Hello M4M~ from my
Mod QueueOverall hitsounds could use some work.
The beginning was messy, but it started to get much better later on in the song
[Third Nature]
00:00:061 (1) – Although your points may be symmetrical, the slider itself is not. Just use one point.
http://puu.sh/cJjT5/5dde463da0.jpg00:00:746 (3) – for symmetry copy and flip - 00:00:061 (1) - ctrl+c, ctrl+v, ctrl+j, ctrl+g
00:00:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – since there are no jumps, at least make your distance consistent between notes
00:00:746 (3) – ctrl
00:01:946 (7) – jump doesn’t fit - sound in the music is too quiet.
00:02:289 (8) – this would be a better jump
00:00:746 (3,3,6,7) – The drums are really dominant. Please consider mapping them.
00:03:489 (3,6) – slider overlap doesn’t look good
00:04:175 (5) – feels better to stack on slider head of 00:04:346 (6) –
00:04:861 (7) – blanket on 00:05:375 (8) –
00:06:232 (3) – blanket
00:07:175 (2,5) - Delete, feels like overmapping to me
00:08:118 (8) – move to x72 y148 – looks more neat
00:08:289 (1) – blanket
00:10:518 (9,10,11) – random drum sounds? – too random, doesn’t fit and it’s too loud
00:12:146 (4) – delete
00:16:346 (6) – move to x108 y200 – more neat
00:17:632 (4) – dlete
00:20:632 (7) – nc
00:21:489 (11) – same as 00:10:518 (9,10,11)
00:22:518 (2) – unrankable positioning. The repeater is hidden. Also, blanket
00:23:375 (6) – nc
00:24:061 (8) – blanket
00:25:089 (2) – delete and elongate 00:24:746 (1) -
00:25:861 (5) – delete
00:27:146 (7,8) – don’t stack please. Doesn’t suit music and Ruins flow
00:27:489 (1) – blanket
00:28:175 (3) – overlap looks bad. Move up a bit
00:29:203 (2,3) – for sake of neatness, you could stack on 00:28:003 (2,3) –
00:30:232 (1) – blanket
00:34:346 (6) – nc
00:40:518 (3) – blanket
00:53:375 (2) – blanket
01:09:832 (5) – blanket
01:10:518 (7) – blanket
01:14:803 (5) – blanket
01:16:003 (9) – Blanket
01:30:575 (1) – reposition to stack on 01:29:546 (2) – for neatness
01:31:432 (4) – perfect stack
01:31:089 (2,3,4,5,6,1) – create a more symmetrical shape
01:32:632 (3) – reshape slider so that it stacks head on 01:31:089 (2) – and tail on 01:31:261 (3) –
01:31:946 (1) – copy slider from ^
01:37:946 (8) – blanket
01:40:861 (5,6) – blanket – make sure slider heads and tails both blanket each other
01:41:203 (6) – ctrl + g for better flow
01:44:289 (1) – blanket
01:44:975 (3) – blanket
01:47:546 (2,3,4) – stack on 01:46:861 (7) – for neatness
01:48:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – fix these stacks, they just look messy. If you’re not using a hurricane-like pattern, just stack them
01:53:032 (2,3) – stack on 01:53:889 (5,7) – for neatness
01:57:318 (7) – blanket
I think you get the idea with blankets… I’ll stop pointing them out02:02:118 (6) – NC
02:02:803 (8,1) – avoid overlap – doesn’t look good
02:04:861 (5,6,7,8) – ^
02:04:861 (5) – NC
Too many things going on, I haven’t been checking NC consistently; go through the rest yourself for NC02:08:803 (4,5,1) – reposition so 02:08:889 (5) – stacks on slider head 02:07:946 (2) –
02:09:318 (2,3,4,5,6,7) – fix stacks
02:21:832 (9) – red point at x436 y296
02:23:203 (2,3,4) – same as 02:08:803 (4,5,1) –
02:23:889 (5) – stack on 02:25:003 (3) –
02:26:975 (7) – perfect stack on slider tail
02:40:518 (1,2,3,4) – better star shape
02:43:775 (4) – make this slider look nicer
02:46:003 (3) – perfect stack
03:04:518 (3) – slider doesn’t fit – start at 03:04:346 – end at 03:04:518 (3) -
03:05:032 (4) – slider doesn’t fit here – no emphasis on downbeat. Start it at 03:05:203 –
03:07:946 (1,7) – perfect stack
03:43:432 (6) – start at 03:43:603 –
03:43:432 – add circle
03:43:775 (8) – delete and add circle at 03:43:946 –
03:46:518 (1,2,3,4) – rotate 25 degrees for something like this, looks nicer
03:47:718 (1) – and you can have tail stack on head of 03:47:032 (4) –
03:54:918 (2,3,4,5,6,7) – fix the stacks
04:01:432 (5) – looks messy, stack
04:12:232 (10) – perfect stack
04:13:261 (4) – perfect stack
04:17:032 (1,2,3,4,5) – make perfect star shape
Sorry but I’m going to have to stop here. This is getting too long.
Good luck with getting it approved!