is a bit out of place with the rest of the pattern. Also, not really sure why the jumps don't begin until 01:02:837 (2) - . You could make this whole pattern jumps, no? Or NC at 01:02:837 (2) - as an indicator that the jumps will begin there. and remove the NC from the 3 sliders before. all intended. and the reason why i didnt begin the jump too early was to have emphasis.

byfar's Extra
00:14:008 (2) - ctrl+g nah
00:53:901 (3,4,5) - hitsound change? ._. yup

thanks for mods!~~

update (i changed it a little on my own)>> http://puu.sh/eNWzZ/2479370866.osu

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-21T03:43:56+00:00

Anxient wrote:
from your reverse m4m. nearly forgot about it. im so good at this.

Hard
00:23:901 - add object But thats a breath
00:31:082 (3) - ctrl+g plz. ;-;Done
Insane
Ever considered changing diffname to Extra?
00:33:476 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think better to make it a smooth stream instead of zigzag stream. But muh vocals dont sound smooth
00:39:061 - slider velocity escalates owo (try to drop it to 1.35x or something). too fast in my opinion Its barely noticable
00:48:954 - 00:49:274 - I suggest add a hitcircle and slider. 00:48:954 - hitcircle, 00:49:114 - sliderWat

That's it for me!

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-21T04:04:54+00:00

Anxient > thanks for mod

Anxient wrote:
handsome's Insane
dem jumps omg xD
OD 7 or 7.5? blah 7.8
00:15:923 (6) - a bit more up? no
00:33:476 (1,2) - doesn't suit the beat. I think a continue stream or a more rapid repeat slider on 1/4 no it does
00:45:284 - 00:45:923 - in this timeframe, try to put some more objects. Recommend: Slider - SliderEnd - Hitcircle calm
01:14:646 - add hitcircle no, only vocal
01:23:901 (1,2) - not suitable. eliminate 01:24:061 (2) and extend 01:23:901 (1) until 01:24:061. this will b boring

just change od to 7.8 for me lol

FlobuFlobs

617 posts

Joined June 2011

FlobuFlobs 2015-01-22T18:28:02+00:00

Sup grils
Mostly Flow/Pattern/Rhythm mod
Im not gonna mod indepth, you can send me a pm to recheck if it gets more mods

[Generel]

OD Spread >> 2 > 4 > 6 > 7.8 > 8 > 8
How about change it to 2 > 4 > 6 > 7 > 7.5 > 8 ? so it keeps increasing
Also the gap between Hard > Insane seems abit to high and you could get trouble at bubble

[Hard]

Idk what AR8 does on a Hard diff but it shouldnt be here, change to 7
00:02:838 (1) - Add NC here for better readability
00:11:933 (3,4) - you shouldnt stack that in any diff, its horrible to read, espacially on a hard diff, change the pattern
00:46:242 (3) - Blank q_____q

The Pattern are confusing and they dont flow that well.
Try to use simple pattern and consistent spacing, ask some bats or some experienced mapper if they can help you with patterns to map more tidy

[handsome's Insane]

01:14:646 (1) - Add circle here, the lyrics start abit sooner than you mapped
01:02:837 (1) - Add here NC? it would help to read the overlapps also i would 01:03:157 (3,4) - ctrl+g here to keep the flow direction
01:03:954 - 00:12:252 - 00:12:571 - 00:12:891 - 00:13:688 - 00:00:923 - and all from 00:23:901 - - 00:43:050 - remove inherited point and abit more
check yourself and remove unnecesarry inherited points

It's Personal Preferenc but i dont like this big ammount of copy pasta and the whole beginning feels like you could put it in every other map and generic.
it gets better after the first half.
Best map sofar in this set

[Insane]

Here the same, check all your Inherited Points and remove unnecesarry points
00:02:838 (1) - Add NC, you are using a Big white tick NC pattern so why not
00:03:316 (1) - Increase spacing abit more, same problem like Extra, it could confuse some player to have such little spacing between 00:02:997 (2,1) -
00:05:869 (1) - Change the slidershape, 00:05:231 (4,5) - it works here because its the same line in the music but 00:05:869 (1) - here changes the music so the slider should also change
00:06:348 (3) - ^
00:10:178 (3,4,5) - Fix your claps here
01:11:933 (5) - Whats up with the spacing here

Way more chaotic than Byfar's extra but reasonable Spacing and flow.
But you should try to map abit more tidy

[byfar's Extra]

Here the same, check all your Inherited Points and remove unnecesarry points
00:02:997 (2) - Change the direction of this jump, it could confuse player when they try to jump on 00:03:316 (1) - and it would emphasize better
00:05:869 (1,2,3) - this doesnt play that well, it like going 2 time the same way although the music doesnt repeat.
it gives the feeling of "why"
also, 00:06:348 (3) - its hard to read this
you should probably change somehow the pattern
00:19:433 - you shouldnt start from 1.0 to 1.35 SV, its not sidereable for a first time play and results in sliderbreak
00:21:508 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern has so far the highest distance spacing but the music is one of the quietest part until now, it doesnt really make sense to increase the spacing so much.
00:25:018 (1,2,3) - just a optical thing, it doesnt looks nice. Its like you've copy paste the slider and rotate it a bit and the continue to 00:25:976 (1) - doesnt look so smooth
00:30:444 (1,2) - how about this here? 00:30:444 (1) - doesnt really get a good emphasize and 00:30:603 (2) - overlapps with 00:31:082 (2) -
also 00:30:603 (2,1) - this flow horrible
SPOILER
00:52:465 (2) - HP bar overlapp
00:53:901 (1,2) - they dont make sense, theres nothing in the music you have to emphasize also the nc does confuse 00:53:901 (1) -
00:58:848 (2) - Im not sure but i think its unrankable
01:02:359 (1,1,1,2,1,2) - IF you have to silence out objects it means it doesnt fit at all, change patterns completly
01:07:305 (1,1,1) - get you nc consistent, its enough if you space them like crazy and add finishes to emphasize
01:16:720 (1,2,3) - this makes sense from spacing cuz the lyrics get louder but 01:17:359 (1,2,3) - ? reduce spacing abit please
01:18:635 (2) - like mentioned before, how am i supposed to read that sv change?
01:19:114 (1,2,1,1) - nccccc
01:21:348 (1) - you should probably put the slider one tick back the finish is on the red tick here 01:21:188 (3) - but you try to emphasize 01:21:348 (1) - it feels random and is horrible if you play it
01:21:668 (2) - 01:21:986 (3,4) - <- ctrl+g pls 01:21:668 (2) - it makes no sense to have a jump here
01:22:305 (1) - remove finish

Way too much Unnecesarry spacing with confusing patterns, you should probably map abit cleaner and take a look over your flow.
it often changes suddenly and it confuses

byfar

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Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-23T00:45:54+00:00

