Suzuki Konomi - Absolute Soul‬ · forum‬

FlobuFlobs

Joined June 2011

FlobuFlobs 2015-01-22T18:28:02+00:00

Sup grils
Mostly Flow/Pattern/Rhythm mod
Im not gonna mod indepth, you can send me a pm to recheck if it gets more mods

[Generel]

OD Spread >> 2 > 4 > 6 > 7.8 > 8 > 8
How about change it to 2 > 4 > 6 > 7 > 7.5 > 8 ? so it keeps increasing
Also the gap between Hard > Insane seems abit to high and you could get trouble at bubble

[Hard]

Idk what AR8 does on a Hard diff but it shouldnt be here, change to 7
00:02:838 (1) - Add NC here for better readability
00:11:933 (3,4) - you shouldnt stack that in any diff, its horrible to read, espacially on a hard diff, change the pattern
00:46:242 (3) - Blank q_____q

The Pattern are confusing and they dont flow that well.
Try to use simple pattern and consistent spacing, ask some bats or some experienced mapper if they can help you with patterns to map more tidy

[handsome's Insane]

01:14:646 (1) - Add circle here, the lyrics start abit sooner than you mapped
01:02:837 (1) - Add here NC? it would help to read the overlapps also i would 01:03:157 (3,4) - ctrl+g here to keep the flow direction
01:03:954 - 00:12:252 - 00:12:571 - 00:12:891 - 00:13:688 - 00:00:923 - and all from 00:23:901 - - 00:43:050 - remove inherited point and abit more
check yourself and remove unnecesarry inherited points

It's Personal Preferenc but i dont like this big ammount of copy pasta and the whole beginning feels like you could put it in every other map and generic.
it gets better after the first half.
Best map sofar in this set

[Insane]

Here the same, check all your Inherited Points and remove unnecesarry points
00:02:838 (1) - Add NC, you are using a Big white tick NC pattern so why not
00:03:316 (1) - Increase spacing abit more, same problem like Extra, it could confuse some player to have such little spacing between 00:02:997 (2,1) -
00:05:869 (1) - Change the slidershape, 00:05:231 (4,5) - it works here because its the same line in the music but 00:05:869 (1) - here changes the music so the slider should also change
00:06:348 (3) - ^
00:10:178 (3,4,5) - Fix your claps here
01:11:933 (5) - Whats up with the spacing here

Way more chaotic than Byfar's extra but reasonable Spacing and flow.
But you should try to map abit more tidy

[byfar's Extra]

Here the same, check all your Inherited Points and remove unnecesarry points
00:02:997 (2) - Change the direction of this jump, it could confuse player when they try to jump on 00:03:316 (1) - and it would emphasize better
00:05:869 (1,2,3) - this doesnt play that well, it like going 2 time the same way although the music doesnt repeat.
it gives the feeling of "why"
also, 00:06:348 (3) - its hard to read this
you should probably change somehow the pattern
00:19:433 - you shouldnt start from 1.0 to 1.35 SV, its not sidereable for a first time play and results in sliderbreak
00:21:508 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern has so far the highest distance spacing but the music is one of the quietest part until now, it doesnt really make sense to increase the spacing so much.
00:25:018 (1,2,3) - just a optical thing, it doesnt looks nice. Its like you've copy paste the slider and rotate it a bit and the continue to 00:25:976 (1) - doesnt look so smooth
00:30:444 (1,2) - how about this here? 00:30:444 (1) - doesnt really get a good emphasize and 00:30:603 (2) - overlapps with 00:31:082 (2) -
also 00:30:603 (2,1) - this flow horrible
SPOILER
00:52:465 (2) - HP bar overlapp
00:53:901 (1,2) - they dont make sense, theres nothing in the music you have to emphasize also the nc does confuse 00:53:901 (1) -
00:58:848 (2) - Im not sure but i think its unrankable
01:02:359 (1,1,1,2,1,2) - IF you have to silence out objects it means it doesnt fit at all, change patterns completly
01:07:305 (1,1,1) - get you nc consistent, its enough if you space them like crazy and add finishes to emphasize
01:16:720 (1,2,3) - this makes sense from spacing cuz the lyrics get louder but 01:17:359 (1,2,3) - ? reduce spacing abit please
01:18:635 (2) - like mentioned before, how am i supposed to read that sv change?
01:19:114 (1,2,1,1) - nccccc
01:21:348 (1) - you should probably put the slider one tick back the finish is on the red tick here 01:21:188 (3) - but you try to emphasize 01:21:348 (1) - it feels random and is horrible if you play it
01:21:668 (2) - 01:21:986 (3,4) - <- ctrl+g pls 01:21:668 (2) - it makes no sense to have a jump here
01:22:305 (1) - remove finish

Way too much Unnecesarry spacing with confusing patterns, you should probably map abit cleaner and take a look over your flow.
it often changes suddenly and it confuses

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-23T00:45:54+00:00

FlobuFlobs wrote:
[byfar's Extra]
Here the same, check all your Inherited Points and remove unnecesarry points
00:02:997 (2) - Change the direction of this jump, it could confuse player when they try to jump on 00:03:316 (1) - and it would emphasize better no i intentionally changed the direction.
00:05:869 (1,2,3) - this doesnt play that well, it like going 2 time the same way although the music doesnt repeat. yea
it gives the feeling of "why"
also, 00:06:348 (3) - its hard to read this
you should probably change somehow the pattern yea
00:19:433 - you shouldnt start from 1.0 to 1.35 SV, its not sidereable for a first time play and results in sliderbreak
00:21:508 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern has so far the highest distance spacing but the music is one of the quietest part until now, it doesnt really make sense to increase the spacing so much. it doesnt make sense to decrease it either when the 'music tension' has already built to this extend. changed a little
00:25:018 (1,2,3) - just a optical thing, it doesnt looks nice. Its like you've copy paste the slider and rotate it a bit and the continue to 00:25:976 (1) - doesnt look so smooth yea changed
00:30:444 (1,2) - how about this here? 00:30:444 (1) - doesnt really get a good emphasize and 00:30:603 (2) - overlapps with 00:31:082 (2) -
also 00:30:603 (2,1) - this flow horrible improved aesthetics. flow is fine. also, my spacing emphasizes the song well enough. i had the super small spacing there for constrasting reasons
SPOILER
00:52:465 (2) - HP bar overlapp dam
00:53:901 (1,2) - they dont make sense, theres nothing in the music you have to emphasize also the nc does confuse 00:53:901 (1) - lol did you entirely miss the piano? removed NC
00:58:848 (2) - Im not sure but i think its unrankable it is rankable
01:02:359 (1,1,1,2,1,2) - IF you have to silence out objects it means it doesnt fit at all, change patterns completly normals notes do not fit. i've tried. the silenced 1/4s are meant for the piano. it gives an effect that normal notes cannot
01:07:305 (1,1,1) - get you nc consistent, its enough if you space them like crazy and add finishes to emphasize yea
01:16:720 (1,2,3) - this makes sense from spacing cuz the lyrics get louder but 01:17:359 (1,2,3) - ? reduce spacing abit please no
01:18:635 (2) - like mentioned before, how am i supposed to read that sv change? it fits the vocals
01:19:114 (1,2,1,1) - nccccc yea
01:21:348 (1) - you should probably put the slider one tick back the finish is on the red tick here 01:21:188 (3) - but you try to emphasize 01:21:348 (1) - it feels random and is horrible if you play it k changed a little
01:21:668 (2) - 01:21:986 (3,4) - <- ctrl+g pls 01:21:668 (2) - it makes no sense to have a jump here I always put a jump a tick before the vocal
01:22:305 (1) - remove finish removed on tail only

Way too much Unnecesarry spacing with confusing patterns, you should probably map abit cleaner and take a look over your flow.
it often changes suddenly and it confuses fine. keeping most of the spacing though lol

thansk for mod!~

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1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-23T04:26:46+00:00

FlouFlobs > thanks for modding

FlobuFlobs wrote:
[handsome's Insane]
01:14:646 (1) - Add circle here, the lyrics start abit sooner than you mapped starting on instruments feel better.
01:02:837 (1) - Add here NC? it would help to read the overlapps also i would 01:03:157 (3,4) - ctrl+g here to keep the flow direction cool i like this
01:03:954 - 00:12:252 - 00:12:571 - 00:12:891 - 00:13:688 - 00:00:923 - and all from 00:23:901 - - 00:43:050 - remove inherited point and abit more
check yourself and remove unnecesarry inherited points fixed i guess

It's Personal Preferenc but i dont like this big ammount of copy pasta and the whole beginning feels like you could put it in every other map and generic.
it gets better after the first half
Best map sofar in this set

clickety

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Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-23T05:07:35+00:00

FlobuFlobs wrote:
Sup grils
Mostly Flow/Pattern/Rhythm mod
Im not gonna mod indepth, you can send me a pm to recheck if it gets more mods

[Hard]
Idk what AR8 does on a Hard diff but it shouldnt be here, change to 7
00:02:838 (1) - Add NC here for better readability Fixed
00:11:933 (3,4) - you shouldnt stack that in any diff, its horrible to read, espacially on a hard diff, change the pattern Fixed
00:46:242 (3) - Blank q_____q It starts on when they say tai :d
The Pattern are confusing and they dont flow that well.
Try to use simple pattern and consistent spacing, ask some bats or some experienced mapper if they can help you with patterns to map more tidy
[Insane]
Here the same, check all your Inherited Points and remove unnecesarry points
00:02:838 (1) - Add NC, you are using a Big white tick NC pattern so why notI dont think its needed since the next one is so close
00:03:316 (1) - Increase spacing abit more, same problem like Extra, it could confuse some player to have such little spacing between 00:02:997 (2,1) - It doesnt really change the playability since the DS for everything else is a bit weird and its a pause
00:05:869 (1) - Change the slidershape, 00:05:231 (4,5) - it works here because its the same line in the music but 00:05:869 (1) - here changes the music so the slider should also change But symmetry
00:06:348 (3) - ^ ^
00:10:178 (3,4,5) - Fix your claps here Fixed
01:11:933 (5) - Whats up with the spacing here Fixed

Way more chaotic than Byfar's extra but reasonable Spacing and flow.
But you should try to map abit more tidy

Lol handsome that steath change from box to code

hehe

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Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-23T07:12:29+00:00

it was also the wrong code at first :p

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2015-01-24T13:11:31+00:00

Uh hi o.o

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Easy

00:08:901 & 00:09:540 - Uh, no clap? Dunno, I just feel that these places are too empty without any hitsounding.
00:25:178 - What's the purpose of the clap? I think you're supposed to use a whistle.
00:33:476 - ^
00:49:433 (2,1) - What's with such a small spacing here at all sudden? Might as well remove a repeat on (2), remove (1), and make a slider that goes from 00:50:391 to 00:51:348.
00:53:901 - 00:54:220 - Why would you use claps here (again)? They don't really emphasize anything well, neither do they support the current hitsounding pattern.
01:21:188 - Might as well use a finish instead of a clap to follow that cymbal in the background music.
01:23:103 - A whistle should be sufficient here. Finish and clap are too much.
01:25:337 (1,1) - Just use a whistle on the head and finish on the tail of the sliders? The claps are way too loud and unfitting compared to the instruments they're emphasizing. (Honestly, I have a problem with the custom clap... idk why, but it just feels really off compared to the instruments that are played in the song.)

>Normal

00:27:093 - 00:28:050 - Try only using a clap at 00:27:412 and 00:28:050, then leave the others hitsounded. If you've read through my mod in the Easy diff... you should know why.
00:34:274 - A finish here isn't necessary since the instrument it's emphasizing doesn't support the finish's existence.
00:36:029 - ^
00:37:305 - ^ (So pretty much every finish you've put up to 00:44:167 is all wrongly placed. Weirdly enough, you skipped the places where the finishes actually fit, like 00:41:774.)
00:47:837 (2) - I assure you that you don't need a whistle here since it's not really emphasizing anything and sounds redundant.
00:47:837 (2,3) - Place them like so they'll look neater?
00:49:752 & 00:50:231 - Remove the whistles too since there are already too much whistles here, which makes all these whistles lose their accentuation effect.
01:07:305 - It is extremely not recommended to add a finish to follow an instrument sound that you skipped, as it will make the players feel awkward while playing.
01:07:625 (4,2) - Try not to make such overmaps, especially on easier diffs, as they look unaesthetic.
01:19:912 - Starting from this spot until the end, you overused the clap a lot. Seriously, why? Don't use a clap to go along with a finish in this song since the strong instruments aren't accompanied by any percussions. And then there comes 01:25:337 (1,2), which just uses too many claps (I'd recommend to remove all the claps on the sliders except 01:25:816, then use a whistle at 01:25:337).

>Hard

00:05:231 (2,3) - You don't use finishes to emphasize instruments that aren't sounding strong enough and has a vibration effect (like cymbals) or vocals that sounds "focused" on a spot (00:36:029 (1,2,3) in Hard for example). (That's all I'm gonna say about the finishes. And remember not to overuse claps. I'm not even going to bother mentioning hitsounding problems anymore.)
00:16:242 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why the spacing inconsistency...? It isn't an extremely major problem, but there's no reason to keep it like that, since making the spacing consistent can make them look neater.
00:40:337 (6,1) - Why is the spacing lower here...

>handsome's Insane

00:09:061 (4) - Replace the clap with a whistle? A double clap at 00:08:901 (3,4) doesn't really fit the song.
00:10:178 (3) - Do the opposite of the suggestion above: Replace the whistle with a clap. Again, this goes well with the instrument.
00:44:327 (1) - Might as well end this to 00:45:284. I think you're following the instrument at 00:45:125, but the voice at 00:45:284 is stronger than that.
00:49:114 - Consider adding a whistle. Listen to the instruments here and you'll know why.
00:55:178 - 00:55:657 - There isn't any valid reason to use finishes here, I'm pretty sure of that.
01:07:146 - Why don't you have a finish now? It's nice to accentuate the instrument and vocal here.
01:08:263 - 01:08:901 - wait what. What's with the claps all the way here? I don't really think these claps actually go with anything, be it either in the song or in the hitsound pattern. I recommend to remove all the clap here except the first and the last one. (Honestly, I feel that you overused claps in the kiai time. It's as if you sprinkled them everywhere just for the sake of having a hitsound pattern... Try to revise this patterning. Seriously.)

>Insane

00:02:838 (4,5) - Move to (311,31) so the jump here will accentuate the instruments better.

>byfar's Extra

00:02:837 (1,2) - Considering the claps fit the song quite well, I believe you don't need the finishes as they sound quite redundant.
00:03:316 (1,2) - ...Hold on. This is an Extra diff, but an extremely big jump that goes across the entire screen is just fucked up, especially combined with the fact that the spacing is pretty normal from the beginning, and the music doesn't indicate any need of a jump like this.
00:11:774 (3,4,5) - This series of jumps looks kinda exaggerated too since the music isn't so strong to the point where they can support the existence f the jumps here.
00:14:327 (3,4,5) - ...And this one is unreasonable too, for the reason I said before. (All in all, this map is pretty much a gathering of massive jumps that are placed seemingly without any thoughts put aside from just wanting to have big jumps to make the map feel fun and difficult. That isn't really how mapping works... So I hope you'd like to cooperate and reduce most of the bigger jumps; those that don't fit the music's power at all. I believe it should be easy enough to differ the fitting and unfitting ones, but feel free to ask if you want.)
00:19:912 (2) & 00:20:391 (2) - ...Why would you make the slider velocity higher when the music doesn't call for it? It comes out as unexpected and confusing for players.
01:02:678 (1,2,1,2) - These 1/4 jumps are just crazy, man. They only barely fit the song, and can be hard to follow even by pro players. Try something like this.
01:08:263 (4,1) - What's the reason of making an anti-jump here? It isn't consistent with how jumpy the map is and how the song goes.

Well in the end... I believe Owntrolf should try to make the designing and hitsounding of his diffs better, because they're quite a mess right now (Insane's design is okay-ish but I feel that it can be better than how it is right now). handsome's hitsounding still feels a little random too, especially in the kiai, but that can be improved. And for byfar, the jumps are too much. Way too much. Make an Extra diff with jumps, not making super big jumps in an attempt to make an artificial difficulty in order to create an Extra diff.

That's it.

Good luck on the way

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-24T16:25:49+00:00

uh i didn't hitsound my diff :-( its just pasted from his other diffs so uh.. i'll leave that to him..

