Squirrel
Squirrel wrote:
hey there!
mod from my queue
map looks pretty good as it is, I think. I can't really play it, so Idk in how much this is helpful.. I'll try ~ >:
Apocalypsewell, that's all. hope I could help a little. .o. good luck!
- "e - OKAY (deetz).osb" ins ong folder. even if you had osb this wouldn't work. .o. delete?
(doesn't take up any space, but still. why keep a file that even has a wrong title...) lmao oops i'm dumb
ok- hmh. I think you could map the first break. it's pretty boring to wait such a long time, especially cause this is a marathon. some people will fail much later in the diff and when they retry they have to wait 10 seconds for anything to happen (except for spinner + circle). :n there's nothing there I could map that would feel good to play, and honestly I like the title fade thing ^_^
- 00:19:363 (1) - just wondering why this is the only one with normal spacing? seems a little random to me '-' if it wasn't for the finish hitsound it's totally the same melody hmm, i kept it like it is except i did the overlap thingy
- 00:15:613 (1,3) - I don't really wanna complain about blankets, but this one looks so off.... :c wow I didn't even mean to blanket that LOL fixed blanket
- 00:24:477 (4,1) - cause of the change in music I wouldn't stack them. the song gets more intense here and it makes much more of an impact when players have to move instead of staying at the same place I like it, it's like a quick stop before the bass kicks in
- 00:31:636 (1) - would look nice if this was a copypasted version of 00:31:125 (3) - , imo I like the asymmetry
// I'm sorry this is so much about aesthetics, but except for some minor flow issues I can't finy any problems with this.- 00:38:454 (1,2) - at first I wanted to complain about the blanket, but something else might work better - you could make this 00:38:795 (2,3,4) - a copypasted version of 00:39:818 (1,2,3) - only slightly different Kept pattern as is, fixed blanket
- 00:44:761 (3,1) - so close, please curve 1 a little more oops
- 00:45:613 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I kind of expected some jumps here, cause of the background sound. and 00:46:125 (5,6,7) - sound a little different than the others, too, so how about alternating the placement slightly? good idea
- 01:09:136 (3) - I'd prefer two circles instead of one slider, cause it's two seperate sounds on the white and blue tick and not one angoing sound
you have the same rhythm here anyway 01:10:500 (3,4) - no, sorry- 01:12:119 (7) - this should be removed cause of the much more dominant sound on the red tick before this (01:12:034 - ) or replaced with a slider ok
- 01:13:568 (1,2,3,4) - how about spacing them differently than 01:13:227 (1,2,3,4) - ? the pace really slows down, so it's more interesting to play when they don't follow the same spacing I think it's fine
- 01:30:443 (2,3) - flow here plays a bit awkward, imo, cause of the back-forth between 2-3. I'd suggest to bend 3 in another way and place the following pattern differently keeping for now, i like it
- 01:34:022 (6,7,8,9,10) - ctrl+g would be awesome for better flow (cause movement gets rounded out)
same goes for 01:35:045 (6,7,8,9,10) - makes the jump too big- 01:36:068 (4,5,6) - also about flow, I'd prefer it this way, cause it moves slightly smoother, but might be just me sorry, I don't like the flow in your example ;w;
- 02:11:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - hm. this background sound gets added (clearly audiable after 2) to the music and changes the feel of the music, but you stick with the previous rhythms that seems really monotonous at this point. maybe you can change up the rhythm following this 'new' sound and spice up this part a little sorry, if I were to change something there I'd put a spinner instead
- 03:42:204 (3) - and the following patterns too - I don't agree with the sliderends on the downbeats here, cause they're so loud. I wanna click them .o.
there were some others like this before, but not constantly used so it wasn't as abvious as it is here. I personally think it adds more force to the sound like this but if more people mention this I'll change it for sure- 04:19:704 (2) - ctrl+g improves flow a ton, imo makes for a weird jump
thanks for your mod!