FlobuFlobs wrote:
[byfar's Extra]
Here the same, check all your Inherited Points and remove unnecesarry points
00:02:997 (2) - Change the direction of this jump, it could confuse player when they try to jump on 00:03:316 (1) - and it would emphasize better no i intentionally changed the direction.
00:05:869 (1,2,3) - this doesnt play that well, it like going 2 time the same way although the music doesnt repeat. yea
it gives the feeling of "why"
also, 00:06:348 (3) - its hard to read this
you should probably change somehow the pattern yea
00:19:433 - you shouldnt start from 1.0 to 1.35 SV, its not sidereable for a first time play and results in sliderbreak
00:21:508 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern has so far the highest distance spacing but the music is one of the quietest part until now, it doesnt really make sense to increase the spacing so much. it doesnt make sense to decrease it either when the 'music tension' has already built to this extend. changed a little
00:25:018 (1,2,3) - just a optical thing, it doesnt looks nice. Its like you've copy paste the slider and rotate it a bit and the continue to 00:25:976 (1) - doesnt look so smooth yea changed
00:30:444 (1,2) - how about this here? 00:30:444 (1) - doesnt really get a good emphasize and 00:30:603 (2) - overlapps with 00:31:082 (2) -
also 00:30:603 (2,1) - this flow horrible improved aesthetics. flow is fine. also, my spacing emphasizes the song well enough. i had the super small spacing there for constrasting reasons
SPOILER
00:52:465 (2) - HP bar overlapp dam
00:53:901 (1,2) - they dont make sense, theres nothing in the music you have to emphasize also the nc does confuse 00:53:901 (1) - lol did you entirely miss the piano? removed NC
00:58:848 (2) - Im not sure but i think its unrankable it is rankable
01:02:359 (1,1,1,2,1,2) - IF you have to silence out objects it means it doesnt fit at all, change patterns completly normals notes do not fit. i've tried. the silenced 1/4s are meant for the piano. it gives an effect that normal notes cannot
01:07:305 (1,1,1) - get you nc consistent, its enough if you space them like crazy and add finishes to emphasize yea
01:16:720 (1,2,3) - this makes sense from spacing cuz the lyrics get louder but 01:17:359 (1,2,3) - ? reduce spacing abit please no
01:18:635 (2) - like mentioned before, how am i supposed to read that sv change? it fits the vocals
01:19:114 (1,2,1,1) - nccccc yea
01:21:348 (1) - you should probably put the slider one tick back the finish is on the red tick here 01:21:188 (3) - but you try to emphasize 01:21:348 (1) - it feels random and is horrible if you play it k changed a little
01:21:668 (2) - 01:21:986 (3,4) - <- ctrl+g pls 01:21:668 (2) - it makes no sense to have a jump here I always put a jump a tick before the vocal
01:22:305 (1) - remove finish removed on tail only

Way too much Unnecesarry spacing with confusing patterns, you should probably map abit cleaner and take a look over your flow.
it often changes suddenly and it confuses fine. keeping most of the spacing though lol

thansk for mod!~

UPDATEEEE

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hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-23T04:26:46+00:00

FlouFlobs > thanks for modding

FlobuFlobs wrote:
[handsome's Insane]
01:14:646 (1) - Add circle here, the lyrics start abit sooner than you mapped starting on instruments feel better.
01:02:837 (1) - Add here NC? it would help to read the overlapps also i would 01:03:157 (3,4) - ctrl+g here to keep the flow direction cool i like this
01:03:954 - 00:12:252 - 00:12:571 - 00:12:891 - 00:13:688 - 00:00:923 - and all from 00:23:901 - - 00:43:050 - remove inherited point and abit more
check yourself and remove unnecesarry inherited points fixed i guess

It's Personal Preferenc but i dont like this big ammount of copy pasta and the whole beginning feels like you could put it in every other map and generic.
it gets better after the first half
Best map sofar in this set

clickety

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Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-23T05:07:35+00:00

FlobuFlobs wrote:
Sup grils
Mostly Flow/Pattern/Rhythm mod
Im not gonna mod indepth, you can send me a pm to recheck if it gets more mods

[Hard]
Idk what AR8 does on a Hard diff but it shouldnt be here, change to 7
00:02:838 (1) - Add NC here for better readability Fixed
00:11:933 (3,4) - you shouldnt stack that in any diff, its horrible to read, espacially on a hard diff, change the pattern Fixed
00:46:242 (3) - Blank q_____q It starts on when they say tai :d
The Pattern are confusing and they dont flow that well.
Try to use simple pattern and consistent spacing, ask some bats or some experienced mapper if they can help you with patterns to map more tidy
[Insane]
Here the same, check all your Inherited Points and remove unnecesarry points
00:02:838 (1) - Add NC, you are using a Big white tick NC pattern so why notI dont think its needed since the next one is so close
00:03:316 (1) - Increase spacing abit more, same problem like Extra, it could confuse some player to have such little spacing between 00:02:997 (2,1) - It doesnt really change the playability since the DS for everything else is a bit weird and its a pause
00:05:869 (1) - Change the slidershape, 00:05:231 (4,5) - it works here because its the same line in the music but 00:05:869 (1) - here changes the music so the slider should also change But symmetry
00:06:348 (3) - ^ ^
00:10:178 (3,4,5) - Fix your claps here Fixed
01:11:933 (5) - Whats up with the spacing here Fixed

Way more chaotic than Byfar's extra but reasonable Spacing and flow.
But you should try to map abit more tidy

Lol handsome that steath change from box to code

hehe

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Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-23T07:12:29+00:00

it was also the wrong code at first :p

Hinsvar

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Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2015-01-24T13:11:31+00:00

Uh hi o.o

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Easy

00:08:901 & 00:09:540 - Uh, no clap? Dunno, I just feel that these places are too empty without any hitsounding.
00:25:178 - What's the purpose of the clap? I think you're supposed to use a whistle.
00:33:476 - ^
00:49:433 (2,1) - What's with such a small spacing here at all sudden? Might as well remove a repeat on (2), remove (1), and make a slider that goes from 00:50:391 to 00:51:348.
00:53:901 - 00:54:220 - Why would you use claps here (again)? They don't really emphasize anything well, neither do they support the current hitsounding pattern.
01:21:188 - Might as well use a finish instead of a clap to follow that cymbal in the background music.
01:23:103 - A whistle should be sufficient here. Finish and clap are too much.
01:25:337 (1,1) - Just use a whistle on the head and finish on the tail of the sliders? The claps are way too loud and unfitting compared to the instruments they're emphasizing. (Honestly, I have a problem with the custom clap... idk why, but it just feels really off compared to the instruments that are played in the song.)

>Normal

00:27:093 - 00:28:050 - Try only using a clap at 00:27:412 and 00:28:050, then leave the others hitsounded. If you've read through my mod in the Easy diff... you should know why.
00:34:274 - A finish here isn't necessary since the instrument it's emphasizing doesn't support the finish's existence.
00:36:029 - ^
00:37:305 - ^ (So pretty much every finish you've put up to 00:44:167 is all wrongly placed. Weirdly enough, you skipped the places where the finishes actually fit, like 00:41:774.)
00:47:837 (2) - I assure you that you don't need a whistle here since it's not really emphasizing anything and sounds redundant.
00:47:837 (2,3) - Place them like so they'll look neater?
00:49:752 & 00:50:231 - Remove the whistles too since there are already too much whistles here, which makes all these whistles lose their accentuation effect.
01:07:305 - It is extremely not recommended to add a finish to follow an instrument sound that you skipped, as it will make the players feel awkward while playing.
01:07:625 (4,2) - Try not to make such overmaps, especially on easier diffs, as they look unaesthetic.
01:19:912 - Starting from this spot until the end, you overused the clap a lot. Seriously, why? Don't use a clap to go along with a finish in this song since the strong instruments aren't accompanied by any percussions. And then there comes 01:25:337 (1,2), which just uses too many claps (I'd recommend to remove all the claps on the sliders except 01:25:816, then use a whistle at 01:25:337).