Come[Back]Home

1,790 posts

Joined October 2011

Come[Back]Home 2015-01-24T19:51:44+00:00

Easy
00:08:423 (1,2,3) This pattern looks weird because of how (3) is placed. I suggest to remake (3) so it fits better
00:15:603 (4) Whats wrong with this slider? It really doesnt fit as how it looks. Make it just curvy, looks way better
00:31:880 (3,4) Those two are looking weird too, i know you want them to be blanket, but maybe you should remake them.
00:32:837 (4,2) Those two are overlapping
00:40:497 (3,5) ^
00:59:486 (1,2) Blank them
01:10:497 (3,1) Flow is weird between those two

Normal
00:17:518 (4,1) They are overalpping. Looks not so good, you should fix that
00:34:274 (3) Make this a normal 1/1 slider
00:44:327 (1) This one looks weird, let it look different.
01:01:720 (1,3) Those two are awfully close, fix that
01:07:625 (4,2) Bad overlap

Hard
00:09:859 (1,2) Blank them
00:13:688 (1) Copy this one and place it here 00:14:327 . Delete 00:14:327 (3) ofc
00:15:923 (5,2,3) Those two are really close to each other which looks bad
00:18:316 (1) Delete NC 00:18:954 (2) Add NC
00:31:082 (3,1) Blank them
00:44:327 (4) This one looks weird
00:48:157 (3) ^
00:50:391 (3,3) Bad overlap
01:12:571 (1,2,3) Flow is weird here

handsome's Insane
00:53:582 (2) Let this one end one the white tick

Insane
00:01:242 (3) Make this on curvy so it fits with 00:01:720 (5)
00:02:199 (1,2) Make a triplet instead
00:11:454 (3) Make this one just straight or curvy
00:12:891 (3) This one is really ugly
01:17:359 (1,3) Overlap is bad

byfar's Extra
Î cant mod extra (Overused jumps though)

Good luck with it :3

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-24T21:02:12+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
Uh hi o.o hey hinsvar

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>byfar's Extra
00:02:837 (1,2) - Considering the claps fit the song quite well, I believe you don't need the finishes as they sound quite redundant.
00:03:316 (1,2) - ...Hold on. This is an Extra diff, but an extremely big jump that goes across the entire screen is just fucked up, especially combined with the fact that the spacing is pretty normal from the beginning, and the music doesn't indicate any need of a jump like this. . the spacing serves as a 'kick start'. why i decided to do this? because of the sudden stop in the music and then the large downbeat
00:11:774 (3,4,5) - This series of jumps looks kinda exaggerated too since the music isn't so strong to the point where they can support the existence f the jumps here. nah it's fine. it's only .25x DS larger than the previous star pattern jump
00:14:327 (3,4,5) - ...And this one is unreasonable too, for the reason I said before. (All in all, this map is pretty much a gathering of massive jumps that are placed seemingly without any thoughts put aside from just wanting to have big jumps to make the map feel fun and difficult. That isn't really how mapping works... So I hope you'd like to cooperate and reduce most of the bigger jumps; those that don't fit the music's power at all. I believe it should be easy enough to differ the fitting and unfitting ones, but feel free to ask if you want.) i really feel like there needs to be a large emphasized jump. if i make the bigger ones smaller, then i'd have to make every other smaller ones smaller (and tbh the small ones are pretty small right now) i will continue to ask for testplays. i imho the jumps fit perfectly with the music, however i will change the more ridiculous jumps.
00:19:912 (2) & 00:20:391 (2) - ...Why would you make the slider velocity higher when the music doesn't call for it? It comes out as unexpected and confusing for players. hmm.. was intended but ill look into it
01:02:678 (1,2,1,2) - These 1/4 jumps are just crazy, man. They only barely fit the song, and can be hard to follow even by pro players. Try something like this. changed just a little
01:08:263 (4,1) - What's the reason of making an anti-jump here? It isn't consistent with how jumpy the map is and how the song goes. oh yeaaaa
Well in the end... I believe Owntrolf should try to make the designing and hitsounding of his diffs better, because they're quite a mess right now (Insane's design is okay-ish but I feel that it can be better than how it is right now). handsome's hitsounding still feels a little random too, especially in the kiai, but that can be improved. And for byfar, the jumps are too much. Way too much. Make an Extra diff with jumps, not making super big jumps in an attempt to make an artificial difficulty in order to create an Extra diff.

That's it.

Good luck on the way

thanks for mod!~~

update

http://puu.sh/eYqjz/5e3d64586b.osu

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-25T00:34:39+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
Uh hi o.o

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Easy
00:08:901 & 00:09:540 - Uh, no clap? Dunno, I just feel that these places are too empty without any hitsounding.
00:25:178 - What's the purpose of the clap? I think you're supposed to use a whistle.
00:33:476 - ^
00:49:433 (2,1) - What's with such a small spacing here at all sudden? Might as well remove a repeat on (2), remove (1), and make a slider that goes from 00:50:391 to 00:51:348. Added
00:53:901 - 00:54:220 - Why would you use claps here (again)? They don't really emphasize anything well, neither do they support the current hitsounding pattern.
01:21:188 - Might as well use a finish instead of a clap to follow that cymbal in the background music.
01:23:103 - A whistle should be sufficient here. Finish and clap are too much.
01:25:337 (1,1) - Just use a whistle on the head and finish on the tail of the sliders? The claps are way too loud and unfitting compared to the instruments they're emphasizing. (Honestly, I have a problem with the custom clap... idk why, but it just feels really off compared to the instruments that are played in the song.)
>Normal
00:27:093 - 00:28:050 - Try only using a clap at 00:27:412 and 00:28:050, then leave the others hitsounded. If you've read through my mod in the Easy diff... you should know why.
00:34:274 - A finish here isn't necessary since the instrument it's emphasizing doesn't support the finish's existence.
00:36:029 - ^
00:37:305 - ^ (So pretty much every finish you've put up to 00:44:167 is all wrongly placed. Weirdly enough, you skipped the places where the finishes actually fit, like 00:41:774.)
00:47:837 (2) - I assure you that you don't need a whistle here since it's not really emphasizing anything and sounds redundant.
00:47:837 (2,3) - Place them like so they'll look neater? Fixed
00:49:752 & 00:50:231 - Remove the whistles too since there are already too much whistles here, which makes all these whistles lose their accentuation effect.
01:07:305 - It is extremely not recommended to add a finish to follow an instrument sound that you skipped, as it will make the players feel awkward while playing.
01:07:625 (4,2) - Try not to make such overmaps, especially on easier diffs, as they look unaesthetic. I think I got it fixed now replaced with some long sliders
01:19:912 - Starting from this spot until the end, you overused the clap a lot. Seriously, why? Don't use a clap to go along with a finish in this song since the strong instruments aren't accompanied by any percussions. And then there comes 01:25:337 (1,2), which just uses too many claps (I'd recommend to remove all the claps on the sliders except 01:25:816, then use a whistle at 01:25:337).
>Hard
00:05:231 (2,3) - You don't use finishes to emphasize instruments that aren't sounding strong enough and has a vibration effect (like cymbals) or vocals that sounds "focused" on a spot (00:36:029 (1,2,3) in Hard for example). (That's all I'm gonna say about the finishes. And remember not to overuse claps. I'm not even going to bother mentioning hitsounding problems anymore.)
00:16:242 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why the spacing inconsistency...? It isn't an extremely major problem, but there's no reason to keep it like that, since making the spacing consistent can make them look neater Fixed I was totally high
00:40:337 (6,1) - Why is the spacing lower here... Fixed I was totally high
>Insane
00:02:838 (4,5) - Move to (311,31) so the jump here will accentuate the instruments better.Applied
Well in the end... I believe Owntrolf should try to make the designing and hitsounding of his diffs better, because they're quite a mess right now (Insane's design is okay-ish but I feel that it can be better than how it is right now). handsome's hitsounding still feels a little random too, especially in the kiai, but that can be improved. And for byfar, the jumps are too much. Way too much. Make an Extra diff with jumps, not making super big jumps in an attempt to make an artificial difficulty in order to create an Extra diff.

That's it.

Good luck on the way

Currently working on the hitsounds

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-25T04:24:34+00:00

oops lmao

real code

http://puu.sh/eZt5D/736d164d01.osu

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-25T06:27:32+00:00

fixed some unsnapped stuff:

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339,277,86774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,79,86933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,212,87093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
434,194,87252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,90,87412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,307,87571,6,0,P|125:276|103:176,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,175,87970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
103,175,88050,1,4,0:3:0:0:

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-25T06:35:42+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Easy
00:08:423 (1,2,3) This pattern looks weird because of how (3) is placed. I suggest to remake (3) so it fits better Fixed
00:15:603 (4) Whats wrong with this slider? It really doesnt fit as how it looks. Make it just curvy, looks way better Fixed
00:31:880 (3,4) Those two are looking weird too, i know you want them to be blanket, but maybe you should remake them.
00:32:837 (4,2) Those two are overlapping Fixed
00:40:497 (3,5) ^ Looks fine when played
00:59:486 (1,2) Blank them I dont know what you mean delete them?
01:10:497 (3,1) Flow is weird between those two Im trying to avoid using 1/2 spacing

Normal
00:17:518 (4,1) They are overalpping. Looks not so good, you should fix that Fixed
00:34:274 (3) Make this a normal 1/1 slider I can hear a strong beat on the blue tick
00:44:327 (1) This one looks weird, let it look different. But its for a blanket of the next slider
01:01:720 (1,3) Those two are awfully close, fix that Fixed
01:07:625 (4,2) Bad overlap I think its in the safe zone L:

Hard
00:09:859 (1,2) Blank them Unsure what you mean
00:13:688 (1) Copy this one and place it here 00:14:327 . Delete 00:14:327 (3) ofc Fixed
00:15:923 (5,2,3) Those two are really close to each other which looks bad I think its fine
00:18:316 (1) Delete NC 00:18:954 (2) Add NC Fixed
00:31:082 (3,1) Blank them Wat
00:44:327 (4) This one looks weird Its fine
00:48:157 (3) ^ ^
00:50:391 (3,3) Bad overlap Its probably fine
01:12:571 (1,2,3) Flow is weird here Fixed

Insane
00:01:242 (3) Make this on curvy so it fits with 00:01:720 (5) Variety
00:02:199 (1,2) Make a triplet instead But mai feels
00:11:454 (3) Make this one just straight or curvy Variety
00:12:891 (3) This one is really ugly Im just outlining the previous ones
01:17:359 (1,3) Overlap is bad Doesnt that only apply when the starting of a slider is covered?

Good luck with it :3

Yuii-

2,501 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2015-01-27T01:03:04+00:00

[Easy]

General: Change OD and HP to "3,0"

00:06:348 (1) - Change it for a slider from 00:06:188 - to 00:06:348
00:07:305 (3) - I don't like this part, I thought in this one, but I don't like it neither:
00:13:688 (1,2,3) - Change those circles for sliders:
00:16:880 (1) - Replace it for a slider from 00:16:561 - to 00:17:199
00:19:433 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/f4Lm1/d00971d1d7.jpg
00:23:901 (1) - Change it for a slider and finish it at 00:24:220
00:37:305 (1) - Try this and add hitsound "Finish":
01:12:093 - You could add a slider.

[Normal]

General: Change OD and HP to "5,0" (or HP to "4,0")

00:23:901 - There is a beat right here, add a circle.
01:12:571 (2) - Change it for a slider from there to 01:12:731

[Hard]

00:19:912 (1) - Why do you change the Combo here?
00:39:380 (1,2,3) - Try removing "Whistle" for "Clap".

[handsome's Insane]

General: Change OD to "8,0"... "7,8" is random.

00:22:784 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:45:603 (1) - Try this:
01:24:699 (2) - Ctrl+G

[Insane]

General: Change OD to "8,5"

00:27:571 (2) - Care
00:33:954 (1) - Same ^
00:34:752 (1) - Same ^
00:37:305 (2) - Same ^
00:38:582 (2) - Same ^
00:40:098 (2) - Same ^
00:40:657 (1) - Same ^
00:41:375 (4) - Same ^
00:58:210 (1,2,3,4) - Clap?
01:04:593 (1) - Care with the end of the ticks again.
01:09:061 (5) - Same ^
01:14:805 (2) - Same ^
01:15:284 (4) - Same ^
01:19:912 (1) - Same ^
01:20:550 (3) - Same ^

[byfar's Extra]

General: Change OD to "8,5" or "9,0". I don't have too much to mod here, but the jumps are way too forced tbh.

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-01-27T09:32:33+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
[byfar's Extra]

General: Change OD to "8,5" ~~or "9,0"~~. I don't have too much to mod here, but the jumps are way too forced tbh.

seems its right

edit 1:
http://puu.sh/f5Mb7/79a96da5ed.png - just use

[profile]Come[back]home[/profile]

edit 2:
byfar's extra:
i cant really feel my mouse so rigid by playing this map #RIP flow ;_;
okay this is fucking no fun!

00:37:545 (2,3) - this one broke flow
00:38:582 (1,1,1) - unnecessary combo spam
00:39:859 (1,1,1) - feels random + unnecessary combo spam
00:41:135 (1,1,2) - ah..... nice flow (and i smashing my mouse there :<<<<)
00:43:050 (1,1) - why you nc in 00:43:290 (1) - ?
00:44:168 (3,1) - okay ._. http://puu.sh/f5N3b/cc225288fb.png
00:58:848 (2) - seems not really readable for this thing
01:03:157 (2) - why no 1/4 slider for kill player? hahahahah >:D
01:11:933 (2,1) - oh... i see
01:18:316 (1) - why nc this?

~~i swear i didnt mod people map again :< (RIP)~~
/me commit suicide.

edit 2: i will not stop mod this again.
00:44:327 - and this part is wake it worse enough to kill player with high unnecessary HP, consider lowering it to 6 or 5
00:49:433 (1,2,3) - this is ver not consistant because you cant really see follow points in 00:49:752 (2,3) -

i will back for this!

edit 3: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2622229

i edited this map by HP5, seems okay for some slow part. and more enjoyable than use HP7 (it's VERY STRESSFUL!!)

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-27T13:54:14+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
[handsome's Insane]

General: Change OD to "8,0"... "7,8" is random. no, i don't see why i should. 'random' isn't a very convincing argument.

00:22:784 (2) - Ctrl+G no
00:45:603 (1) - Try this: no
01:24:699 (2) - Ctrl+G no, i wont understand your suggestion if you don't bother explaining.

no change

-Mo-

Nomination Assessment Team

962 posts

Joined December 2012

-Mo- 2015-01-27T14:38:14+00:00

Hey, Mod4Mod from your queue.

Easy
- 00:07:305 (3,1) - I would consider this poor polarity and is difficult to read. On lower level difficulties, you should consider red and white ticks as seperate levels of polarity.
- 00:12:891 (4) - Perhaps move to 224:144 to create a triangle with 2 and 3?
- 00:13:688 (1,2,3) - Make a perfect equilateral triangle out of this? The distance from 1-2 is shorter than 1-3.
- 00:40:497 (3) - This would look better if it was a circular blanket over 4 in my opinion. If you view it from [00:41:454], it is parabolic.
- 00:40:497 (3,5) - Kind of minor, but I would prefer it if these didn't overlap.
- 00:55:816 (2,3) - These would look better if they had a circular flow. Currently it looks eccentric.

Example

- 00:59:008 (4,1) - As before about polarity.
- 01:00:763 (2,1) - As above.
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted since it's not doing anything.
- 01:11:135 (1,2) - As before about polarity.

Normal
- 00:06:986 (3) - This slider would look better if the curve was more shallow in my opinion. My suggestion would be placing the centre slider point at 416:328.
- 00:16:880 (3,4) - I don't think this flows well due to how sharp the curve of 4 is.
- 00:37:625 (4) - Moving to 323:296 would improve the flow.
- 00:40:657 (1,2) - The flow of these could be improved. Have them be the same shape so that they look symmetrical to eachother.
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted since it's not doing anything.

Hard
- 00:07:146 (1) - I don't like how this slider looks. I think a regular bezier curve should suffice.
- 00:18:954 (1) - Why not have this be a blanket too? I think it would compliment with 00:19:433 (2) very nicely.
- 00:33:954 (8,1) - I would reduce the spacing between these.
- 00:35:550 (5) - New combo here and remove the one on 00:36:029 (1) since the new line of the lyrics is here.
- 01:02:359 (1) - Remove new combo; I don't think it's necessary.
- 01:12:571 (1) - The flow would be better if the curve of this slider went the other direction.
- 01:21:188 (1) - Wow those are some oddly placed slider points. What about just like this?

Example

handsome's Insane
- 00:00:923 (1,2,3) - I really thought this was on 1/4 beats at first. Keep this if you really want, but I'm just noting I had trouble reading it.
- 00:13:688 (1) - I'm not sure about the head of this slider being completely obstructed from view. Again, keep it if you want, but I personally don't like it.
- 00:23:901 (1) - How about placing Whistles on the downbeat notes of this section? Start from that note, and then the next one on 00:25:178, etc.
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted. It kind of messes how the spinner sounds. Or atleast I'm not a huge fan of how it silences like that. The alternative would be to end the spinner at this point.
Not too much to say here.

Insane
- 00:01:242 (3) - I've commented on this shape of slider before. I think having the slider point at the centre would look better. At least for this one anyway since it's on the horizontal.
- 00:07:465 (2,3,4) - You could make a regular equilateral triangle out of this.
- 00:44:327 (1) - Have the blanket of this slider be circular rather than parabolic. If you reverse 00:45:284 (1), you can view a suitable approach circle to work with.
- 00:59:965 (4,5,6,7,1) - Having two stacks of different timings in the same combo is kind of confusing to read. I was seperate one of these to be flowing rather than stacked.
- 01:01:242 (4,5,6,7,8) - As above.
- 01:03:954 - As in handsome's Insane about the spinner and timing point.
- 01:21:188 (1) - Again with the oddly placed slider points. Follow something similar to the example I gave you before and have a linear point at the centre with bezier curves.
- 01:22:465 (1) - As above.
- 01:26:614 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - How about creating a regular shape with Create Polygon Circles for this star instead of placing the notes by hand?

byfar's Extra
Note that this difficulty is just outside of my skill level, and as such this mod may not be as high quality.
- 00:10:018 (2,4) - I'm not sure if this is an intended offset from the stack or not.
- 00:23:901 (3) - Same as handsome's Insane about placing Whistles on the downbeats.
- 00:27:093 (4) - The tail of this isn't perfectly stacked with 00:27:571 (1,1).
- 00:41:614 (2,2) - These aren't perfectly stacked.
- 00:58:848 (2) - Having this completely obstructed by 00:58:210 (3) made me read this as just a circle. As it's a slider, I wouldn't completely obstruct it's view since it's difficult to read.
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted since it's not doing anything.
- 01:10:976 (6,7) - These aren't perfectly stacked on the tail.
- 01:15:125 (3,1) - These aren't perfectly stacked.
- 01:19:114 (1,2,3) - As above.

