From my modding queue:
[General]
You can't have both sliderslide and slidertick muted at the same timeWhy does Insane, Hard, and Extra start 1/2 beat earlier?
[Storyboard]
Instead of putting "Stoyboard Gelbana" wouldn't be better to put "Storyboard
by Gelbana"? btw really nice storyboard i love it
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Storyboard images must be at a reasonable size for their usage. For most uses (e.g. full-screen images), the maximum is 800x600 pixels for 4:3 aspect ratio images, although 640x480 is highly preferred. For widescreen mode (recommended) the maximum is 960x540 pixels for 16:9 aspect ratio images and 960x600 for 16:10 images. The editor is 640x480 at default, so there's really no need to use anything larger for full-screen purposes.
Which means you need to resize: bg.jpg (the one in SB folder), bg2.jpg bgnogirl.jpg, bgnogirlbw.jpg and black.jpg, there's discussion on changing this
here, but for now gotta stick to that.
[iyasine_sk's Extra]
Holy, this map's awesome. Tho the storyboard that shows who mapped what is barely noticeable midplay, you might wanna try to make it bigger or something.
Also it's barely visible at some point:
http://puu.sh/er2NR/39c11fe01c.jpg[TmTk's Insane]
00:16:783 (1) -
Sorry but this is unacceptable, the slider goes back into itself twice at the end, change that.00:40:134 (6) -
This one needs to change too D:01:12:567 (6) - This one's not as bad, but i'd prefer if you opened it up a bit more.
02:42:080 (1) - This one looks awkward D: don't see why that shape in this case, try something different?
02:51:161 (1) - ^
No, I didn't miss sliders, only those I pointed out in bold and red are an issue, the others are more of aesthetic stuff.
[Insane]
00:54:729 (8,1,2,3) - This back and forth feels annoying to read and play, i suggest you try something else.
02:06:566 - Unsnapped timing section, resnap it back.
02:00:729 (2,3,4) - I understand what you're going for here, but unfortunately 3 is way too small to look good if you curve it, i suggest keep the curve REAAAALLY small, or just dont curve it at all or try something else in this pattern. I tried something more structured as an example
Example Notice how both of the cases have notes descending in parallel lines
[Hard]
02:01:864 (3,4,1) -
This is really misleading and hard to read. I think it'd be better if you stack 02:01:864 (3,4) And adjust spacing afterwards.
02:08:350 (1,1) -
Needs more recovery time (1.5 beats) (the 1 beat guideline works on 160 bpm, this is faster so it needs more)
[Normal]
01:42:404 (6) -
Don't move the slider back into itself like that, specially on a Normal, open it a bit more.[Easy]
00:29:918 (1,1) -
Increase recovery time by 1/2 beat (the 4 beat guideline works on 160 bpm, this is faster so it needs more), also do this with: 00:55:702 (1,1) - , 02:05:917 (1,1) - and 02:31:863 (1,1) -
01:14:026 (4) -
Biurai Slider and even then try to avoid these sliders on an Easy, open it more02:51:323 (1) - ^
Really good map, i'll throw some kudosu stars at it, call be back after fixes are applied.