>Hard

00:05:231 (2,3) - You don't use finishes to emphasize instruments that aren't sounding strong enough and has a vibration effect (like cymbals) or vocals that sounds "focused" on a spot (00:36:029 (1,2,3) in Hard for example). (That's all I'm gonna say about the finishes. And remember not to overuse claps. I'm not even going to bother mentioning hitsounding problems anymore.)
00:16:242 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why the spacing inconsistency...? It isn't an extremely major problem, but there's no reason to keep it like that, since making the spacing consistent can make them look neater.
00:40:337 (6,1) - Why is the spacing lower here...

>handsome's Insane

00:09:061 (4) - Replace the clap with a whistle? A double clap at 00:08:901 (3,4) doesn't really fit the song.
00:10:178 (3) - Do the opposite of the suggestion above: Replace the whistle with a clap. Again, this goes well with the instrument.
00:44:327 (1) - Might as well end this to 00:45:284. I think you're following the instrument at 00:45:125, but the voice at 00:45:284 is stronger than that.
00:49:114 - Consider adding a whistle. Listen to the instruments here and you'll know why.
00:55:178 - 00:55:657 - There isn't any valid reason to use finishes here, I'm pretty sure of that.
01:07:146 - Why don't you have a finish now? It's nice to accentuate the instrument and vocal here.
01:08:263 - 01:08:901 - wait what. What's with the claps all the way here? I don't really think these claps actually go with anything, be it either in the song or in the hitsound pattern. I recommend to remove all the clap here except the first and the last one. (Honestly, I feel that you overused claps in the kiai time. It's as if you sprinkled them everywhere just for the sake of having a hitsound pattern... Try to revise this patterning. Seriously.)

>Insane

00:02:838 (4,5) - Move to (311,31) so the jump here will accentuate the instruments better.

>byfar's Extra

00:02:837 (1,2) - Considering the claps fit the song quite well, I believe you don't need the finishes as they sound quite redundant.
00:03:316 (1,2) - ...Hold on. This is an Extra diff, but an extremely big jump that goes across the entire screen is just fucked up, especially combined with the fact that the spacing is pretty normal from the beginning, and the music doesn't indicate any need of a jump like this.
00:11:774 (3,4,5) - This series of jumps looks kinda exaggerated too since the music isn't so strong to the point where they can support the existence f the jumps here.
00:14:327 (3,4,5) - ...And this one is unreasonable too, for the reason I said before. (All in all, this map is pretty much a gathering of massive jumps that are placed seemingly without any thoughts put aside from just wanting to have big jumps to make the map feel fun and difficult. That isn't really how mapping works... So I hope you'd like to cooperate and reduce most of the bigger jumps; those that don't fit the music's power at all. I believe it should be easy enough to differ the fitting and unfitting ones, but feel free to ask if you want.)
00:19:912 (2) & 00:20:391 (2) - ...Why would you make the slider velocity higher when the music doesn't call for it? It comes out as unexpected and confusing for players.
01:02:678 (1,2,1,2) - These 1/4 jumps are just crazy, man. They only barely fit the song, and can be hard to follow even by pro players. Try something like this.
01:08:263 (4,1) - What's the reason of making an anti-jump here? It isn't consistent with how jumpy the map is and how the song goes.

Well in the end... I believe Owntrolf should try to make the designing and hitsounding of his diffs better, because they're quite a mess right now (Insane's design is okay-ish but I feel that it can be better than how it is right now). handsome's hitsounding still feels a little random too, especially in the kiai, but that can be improved. And for byfar, the jumps are too much. Way too much. Make an Extra diff with jumps, not making super big jumps in an attempt to make an artificial difficulty in order to create an Extra diff.

That's it.

Good luck on the way

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-24T16:25:49+00:00

uh i didn't hitsound my diff :-( its just pasted from his other diffs so uh.. i'll leave that to him..

Come[Back]Home

1,790 posts

Joined October 2011

Come[Back]Home 2015-01-24T19:51:44+00:00

Easy
00:08:423 (1,2,3) This pattern looks weird because of how (3) is placed. I suggest to remake (3) so it fits better
00:15:603 (4) Whats wrong with this slider? It really doesnt fit as how it looks. Make it just curvy, looks way better
00:31:880 (3,4) Those two are looking weird too, i know you want them to be blanket, but maybe you should remake them.
00:32:837 (4,2) Those two are overlapping
00:40:497 (3,5) ^
00:59:486 (1,2) Blank them
01:10:497 (3,1) Flow is weird between those two

Normal
00:17:518 (4,1) They are overalpping. Looks not so good, you should fix that
00:34:274 (3) Make this a normal 1/1 slider
00:44:327 (1) This one looks weird, let it look different.
01:01:720 (1,3) Those two are awfully close, fix that
01:07:625 (4,2) Bad overlap

Hard
00:09:859 (1,2) Blank them
00:13:688 (1) Copy this one and place it here 00:14:327 . Delete 00:14:327 (3) ofc
00:15:923 (5,2,3) Those two are really close to each other which looks bad
00:18:316 (1) Delete NC 00:18:954 (2) Add NC
00:31:082 (3,1) Blank them
00:44:327 (4) This one looks weird
00:48:157 (3) ^
00:50:391 (3,3) Bad overlap
01:12:571 (1,2,3) Flow is weird here

handsome's Insane
00:53:582 (2) Let this one end one the white tick

Insane
00:01:242 (3) Make this on curvy so it fits with 00:01:720 (5)
00:02:199 (1,2) Make a triplet instead
00:11:454 (3) Make this one just straight or curvy
00:12:891 (3) This one is really ugly
01:17:359 (1,3) Overlap is bad

byfar's Extra
Î cant mod extra (Overused jumps though)

Good luck with it :3

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-24T21:02:12+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
Uh hi o.o hey hinsvar