Good luck

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-27T21:19:29+00:00

-Mo- wrote:
byfar's Extra
Note that this difficulty is just outside of my skill level, and as such this mod may not be as high quality.
- 00:10:018 (2,4) - I'm not sure if this is an intended offset from the stack or not.
- 00:23:901 (3) - Same as handsome's Insane about placing Whistles on the downbeats.
- 00:27:093 (4) - The tail of this isn't perfectly stacked with 00:27:571 (1,1).
- 00:41:614 (2,2) - These aren't perfectly stacked.
- 00:58:848 (2) - Having this completely obstructed by 00:58:210 (3) made me read this as just a circle. As it's a slider, I wouldn't completely obstruct it's view since it's difficult to read.
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted since it's not doing anything.
- 01:10:976 (6,7) - These aren't perfectly stacked on the tail.
- 01:15:125 (3,1) - These aren't perfectly stacked.
- 01:19:114 (1,2,3) - As above.

Good luck

Fort wrote:
Yuii- wrote:
[byfar's Extra]

General: Change OD to "8,5" ~~or "9,0"~~. I don't have too much to mod here, but the jumps are way too forced tbh.
seems its right

edit 1:
http://puu.sh/f5Mb7/79a96da5ed.png - just use
[profile]Come[back]home[/profile]
edit 2:
byfar's extra:
i cant really feel my mouse so rigid by playing this map #RIP flow ;_;
okay this is fucking no fun!

00:37:545 (2,3) - this one broke flow remapped this part
00:38:582 (1,1,1) - unnecessary combo spam .. fine
00:39:859 (1,1,1) - feels random + unnecessary combo spam remapped this part
00:41:135 (1,1,2) - ah..... nice flow (and i smashing my mouse there :<<<<) :)
00:43:050 (1,1) - why you nc in 00:43:290 (1) - ? to keep consistency with NCing before
00:44:168 (3,1) - okay ._. http://puu.sh/f5N3b/cc225288fb.png yep
00:58:848 (2) - seems not really readable for this thing change a little
01:03:157 (2) - why no 1/4 slider for kill player? hahahahah >:D lol
01:11:933 (2,1) - oh... i see yep
01:18:316 (1) - why nc this? oops

~~i swear i didnt mod people map again :< (RIP)~~
/me commit suicide.

edit 2: i will not stop mod this again.
00:44:327 - and this part is wake it worse enough to kill player with high unnecessary HP, consider lowering it to 6 or 5 [
00:49:433 (1,2,3) - this is ver not consistant because you cant really see follow points in 00:49:752 (2,3) - eh NC'ed a bit

i will back for this!

edit 3: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2622229

i edited this map by HP5, seems okay for some slow part. and more enjoyable than use HP7 (it's VERY STRESSFUL!!) HP 7 to HP 6

Yuii- wrote:
[byfar's Extra]

General: Change OD to "8,5" or "9,0". I don't have too much to mod here, but the jumps are way too forced tbh. fixed somem forced jumps

OD to 8.5
tis a shame fort doesn't like my map

doing these mods later. space reserved.

thanks!

Last edited by byfar 2015-01-28T01:56:03+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-27T21:24:40+00:00

code here

http://puu.sh/f7NDZ/d168e2d65c.osu

this diff isnt so shit anymore hopefully

to everyone saying the jumps are too big: it really isnt IMHO. it fits it perfectly as long as you are familiar with the AR and are able to sufficiently play jumps.

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-28T05:25:44+00:00

-Mo- wrote:
Hey, Mod4Mod from your queue.

Easy
- 00:07:305 (3,1) - I would consider this poor polarity and is difficult to read. On lower level difficulties, you should consider red and white ticks as seperate levels of polarity. Probably fixed
- 00:12:891 (4) - Perhaps move to 224:144 to create a triangle with 2 and 3? Probably fixed
- 00:13:688 (1,2,3) - Make a perfect equilateral triangle out of this? The distance from 1-2 is shorter than 1-3. Probably fixed
- 00:40:497 (3) - This would look better if it was a circular blanket over 4 in my opinion. If you view it from [00:41:454], it is parabolic. Probably fixed
- 00:40:497 (3,5) - Kind of minor, but I would prefer it if these didn't overlap. Probably fixed
- 00:55:816 (2,3) - These would look better if they had a circular flow. Currently it looks eccentric. 00:55:816 (2) -
Example
- 00:59:008 (4,1) - As before about polarity. Probably fixed
- 01:00:763 (2,1) - As above.Probably fixed
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted since it's not doing anything. Probably fixed
- 01:11:135 (1,2) - As before about polarity. Probably fixed

Normal
- 00:06:986 (3) - This slider would look better if the curve was more shallow in my opinion. My suggestion would be placing the centre slider point at 416:328. Fixed
- 00:16:880 (3,4) - I don't think this flows well due to how sharp the curve of 4 is. Fixed
- 00:37:625 (4) - Moving to 323:296 would improve the flow. Fixed
- 00:40:657 (1,2) - The flow of these could be improved. Have them be the same shape so that they look symmetrical to eachother. Fixed
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted since it's not doing anything. Fixed

Hard
- 00:07:146 (1) - I don't like how this slider looks. I think a regular bezier curve should suffice. Fixed
- 00:18:954 (1) - Why not have this be a blanket too? I think it would compliment with 00:19:433 (2) very nicely. Fixed
- 00:33:954 (8,1) - I would reduce the spacing between these. Fixed
- 00:35:550 (5) - New combo here and remove the one on 00:36:029 (1) since the new line of the lyrics is here. Fixed
- 01:02:359 (1) - Remove new combo; I don't think it's necessary. Fixed
- 01:12:571 (1) - The flow would be better if the curve of this slider went the other direction. 01:10:976 (1) -
- 01:21:188 (1) - Wow those are some oddly placed slider points. What about just like this? Fixed
Example

Insane
- 00:01:242 (3) - I've commented on this shape of slider before. I think having the slider point at the centre would look better. At least for this one anyway since it's on the horizontal. Fixed
- 00:07:465 (2,3,4) - You could make a regular equilateral triangle out of this. Fixed
- 00:44:327 (1) - Have the blanket of this slider be circular rather than parabolic. If you reverse 00:45:284 (1), you can view a suitable approach circle to work with. Fixed
- 00:59:965 (4,5,6,7,1) - Having two stacks of different timings in the same combo is kind of confusing to read. I was seperate one of these to be flowing rather than stacked. Fixed
- 01:01:242 (4,5,6,7,8) - As above. Fixed
- 01:03:954 - As in handsome's Insane about the spinner and timing point. Fixed
- 01:21:188 (1) - Again with the oddly placed slider points. Follow something similar to the example I gave you before and have a linear point at the centre with bezier curves.Later
- 01:22:465 (1) - As above.
- 01:26:614 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - How about creating a regular shape with Create Polygon Circles for this star instead of placing the notes by hand? Done

Good luck

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-01-28T07:37:52+00:00

aaaaaaah~ much better

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-28T15:43:49+00:00

byfar wrote:
it fits it perfectly as long as you are familiar with the AR and are able to sufficiently play jumps.

i;m okay with your difficulty but this is the worst possible way of explaining it

-Mo- wrote:
handsome's Insane
- 00:00:923 (1,2,3) - I really thought this was on 1/4 beats at first. Keep this if you really want, but I'm just noting I had trouble reading it. lol its fine
- 00:13:688 (1) - I'm not sure about the head of this slider being completely obstructed from view. Again, keep it if you want, but I personally don't like it. lol its fine
- 01:03:954 - This timing point can be deleted. It kind of messes how the spinner sounds. Or atleast I'm not a huge fan of how it silences like that. The alternative would be to end the spinner at this point. nope, fine with this.

no change

IUzairI

4 posts

Joined June 2014

IUzairI 2015-01-30T11:17:14+00:00

Good luck with ur map

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2015-01-31T02:04:29+00:00

signs of tryhard

SPOILER

General

u have combo colour inconsistencies
delete "soul" and "absolute" from tags.

by far the best extra

00:23:742 (1,2,3) - nazi stack
00:33:476 (1,2,3,4) - add some hitsounds, drum sample maybe
00:37:944 - even hanzer does this right.
01:14:167 - add some hitsounds
00:41:454 - green line unsnapped?
okay...

Nsane

00:02:199 (1,2) - why?
00:59:486 (3) - what is this end snapped to?

Handsome

oh something somewhat normal, thanks
missing video
00:32:917 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try drum addition, shouldn't leave a stream unhitsounded
01:23:423 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^

Hard

00:18:316 (7) - use 2 1/2 sliders like before
00:34:752 (2,3,4) - please use 3/4 repeat sliders for all these.

Normal

00:31:401 - feels weird without any hitsounds

Easy

needs a full measure of recovery time 00:00:923 (1,1) -

Why do you use so many brezier sliders??

Damn this map is so good, the patterns, the hitsounds, good job.
Im not worthy enough to bubble this. I only know how to deal with bad maps.

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

pkk 2015-01-31T02:07:18+00:00

Go go! You can do it~~

- words of encouragement from pk senpai

Osuology

528 posts

Joined February 2014

Osuology 2015-01-31T02:15:32+00:00

[byfar's extra]
00:34:114 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1) - This whole part is very overovermapped. Intentionable?
00:19:752 (1,1) - Why are both of these a NC?
00:49:433 (1) - No NC.
01:16:720 (1) - ^
[Insane]
*claps* I found nothing wrong.
[handsome's Insane]
00:39:220 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This plays weird.
01:23:901 (1,2) - This also play weird.
Other than that, nice handsome!
[Hard]
*double clap* You got me twice!.
VERY NICE!!!

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-01-31T05:16:25+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
General
u have combo colour inconsistencies Fixed
delete "soul" and "absolute" from tags. Fixed
Nsane
00:02:199 (1,2) - why? Fixed
00:59:486 (3) - what is this end snapped to? Fixed
Hard
00:18:316 (7) - use 2 1/2 sliders like before Changed with something different
00:34:752 (2,3,4) - please use 3/4 repeat sliders for all these.I only changed 2 of them :<
Normal
00:31:401 - feels weird without any hitsounds Added normal hitsound
Easy
needs a full measure of recovery time 00:00:923 (1,1) -Removed Spinnier
Why do you use so many brezier sliders?? Ill fix it later

Damn this map is so good, the patterns, the hitsounds, good job.
Im not worthy enough to bubble this. I only know how to deal with bad maps.

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-31T13:07:33+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
Handsome
oh something somewhat normal, thanks lolk
missing video lolk
00:32:917 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try drum addition, shouldn't leave a stream unhitsounded ok
01:23:423 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ ok

ok

SPOILER

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,0,"Secondoptrymute_xvid.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Aerous 2015-02-01T23:39:07+00:00

ganbareeee !!!

Noffy

Visual Architect

1,722 posts

Joined April 2012

Noffy 2015-02-02T08:00:36+00:00

Hello Mod From The Banana Queue For Standard
Mini-mod it is because I can't really find anything wrong with this map yeah it's too nice too fun.

[Easy]
00:04:114 (2) – and 00:09:220 (2,3) - are the same sounds so they should probably also have the same pattern in sliders for an easy.
00:17:518 (2) – Rotate -2 degrees to be more of a symmetrical thing with 00:20:071 (2) -
01:04:593 (2,3) – (2) is a whole lot more curved than (3) try checking by ctrl+h'ing (3) to make their curves more alike View lazy image version of instructions here
01:08:582 (1) - The added whistle sound here sounds weird since it breaks up the clap pattern for seemingly no reason.
01:28:050 (2) – Should probably be the same as the finish sounds used during the kiai since having it like that as a single note is rather.. anti-climatic. In the other difficulties it makes sense since they end in multiple notes with the same sound but here it becomes a bit odd sounding.

[Normal]
00:05:869 (1) - forgive my nazi blanket instincts but you could move that middle point to x:116 y:314 to improve that blanket.
00:05:710 (5) - Are we missing a clap here
00:39:380 (1) - Why are the whistle additions using the drum set? It sounds a bit out of place.
00:44:327 (1) - Cool slider :3
00:51:667 (4,1) - Consider moving these two to the right a bit since (1) looks rather uncomfortably close to 00:50:391 (3).
01:28:050 (2) – Same as Easy /;A;/

[Hard]
00:36:827 (1) - This blanket so much pain actually noticed it during gameplay your other blankets are so nice and pretty what is this \;A;/
00:50:391 (3) – How about something like this instead so the inner corner isn't so sharp.

[Insane]
00:50:391 (1) – Oh woah same time as the last slider okay maybe something like this so the curve on the outer side isn't so sharp when it looks like it should be smooth.

Already done here have a nice day nananana~

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-02-02T16:49:29+00:00

dorothy3242 wrote:
Hello Mod From The Banana Queue For Standard
Mini-mod it is because I can't really find anything wrong with this map yeah it's too nice too fun.

[Easy]
00:04:114 (2) – and 00:09:220 (2,3) - are the same sounds so they should probably also have the same pattern in sliders for an easy.
00:17:518 (2) – Rotate -2 degrees to be more of a symmetrical thing with 00:20:071 (2) - Done
01:04:593 (2,3) – (2) is a whole lot more curved than (3) try checking by ctrl+h'ing (3) to make their curves more alikeI think I fixed it View lazy image version of instructions here
01:08:582 (1) - The added whistle sound here sounds weird since it breaks up the clap pattern for seemingly no reason.
01:28:050 (2) – Should probably be the same as the finish sounds used during the kiai since having it like that as a single note is rather.. anti-climatic. In the other difficulties it makes sense since they end in multiple notes with the same sound but here it becomes a bit odd sounding.

[Normal]
00:05:869 (1) - forgive my nazi blanket instincts but you could move that middle point to x:116 y:314 to improve that blanket. Fixed
00:05:710 (5) - Are we missing a clap hereIts not really a clap its a normal-hitnormal fixed
00:39:380 (1) - Why are the whistle additions using the drum set? It sounds a bit out of place.
00:44:327 (1) - Cool slider :3
00:51:667 (4,1) - Consider moving these two to the right a bit since (1) looks rather uncomfortably close to 00:50:391 (3).Fixed
01:28:050 (2) – Same as Easy /;A;/

[Hard]
00:36:827 (1) - This blanket so much pain actually noticed it during gameplay your other blankets are so nice and pretty what is this \;A;/ Fixed
00:50:391 (3) – How about something like this instead so the inner corner isn't so sharp. Fixed

[Insane]
00:50:391 (1) – Oh woah same time as the last slider okay maybe something like this so the curve on the outer side isn't so sharp when it looks like it should be smooth.

Already done here have a nice day nananana~

Ill add more later

guineaQ

1,589 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-02-03T16:26:39+00:00

Looks like everybody has vastly different opinion from me on this mapset.

Bloody honest mod placeholder here

*Cracks his knuckes

This is going to be very subjective

Easy

00:04:114 (2) - I would put some relatively more drastic turn on the slider tick to match the snare.
like this
00:06:348 (1,2,3) - I honestly dislike how this is arranged, the way 1 and 2 and 3 is placed makes it excruciatingly difficult to design their shape so that it PLAYS and LOOKS clean.
I would have done something like this, but its up to you whether you want to keep this or not
00:08:423 (1,2,3) - would appreciate it if you made it like this
somewhat like this
00:11:774 (2,3,4) - would have blanket'd 4 with slider 2 but hmkay or at least arrange it so that 4 is in exact center between 00:14:327 (2,3) -
like
00:24:540 (2) - ahem move the first red tick on the slider tick if possible
00:24:540 (2,3,4) - btw this is not a perfect triangle
00:29:008 (1) - make this into some kind of straight slider, as Kibbleru said, too much bezier sliders.
00:30:923 (2,3,4) - Try a cleaner pattern, its too hard to make these kinds of blankets look clean, and in the end its not worth that much for the effort you have to put in
I'm a jerk aren't I
00:35:391 (3) - straight slider
00:37:944 (2) - S-shape slider
00:48:157 (1,2) - these two don't really connect well from one to other
please smoothen out the flow
00:50:391 (1) - hi
hihi
00:51:986 (2) - curving it the other way is more kewl
00:53:263 (3,4) - better flow to next circle
www
00:55:178 (1,2) - oh yeah check blanket
00:59:486 (1,2) - to give more variety in shape
rip
01:04:593 (2,3) - use straight sliders for these since you got a lot more bezier sliders en route
AAAaaaaAAAAaaa
01:07:305 (3) - m8 move the slider end so that it somewhat closes the circle
01:09:220 (2) - pls variety
SPOILER
01:11:135 (1) - rawr
SPOILER
01:12:252 (2,3,4) - RUN FOREST RUN
01:24:380 (2) - what is this flow

Personally I would try something more creative with longer sliders that come around the end of the song

Gonna see your response to this and decide whether I want to continue on to rest of the diffs

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-02-05T02:19:09+00:00

rip owntrolf silenced cant upload my shit

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-05T09:18:44+00:00

byfar wrote:
rip owntrolf silenced cant upload my shit

hehe

at least im always failed at 00:40:976 (2,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,1) -

pls make that pattern clearly visible. you can do it right?

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-02-06T00:45:18+00:00

[quote=guineaQ]
Looks like everybody has vastly different opinion from me on this mapset.

