Hi deetz :3~
from my queue ~
Keep your work, i proud with your first map here
Good luck for now :3~
from my queue ~
Apocalypse
- first of all, the hitsounds of this diff are totally empty , i mean from start until 01:08:113 - , you can add claps for the drums here, and whistle every 1st and 3rd whiteticks
- 00:48:000 - 00:52:090 - 00:57:545 - those break dont fit with the musics imo, i know you follow a music like "wub wub" but better to map all since the rest of musics are totally same with first pattern
- 00:03:000 (1) - finish please because the cymbal :C
- 00:00:443 (1) - i think the music starts from 00:00:613 - so it would be better if spin starts from that time too
- 00:22:431 (2) - hmm the flow can improved a lot if you ctrl+G this slider actually, natural flow will move to downward instead of upward here
- 00:23:454 (1) - hmm for me, when you move the curve to downward instead example 208,292 (middle node), the flow feels more natural here
- 00:27:886 (1) - unnecessary greenline here
- 00:28:909 (1) - hmm actually from design, this slider looks quite messy for me, try something like http://puu.sh/dJQxe.jpg
- 00:33:000 (1,2) - actually you still can improve the design here, maybe like blanket http://puu.sh/dJQPz.jpg (p.s : my blanket isnt perfect)
- 00:36:579 (3) - still can improve the blanket for neater design here http://puu.sh/dJR09.jpg
- 00:37:431 (2) - nazi, if you can curve the slider more like previous slider, it will improve the flow of this slider, example http://puu.sh/dJR4s.jpg
- 00:41:522 (2) - aa the flow feels so rigid with straight slider here, actually i can improved it with pic but, a little bit remap here example http://puu.sh/dJRgg.jpg and 00:42:886 (2) - http://puu.sh/dJRhW.jpg
- 00:57:545 (1) - this slider is too curvy and looks different with next sliders, please make it smoother http://puu.sh/dJRyd.jpg
- 00:58:909 (4) - the drum music quite strong here so try to give mini jump example 336,168
- 01:04:363 (4) - same as above, example move the circle to 232,236
- 01:09:136 (3) - the jump feels quite harsh here, try ctrl+G for smoothing the flow and the jump
- 01:09:306 (4,5,6,1) - actually streams can improved here, i mean when you have a curve slider at previous 01:09:306 (4) - , try to make the stream continuing what the curve works at previous, example like http://puu.sh/dJRVU.jpg and the flow feels smoother :3
- 01:10:500 (3,4,5) - same here http://puu.sh/dJS22.jpg
- 01:11:863 (4,5,6) - yap here too http://puu.sh/dJSm3.jpg
- 01:13:312 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hmm not really big deal but i think the flow can improved from 01:13:483 (4,1) - if you do smoother movement for them http://puu.sh/dJSue.jpg
- 01:36:409 (5) - ctrl+G here for the smoother flow o.o
- 01:36:068 (4,6) - nazi but try avoid the overlap as possible lol
- 01:41:011 (2) - according curve on your previous flow, actually this slider should be moved to 164,240, well my another suggestion is http://puu.sh/dJSJX.jpg
- 01:49:107 (7,8,9,1) - flow on stream can improved according the previous flow http://puu.sh/dJSQr.jpg
- 01:52:090 (1) - no need NC here, i guess we can still read with easily, also you did NC for 01:51:750 (1) - so the combo looks so short
- 02:25:670 (3,4) - if you reverse the curve of these sliders, actually the flow can improved more naturally http://puu.sh/dJT9U.jpg
- 02:30:272 (1) - try move the middle note to upside, i mean just like http://puu.sh/dJTf5.jpg for more natural flow
- 02:34:363 (4) - aw the overlap looks so ugly here, at least i would make mini jump for emphasize the cymbal here
- 02:36:068 (2) - the normal spacing looks so ugly for design here, if i were you i would move this slider around 200,292. it looks cleaner and more consistent with next spacings
- 02:37:431 (2,3) - the flow can improved more natural imo, i guess flow from (1) to (2) a little bit rigid for me, you can try http://puu.sh/dJTwa.jpg
- 02:45:442 (2) - im a little bit dislike about straight flow so how about move this circle to 312,60? ofc just my two cents
- literally i only mention flow here and it is repetiting until end of map, just i can say try make cleaner design by increase 1,0x slider spacing here, also flow for streams. rest of map unless them are fine for me
Keep your work, i proud with your first map here
Good luck for now :3~