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>byfar's Extra
00:02:837 (1,2) - Considering the claps fit the song quite well, I believe you don't need the finishes as they sound quite redundant.
00:03:316 (1,2) - ...Hold on. This is an Extra diff, but an extremely big jump that goes across the entire screen is just fucked up, especially combined with the fact that the spacing is pretty normal from the beginning, and the music doesn't indicate any need of a jump like this. . the spacing serves as a 'kick start'. why i decided to do this? because of the sudden stop in the music and then the large downbeat
00:11:774 (3,4,5) - This series of jumps looks kinda exaggerated too since the music isn't so strong to the point where they can support the existence f the jumps here. nah it's fine. it's only .25x DS larger than the previous star pattern jump
00:14:327 (3,4,5) - ...And this one is unreasonable too, for the reason I said before. (All in all, this map is pretty much a gathering of massive jumps that are placed seemingly without any thoughts put aside from just wanting to have big jumps to make the map feel fun and difficult. That isn't really how mapping works... So I hope you'd like to cooperate and reduce most of the bigger jumps; those that don't fit the music's power at all. I believe it should be easy enough to differ the fitting and unfitting ones, but feel free to ask if you want.) i really feel like there needs to be a large emphasized jump. if i make the bigger ones smaller, then i'd have to make every other smaller ones smaller (and tbh the small ones are pretty small right now) i will continue to ask for testplays. i imho the jumps fit perfectly with the music, however i will change the more ridiculous jumps.
00:19:912 (2) & 00:20:391 (2) - ...Why would you make the slider velocity higher when the music doesn't call for it? It comes out as unexpected and confusing for players. hmm.. was intended but ill look into it
01:02:678 (1,2,1,2) - These 1/4 jumps are just crazy, man. They only barely fit the song, and can be hard to follow even by pro players. Try something like this. changed just a little
01:08:263 (4,1) - What's the reason of making an anti-jump here? It isn't consistent with how jumpy the map is and how the song goes. oh yeaaaa
Well in the end... I believe Owntrolf should try to make the designing and hitsounding of his diffs better, because they're quite a mess right now (Insane's design is okay-ish but I feel that it can be better than how it is right now). handsome's hitsounding still feels a little random too, especially in the kiai, but that can be improved. And for byfar, the jumps are too much. Way too much. Make an Extra diff with jumps, not making super big jumps in an attempt to make an artificial difficulty in order to create an Extra diff.

That's it.

Good luck on the way

thanks for mod!~~

update

http://puu.sh/eYqjz/5e3d64586b.osu

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-25T00:34:39+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
Uh hi o.o

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Easy
00:08:901 & 00:09:540 - Uh, no clap? Dunno, I just feel that these places are too empty without any hitsounding.
00:25:178 - What's the purpose of the clap? I think you're supposed to use a whistle.
00:33:476 - ^
00:49:433 (2,1) - What's with such a small spacing here at all sudden? Might as well remove a repeat on (2), remove (1), and make a slider that goes from 00:50:391 to 00:51:348. Added
00:53:901 - 00:54:220 - Why would you use claps here (again)? They don't really emphasize anything well, neither do they support the current hitsounding pattern.
01:21:188 - Might as well use a finish instead of a clap to follow that cymbal in the background music.
01:23:103 - A whistle should be sufficient here. Finish and clap are too much.
01:25:337 (1,1) - Just use a whistle on the head and finish on the tail of the sliders? The claps are way too loud and unfitting compared to the instruments they're emphasizing. (Honestly, I have a problem with the custom clap... idk why, but it just feels really off compared to the instruments that are played in the song.)
>Normal
00:27:093 - 00:28:050 - Try only using a clap at 00:27:412 and 00:28:050, then leave the others hitsounded. If you've read through my mod in the Easy diff... you should know why.
00:34:274 - A finish here isn't necessary since the instrument it's emphasizing doesn't support the finish's existence.
00:36:029 - ^
00:37:305 - ^ (So pretty much every finish you've put up to 00:44:167 is all wrongly placed. Weirdly enough, you skipped the places where the finishes actually fit, like 00:41:774.)
00:47:837 (2) - I assure you that you don't need a whistle here since it's not really emphasizing anything and sounds redundant.
00:47:837 (2,3) - Place them like so they'll look neater? Fixed
00:49:752 & 00:50:231 - Remove the whistles too since there are already too much whistles here, which makes all these whistles lose their accentuation effect.
01:07:305 - It is extremely not recommended to add a finish to follow an instrument sound that you skipped, as it will make the players feel awkward while playing.
01:07:625 (4,2) - Try not to make such overmaps, especially on easier diffs, as they look unaesthetic. I think I got it fixed now replaced with some long sliders
01:19:912 - Starting from this spot until the end, you overused the clap a lot. Seriously, why? Don't use a clap to go along with a finish in this song since the strong instruments aren't accompanied by any percussions. And then there comes 01:25:337 (1,2), which just uses too many claps (I'd recommend to remove all the claps on the sliders except 01:25:816, then use a whistle at 01:25:337).
>Hard
00:05:231 (2,3) - You don't use finishes to emphasize instruments that aren't sounding strong enough and has a vibration effect (like cymbals) or vocals that sounds "focused" on a spot (00:36:029 (1,2,3) in Hard for example). (That's all I'm gonna say about the finishes. And remember not to overuse claps. I'm not even going to bother mentioning hitsounding problems anymore.)
00:16:242 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why the spacing inconsistency...? It isn't an extremely major problem, but there's no reason to keep it like that, since making the spacing consistent can make them look neater Fixed I was totally high
00:40:337 (6,1) - Why is the spacing lower here... Fixed I was totally high
>Insane
00:02:838 (4,5) - Move to (311,31) so the jump here will accentuate the instruments better.Applied
Well in the end... I believe Owntrolf should try to make the designing and hitsounding of his diffs better, because they're quite a mess right now (Insane's design is okay-ish but I feel that it can be better than how it is right now). handsome's hitsounding still feels a little random too, especially in the kiai, but that can be improved. And for byfar, the jumps are too much. Way too much. Make an Extra diff with jumps, not making super big jumps in an attempt to make an artificial difficulty in order to create an Extra diff.

That's it.

Good luck on the way

Currently working on the hitsounds

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-25T04:24:34+00:00

oops lmao

real code

http://puu.sh/eZt5D/736d164d01.osu

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-25T06:27:32+00:00

fixed some unsnapped stuff:

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Owntrolf

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Owntrolf 2015-01-25T06:35:42+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Easy
00:08:423 (1,2,3) This pattern looks weird because of how (3) is placed. I suggest to remake (3) so it fits better Fixed
00:15:603 (4) Whats wrong with this slider? It really doesnt fit as how it looks. Make it just curvy, looks way better Fixed
00:31:880 (3,4) Those two are looking weird too, i know you want them to be blanket, but maybe you should remake them.
00:32:837 (4,2) Those two are overlapping Fixed
00:40:497 (3,5) ^ Looks fine when played
00:59:486 (1,2) Blank them I dont know what you mean delete them?
01:10:497 (3,1) Flow is weird between those two Im trying to avoid using 1/2 spacing

Normal
00:17:518 (4,1) They are overalpping. Looks not so good, you should fix that Fixed
00:34:274 (3) Make this a normal 1/1 slider I can hear a strong beat on the blue tick
00:44:327 (1) This one looks weird, let it look different. But its for a blanket of the next slider
01:01:720 (1,3) Those two are awfully close, fix that Fixed
01:07:625 (4,2) Bad overlap I think its in the safe zone L:

Hard
00:09:859 (1,2) Blank them Unsure what you mean
00:13:688 (1) Copy this one and place it here 00:14:327 . Delete 00:14:327 (3) ofc Fixed
00:15:923 (5,2,3) Those two are really close to each other which looks bad I think its fine
00:18:316 (1) Delete NC 00:18:954 (2) Add NC Fixed
00:31:082 (3,1) Blank them Wat
00:44:327 (4) This one looks weird Its fine
00:48:157 (3) ^ ^
00:50:391 (3,3) Bad overlap Its probably fine
01:12:571 (1,2,3) Flow is weird here Fixed

Insane
00:01:242 (3) Make this on curvy so it fits with 00:01:720 (5) Variety
00:02:199 (1,2) Make a triplet instead But mai feels
00:11:454 (3) Make this one just straight or curvy Variety
00:12:891 (3) This one is really ugly Im just outlining the previous ones
01:17:359 (1,3) Overlap is bad Doesnt that only apply when the starting of a slider is covered?