Bloody honest mod placeholder here

*Cracks his knuckes

This is going to be very subjective

Easy

00:04:114 (2) - I would put some relatively more drastic turn on the slider tick to match the snare. Fixed
like this
00:06:348 (1,2,3) - I honestly dislike how this is arranged, the way 1 and 2 and 3 is placed makes it excruciatingly difficult to design their shape so that it PLAYS and LOOKS clean. Fixed
I would have done something like this, but its up to you whether you want to keep this or not
00:08:423 (1,2,3) - would appreciate it if you made it like this Fixed
somewhat like this

00:11:774 (2,3,4) - would have blanket'd 4 with slider 2 but hmkay or at least arrange it so that 4 is in exact center between 00:14:327 (2,3) - Fixed
like

00:24:540 (2) - ahem move the first red tick on the slider tick if possibleIt doesnt sound right to me
00:24:540 (2,3,4) - btw this is not a perfect triangle Fixed
00:29:008 (1) - make this into some kind of straight slider, as Kibbleru said, too much bezier sliders. Fixed
00:30:923 (2,3,4) - Try a cleaner pattern, its too hard to make these kinds of blankets look clean, and in the end its not worth that much for the effort you have to put in Fixed
I'm a jerk aren't I
00:35:391 (3) - straight slider Fixed
00:37:944 (2) - S-shape slider Fixed
00:48:157 (1,2) - these two don't really connect well from one to other
please smoothen out the flow Fixed
00:50:391 (1) - hi Fixed
hihi
00:51:986 (2) - curving it the other way is more kewl Fixed
00:53:263 (3,4) - better flow to next circle Fixed
www
00:55:178 (1,2) - oh yeah check blanket
00:59:486 (1,2) - to give more variety in shape Fixed
rip
01:04:593 (2,3) - use straight sliders for these since you got a lot more bezier sliders en route Fixed
AAAaaaaAAAAaaa
01:07:305 (3) - m8 move the slider end so that it somewhat closes the circleFixed?
01:09:220 (2) - pls varietyFixed what is variety
collapsed text
01:11:135 (1) - rawr Fixed
collapsed text
01:12:252 (2,3,4) - RUN FOREST RUN Fixed
01:24:380 (2) - what is this flow

Personally I would try something more creative with longer sliders that come around the end of the song

Gonna see your response to this and decide whether I want to continue on to rest of the diffs
[/quote]

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Aerous 2015-02-07T07:31:53+00:00

IRC

heres the log

22:34 *Aerous is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/586381 Suzuki Konomi - Absolute Soul]
22:34 Aerous: The audio from this sounds a lot better
22:34 Aerous: for some reason
22:35 Owntrolf: lol *steals mp3 heuheuheueh
22:35 Aerous: Prob should ask if you can use it , because I remember 2ha's Let Me Hear got disqualified due to the mp3
22:35 Owntrolf: lolwtf
22:35 Aerous: yea because i remember crying about it since i fc'ed that extra
22:35 Aerous: brb my turn to pick champ
22:35 Owntrolf: *reencodes by adding +100 offset
22:35 Owntrolf: ITSNOTTHESAMEHUEEEHUEH
22:35 Aerous: LMAOO
22:36 Owntrolf: they stole my video anyways
22:36 Owntrolf: why cant I take their mp3 qq
22:36 Aerous: then steal the mp3
22:36 Aerous: :3
22:36 Aerous: i mean borrow
22:36 *Aerous Gonna play some league , grind to diamond
22:36 Owntrolf: i call it batquat circlejerk anyways
22:37 Aerous: meanwhile i'll listen to this , playing league l0l
22:37 Owntrolf: lel
22:37 Aerous: k ttyl in like 30mins or even more ;-;
22:37 Owntrolf: which is why leg of liginds suk balls
22:37 Owntrolf: i dont know when the game ends qq
23:26 Aerous: ok i gained 25lp
23:26 Aerous: ez
23:26 Aerous: uhh
23:26 Owntrolf: lel
23:26 Aerous: wait let me take a piss and ill do IRC on the insane
23:26 Owntrolf: lemme update
23:26 Aerous: kk
23:28 Owntrolf: remember to redownload I got a new mp3
23:28 Aerous: o
23:28 Aerous: yea
23:28 Aerous: i did
23:28 Aerous: wait link me again
23:28 Aerous: just in case
23:28 Owntrolf: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/255287
23:29 Owntrolf: the feels when I had more favorites than einess' set qq
23:29 Aerous: LOL
23:30 Owntrolf: it had 6 when it was put into qualified
23:30 Aerous: lmao
23:30 *Aerous is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/593647 Suzuki Konomi - Absolute Soul [Insane]]
23:30 Aerous: 00:00:552 -
23:30 Aerous: wanna make this slider blanket with the next note ?
23:30 Owntrolf: like right under?
23:30 Aerous: uh
23:31 Owntrolf: or something like this http://puu.sh/fAatF/40877929a3.jpg
23:31 Aerous: I'll give you 2 screenshots
23:31 Aerous: http://puu.sh/fAavv/c569c73ba0.jpg
23:31 Aerous: 00:01:509 - you can overlap this with the slider 3
23:31 Aerous: http://puu.sh/fAawP/5180838acb.jpg
23:31 Aerous: 00:01:350 - you can bring this note a bit down like what i had
23:32 Owntrolf: oh nazistack .-.
23:32 Aerous: lmao , it looks nice ;3
23:32 Aerous: nazziii
23:32 Owntrolf: done
23:32 Aerous: 00:04:062 -
23:32 Aerous: I'll recomend something like this
23:32 Aerous: uhh
23:33 Aerous: back and forth jumps , i always do that in my mapset lol. Just a suggestion : http://puu.sh/fAaJj/3242a8fec3.jpg
23:33 Aerous: 00:04:541 - maybe curve this slider and the next one too
23:34 Aerous: 00:05:179 - I don't like these striaght sliders
23:35 Aerous: Something like this ? http://puu.sh/fAaWD/e6192df1a0.jpg
23:35 Aerous: 00:07:733 - move this to the left a bit more
23:35 Aerous: Needs some love ----> http://puu.sh/fAb0Z/275dbce5c3.jpg
23:36 Aerous: 00:10:286 - stack this under uhh
23:36 Aerous: 00:09:647 -
23:37 Aerous: lmao
23:37 Aerous: t/122680/start=645
23:37 Aerous: I just read this
23:38 Aerous: LMAOO
23:38 Owntrolf: 10/10
23:38 Aerous: k umm
23:38 Aerous: 00:13:637 - you want something back and forth again
23:38 Aerous: plays much better and looks a better too
23:38 Aerous: http://puu.sh/fAbiB/6b3803e802.jpg
23:39 Aerous: http://puu.sh/fAbjr/764bf984b6.jpg
23:39 Aerous: 00:14:594 - the next slider , number 4 should have a bigger distance in my opinion
23:40 Owntrolf: god im shit at this 10/10 ctrl+w
23:40 Aerous: 00:16:669 - Curve the other side

?
23:41 Owntrolf: wat
23:41 Owntrolf: ctrlg?
23:41 Aerous: Ctrl + J or H
23:41 Aerous: 00:17:147 - uhh maybe this ? http://puu.sh/fAbwt/20e16644e4.jpg
23:43 Aerous: 00:18:743 - http://puu.sh/fAbHl/276f2ced65.jpg
23:44 Aerous: 00:19:222 - same for this
23:45 Aerous: 5http://puu.sh/fAbU9/5a7102d914.jpg
23:45 Aerous: 00:19:701 - try to re arrange the next slider
23:45 Aerous: after this ---> http://puu.sh/fAbU9/5a7102d914.jpg
23:45 Aerous: if you want
23:46 Aerous: 00;21:775 - i liek dis
23:46 Aerous: 00:21:775 -
23:47 Aerous: 00:28:318 - maybe change this up a bit? I don't like square jumps
23:47 Aerous: maybe something like this ? ;o http://puu.sh/fAcch/6ef82d80f8.jpg
23:48 Aerous: 00:31:669 - blanket this with the previous slider?
23:48 Aerous: and the slider underneath this note , move it as well?
23:48 Aerous: 00:32:786 - nice shape
23:49 Aerous: 00:34:062 - Maybe something like this ? http://puu.sh/fAckX/b528b26d66.jpg
23:49 Aerous: I didn't like yours , it felt kinda odd
23:49 Aerous: maybe its just me
23:49 Owntrolf: i just find it way to hard with something like that .-.
23:50 Aerous: its okay
23:50 Aerous: byfar
23:50 Aerous: i remember those jumps
23:50 Aerous: from b4
23:50 Aerous: its okay
23:50 Aerous: just do it !
23:51 Aerous: 00:35:339 - maybe this too ?
23:51 Aerous: suggestion : http://puu.sh/fAcBb/6d827d3a36.jpg
23:52 Aerous: 00:36:855 (3,4) - kinda crowded
23:53 Aerous: http://puu.sh/fAcML/fe41822aeb.jpg
23:53 Owntrolf: :d
23:54 Aerous: the rythem you chose for this map is fine
23:54 Aerous: but its kinda messy
23:54 Aerous: for example
23:55 Aerous: 00:41:961 - this overlap with slider number 1
23:55 Aerous: 00:42:839 -
23:55 Aerous: http://puu.sh/fAcW5/fcfcfcf984.jpg
23:55 Owntrolf: but you dont see it in play :d
23:55 Aerous: BATs gonna kill you with it
23:55 Aerous: i mean BNG
23:55 Aerous: ._.
23:56 Owntrolf: lol
23:56 Owntrolf: bng?
23:56 Owntrolf: renamed again?
23:56 Aerous: yea
23:56 Aerous: Beatmap Nomination Group
23:56 Aerous: LMAOOO
23:56 Owntrolf: god
23:56 Owntrolf: awful
23:56 Aerous: 00:43:637 - uhh thisi , i think you can change it up a bit :3
23:56 Aerous: 00:46:190 - just make this striaght , i hate these tiny sliders
23:57 Aerous: 00:47:147 - try this ? http://puu.sh/fAd5J/bb5837384d.jpg
23:57 Aerous: 00:49:062 - http://puu.sh/fAd8J/2067cb5932.jpg
23:58 Aerous: 00:50:658 - how about this http://puu.sh/fAdbv/5a3b364896.jpg
23:58 Aerous: like you can place those 2 notes and blanket it with that weird slider
23:58 Aerous: 00:53:211 - either make these 2 notes have a huge space or just stack them
23:59 Aerous: suggestion : its not pretty tho , try to make it prettier http://puu.sh/fAdi1/797dd8a063.jpg
23:59 Aerous: 00:55:924 - maybee ?? http://puu.sh/fAdmD/806ded86f1.jpg
00:00 Aerous: 00:56:881 - this looks better http://puu.sh/fAdqz/0d42a20e69.jpg
00:01 Aerous: then place 00:57:839 - somewhere here http://puu.sh/fAdtF/1bbad52612.jpg
00:01 Aerous: top right
00:01 Aerous: 01:00:552 - idkkk ?? http://puu.sh/fAdxn/36a2f6bc01.jpg
00:01 Aerous: 01:02:147 - i like this damnn
00:02 Aerous: here , i'll try to make this part a bit fun
00:02 Aerous: gime like 1min
00:03 Aerous: 01:03:264 - delete the slider and make it like this ?
00:03 Aerous: http://puu.sh/fAdHb/061d182c07.jpg
00:03 Aerous: its like what i did here
00:03 *Aerous is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/611011 AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO [Insane]]
00:04 Aerous: 00:59:543 -
00:04 Aerous: play around the SV if you like it
00:04 Aerous: ignore it if you think its dumb
00:05 Aerous: 01:05:818 - nazi but make it equal the spacing for 4 and 5 http://puu.sh/fAdNX/65c2020691.jpg
00:05 Aerous: 01:09:009 - wanna stack this ?
00:05 Aerous: btw is the offset right O_o
00:05 Aerous: your sliders are starting around the red point
00:05 Aerous: and ending it on white ticks
00:06 Owntrolf: most vocals start on the reds
00:06 Owntrolf: .-.
00:06 Aerous: q-q
00:07 Aerous: k the difference between the other absolute soul
00:07 Aerous: is that it looks a lot neater and BNGs like that a lot
00:07 Aerous: 01:10:924 - curve the other way
00:07 Owntrolf: lel
00:07 Aerous: 01:13:158 -
00:07 Aerous: ??
00:07 Aerous: the spacing
00:08 Aerous: 2 3 and 4
00:08 Aerous: http://puu.sh/fAe5J/58cf4cca40.jpg
00:08 Aerous: looks weird
00:08 Aerous: maybe like this looks better , http://puu.sh/fAe6L/39657f7681.jpg
00:08 Aerous: 01:14:115 - http://puu.sh/fAe9J/9b110f5bb2.jpg
00:09 Aerous: 01:14:913 - a bit bigger distance?
00:10 Aerous: 01:16:669 - DIS OVERLAP
00:10 Aerous: IM GONNA DIE
00:10 Owntrolf: 1lel
00:10 Aerous: k your map is good but its missing like
00:10 Owntrolf: i dont really know the overlap rules so hue
00:10 Aerous: the "pretty part"
00:10 Aerous: like overlaps , sliders
00:10 Aerous: and stuff
00:10 Aerous: it looks good and fun to play
00:11 Aerous: but if you spend some time looking at the shapes you'll have a higher chance of ranking it
00:11 Aerous: now let me take a look at this ;-;
00:11 *Aerous is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/594959 Suzuki Konomi - Absolute Soul [byfar's Extra]]
00:11 Owntrolf: ohgod
00:11 Aerous: oh
00:11 Aerous: god
00:11 Aerous: LMAO
00:11 Aerous: WTF
00:12 Aerous: is byfar online
00:12 Aerous: now
00:12 *Aerous is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/597423 Suzuki Konomi - Absolute Soul [handsome's Insane]]
00:12 Aerous: this looks fine
00:12 Owntrolf: lol
00:12 Aerous: jk
00:12 Aerous: needs some mods
00:13 Aerous: mhm
00:13 Aerous: actually
00:13 Aerous: nvm
00:13 Owntrolf: everything gets rejected anyways
00:13 Aerous: did anyone star or buubble this ?
00:13 Owntrolf: no like handsome mostly rejects most mods .-.
00:13 Owntrolf: so meh
00:13 Aerous: yea
00:14 Aerous: have fun with that
00:14 Aerous: loll
00:14 Aerous: ripp
00:14 Aerous: mhm
00:14 Owntrolf: lel
00:14 Aerous: did guineaQ mod your map
00:14 Owntrolf: lel
00:14 Owntrolf: yes
00:14 Aerous: cuz he would cry
00:14 Aerous: oh god
00:14 Aerous: did he write a paragrapgh
00:14 Owntrolf: he raped my easy
00:14 Aerous: yup
00:14 Aerous: yea he did too
00:14 Aerous: for my liar mask
00:14 Aerous: LMAO
00:14 Aerous: but he gives out good advise
00:15 Owntrolf: but its pretty much expected for my easy, I was sort of expecting it
00:15 Aerous: did he do anything about your insane?
00:15 Owntrolf: nope .-.
00:15 Aerous: mhm
00:15 Aerous: any bats
00:15 Aerous: fk
00:15 Aerous: i mean BNG
00:15 Aerous: modded yours?
00:16 Owntrolf: hinsvar
00:16 Owntrolf: xinely
00:16 Owntrolf: kibbel
00:16 Aerous: your hard looks neat
00:16 Aerous: just when i said it
00:16 Aerous: 00:20:020 - Curve other way
00:17 Aerous: http://puu.sh/fAeTn/1eb153a464.jpg
00:17 Owntrolf: lolwhichone
00:17 Aerous: slider 1
00:18 Owntrolf: like dis http://puu.sh/fAeXz/690e351303.jpg
00:18 Aerous: the repeat slider
00:18 *Aerous is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/594541 Suzuki Konomi - Absolute Soul [Hard]]
00:18 Aerous: 00:35:339 - blanket it with slider 1
00:18 Aerous: idk if thiss is nice or not http://puu.sh/fAf2X/c1d74e9920.jpg
00:19 Aerous: 00:44:913 - liek copy this slider
00:19 Aerous: and replace it
00:19 Aerous: 00:45:552 -
00:19 Aerous: so its the same
00:20 Aerous: 00:53:211- change this to reapeat slider
00:20 Aerous: http://puu.sh/fAf9l/abfdcc3087.jpg
00:20 Aerous: 00:54:807 - this overlap ;_;
00:20 Aerous: 01:02:626 - NC
00:21 Aerous: 01:08:211 - what do you think about this ?
00:21 Aerous: http://puu.sh/fAfjR/5f0abda47a.jpg
00:22 Aerous: 01:21:615 - blanket it this
00:22 Aerous: http://puu.sh/fAfo3/0ef10acd9d.txt
00:22 Aerous: i m ean http://puu.sh/fAfor/b33174c3cb.jpg
00:23 Aerous: idk why handsome doesnt apply mods to his
00:23 Aerous: i mean even byfar's extra is better than his
00:24 Aerous: your easy should be fine , because guineaQ gives good mods on it

ShiraKai

534 posts

Joined September 2010

ShiraKai 2015-02-07T18:55:31+00:00

hi :3 from m4m queue!
Just mod Insane Diff~

[Insane]

add whistle?
1. 00:03:424 (6) -
2. 00:04:062 (1) -
3. 00:05:977 (6) -
4. 00:06:456 (1) - slider end
5. 00:08:530 (4) -
6. 00:09:169 (1) -
7. 00:10:764 (3) - slider end
00:17:147 (3) - ctrl + G? flow will be better imo
00:18:264 (1) - ^
00:20:020 (1) - why do you not use blanket with 00:20:658 (3) - ?? i think good that use them if this form :3
00:21:456 (7) - you normally use circles instead of 1/2 slider? hard to understand current rhythm
00:22:094 (2,3,4) - hmm,Do not symmetrically? Symmetry very fits this song
image
00:28:477 (2,4) - ctrl +G? I want to emphasize 00:28:956 (5).
00:39:009 (3) - move x:474,y:212? It is easy to go to 00:39:169 (1)
00:43:637 (1) - slider end point is 00:44:435 - . not 00:44:475 -
00:48:743 (1,2,3,4,1) - nice pattern
01:26:722 (6,7) - ctrl＋G~~~ Feels better this pattern as result of play
01:27:201 (1,2,3) - move center? i think that center is appropriate the last :3
image

good luck~

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-02-07T20:09:57+00:00

ShiraKai wrote:
hi :3 from m4m queue!
Just mod Insane Diff~

[Insane]
add whistle?
00:03:424 (6) -
00:04:062 (1) -
00:05:977 (6) -
00:06:456 (1) - slider end
00:08:530 (4) -
00:09:169 (1) -
00:10:764 (3) - slider end
00:17:147 (3) - ctrl + G? flow will be better imo Fixed
00:18:264 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:20:020 (1) - why do you not use blanket with 00:20:658 (3) - ?? i think good that use them if this form :3 Fixed
00:21:456 (7) - you normally use circles instead of 1/2 slider? hard to understand current rhythm
00:22:094 (2,3,4) - hmm,Do not symmetrically? Symmetry very fits this song Fixed
image
00:28:477 (2,4) - ctrl +G? I want to emphasize 00:28:956 (5). Fixed
00:39:009 (3) - move x:474,y:212? It is easy to go to 00:39:169 (1)Changed something about it
00:43:637 (1) - slider end point is 00:44:435 - . not 00:44:475 - oops i derped
00:48:743 (1,2,3,4,1) - nice pattern
01:26:722 (6,7) - ctrl＋G~~~ Feels better this pattern as result of play Fixed
01:27:201 (1,2,3) - move center? i think that center is appropriate the last :3 Fixed
image
good luck~

DeletedUser_3044645

DeletedUser_3044645 2015-02-08T07:37:59+00:00

you keep asking where my mod is

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3716029

please notice my best mod 2015

Edit : ok

[General]

BG size is 1365x768. why not.