Good luck with it :3

Yuii-

2,501 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2015-01-27T01:03:04+00:00

[Easy]

General: Change OD and HP to "3,0"

00:06:348 (1) - Change it for a slider from 00:06:188 - to 00:06:348
00:07:305 (3) - I don't like this part, I thought in this one, but I don't like it neither:
00:13:688 (1,2,3) - Change those circles for sliders:
00:16:880 (1) - Replace it for a slider from 00:16:561 - to 00:17:199
00:19:433 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/f4Lm1/d00971d1d7.jpg
00:23:901 (1) - Change it for a slider and finish it at 00:24:220
00:37:305 (1) - Try this and add hitsound "Finish":
01:12:093 - You could add a slider.

[Normal]

General: Change OD and HP to "5,0" (or HP to "4,0")

00:23:901 - There is a beat right here, add a circle.
01:12:571 (2) - Change it for a slider from there to 01:12:731

[Hard]

00:19:912 (1) - Why do you change the Combo here?
00:39:380 (1,2,3) - Try removing "Whistle" for "Clap".

[handsome's Insane]

General: Change OD to "8,0"... "7,8" is random.

00:22:784 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:45:603 (1) - Try this:
01:24:699 (2) - Ctrl+G

[Insane]

General: Change OD to "8,5"

00:27:571 (2) - Care
00:33:954 (1) - Same ^
00:34:752 (1) - Same ^
00:37:305 (2) - Same ^
00:38:582 (2) - Same ^
00:40:098 (2) - Same ^
00:40:657 (1) - Same ^
00:41:375 (4) - Same ^
00:58:210 (1,2,3,4) - Clap?
01:04:593 (1) - Care with the end of the ticks again.
01:09:061 (5) - Same ^
01:14:805 (2) - Same ^
01:15:284 (4) - Same ^
01:19:912 (1) - Same ^
01:20:550 (3) - Same ^

[byfar's Extra]

General: Change OD to "8,5" or "9,0". I don't have too much to mod here, but the jumps are way too forced tbh.

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-01-27T09:32:33+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
[byfar's Extra]

General: Change OD to "8,5" ~~or "9,0"~~. I don't have too much to mod here, but the jumps are way too forced tbh.

seems its right

edit 1:
http://puu.sh/f5Mb7/79a96da5ed.png - just use

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edit 2:
byfar's extra:
i cant really feel my mouse so rigid by playing this map #RIP flow ;_;
okay this is fucking no fun!

00:37:545 (2,3) - this one broke flow
00:38:582 (1,1,1) - unnecessary combo spam
00:39:859 (1,1,1) - feels random + unnecessary combo spam
00:41:135 (1,1,2) - ah..... nice flow (and i smashing my mouse there :<<<<)
00:43:050 (1,1) - why you nc in 00:43:290 (1) - ?
00:44:168 (3,1) - okay ._. http://puu.sh/f5N3b/cc225288fb.png
00:58:848 (2) - seems not really readable for this thing
01:03:157 (2) - why no 1/4 slider for kill player? hahahahah >:D
01:11:933 (2,1) - oh... i see
01:18:316 (1) - why nc this?

~~i swear i didnt mod people map again :< (RIP)~~
/me commit suicide.

edit 2: i will not stop mod this again.
00:44:327 - and this part is wake it worse enough to kill player with high unnecessary HP, consider lowering it to 6 or 5
00:49:433 (1,2,3) - this is ver not consistant because you cant really see follow points in 00:49:752 (2,3) -

i will back for this!

edit 3: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2622229

i edited this map by HP5, seems okay for some slow part. and more enjoyable than use HP7 (it's VERY STRESSFUL!!)

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-27T13:54:14+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
[handsome's Insane]

General: Change OD to "8,0"... "7,8" is random. no, i don't see why i should. 'random' isn't a very convincing argument.

00:22:784 (2) - Ctrl+G no
00:45:603 (1) - Try this: no
01:24:699 (2) - Ctrl+G no, i wont understand your suggestion if you don't bother explaining.

no change

-Mo-

Nomination Assessment Team

962 posts

Joined December 2012

-Mo- 2015-01-27T14:38:14+00:00

Hey, Mod4Mod from your queue.

Easy
- 00:07:305 (3,1) - I would consider this poor polarity and is difficult to read. On lower level difficulties, you should consider red and white ticks as seperate levels of polarity.
- 00:12:891 (4) - Perhaps move to 224:144 to create a triangle with 2 and 3?
- 00:13:688 (1,2,3) - Make a perfect equilateral triangle out of this? The distance from 1-2 is shorter than 1-3.
- 00:40:497 (3) - This would look better if it was a circular blanket over 4 in my opinion. If you view it from [00:41:454], it is parabolic.
- 00:40:497 (3,5) - Kind of minor, but I would prefer it if these didn't overlap.
- 00:55:816 (2,3) - These would look better if they had a circular flow. Currently it looks eccentric.

Example

- 00:59:008 (4,1) - As before about polarity.
- 01:00:763 (2,1) - As above.
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted since it's not doing anything.
- 01:11:135 (1,2) - As before about polarity.

Normal
- 00:06:986 (3) - This slider would look better if the curve was more shallow in my opinion. My suggestion would be placing the centre slider point at 416:328.
- 00:16:880 (3,4) - I don't think this flows well due to how sharp the curve of 4 is.
- 00:37:625 (4) - Moving to 323:296 would improve the flow.
- 00:40:657 (1,2) - The flow of these could be improved. Have them be the same shape so that they look symmetrical to eachother.
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted since it's not doing anything.

Hard
- 00:07:146 (1) - I don't like how this slider looks. I think a regular bezier curve should suffice.
- 00:18:954 (1) - Why not have this be a blanket too? I think it would compliment with 00:19:433 (2) very nicely.
- 00:33:954 (8,1) - I would reduce the spacing between these.
- 00:35:550 (5) - New combo here and remove the one on 00:36:029 (1) since the new line of the lyrics is here.
- 01:02:359 (1) - Remove new combo; I don't think it's necessary.
- 01:12:571 (1) - The flow would be better if the curve of this slider went the other direction.
- 01:21:188 (1) - Wow those are some oddly placed slider points. What about just like this?

Example

handsome's Insane
- 00:00:923 (1,2,3) - I really thought this was on 1/4 beats at first. Keep this if you really want, but I'm just noting I had trouble reading it.
- 00:13:688 (1) - I'm not sure about the head of this slider being completely obstructed from view. Again, keep it if you want, but I personally don't like it.
- 00:23:901 (1) - How about placing Whistles on the downbeat notes of this section? Start from that note, and then the next one on 00:25:178, etc.
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted. It kind of messes how the spinner sounds. Or atleast I'm not a huge fan of how it silences like that. The alternative would be to end the spinner at this point.
Not too much to say here.

Insane
- 00:01:242 (3) - I've commented on this shape of slider before. I think having the slider point at the centre would look better. At least for this one anyway since it's on the horizontal.
- 00:07:465 (2,3,4) - You could make a regular equilateral triangle out of this.
- 00:44:327 (1) - Have the blanket of this slider be circular rather than parabolic. If you reverse 00:45:284 (1), you can view a suitable approach circle to work with.
- 00:59:965 (4,5,6,7,1) - Having two stacks of different timings in the same combo is kind of confusing to read. I was seperate one of these to be flowing rather than stacked.
- 01:01:242 (4,5,6,7,8) - As above.
- 01:03:954 - As in handsome's Insane about the spinner and timing point.
- 01:21:188 (1) - Again with the oddly placed slider points. Follow something similar to the example I gave you before and have a linear point at the centre with bezier curves.
- 01:22:465 (1) - As above.
- 01:26:614 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - How about creating a regular shape with Create Polygon Circles for this star instead of placing the notes by hand?

byfar's Extra
Note that this difficulty is just outside of my skill level, and as such this mod may not be as high quality.
- 00:10:018 (2,4) - I'm not sure if this is an intended offset from the stack or not.
- 00:23:901 (3) - Same as handsome's Insane about placing Whistles on the downbeats.
- 00:27:093 (4) - The tail of this isn't perfectly stacked with 00:27:571 (1,1).
- 00:41:614 (2,2) - These aren't perfectly stacked.
- 00:58:848 (2) - Having this completely obstructed by 00:58:210 (3) made me read this as just a circle. As it's a slider, I wouldn't completely obstruct it's view since it's difficult to read.
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted since it's not doing anything.
- 01:10:976 (6,7) - These aren't perfectly stacked on the tail.
- 01:15:125 (3,1) - These aren't perfectly stacked.
- 01:19:114 (1,2,3) - As above.

Good luck

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-27T21:19:29+00:00

-Mo- wrote:
byfar's Extra
Note that this difficulty is just outside of my skill level, and as such this mod may not be as high quality.
- 00:10:018 (2,4) - I'm not sure if this is an intended offset from the stack or not.
- 00:23:901 (3) - Same as handsome's Insane about placing Whistles on the downbeats.
- 00:27:093 (4) - The tail of this isn't perfectly stacked with 00:27:571 (1,1).
- 00:41:614 (2,2) - These aren't perfectly stacked.
- 00:58:848 (2) - Having this completely obstructed by 00:58:210 (3) made me read this as just a circle. As it's a slider, I wouldn't completely obstruct it's view since it's difficult to read.
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted since it's not doing anything.
- 01:10:976 (6,7) - These aren't perfectly stacked on the tail.
- 01:15:125 (3,1) - These aren't perfectly stacked.
- 01:19:114 (1,2,3) - As above.

Good luck

Fort wrote:
Yuii- wrote:
[byfar's Extra]

General: Change OD to "8,5" ~~or "9,0"~~. I don't have too much to mod here, but the jumps are way too forced tbh.
seems its right

edit 1:
http://puu.sh/f5Mb7/79a96da5ed.png - just use
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edit 2:
byfar's extra:
i cant really feel my mouse so rigid by playing this map #RIP flow ;_;
okay this is fucking no fun!

00:37:545 (2,3) - this one broke flow remapped this part
00:38:582 (1,1,1) - unnecessary combo spam .. fine
00:39:859 (1,1,1) - feels random + unnecessary combo spam remapped this part
00:41:135 (1,1,2) - ah..... nice flow (and i smashing my mouse there :<<<<) :)
00:43:050 (1,1) - why you nc in 00:43:290 (1) - ? to keep consistency with NCing before
00:44:168 (3,1) - okay ._. http://puu.sh/f5N3b/cc225288fb.png yep
00:58:848 (2) - seems not really readable for this thing change a little
01:03:157 (2) - why no 1/4 slider for kill player? hahahahah >:D lol
01:11:933 (2,1) - oh... i see yep
01:18:316 (1) - why nc this? oops

~~i swear i didnt mod people map again :< (RIP)~~
/me commit suicide.

edit 2: i will not stop mod this again.
00:44:327 - and this part is wake it worse enough to kill player with high unnecessary HP, consider lowering it to 6 or 5 [
00:49:433 (1,2,3) - this is ver not consistant because you cant really see follow points in 00:49:752 (2,3) - eh NC'ed a bit

i will back for this!

edit 3: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2622229

i edited this map by HP5, seems okay for some slow part. and more enjoyable than use HP7 (it's VERY STRESSFUL!!) HP 7 to HP 6

Yuii- wrote:
[byfar's Extra]

General: Change OD to "8,5" or "9,0". I don't have too much to mod here, but the jumps are way too forced tbh. fixed somem forced jumps

OD to 8.5
tis a shame fort doesn't like my map

doing these mods later. space reserved.

thanks!

Last edited by byfar 2015-01-28T01:56:03+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-27T21:24:40+00:00

code here

http://puu.sh/f7NDZ/d168e2d65c.osu

this diff isnt so shit anymore hopefully

to everyone saying the jumps are too big: it really isnt IMHO. it fits it perfectly as long as you are familiar with the AR and are able to sufficiently play jumps.

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-28T05:25:44+00:00

-Mo- wrote:
Hey, Mod4Mod from your queue.

Easy
- 00:07:305 (3,1) - I would consider this poor polarity and is difficult to read. On lower level difficulties, you should consider red and white ticks as seperate levels of polarity. Probably fixed
- 00:12:891 (4) - Perhaps move to 224:144 to create a triangle with 2 and 3? Probably fixed
- 00:13:688 (1,2,3) - Make a perfect equilateral triangle out of this? The distance from 1-2 is shorter than 1-3. Probably fixed
- 00:40:497 (3) - This would look better if it was a circular blanket over 4 in my opinion. If you view it from [00:41:454], it is parabolic. Probably fixed
- 00:40:497 (3,5) - Kind of minor, but I would prefer it if these didn't overlap. Probably fixed
- 00:55:816 (2,3) - These would look better if they had a circular flow. Currently it looks eccentric. 00:55:816 (2) -
Example
- 00:59:008 (4,1) - As before about polarity. Probably fixed
- 01:00:763 (2,1) - As above.Probably fixed
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted since it's not doing anything. Probably fixed
- 01:11:135 (1,2) - As before about polarity. Probably fixed

Normal
- 00:06:986 (3) - This slider would look better if the curve was more shallow in my opinion. My suggestion would be placing the centre slider point at 416:328. Fixed
- 00:16:880 (3,4) - I don't think this flows well due to how sharp the curve of 4 is. Fixed
- 00:37:625 (4) - Moving to 323:296 would improve the flow. Fixed
- 00:40:657 (1,2) - The flow of these could be improved. Have them be the same shape so that they look symmetrical to eachother. Fixed
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted since it's not doing anything. Fixed