Unused file : absoluteduoshrink.png. it's the old BG iirc
Maybe add about 500 ms audio lead-in ?
I notice that you used S / D for some of your hitsound, but do you really want that sliderslide sound?
you can do this to avoid the sound. also you can add finish in the kiai build up 00:58:796 - ~ 01:02:626 -
SPOILER
00:53:850 - ~ 01:02:626 - I wish you had better hitsounding here

[Easy]

00:09:967 (4) - not really liking the rhythm choice. because the slider ends on a strong start beat
I prefer if you do like this 00:06:615 (3,1) -
00:12:201 (4) - I know you want to blanket this but things look too cluttered with 00:11:084 (2,3) - atm.
do something like this to avoid players getting confused as in which note to click first
SPOILER
00:25:764 (3) - NC for consistency?
00:28:318 (1) - try something like this
SPOILER
00:41:722 (4) - NC for consistency?
00:52:573 (3,1) - try to avoid this overlap, it doesn't look good
01:03:424 (1) - not really necessary 1/2 for an easy diff, but your choice
01:20:020 (2,3) - awkward gap and 1/2 slider. how about this
SPOILER
01:23:052 (2) - do you really want this
01:26:881 - soft whistle (the actual soft whistle, not your bass whistle) fits better imo. applies to all diff

[Normal]

00:01:190 - add a circle for polarity
00:02:147 (1) - delete NC?
00:33:584 (3) - wrongly snapped
00:47:467 (3) - too close with the previous slider also, maybe you can also change shape for more creativity
01:03:424 (1,2) - replace with a slider?
01:04:381 (2,3,1,2,3) - well you were following vocal and this happened. makes rhythm confusing
01:06:615 (4) - should start at 01:06:456 - cuz cymbal
01:09:009 (1) - delete NC
01:12:201 (3) - shorten by 1/2 for vocal
01:13:956 (5) - theres nothing here except vocal. delete clap. applies to all diffs
01:17:467 - I don't hear finish
01:21:775 - finish
01:25:605 - clap doesn't really fit imo

[Hard]

00:07:573 (5,1) - flow isn't ideal for a hard diff
SPOILER
00:17:467 (6,7,8,1) - why jumps
00:17:467 (6,7,8,1) - please map these drums. this is a hard diff, you shouldn't ignore this kind of things
00:33:185 (7) - why overmap
00:39:169 (4,5,6) - just use 3/4 repeat? these are not as strong as 00:37:892 (4,5,6) - these are
01:03:743 - why you map this
01:12:679 - why ignore this and end the slider on a strong beat? 01:12:998 - also there is nothing here.
so I suggest this
SPOILER
01:14:754 (3,4) - not intuitive. have players click the drums
SPOILER
01:17:307 (4,1) - kinda too big?
01:19:860 - delete finish

[handsome's Insane]

Too many circle jumps and tricky pattern for this particular spread. You should think about nerfing
00:00:552 (3,6) - NC for better readability?
00:32:786 (1,2) - this overmap and clap spam is really not good
00:39:169 (4,5) - please don't do this in a heavy 3/4 section.. this confuses people and cause reading problem 00:41:722 (3,4,5) - here
00:40:445 (4,5) - ^
00:48:743 (1,3) - unnecessary overlap increasing the difficulty
00:50:658 (2,3,4,5,6) - I wouldn't do this in an insane tbh, but your choice
00:51:296 (1,2,3,4,5) - can you at least put NCs?
01:02:706 (1) - this spinner is really short, not unrankable but if you just use a long slider, its better imo
01:03:903 (1,2,3,4,5) - unnecessarily hard pattern
01:11:243 (4,1,4,5) - I find the flow more fun to play if you crtl g them
01:17:467 - what is this finish
01:19:860 - ^
01:21:775 - add finish

[Insane]

Rename it to Extra
00:11:562 (1,2,3) - nice, but why so close?
00:15:153 (5) - not really needed
00:34:062 (1,2) - why are these not part of the SV change?
00:37:892 (2,3) - I don't think SV change here is necessary?
00:49:701 (1) - possibly rework the slider and move the head to the left a little? flow is too harsh
00:52:493 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - doesn't fit at all and only makes it hard to play 00:53:211 (1,2) - imo
00:59:674 (7) - 01:00:951 (7) - needed?
01:02:706 (1) - too short. and with this diff having OD8 it's easy to get 100 from this
01:23:690 (2,3,4) - space them out? this pattern really doesn't fit imo
01:26:881 (7,1) - make it a slider? like all other diffs

You should nerf Hard and Handsome's Insane for better spread from Normal
~~Maybe get more good mods and call me back~~ troll

Last edited by DeletedUser_3044645 2015-02-10T00:08:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-02-09T06:23:00+00:00

No Dap wrote:
you keep asking where my mod is

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3716029

please notice my best mod 2015

Edit : ok

[General]
BG size is 1365x768. why not.Fixed
Unused file : absoluteduoshrink.png. it's the old BG iircFixed
Maybe add about 500 ms audio lead-in ? Fixed
I notice that you used S / D for some of your hitsound, but do you really want that sliderslide sound?
you can do this to avoid the sound. also you can add finish in the kiai build up 00:58:796 - ~ 01:02:626 -
SPOILER
00:53:850 - ~ 01:02:626 - I wish you had better hitsounding here
[Easy]
00:09:967 (4) - not really liking the rhythm choice. because the slider ends on a strong start beat
I prefer if you do like this 00:06:615 (3,1) -
00:12:201 (4) - I know you want to blanket this but things look too cluttered with 00:11:084 (2,3) - atm. Fixed
do something like this to avoid players getting confused as in which note to click first
SPOILER
00:25:764 (3) - NC for consistency? Fixed
00:28:318 (1) - try something like this Fixed
SPOILER
00:41:722 (4) - NC for consistency? Fixed
00:52:573 (3,1) - try to avoid this overlap, it doesn't look good Somewhat fixed
01:03:424 (1) - not really necessary 1/2 for an easy diff, but your choice
01:20:020 (2,3) - awkward gap and 1/2 slider. how about this Somewhat fixed
SPOILER
01:23:052 (2) - do you really want this Fixed
01:26:881 - soft whistle (the actual soft whistle, not your bass whistle) fits better imo. applies to all diff Fixed
[Normal]
00:01:190 - add a circle for polarity
00:02:147 (1) - delete NC? Fixed
00:33:584 (3) - wrongly snapped Fixed
00:47:467 (3) - too close with the previous slider also, maybe you can also change shape for more creativity Fixed
01:03:424 (1,2) - replace with a slider? Fixed
01:04:381 (2,3,1,2,3) - well you were following vocal and this happened. makes rhythm confusing
01:06:615 (4) - should start at 01:06:456 - cuz cymbal Fixed
01:09:009 (1) - delete NC Fixed
01:12:201 (3) - shorten by 1/2 for vocal Fixed
01:13:956 (5) - theres nothing here except vocal. delete clap. applies to all diffs
01:17:467 - I don't hear finish
01:21:775 - finish Fixed
01:25:605 - clap doesn't really fit imo Fixed
[Hard]
00:07:573 (5,1) - flow isn't ideal for a hard diff Fixed
SPOILER
00:17:467 (6,7,8,1) - why jumps Fixed
00:17:467 (6,7,8,1) - please map these drums. this is a hard diff, you shouldn't ignore this kind of things
00:33:185 (7) - why overmap Fixed
00:39:169 (4,5,6) - just use 3/4 repeat? these are not as strong as 00:37:892 (4,5,6) - these are Fixed
01:03:743 - why you map this Fixed
01:12:679 - why ignore this and end the slider on a strong beat? 01:12:998 - also there is nothing here. Partially fixed
so I suggest this
SPOILER
01:14:754 (3,4) - not intuitive. have players click the drums Fixed
SPOILER
01:17:307 (4,1) - kinda too big? Fixed
01:19:860 - delete finish
[Insane]
Rename it to Extra Fixed
00:11:562 (1,2,3) - nice, but why so close? Fixed probably
00:15:153 (5) - not really needed
00:34:062 (1,2) - why are these not part of the SV change?
00:37:892 (2,3) - I don't think SV change here is necessary?
00:49:701 (1) - possibly rework the slider and move the head to the left a little? flow is too harsh Fixed
00:52:493 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - doesn't fit at all and only makes it hard to play 00:53:211 (1,2) - imo
00:59:674 (7) - 01:00:951 (7) - needed?
01:02:706 (1) - too short. and with this diff having OD8 it's easy to get 100 from this
01:23:690 (2,3,4) - space them out? this pattern really doesn't fit imo Fixed
01:26:881 (7,1) - make it a slider? like all other diffs Fixed

Good luck~

Last edited by Owntrolf 2015-02-09T21:32:43+00:00, edited 6 times in total.

Natsu

8,100 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2015-02-09T08:39:42+00:00

Owntrolf wrote:
Ill update more tomorrow morning

send me a pm when you want me to take look

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2015-02-09T13:24:53+00:00

gdi dgdhjgjhds will mod this on weekend omg im sorry this is so late ;______;

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VINXIS

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3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2015-02-10T00:41:59+00:00

ok

Since I'm fuckin myself up with a shitload of mods, I'll do the 2 extras and insane rn, and later if this doesn't get bubbled anytime soon I'll nokd mod the EZ-HD since im fukin ded

by for

00:08:850 (6,1,2,3,4) - ok i think the flow's bad here tbh, feels too forced. Here's wat i think would be better tbh (black is what ti is rn, orange is what I think it should b) but yea w/e lol, the blue slider's bugging me the most lmao
00:27:360 (1,2) - im crei
00:37:094 (3) - imo Ctrl+G is better
00:49:062 (1) - remove nc, tbh feels useless here
01:01:988 (3) - Ctrl+G is better flo tbh
01:02:626 (1) - I'd consider making dat slower tbh holee dam
01:03:903 (1,3) - remove claps on the heads, y evn b0ss
01:20:978 (2) - Ctrl+G is ebtter flow imo
and if u do that, then 01:21:296 (3,4) - Ctrl+G for flo
01:21:615 (1) - Ctrl+G for the same reason as before >.>
01:26:881 (1,2) - sik memme m8

EX

00:01:509 (1,2,3) - ctrl+G and same position as original/higher would play much better imo
00:05:179 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+G slider and stack teh 2 circles under new slider end wud look cleaner tbh
00:25:126 (4,5,6) - wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooadirtyy B^) (bad flow but looks g lol)
00:25:924 (1) - i dont like dis 90 deg angle turn but w/e ur choice
00:49:701 (1,1) - imo if u stacked that'd b nicer
00:53:052 (7,1) - imo u sud connect this stream by adding a note in the middle of these 2 and bringing (1) closer y feel
00:54:488 (3) - so much curve looks ugly imo :')
01:01:669 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - cud ya make it go horizontal instead of vertical isntead? imo that plays a lot better
01:16:509 (4,1,3) - wooaaaaw u cud blanket this that'd look sweet man
01:26:881 (7) - end on blue tick and stack the triple under tbh

handsome

00:09:010 (8) - imo u cud put this to around where 00:08:211 (3) - is, that'd b col
00:09:328 (2,3) - Ctrl+G? idk
00:11:084 (5,6,7,1) - ASDFASDFGSDAFSDAX imo this is a huge flow problem, nd that u sud really cahnge this to something else but that's ur choice lmao.
00:11:881 (2) - Ctrl+G plays better tbh
00:23:530 (3,5) - dam u cud stack dis instead...
00:35:818 (7,1,2) - same distance space for thse 3 wud play much better tbh
00:43:637 (1) - i was expecting this to go on the white tick, slow the SV down much more to like 0.6x too tbh lmao
00:54:807 (4) - Ctrl+G wud play better honestly
00:56:403 (5,1) - switch nc
01:09:009 (1) - i was expecting this to end on the next blue tick lmao
01:10:286 (1,2) - same with this lo l
01:25:605 (1) - and dis 1 too since it's so close to the next circle lol
01:25:605 (1,1) - caN YOU NOT FUCK

gl

byfar

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Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-02-10T03:24:32+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
ok

Since I'm fuckin myself up with a shitload of mods, I'll do the 2 extras and insane rn, and later if this doesn't get bubbled anytime soon I'll nokd mod the EZ-HD since im fukin ded

by for
00:08:850 (6,1,2,3,4) - ok i think the flow's bad here tbh, feels too forced. Here's wat i think would be better tbh (black is what ti is rn, orange is what I think it should b) but yea w/e lol, the blue slider's bugging me the most lmao wtf k ichanged a little idk what ur diagram is but lol
00:27:360 (1,2) - im crei 2bad
00:37:094 (3) - imo Ctrl+G is better ill try
00:49:062 (1) - remove nc, tbh feels useless here?? fine whatever
01:01:988 (3) - Ctrl+G is better flo tbh no makes it look weird
01:02:626 (1) - I'd consider making dat slower tbh holee dam no cuz i wanna be cool
01:03:903 (1,3) - remove claps on the heads, y evn b0ss yea
01:20:978 (2) - Ctrl+G is ebtter flow imo yea
and if u do that, then 01:21:296 (3,4) - Ctrl+G for flo no
01:21:615 (1) - Ctrl+G for the same reason as before >.> no
01:26:881 (1,2) - sik memme m8 uaya

CODEDEDADADADWAEAWERAWRAWERAW

yea

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-02-10T03:57:23+00:00

No Dap wrote:
[General]
[handsome's Insane]
Too many circle jumps and tricky pattern for this particular spread. You should think about nerfing
00:00:552 (3,6) - NC for better readability? and i thought i fixed this
00:32:786 (1,2) - this overmap and clap spam is really not good im sure theres a soft drumroll in the background
00:39:169 (4,5) - please don't do this in a heavy 3/4 section.. this confuses people and cause reading problem 00:41:722 (3,4,5) - here spaced the sliders
00:40:445 (4,5) - ^ no issue
00:48:743 (1,3) - unnecessary overlap increasing the difficulty no issue
00:50:658 (2,3,4,5,6) - I wouldn't do this in an insane tbh, but your choice ok
00:51:296 (1,2,3,4,5) - can you at least put NCs? for free hp? no thx
01:02:706 (1) - this spinner is really short, not unrankable but if you just use a long slider, its better imo keeping, cuz a slider jsut doesn't fit here.
01:03:903 (1,2,3,4,5) - unnecessarily hard pattern no issue
01:11:243 (4,1,4,5) - I find the flow more fun to play if you crtl g them cool, did it for the first two

vinxis

00:09:010 (8) - imo u cud put this to around where 00:08:211 (3) - is, that'd b col nahhhhhh
00:09:328 (2,3) - Ctrl+G? idk nahhhhhh
00:11:084 (5,6,7,1) - ASDFASDFGSDAFSDAX imo this is a huge flow problem, nd that u sud really cahnge this to something else but that's ur choice lmao. breaking the flow due to the music
00:11:881 (2) - Ctrl+G plays better tbh dats lame
00:23:530 (3,5) - dam u cud stack dis instead... dats lame
00:35:818 (7,1,2) - same distance space for thse 3 wud play much better tbh first has a larger jump due to loud drum
00:43:637 (1) - i was expecting this to go on the white tick, slow the SV down much more to like 0.6x too tbh lmao don't realyl like huge changes in SV
00:54:807 (4) - Ctrl+G wud play better honestly dats lame
00:56:403 (5,1) - switch nc fixed
01:09:009 (1) - i was expecting this to end on the next blue tick lmao okkk
01:10:286 (1,2) - same with this lo l okkk
01:25:605 (1) - and dis 1 too since it's so close to the next circle lol fixed this 1
01:25:605 (1,1) - caN YOU NOT FUCK fixed along with prev