Hard
- 00:07:146 (1) - I don't like how this slider looks. I think a regular bezier curve should suffice. Fixed
- 00:18:954 (1) - Why not have this be a blanket too? I think it would compliment with 00:19:433 (2) very nicely. Fixed
- 00:33:954 (8,1) - I would reduce the spacing between these. Fixed
- 00:35:550 (5) - New combo here and remove the one on 00:36:029 (1) since the new line of the lyrics is here. Fixed
- 01:02:359 (1) - Remove new combo; I don't think it's necessary. Fixed
- 01:12:571 (1) - The flow would be better if the curve of this slider went the other direction. 01:10:976 (1) -
- 01:21:188 (1) - Wow those are some oddly placed slider points. What about just like this? Fixed
Example

Insane
- 00:01:242 (3) - I've commented on this shape of slider before. I think having the slider point at the centre would look better. At least for this one anyway since it's on the horizontal. Fixed
- 00:07:465 (2,3,4) - You could make a regular equilateral triangle out of this. Fixed
- 00:44:327 (1) - Have the blanket of this slider be circular rather than parabolic. If you reverse 00:45:284 (1), you can view a suitable approach circle to work with. Fixed
- 00:59:965 (4,5,6,7,1) - Having two stacks of different timings in the same combo is kind of confusing to read. I was seperate one of these to be flowing rather than stacked. Fixed
- 01:01:242 (4,5,6,7,8) - As above. Fixed
- 01:03:954 - As in handsome's Insane about the spinner and timing point. Fixed
- 01:21:188 (1) - Again with the oddly placed slider points. Follow something similar to the example I gave you before and have a linear point at the centre with bezier curves.Later
- 01:22:465 (1) - As above.
- 01:26:614 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - How about creating a regular shape with Create Polygon Circles for this star instead of placing the notes by hand? Done

Good luck

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-01-28T07:37:52+00:00

aaaaaaah~ much better

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-28T15:43:49+00:00

byfar wrote:
it fits it perfectly as long as you are familiar with the AR and are able to sufficiently play jumps.

i;m okay with your difficulty but this is the worst possible way of explaining it

-Mo- wrote:
handsome's Insane
- 00:00:923 (1,2,3) - I really thought this was on 1/4 beats at first. Keep this if you really want, but I'm just noting I had trouble reading it. lol its fine
- 00:13:688 (1) - I'm not sure about the head of this slider being completely obstructed from view. Again, keep it if you want, but I personally don't like it. lol its fine
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted. It kind of messes how the spinner sounds. Or atleast I'm not a huge fan of how it silences like that. The alternative would be to end the spinner at this point. nope, fine with this.

no change

IUzairI

4 posts

Joined June 2014

IUzairI 2015-01-30T11:17:14+00:00

Good luck with ur map

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2015-01-31T02:04:29+00:00

signs of tryhard

SPOILER

General

u have combo colour inconsistencies
delete "soul" and "absolute" from tags.

by far the best extra

00:23:742 (1,2,3) - nazi stack
00:33:476 (1,2,3,4) - add some hitsounds, drum sample maybe
00:37:944 - even hanzer does this right.
01:14:167 - add some hitsounds
00:41:454 - green line unsnapped?
okay...

Nsane

00:02:199 (1,2) - why?
00:59:486 (3) - what is this end snapped to?

Handsome

oh something somewhat normal, thanks
missing video
00:32:917 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try drum addition, shouldn't leave a stream unhitsounded
01:23:423 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^

Hard

00:18:316 (7) - use 2 1/2 sliders like before
00:34:752 (2,3,4) - please use 3/4 repeat sliders for all these.

Normal

00:31:401 - feels weird without any hitsounds

Easy

needs a full measure of recovery time 00:00:923 (1,1) -

Why do you use so many brezier sliders??

Damn this map is so good, the patterns, the hitsounds, good job.
Im not worthy enough to bubble this. I only know how to deal with bad maps.

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

pkk 2015-01-31T02:07:18+00:00

Go go! You can do it~~

- words of encouragement from pk senpai

Osuology

528 posts

Joined February 2014

Osuology 2015-01-31T02:15:32+00:00

[byfar's extra]
00:34:114 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1) - This whole part is very overovermapped. Intentionable?
00:19:752 (1,1) - Why are both of these a NC?
00:49:433 (1) - No NC.
01:16:720 (1) - ^
[Insane]
*claps* I found nothing wrong.
[handsome's Insane]
00:39:220 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This plays weird.
01:23:901 (1,2) - This also play weird.
Other than that, nice handsome!
[Hard]
*double clap* You got me twice!.
VERY NICE!!!

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-31T05:16:25+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
General
u have combo colour inconsistencies Fixed
delete "soul" and "absolute" from tags. Fixed
Nsane
00:02:199 (1,2) - why? Fixed
00:59:486 (3) - what is this end snapped to? Fixed
Hard
00:18:316 (7) - use 2 1/2 sliders like before Changed with something different
00:34:752 (2,3,4) - please use 3/4 repeat sliders for all these.I only changed 2 of them :<
Normal
00:31:401 - feels weird without any hitsounds Added normal hitsound
Easy
needs a full measure of recovery time 00:00:923 (1,1) -Removed Spinnier
Why do you use so many brezier sliders?? Ill fix it later

Damn this map is so good, the patterns, the hitsounds, good job.
Im not worthy enough to bubble this. I only know how to deal with bad maps.

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-31T13:07:33+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
Handsome
oh something somewhat normal, thanks lolk
missing video lolk
00:32:917 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try drum addition, shouldn't leave a stream unhitsounded ok
01:23:423 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ ok

ok

SPOILER

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Aerous

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Joined September 2013

Aerous 2015-02-01T23:39:07+00:00

ganbareeee !!!

Noffy

Visual Architect

1,722 posts

Joined April 2012

Noffy 2015-02-02T08:00:36+00:00

Hello Mod From The Banana Queue For Standard
Mini-mod it is because I can't really find anything wrong with this map yeah it's too nice too fun.

[Easy]
00:04:114 (2) – and 00:09:220 (2,3) - are the same sounds so they should probably also have the same pattern in sliders for an easy.
00:17:518 (2) – Rotate -2 degrees to be more of a symmetrical thing with 00:20:071 (2) -
01:04:593 (2,3) – (2) is a whole lot more curved than (3) try checking by ctrl+h'ing (3) to make their curves more alike View lazy image version of instructions here
01:08:582 (1) - The added whistle sound here sounds weird since it breaks up the clap pattern for seemingly no reason.
01:28:050 (2) – Should probably be the same as the finish sounds used during the kiai since having it like that as a single note is rather.. anti-climatic. In the other difficulties it makes sense since they end in multiple notes with the same sound but here it becomes a bit odd sounding.

[Normal]
00:05:869 (1) - forgive my nazi blanket instincts but you could move that middle point to x:116 y:314 to improve that blanket.
00:05:710 (5) - Are we missing a clap here
00:39:380 (1) - Why are the whistle additions using the drum set? It sounds a bit out of place.
00:44:327 (1) - Cool slider :3
00:51:667 (4,1) - Consider moving these two to the right a bit since (1) looks rather uncomfortably close to 00:50:391 (3).
01:28:050 (2) – Same as Easy /;A;/

[Hard]
00:36:827 (1) - This blanket so much pain actually noticed it during gameplay your other blankets are so nice and pretty what is this \;A;/
00:50:391 (3) – How about something like this instead so the inner corner isn't so sharp.