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byfar

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byfar 2015-02-10T05:36:34+00:00

how did u even get what vinxis is pointing out in the picture

hehe

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Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-02-10T05:57:00+00:00

byfar wrote:
how did u even get what vinxis is pointing out in the picture

theres a orangel ine

VINXIS

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VINXIS 2015-02-10T15:48:12+00:00

lamo

jyu

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Joined August 2012

jyu 2015-02-13T14:33:04+00:00

Hi! from your Reverse M4M queue :3 sorry for being really late :'3

[General]

neat. but it'd be better if all diffs starts and end at the same time

[Easy]

idk starting the first beat on the red line (upbeat) kinda caught me off-guard lmao since i expect the easiest diff to follow simple rhythms. but you followed the song so yeah. just pointing out

00:05:020 (3) - change the sampleset into Normal at slider's head
00:11:881 (3,4) - also kinda caught me off-guard since the previous slider stopped at red tick. i'd nc this 00:11:881 (3) - as a warning but yeah only suggestion
00:19:381 (2) - only rhythm suggestion. i'd remove the reverse to make it the same like 00:14:913 (4) - for rhythm consistency. personally it fits the vocal more like this http://puu.sh/fRoBV/d9bc780c16.jpg http://puu.sh/fRoJR/8bedc49cca.jpg but you have to adjust the ds a bit if you follow
00:31:190 (3) - nc? since the vocal has a different feels here idk
00:48:743 (2,1) - switch nc? i think they're in the same combo. if you follow, nc this 00:51:296 (2) -
00:49:701 (1) - hmm idk just personal preference http://puu.sh/fRpIB/3e9056cfd3.jpg
00:53:850 (5,1) - switch nc, because (5) is at the big downbeat
01:00:073 (2) - in my editor this slider ends at blue tick 01:00:073 (2) - lmao is it intentional? if not, end it at 01:00:711 -
01:02:147 (2,1) - i highly recommend not to place them really close like this, since it violates the DS and usually beginners will click at it as soon as it appears, so yeah. i suggest to use the normal ds, but that requires a huge change for your pattern afterwards so yeah please consider. placing it like this http://puu.sh/fRqcF/202de3d934.jpg is safer
01:10:445 (1) - also personal preference for slider's shape http://puu.sh/fRqv3/9659504ce7.jpg
01:12:839 (4) - ^ http://puu.sh/fRqJ5/5f7b87f8fa.jpg
01:14:115 (1,2,1,2) - the rhythm here is kinda empty compared to previous rhythm which is dense. since this is kiai and have a strong atmosphere, i suggest to add some notes at the empty parts there. example : http://puu.sh/fRr7T/db3796ff7d.jpg
01:21:935 - its really a pity when you dont make this string beat clickable anyway i'd sugges nc this 01:21:615 (4) -

[Normal]

00:23:371 (1) - im aware that you're following the vocal, but its kinda weird when you didnt map this beat 00:23:211 - . making the rhythm same like 00:25:764 (1,2,3) - is way better
00:30:233 (1) - add finish at slider's tail? fits the song
00:32:786 (2,3) - idk the rhythm is really weird and somehow i have no idea for this
00:37:892 (2,1) - i think this rhythm fits more http://puu.sh/fRtFl/aff8825bb2.jpg
00:56:403 (1) - also personal preference http://puu.sh/fRvp5/3b341921e4.jpg
01:03:424 (1) - please use normal ds
01:17:467 (3) - finish at slider's head seems random and out of place
01:23:052 (3,1) - switch nc

[Hard]

00:00:233 (1,2,3,4) - i see no reason why you used diferent ds when they're still in the same verse. i'd suggest to separate (1) and (2) a bit farther
00:23:052 - 00:23:131 - 00:23:211 - its better to add some notes there (preferrably triplets) so the rhythm will flow better
00:30:392 (3,1) - blanket can be improved http://puu.sh/fRxtB/4ef76fc6b8.jpg kinda awful example btw i believe you can do better
00:32:786 (6) - alsp personal preference
00:39:807 - add a note here. please. it's a strong beat
00:59:913 (2,5) - nothing's wrong, but i kinda dislike it when they overlap like that. you can place (5) somewhere else better http://puu.sh/fRy1n/f50c3d52bd.jpg
01:03:903 (3) - nc. its the start of the chorus
01:10:924 (3) - add finish at slider's tail? fits the song
01:21:775 (1) - add finish at slider's head, same like 01:19:222 (1,3,1) -
01:23:690 (1,2) - add finish? fits the song

i kinda enjoyed this diff. i think your rhythm choice is far better for harder diffs lmao

dang i have to cut my mods here ;__; will mod the rest next week ok im sorry for the inconvenience

samplefish

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Joined November 2010

samplefish 2015-02-13T20:13:37+00:00

horee sheet byfars extra

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-02-13T22:46:52+00:00

samplefish wrote:
horee sheet byfars extra

10/10 expected answer

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-02-14T01:50:56+00:00

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
Hi! from your Reverse M4M queue :3 sorry for being really late :'3

[General]

neat. but it'd be better if all diffs starts and end at the same time
[Easy]

idk starting the first beat on the red line (upbeat) kinda caught me off-guard lmao since i expect the easiest diff to follow simple rhythms. but you followed the song so yeah. just pointing out
00:05:020 (3) - change the sampleset into Normal at slider's head Fixed
00:11:881 (3,4) - also kinda caught me off-guard since the previous slider stopped at red tick. i'd nc this 00:11:881 (3) - as a warning but yeah only suggestionI thought it would be ok since there was a large time gap
00:19:381 (2) - only rhythm suggestion. i'd remove the reverse to make it the same like 00:14:913 (4) - for rhythm consistency. personally it fits the vocal more like this http://puu.sh/fRoBV/d9bc780c16.jpg http://puu.sh/fRoJR/8bedc49cca.jpg but you have to adjust the ds a bit if you follow
00:31:190 (3) - nc? since the vocal has a different feels here idk I think its fine
00:48:743 (2,1) - switch nc? i think they're in the same combo. if you follow, nc this 00:51:296 (2) - Fixed
00:49:701 (1) - hmm idk just personal preference http://puu.sh/fRpIB/3e9056cfd3.jpg
00:53:850 (5,1) - switch nc, because (5) is at the big downbeat Fixed
01:00:073 (2) - in my editor this slider ends at blue tick 01:00:073 (2) - lmao is it intentional? if not, end it at 01:00:711 - Fixed gg10/10blindness
01:02:147 (2,1) - i highly recommend not to place them really close like this, since it violates the DS and usually beginners will click at it as soon as it appears, so yeah. i suggest to use the normal ds, but that requires a huge change for your pattern afterwards so yeah please consider. placing it like this http://puu.sh/fRqcF/202de3d934.jpg is safer Fixed
01:10:445 (1) - also personal preference for slider's shape http://puu.sh/fRqv3/9659504ce7.jpg
01:12:839 (4) - ^ http://puu.sh/fRqJ5/5f7b87f8fa.jpg
01:14:115 (1,2,1,2) - the rhythm here is kinda empty compared to previous rhythm which is dense. since this is kiai and have a strong atmosphere, i suggest to add some notes at the empty parts there. example : http://puu.sh/fRr7T/db3796ff7d.jpg Fixed
01:21:935 - its really a pity when you dont make this string beat clickable anyway i'd sugges nc this 01:21:615 (4) -
[Normal]

00:23:371 (1) - im aware that you're following the vocal, but its kinda weird when you didnt map this beat 00:23:211 - . making the rhythm same like 00:25:764 (1,2,3) - is way better Fixed
00:30:233 (1) - add finish at slider's tail? fits the song
00:32:786 (2,3) - idk the rhythm is really weird and somehow i have no idea for this
00:37:892 (2,1) - i think this rhythm fits more http://puu.sh/fRtFl/aff8825bb2.jpg
00:56:403 (1) - also personal preference http://puu.sh/fRvp5/3b341921e4.jpg
01:03:424 (1) - please use normal ds Demo tons of space
01:17:467 (3) - finish at slider's head seems random and out of place Fixed
01:23:052 (3,1) - switch nc Fixed
[Hard]

00:00:233 (1,2,3,4) - i see no reason why you used diferent ds when they're still in the same verse. i'd suggest to separate (1) and (2) a bit farther Fixed
00:23:052 - 00:23:131 - 00:23:211 - its better to add some notes there (preferrably triplets) so the rhythm will flow better Fixed
00:30:392 (3,1) - blanket can be improved http://puu.sh/fRxtB/4ef76fc6b8.jpg kinda awful example btw i believe you can do better Fixed
00:32:786 (6) - alsp personal preference
00:39:807 - add a note here. please. it's a strong beat Fixed
00:59:913 (2,5) - nothing's wrong, but i kinda dislike it when they overlap like that. you can place (5) somewhere else better http://puu.sh/fRy1n/f50c3d52bd.jpg
01:03:903 (3) - nc. its the start of the chorus Fixed
01:10:924 (3) - add finish at slider's tail? fits the song
01:21:775 (1) - add finish at slider's head, same like 01:19:222 (1,3,1) -
01:23:690 (1,2) - add finish? fits the song

i kinda enjoyed this diff. i think your rhythm choice is far better for harder diffs lmao
dang i have to cut my mods here ;__; will mod the rest next week ok im sorry for the inconvenience

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2015-02-14T02:19:05+00:00

dont kd spam 20 is okay 0.0
from my q
[Easy]

00:12:998 (5) - nc
01:15:871 (1) - rhythm not right, should add more note into it

[Normal]

00:09:967 (2,3) - blanket
00:25:764 (1) - the vocal is not here, if you want follow the vocal plz put it to the right position, other wise do something similar to the rhythm of what you put in 00:28:637 (1) -
00:33:584 (3) - should nc here,also the rhythm is not fitting the music here, no idea what are you following
00:51:296 (1,2,3) - weird pattern
01:05:020 (3,3) - weird overlap

[Hard]

00:00:233 (1) - should be 1/2,you are skipping a note
00:36:137 (1,2) - blanket
00:38:690 (1,2,3,4) - i was expecting something different things coming up after these, because the music is changing and you used something different from things before it,but after this nothing changed like the rhythm,patterns,hitsounds.... should do something different after this
00:42:360 (3) - you better follow the drum at here, use 4 1/2 jumps instead of these,just like what ive said ^

[handsome's Insane]

00:02:945 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - thats 1.5 bar of jumps in the same pattern
00:34:062 (3,4) - the rhythm isn't strong enough if you make rhythms like this, one note even better
00:43:637 (1) - end at 00:44:275 maybe? and add an additional note for the piano

[Extra]

change the diffname to insane, 5.08 is not extra
00:04:062 (1,2,3,4) - 2.5 ds is big,but after this you didnt do something like this in this part of the music at all,so plz be similar to what you did in the part
00:11:562 (1,2,3) - ugly
00:12:998 - 00:21:775 - way too big jumps in this part, the part isn't for big jumps so make only some jumps
00:43:637 (1) - end at 00:44:275 maybe? and add an additional note for the piano
01:01:988 (5,1,2,3,4) - even bigger than the jumps in the end of the song, i dont think you should set the jump that big here
01:24:727 (2) - delete the note,no beat is here
01:25:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you need a much bigger jump than this, this is the most high part but even many jumps in the low part is larger than this
01:27:201 (1,2,3) - no 1/4 here, only 1/2

[byfar's Extra]

00:03:424 (3,4,5,6) - you did anti jump here but you did jump after,same bgm why different kind of pattern
00:26:403 (3) - didnt match the timing
00:28:557 (2) - delete the note its not in the bgm
00:31:190 (1) - don't make long sliders, dont follow the vocal here is wont let the players feel right
00:34:062 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - too much triangles, try different patterns every time
00:54:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - this part is way too jumpy, is right before kiai you what it to be small jumps not like these
01:14:913 (1,1) - blanket
01:26:881 (1,2) - no 1/4 is here

hehe

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Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-02-14T03:32:29+00:00

Alex Li wrote:
[handsome's Insane]
00:02:945 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - thats 1.5 bar of jumps in the same pattern ok. its same structure, but pattern moves around
00:34:062 (3,4) - the rhythm isn't strong enough if you make rhythms like this, one note even better i think its quite loud
00:43:637 (1) - end at 00:44:275 maybe? and add an additional note for the piano nah, reduce density

no change

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-02-14T21:47:57+00:00

Alex Li wrote:
[byfar's Extra]
00:03:424 (3,4,5,6) - you did anti jump here but you did jump after,same bgm why different kind of pattern meant to be that way, and it's a stack and not really an anti jump considering the mediocre spacing
00:26:403 (3) - didnt match the timing no
00:28:557 (2) - delete the note its not in the bgm it's for rhythm purposes. it doesnt feel right without a stack here.
00:31:190 (1) - don't make long sliders, dont follow the vocal here is wont let the players feel right ok
00:34:062 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - too much triangles, try different patterns every timeconsidering
00:54:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - this part is way too jumpy, is right before kiai you what it to be small jumps not like these considering
01:14:913 (1,1) - blanket yea
01:26:881 (1,2) - no 1/4 is here
no, it's there

thanks

ac8129464363

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Joined October 2013

ac8129464363 2015-02-15T03:00:23+00:00

HabiHolic

5,496 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-02-15T09:49:20+00:00

From alacat queue

[Easy]

00:00:233 (1,2) - I'm not sure this Normal hitsound change this it?
00:01:509 (3) - head and arrow is add hitsound batter. Don't ignore the drums
00:09:647 - Clap is awkward. delete please
00:12:998 (5) - long combo this NC here. your forgot this?
00:23:211 (1) - change finish sound
00:33:424 (1) - orz.. this hitsound awkward imo. so add whistle?
00:38:530 (1) - whistle
01:03:903 (1) - add finish on the head

[Normal]

00:00:233 (1) - I'm not sure this Normal hitsound change this it?
00:09:647 - Don'r need normal semplset. I don't exactly hear.
00:23:211 (5) - Finish
00:27:360 (4) - i think this slider rhythm 1/1 batter imo.
00:33:584 (1) - It does not fit with the rhythm. please reduce to a white tick.
01:03:903 - Finish
01:12:839 - whistle. forgot?

[Hard]

00:00:233 (1,2,3) - WTF this object. Fixed please
00:09:967 (3) - flow is bad Ctrl+G
00:23:131 - add note here. stream rhythm this imo
00:25:286 - delete Normal semplset. awkward this
00:30:711 (1) - add finish on the head
01:03:903 (1) - same (^)
01:04:701 (1,3) - change NC
01:05:818 (1) - why NC? Don't need this. so Delete NC
01:11:562 - Finish
01:19:860 - change whistle

[handsome's Insane]

00:00:233 (1,2) - I'm not sure this Normal hitsound change this it?
00:07:573 (5) - add Normal semplset
00:23:131 (5,1) - No hitsound?
00:30:711 - Finish
00:44:594 - note? this vocal flow..
01:03:903 (1) - add finish on the head

[Extra]

00:00:233 (1,2) - I'm not sure this Normal hitsound change this it?
00:07:573 (5) - add Normal semplset
01:03:903 (1) - add finish on the head

[byfar's Extra]

Fast AR imo.. so -0.1?

ok that all. you can ask recheck me.

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-02-15T11:24:57+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
[handsome's Insane]

00:44:594 - note? this vocal flow..

fixed

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146,274,81775,6,0,P|183:311|192:363,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,384,82094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
250,243,82253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,353,82413,2,0,P|61:304|63:242,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,83,82733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,97,82812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,112,82892,1,8,0:0:0:0:
195,127,82972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,142,83052,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,157,83131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,172,83211,6,0,L|303:239,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,309,83371,2,0,L|323:376,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,316,83690,6,0,L|337:210,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,307,84009,2,0,L|417:201,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,298,84328,2,0,L|497:192,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,88,84646,5,2,0:0:0:0:
287,227,84807,1,2,0:0:0:0:
239,70,84967,1,2,0:0:0:0:
343,167,85126,1,2,0:0:0:0:
205,208,85286,1,2,0:0:0:0:
239,70,85445,1,2,0:0:0:0:
103,176,85605,6,0,P|110:255|211:309,1,161.999995056153,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,307,85924,1,0,3:0:0:0:
434,194,86084,1,0,3:0:0:0:
230,212,86243,1,0,3:0:0:0:
384,79,86403,1,0,3:0:0:0:
339,277,86562,1,0,3:0:0:0:
259,90,86722,1,0,3:0:0:0:
223,307,86881,6,0,P|125:276|103:176,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
103,175,87280,1,0,3:0:0:0:
103,175,87360,1,4,3:0:0:0:

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-02-15T15:40:49+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
[byfar's Extra]

Fast AR imo.. so -0.1?eh ok then, why not

cpdeadw

http://puu.sh/fX0cZ/b284bf8afa.osu

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-02-15T17:40:08+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:

From alacat queue

[Easy]

00:00:233 (1,2) - I'm not sure this Normal hitsound change this it?
00:01:509 (3) - head and arrow is add hitsound batter. Don't ignore the drums
00:09:647 - Clap is awkward. delete please
00:12:998 (5) - long combo this NC here. your forgot this? Fixed
00:23:211 (1) - change finish soundSounds weird since the previous note was a finish too
00:33:424 (1) - orz.. this hitsound awkward imo. so add whistle? Fixed
00:38:530 (1) - whistle Fixed
01:03:903 (1) - add finish on the head Fixed
[Normal]

00:00:233 (1) - I'm not sure this Normal hitsound change this it?
00:09:647 - Don'r need normal semplset. I don't exactly hear. Fixed
00:23:211 (5) - Finish Fixed
00:27:360 (4) - i think this slider rhythm 1/1 batter imo.
00:33:584 (1) - It does not fit with the rhythm. please reduce to a white tick. Fixed
01:03:903 - Finish Fixed
01:12:839 - whistle. forgot? Fixed
[Hard]

00:00:233 (1,2,3) - WTF this object. Fixed pleaseOops I forgot to finish the mod for that
00:09:967 (3) - flow is bad Ctrl+G Fixed
00:23:131 - add note here. stream rhythm this imo Fixed
00:25:286 - delete Normal semplset. awkward this Fixed
00:30:711 (1) - add finish on the head Fixed
01:03:903 (1) - same (^) Fixed
01:04:701 (1,3) - change NC Fixed
01:05:818 (1) - why NC? Don't need this. so Delete NC Fixed
01:11:562 - Finish Fixed
01:19:860 - change whistle Fixed

[Extra]

00:00:233 (1,2) - I'm not sure this Normal hitsound change this it?
00:07:573 (5) - add Normal semplset Fixed
01:03:903 (1) - add finish on the head Fixed
ok that all. you can ask recheck me.