[Insane]
00:50:391 (1) – Oh woah same time as the last slider okay maybe something like this so the curve on the outer side isn't so sharp when it looks like it should be smooth.

Already done here have a nice day nananana~

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-02-02T16:49:29+00:00

dorothy3242 wrote:
Hello Mod From The Banana Queue For Standard
Mini-mod it is because I can't really find anything wrong with this map yeah it's too nice too fun.

[Easy]
00:04:114 (2) – and 00:09:220 (2,3) - are the same sounds so they should probably also have the same pattern in sliders for an easy.
00:17:518 (2) – Rotate -2 degrees to be more of a symmetrical thing with 00:20:071 (2) - Done
01:04:593 (2,3) – (2) is a whole lot more curved than (3) try checking by ctrl+h'ing (3) to make their curves more alikeI think I fixed it View lazy image version of instructions here
01:08:582 (1) - The added whistle sound here sounds weird since it breaks up the clap pattern for seemingly no reason.
01:28:050 (2) – Should probably be the same as the finish sounds used during the kiai since having it like that as a single note is rather.. anti-climatic. In the other difficulties it makes sense since they end in multiple notes with the same sound but here it becomes a bit odd sounding.

[Normal]
00:05:869 (1) - forgive my nazi blanket instincts but you could move that middle point to x:116 y:314 to improve that blanket. Fixed
00:05:710 (5) - Are we missing a clap hereIts not really a clap its a normal-hitnormal fixed
00:39:380 (1) - Why are the whistle additions using the drum set? It sounds a bit out of place.
00:44:327 (1) - Cool slider :3
00:51:667 (4,1) - Consider moving these two to the right a bit since (1) looks rather uncomfortably close to 00:50:391 (3).Fixed
01:28:050 (2) – Same as Easy /;A;/

[Hard]
00:36:827 (1) - This blanket so much pain actually noticed it during gameplay your other blankets are so nice and pretty what is this \;A;/ Fixed
00:50:391 (3) – How about something like this instead so the inner corner isn't so sharp. Fixed

[Insane]
00:50:391 (1) – Oh woah same time as the last slider okay maybe something like this so the curve on the outer side isn't so sharp when it looks like it should be smooth.

Already done here have a nice day nananana~

Ill add more later

guineaQ

1,589 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-02-03T16:26:39+00:00

Looks like everybody has vastly different opinion from me on this mapset.

Bloody honest mod placeholder here

*Cracks his knuckes

This is going to be very subjective

Easy

00:04:114 (2) - I would put some relatively more drastic turn on the slider tick to match the snare.
like this
00:06:348 (1,2,3) - I honestly dislike how this is arranged, the way 1 and 2 and 3 is placed makes it excruciatingly difficult to design their shape so that it PLAYS and LOOKS clean.
I would have done something like this, but its up to you whether you want to keep this or not
00:08:423 (1,2,3) - would appreciate it if you made it like this
somewhat like this
00:11:774 (2,3,4) - would have blanket'd 4 with slider 2 but hmkay or at least arrange it so that 4 is in exact center between 00:14:327 (2,3) -
like
00:24:540 (2) - ahem move the first red tick on the slider tick if possible
00:24:540 (2,3,4) - btw this is not a perfect triangle
00:29:008 (1) - make this into some kind of straight slider, as Kibbleru said, too much bezier sliders.
00:30:923 (2,3,4) - Try a cleaner pattern, its too hard to make these kinds of blankets look clean, and in the end its not worth that much for the effort you have to put in
I'm a jerk aren't I
00:35:391 (3) - straight slider
00:37:944 (2) - S-shape slider
00:48:157 (1,2) - these two don't really connect well from one to other
please smoothen out the flow
00:50:391 (1) - hi
hihi
00:51:986 (2) - curving it the other way is more kewl
00:53:263 (3,4) - better flow to next circle
www
00:55:178 (1,2) - oh yeah check blanket
00:59:486 (1,2) - to give more variety in shape
rip
01:04:593 (2,3) - use straight sliders for these since you got a lot more bezier sliders en route
AAAaaaaAAAAaaa
01:07:305 (3) - m8 move the slider end so that it somewhat closes the circle
01:09:220 (2) - pls variety
SPOILER
01:11:135 (1) - rawr
SPOILER
01:12:252 (2,3,4) - RUN FOREST RUN
01:24:380 (2) - what is this flow

Personally I would try something more creative with longer sliders that come around the end of the song

Gonna see your response to this and decide whether I want to continue on to rest of the diffs

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-02-05T02:19:09+00:00

rip owntrolf silenced cant upload my shit

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-05T09:18:44+00:00

byfar wrote:
rip owntrolf silenced cant upload my shit

hehe

at least im always failed at 00:40:976 (2,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,1) -

pls make that pattern clearly visible. you can do it right?

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-02-06T00:45:18+00:00

[quote=guineaQ]
Looks like everybody has vastly different opinion from me on this mapset.

Bloody honest mod placeholder here

*Cracks his knuckes

This is going to be very subjective

Easy

00:04:114 (2) - I would put some relatively more drastic turn on the slider tick to match the snare. Fixed
like this
00:06:348 (1,2,3) - I honestly dislike how this is arranged, the way 1 and 2 and 3 is placed makes it excruciatingly difficult to design their shape so that it PLAYS and LOOKS clean. Fixed
I would have done something like this, but its up to you whether you want to keep this or not
00:08:423 (1,2,3) - would appreciate it if you made it like this Fixed
somewhat like this

00:11:774 (2,3,4) - would have blanket'd 4 with slider 2 but hmkay or at least arrange it so that 4 is in exact center between 00:14:327 (2,3) - Fixed
like

00:24:540 (2) - ahem move the first red tick on the slider tick if possibleIt doesnt sound right to me
00:24:540 (2,3,4) - btw this is not a perfect triangle Fixed
00:29:008 (1) - make this into some kind of straight slider, as Kibbleru said, too much bezier sliders. Fixed
00:30:923 (2,3,4) - Try a cleaner pattern, its too hard to make these kinds of blankets look clean, and in the end its not worth that much for the effort you have to put in Fixed
I'm a jerk aren't I
00:35:391 (3) - straight slider Fixed
00:37:944 (2) - S-shape slider Fixed
00:48:157 (1,2) - these two don't really connect well from one to other
please smoothen out the flow Fixed
00:50:391 (1) - hi Fixed
hihi
00:51:986 (2) - curving it the other way is more kewl Fixed
00:53:263 (3,4) - better flow to next circle Fixed
www
00:55:178 (1,2) - oh yeah check blanket
00:59:486 (1,2) - to give more variety in shape Fixed
rip
01:04:593 (2,3) - use straight sliders for these since you got a lot more bezier sliders en route Fixed
AAAaaaaAAAAaaa
01:07:305 (3) - m8 move the slider end so that it somewhat closes the circleFixed?
01:09:220 (2) - pls varietyFixed what is variety
collapsed text
01:11:135 (1) - rawr Fixed
collapsed text
01:12:252 (2,3,4) - RUN FOREST RUN Fixed
01:24:380 (2) - what is this flow

Personally I would try something more creative with longer sliders that come around the end of the song

Gonna see your response to this and decide whether I want to continue on to rest of the diffs
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