Lyric

293 posts

Joined September 2013

Lyric 2015-02-16T07:27:35+00:00

Hi! From your reverse M4M queue.
[General]
-
[Easy]
01:01:350 (1,2) - Not artistic enough.
[Normal]
01:04:860 - Should be:

( http://puu.sh/fZ6Bb/62296f286f.png )
01:09:647 - Should be:

( http://puu.sh/fZ73V/09da6405c7.png )
[Hard]
00:15:552 (1,2,3,4,1) - This should probably be 12-34-1~ instead of 1-23-41~.
00:38:371 (6) - Feel better as 2 circles.
[handsome's Insane]
00:39:169 (4,5) - Why use an absolutely different tempo here?
00:40:445 (4,5) - ^
[Extra]
01:24:727 (2) - Maybe a redundant note.
00:10:764 (3) - Rotate this slider by about 30° clockwise.
00:14:913 (4) - I think Ctrl-H this and move to x394 y73 would be better.
00:43:637 (1) - It would be better using a simply round slider than a Bézier Curve one.
[byfar's Extra]
00:56:881 (1,2) - Better stack this.
00:26:403 (3) - Unsnapped object end (You can found this error in AiMod).
00:28:956 (4) - ^

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-02-16T08:50:35+00:00

scooderic wrote:
[handsome's Insane]
00:39:169 (4,5) - Why use an absolutely different tempo here?
00:40:445 (4,5) - ^

variety and gives more emphasis to the vocals later on, nochange.

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-02-17T00:34:58+00:00

Forum PM playtest mod

SPOILER

Okoratu wrote:
byfar's Extra
a lot of unnecessary difficulty and weird flow. some examples are:
00:13:956 (4,5) - really big for not t h a t much a reason
00:27:360 (1,1) - this is nearly unreadable :c
00:37:094 (3,1,2,3,1,2,1,1) - artificially hard spacing just for the sake of annoying people? :c
00:39:169 (1,2,3,4) - jajaja
00:40:685 (1,2) - goddammit
00:43:478 (1,1) - noooooo
00:46:669 (2) - this is 1/6 from red to white, quite sure
01:01:669 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - i like this pattern, this is a cool pattern
the triangles in the end feel over the top, really

overall this diff either tried really hard to be hard but ends up annoying or it tries to be annoying and fully fulfills its task here, can't tell which.

Insane
00:12:201 (3) - this slider damn
sometimes your spacing feels rather random, like you go from really big to rather small one and then back to really big one without real structure or system.. the section from 00:02:626 - to 00:12:998 - suffers from this a lot
structure is main concern

handsome
00:34:062 (3,4,5,6) - 00:35:339 (3,4,5,6) - fuck you.
00:36:456 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - these are wayyyyyyy cooler
00:45:871 - :V ocal :C
otherwise cool

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-02-17T03:53:35+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
handsome
00:34:062 (3,4,5,6) - 00:35:339 (3,4,5,6) - fuck you. game wont be fun without some artificial difficulty thrown i nthere
00:36:456 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - these are wayyyyyyy cooler
00:45:871 - :V ocal :C slidertick!
otherwise cool

'

loilol

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-02-18T01:25:20+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
byfar's Extra
a lot of unnecessary difficulty and weird flow. some examples are:
00:13:956 (4,5) - really big for not t h a t much a reason idk if its cuz i played it a thousand times but it seems fine to me
00:27:360 (1,1) - this is nearly unreadable :c jeez fine
00:37:094 (3,1,2,3,1,2,1,1) - artificially hard spacing just for the sake of annoying people? :c ? its not even that big. i changed this part though
00:39:169 (1,2,3,4) - jajaja jajajaja ^
00:40:685 (1,2) - goddammit jajajaj ^
00:43:478 (1,1) - noooooo k fine lmao ^
00:46:669 (2) - this is 1/6 from red to white, quite sure nah its not
01:01:669 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - i like this pattern, this is a cool pattern i know right gucci
the triangles in the end feel over the top, really yolo

overall this diff either tried really hard to be hard but ends up annoying or it tries to be annoying and fully fulfills its task here, can't tell which. both

no code cuz owntrolf updated it already l;o

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-02-18T07:55:16+00:00

Please dont shoot me
Please dont kill me ;d

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,661 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-02-18T08:14:48+00:00

Random mod~ just for Insane :3

[Insane]

00:15:871 (3,4) - Ctrl+G. This improves the flow by making movement more circular.
00:17:467 (4,5) - Not sure if this flow-break works

00:29:435 (2,3) - The release angle of 2 into 3 is way too sharp. Almost a straight line. How about something like this: Screen. You can blanket 2 to slider 4. (440||244) That way you still create a "jump" without such a severe flow-break.
00:30:392 (6) - Why not Copy 5 and rotate 180 degrees?
00:33:584 (2,3) - Ctrl+G these two notes. flows better imo. Also creates a better star-formation.
00:38:371 (1) - Have you considered making this slider 1/4th and adding a circle at 00:38:530 - ?
00:43:637 (1) - Could use a more creative slider imo~
00:49:701 (1) - This is much better
00:51:137 (2,5) - Why not stack them? It makes the blanket you set up with 3, and 4 feel off when you play 5.
01:04:381 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - You set up a nice clock-wise flow here, but then interrupt it with 4... Ctrl G 01:05:498 (4,5) - ?
01:06:456 (1,2) - Should be a slider here imo. I don't here any signifitant beat 01:06:615 - And it certainly sounds different from the rest of the triangle jumps that follow it.
01:17:467 (3) - Imo this should start at 01:17:307 - to follow the vocals better. Could also shorten 1 and put a circle at 01:17:147 - instead since there is a beat there.
01:20:818 - 01:20:977 - Not going to map those beats? A jump would fit there too imo...
01:24:647 (1,2,3,4,5) - This triangle isnt perfect. 01:25:126 (5) - -272||243
01:25:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is there a reason for this hexagon to be imperfect?

.
01:26:084 (2,7) - How about blanketting 2 with slider 7 so you can keep a roughly equal distance spacing? Something like this. I also improved the hexagon shape so you can compare and see if you want to use that instead. You could probably make 5, 6, 7 a triangle too, that would be nice~ I'm just too lazy.

gl~.

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-02-18T15:24:44+00:00

monstrata wrote:
Random mod~ just for Insane :3

[Insane]

00:15:871 (3,4) - Ctrl+G. This improves the flow by making movement more circular. Fixed
00:17:467 (4,5) - Not sure if this flow-break works
00:29:435 (2,3) - The release angle of 2 into 3 is way too sharp. Almost a straight line. How about something like this: Screen. You can blanket 2 to slider 4. (440||244) That way you still create a "jump" without such a severe flow-break. Fixed
00:30:392 (6) - Why not Copy 5 and rotate 180 degrees?
00:33:584 (2,3) - Ctrl+G these two notes. flows better imo. Also creates a better star-formation.
00:38:371 (1) - Have you considered making this slider 1/4th and adding a circle at 00:38:530 - ?
00:43:637 (1) - Could use a more creative slider imo~
00:49:701 (1) - This is much better
00:51:137 (2,5) - Why not stack them? It makes the blanket you set up with 3, and 4 feel off when you play 5. Fixed
01:04:381 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - You set up a nice clock-wise flow here, but then interrupt it with 4... Ctrl G 01:05:498 (4,5) - ? Fixed
01:06:456 (1,2) - Should be a slider here imo. I don't here any signifitant beat 01:06:615 - And it certainly sounds different from the rest of the triangle jumps that follow it.
01:17:467 (3) - Imo this should start at 01:17:307 - to follow the vocals better. Could also shorten 1 and put a circle at 01:17:147 - instead since there is a beat there. [colors=#FF0000]It feels weird to start there for me [color]
01:20:818 - 01:20:977 - Not going to map those beats? A jump would fit there too imo...
01:24:647 (1,2,3,4,5) - This triangle isnt perfect. 01:25:126 (5) - -272||243 Fixed
01:25:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is there a reason for this hexagon to be imperfect? . Fixed
01:26:084 (2,7) - How about blanketting 2 with slider 7 so you can keep a roughly equal distance spacing? Something like this. I also improved the hexagon shape so you can compare and see if you want to use that instead. You could probably make 5, 6, 7 a triangle too, that would be nice~ I'm just too lazy. Fixed

gl~.

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-02-19T06:23:58+00:00

Readding byfar's after they remapplsnobubbleyet

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-02-19T06:58:37+00:00

Owntrolf wrote:
Readding byfar's after they remapplsnobubbleyet

ty for mercy

also sorry for the childish attitude towards everyone trying to help at #modhelp

HabiHolic

5,496 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-02-19T07:55:00+00:00

Recheck

[Insane]

01:11:243 (5) - Ctrl+G is good flow imo
01:11:562 (6) - Finish?
01:17:467 - not sure finish hitsound. delete finish please

call me back

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2015-02-19T19:13:05+00:00

Hello.
M4M from my queue.

General

Check aimod for tag conflicts

Easy

00:37:254 (2,1,2,1) - the angle difference makes this pattern not really nice to play for a beginner since he has to adjust his mouse to handle these circles, it should be better if you make a perfect zigzag movement here, it will be more comfortable to play, just see
SPOILER

Normal

00:23:211 (5,1,2,3,4) - Looks a little extremecompared to the next patterns. And for a Normal player/beginner, 188 BPM is a little fast and 1/2s with that BPM is difficult. Try to reduce the density of this pattern, to make it easier and comfortable to play. for example you can replace this slider by 2 circles 00:23:850 (2) -

Hard

00:06:137 (3,4,1) - The flow can be improved here, the movement is not really comfortable to play here because of the sudden spacing change after a linear flow, It should be better if there is a consistent distance between each objects here.
00:21:775 (2,3) - Here, the flow can be also improved if you make something like this :
SPOILER
00:23:052 (5,6,7) - There should be a higher distance between this triple and this slider 00:22:413 (4) - because you use jumps on this pattern and it might be confusing because the gap between objects is not really noticeable with the DS you used.
00:24:169 (3) - The spacing difference is clearly noticeable, adjust these objects.
00:39:807 (5) - this works like an antijump since there are many spaced objects on the previous patterns, and, i don't really think it was intentional to use a DS 1.1, I guess it was supposed to be 1.2 or 1.3 instead ?

handsome's Insane

00:12:998 (1,2) - this spacing change is weird and inconsistent with 00:13:318 (2,3) - or 00:13:956 (4,1) - , and i don't really think it is intentional, you should make things consistent for a better impression.

Insane

00:05:419 (2) - There is nothing audible on this blue tick and it looks like overmapping because you are following nothing audible. There is much density, so it is a little useless and boring when you add more which is unnecessary.
00:27:679 (5) - There should be an equal distance between 00:27:360 (4,5) - and 00:27:679 (5,6) - because you did something like this before 00:26:881 (2,3,4) - , and the higher distance between 00:27:360 (4,5) - emphasizes more vocals.
01:25:126 (5,6) - I've tesplayed it, and it is not really comfortable to play because this antijump is not expectable, this jump pattern, there should be more distance between these circles.

byfar's Extra

00:37:733 (5) - I don't agree with that, there should be nothing on the blue tick, it is clearly inaudible and that's overmapping, there is enough density on this part, that's overkill.
00:38:371 (1) - same as ^ and 00:39:647 (3,4) - and 00:40:286 (1) - and 00:46:669 (2) -

Overall, this mapset needs more improvements on lower diffs (Easy Normal hard).
Insane has a strange flow and needs to be more structured for visual and playability.
byfar's Extra has some questionable overmapping issues and you need to get more opinions about patterns on this diffs, i smell some HW's patterns concerning style, SV changes etc.

Good Luck.

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-02-19T23:10:16+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Hello.
M4M from my queue.

General
Check aimod for tag conflicts Fixed

Easy
00:37:254 (2,1,2,1) - the angle difference makes this pattern not really nice to play for a beginner since he has to adjust his mouse to handle these circles, it should be better if you make a perfect zigzag movement here, it will be more comfortable to play, just see Fixed
SPOILER

Normal
00:23:211 (5,1,2,3,4) - Looks a little extremecompared to the next patterns. And for a Normal player/beginner, 188 BPM is a little fast and 1/2s with that BPM is difficult. Try to reduce the density of this pattern, to make it easier and comfortable to play. for example you can replace this slider by 2 circles 00:23:850 (2) - Fixed

Hard
00:06:137 (3,4,1) - The flow can be improved here, the movement is not really comfortable to play here because of the sudden spacing change after a linear flow, It should be better if there is a consistent distance between each objects here. Fixed
00:21:775 (2,3) - Here, the flow can be also improved if you make something like this Fixed :
SPOILER
00:23:052 (5,6,7) - There should be a higher distance between this triple and this slider 00:22:413 (4) - because you use jumps on this pattern and it might be confusing because the gap between objects is not really noticeable with the DS you used. Fixed
00:24:169 (3) - The spacing difference is clearly noticeable, adjust these objects. Fixed
00:39:807 (5) - this works like an antijump since there are many spaced objects on the previous patterns, and, i don't really think it was intentional to use a DS 1.1, I guess it was supposed to be 1.2 or 1.3 instead ? Fixed

Insane
00:05:419 (2) - There is nothing audible on this blue tick and it looks like overmapping because you are following nothing audible. There is much density, so it is a little useless and boring when you add more which is unnecessary. Fixed
00:27:679 (5) - There should be an equal distance between 00:27:360 (4,5) - and 00:27:679 (5,6) - because you did something like this before 00:26:881 (2,3,4) - , and the higher distance between 00:27:360 (4,5) - emphasizes more vocals. Fixed
01:25:126 (5,6) - I've tesplayed it, and it is not really comfortable to play because this antijump is not expectable, this jump pattern, there should be more distance between these circles. Fixed
Good Luck.

Last edited by Owntrolf 2015-02-19T23:10:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-02-19T23:10:31+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Hello.
M4M from my queue.

byfar's Extra
00:37:733 (5) - I don't agree with that, there should be nothing on the blue tick, it is clearly inaudible and that's overmapping, there is enough density on this part, that's overkill. alright
00:38:371 (1) - same as ^ and 00:39:647 (3,4) - and 00:40:286 (1) - and 00:46:669 (2) -
some of these actually have a beat so i'm gonna keep a few

byfar's Extra has some questionable overmapping issues and you need to get more opinions about patterns on this diffs, i smell some HW's patterns concerning style, SV changes etc. getting on that

Good Luck.

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-02-20T03:53:28+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Hello. hi
handsome's Insane
00:12:998 (1,2) - this spacing change is weird and inconsistent with 00:13:318 (2,3) - or 00:13:956 (4,1) - , and i don't really think it is intentional, you should make things consistent for a better impression. lol ok

SPOILER

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Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2015-02-21T20:05:59+00:00

o3o

03:16 *Gaia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/593647 Suzuki Konomi - Absolute Soul [Insane]]
03:17 *Owntrolf run
03:17 Gaia: you need to have more consistent spacngs :>
03:17 Gaia: and hitsounding
03:22 Gaia: 00:14:594 (3,4) -
03:23 Gaia: whats bugging me the most is probably the hitsounding tho
03:25 Owntrolf: the hitsounds on slider ends?
03:27 Gaia: more like
03:27 Gaia: the missed finishes
03:27 Gaia: and some 2/4 claps
03:28 Gaia: 01:20:498 (1) - finish
03:28 Gaia: 01:21:775 (1) -
03:28 Gaia: 01:23:689 (2,3,4) - should be some sort of hitsound here..
03:29 Owntrolf: done
03:29 Gaia: 00:30:711 (6) -
03:29 Gaia: 00:33:743 (3) - clap
03:29 Gaia: 00:34:860 (1) - clap on tail
03:30 Gaia: 00:38:371 (1) - this sliderend
03:30 Gaia: 1. its not hitsounded
03:30 Gaia: 2. putting such a stressed note on a sliderend is really not recommended
03:32 Gaia: 00:53:211 (1,2) - whats with the mad undermapping here
03:32 Gaia: 00:54:967 (1) - the white tick in the middle of this is really stressed
03:32 Gaia: you can hear its pretty dominant even on 100% speed
03:32 Gaia: 00:58:796 (3) - finish on head
03:33 Owntrolf: drum finish op
03:33 Gaia: ok like
03:33 Gaia: thats probably enough for hitsounds for now
03:33 Gaia: there are more
03:33 Gaia: but ur patterns need some work too
03:33 Gaia: 00:04:541 (4,5) -
03:34 Gaia: things like this can easily be symmetrical
03:34 Gaia: 00:04:860 (5,1) -
03:34 Gaia: bad flow
03:34 Gaia: and also u can combine it with the previous 2 sliders for a nice 3 slider pattern
03:35 Gaia: 00:05:179 (1,2) - this spacing looks like a 1/4 spacing
03:35 Gaia: 00:07:733 (1,2,3) - this is actually nice
03:35 Gaia: 00:09:647 (4,5,1) - same as what i said earlier
03:35 Gaia: 00:15:233 (6) - what is this = =
03:36 Gaia: and it looks like you like overlaps
03:36 Gaia: but if you're gunna do it
03:36 Gaia: do it right
03:36 Gaia: 00:13:637 (5,6,1) - this is ehhhh
03:36 Owntrolf: 6 overlapping pink 3?
03:37 Gaia: I'll show u waht looks reaaally bad
03:37 Gaia: 00:16:669 (1,2,3) -
03:37 Gaia: 1. its bad flow
03:37 Gaia: 2. its bad overlapping
03:39 Owntrolf: 10/10
03:39 Gaia: do some copy paste
03:39 Gaia: rotate
03:39 Gaia: and ayy
03:39 Gaia: http://puu.sh/g6IND/2717990257.jpg
03:40 Gaia: i shortened 00:17:626 (5) - because i think you shouldnt ignore that white tick
03:40 Gaia: it has a drum beat in it
03:40 Gaia: it also messes up ur hitsounding pattern
03:42 Gaia: 00:18:264 (1) - you can do something more interesting starting from here too
03:42 Gaia: i bay leaf
03:42 Gaia: 00:21:775 (1,2,3,4) - you're probably better off making this into a 4 slider pattern
03:43 Gaia: instead of a 1 + 3 slider pattern
03:43 Gaia: 00:21:775 (1) - this is outta place compared to the other 3 sliders
03:47 Owntrolf: k
03:49 Gaia: tell byfar to calm down with the finishes in ther kiai = =
03:49 Gaia: his map is actually ok
03:51 Owntrolf: k
03:52 Gaia: ur easier diffs
03:53 Gaia: id say easy needs more work
03:53 Owntrolf: are garbage\
03:53 Gaia: the chosren rhytrhms
03:53 Gaia: are ehh
03:53 Gaia: the hard is alright
03:53 Gaia: look at easy
03:53 Gaia: and a bit more on normal
03:53 Owntrolf: lel

HabiHolic

5,496 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-02-22T03:57:49+00:00

My Insane Recheck modding Fixed?

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-02-22T04:07:30+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
My Insane Recheck modding Fixed?

Most of it is fixed but I didnt really like the ctrl+g part that much

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2015-02-22T04:50:31+00:00

Hi! as a continuation from this mod p/3868709#p3868709 so no kds
dang so many BN came idk if this is really helpful so yeah

[General]

byfar's Extra is too easy for me. i got C

and i just realized that byfar's diff has no stack leniency so idk i hope its fine

[handsome's Insane]

00:00:233 (1,2,1) - gdi i really thought this was a triplet ;w; well idk maybe im just noob. switching nc here 00:00:552 (1,2) - can really improve the reading because this 00:00:233 (1,2,1) - and this 00:00:711 (2,3,4,5,6) - are different pattern
00:16:190 (4) - lmao blanket nazi ahahdgfdsh move the last node to 204|264
00:20:179 (5,1) - hnng this anti-jump feels really awkward for me because it's between two sliders. different case with 00:20:020 (4,5) - tho because its between a circle and a slider and there's a challenge because we have to click really fast (at the upbeat and downbeat) meanwhile 00:20:179 (5,1) - we only click at the two consecutive upbeat and the anti jumps kinda makes it quite awkward for me. well idk why i'd explained that long. i'd lower 00:20:179 (5) - a bit to create jump with 00:20:498 (1) - http://puu.sh/g7lfn/9cb29a747d.jpg since moving 00:20:498 (1) - can ruin your pattern afterward and it's really a hassle
00:25:445 (6,1) - same like above. i think jumps like this 00:30:392 (5,1) - is really neat. and dang this one is really low
00:30:711 (1) - finish at slider's head? idk i think it's good to accent the vocal here
00:32:226 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - changing the sampleset into normal is quite good to emphasize the drums, rather than having a somewhat quiet stream when the song is getting tense
00:42:998 (4) - nc? idk the vocal has a kinda different atmosphere here so idk yeah only suggestion
00:44:594 (1,2) - switch nc? since only one combo here is weird 00:43:637 (1) - . and switching nc still make sense since 00:44:913 (2) - is at the big downbeat
00:48:105 (2,3) - i suggest adding some whistle pattern like you did at 00:46:350 (1,2,3) - since both patterns also have piano in the song
01:17:307 (4) - 01:19:701 (2) - finish at slider's tail seems weird tbh. i'd add finish here 01:20:498 - 01:21:137 - 01:21:775 - 01:22:413 - to balance the finish hitsound pattern here 01:19:222 (1,2) - . and maybe you should add finish at 01:17:307 (4) - 's head, not tail

[Insane]

00:01:030 (5) - idk just personal preference. i'd make this one more curved a bit since previous slider is also curved http://puu.sh/g7mp2/e501aa12b0.jpg . also it kinda improve the flow more. and gdi why is this one so out of border
00:28:318 (1,2) - switch nc? since you added nc at upbeat before, like 00:23:371 (1) - 00:25:924 (1) -
00:38:131 (3) - nc? this one also have sv change like 00:38:371 (1) - yet you only nc-ed 00:38:371 (1) -
01:05:658 (5,6) - hmm idk these two are quite close and its not really neat for me idk i'd separate them a bit http://puu.sh/g7n0f/5e0fd7eb86.jpg

[byfar's Extra]

dang thats a lot of nc

00:02:626 (1) - i understand that you nc-ed this because of the sv change. but theres some inconsistencies with 00:05:179 (1) - 00:07:733 (1) - 00:10:286 (6) - . if i were you, i'd nc 00:08:052 (2) - and 00:10:286 (6) - to fix the inconsistency
00:11:562 (6) - i suggest to nc this since the music is quite different here.
00:14:594 (1) - dang remove this nc. no need to accent the long vocal tbh since its still in the same combo with 00:12:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:14:594 (1) - also ctrl+G this makes the flow more interesting, continuing the circular flow from here 00:13:637 (3,4,5,6) -
00:17:786 (1) - remove nc?
00:18:743 - 00:19:222 - 00:19:701 - hmm these sv changes is kinda weird unnecessary since there's no significant changes in the song. i think making it like 00:16:509 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - is better
00:20:498 (1,3) - these two have different sv even though they're in the same combo and there's nothing in the song that makes them different. i suggest to change 00:20:498 (1) - 's sv into 1.25x like 00:20:977 (3) -
00:26:881 - 00:27:360 - also weird sv changes. there's no significant change in vocal which is why it feels weird when you accented them
00:28:956 - ^
00:33:105 (1) - i suggest snapping this kick slider to 1/8 bsd http://puu.sh/g7ogg/c27b53d206.jpg more challenging, i guess. and it accent the drums well
00:36:615 (1) - ggggggg the sv gggggggggg i suppose you have to add slow slider like this somewhere for consistency. i'd make 00:37:254 (3,4) - like this http://puu.sh/g7ouj/57f3965860.jpg . i only changed 00:37:254 (3) - 's sv into 0.75x and nc-ed it like 00:36:615 (1) -
00:40:286 (1,2) - switch nc. because single combo like 00:39:967 (1) - is really weird. if you follow, remove nc 00:40:685 (1) -
00:42:839 (1) - remove nc? single combo is weird. and this slider is still in the same combo with 00:42:360 (1,2) - tbh
00:49:701 (1) - ^

well i guess thats all. hope it helps >< sorry for really late ;w;
goodluck~!

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-02-22T08:32:49+00:00

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
[handsome's Insane]

00:00:233 (1,2,1) - gdi i really thought this was a triplet ;w; well idk maybe im just noob. switching nc here 00:00:552 (1,2) - can really improve the reading because this 00:00:233 (1,2,1) - and this 00:00:711 (2,3,4,5,6) - are different pattern nah, now it is easier to read
00:16:190 (4) - lmao blanket nazi ahahdgfdsh move the last node to 204|264 ok
00:20:179 (5,1) - hnng this anti-jump feels really awsthjsajhsrtj sure
00:25:445 (6,1) - same like above. i think jumps like this 00:30:392 (5,1) - is really neat. and dang this one is really low ok
00:42:998 (4) - nc? idk the vocal has a kinda different atmosphere here so idk yeah only suggestion nah, nc pattern
00:44:594 (1,2) - switch nc? since only one combo here is weird 00:43:637 (1) - . and switching nc still make sense since 00:44:913 (2) - is at the big downbeat ok

owntrolf does hitsound so ya

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Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Owntrolf 2015-02-22T18:28:57+00:00

Added theramdans' Hard
Im going to wait for more mods

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-25T13:11:34+00:00

Change byfar's extra to Byfar's Terror?
/me runs

i play your map again and wow... that is impressive!!!, i like you make all of some notes is clearly visible. Good job bro!

bibilicu

3,578 posts

Joined October 2013

bibilicu 2015-02-25T20:42:44+00:00

~~I'll mod thereamdans's Hard friday . Poke me if I forgot :V~~ Never mind

Last edited by bibilicu 2015-02-27T12:46:18+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Nathan

2,161 posts

Joined August 2014

Nathan 2015-02-26T02:11:44+00:00

Well since Owntrolf spams this map so much, I guess I'll just drop some suggestions since this mapping style is too ham for me

[handsome's Insane]

00:11:881 (2) - Ctrl+g here? It flows better imo plus the guitar gets a bit stronger on each note throughout 00:11:562 (1,2,3) so it's better if (2) is different in some way
00:19:062 (5) - Try placing this around 224|368 for a bit more emphasis on the vocal at 00:19:222 (1)
00:30:711 (1) - Missing finish on head?
01:06:456 (1) - ^
01:18:903 (5) - Ctrl+g, vocals could be more emphasized here plus on 01:19:222 (1)

[Insane]

00:35:179 (2) - This really disrupts the flow since the player will have to stop on this note, especially when you have this crazy slider speed! Since you're primarily following vocals in this part maybe turning 00:34:860 (1) into a 1/1 could work?
01:19:860 (3) - Ctrl+g, I don't really see the point of the jump in 01:19:701 (2,3) if you compare it to 01:19:062 (5,1)

byfar's extra 3cr4zy5me

hehe

1,975 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-02-26T15:46:41+00:00

here for fun OWNTROLF PLZ INCREASE HARD OD TO 6.5/7

theramdan's hard

drop AR by 0.5 - 1. OD to 6 or 5.5.
00:14:594 (5) - change this, its a very awkward repeat, since the repeat's sound isn't too loud. even if you're following vocals, its awkward. i suggest something like this: http://i.imgur.com/5TJxS91.png
00:23:211 (1,2) - swap in rhythm? considering you've been following vocal all this time.
00:25:605 (7) - make this a slider so every downbeat nazi will be happy. its weird to just leave 7 mapped when the next sound is obviously louder.
00:43:637 (1,2) - considering its a slow part, extending this to the white tick just feels better. leaving it on a piano note that you don't map to afterwards is weird.
00:46:190 (5,1) - swap nc?
01:03:903 - consider cutting your NCs in half during kiai?
01:03:903 (1,2,3) - rhythm doesn't feel good here, i think its alright to shorten the 1/1 slider. so you have 1/2 slider - circle - 1/2 slider.
01:26:881 (1) - this is so out of place lol

sukiNathan wrote:
Well since Owntrolf spams this map so much, I guess I'll just drop some suggestions since this mapping style is too ham for me

[handsome's Insane]
00:11:881 (2) - Ctrl+g here? It flows better imo plus the guitar gets a bit stronger on each note throughout sounds good
00:19:062 (5) - Try placing this around 224|368 for a bit more emphasis on the vocal at 00:19:222 (1) nah but i did move it
01:18:903 (5) - Ctrl+g, vocals could be more emphasized here plus on 01:19:222 (1) current pattern has more emphasis.

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224,370,80339,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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512,91,80818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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56,230,81615,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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theramdans

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theramdans 2015-02-26T16:27:42+00:00

handsome wrote:
here for fun OWNTROLF PLZ INCREASE HARD OD TO 6.5/7

theramdan's hard

drop AR by 0.5 - 1. OD to 6 or 5.5. ~AR to 7.5 OD to 6
00:14:594 (5) - change this, its a very awkward repeat, since the repeat's sound isn't too loud. even if you're following vocals, its awkward. i suggest something like this: http://i.imgur.com/5TJxS91.png ~fixed my way
00:23:211 (1,2) - swap in rhythm? considering you've been following vocal all this time. ~swapped
00:25:605 (7) - make this a slider so every downbeat nazi will be happy. its weird to just leave 7 mapped when the next sound is obviously louder. ~ 7 is a slider now
00:43:637 (1,2) - considering its a slow part, extending this to the white tick just feels better. leaving it on a piano note that you don't map to afterwards is weird. ~the piano is now in the sliderbody
00:46:190 (5,1) - swap nc? ~swapped
01:03:903 - consider cutting your NCs in half during kiai? ~halved
01:03:903 (1,2,3) - rhythm doesn't feel good here, i think its alright to shorten the 1/1 slider. so you have 1/2 slider - circle - 1/2 slider. ~nah, I kept the 1/1 slider coz it follows the vocal, I changed the following 2 1/2 circles into 1 1/2 sliders tho, just realized it was weird
01:26:881 (1) - this is so out of place lol ~lol I changed the sliderend a bit

Thanks handsome o/\o
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Owntrolf

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Owntrolf 2015-02-27T00:59:35+00:00

Applied changes to my hard and updated both diffcs

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
Hi! as a continuation from this mod p/3868709#p3868709 so no kds
dang so many BN came idk if this is really helpful so yeah

[Insane]

00:01:030 (5) - idk just personal preference. i'd make this one more curved a bit since previous slider is also curved http://puu.sh/g7mp2/e501aa12b0.jpg . also it kinda improve the flow more. and gdi why is this one so out of border
00:28:318 (1,2) - switch nc? since you added nc at upbeat before, like 00:23:371 (1) - 00:25:924 (1) -
00:38:131 (3) - nc? this one also have sv change like 00:38:371 (1) - yet you only nc-ed 00:38:371 (1) - Done
01:05:658 (5,6) - hmm idk these two are quite close and its not really neat for me idk i'd separate them a bit Did a little changehttp://puu.sh/g7n0f/5e0fd7eb86.jpg

well i guess thats all. hope it helps >< sorry for really late ;w;
goodluck~!

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2015-02-27T06:18:07+00:00

Nice.

ac8129464363

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ac8129464363 2015-02-27T06:34:28+00:00

lol

byfar

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byfar 2015-02-27T06:36:58+00:00

lol

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2015-02-27T07:08:54+00:00

:3

rebubbled your self pop

pishifat

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pishifat 2015-02-27T07:28:34+00:00

map at the top of the bubble list fun fun fun

[byfar]
00:01:030 (5) - unsnapped
moldy

[theramdan]
missing video

[normal]
01:02:147 (3,1) - spacing is gross. both objects are on the playfield at the same time, so it can be misinterpreted as distnace snap nonsense. this was dq'd for the exact same thing

[]

habi can do something again if he wants i'm not touching this lol

byfar

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byfar 2015-02-27T07:36:50+00:00

pishifat wrote:
map at the top of the bubble list fun fun fun

[byfar]
00:01:030 (5) - unsnapped
moldy

[theramdan]
missing video

[normal]
01:02:147 (3,1) - spacing is gross. both objects are on the playfield at the same time, so it can be misinterpreted as distnace snap nonsense. this was dq'd for the exact same thing

[]

habi can do something again if he wants i'm not touching this lol

oh thank god pishi mercy

and did you say my diff was shit

Ringating

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Ringating 2015-02-27T07:39:33+00:00

also add this bg (the current one has compression artifacts despite being png, and is larger than the png that I'm providing)

bg

pishifat wrote:
23:41 - pishizor.: yes
23:41 - pishizor.: @byfar

no kds

Owntrolf

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Owntrolf 2015-02-27T08:06:57+00:00

selfpopped and applied pishifat's mod

Thanks for mercy :>

theramdans

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theramdans 2015-02-27T17:14:26+00:00

things got real
And I didnt actually notice that this map has a video :<

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2015-02-28T09:40:34+00:00

Rebubbled

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DeletedUser_3044645 2015-03-01T00:22:36+00:00

pishifat wrote:
i'm not touching this lol

theramdans

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theramdans 2015-03-01T00:39:20+00:00

No Dap go qualify ~

byfar

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byfar 2015-03-01T02:12:01+00:00

No Dap wrote:
pishifat wrote:
i'm not touching this lol

map's too bad to pop. us sad

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